>Be Anon
>You're walking in the local park
>Suddenly you hear whimpering
>You went to investigate and see this.
>Wat do
Pastebin of the excellent and wonderful green made by the main writer in this tread, piece5:
http://pastebin.com/8F0P0v9A
Rape
Part 1: >>21667663
Part 2: >>21711365
And now the ritual to summon Piece5
gather together evrypony
>>21748606
FUCKING PIECE5 GET THE FUCK IN HERE YOU PIECE OF SHITplease ;_;
>>21748606
>>21748637
Kek.
He will be here, calm down anons.
>>21748637
Calm yoself, It hasn't even been 10 minutes yet.
>>21748671
>>21748606
I was just tryin to be funny
>>21748742
And you were.
>>21748606
>>21748637
>>21748671
>>21748732Wrote a fucking hunk of story, post it, find out everyone abandoned to this thread. Broken ass auto updater.
>>21748783
Post it here, while I get to bump limit in the other tread, and update your Pastebin
>>21748272
>Anon might be asleep, you don't want to wake him up.
>When you step in the room, Anon is sitting in a wheelchair, looking out the window.
>You step behind him, leaning down and resting your head on his shoulder
"Hey..."
>He leans his head against yours
>"Hey..."
"How are you feeling?"
>"Much better. The doctor says I can go home tomorrow if nothing happens tonight."
>You smile, then remember that Anon's dad is dead.
>It's so easily forgettable, so easy to slip into the way things WERE instead of how they ARE.
"Are you...are you going to be okay going home?"
>He turns his head and looks at you. "I'm sure, Flutters. I think I just need a night alone."
>Of course he needs a night alone, then he can figure out how to cut you away in the easiest way possible. You knew this day was coming, but it still hurts. You blink your tears back. You're going to be here for Anon for as long as you can. You'll figure out how to handle rejection when you get to it. It's not the first time, and it won't be the last.
>"Hey, Fluttershy?"
"Y-yes?"
>"What were you doing in the park that made you hurt your ankle?"
>You think back to the day in the park, almost a week ago now.
>You were there enjoying the birds that frequented a tree near the sidewalk. The way they tweeted and chirped at each other always made you happy.
>You needed a bit of happy in your life right then. You knew all your friends loved you, they were true friends, and they always tried to think of you. They made mistakes sometimes, and sometimes those mistakes hurt, but you always forgave them. They would never intentionally hurt you. This weekend, however, they were all occupied doing their various activities and you were left alone.
>You weren't sad, but you definitely weren't happy. Until you began listening to the birds, that is. They were so happy, so FREE, that you couldn't help but feel happy around them.
>You decided you wanted to climb the tree
>>21748783
No! We are still here!
>>21748735
My prelude lays uncannon and dead in the midst. Totally cool though.
>>21748843
Well, that explains it all, poor Flutters.
>>21748861
I was thinking about it while reading that.
Pastebin updated to >>21748843666 views, hail satan
As the OP of the original thread. I'm humbled to see so many people that saw potential to it. It is piece5's thread now.
>>21748861Yeah, sorry, I just couldn't figure out a way to work Flash in there without totally derailing where I'm already headed. I would also feel terrible sticking Flash with Flutters, especially when she knows how much Flash means to Twilight. Just couldn't work it around.
>>21748910
All hail, piece5.
>>21748941
I'm happy you started it all, without you, these feels would have never been feel.
>>21748962
Oh no, I was just messing around. Like I said, just writing for fun. Also, I had to write Flash getting into this epic fight because I listened to too much metal that day.
Is there such thing?!
>>21748941There he is! Dude, where have you been?
Alright guys, I'm gonna game a bit while I figure out this next section. How the frickdid Flutters mess her ankle up?
>>21749000
I read it in your pastebin, (the one about Flash fighting with anon) it was good and funny.
>>21749001
Life happened. Also I lurked here and there
>>21749000
Nice trips.
>>21749034
She fell
>>21749034
She fell from the tree, I don't think she is a good climber.
>>21749086
>>21749098
Yeah. I just have to figure out how I'm gonna write it.
>>21749054
Those were my intentions. Usually my writing process is to write some ideas, make a flow of those ideas, write, revise, publish. For that the writing process was more like "OH! And then like, what if everyone joined? And Fluttershy got a hit? O yes, this will be perfect."
Also, how do you do the hidden black post that show when you highlight them?
I.E.>>21749001
Sorry for being new.
>>21749125
what about slipping whilst climbing the tree?
Possibly landing awkwardly?
>>21749149
ctrl+s
>>21749149
Use [ Spoiler ] and [ /Spoiler ]
But without the spaces in between brackets
>>21749193
I am [spoler] learning [/spoiler]
Thanks guys. I am also writing right now, so expect a continuation of that one Sunser story from yesterday.
>>21749193
What game are you gonna play?
>>21749226
Who misspells [Spoiler] spoiler?! [/Spoiler]
Anyways, off to write.
>>21749125
Slipped, lost her grip?
>>21749247You don't need to put the "S" in capitals and don't put spaces between the first, and last word of the message to the brackets
>>21749237
Bioshock infinite. Bought it yesterday
>>21749355
Oh, beautiful game, not all people seem to like it, or understand the ending.
>>21749355
Quite dank
If you're waiting for Piece's story, I updated the thingy. If you already read what I wrote yesterday, each day I write is separated.
http://pastebin.com/Ue42XJBt
--------------------Thank you Anony Mous!
>>21749767
It's good, you did better this time, how everyone hates her is better than just being affraid. Poor Bacon Hair. She is one of my two favorite humans (the other being Flutters).
>>21749943
Thanks bud! I think I can get a bit more down tonight before I head to bed. I got some homework first though. It won't take long. Hell, I my even play some games too and enjoy these new sweet speakers!
>>21749001
>9001
>nobody commented on those numbers
These times... Where did they go?
>>21749971
Okay bro
>>21748843
>Normally you would be afraid to do something like this. This is something that's more suited towards Rainbow Dash, even Applejack.
>You ignore these thoughts and focus on climbing the tree
>You reach up towards the lowest branch. It's inches out if your reach.
>You jump up, grabbing the top. Your fingers hold, and you hoist yourself up until you can bring your leg up. You hear a whistle somewhere close.
>Maybe you shouldn't have worn a skirt if you were going to be climbing trees
>Your face heats up and you climb up another branch, hopefully beyond the eyes of anyone.
>You stand gingerly on one leg, stretching for a branch that would allow you to sit and sway with the tree while you listen to the birds.
>As you reach for the branch, your foot slips
>You start to fall, spreading your arms out. Smaller branches whip your face, arms, and legs. You reach out desperately as a branch appears within your reach
>You cling on, your lower body still falling to the ground. The momentum rips the branch from your hands, and you land on your feet
>One ankle twists on its side, sending pain lancing up your body
>You gasp, too shocked to cry out
>You fall to the ground, clutching your ankle
>You scoot back and lean against the tree. Maybe it's okay, just a sprain, give it a little bit...
>You rest for a minute (You count out to 60), then try to put a bit of pressure on your ankle. As soon as you apply any at all, your ankle screams in protest.
>Yup. Definitely broken.
>The pain and shock get to you, panic creeping in around the edges
>You start whimpering, putting your head in your hands
>Someone walks around the corner
>"Are you okay?"
----
>Flashback.exe successful
>"You fell out of a tree?"
>You nod.
>"I'm glad I found you first, then. There's no telling what would have happened if some 'other' people had gotten to you first..."
>You shake your head.
"Well, you did, and they didn't. So we don't have to think about that anymore..."
>>21750160
This is /mlp/, friend. There are those that don't even know other boards exist.
>>21750245
>You pull up a chair next to Anon's and sit, holding his hand. The two of you stop talking, instead watching the sunset together.
>>21750315
I may suppose that this is it for tonight.
>>21750245
This story is incredible.
This feels like reading a real romance novel
>>21750406
It's a good ending. I like that silly and joyful ending for the day.
>>21750418
It's indeed, but he can't, and he won't end it this way. We still have much to know about the next days in Anon's life, and Fluttershy knowing that he won't ever leave her like she thinks he will.
>>21750495
Oh no no no, I didn't mean for the whole, it's just a good note to end on today. Like the end of an episode in a TV series or a chapter in a book.
>>21750406You would be correct
>>21750409Thank you!
>>21750418Happy cliffhangs are best
>>21750518
When you put it that way it's good.
>>21750519
I suppose you are going to go with Mr. Booker Dewittor to sleep
>>21750604
It's time to sleep m80
I will green as much as I can tomorrow, but I've got to workout, watch sibling, and go to a concertEXCISION FTW
>>21750713
I'm hoping to go see him in action soon myself; I plan on going to his Richmond concert in March if I can.
>>21750713
Okay bro, go to sleep, we will be waiting.
Are you from Albuquerque?
Alright, I am going to head to bed. Maybe I can write a thing or two tomorrow morning (later today really). I wrote a little more than I thought I would so enjoy the interlude.
http://pastebin.com/Ue42XJBt
>>21751249
This is so sweet and good, you did grate making this Sunset so sad and so broken, it destroys my heart, good job Guitar.
Sleep well
bump
I want to feel
3 am bump
>>21748492
>Start crying
>Sit beside her
>Hug
>'Accidentally' grope boob.
>>21752689
Unf
>>21752689
Wouldn't that be terrifying to Fluttershy?
>>21748492
>Run to her
>Ask if she's okay
>Quick hug
>Tell her I've got medical supplies at my house
>Help her up
>Lead her to my house
Continue?
>>21752689
>she shivers but is too shy to say anything
>tries wiggling out of the hug, to no avail
>keep fondling her boob, gently but steadily
>Still crying, unzip pants and remove them
>hug her some more with raging boner going on
>go for a french kiss
>cry some more while getting her naked
>have sex while crying desperately
>after the climax, lie down and hug her some more while crying like there was no tomorrow and waving the hands around groping like some kind of hyperactive octopus
>surprise buttsecks while crying
>after it, stand up while she's still lying down, panting and gasping.
>cry some more while getting the dress back on
>look at her
>cry
>go away.
>>21752758
I put that into Google Translate.
English - Japanese - English again.
"Welcome to /mlp/"
>>21752775
Huh, weird. I did the same, but adding german and french, and what came out was "San Quentin - statutory rape - 15 years probation"
>>21752791
Kek.
This is good.
Ok, seriously now:
>"Uh, sorry about intruding...need any help?"
>Assist her whatever the problem is
>Wave goodbye
>Go my own way thinking "cute girl..."
>>21748520
I salute you for your originality, sir.
>>21749001
>2174'9001'
>"It's over nein sousand."
I HOPE OLD THREAT IS ADDED TO PASTEBIN.
Or else i will have to call some reinforcment from imperial command.
Story is op.
Still.
I want it more.
A lot.
I'm here to read.
Give it to me baby!
>>21753062
I'll give you something
>>21753484
Bump it babe one more time.
>>21753696
Bump it to me baby nice and slow!
>>21753721
>>21753787
W-what?
>>21753811
>>21753857
>I think about it
>a lot
>>21753857
>>21753866
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=1Npo0cmp-VY&spfreload=10
This threed is a...
>>21753866
Guitar, you are back!
That last thing you wrote (The Sunset story) was excellent, I almost cried a bit.
Where'd all the Starwars references start coming in at?
>>21753857
What happend here?
When it happend?
Why?
Who?
WHY again (because it's important)?Oh, stop it, you.
>>21754054
>Shut up
>and
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=WrjwGPb0Hvw&spfreload=10
>>21754097
Someone catch the dogs (whos out)!
It just ran away from /b!
It is ATTTAAACKIING MEEE!Veni, Vidi, Bump
>>21754180
Love to bump dont ya?
>>21753857
>>21754097
>(Who did this ?)
>>21754054
>>21754220
>Who ?
>You all know exactly who I'm
>Say my name !
>I don't have a single idea who are you !
>Yeah You have !
>I'm the newfag !
>Now say my name !Anony
>You are god damm right !
>>21754220
Who doesn't?
>>21754257
What?!
How?!
U are supposed to be dead!
U are dead!
I saw u die!I killed you! I burn your body and tuen buried!
I even cry when someone ask me about you!
And u are alright?!
ARGHT!
I will eat your corpse u this time.
>>21754283
>Bon appetit !I have AIDS (Thanks to you !)
>>21754302
>lel forget namefagging
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=BvZgzDiBFYQ&spfreload=10
>>21750789
Yes I am. 505 Represent!Jk I'm really white n shit, couldn't be thug if I tried
>>21754629
U just woke up?
>>21754629
Finally, hello piece5.
>>21754638
No, he is asleep.
Come on Faps, that was a silly question.
>>21754657
OH OH! Quiz party?! I love quiz parties! I love parties. I love fap. But fap on parties is after line.No, it's not.
>>21754629
Are you here dear piece5?
>>21754760
Good question.
>>21754760
I'm lurking, gotta fuck with a car before I can get to writing tho.>inb4 Alcorn reference
>>21754776
Ok, piece, remember to wear protection.
>>21754776
>Yo ! Are ya lurkin to bra ?
>>21754816
I'm lurking for green.
>>21754908
Do you want to some ? Beacuse I have some !
Blunt
Update is going to be comin later, around 1430-1500 Mountain Time
Sorry, friends
>>21755325
Don't apologize, piece! We're just glad you're making green for us.
While we wait, here's a bouncy chill song I've been jamming to lately
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Co6fB8IKmwo
>>21755325
>>21755464
Like he said. We can wait.
We have no life. So we can :D
Ok. Who will write for my ending of master work chapter?
I just want to post this: thread was kill
>>21755848
Not this suppose.
slow day today
>>21756271
probably all busy, im about to head to bed
>>21756333
What time u got?
>>21754942
Give it to me baby, aha, aha!
Uno, dos, tres. Rarara.
>>21757078
this is a fluttershy thread, not a rarity one
>>21757149You guys! Give me images of the mane six and sunny shimmer, they might help me figure out the story.Fucking writer's block, first world problems. God DAMN I hate my life
>>21757430
sunny shimmer
>>21757430
Am sorry peice , am on phone and have no access to my archives
>>21757430
>>21757430
>>21757430
>>21753910
Thanks! I haven't had the best of days today, so you can expect a few tears mate.
I was also just checking the thread before I went to schoolhell. I am home now though!
>>21757430
I feel you. Writer's block sucks bud. Take your time! Usually I listen to albums front to back, take a small nap, or take a walk outside to get some ideas if it helps.
>>21757430
I hope piece5 isn't kill
>>21760644
piece is kill
>>21760644
He probably has some personal issues he needs to take care of. Though, I will write for the back up story now! I will be sure to tell when I update it.
http://pastebin.com/Ue42XJBt
Piece cone back to us!<3
>>21761149
Updated. Check it out if you want to read something while you wait.
http://pastebin.com/Ue42XJBt
Where is our green writer?
To what have i fap?
Why is it haaappeeenning to mee?!
>>21765366
Oh fuck no.
Not you
Page 7 bump
bump for cure of writers block
The thread must Live
>>21766724
This life must thread.
>>21766734
mornin Fap, sleep well?
>>21766739
I have 5:10 PM.
Yeah.
Good afternoon btw.
I just sit here and let time go. I have to end first part of my work, but i dunno how. So it's good point to masturbate.
>>21766769
bit TMI but W/E. lookin forward tosome green in todays forecast.
piece5 is no longer kill!
Fucking Excision concert last night, shit was fucking BRUTAL. My ears are still ringing
>>21767080
So, will u write?Be my waifu?[/spolier]
>>21767161I will be thine waifu. I'll start writing here in a bit.
>>21767263
always when i go to work though!
guess i'll be lurkin mobile
>>21767263
you should get a trip m80
>>21767293
>Tfw I don't know how
>Tfw I have no face because I'm on mobile
To make trip u write your normal name
then
##
and after this something like a password
then forum replace it with some serious shit
and that's your tripcode
Too much piece5 who don't write green for me.
>>21767413
Too many tripfags not relevant to the thread for me.
Like this?
>>21767435
Maybe u are right...
>>21767450
Yes. Just remember your tripwords and it's done for good. :D
OFC tell about it nobody! NOBODY!
And write pls. pls.
>>21750315
>You are Anon
>You are being wheeled down the hallway by Fluttershy
>Last night was the first night in a long time that you didn't dream anything. You woke up well rested, feeling refreshed
>You glanced over to your side, where Fluttershy had spent the entire night
>Even in the dark sadness inside you, she was like a bonfire, fighting back the cold inside
>Now you have to go home, something you really don't want to do.
>You don't want to be alone, you don't want to face the fact that both your parents are dead, both ripped from your life before you could even realize what was happening
>You think back to the note, which you memorized while Fluttershy was away taking care of herself
>"Anon, I don't even know if you'll be able to read this. If you do, just know that I'm sorry. I'm sorry that you had to wake up to this terrible news. I just can't handle seeing you lying on the bed, struggling like your mom did to just stay alive. I know that I haven't been the best of fathers throughout the years, but know that I love you. I'm not good at saying stuff like that, something I think you picked up from me. I'm sorry for that.
>"Fluttershy is a wonderful person. Keep her close. Make sure you make her happy everyday, and ensure she knows how much you love her. If I could go back, I would tell your mom how much I loved her, still do love her, every second of everyday. It's one of many regrets I have that I will need be able to fix.
>"I don't know when or where you will be reading this, but just know that I love you. And I'm sorry."
>When you first read the note, the darkness inside you closed in tighter. You fought it as hard as you could, but it was ultimately Flutters' hand holding yours that kept you from falling into insanity
>You yank yourself back to the present, looking at the doors ahead of you.
>>21767808
Delicious and sad.
Can u add some social workew who want to help Anon? I mean, he has no cash, no work, no parents. Yes, he has got love. But he can not eat love and even Flutters and her mother will help, they can not just... u know take him to familly.
Well, they can, but it would be awkward.
So. This is the thing to plan well.
I hope u have a plan.Plan as hard as my boner.
>>21767808
is kill
>>21768611
Why do you say that?
>>21748492
Just one
All I want is one genuinely nice green
No death
No rape
No feels
Just a nice, feel-good green where Anon and his girl are both happy
(By the way, consider updating the pastebin)
>>21770588
but then the story would get dry and boring real quick. you at least need some decent feels or the story wont grab you. I agree there is such as a thing as too much feels but Piece5 is striking a good balance right now. also BUMP
>>21770794
I guess, but romance and death don't really mix in my book
Brothers, I'm back, my Internet connection went to shit yesterday and my computer couldn't charge the battery. It was not a nice day.
>>21767808
This is good, piece5, please deliver more feels.
>>21767456
Hello Faps.
>>21765866
Your story, "Redemption", is perfect, Doc. Keep with the good work.
boomp
Bump
I want you, piece5. I want you to write some moar, and to update your Pastebin... if you don't mind.
>>21772885PasteBin will be updated shortly, I just woke up.
>>21773059
Okay, piece.
Also, what time is it in your side of the world?
>>21773109
I've got 1837 right now. You?
>>21773170
Alright, apparently I have two different tripcodes. Okay then. Sounds good2me
>>21773170
22:38, But I'm not sleepy though, yesterday I slept like 18 hours straight.
>>21767808
>You keep your eyes focused forward as Flutters wheels you to your car.
>Her mom is going to follow the two of you as she drives you to your house. You're not quite sure how tonight is going to end up, but you are optimistic that it'll go as you planned, with no more surprise visits from other Anons.
>Hopefully.
>You reach your car and awkwardly climb in, your ribs only slightly protesting. Four days in a hospital do wonders for your broken ribs, but your leg still requires a cast for a few more days. Weeks, probably.
>You settle back in your seat and close your eyes. You may have slept for three days, and last night, but you're still incredibly tired. You hear Fluttershy put your wheelchair in the trunk and climb into your car. She starts the car and off the two of you go.
>On the drive there, you feel your anxiety and fear rising up in your chest. When you finally arrive, your heart is pounding, thundering in your chest.
>Fluttershy gets out and sets your wheelchair up next to you. You clamber over into the chair, your muscles tight from the fear coursing through your body
>Fluttershy wheels you up your door and into the living room. Apparently the room had been cleaned up, because you see no trace of where your father...
>Where your father...
>Where he... he...
>Did it.
>You close your eyes and focus on keeping your sadness from overtaking you. You empty your mind, breathing in and out until there is no more emotion.
>To do what you have to do tonight, you need to be able to concentrate. You can't do that if you're crippled by sadness.
>Fluttershy leans down from behind and wraps her arms around you.
>"Are you okay, Anon? Are you sure you want to stay here tonight? We could get you a hotel, or you could stay at my house, I'm sure my mom won't mind-"
>You shake your head and wheel yourself to your bedroom.
"I'll be okay here tonight, Flutters. I need a night alone..."
>She follows you, nodding.
>>21773450
God.
Poor anon.
>"I'll be okay here tonight, Flutters. I need a night alone..."
>She follows you, nodding.
Well, now Flutters will feel like shit.
>>21773450
>When you get to your room, you pull alongside your bed and climb into it, settling down on the covers, laying against the pillows.
"Thank you, Fluttershy."
>She nods and clutches her arm, looking down at the ground. "You're welcome, Anon..." She pauses, and glances up at you from under her bangs. "Are you sure you're okay being alone? I can-"
"No, Flutters. I'll be fine tonight. Go home and be with your mom, take care of your animals. And yourself. I'll be okay."
>You hate interrupting her like that, but you can feel your resolve wavering every time she offers to stay. You can't fail tonight, no matter the cost. You know that if you do, you'll not only hurt yourself, but you'll end up destroying those around you as well. Fluttershy, her friends, her mom...
>You stop and think. Everyone you care about is connected to Fluttershy now. Before her, you only cared about one person.Your father.
>Then Flutters came along, and you cared about two people. Then you met her mom, and then there was three. Then you met her friends, and there was nine people you cared about, even though you've only met them for a few fleeting moments.
>Flutters looks like she's about to cry, standing there at the foot of your bed.
>You clear your throat and pat the bed beside you when she looks up. She walks over, still looking like she's about to cry. When she climbs up next to you, you hear a sniffle.
"Hey..."
>"...hey..." It's silent, just enough for you to barely pick up.
"Look at me."
>She picks her head up and looks at you, her eyes watery, just barely keeping the tears back. You want to just stare at those eyes forever, wandering inside them. Unfortunately, that day is a little ways off, still.
"I love you. But tonight, I just need to be alone. Just this one night. Tomorrow night, and the night after, and the night after that, I will spend with you. I'll spend every second I possibly can with you. Except for tonight. Okay?"
>>21773684
I really needed some feels for some reason.
And this is perfect. Praise piece5 and his glorious green.
>>21773684
Tearing up a bit right now.
>>21773684
>She nods at you, then clutches your neck, pulling you closer to her. She cries softly into your neck.
>"I j-just don't want you to get hurt or anything...I want to be here with you..."
>You fight your resolve, bring it back to solidarity. Stay strong, you've got to do this alone.
>You rub her back, up and down, your hand tingling anywhere and everywhere it touches her.
"I promise, Flutters, after tonight we'll be together. But I really need you to go now."
>She squeezes you tighter for one second...
>Two seconds...
>Three seconds...
>She lets go and looks at you, her eyes piercing down to your core.
>"Promise me you won't hurt yourself."
"What are you-"
>"Promise me, Anon. Or else I'm not leaving."
>You can't promise that. Tonight might actually be more painful than any other night, all of them combined, even. What is that saying? 'When all the truth does, is make your heart ache, sometimes a lie is easier to take'.
>You have to lie. A lie to keep the monster within from breaking free.
"I promise, Fluttershy."
>She looks at you, staring into you.
>Please don't call me on my lie please don't call me on my lie please please please
>She sighs and hugs you. "I love you, Anon. Please don't do anything that could hurt you tonight. I can't stand the thought of you being hurt again..."
>She pulls away and wipes a tear from her eyes. She walks to the door, pausing in the frame.
>"See you tomorrow, Anon."
"Good bye, Flutters."
>She walks away, and you hear the door shut, and the sound of a car driving away.
>You are alone.
>Time to go to work.
>>21774184
I said the exact same words Flutters said, to a friend. Worst part is, she ended up doing it anyway.
Many bad memories.
Please continue
>>21774184
>You are Fluttershy.
>Anon is lying to you.
>You could tell when you made him promise he won't hurt himself tonight. You could see it in his eyes, the way they went cold and steely when he "promised".
>You're not sure how to react. Should you be mad? Sad? Hurt? Betrayed, crushed, worried, broken?
>All you feel now is cold. Cold and alone.
>All your fears are coming to reality. Anon is pushing you away, making it easier to dump you with distance. He'll do it tomorrow, probably through a text.
>That's how little you mean to him. You won't get a personal, intimate, face-to-face 'break-up', because you don't warrant something that takes that amount of effort. You've just been a burden the entire time, a simple matter of his conscience since he found you in the park that day. He was ready to forget all about you until you gave him your number, and he was too polite to decline you, to reject you from the beginning.
>Instead, he played you along, pulling you on a string, trying to get you to break up with him first. But you, being the coward you are, you let him keep pulling you on, never picking up the hints, REFUSING to acknowledge the signs in front of you, pretending he actually loved you.
>No one could ever love you, your own mom can barely stand you. Your friends only keep you around because they don't want to hurt you.
>Which gives you some small comfort, at least they care enough to not want you to disappear completely. You're just the background, white noise that is only noticeable when it's gone.
>You reach up and wipe tears from your face.
>"Sweetie, he's going to be fine. You're going to be fine. One night alone isn't the end of the world."
>It is, though. It's the end of YOUR world. Anon has meant everything to you since the beginning, a week ago now.
>There you go, reading too deep into a relationship that was never really there. Your actions trying to prevent your rejection actually just set you up for worse rejection.
>>21774479
Now it seems like she is the one that is going to hurt herself.
More sad memories come to my mind.
Keep it going Piece, good work.
Also, update the Pastebin.
Lurks in the shadows
>>21774479
>You pulled Anon closer, tighter, because you knew he would disappear eventually. By hoping to keep him with you, you ensured that he would leave.
>And now, he's preparing for it. This won't hurt him at all, he's just trying to keep his conscience clean.
>He just lost his dad, and here you are, trying to stay with him when he really needs someone to make him feel better, not make him feel obligated to keep them happy, the way it is with you.
>You continue your attack on yourself until you get home, when you run upstairs to your room, locking the door and throwing yourself on your bed.
>Your phone buzzes.
>This is happening sooner than you thought. Here it comes, the impersonal text message, the inevitable empty apologies and broken promises, the consoling words that actually make you feel worse.
>You look at your phone.
>It's Rarity
>Relief washes over you. Safe for now, you can continue to delude yourself into thinking Anon actually feels anything towards you besides pity.
>You read the text message
>"Fluttershy! I heard Anon got out og the hospital today! Can I come over or are you and Anon...busy? ;)"
>You really want Rarity to be there with you.
"No, Anon is staying at his house tonight. Please come over, I need to talk with you."
>If anyone knows anything about relationships and boys, it's Rarity. Applejack and Rainbow Dash have had a couple here and there, but they're just not sensitive enough to talk about relationships. Pinkie Pie had a boyfriend once, but he moved away. Sunset Shimmer probably knows a thing or two, but Rarity knows the most, and knows how to talk to you.
>"I'll be there in a few minutes."
>You put your phone down and decide to take a shower.
>You head to the bathroom and strip down, turning on the heater and starting the water.
>You step in and let the water flow down you, sticking your hair to your body.
>You curl up into a ball on the floor of the shower and start sobbing.
>Why did you have to climb that tree?
>>21774738
Guitar, finally, good work with "Redemption".
>>21774656
Pastebin updated to >>21774767
http://pastebin.com/8F0P0v9A
>>21774781
Thanks! I'm not sure if I will update it tonight. I have had a pretty rough week so far and it doesn't seem to be improving. I need a long night's sleep. I may update it tomorrow morning.
>Is sad
>Reads sad story
>Gets sadder and happier for some reason.
Good work Piece, as usual!
>>21774767
Well at least it seems that she is not going to hurt herself. Okay, I'm a little happier now.
>>21774829
Thanks, piece.
>>21774849
It's okay, Guitar. Also don't be sad, you are going to make me sad.
>>21774911
>Don't be sad
>Is on this thread, with this story
U wot?
>>21774911
I'm working on it. I'm sure I'll get over it. Thanks for keeping the thread alive! (Also, when I am on no one else is, so I should mention it's 9:42 Pm or 21:42 for me right now).
>>21774956
It's okay it's 00:45 of the Thursday in here. Yesterday I wasn't in the tread, because shitty Internet, and the battery of my Notebook refused to charge
>>21775035
I will be here for a minute longer but when I finish this power point for my presentation Friday I've got to rest.
>>21775097
Ok, Guitar, you are a bro, I will be waiting for you in the morning.
>>21774767
please dont end it for the night...
>>21775143
Thanks man. Also. don't hold me to it because I may forget to write in the morning but I will try. I can Pinkie Promise I will write a good amount tomorrow after school though.cross my heart and hope to fly, stick a cupcake in my eye
I've got to sleep now. Night thread!
>>21775260
Night, bro.
>>21774767
>You have no one to blame for this but yourself. You are the reason Anon is 'dumping' you (If you can even call it that, you went on one date and read to deep into the situation and forced a relationship onto him), you are the reason Anon's dad is dead, the reason Anon was unconscious for three days, the reason his leg and ribs are broken.
>Your thoughts break apart into fragmented, incoherent words
>You sob harder, curling tighter into a ball
>You hear a knock on the door
>"Fluttershy? Are you in there, darling?"
>You stay where you are, still crying, the tears mixing with the water from the shower as they pour out of your eyes.
>The door opens, and you hear footstpes.
>"Fluttershy? Are you okay? It sounds like you're crying, honey..."
>You hear her step around to the side of the shower, hear the curtain pulled back a tiny bit
>"Fluttershy! What in the world-"
>She cuts herself short, shutting the water off and grabbing a towel. She reaches down and wraps you in the towel, pulling you up and out of the shower
>You continue crying, albeit not as intense as before, your tears still falling, but now accompanied only by the occasional sniffle.
>"It's a good thing we're not going out in public," she says, nodding to the clothes you grabbed.
>A smile almost (ALMOST) breaks through. Rarity is always looking out for you. She's your best friend, someone who knows you and knows you well
>She helps you get dressed, then walks you over to your room and sits you down on your bed, sitting down next to you, giving you a hug.
>"Now tell me, what happened?"
>You gush everything to her, starting with your day in the park all the way to the meltdown in the shower just now
>She listens close the entire time, nodding and gasping and holding your hand
>"Fluttershy, you need to calm down. I talked to Rainbow while you were visiting Anon in the hospital. From what she told me, he really does love you. You just need to relax. Here, let me tell you a couple stories."
>>21775233It's not ending there, but rather here >>21775344
I'll definitely pound out some more tomorrow. This is a small rest for now, friends.
Pastebin updated to >>21775344
Goodnight, friends!Check em, two dubs posts
>>21775380
Night, piece, sleep well, you did a grate work, you almost killed me, but you did a grate job at it.
>>21775380
Don't choke on your tongue in your sleep!
So many feels.
>>21775344
Fluttershy got issues yo.
>>21771882
Hello Mr.!
>>21772885
This.
>>21773450
>Where your father...
>Where he... he...
>Did it.
I love this story <3
>"I'll be okay here tonight, Flutters. I need a night alone..."
>She follows you, nodding.
>"I need a night alone..."
>She follows you.
KEK!
>>21773577
This!
>>21773684
>"I love you. But tonight, I just need to be alone. Just this one night. Tomorrow night, and the night after, and the night after that, I will spend with you. I'll spend every second I possibly can with you. Except for tonight. Okay?"
MARRY ME ANON.
>>21774184
I almost started to cry.
Wow.
>>21774253
I know man, i know that. We all has got some special good friend who was eventually stupid as shoe.
>>21774479
>You are Fluttershy.
>Anon is lying to you.
OMFG THAT FEEL
>You could tell when you made him promise he won't hurt himself tonight. You could see it in his eyes, the way they went cold and steely when he "promised".
MY mind explolDED.
>You're not sure how to react. Should you be mad? Sad? Hurt? Betrayed, crushed, worried, broken?
>All you feel now is cold. Cold and alone.
So much feel. Addictive stuff. Want moar.
Jesus Christ. All this post is awesome. Is sad. But i like to feel feellings so much.
>>21774656
This.
>>21774767
RARARA for rescue!
I like Flutvision.
>If anyone knows anything about relationships and boys, it's Rarity. Applejack and Rainbow Dash have had a couple here and there, but they're just not sensitive enough to talk about relationships. Pinkie Pie had a boyfriend once, but he moved away. Sunset Shimmer probably knows a thing or two, but Rarity knows the most, and knows how to talk to you.
Yeah! Reduction and deduction! Sherlockfap.
>>21774911I'm going to make u masturbate.
>>21775344
Tfw Anon and Fluttershy are compatible even in minds, think way, and even fears and insanity.Tfw that would prop never happen to me.
>>21775380
I love your work
>>21776628
>>21777398
>>21777572
>>21777931
He loves your work too.
>>21778384
Faps, hello, finally you came (hehe), Where were you, bro?
>"Tfw Anon and Fluttershy are compatible even in minds, think way, and even fears and insanity."
>"Tfw that would prop never happen to me"
You killed me here, I had one women in my life that was like me, but she went to... well you know... >dead
This is partly why I love this green.
>>21778384
Well, talk to me Faps, you are killing me right here.
>>21778529
Hello Mr. A. M.!
I was in church. As i said earlier, i'm bloody organist in bloody cath church.
Yea. I'm agnostic.
Yea. I fap like creasy.
Yea. I'm fapman.
So she really did that to herself?
Then i hope u two weren't really this same - and hope u will not do that too, brother.
Netherless i'm sorry this happened to you.
But
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=nNr5nj_NjjQ
Because reasons...
>>21778658
Oh. Ok. Brother. I will not leave you.Not like Flutters thinks about Anons feellings
Hail green.
Morning m8s
>>21778672She did it because she believed she didn't deserved me.That day I was at home living my life when I receive a call to my cellphone, it was her, I answer the call, happy, because I was going to talk to her, but no, It was her dad, he told me that she killed herself, and the suicide note said it was because of me, obviously, I couldn't believe it. But it was the truth.In her funeral his father gave me her letter, when I read it I was going to kill myself, but I dind't, I still can't answer why I didn't.She was the women I loved the most. And no one will be able to fill her place.
>>21778780
Morning, Doc.
>>21778850
My gosh.
I have nothing to say.
And i even can not help by my superpower.
But... You see... i'm quite non feel well and good guy.
So... maybe look at the bright side?
U would not want your kids kill themselfs because... do not be mad at me, mental problems taken from one of parentsother than u, u ponyfag ;)
Thinks possitive. U can not save her from herself. U can only take your live go and flow.
It's weird and creepy, but u have to. Take it like... chapter in Baldur's Gate. One has to end, to start other.
>>21778780
Hi Doc Holliday.
>>21778904
I have let that chapter of my life go, I kept on "living", but I don't feel alive, my life with her was like a roller coaster, and now everything is grey.
I mean even if I know that it wasn't my fault I can't do but blame myself for it.
I will just "live" my life, and try to live the best of it, but without the best of it,love.
Thanks for the nice words, Faps, I really appreciate it.
I am going to sleep a little now, please, bump the tread for me while I am gone.
>>21778970
Ok brother.
Good night.
I will be charity bumper again.
As long as i can.
Do not worry. We all will find love, but before that we must take more part of cake called life.And move to Equestria
Please
Please let this story have a happy ending
Just this one
Please
>>21779199
Pls let this story go for eternity.
captcha: yPerv
Updated Paste bin. It's not a lot but I didn't have much time this morning. I hope you enjoy it.
http://pastebin.com/Ue42XJBt
>>21779778
>http://pastebin.com/Ue42XJBt
It's good. Please more.
storytime soon?
>>21780827Soon. Idk when, gotta clean the car out and then head to go take my driving test.
>inb4 underage b&
I'm 18, just lazy.
My goodness, haven't had so many feels in a long time, this thread is killing me. But it's so good!
Also bump
>>21779778
This is just getting better Guitar, this is lovely
>>21779778
But will there be Anon? The new guy in class? Who just moved to town and Shimmer will help him in something?
Will be Anon there?
Will be?
>>21781248
Hi. Slept well?
>>21781321
Sort of.
I'm a little sad. But hey, At least I am not sleepy any more.
How's your day going, Faps?
>>21781372
I did nothing productive.
HAHAAHA!
I'm trying to kill my old self, and build new one. But is so hard. I can not crush it with hand.So i have to touch it gently
Day as day.
>>21781400
Change is one of the best things one can do for himself, but it is one of the most difficult things one can do. It takes babysteps, but it just takes one look to the past to destroy all the progress you made. Be strong Faps,also yes, touch it gently.
>>21781465
I will.
Oh yes. Gently touch but srong in this same time.HAHA! The fun has been doubled!
I have to make something with my life.
Be stonk like Polandball.
Be funny like Momlestia.
Be honest like Maud Pie.
Be loyal like Discord.
Be friendly like Trixie.Or Stalin.
Be gently and kind like Fapman.
Meh. At least one instant fur mich.
What will u do today?
Hello guys ! I've been far away this thread beacuse school and real life and growing up and bla bla bla !
What did I miss ?
>>21781533
Glorious gree.
Love.
Insanity.
Death.
Inner demons.
Flutvion.
More glorious green.
U missed sense of life!
>>21781545
>U missed sense of life!
Reason to live ?
>>21781533
Sad things, sad sad things
Also, hello Anony.
Read the tread, and be prepared to feel sad.
>>21781545
Oh I alredy read the green ! But i didn't reed your comment yet !
But I read some comments !
And I really kiled what happend with Anon ! In mental way ! He is ready to fight those demons what he left behind in her soul ! If I'm right !
>>21781563
>>21781599
"liked"
>>21781599
And I really /kiled/
"liked"
>>21781560
OHMYGOSHOHMYGOSHOHMYGOSH!
The sadness has been doubled!
>>21781599
I don't think he is ready, but I think he just has to do it for the sole purpose to not to become the "deamon Anon"
>>21781632
Dear Mr. Anony Mous !
I just read your comment about what heppend with your life !
Please take my condolence ! /I really don't know how to say things like that in english !/
And I think Aa simple Im sorry is not enough !
>>21781632
There is an "expressive" phrase those horrrible things and death !
"Fogadd részvétem"
Which is trnaslete to english mean
"accept my condolences" or something like this ! /just wrote this beacuse an "I'm sorry is not enough expressive !/
>>21781632
Did I say something wrong !? In that case I'm sorry !
>>21781774
No bro. In my country it;s the same.
"I give u my condolences"
After death of someone close.
But only on funerals and in close date after.
>>21781663
It's nothing really, that is just the past.
But just the sole thought of her is enough to make me sad, it shakes my day upside down. And I can't seem to forget her, she was my everything,
Thank you, Anony, you are a bro.
But let's talk of happier things. I don't want to be this sad anymore.
>>21781809
Sorry Thats waht I'm afriad ! Before I posted my condolence I thikning a few minutes to post it !
>>21781828
So lets talk about the story of Anon and Fluttershy !
>>21781828
And How good is our beloved Gitar Guy's story ! I haven't read yet !
>>21781851
Good enought to fap.
>>21781859
Thats what I wanted to know !
>>21781851
At the start he did a good job, but he needed to make of Sunset more hated.
And he really improved, it's good if you want some feels.
>>21781874
What kind of fells ! Just thinking cause I love the storys about Sunset Shrimmi !
>>21781889
"feels"
>>21781874
>>21781889
Read it and feel the feels.
Sad feels, but happy feels when Sunset is happy.
>>21781920
>>21781923
Thanks guys ! I'm gonna check it !
>>21781923
What will u do today?
>>21782024
I will be in this tread, and pretty much that.
Oh, and watch some TV.
>>21782091
"Fat" Thursday ?
Friday the 13th?
Vallentines?
>>21782106
Triangle of modern and stronk women?
>>21782106
I have not valentines since, well, then.
Fat Thursday? That is a german celebration, I think.
Friday the 13th is an spooky day I didn't realiced it was tomorrow.
>>21782155
Polish!
Polish celebration.
And internet is polish.
So poland strong.
Well... day before vallentines is the day of "last hope of stupid girl"
U can try to find one for yaa.
But.
Well.
I would go on some convent with mlp and there find a gurl.
Nice gurl. Pretty gurl. Horny gurl and fapful.
But i dunno when and where those places gets to be
>>21782274
I'm not in the mood to find a girl.
Poland is strong.
I believed Internet was made by an English Sir.
>>21782274
I think I find you a gurl !
>>21782384
Yes ! This cutie is mine I brought my first pony merchandise today ! Oh my god I brougt a pony merchandise !........
>I feel the autism overtkang me !
>...
>It's a good pain !
>>21782398
Did you liked Guitar's story?
Also, nice pony.
>>21782383
I see. Do not worry. There is wetpussyfor everyone with balls.
>>21782384
>>21782398
Did u bought this figure?
Why is it so polish?
I thought Hasbro sell nicer thinks. like dildos.
[spoler]Did u cum on it and that's why it's so shining?
Fight against autism!
If u are warior u have mace.
If u are mage u have staff.
If u are ranger u have juvenile animal.
Choice wisely! Becauseu have to choice how u will fap for eternity!
