https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=46935NAqjhQ
>It's the Summers eve festival.
>A time for humans and ponies to celebrate their differences by partaking in a dance in the human world.
>It's still hard for you to believe that all these cute girls are actually ponies.
>You see one in the corner that really catches your eye.
>She's hiding behind the punch bowl forcing a smile as she watches everyone else dance.
>You adjust your tie as you stride over to her.
"Fun party huh?"
>She turns to you.
>"Oh yeah, it's a.. Real scream."
>She says shoving her fist up in a 'right on' sort of way.
>She turns up her cup of punch downing it like a shot at the bar.
"Something wrong?"
>She coughs halfway between drinking.
>"Oh, no! Why would it be!? Twilight Sparkle and her friends have done a magnificent job of getting everyone together tonight."
>Shes forcing a grin which seems uncomfortably pasted on.
"Well, I mean, everyone's together except for you that is."
>"Pfft, who me? I'm fine. I, you know my feet are kind of sore. Gosh walking on two legs is so different.. And oh my look at all the decorations Pinkie put up, aren't they lovely-"
>You grab her hand.
"Wanna dance?"
>"D-dance? Me, oh I couldn't. I just couldn't, its.."
"What?"
>"I can't dance."
"It's not that hard, come on, I'll lead you through it."
>"Well.. I guess if you insist-"
>You yank her out on the dancefloor.
>>27734568
>It's a little awkward at first, but you and this girl cut the rug.
>Old timey music is jamming in the background and you start to get her to loosen up.
>Before long she's like a different person dancing around and having a good time.
>Later that night.
>"Whew, that was sure something!"
"You bet, you know for someone not used to moving around on two legs you're pretty dexterous."
>"T-thanks. You were good too."
"Hey, you uh, wanna get out of here?"
>She pauses.
>"Where.. Did you have in mind?"
"Oh, you know, I was just thinking back to my place, maybe some, Netflix and chill?"
>"What's a Netflix?"
"Well it's actually-"
>"Starlight there you are!"
>The grand host of the party Twilight interrupts.
>Twilight shoots you a dirty look.
>"I see you've already met Anonymous."
>"Is something wrong?"
>"Anon I don't want you going near my student you hear me?"
"Woah what's this all about?"
>"Yeah, we were just having fun."
>"Starlight doesn't need any bad influences after her recent reform you hear me?"
"Reform?"
>You look to Starlight, she looks away smiling uncomfortably.
>"I may have started a cult and tried to brainwash an entire town, and maybe tried rewrite the history of Equestria through timetravel.."
>Is this shy little girl is some kind of evil mastermind?
"Uh.. Ok then."
>"Come on Starlight, let's get you back to the hotel."
>"W-will you, at least let me say goodbye first?"
>She walks up to you looking you in the eyes.
>Her soft purple eyes as she offers her hand.
>You take it.
>Her other hand grabs your hand as you feel something slide upon the palm of your hand.
>Twilight sighs rolling her eyes.
>"Alright, I think that's quite enough."
>She says grabbing Starlight by the shoulder dragging her away.
>"I'll see you later Anonymous, it was fun dancing with you!"
>She says waving as Twilight drags her off.
>>27734573
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=eLKD_S3DjGQ
Hey it's Gritsaw here. You know writing fanfiction is hard sometimes, but nothing gets me in the creative mood quite like the refreshing taste of Coca Cola®.
#Shareacoke
>>27734577
>Cockblock Twilight strikes again..
>Wait what's this piece of paper in your hand?
>It's her phone number..
>You're surprised she's already taught them about phones.
>Then again, you're sure Twilight already gave them the crash course on how the human world works.
>Though you'd hate to be the one receiving that lecture as it would probably sound boring coming from her.
>A rainbow haired girl approaches you.
>"Hey there Anon, can't say I didn't expect you to be here."
"Sup Rainbows?"
>"Oh not much, I saw you got chewed out by Twilight again."
"Yeah, but I don't blame her."
>"Still haven't patched things up with her huh?"
>She seems concerned.
"I don't think I'll ever be able to make up for what I did."
>"Heh, you sound just like her, just like Starlight that is."
>You pause for a moment, Rainbow dash grabs a cup of punch downing it.
"That stuff about her being a cult leader, it wasn't true was it?"
>"Oh yeah it's all true."
"Hmm."
>"Er! What I mean to say is, oh shoot, will you look at the time! It sure is late, I'd better head back to the hotel before Twilight gets mad."
>She sheepishly walks off looking mildly panicked.
>Now let's see.
>Logic would dictate you probably shouldn't pursue someone with that type of background.
>But then again you've never been the most logical person.
>>27734582
>It's later that night at your place.
>The familiar scent of home as you prepare some snacks and crash on the couch.
>Tonight it's Leftover lasagna and the refreshing taste of Coca Cola®.
>You wish you had someone to share it with.
>It's been a few months since you've fucked someone.
>The desperation is real.
>You call the number.
>Brrrrrr.
>Brrrrrr.
>"Hello?"
"Hey it's Anonymous I-"
>"I'm sorry about taking so long to answer, I just stepped out of the shower, someone spilled punch on me while Twilight was dragging me away."
"Woah, you stepped out of the shower just to answer the phone?"
>"Yeah, I'm still naked and soaking wet."
>You feel a swelling taking place in your lower regions.
"T-tell me more about that."
>"Well, my skin here isn't like Equestria, everything feels a lot colder. Hold on, I just wanna get some clothes on real quick."
"Oh, sure."
>"Thanks, it'll just be real quick."
>Rustling noises on the other end of the phone.
>You wonder how long she's actually been here.
>"Sorry, I'm dressed now. Stupid clothes."
"Er, alright."
>"Twilight says I have to wear clothes all the time because the humans will think I'm weird if I don't."
"OH, well, heh, you don't have to worry about wearing clothes around me if you don't want to."
>>27734591
>"Really? That's great. Twilight got really mad when I walked around naked the first day at the hotel. But the other guests didn't seem to mind, although they were kind of looking at me weird."
>The swelling of your boner is causing you to lose focus and making it difficult for you to think.
"E-er.. Yeah, well that sounds about right.."
>"Hey listen, I think I have some time off tomorrow between my cultural analysis classes, wanna go hang out?"
"Sure, that sounds great."
>"I wanna do the Netflix thing you talked about earlier."
"O-oh, you don't say.."
>"Yeah, I asked someone and they told me it's some kind of thing that lets you watch movies. It sounds fun!"
"Hehe, yeah, it'll be great."
>"I'm really excited I'm making another friend here in a new world. It's a fresh start, and a clean slate."
"I know the feeling."
>"Huh?"
"Nothing, anyhow, I hope to see you tomorrow."
>"I hope to see you too."
"Goodnight Starlight."
>"Goodnight Anonymous."
>Click.
>>27734598
Later at the Mall.
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>Starlight arrives just on time walking past scattered crowds of people.
>"Hey there."
"Hi Starlight, can I call you Star for short? You can call me Anon instead of Anonymous."
>"Sure. It's good to see you again Anon."
"So uh Star, how about we go get some Coke and see where the day takes us."
>"Sounds good."
>You walk toward the Mc Donalds and order two large Coca Colas®.
>You're served as you begin to walk through the mall.
>Starlight sipping at her drink.
"How do you like things here?"
>"It's.. An adjustment. There are a lot of people, and new things. I've never seen places so busy.. And it seems so convenient too! Twilight was telling me about these motorized transport vehicles I've been seeing, and they're like carraiges without needing someone to pull them."
"Oh yeah, that was a real marvel back in the day I guess."
>"Just so many different things, It feels like it would take forever to learn about it all."
"Well, I could teach you if you want."
>"Are you sure? I don't want to bother you by asking a bunch of stupid questions."
>She's frowning.
>You place your hand on her shoulder.
"Hey don't say stuff like that. You're new here, you're just learning. Ask as many questions as you want, I'll answer every one as best I can."
>"Thanks.."
>>27734603
Later at a local park
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>Time seems to fly when you're with her.
>Shes been asking you questions, and she seems so nice.
>Though theres always this feeling like she's holding on to something.
>Or that she's holding something back from you.
>You're almost positive it has to do with her past.
>As much as you've been trying to sort of skirt the issue..
"So I-"
>Starlight was looking off at the scenery but turns her attention to you.
"I was saying, you know, about your past."
>"Mmm.."
>She looks rather sad about you mentioning it.
"I was just wondering, that whole cult leader stuff, you're ok now right?"
>"Oh, yeah, I'm different.."
"Did you, wanna talk about it?"
>She sighs.
>"Well, you're probably going to hate me after this but.. I mean, I did lead a cult and brainwash a town with a warped ideology about cutie marks."
"You mean that special talent thing?"
>"Hey you know about those?"
"I was thinking about immigrating to Equestria for a while so I had to study up."
>"Wait, you mean you never went then?"
"Well, something got in the way but.. I'll tell you about it later I guess."
>"Alright."
"But anyhow, you're changed now aren't you? Twilight said you were reformed and-"
>"Yeah, I'm totally different now. I swear I'm not the crazy pony I used to be. Completely changed, reformed!"
>Shes smiling awkwardly.
"Relax, everything is good."
>"Is it?"
>You put your hand on her shoulder.
"Yeah, just chill out."
>"Thanks Anon.. You know most guys get worried when they hear about my past."
"I mean, everyone's done something they're not proud of."
>Including you of course.
>Some things you can never erase..
>"Anon, are you ok?"
"Yeah, I'm fine. It's getting late, we should take you back to the hotel."
>>27734609
>"Wait already!?"
>She walks around in front of you.
>"But that wasn't enough time, we were just getting to know each other!"
"I know, but you don't want to piss Twilight off do you?"
>She pauses for just a moment.
>"I-it's ok, I mean, if it's just for one night."
"What-"
>"Thats ok right? I can stay over at your place can't I?"
"Sure."
>What could possibly go wrong?
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https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=fvgtcXzbQQI
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>>27734614
Later at your place.
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>Her eyes peer over the place.
>She walks slowly inside.
>She turns back to you.
>"Show me around, I wanna see everything."
"I'd love to, but first, why don't you take a moment to relax on the couch, I'll get us some refreshments.
>"Ok."
>Phase one of getting her home went off without a hitch.
>It's been several months since you got laid.
>But you've run this race before, and you're not about to fuck it up on the final lap.
>You rip open a bag of doritos pouring them into a bowl.
>You grab a few cans of Coca Cola® from the fridge as you hustle toward the couch.
>You grab the remote and turn on the t.v.
>"So what's playing right now?"
>You smile.
>"Whatever you want. Feast your eyes on the technological marvel that is the television. It can display any movie or show in the blink of an eye."
>"Can it display past events too? Like wars and such?"
"Err, if people took the time to record them. Otherwise you'll have to settle with re-enactments."
>She frowns for just a moment before marveling at the screen again.
>"You humans really have it made here don't you?"
"Sometimes."
>You decide to put on some pretty decent films you've seen at least a dozen times.
"Pretty sweet here huh Star?"
>She responds casually.
>"Yeah."
"Have you gotten used to your human body?"
>She pauses for a moment.
>"Well, sometimes I'll try to lift something with magic, or teleport around, but then nothing happens. It really sucks."
"Oh."
>She puts her hand on yours.
>"But then sometimes I'll be overwhelmed by all the new stuff around me, it makes me totally forget all the drama I went through back then."
"This world tends to do that."
>She grabs a chip and eats it.
>"Mmm, yeah and.. You know, I could use a vacation away from Twilight, and her friends."
"Uh.."
>>27734619
>"I feel like I'm always being watched, always under pressure. Like I can't relax. I'm always scared I'm gonna do something and slip up again and.."
>You wrap your arm around her.
"Well, theres no need to feel like that around me. I'll help you relax and teach you everything there is to know about this world."
>"You mean it?"
"Sure, that's what friends do right?"
>She hugs you.
>She breaks the hug.
>"I get the feeling you and I are gonna become good friends!"
"Oh hey, speaking of which, I mean heheh.."
>"What?"
"You were saying earlier on the phone how you'd wanna walk around naked and stuff."
>She has an uncomfortable look on her face.
>"I was talking to Applejack this morning, and she told me that only people who are really close like lovers should show off their bare bodies to each other."
"Oh, pftt, you know how old fashioned she is?"
>"I've just been thinking like, it feels weird not to have my clothing on the more I stay here."
"Right.."
>She suddenly looks at you worriedly.
>"It's just, I don't wanna do anything wrong or weird without realizing it! It's not that I don't like you.. I mean."
>Shes fidgeting her hands in her lap and blushing pretty hard.
"It's ok, let's just, focus on the movie."
>She leans herself against you hugging your arm.
>"You aren't mad are you?"
>You feel your cheeks flush with blood.
"N-nah, I'm fine."
>"That's good. I don't wanna lose my only new friend here."
>You crack a smile.
"Don't worry, you're just fine."
>You ruffle her hair.
>She smiles back.
>>27734626
>The next morning you get up.
>You and Starlight talk for a moment, and for some reason you're craving doughnuts.
>Feeling a bit too lazy to do it yourself, you send Starlight across the street to go get some doughnuts.
>Then you get a knock on the door.
>As you approach the knocking turns into pounding.
>You look through the peephole.
>Twilight and some of her friends are there at your door.
>You reluctantly open the door.
>You get tackled to the floor by Pinkie as Applejack readies the rope.
>"Hold him down! Now listen here 'Non, yer gonna tell us where Starlight is or so help me I'll tie you up quicker than you can spit."
"Well, actually she just went to-"
>Pinkie Pipes in.
>"That's right, and I'll make sure while you're tied up to yank down your pants and spank your bare bottom until you're forced to tell us where she is!"
"T-tied up and spanked.. You know on second thought, I won't tell you where she is."
>Twilight puts her hand up to her lips and is blushing.
>"Enough! You'll never get answers out of him that way!"
>You get up and stand now looking at her.
>"You'd better not be doing anything funny to her!"
>"Why not? Starlight likes jokes."
>>27734631
>"That's NOT the kind of funny I mean."
>She says as she gives you a stern look waving her finger at you.
"I know. Trust me, nothing happened, everything is fine."
>"Which is exactly what someone would say if everything WASN'T fine, now where is she."
"Jesus purple batman calm down. She just went to the convenience store to-"
>Starlight arrives on the scene dropping the box of doughnuts and gasping at the three standing in front of you.
>"T-twilight I.. I can explain!-"
>"No need! I know what you two were up to, and don't think I don't!"
>She's waving the finger at the both of you now.
>"B-but Twilight I-"
>"Starlight you know you have an 8pm curfew you're to be back at the hotel and in your rooms! I have to keep track of 113 students and I CAN'T have all of them gallivanting around uneducated about the world around them!"
>"I'm sorry Twilight, I just-"
>"No excuses! You're losing your outing privileges for the rest of the week you hear me?"
>"Yes Twilight, I'm sorry."
>"Good."
>You sigh.
>"I told you last night to stay away, looks like I still can't trust you."
"You're right, you can't."
>Twilight grimaces and walks away with Starlight and the rest in tow.
>>27734568
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>>27734635
Gritsaw I love you
>>27734635
>You sit in silence on the couch.
>The box of doughnuts sits on the table in front of you.
>It has a crease in it from when she dropped it.
>However you haven't even opened it since she left.
>Only hours ago had she occupied it and already the room feels like a chasm without her.
>It's only a week without her getting time off to see you but..
>Not to mention you have your own work to worry about too.
>You pull out your phone and stare at her number.
>You want to be with her, so you can forget all those times beforehand..
>The times you'd pushed to the back of your mind.
>The times you made mistakes that you could never take back..
Do you believe in her, boys?
>>27735730
>A few days have passed.
>You wonder what Starlight has been up to.
>Wondering if Twilight hasn't brainwashed her to stay away from you.
>Though, maybe for Starlight's sake staying away from you..
>No, you've gone over this enough in your mind.
>You still deserve happiness the same as anyone else..
>Suddenly you get a call from an unidentified number.
>Normally you wouldn't pick up the phone but..
"Hello who is this?"
>"Hi, is this Anon?
"S-star?"
>"How have you been? I missed you."
"I-i'm ok.. I missed you too."
>"Sorry I didn't call you sooner, Twilight took away my cell phone."
"But you got it back right?"
>Another voice can be heard in the background.
>"Um, not exactly."
"Rainbow Dash?"
>"Yeah, it's her phone."
"Cool, well, at least she let you use it."
>"I don't understand why Twilight doesn't trust Starlight. I mean she is one of us now."
>It probably isn't Starlight that Twilight doesn't trust..
>Not that you could blame her.
"So you wanna hang out?"
>"Of course, I.."
>A pause.
"You what?"
>"Uh, well Twilight still has Star on lockdown."
>"Shes right, I can't go to the bathroom without people right outside the door."
"Didn't realize you were staying in a prison camp."
>"Neither did I, till recently."
"Well lets see, if you can't come here, maybe I can go there."
>"You would come to see me?"
"For sure. I'll be there in like 20 minutes, is that cool?"
>"Sure. I just hope Twilight thinks it's cool too."
>She probably won't.
>But it could be worth a shot.
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>>27735740Yes
>>27735740
N..not like this..
>>27734568
Holy shit, a Starlight green!
>>27734568
>pink shimmer
>>27735798
I beg you to keep going.
>>27735798
Later at the hotel
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"What do you mean I can't get in?"
>"Sorry 'Non, but Twi's given us strict orders not to let y'all come through."
>"That's right, so we absotively posalutely can't let you through."
"If Twilight told you to jump off a bridge would you do it?"
>"Well ain't you just a cheeky son of a-"
>"Applejack, it's fine."
>Twilight pushes past her shoulder.
>"So I see you've come back. No doubt to see Starlight?"
"C-come on Twilight, can't we just take it easy with the whole rules thing and let me and Star have some fun?"
>"Of course, because you're all about breaking rules aren't you?"
"That's not what this is about-"
>"I know. And.. As much as my own.. History with you has been, less than perfect. I'm sure Celestia wouldn't like it very much if I forcibly kept the two of you apart."
"Twilight I-"
>She grabs you by the collar.
>"But if you lead my student astray so help me Anon I will personally drag you down to the depths of Tartarus myself and banish you there for the next 200 years."
"F-fair enough?"
>She releases her grip and sighs.
>She walks away.
>Pinkie and Applejack are whistling pretending they didn't see anything.
>You sigh and head up to the front desk to locate Starlights room.
If they're in the human world, where is the original, non-bald sunset?
>>27736100
>You're walking down the hall toward Starlights room when suddenly you see her run toward you and wrap you in a hug.
>"Anon!"
"So they let you go?"
>"And gave me my privileges back. How'd you do it Anon, what'd you say?"
>Even now she still hasn't forgiven you..
>"Anon?"
"It doesn't matter. Anyhow let's get out of here."
>"Hold on real quick, I uh. I'm gonna get some things."
>Starlight grabs you by the hand and leads you to her room.
>"Hehe, ta-da! Whaddya think?"
>The room seems very orderly.
>There are two beds, although the color palette that matches her clothing is the one closest to the window.
>Suddenly knocking from behind.
>Rainbow Dash at the door.
>"Uh, I got this message from Twilight, apparently she's approved you being gone for the next three days. Does anyone know what's going on here?"
>"Mmm good, I'm already packed!"
>She pulls a giant duffel bag out of the closet.
"Oh.. Uh.."
>Yeah you've got nothing.
>Twilight must really be torn up about seeing you again if she's sending you away for the next three days.
>"Isn't this great? We can spend the next three days all to ourselves!"
"Yeah, that's good."
>She sets the bag down running over and grabbing your hands shaking them up and down.
>"Come on look more excited! We're gonna have so much fun over the next few days!"
"Y-yeah, you're right. Lets go."
>Starlight grabs her things as you both head out the door.
>>27736322
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Op4n0pGQ3F4
>You're traveling down the road in your car.
>Starlight in the passengers seat peering curiously out the windows.
>You can't get it off your mind.
>Everything about that situation.
>All those repressed memories coming back causing you to regret.
>You wanted just for a moment to hate her..
>Just to hate Twilight and say to yourself what a mega-bitch she was.
>But in the end, she was never in the wrong..
>It was always you.
>It was always..
>You grip tightly on the steering wheel.
>"Is everything alr-"
"Everything is fine!"
>Starlight gasps at your outburst.
>Silence for a few moments.
>"I-i'm sorry I-"
"It's not your fault.."
>"Anon if you just want to talk about it I-"
"As usual it's my fault, like it always is."
>"I'll.. Stay quiet for a while, if that helps.."
"Ok."
>As much as you thought you'd gotten rid of it through drinking, binging and gambling.
>Through fucking new girls to try and replace the feelings you had.
>Somehow you knew it'd never be the same.
>>27736335
>Starlight is on the couch with you in your home.
>The t.v is on, and it's quiet.
>Starlight is learning against you.
>Sometimes she looks at you with a worried expression.
>A part of you wants to tell her.
>But a part of you doesn't think she'll understand.
>There certainly wasn't anything redeemable about it.
>Or about you for that matter.
>It's nice having her here.
>It's nice having her pressed against you.
>But every nice thing is like poison seeping into the wound.
>You can only remember every happy memory.
>"I really like this movie Anon, don't you?"
>Every blessing you ever had..
"Yeah, it's a good one."
>And how despite all of it..
>"I'm glad you're letting me stay here."
>You managed to piss it all away.
>>27736703
A year and a half ago.
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>"Isn't this house just like we always dreamed?"
"It's perfect Twilight."
>Twilight stands on the deck overlooking the snowy landscape.
>The luxurious alpine lodge you stand in belongs to you.
>"I'm surprised we were able to afford it."
"Are you kidding, the blueprints you sold to those scientists are really going to benefit mankind. You're a genius and demand a genius salary."
>"Oh stop.."
>She says blushing and twirling her hair.
>You walk over to her and hold her in your arms.
"It's true.. Compared to you I'm-"
>She presses her finger to your lips, and then quickly moves it kissing you.
>The sweet taste of her clean mouth.
>The kiss breaks.
>"Remember what I said?"
"I know, I'm not allowed to talk down about myself."
>"You are so special to me.. You taught me everything there is to know about the human world. What to look out for. You know how much trouble I'd be in if it weren't for you?"
"Well I'm still not as smart-"
>She grabs your hand squeezing it.
>"Please, you don't need to be. Let me take care of all the academics."
"But-"
>"There's more to life than booksmarts.. You're so kind and thoughtful. And you work so hard. Even though you always think of yourself as ordinary, or even as a jerk sometimes.. I know that you're the sweetest, most special guy I've ever known. And I don't know what my life would be like without you."
>You feel tears welling up in your eyes.
"D-dammit Twilight.. You can't just say super heartfelt stuff like that without giving me warning first."
>She giggles helping to wipe away your tears.
>"I'll be a bit more considerate next time. Anyhow, let's go inside. I'll help you make dinner as always."
"Beef stew?"
>"Ooh sounds nice. I would try and make it myself, but.. Without my magic in these sorts of things, I'm afraid I'm just not very practical."
"Heh, you'll get the hang of it."
>She gives you a little salute.
>"Lead the way head chef Anonymous!"
"Alright."
>>27736713
Oh no, what the hell did he do?
>>27736713
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=WN5jRb2ADto
>You're eating beef stew with Twilight.
>The warm smell of the stew.
>The crackling fireplace giving warmth to the home.
>Twilight leaned against you with a pleased expression.
>And yet..
>"What's wrong Anon?"
"N-nothing, everything is perfect sweetie."
>"Anon, please."
>She puts her hand on your face.
>"We talked about this, and we promised we'd never keep any secrets from each other."
"Y-you.. You're right. I'm sorry, I just.. When I think about how you're a big time Princess and all, I can't help but think that I'm just not worthy to be here. Not worthy to have all of this great stuff and-"
>"So, it's because I'm a Princess is it?"
"W-well I mean-"
>"I'll be right back."
>What could she be doing?
>She's not going to pack her stuff and leave is she?
>No, that's silly, but what..
>She hurries back.
>She clears her throat.
>"It is, with great honor, that I, Twilight Sparkle, the Princess of friendship, do grant peerage to, and give thee the title, 'Prince of Friendship."
>She places her crown on your head.
"Heh, Prince of friendship huh?"
>>27736878
>"And well, there's one other thing I can do for you.. That is if you.."
>She gets down on one knee.
>She pulls out a little box.
"T-twilight.."
>She opens it.
>"Will you, Anonymous, take me, Twilight Sparkle to be your lawfully wedded wife?"
>You're flabbergasted.
"T-twilight.."
>"This way, you'll technically be the King of friendship.. And you'll never have to feel like you're beneath anyone ever again."
"Twi-"
>"If I could I would give it all away to someone else. I never wanted to be the Princess or have a fancy crown, or castle, or title anyway. I was happy just being plain old Twilight Sparkle. A little known bookworm with a few close friends to call her own.. You're the best friend I've ever known. And being away from you, even for a little while hurts. I know I can't go one more day without demanding that you take my hoof--, er hand that is, in martimony. So that we'll always be together no matter what."
>You feel the tears welling up.
>"O-oh shoot, I guess I forgot about that warning."
>You collapse down and wrap her in your arms.
"You goddamn adorable little bookworm. Of course I'll marry you."
>You wipe the tears hastily from your eyes.
>"I love you Anon, and I always will."
"I love you too Twilight."
>You kiss her and hold her tightly in your arms.
>You never want to let her go.
>GlimGlam finally gets a story
>it's EQG shit
:(
>>27736883
How the in the piping hot FUCK! Did we fuck this up?
>Glimmer finally gets a story
the previous thread needed you writefag
As I said, we Glimmerfags have no talent
>>27736883Marital problems thread?
>>27736883
>You give Starlight an extra pillow and blanket to sleep on the couch with.
>You retire to your room saying goodnight before walking down the rest of the hall.
>The vacant space in your room solidifies your isolation.
>You climb into the empty bed.
>This is what you deserve.
>All those happy memories came back just as things were going well with Star..
>But it never would have happened if Twilight didn't let her go.
>She didn't have to do that..
>You grip your pillow.
>You pound the bed with your fist.
>Speaking aloud softly you say,
"Dammit all, even now you probably still wanted me to be happy, even if it wasn't with you. I'm scum. I'm such complete scum.."
>Maybe it's her way of forgetting about you, and letting you go but..
>This pain in your chest.
>This hurt you'd long since thought had faded has come back like an old would re-opened.
>It feels like nothing in the world can make it go away.
>>27737171
The next morning.
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>You walk over and sit on the couch.
>A pillow with blanket neatly folded on top is there.
>"Made you some coffee."
>Not only coffee but one of the doughnuts from the other day on a plate.
>"Bon appetit!"
>She says as she plops next to you.
>She bites into her own doughnut.
"Ugh.."
>"What's wrong?"
>Looking at this food.
>You barely feel compelled to eat.
"I.. I'm not that hungry."
>"Well, I am. You sure have been gloomy since we came back from the hotel."
"I'm fine."
>"Anon, there are many things I can tell about someone just by their face. And you are not fine."
"It's just, something that happened in the past, it's no big deal."
>"Anon, you can talk to me, we're friends remember?"
>You take a sip at the coffee.
"It's pretty good."
>"Making coffee there and making it here is still the same."
>She says rather cheerily.
"I'll have what you're having."
>She looks at you quizzically.
>"But you already are."
>You sigh.
"So we are."
>"Look, if you promise to open up, I promise I won't think any differently of you no matter what you tell me."
"Oh yeah, why don't you open up about your past?"
>She looks down into her mug with a downcast expression.
"That's what I thoug-"
>"Fine, I'll tell you everything. But in return, I want some answers."
>You sigh again.
"Well, get on with it."
>>27737423
>"A while back, I founded a town called "Our Town" gathering ponies from all over Equestria."
"Pretty harmless so far."
>"I haven't even started so listen.. All the ponies, I told them they could come to a place where they could be accepted, a place where they could belong and not feel the outside pressures of the world. Our own little paradise if you will."
"Sounds like things didn't pan out that way."
>"I wanted everyone to accept our beliefs, or.. Rather my belief, that everyone should be equal."
"Still not seeing the bad part."
>"Equality in every aspect disregarding what makes certain ponies special or stand out. Even going so far as to remove what stood out altogether."
"The nail that sticks up gets hammered down I guess, it's the same here too."
>"I used my magic to remove their talents, and then I brainwashed all of my citizens to follow my ideologies. I forced them to smile, and behave and act as though each and everyone was part of a single unit, with no individuality whatsoever. Not separating any of them by more than name."
"Ok, now it's starting to sound kinda bad."
>"I'm still not done. See after Twilight came and put an end to "Our Town"-"
"Wait, she was the one who stopped you?"
>"Yes, her and her friends, as well as inevitably some of the ponies I had brainwashed eventually turned against me and I ran."
"What happened next?"
>"I was so mad at Twilight for destroying everything I built that I nearly destroyed everything by trying to re-write history using a time spell."
"Oh...."
>"I saw so much pain, and needless suffering. I realized how selfish and awful I was. I blamed Twilight when really I should have blamed myself. And it all started because I wanted everything to be perfect."
>>27737428
>You take a moment to absorb what she's said.
"Wow."
>"I know."
"I dunno about this whole perfection thing but.."
>"Well, it had to do with something that happened when I was little. A friend of mine got his cutie mark before I did, and we were separated. I never saw him again, and I was never able to make any more friends after that."
"Harsh."
>"That's one of the reasons I take our friendship so seriously. I hope we can still be friends now that you've heard the whole thing."
"Sure. I've done some pretty bad stuff too. I was skeptical at first, but maybe we have a bit more in common than I thought."
>"So you'll open up to me?"
"Why not? It all started about a year and a half ago."
>>27737432
A year and a half ago shortly after getting engaged to Twilight
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>"You really want to immigrate to Equestria for the wedding?"
"It's your home. And from all the stories you've told me, I want to see this place with my own eyes. So I figure, let's make our wedding the most magical day ever by going to the most magical place ever."
>She hugs you from behind.
>"Aww, Anon.."
>You're reading a book on Equestria and it's culture.
>"You have to pass the test on your own you know."
"I know. But it'll be worth it when I get to see your home."
>"We'll have to come back after the wedding you know. I am the personally appointed overseer of the immigrants of Equestria."
"I know. I'm sure Celestia probably gave you that job after she realized you were the best one for it."
>"Well, I may have pulled a few stings too. But I mainly took the job so I could be closer to you. And have an excuse to be here while upholding my Princessly duties."
"A-are you serious?"
>"Yes.. I can't tell you how much it hurt to keep going back to Equestria each night to an empty bed."
"That's how I felt without you here too!"
>"Well, now neither of us have to be apart ever again. And I'm so happy you're learning Equestrian culture just for me. I know how much you don't like academics, so I'm really flattered you care enough to do this just for me."
"Of course I care. And I'll always be here for you, from now on."
>"And I'll be here for you too."
>You continue reading.
"Heh, now that I actually sit down and read some of this stuff, it is kinda interesting."
>"There's plenty more in my library if you wanna read more after this."
"Eh.. Let's just take it one step at a time."
>"Hehe, alright. I'll make a reader out of you yet."
"For you I think I'd be ok with that."
>You both kiss.
>>27737576
>It's later at the bachelor party thrown by Spike.
>You're by the punch bowl.
>"Hey buddy, how's it going?"
>Flash dressed up in his suit gives you a friendly shoulder punch.
>"Haven't seen you in forever what's been happening?"
"Oh, you know, just getting married to the most amazing girl ever."
>"You poor soul. I mean congrats I guess?"
"What are you talking about?"
>"Dude, you're about to commit your whole life to some girl, YOUR ENTIRE LIFE. To one girl, you don't see a problem with that?"
"Well it's just I-"
>"Dude, I'm banging at least 4 chicks right now. I have trouble keeping track of their names honestly."
"Good for you?"
>"The point is, a guy like you, you could be slaying that pussy left and right, while you're still young man! And you're gonna throw away that opportunity on marriage? What happens if you get divorced and you're like 40 and bald and ugly and shit?"
"Woah man, could you cool it, my wedding happens in a few days."
>"You wanna go through with it, thats fine. But shit man, I'd try to bang at least a dozen more chicks before I get tied down to one you know what I'm saying?"
"Are.. You serious?"
>"A real man should be able to have it all."
>Suddenly Flashes phone buzzes.
>"Oh shit it's my girl uh.. Sugarcoat that's the one. She is D.T.F brah! I am so in there! I gotta go but, good luck with the wife I guess!"
>>27737970
>You're staring into the mirror.
>Those words keep echoing in your mind.
>'A real man should be able to have it all.'
>Is he right?
>Maybe this is your chance to be a real man for once in your life.
>You never had the opportunity to fuck a girl while seeing another.
>And there is this babe you met at the mall the other day, chatted it up.
>One in a million, she's probably DTF.
>It's a few days before the wedding.
>But maybe, if you plan it out just right, you really can have it all.
>Your days of being on the bottom rung tier of men is over.
>>27737975
It's later that night back at your place.
---------------
>"Did you enjoy your bachelor party?"
"Uh, yeah, it was all good."
>"I'm so happy. I was worried about leaving Spike in charge, but it looks like he pulled through after all."
>You walk over and plop on the couch.
>"You seem really tired. I can give you a foot massage if you want. I've been reading some books on it for just such an occasion."
"You're too much babe."
>"Remember about two months ago when you were talking about how you wanted a massage?"
"Ah, you can't be serious, that night after work and we made spaghetti?"
>"That's the one."
"You're.. So nice.. I just.. Why are you so nice?"
She gives a bit of a confused look.
>"Because I love you Anon, and because you're always so nice to me. All those times you surprised me with flowers, took me to the zoo's and aquariums so I could see the animals of your world firsthand. Not to mention all the times you've helped me bail my Equestrian transfers out of trouble. I know you never see yourself as good enough, but trust me you are."
"Really?"
>She removes your shoes and socks and begins to work on your feet.
>"Really. I'll say it as many times as it takes to get it through to you."
"Thanks Twilight."
>>27737988
The very next night in a motel across town.
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>"Oh yes, give it to me!"
"Oh Jesus yes! Take my dick Lemon Zest, take it!"
>"Yeah baby, fuck me all night just like that!"
>It feels so exhilarating.
>Flash was right.
>You could've been banging girls behind her back this whole time.
>Double the sex!
>With so many women you would never feel insecure again..
>Your dick feels so good right now slamming inside of Lemon.
>You never wanna stop.
>Suddenly the motel door opens.
>And in the light of the moon Twilight stands peering inside at the two of you.
>With tears in her eyes and a shocked look she utters,
>"How could you?"
>>27738045
Anon should be executed.Keep it up Grit
>>27734568
My god that outfit is ugly. Did she shop in the wardrobe of the cast of saved by the bell?
>>27738045
Still the whole story will end up in a threesome, right?
>>27738045
>"Didn't you ever try to patch things up with her? Why the heck did you cheat? I thought you loved her! Did I miss something?"
"I was insecure, down to my very core I've always been insecure. I never felt like I was good enough. I thought somehow if I was manly enough, or fucked enough women I could validate myself better."
>"Still, didn't you at least TRY to patch things up?"
"I did, that night I begged her to take me back. And weirdly enough after a few hours she was willing to give me a second chance."
>"But then how-"
"Even after I got the second chance, I fucked it up again, and slept with someone else not too long after. Twilight found out, and from there, it was all over."
>"Oh."
"Since then I've had a lot of time to think and grow. And every night I think back to how much I really had, and how I threw everything away because of my own ego. My own vanity and obsession with perfection."
>"Anon.."
"I've always thought of myself as a terrible person. But recently have my actions really shown to others just how awful I really am."
>"You shouldn't say that, you were just confused-"
"I wasn't confused. I was always in control and in my right mind. I never had a drop to drink either time."
>"But.. You've changed right?"
"I don't know.. I'm not sure I really trust myself anymore. Sometimes I think its only a matter of time before I'll screw things up worse."
>"Thats.. Sometimes how I feel."
"I guess in the end, we both really messed up."
>She grabs you and holds onto you.
>"Anon."
"Do you really want to be my friend even after learning all of this?"
>She looks away holding your hand.
>"If.. What if.. From this moment on, we promise, not just to each other, but to ourselves, that we do our best to change. And try not to blame ourselves."
"I'm still not sure I can stick to it."
>"We just have to try our best, can you at least promise that?"
"Fine, I promise to try my best."
>"And, I promise as well, to try my best."
This is pretty good. Keep it up.
>>27738153
Indeed, matchy-matchy clothes is evidence someone tried too hard
>>27738320
Dumbass. I said its ugly. I don't care how hard anyone tried, it's a shitty outfit.
>>27738378
And he agreed with you. What's the problem?
>>27738183
>You and Star decide to watch movies and eat snacks again.
>"There sure seem to be a lot of movies on earth."
"More than you could watch in a lifetime I'm sure."
>"Just how many are there?"
"Dunno, but a good majority probably aren't very good."
>"I haven't seen a bad one yet."
>You pop another cheeto into your mouth.
"That's because I only picked the best ones. Trust me, there are bad ones. But I am not a bad host, so I won't show them to you."
>"What happened to the whole 'I'm a bad person' sort of thing?"
"Hey, if you wanna see bad movies be my guest, but not in my house."
>"Did uh, you and Twilight watch a lot of movies together?"
"Of course we did. She always did try to get me to read, but even she couldn't resist the allure of film."
>"Wait, you don't like to read?"
"Uh, not traditionally no.."
>"But you said you wanted to read about Equestria."
"That.. Was different. And it's too late now."
>"Too late for what?"
"The only reason I really wanted to go was for her. And even then it was hard to stay focused."
>"Well, maybe we could help each other out. I could teach you about Equestria, and you could teach me about earth."
>You pause.
"Hmm, that's not a bad idea."
>"See?"
"Wait what am I saying, I don't wanna go! I have trouble enough as it is in this world. I can't just go by myself into some crazy new world."
>"Well, maybe you won't have to go alone. I could go with you when the time comes."
"Eh, I'll consider it."
>"In the meantime, let's watch another movie."
"Sounds good."
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I think that's about it for tonight. I'm open to suggestions about where it should go.
Happy dreams people. May you all dream of your waifus tonight.
>>27738542
This is a Starlight story that should've been a Twilight one desu. But alas oh well. It's better this way. I recommend something simple like steadily growing tests of their characters (though it doesn't make sense for Starlight at this point while for Anon I'm sure it works, after all he was only talking to Starlight to fugg her. It's like a reversal of A Lust for Revenge.)
>>27738378
Getting triggered by someone saying matchy-matchy?
Do you have bad memories related to that word?
how can twilight even be in the same room as him without collapsing
>>27738542
You've left a strong, unsatisfying feeling in me, It's somewhere between rage at anon, feeling for the connection the character and the uplifting aww of with Starlight. IT doesn't help me being cold and shivering as well.
>>27738635
Emotions are pillars of strength. When one crumbles, you build another in its place, stronger than the old one. When love breaks you tend to replace it with anger. I think the only reason Twilight isn't wallowing in despair within this time frame is because she's lucky enough to have supportive friends to help that rebuilding process go a lot faster, perhaps even mend the old pillar while sanding off the carvings of the one who broke it.
>>27738594
>>27738434
He was being sarcastic wasn't he?
Welp, as usual I draw Glimmers sketchs or Glimmerthreads
Request me something
>>27740150
draw glimmer with a silly face
Even tho we are far from page 10
Bump before heading to bed
>>27737970
Of course it's fucking Flash.
>>27740150
Joking or sarcastic about her past or just happy Glimmer like this
>>27734635
>Twilight acting like a soccer mom towards Starlight
this is great
>>27738542
im just happy for some starlight green
good green at that to
Page 7 bump, just in case.
>>27738542
>It's late at night.
>You're laying awake in bed.
>It's weird, because normally physical affection means that someone really likes you.
>But in this case, you realize pony culture is different.
>You realize that even though you've cuddled and held hands, that it doesn't mean anything for you romantically.
>You get the encroaching feeling that you might lose her somehow.
>That she'll just go back to the hotel in the next day and you won't see her again for a while.
>You drift apart, and maybe she'll just go back to Equestria.
>Bemoaning the the fact that despite your deeply personal conversation..
>She hasn't been particularly moved or affected by you.
>Not enough to want to move things to the next stage..
>Or maybe you just haven't bridged that gap yet.
>So then it falls to you to make a move..
>>27742022
>It's the next day.
>Starlight is watching some cartoons eating a bowl of lucky charms.
>"Do these come on every day?"
"New episodes come out weekly, but you can usually catch re-runs any time of the week."
>"I-i'm sorry, whats a re-run?"
"It's just a re-showing of an episode that's already been aired."
>"So they just play the same stuff over and over again?"
"Well, some people don't get the chance to see the new episode precisely when it comes out."
>"Oh, so it gives a chance for everyone to see them. Makes sense."
"It can get pretty repetitive if you've got nothing else to watch."
>"I could see myself watching some of these again if I get bored. Home theaters sure are great. We don't have anything like this back in Equestria."
>She's looking at the t.v.
>But this whole time you've been looking at her.
>Her hair caught in the light from the screen door.
>All ponies seem to have these strange hair colors.
>But it never seems unnatural to you.
>Her pale looking skin, bright violet eyes.
>You scoot closer.
>She turns to you.
>"Whats wrong?"
>You lean in and press your lips against hers.
>Her confused face for a moment as she hurriedly drops the bowl onto the nearby table.
>Mouth still half full of lucky charms she hastily swallows.
>You press your tongue against hers.
>You run your hand through her bangs and her hair.
>The kiss breaks.
>>27742027
>Shes blushing and fidgeting her hands.
>"A-anon, I didn't know you felt that way about me.."
"Of course I did."
>"This is gonna sounds weird but.. I've never had a proper boyfriend before."
"Forgive me for saying but, didn't you lead a cult?"
>"Oh, well. That's different. They weren't really following me out of love, so much as fear.."
>She has a concerned look on her face.
"What's wrong?"
>"Nothing. I just.. I've never had a chance to become close with someone in that way. And I'm, a little bit afraid."
>You grasp her hands.
"I'm right here."
>"I-i know.."
>You lean in for another kiss.
>She meets you halfway.
>You press your lips into hers.
>You feel her soft shoulders and neck.
>The lingering taste of cereal.
>Her weird kissing techniques that only a virgin would do.
>You rest in each others arms making out.
>Starlights soft lips against yours, saliva dripping between momentary cracks in the lips.
>Feeling hastily along each other as you become more intimately familiar.
>The growing sensation of pleasure as you realize your days of solitude may come to a close.
>You feel a warm feeling of hope you haven't felt since your early days with Twilight.
>Deep within her embrace as her body presses against you.
>You feel that she's losing herself to you as she becomes more enraptured by your affections.
>Such a happy perfect moment you wish you could capture and enshrine in a portrait forever.
>>27742034
He's gonna fuck it up again huh?
>>27736713
>Beef stew
wait wut
Boop
>>27742027
>>27742034
This whole description of Starlight is so sweet
>Page 10
>>27734568
Fucking Glimmer I cant see her without thinking of deepthroating her immediately
>>27744492
rude
>>27742034
>The day goes on.
>You and her, held securely in each others arms.
>A whisper of conversation here and there.
>But really neither of you have left the embrace of one another.
>It seems that Starlight had been longing for someone to hold in her arms.
>From what you can gather she's led a pretty lonely life.
>Even lonelier than you strangely enough.
>But you're happy you're able to give her that special company she deserves.
>Two of a kind, both screw ups in your own rights.
>Your mistakes seem to have brought you together as if by fate.
>Fingers interlaced with hers as the sun shines warmly upon her skin and yours.
>Body leaned up against yours.
>Your other arm wrapped around her shoulder.
>Sometimes you touch or play with her hair.
>Sometimes she feels your shoulders or touches your face.
>These special little things reserved only for lovers..
>Truly not since Twilight have you been so comfortable in a woman's arms.
>Not that you didn't try.
>A somber thought occurs to you.
>How Twilight has been coping without you.
>You scarcely wish to ponder such darkness in the wake of this light.
>Thoughts like these you wish to save for a later date.
>Even if it's just for a moment, you are grateful for this break in your solitude.
>Though you're hoping you won't end up messing this up somehow.
I'm exhausted from work. I wish I could have given you more.
But I'll be honest, I'm tired and out of creative juices.
If you guys could spitball some ideas, and maybe post some cute humanized Glim, I could probably manage to continue without too much trouble when I wake up.
May we all dream of our waifus.
>>27745625
Not a big fan of EqG but I enjoyed your green so far. thanks man.
>>27745766
That hairline looks even worse in her human form
>>27745792
I love her new mane tho some artists like these done it right
>>27734985
>>27738542
>>27745832
Yes, those are much better. It doesn't work if you draw it like her pony mane
Page nine.
What's your favorite Starlight's nickname?
>>27746818
Glimmy
>>27738045
If your gonna cheat lemon would be the girl to do it she's a 10/10
>>27747349
Who the hell is lemon zest
>>27748706
Rock'em sock'em cutie booty
>>27745625
This is my favorite humanized Starlight art.
>>27734985
Good to see we are getting more, high-quality art of her.
>>27745625
You can't have EQG without mentioning Sunny in here somewhere. Just a short cameo would be nice.
>Sunny's the girl Anon cheats with later on.
Could be interesting.
>>27749000
Trips demand Sunny in this Gritsaw.
>>27734568
>summers eve festival
>summers eve
No thoughts of genius came to me. Spent the last hour or two on r9k crying about how unfair life is etc..
And now I'm off to work. I hope inspiration strikes while I'm at work and I'll be able to write something pretty good for all of you.
>>27749000
Shut up nigger, therws a whole circlejerk for you to write about her
>>27750152
This
>>27750093
Have fun at work!
This was all fucking Flash Sentry's fault. Fucking man whore.
>>27738045
>"Oh yes, give it to me!"
"Oh Jesus yes! Take my dick Lemon Zest, take it!"
>"Yeah baby, fuck me all night just like that!"
Holy shit, is real sex really so awkward?
>>27751548
>>27751548
Bad dirty talk sounds like it comes from a porno.
>>27751548
Grits a virgin
>>27752242
confirmed. but then again, who rights smut like actual sex?
>>27751548
Why are you asking me
>>27751548
>>27751740
Yes real sex talk does sound like a bad porno believe it or not. It's usually cheesy but it helps you cum sometimes.
>>27752242
>>27752821
http://vocaroo.com/i/s029aWvRAhyE
Guess again faggot.
Though I really wish I were getting laid more often. Why the fuck are hookers so damn expensive? Why does no one ever pay me 350 dollars for sex?
The world is fucked up you know?
>>27753098
How was work?
>>27753154
It was actually cool, no complaints.
>>27753259
Still no inspiration strikes? The story is pretty good, would love to see it continue.
>>27753259
Any chance to have a Sunny cameo in this story?
Any recommend Starlight story onfimfiction?
>>27753518
My fav fanfic is one where Starlight is kinda dating Sunburst who is the brother on Sunset. Sunny finds out, comes through the portal, antics ensue. It's really funny. It's called Sunburned. The banter between Starlight and Sunny is great.
>>27753518
I liked Short Skirts and Explosions's story.
>>27753552
>Sunburst who is the brother on Sunset
wut kek
>>27753285Yes.
>>27753385Sorry, but the other Anons seem to think that Sunset shouldn't be here. And I kind of agree.
>>27745592
>Starlight drags her duffelbag out the door.
>Pinkie and Applejack have come to see her back to the hotel.
>Where did the time go?
>However long it was, it wasn't enough.
>She waves goodbye with that hint of sadness in her eye forcing a smile..
>You don't want to seem desperate so you wave goodbye putting on your pokerface as she leaves.
>She walks down the street, you watch her till she's no longer visible.
>The noise of the street, the cities ambiance.
>Bludgeoning you with cacophony.
>Everything you liked, the sounds, the feelings, the sensations.
>Replaced with loud, echoing sounds reverberating unto nothingness.
>You close the door and look at your home.
>You have work later today..
>At least you can focus a little on that.
>Though it's bittersweet.
>All with the thoughts that if this thing with Starlight doesn't pan out you'll be lonely.
>The cycle will begin again.
>It may be a few days before you can see her.
>In those days you must attempt to deepen the bond, or risk losing her.
>It's often in these beginning phases a relationship is most fragile.
>>27753589
>You get a call from Lemon.
>It's brief, but it looks like she's looking for it.
>As depressed as you are without Star, you maintain a casual conversation but don't go farther than that with her.
>It lasts for about 5 minutes before she seems to get bored.
>She hangs up, and all of your memories from those nights long past come back like demons tormenting you.
>It was so sweet, and yet so bitter.
>Never again..
>You can't do it, ever again.
---
>Days pass.
>You sit bored on your couch.
>Suddenly your phone rings again.
>Hoping it to be Star you pick it up.
>"Hey Anon."
>That all too familiar feminine rasp.
"Twilight?"
>"I'm coming over, answer your door when I get there."
"Twilight what-"
>CLICK.
>>27753574
Headcanons can get really dumb sometimes.
Just because they both have SUN in their names doesn't mean they are related.
>>27753599
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=supTTAOFIa8
>Knock knock knock
>Not but 10 minutes after the phone call you hear this knocking.
>You go to answer.
>Sure enough through the peephole it's Twilight.
>She doesn't seem particularly happy.
You open the door.
She brushes past you going directly toward your couch sitting down.
She's wearing a slimming peacoat and her hair is neatly styled.
"Uh.. So.."
>You close the front door.
>"How've things been?"
"What do you mean?"
>She balls her fists, just for a moment.
>"You know damn well.."
>She seems to be trying to restrain herself.
"Are you, alright?"
>She's quiet.
>She's breathing in and out, in and out.
>Hands in her lap, but fists balled.
>Head facing toward her legs.
"Twilight.."
>"How!"
>She catches herself once again calming her tone.
>"How, are things with Starlight?"
"Uh.."
>"Planning to break her heart? Just like you did with me?"
"Twilight! I-"
>"I know, it's been a while since we had a chance to talk about it.. But I want a real explanation this time."
"What is there to explain? I cheated, I was insecure, I messed up?"
>"You could have talked to me Anon. I made it perfectly clear that I would do anything for you."
"I know that.. It's just, I can't take back what I did."
>Twilight with a harsh look says,
>"You're right, you can't."
"I'm sorry, for everything."
>>27753610
>"You think you've had it rough since we broke up? You think I haven't had it ten times worse? I can't bring myself to trust anyone. I just feel like they might betray me again.. I only have friends, but nothing more. Every day I'm so alone and I ask myself what I did to deserve it."
>Tears start building up in her eyes.
>"I loved you with all my heart and soul. I would have given you the world on a silver platter if it meant we could be happy together."
"I-i know.."
>"After the first time, I was a little shaken, but I had faith that you would overcome your little moment of weakness or whatever. I mean, we all make mistakes. You told me, never again, you promised.. And I really believed you, and I wanted it to work.."
"I'm sorry."
>"Now I'm ruined.. I just can't bring myself to open up, and try to love anyone the way I loved you.. I think about all the times you were perfect. How much I enjoyed making you smile.."
>Tears are streaming down your face.
"I never wanted this to-"
>"And now I have to watch, as some other girl, gets to have you. And maybe you'll break her heart too. But for as long as I live, I know we can't ever be together again."
"Twilight please-"
>"No! I hate you! I hate you so much!"
>She walks over to you.
>She punches on your chest.
>"Why.."
>>27753620
>You can't bring yourself to speak.
>"Why can't I forget about you?! Why are you always on my mind!? Why can't I have someone to love!? I've been good! I've done everything right!"
>Tears pouring down her face.
>Fists lightly pounding on your chest.
>"Even now. Some small part of me still wants you. And I wish I could just rip these feelings out and throw them away.."
>You try to wrap her in your arms but she slaps them away as she walks toward the door.
>"I came to tell you, that there's a camping event going on for the next two weeks."
"What-"
>"It involves humans and ponies getting together for a camping trip.. And you're invited so.."
>And with one last bitter tone she finishes with,
>"Enjoy it."
>She opens the door and walks out, not even shutting it as she goes out to her car.
>She gets in and speeds out of the parking space and down the road.
>>27753602
It's still a really funny story.
>>27753610
>>27753620
>>27753632
I seem to developed a serious pain in chest, and my eyes are watering.
These feelings are frightening...Help!
>>27753632
Pretty hyped to see where this goes. When are we getting more?
>>27753589
Damn. Was hoping Sunny could pop in and provide some words of wisdom. Or just a mention.
>>27753098
You should maybe get a gf then.
>>27753632
>inb4 Twilight tries to rekindle the relationship on this trip
>inb4 Starlight sees them in the act
Interesting love triangle you've got there. Not sure if I want them to get back together, or for Anon and Starlight get going.
>>27753699
Hookers are cheaper than girlfriends.
>>27753730
Naw. I don't think he will throw anon back with Twily. She seemed beyond that.
>>27753632
Will Flash show up again? Anon would probably want to talk with him.
Also, can you give us a timeline? How long after season 5 finale/FG does this take place?
>>27754298
Cute af.
Gritsaw, where are you?
>>27735740
this artist has drawn some fucked up shit
Starlight Glimmer's big chapter book solo act is coming out in August, and now has a cover!
>>27754670
>The secret suite
I wonder what's in it? I still haven't finished the last chapter book though.
>>27753632
>You're looking at yourself in the mirror.
>Why even exist?
>It'd be one thing if she'd just told you the real reason she came over.
>Or had just mentioned over the phone, "By the way we're all going camping and I hate you".
>But no, of course not.
>It had to be the most soul crushing thing.
>Deep down you know you deserve this.
>But that doesn't make it any less painful.
>You sigh as you walk away and begin to pack your things for this camping trip.
>You haven't been camping for real since you were little so it aught to be a nice change of scenery.
>Maybe you can forget about your woes and focus more on your woos.
>With you wooing Star that is.
>Looks like you'll be taking that vacation time a little sooner than you thought this year.
>But hey, a little fun in the sun.
>Then some songs by the campfire roasting marshmallows and cuddled up with Starlight.
>Yeah, this might be just the thing you need.
>>27754913
>You're about to board the bus.
>Twilight walks up to you.
>She has a, very odd grin on her face.
>"Oh hey there Anon, I see you decided to go camping with us after all."
>Suddenly Starlight comes up.
>Hold on, is she holding hands with some other guy?
>"Hey Anon great to see you again!"
"S-star, who's this?"
>Twilight has the most wickedly smug grin.
>"Oh Anon, I see you've yet to meet Starlights childhood friend."
>He adjusts his glasses.
>"S-starlights told me so much about you. I'm Sunburst by the way."
>You rather reluctantly shake his hand.
>"Starlight has been getting re-aquainted with her new friend since she got back from your place. And guess what? He'll be tagging along with us during the entire trip."
>Starlight pipes in,
>"Isn't this great Anon? Now we'll get to go together! I just know you and Starburst will get along perfectly!"
"Y-yeah, great.."
>Suddenly you get approached by a guy in a "security" shirt.
>"Um excuse me, we need to check your ID."
>Everyone else is boarding the bus quickly cutting in front of where you were.
"What's this all about?"
>"Sir please cooperate."
"But I didn't do anything!"
>"We got word that you might be smuggling illegal paraphernalia as well, just a quick bag search and we'll have you on your way."
"Who the hell told you that!? I don't do that shit, come on what is this bullcrap? You can't just search me without a warrant!"
>"Well I suppose you won't be getting on this bus then."
>He stands in front of the bus doors.
>Everyone else is looking at the scene unfolding.
>You grumble.
"F-fine whatever, make it quick.."
>>27754933
>You finally get on the bus, but all the seats are taken.
>The bus begins to take off, but you're left standing.
>Suddenly a voice.
>"Aww, looks like all the seats are filled up."
>Twilight with a rather innocent looking expression is looking at you.
"You.. You did this didn't you?"
>"Such a shame. It's almost as if the entire buses seating arrangement could only occupy a certain number of people. But oh, what's this?"
>She moves her bag.
>"I seem to have an extra space right here that would be just perfect for you if you'd like."
"Sorry but forget it. Your little scheme won't work on me, I-"
>Twilight chimes,
>"I'll let you sit by the window."
"Mmm.."
>You sigh..
"Alright.."
>Twilight allows you to get in and you get a lovely view of the scenery.
>"See isn't it perfect?"
"Uh.."
>She suddenly leans her head on your shoulder.
>"This bus trip is going to be about 2 hours of nonstop driving, better get comfy Anon."
>>27754941
>It's later after you reached the glorious wooded campgrounds.
>"What do you mean the boys cabin is all filled up!?"
>"I'm sorry, but there seem to be an overwhelming number of males on the trip, and you just won't fit!"
"Oh, that's just fucking great, where exactly am I supposed to put my stuff?"
>Suddenly a whistle from behind.
>It's Twilight in a campers uniform and sexy short shorts.
>"Well Anon, seems like you'll have to get comfy and pitch a tent out here, or.."
>She's twirling a ring of keys.
>"I just so happen to have a single vacancy in my exclusive cabin which is separate from both boys and girls dorms."
"Twilight, you do realize I'm with Starlight now right?"
>She rolls her eyes.
>"Well, I suppose it'd be the first for you to actually honor a commitment."
>She snaps her fingers.
>Mr. security guy from earlier throws you a tent in a box and a sleeping bag.
>This isn't good.
>If you go into that cabin who knows what could happen.
>Hell for all you know, Twilight has brought you out here just to murder you in your sleep and play with your organs like silly putty.
>You look around the woods.
>All this rough pine and grass.
>Exposed to the elements.
>A bear could come up and fucking eat you.
>Damned if you do, damned if you don't.
>>27754957
>Time passes.
>You're in a cabin making crafts with the other campers.
>You walk up to Starlight.
>She's with Sunburst of course.
>You sit down with them.
"So hey Star, how've you-"
>"Hey Star, look at this."
>She gasps.
>"Is that a friendship bracelet?"
>"It most certainly is!"
>"Anon, look at this, isn't it great? Starburst used to make these things, ALL the time when we were kids."
"Oh.. Great."
>"What's the matter Anon, you should make something too!"
>You stare down at the assortment of craft supplies.
>Is there enough rope here to make a noose?
>>27754975
>It's late that night.
>Everyone is around a big bonfire singing campfire songs.
>Star and Sunburst are singing these weird pony songs from when they were little.
>You keep trying to interject, but you feel it's hopeless.
>As you hold your stick above the fire, the marshmallow burns and sinks off the stick into the fire.
---
>You're cold and alone as you try to pitch this tent.
>Insects buzzing at you.
>This is the fucking worst.
>Starlight seemed to barely want anything to do with you.
>And now, here you are, surrounded by a ton of people, but still all alone.
>You can't help it..
>No matter what you do..
>You drop the tent you were holding and begin to cry.
>Suddenly from the darkness, the light of a lantern.
>A hand touches your shoulder.
>Twilight looking down smiling.
>You yell.
>"What!?"
>Tears streaming down your face.
>"Is this what you wanted? To see me all alone, broken and pathetic? I-
>She slips her arms around you.
>"Shh.. I'm sorry."
"W-what?"
>"I noticed your marshmallow fell in from earlier.. So I saved you one of my smores."
>She has such a kind gentle look in her eyes.
>You take the smore.
>You bite into it.
>It's delicious of course.
>You close your eyes trying to hide your tears a bit.
>"Come on, let's get you inside."
>You sigh as she leads you back to her cabin.
>>27755008
>It's warm by the fireplace in Twilights cabin.
>Theres only one bed here.
>"Doesn't this remind you of our lodge from all those years ago Anon?"
>You're sitting on the edge of the bed.
"Twilight.."
>"When we used to stay up late playing video games? You'd always win of course.."
"You realize we can't go back Twilight."
>"What do you mean?"
"I mean, how could you! You completely sabotaged my relationship with Star!"
>"So what?"
"W-what?"
>Shes sitting cutely on the bed.
>"Listen, I've been thinking-"
"No, no it can't be this way! It can't ever be like it was!"
>"Yes it can Anon, because I'm DONE playing by the rules!"
>She has a serious expression on her face.
"T-twilight."
>Suddenly she starts tearing up.
>"I want it back.. I want it all back. Our special times we used to have together."
>She reaches under the bed pulling out a scrapbook.
>"I saved them, all our special times together, look!"
>You take it looking through the old photos.
"We look so happy together."
>"That's because we were!"
>She wipes away her tears as she hugs your side.
>"Don't you see! We were always happy together."
"Yeah.."
>>27755016
>"I realized that playing by the rules didn't get me anywhere. And that you broke the rules we set for each other when you made that promise. So, I did what I thought was wrong and leveled the playing field. I completely destroyed your relationship without any regard for how it might turn out. So guess what? Now we're both big screw ups who don't play by the rules."
"I.. I don't know what to say.."
>"Well, here's what I say.. Let's start over. You and me, now that the dust has settled, and we've both done selfish things.. We can try again.."
"Hmm.."
>She pulls out a wooden box.
>"I made these today."
>She opens the box.
>Inside are two crudely crafted wood rings.
>"If you just promise you'll be with me, I'll promise to make mistakes with you. And even if you mess up big time. I'll be right there to mess up with you. Maybe it's my fault because you saw me as infallible.. Well, I'm not. I'm just as flawed and imperfect as anyone else."
>With tears in her eyes she raises up the bigger ring toward you.
>"P-please."
>You tackle her to the bed in a hug.
>"I do, I accept!"
>"A-anon.."
"Twilight, I'm so sorry for every single thing! You were right, and you're amazing and you-"
>She kisses you.
>Her mouth tastes a little like the smores you just had as you both hold each other tightly and make out.
>You reach for the littler ring in the box and slip it onto her finger.
>And then she places the bigger one onto yours.
>"Now and forever."
"We'll always be together."
>Your fingers interlock as you both kiss.
>The fireplace crackling.
>You make out for a little while longer, crying a bit here and there.
>But eventually you both fall asleep in each others arms.
>>27755027
I have no idea what to feel right now.
>>27755064
All I feel is rage.
>>27755071
Shit has and will continue to hit the fan for Anon is my prediction.
>>27755027
GODDAMMIT GRITSAW I WASNT PREPARED FOR THIS. SO MANY EMITIONS RIGHT NOW I CANT HANDLE THIS. I HAVENT FELT LIKE THIS SINCE I FOUND OUT SANTA ISNT REAL. WHATS STARLIGHT GONNA SAY? MOOORRE! HOW ARE YOU NOT A LEGIT AUTHOR YET?
>>27754913
>You're about to board the bus.
>Twilight walks past you.
>She has the same somber expression she had at your place.
>"Oh hey there Anon, I see you decided to go camping with us after all."
>She passes you, but then Starlight walks up.
>"Hey Anon!"
>She walks up and hugs you tightly.
"S-star.."
>"I missed you so much! Come on, let's get a seat together, this is gonna be so much fun!"
>She leads you up by the arm.
>You get dragged all the way to the back.
>"Which place do you like more?"
"Err, the windowseat I guess."
>She motions her arms and gestures you to take it.
>You move to the windowseat.
>She sits down next to you setting her bag down and scooting closer to you till you're touching.
>Then she leans against you.
>The other seats quickly fill up and soon enough the bus takes off.
>People are lightly chattering and seem to be rather happy.
>The sun shines brightly as the bus goes down the road.
>You crack the window and fresh air comes through.
>You watch as the scenery passes and Star leans up against you keeping you warm.
>Amoung the hodgepodge you notice Flash Sentry seated in the crowd.
>>27755369
>It's later after you reached the glorious wooded campgrounds.
>You've put away your things and met up with Flash.
>He seems, a bit worse for the wear.
>Face unshaven, hair unkempt.
>"H-hey bro, how's it going man?"
"Flash, man, haven't seen you in a while."
>He wraps his arm around you and gives you a stomach punch.
>This is before he wheezes a bit.
>"Sorry to hear it didn't go so well with Twilight."
"It's, ok.. I've, moved on.. How've you been?"
>He pauses and suddenly has a rather serious look on his face.
>"Bro, I've been.. Its been bad. I've got STDs, I've put on 20 pounds.. I'm starting to break out, look at this acne man.. And, fucking, I just got clean. Got off cocaine, got off the bottle. Being sober fucking sucks, but you know.."
"Er, wow, sorry to hear that."
>He coughs some more.
>"Hey, I don't feel so well, I think I'm gonna go lie down for a bit, but I'll totally be around you know.."
"Yeah man, take it easy."
>>27755379
>Sometime later everyone is led to a cabin full of craft supplies.
>You're sitting across from Starlight.
>"So you just tie it over like this and.."
"Oh I see!"
>Suddenly she hands it to you.
"Why are you-"
>"It's a friendship bracelet. You told me these were your favorite colors right?"
"Well, yeah but, I don't have anything to give in return, unless.."
>You take a few minutes but manage to put together a nice enough bracelet to give to Starlight.
>"Wow this is perfect!"
>She holds it up to the light.
>"Thanks Anon, I'll cherish it always."
"Always? Hmm.."
>You look at yours.
"Yeah, I guess I'll hang on to mine too."
>Starlight gasps.
>"You'd better! Anon these bracelets represent our friendship!"
"Well, alrighty then.."
>"Good. I wouldn't want you to get rid of it because.."
>She holds the bracelet you gave close to her chest.
>>27755390
>It's later at night
>You and Starlight are sitting by the campfire everyone is singing these weird pony songs.
>But Starlight is teaching you the lyrics to the ones she sung in her hometown.
>After a few tries you manage to get it down.
>And heck it's even kinda catchy.
>You both eat smores while cuddled up next to one another as the huge bonfire in front of you burns on into the night.
--------
>Night has come over the camp.
>Starlight has acquired a tent and sleeping bag as well as pillows.
>You and her decide instead of spending the night apart in the separate cabins, you can spend it together in a cozy little tent.
>You both pitch the tent together within a few minutes.
>Then you sit next to each other as you both look up at the multitude of stars in the sky.
"This is a nice starlight we have her."
>She grins and gives you a playful shoulder punch.
>"It really is nice though, there certainly weren't this many back in the city."
"Yeah."
>"Say Anon, I've been thinking."
"What is it?"
>"Maybe after my studying with Twilight is done and I move out of the hotel.. Maybe I could move in with you?"
"What?"
>"I mean, I'll try and get a job, help you pay the rent. I know it probably won't be easy. But I'm willing to make it work."
"Really?"
>"Being with you today helped me to realize how much better life is when you have someone to share it with. These are all things I used to do with my childhood friend. And doing them with you now, it feels like destiny almost that we we're brought together to do them you know?"
"Err, yeah I guess."
She laces her fingers in-between yours.
>"I mean, we don't even have to wait till my course is done. After this camping trip, I could pack my things and move into your place as soon as we get back."
"B-but what about learning stuff about this world?"
>>27755398
>"Pfft, I can just learn it all when I'm with you. Besides, what am I gonna learn from Twilight that you can't teach me to do a million times better?"
"Y-yeah, I'll teach you."
>"I trust you. I know you'll help me learn everything I need to know about this world. And in time, if you ever decide you want to see Equestria, I'll be right there to teach you everything you need to know too."
>You lean up against each other.
"Thanks."
>"I feel like I'm already forgetting about all the things that used to stress me out. Like for the past couple of days since I left. I literally only thought of you."
"W-wow.. I'm flattered."
>"Did.. You think of me too?"
"Of course, yeah, I was thinking of you!"
>"Good. And, I know you haven't quite patched things up with Twilight, but, she doesn't seem too broken up about it. I'm sure she's already gotten over it."
"Y-yeah, I'm sure.."
>"Anyhow, this is gonna be the best two weeks ever, just you and me, camping out, doing fun stuff."
"Yeah."
>"I really like you a lot Anon."
"I really like you too Star."
>You and Starlight kiss under a curtain of stars surrounded by tall trees.
>You and Starlight decide to share one sleeping bag in a cocoon of warmth and bliss as you fall asleep in each others arms.
WTF!?!?! WHAT IS GOING ON? SO WAS THAT ALL JUST A DAYDREAM? WHAT IS REALITY? GRITSAW WHAT IS THIS? FEELINGS LEVEL IS TOO HIGH.
This is amazing. Your best story yet.
>>27755718
I really hope the first one is true. I'd rather see both parties happy than see Twilight alone and sad.
>>27755718
Probably just alt endings.
>>27755751
I hope the first isn't true. Twilight was a big crazy bitch in the first. I hope it was just a Daydream. What is going on Gritsaw?
>>27755751
>>27756013
http://www.strawpoll.me/10608006
>>27756013
Anon deserves to be with that crazy bitch since he made her like that.
>>27753552
Link?I want to downvote it.
>>27756051
Damn, 2 to 1. I lost. Twilight seems to crazy. Anon needs to avoid her.
>>27756064
Eat shit. It was funny.
>>27756128
I'm sorry. I'm wrong. I was just a little mad at Twilight for being tricky by bringing Sunburst, having Anon forced to sit by her, keeping him from being able to sleep in the boys cabin and then having manipulated Anon into sleeping in her cabin. Fucking crazy but she deserves to be with him. After all, he is the Prince of friendship. I retract my vote for Starlight path.
>>27756128
Nobody wants to see a sad and lonely Twilight.Even if she is a little crazy.
>>27756200
I know. She deserves to be with Anon. He better not fuck it up again.
Since Anon is taking the Twilight path, that's going to be an awkward talk with Starlight. Don't have them have sex till Anon tells Starlight. Then Star would be pissed.
>>27755027
>You wake up.
>The smell of Twilights hair as you lay next to her.
>Twilights face so sweet and innocent as she's wrapped in your arms.
>You sit up in the bed.
>It is a rather small bed, but it was rather comfortable.
>Twilight curls slightly for a moment before waking.
>"A-anon.."
>Her hair rather messy from this angle.
>She sits up stretching for a moment before wrapping her arms around you.
>Playfully she says,
>"Don't go."
"I won't."
>You press your lips against hers tasting her mouth.
>Bad idea, morning breath stinks.
>Twilight notices your disgust.
>"S-sorry, I'll go brush."
"I should too."
>You walk with her to the small bathroom.
>It's partitioned by small thin walls and doesn't include more than a sink, shower and toilet.
>Twilight reaches for her toothbrush.
>You get a cute idea though and grab her brush before she does.
"Hey, how about I brush your teeth and you brush mine?"
>"Are you sure?"
"Positive."
>You grab the brush putting toothpaste on it.
>You raise it toward Twilights face.
>She opens her mouth.
>You stick the brush inside and begin to slowly brush along the surface of her teeth.
>She makes a bit of a moaning sound as you do.
>Going along her front teeth, then the tops and sides of her molars.
>You swear these moaning sounds keep getting lewder.
>Her breaths more shallow and rapid as the brush caresses each tooth.
>Once you're finished you remove the brush from her mouth.
>Twilights mouth full of leftover toothpaste and saliva she spits a large glob into the sink.
>She then takes in a mouthful of water washing out the leftovers and spits the remains into the sink.
>What's left is Twilights pretty white teeth.
>"Do they look ok?"
>She says displaying her teeth.
"You have a very pretty smile."
>She smiles.
>"Let me do you now."
"Ok."
-----A reminder that oral hygiene is important and you should always brush your teeth before bed.Goodnight friends, I shall awaken soon to write again.
>>27756390
Goodnight m8, time to brush my own teeth and worry if Anon will screw this up.
>>27756390
Good night Gritsaw. Never thought someone could making brushing teeth so lewd. Tomorrow is gonna be interesting once everyone sees Anon and Twily exiting her cabin together. Starlights gonna flip.
Read at your own discretion.I had an idea while reading this.With seeing how messed up Anon is, it seems he hasn't really changed at all. He may not be as misguided as before, but he's still just as insecure. What if...He convinced Twilight to put a spell on his wedding(?) ring? This spell would be like a subtle commitment influence, where it wouldn't allow him to cheat on Twilight. She would be hesitant about it but seeing the hurt she had been subjected to, would she go through with it? But the twist?She tells Anon she put a spell on the ring, but she didn't, she needed to know if he had it within his will to be faithful.
Last bump
>>27757043
They would have to be in Equestria to do that kind of magic so Twily has her horn, but it's an interesting idea. Reminds me of when Harry Potter pretended to put the Felix Felicious potion in Ron's drink so he thought he would do well in the first quidditch game but he didn't even put it in.
Here's an idea Gritsaw. I've always wanted a story based around the lotus eaters from Greek mythology. They would lure people into their place by tricking them into eating a certain food that made them want to stay there forever. Would be interesting in either human or pony world.
>>27756390
It was Twilight green all along.
>>27757361
It's better this way.
>>27757460
I think so too, the second option was too perfect. But it could still involve a little more Starlight.
I'll probably write some more in a bit.
In the meantime, enjoy me singing an Acapella cover of Nirvana's Lithium.
http://vocaroo.com/i/s1oC641gF0hl
>>27757970
Not as bad as I expected. Better than I could have done.
>>27756390
>You're back in the same cabin that was used for arts and crafts.
>However this time it's morning, and it's chow time.
>Waffles and bacon is on everyones plates this morning.
>"Open wide, ahh!"
>You open your mouth as she slides the biteful of food inside.
>She leans against you nuzzling.
>"I'm so glad we're back together.. It's like nothing ever happened.."
>Twilight sounds so happy.
>And heck, you're happy too but..
>Across the way you see Starlight looking at you.
>She seems concerned.
>Food squishes against your mouth.
>"Anon, you were supposed to say 'ahh."
>Twilight smiling cutely as a little strand of syrup pulls away from your lips.
>"Here, let me get that for you.
>Twilight licks and kisses your lips.
>Starlight visibly gasps as Twilight almost sensually cleans your face slowly with her tongue.
>At least you know her mouth is clean from earlier..
>Starlight seems to be talking with Sunburst now.
>Well, maybe she isn't as upset as you thought.
>After all, she was more concerned with him than she was with you.
>Maybe, it's for the best..
>>27758759
>Sometime later all the campers get together to go to the lake.
>And its just..
>Breathtaking.
>Like something straight out of a postcard.
>So early as the golden sun rises shining brightly through the trees.
>It's glow reflecting off the water as the cold fog of night disperses.
>All the ponies and humans are here playing in the water together.
>They're all technically 'humans' but you can easily tell by the hair colors which ones are the ponies.
>Anyhow, they seem to be having fun together.
>You can see now why this project is so important.
>Humans and ponies living together in harmony like this..
>It's perfect.
>You're here by yourself however as Twilight went to use the outhouse.
>Even horse-women have to go every now and then..
>Suddenly you get grabbed.
>You're being dragged through the woods.
"Woah what the-"
>You're grappled and pushed against a tree.
>"What the hell was that?!"
"W-what?"
>"I thought you promised to try your best! That we were both going to change, together!"
"I erm, well.."
>"And now you're all back together with Twilight?"
>Starlight visibly saddened and upset.
"H-hey, what about yesterday? I mean, with you and Sunburst huh!?"
>She's quiet for a moment.
>"Oh.."
>Silence from you as well as wind blows lightly through the trees.
>"I guess I did kind of pay more attention to Sunburst. B-but I never meant anything by it! I was just so happy to see him, really! I mean, after I left, all I did was think of you. Night and day you were always on my mind!"
"Star.."
>"Anon, please, just give me another chance! I didn't mean to ignore you!"
"I'm sorry, but things are different, Twilight and me are back together again."
>She has a heartbroken expression.
>"B-but you can't! You're my first boyfriend! I can't just let this end like this.."
>She grabs your hand tightly shaking it.
>"I wanted to get to know you more.. I thought this trip was going to be like a special bonding experience for us.."
"Star.."
>"Anon."
Don't fucking do it Anon. Keep your dick in your pants.
>>27758771
I don't even know what I want him to choose.
>>27758771
God damnit Anon. I know what happens next,Twilight will walk into the forest and catch them and go crazy, or Star goes crazy about Anon, this is not going to end well
I don't know who to choose. This is in-tents.
Get it? Cause they're camping?
>>27758771
>Suddenly a voice.
>"Oh hey Starlight there you are, I was worried when you disappeared all of a sudden!"
>"Sunburst?"
>He grabs her hand.
>"Let's go swimming come on! It'll be just like when we were kids. Gosh you remember when we used to levitate tadpoles?"
>Sunburst is sort of pulling her along.
>Starlight keeps looking back at you.
>You sigh.
>You walk back to the lake.
>Twilight emerges from the woods some ways away from the rest of the campers.
>She beckons you toward her.
>You meander toward her, but not too slowly.
>You peer back at Star who seems a bit distracted as Sunburst plays around with her.
>A few minutes later you reach where Twilight is at.
>"Come over here, I think the water is a little warmer over here."
"Is it?"
>She shrugs.
>"I dunno. I'll be honest, I just want you all to myself.."
"Fair enough.."
>She starts taking off her shoes and socks.
>She slips down those snug camper booty shorts revealing white panties with purple stripes across them.
>Removing her camper shirt and undershirt her white bra is revealed.
>"I didn't wear a swimsuit, but this is pretty much the same thing."
>You sigh stripping down to your boxers.
>She walks over to you as she slips her hands over your shoulders.
>You feel her fingers cross behind your neck as she looks lustfully into your eyes.
>"You're so handsome just like I remember."
>You slip your hands around her waist.
"And, you're very pretty, just like I remember."
>She has such a bright smile as she rubs her nose against yours a bit before giving you a light peck on the lips.
>"Come on Anon, let's go for a dip shall we?"
>She says letting go and walking toward the lake.
>>27758771
Easy solution here bra, confront both of them about it, talk it out with the whole, "we were going to get married thing takes priority."
>>27759027
>very pretty
>VERY PRETTY
>Not beautiful
>>27759027
He's gotta stay with Twilight. He's the Prince of friendship. Starlight might go insane again if she loses her first boyfriend.
>>27759027
>"Anon, please, just give me another chance! I didn't mean to ignore you!"
>Ignores him again
>>27759090
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Cws8r_vFpFs
>>27759027
>very pretty
>very
I think you're gonna need this.
>>27759027
>You've gathered both Starlight and Twilight together.
>It's midday and you're in a place more secluded from the main campsite.
"Alright, so I've gathered you both here because I want to work this out before drama starts."
>Starlight with a worried look in her eyes.
>Twilight has a neutral expression.
>"Anon please, I just want to be with you. I promise, nothing I do with Sunburst is ever going to get between you and I. Not anymore I swear."
>Twilight sways her hips wrapping her arms around you.
>"Seems like someone isn't putting their best foot forward. I surely expected a little better from my student."
>"W-what?"
"Twilight no, what are you doing!?"
>"Oh nothing, just that it seems like there's a pretty good reason why you aren't her boyfriend anymore."
>Twilight shoots a smug grin at Star before grabbing you and kissing you right in front of her.
>Starlight gasps.
>Twilight looks back at her again wiping the bit of saliva from her mouth with a victorious smile on her face.
>"You see, I'm willing to give him things you probably never ever considered."
>"L-like what?"
>Twilight strides over to Starlight.
>"Oh, I dunno, maybe sleeping with him? Sex?"
>She says as she slides her hand under her chin.
>Starlight with an incredulous expression.
>"Y-you!"
>"A girl doesn't walk into homeroom with only half the material studied and expect to ace the test now does she?"
>Twilight struts back over to you.
>You're speechless as to why Twilight seems to be behaving so uncharacteristically ruthless toward her.
>"Y-you set me up didn't you!?"
>Twilight turns back raising an eyebrow.
>>27759255
>"Y-yeah, you're the one who brought Sunburst here, and you did all that just so you could swoop in and steal him away?!"
>Twilight laughs.
>"I didn't 'steal' him silly. He was already mine. Didn't Anon tell you we were engaged?"
>Starlight seems to be struggling to find words.
>"But he cheated on you!"
>Twilight shrugs.
>"So he's a bad boy. Well guess what, from now on, I'll be bad too. The days of me playing by the rules are over."
>Starlights mouth agape.
>Yours too honestly.
>"Besides, you have Sunburst don't you?"
>Twilight makes a shooing motion with her hand.
>"Run along now and brush up on your rudimentary courses with him. Anon and I are in the advanced class now, and it seems you don't quite make the grade."
>>27759186
Look at this guy, he's very very VERY very very gay.
>>27759020
out
>>27759270
If it were me...yeah that'd be it. Give Twilight a chance to cut the shit or it's over.
>>27755027
Nice this is the way to go!
>Twifags ruin everything: the thread
I can feel this being the bad end in my gut. All this build up being warned not to fuck with Starlight's heart the way we fucked with Twilight's, breaking promises and going back to our old ways not even a full week into our relationship.
This will all be an epic ruse to show her student that we haven't changed, leaving us alone to contemplate suicide.Or maybe Twilight in her jealous rage fucked Flash, caught his AIDS and is going to give them to us.
>>27759279
Extremely fabulous*
>>27759270
Just say
"This isn't the Twilight I fell in love with."
That will shut her up.
>>27759517
This
>>27759517
Yeah, Twilight has changed. Shes scary. Anon needs to tell her to stop. She might do something crazy.
>>27759270
Are we at Lesson zero level batshit here?
Trust and jealousy has always been a big problem with Twilight. We need Celestia to come down and bitch slap some sense back into her.
>>27759270
Polygami. Twilight said it her self, fuck the rules.
>>27759852
"Alright, let's have a friendly competition, shall we?"
>The girls both look at you, intrigued
"Whoever can slut it up the most will be girl I choose."
>"I have this in the bag!"
>"Oh, you are so ON sister!"
>Shirts are being ripped off
>The tits are out and it's time to fight
>>27759871
"Good, now kiss."
Glimmer has her man. Twily should be with Anon. She does seem a little crazy though.
>>27759270
>Well guess what, from now on, I'll be bad too
Is she going to cheat too? Two wrongs don't make a right.
>>27760110
Like I said. Shes crazy. Sunny or Celestia need to put a stop to her. Shes gonna end up killing Glimmer.
Commie.
>>27759871
Jerry! Jerry! Jerry!
>>27759270
Am I the only one getting School days flashbacks?
>>27760382
Ding! Ding! Ding! Ding! Ding!
Is a threeway off the table?
3 way? You have a camp full of people. Just a couple more girls and you got a good, old-fashioned Mormon fuckfest.
Where are you Gritsaw? He must be at work.
>>27760883
Meh the waiting just makes the tension better.
>>27759270
I wanted starlight but the story is gettin crazy
Cant wait for more
>>27759517
so much this
GRITSAW WHERE ART THOU?
>>27759517
Fucking this. I'm a Twifag myself but this isn't the Twilight that became my waifu.
>>27761811
Shes just going a little crazy. Celestia, Luna or Sunny will snap her out of it hopefully. Shes done it before.
Theme From The Greatest American Hero (Believe It Or Not)
http://vocaroo.com/i/s0ERqA9PD09L
Africa
Toto
http://vocaroo.com/i/s0uxp5Xi2Aho
I have to work for the next 7 hours or so, and after or that I'm probably going to sleep for another 10.
So take these crappy renditions of songs as my apology.
>>27761858
Great for Karaoke night.
boop
>>27760403
I can't blame him for wanting to and then fucking those girls man. I would have done the same thing and died happy, or just not get stabbed by a woman cause I mean c'mon it would not be hard to wrestle the knife outta that bitch.
>>27761858
Okay. Your writing is worth the wait.
>>27761858
Your rendition of Africa was fabulous.
>"On October 3rd, he asked me what day it is."
"What day is it?"
>"It's October 3rd."
I'm so alone in this thread... I need friends.
ALL BY MYSEEEEELLLF.
Don't wanna be... ALL BY MYSEEEELLLLFF
I'm running out of ideas to pass the time.
So if Anon has sex with Starlight and she squirts, she'd be a shooting star.
HA!
>>27765218 god fucking damn it carlos
If Starlight met Sunny, would they hate each other or like each other?
>>27765285
They would probably like each other. Then get kinky.
>>27765291
Then spike would join and get freaky with his dual penises.
>>27765301
You're probably right.
>>27765308
I know I'm right because I'm TALKING TO MYSELF BECAUSE IM ALONE.
>>27765315
Night of pure boredom.
>>27765328
pure autism
>>27765330
I'm gonna suffocate from all my autism. Must hold out till morning.
>>27765328
Holy fuck
>>27765353
Yeah, I don't have friends.
I wonder if Celestia and Luna ever get drunk. Maybe that's why we have eclipses.
>>27765467
Celestia has a big horn. I wonder if shea ever gotten freaky with it.
>>27765487
I wonder of pegusi ever have sex midair.
>>27765494
Luna was alone in the moon for a thousand years. You know what she was doing.
>>27765497
I bet Spike has dirty mare magazines hidden around the library. If I was him I'd hide them so I was always at most 10 ft away from a magazine. You never know when you gotta splurge.
This is my art piece. I call it "Ode to Autism".
