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~Reverse Trap Dash
http://pastebin.com/iPx8q268
~Reverse Trap Fluttershy
http://pastebin.com/GGCZjdDX
~My Little Drop Trooper, Reverse-Trap Edition
http://pastebin.com/2EZnrind
Finally got far enough where I felt like I could start posting.
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>The year is 2552
>Humanity is at war with an alien alliance known as "The Covenant"
>We are losing
>The Covenant have burned our worlds, killing billions in their genocidal campaign
>Now they have breached the inner colonies, their leaders hunting for our homeworld with their own fleets
>One such group has found the rich inner world of Ballast
>The small fleet's largest Covenant ship, a 5km-long Assault Carrier, has breached the world's defenses and attacked the mega-city, "New Madang"
>Initial reports confirm major damage and heavy civilian casualties
>Now, Military Leaders of the "United Nations Space Command" have prepared their response
>Teams of highly-trained "Orbital Drop Shock Troopers" are ready to assault the carrier from navy ships in low orbit
>This is a near-suicidal mission, but these troopers are the best of the best
>And saving New Madang could mean saving Ballast from becoming glass
---
>You are "The Rookie"
>You and three others of your five-man team are sitting in hell's waiting room
>While you're getting some sleep, the others members, whom you barely know, are lounging around a holographic map of the city
>Private Rarity starts off by calmly saying, "The Navy sure gave it their all."
>"Better late than never." Cheerfully adds Lance Corporal Pie
>Corporal AJ slams his helmet down on the holo-map
>"How 'bout you show some respect, Pinks."
>"Just sayin', Jack. They missed one."
>"No, they left it for us."
>It's then an alarm sounds, the one all helljumpers recognize
>A moment later, two more soldiers enter the room
>One is Gunnery Sergeant Rainbow "Blitz" Dash
>The other is new, a stern-looking woman with black hair and a purple highlight
>Your sergeant announces, "You know the music, time to dance."
>Everyone looks to the new girl, and Pinkie whispers, "Now there's a spook..."
>"Pods. Now."
>>27661230
>Everyone but you, still sleeping and oblivious, grabs their helmets and heads for the rack of assorted weapons
>Rarity moves to Pie's side and tells her, "Is she wearing /any/ armor?"
>Pinkie causally responds, "Hey, spooks get their privileges."
>The Lance Corporal notices AJ grabbing a suppressed smg
>"Pft, seriously?"
>"Well, we're gonna be 'n close quarters."
>Pie offers him a shotgun, "Exactly," which the Corporal pushes away
>Dash and the new girl, Twilight, finish their small argument before heading across the room
>Blitz points to the row of drop pods, telling Twilight, "Second to last, right next to mine."
>"Mm, cozy." says Pie, and asks as the Gunny approaches, "You gonna tell us her name, Blitz?"
>Dash yanks the shotgun from Pie's hands, "/Mis/ Naval Intelligence."
>The shotgun is slammed back onto the rack, "Our new boss."
>AJ mutters "Oh brother." under his breath
>"So check your mouths, find your chairs..."
>Dash grabs a sniper rifle and shoves it into Rarity's arms, "And get SET, for a combat drop."
>As Blitz walks to the pods, Rarity looks down at her rifle
>"And just what am I supposed to with this /inside/ a Covenant ship?"
>Pie rolls her eyes with a grin, grabs her weapons, and walks over to you
>Still asleep, you can't do anything as she open-palms your helmet
>With a yelp, you fall off of your stack of crates and land on the metal floor with a crash
>You quickly pick yourself back up, and are met with a grinning Pinkie
>"Wake up, buttercup."
>AJ pushes her aside, and you watch the demo expert run to her pod for a second
>You then snap right back to the Corporal, who tells you,
>"Relax Rookie, she don't mean nothing. Besides, now's one of those times... it pays to be the strong, silent type."
>AJ hands you a suppressed M7, and you accept it, letting him go to his pod
>You turn to yours, which you were sleeping right next to, and lock the weapon next to your seat
>You climb in, and the hatch swings down as soon as you're set
>>27661245
>The pods then are spun around, the bottom of the Naval ship opening up to the dazzling red of a sunset
>The two screens on either side of the hatch light up, showing Blitz and Twilight
>Twilight calls over your squad comms
>"Latest intel reports Covenant troops are pushing towards the ONI Alpha Site."
>"And you're telling us this why?"
>"I'll tell you once we're on the ground."
>A countdown starts, and your helmets polarize
>Blitz yells out to everyone,
>"Pucker up, Marines! I sure as hell ain't hosing out your pods!"
>The rows of other ODST pods in front of you begin to blast down, and you hear a familiar beeping
>You grip the pod's flight control sticks as tight as you can
>The countdown reaches zero, and you're launched down to Ballast's surface
>On the way down to the clouds, you all get the sight of a UNSC frigate torn in half, debris floating all around
>You hear Pinkie state, "I take it back, Navy got its butt kicked."
>Blitz asks her, "Hey Pinkie, remember when I told you to shut your mouth?"
>"Yeah?"
>"Consider that a standing order."
>One of your teammate's pod rockets down just in front of you, and you see a cloud of over 200 drop pods descend into the lower stratosphere
>You notice that your team is pretty far away from the group
>As you break through the clouds, Blitz reports,
>"Captain, fifteen klicks off the deck."
>You now see the burning costal city, with the carrier hovering just over it
>Twilight then says something none of you expect,
>"Stand by to adjust trajectory. On my mark,"
>"What'd she just say?" asks AJ
>"Mark!"
>You instinctively activate your thrusters, using the two joysticks to move your pod with the Captain's
>"We're way off course!" notes Pie
>"We're heading exactly were I needed to go." states Twilight
>"But we're gonna miss the carrier-"
>"Battlecruiser!" yells AJ, "One o'clock, high!"
>You look up, and emerging from the cloud cover is one of the smaller, more numerous Covenant starships
>>27661230
Last thread was fine dumbass. Now the mods think we're spamming.
>>27661252
>This one looks heavily damaged, and is almost free-falling from the looks of the fire and smoke coming out from everywhere
>The Navy sure did a number on that
>You then realize it's heading right for the assault carrier
>To make matters worse, you see an electric-blue flash arc across the capital ship
>"Radiation!" yells AJ
>Pie asks, "The Covenant just set off a nuke?!"
>Twilight answers fearfully, "No, the carrier's going to jump... It's a slipspace rupture! Evasive-"
>A blue sun appears out of nowhere
>Someone reports, "EMP! Losing power!"
>Blitz manages to yell out, "Stabilize, then pop your chutes! We're goin' in hard!"
>Someone's pod in front pops it chute, but the move slams the SOIEV right into yours
>The collision almost rips your hatch open, but by some luck you grab onto it's handle
>Now you can only hear the roar of the wind
>Your vision becomes blurry as your pod spirals out of control
>You're falling too fast
>You can't breathe
>Your heart is racing
>You can only think about holding onto the door and not blacking out
>You spin more and more until a skyscrap-
---
>You are Anon, New Madang Police Department
>You stay in your little hole of debris as you try to regain your hearing
>Spots still dance around your vision, even with your eyes closed
>You aren't sure who set off that explosion, but it probably doesn't matter
>It's just destroying the city faster
>Blinking hard, you open your eyes and look up
>The whole city is washed in a bright blue, with tiny particles spreading out from the epicenter of the blast
>>27661285
>You were spared the worst of it thanks to the inner-city's walls being over two stories tall
>As you look at the lighted skyline, you notice two pieces of-
>Wait, that ain't debris
>One of the falling black pods ricochet off the Dresden Tower
>Straight at you-FUCK!
>You duck back into your hole, hear a heavy *SMACK*, and catch a glimpse of the pod skidding down the street
>You listen as it skips again and crashes into something
>Fatally curious, you climb out and peek down the lane
>A shitton of dust was whipped up, but you can see what looks like a small drop pod resting against the wall down at where the turn is
>Isn't that the one drop troopers use?
>Yeah, you're sure of it!
>You run down the street, not really checking your surroundings since your pretty sure the Covenant ain't around
>Doesn't matter now because you have an ODST to help you out
>You slow down when you near the pod and notice movement in it
>You then realize the whole thing's upside down
>Shit, how're you getting him out of there?
>Your question's answered when the hatch simply falls off, and the black-clad trooper falls out
>He tries to do a backwards summersault, but instead lands hard on his back with an "Ah!"
>Right in front of you
>"It works great-oh..."
>He notices you staring down at him
>You can see your dirtied, stubble-ridden face in that visor
>The trooper flatly tells you, "Hey there." his grainy voice a little muffled by his helmet
>You hesitantly reply,
"Uh, hey."
>"Huh? Oh, no, it's just a civie."
"Sorry, sir, or tro-?"
>The marine quickly points a finger at you, "I ain't talkin' to you."
"Wh..."
>As the ODST picks himself up and walks to his pod, you realize he must be talking to his buddy that came down with him
>Nice going, ya fucking idiot
>>27661288
>"Hey, you a cop?"
>You look up from pinching your nose and utter,
"Y-yes?"
>The trooper tilts his head slightly
>"Huh, shouldn't you be helping everyone get out of here?"
"Well, actually I'm trying help a friend of mine. He's at-"
>"Is he in that direction?" He points northeast, and you nod
>"Good, 'cause my Captain's trapped in her pod that way."
>The trooper, now with a battle rifle in his arms and a sleek, black magnum at his side walks up to you
>You must look like a twig compared to him
>"You got a weapon?"
>You pat your holster
"Magnum. G variant, but it's empty."
>The ODST pulls out a few extended mags meant for her fancy magnum and hands them to you
>"Here. They're penetrating instead of semi-explosive, so they're shit against shields."
>The trooper doesn't wait for you to thank him or even load a mag before he starts down the street
>You should've known he'd have his own agendas
>At least he's given you ammo and'll kill a few of the Covies in your way
>You hope your friend's dug himself hard into his workplace
>You have a feeling this guy's gonna leave you in the middle of a firefight
---
Done for now. At least there's more green now than constant bumping.
>>27661198
OP what the honest fuck are you doing? There are three threads up. The mods are going to think it was spam. Which means no more threads. Dumbass.
Thanks, man. Sorry for the hassle. This post is just to confirm that the green will continue in this thread.
>>27661334
Just let the other two die family
>Stop worrying over little things
>>27661341
You're welcome Jeff, also keep up the good work
Reverse-trap dumpbump
>>27661580
>>27661590
>>27661604
>>27661613
What the shit?
>>27661637
>>27661654
[Spoiler]my new wifeu[/spoiler]
>>27661666
Thats all i got
She just wanted to sprint with the best
>>27661719
Proud people breed sad sorrows for themselves 'non
>>27661654
tfw no cuttie punk dash
>>27661299
>mfw I never played Halo
I still like your green m8.
>>27661198
>repressed feels
So you remove "Tomboy" and added this? Really nigga?
>>27662237
Yeah, OP is quite the fag.
>>27662237
>>27662250
We all know why we're here.
>>27662285
Nigger, you can't even use capital letters and put unrelated crap in subject field. Don't you dare make threads ever again.
>>27662329
You seem butt mad over trivial matters m8
>tomboysi want them all
>>27662452
Is Rarity even trying?
she looksdashingin this outfit
"girls, I actually read a book to understand a few things, and I knew Tomboy doesn't suits me"
>ponies doesn't understand
"the accurate term isn't queer, I'm demigender"
Write a story based on this? I'm not a good writer, but I sure would enjoy Rainbowdash coming out and recognised legally as demigender, just like MtF and Ftm, agender and intersex ponies!
>>27661198
This nigger literally remade the thread so he could add his fucking pastebin.
>>27662868
I remade the thread because JeffMango asked me to re do the title without his name in it so not to discourage othe writer's from posting there greens.
>>27662868
I'm a black woman, and sorry to go off-topic but could you please not use that word?
Here's the options:
This asshole
This shitface
This dickhead
This fucker
This idiot
The English vocabulary has a whole lot of expressions, and you decided to use this one.
I'm very tolerant usually but comes a moment I'm no longer OKAY with it on a pony board.
>>27663050
Don't care
>>27663050
...nobody is genuinely this retarded.
>>27663280
You'd be surprised
>>27663050
Nigger
>>27663050
where the hell do you think you are?
>>27661299
A halo themed green? I'll have to read this later.
>Pinned
>>27663050
I would call autism but women cannot get it
>>27663488
What?
Reverse trap flutters will end up with lesbian sex with RD:
https://derpiboo.ru/736349
>>27661666
I'm having full metal alchemist flash backs
>>27663565
>>27661666
>All these muscles.
Absolutely disgusting. Skinny tomboys are the best.
>>27662716
>Tumblr buzzwords
Stop.
>>27664258
>Character who's an athlete
>Skinny, stick-like limbs
Going to go through and update the pastebin for both stories, then I'll get back to updating. See you all in a bit.
>"She says she'd like to see you."
http://pastebin.com/iPx8q268
"Hey, Rainbow."
>You step inside Dash's room as if entering a chapel, keeping your posture low and reverent and tiptoe-ing over to her bedside
>She looks...
>Well, about as good as you can expect someone to look after a month in the hospital
>Her sleek, athletic physique has already begun to waste away, leaving her skinny and pallid
>Her legs are still heavily bandaged, wrapped in thick casts and secured by chords to the bed
>She's sitting up now, but she still doesn't look at you; just keeps her gaze trained on the early-afternoon sun outside her window
>It wasn't until today you realized just how many comics you brought her
>The hospital staff has wheeled in a set of plastic shelves next to her bed, which is now covered in stacks of the thin, colorful books
>Rainbow has a few stacked on her nightstand, and one lying open in her lap
>"Hey."
>Her voice sounds much like you would expect from someone in her position, but it's still unnerving to hear it coming from her
>All the characteristic spunk has faded, leaving her sounding hollow and drained
"Happy Birthday."
>Dash's hands close around the sheets, balling the fabric in her fists
>"Thanks..."
>She turns to face you, finally, and nothing could have prepared you for the look in her eyes
>Her emaciation, her shattered legs, the pallid color of her skin...
>Nothing compares to the emptiness behind those magenta orbs
>You place your present and Ms. Harshwhinny's on her bed
>Dash just stares at them
"For you."
>"Oh. Thanks."
>She doesn't even touch them
>>27664681
>"For you."
>>27664681
>You start to lose track of time, just sitting there with her
>It feels improper to leave without saying something, but what can you say?
>Asking "how are you?" would be possibly the stupidest thing you could say
"So..."
>You shift in your chair, examining the stacks of comics next to her bed
"You been enjoying the books?"
>Dash nods
>Her hair has grown out since you last saw her, and it now hangs down over her eyes
>"Yeah. Even though a lot of your picks are kinda lame."
>She forces a small smile
"Hey, now. Not my fault you have such pleb tastes."
>You return her smile, and push your gift toward her
>"You didn't have to get me anything."
"Of course not. But hey, birthday's are a big deal. What are you now, twelve?"
>The joke gets another tiny smile out of Dash
>She takes your package up in her hands, grunting slightly at its weight
>Her hands shake so badly she can barely undo the wrapping
>You take them in yours, helping steady them as she peels the paper away
>"I can do it myself..."
>Despite her protests, she doesn't pull away
>The paper unravels, revealing a thick, hard-back graphic novel
>Dash raises her eyebrows
>"Bone?"
"Yeah."
>She sets the book down in her lap, still leaving her hands in yours
"It was my favorite back when I was a kid."
>"You got me a kids' book? Dude..."
"It's way more than a kids' book. It's seriously amazing. And... I dunno. It's just really cute, and positive, and heartwarming... I thought it might help."
>>27664739
>>You take them in yours, helping steady them as she peels the paper away
nigga that's romantic
>>27664739
>Dash sighs
>She's still smiling, but it's... different, somehow
>"Dude... I appreciate it. I really do."
>Her hands shift inside yours, and you reflexively tighten around them
>Dash tries to squeeze you back, but her shaky fingers can't muster even the slightest amount of strength
>"You're the only person who's given a shit enough to even try to visit me."
"What about your dad?"
>She shakes her head
>"Called once to complain about the bills. That's it."
"Jesus. I'm so sorry, Dash."
>She just shrugs
>"Since I woke up... I don't know. I've been wondering if I actually survived that night at the bridge."
>The smile vanishes from her face, and she goes back to starting out the window
>"Like... my body is still here, I guess. But none of the rest of me is. I don't... I don't "feel" anything anymore. Nobody talks to me. Nobody is even worried about me. I can't run anymore, so what's the point in me being around. It feels like I'm just sitting here, waiting for my body to catch up with the rest of me."
>She glances over at the stack of comics
>"These are the only thing that really makes me... I dunno, 'feel' anything anymore. But they're just prolonging the inevitable. I'll catch up with myself eventually."
"I'm sorry."
>You stare down at her lap, where her gently-trembling hands rest between yours
"You deserve better than this."
>She lets out a raspy chuckle
>"You know... a month or so ago, I'd probably have agreed with you. But, really, I dunno. How do I deserve anything? I was selfish, arrogant, self-obsessed..."
>She coughs
>"And now that I don't have a self to obsess over, what am I?"
>>27664844
"My friend. And the best runner CHS has ever seen."
>"...you idiot."
>She removes her right hand from yours, and tries you slap your shoulder
>Her palm slips harmlessly over your shirt
>You remember back to what just one of her punches did to your ribcage
>"Stupid sentimental bastard."
"Guilty as charged."
>You clasp her left hand tighter, and push the other present towards her
>"Oh, shit. What's this. Some Barney to go with my other kids' book?"
"I don't know, actually. It's from Harshwhinny."
>"Harshwhinny? What's she doing sending me presents?"
"No idea. But you should open it."
>"Okay. But you're not helping me this time."
"Understood."
>She leaves her left hand holding yours, and uses her right to slowly undo the wrapping, her shaking fingers fumbling with the ribbon
>Sweat begins to break out across her forehead as she keeps slipping up, turning a two-minute task into a half hour
>But when she finishes, she reveals only a plain cardboard box
"Well?"
>You're as curious as she is to see what's inside it now
>Dash pries the lid back
>"Jesus Christ..."
>Nestled inside the box, amongst a thick nest of tissue paper, is a golden trophy
>She pries it out, her hand barely able to maintain its weight
>You help her, holding the trophy up for her to see
>The inscription across the base reads "Baltimare Tournament, 2016, Women's Open: First Place"
"Took them a while to send it, I guess."
>Dash bites her lip, and you can see tears welling in her eyes
>She blinks them back, though, dropping the trophy into her lap
>"Yeah, well... I k-knew I won. It's not *that* big a deal."
>>27664890
>>She removes her right hand from yours, and tries you slap your shoulder
>>Her palm slips harmlessly over your shirt
>>You remember back to what just one of her punches did to your ribcage
s-she's going to recover. i believe in her.
*tries -to- slap your shoulder
>>27664890
"Of course not. But still... it's a pretty nice trophy. And I think the little star here means you're the new record-holder for the division."
>"Hah, yeah... cool..."
>She sighs, laying a hand over the trophy
>"Thanks, I guess."
>You try to lift the box off her lap, but there's still a little heft to it
"I think there's something else in here."
>You hold the box out to her, and she roots around in the paper with her free hand
>Sheets of white and pink fall away, scattering across her shattered legs as she lifts the second object out of the box
>Dash's eyes go wide
>"Oh my God..."
>It's a framed photograph, taken of her at the race
>You don't remember them having a photographer, but you suppose you easily could have missed them
>It's not uncommon for the large events to hire professionals to capture the more-intense moments, usually for promotional purposes
>The photo in question is of Dash, just moments before she finished the race
>There's been some subtle manipulations in the color balance and lighting, but the emotional impact of the picture shines through without any need for tampering
>Dash looks positively fearsome, almost Godly, her body soaked in sweat and her muscles straining as she pushes herself towards the finish line
>Her grin seems to shine with triumph, the sweat on her face glistening in the light of the mid-afternoon sun, wringing her in what looks almost like a halo
>"That's..."
>The shaking in Dash's hand become too much for her to control, and she drops the photo back into her lap
>The tears she tried so hard to restrain now spill down her cheeks, and she grits her teeth around her next words
>"That's everything I ever wanted to be..."
>>27665102
why must you play with my heart like this Jeff?
>no "sissy" in OP once again
we live
we die
we live again
it's good to be back, thread
Just checked this thread out. Wanted to say Reverse-Trap Fluttershy is an unholy level of cute and I'm dying to read more. Thank you based Jeff.
>>27666536
This.
>>27662452
posting short hair
Older sister or forced to be a girl by his overly pushy slav father
>>27667176
Oor forced to be a boy when she was still young by her self hating mother and once she started to go through puberty and becoming more feminine her mother abandoned her in a ditch and then a loving fatherly Anon raises her but tragedy strikes when her mother tries to come back into the picture and papa Anon ain't having that shit.
Writing bump.
>>27667857
Whoop
Bamp
>>27667857
Honestly a little hyped
>>27661299
>The two of you meet your first Covenant roadblock two minutes later
>It's just a small squad of squat, methane-breathing Grunts, all meandering about in a little MG nest they set up at a T-junction
>Their leader, a hulking Brute in a light-blue combat harness, has its weapons holstered and its back turned towards you
>You finally catch up to the trooper, who's crouched just at the corner a grenade's throw down the street from the aliens
>He looks to you as you crouch beside him
>"We have to punch through them. I'll take the big guy and you take care of the little shits."
>You ready your magnum, whispering
"Got it."
>You aim for the Grunt nearest to the heavy plasma MG while the trooper grabs one of his three frag grenades
>Once he primes it with a click, he hurls it right at the Brute
>Damn, he has an arm
>The pineapple lands right at the Brute's feet
>A moment later the blast rips through its armor
>A nearby Grunt loses an arm and is thrown into the wall
>You start to shoot at the rest, and they begin to panic from the sudden combat
>The Brute, while bloodied and without its helmet, is still standing
>No surprise to you; you've seen those things take several bursts of small arms before going down
>The best way is to-
>*BR-R-RT*
>A quick burst from the battle rifle, and the now-brainless Brute is brought down
>By then you shoot the head off of the last Grunt
>There's a moment of silence before the ODST stands up
>"Not bad for a cop." and he starts to jog down the clear street
>You run to catch up, huffing out
"Thanks! I had practice!"
>Hey, at least you're not completely useless
>The two of you run through another alley and down another street without incident
>Gunfire, both ballistic and plasma, near and far, surround you
>The marines aren't giving up on this city easily
>>27669605
>While you try to figure out how the firefights are going from their sound, the trooper is talking to his friend
>It sounds like the Captain is still trapped, but you can't really know for certain since you doesn't know what channel they're using
>You could ask, but you're a little busy running
>When you're forced to stop and wait for a massive city-section door to open, you puff out
"H...hey."
>The trooper finally looks at you as you lean heavily on the wall
"W-what frequency are you using?"
>"You got a radio?"
>You tap your ear
"Com-bead. Haven't used it for hours, though."
>"Alright, here."
>The ODST presses on that small antenna on the side of his helmet, and your bead starts to beep
>You switch channels just as the door opens up to a firefight
>The street angles down after the door, and the large open conduit that the road leads to is lit up with tracers and plasma
>The both of you quickly move to one side of the street, where the sidewalk remains level and ends at a balcony
>A lone marine is crouching behind cover, while a few of her squadmates are down below
>They're all being pinned down by two bases of fire
>To the left is a continent of Grunts led by Brutes
>To the right is a small squad of purely Brutes led by a golden-colored Brute Captain
>And sprinkled throughout all of that are a few small, skinny, and birdlike Jackels armed with mid-rangeed, green-beam-spewing carbines
>The two of you run up to the side to where the lone marine is
>She sees you coming and you can see a momentary look of relief on her face
>When you get to her, she tells the ODST with a gravelly voice, "Trooper, we're pinned down! Use these buildings, flank the bastards on the streets!"
>"Roger that. Hey cop!"
>Christ, you still don't know each other's names
"Yeah?"
>"Grab what weapons you can find get a base of fire going! Try not to get capped by those Jackals!"
"Sure, but where-!"
>He's already gone
"Goddammit..."
>>27669611
>While the marine tries to shoot down at the advancing cluster of Grunts, you look around
>There's a dead Jackal with a carbine at his side that you passed
>No, the marksmen'll get ya
>You look around the balcony and, to your luck, is a tall crate lined with guns
>Five assault rifles and a shotgun, perfect
>You run over to grab an AR, just as your com-bead crackles
>A woman's voice asks, "Blitz, location?"
>"Blitz" answers, "Almost there, what's wrong?"
>"Multiple hostiles closing in on my location."
>Her voice turns shaky
>"Listen, if I don't make it-"
>Blitz doesn't like the sound of that
>"Woah, hold on! We're coming!"
>"Too late! They spotted me!"
>"Dammit, no! Sparks! Talk to me!"
>Nothing
>"Come on, officer, we need to clear these fuckers out now!"
>With suddenly-found determination, you respond
"On it, sir!"
>You rise over the plants lining the balcony and spot a handful of a Grunts running out in the open, hoping to rush the suppressed marines
>You quickly aim and fire a burst
>The rounds rip through the cannon fodder, and they immediately falter
>Another burst sends the survivors running scared back to their Brute masters
>The beasts simply kick and shoot them, forcing them to fight you
>You start to shoot at the Brutes themselves when you see a purple-white light out of he corner of your eye
>You look and your heart skips a beat
>It's a Jackal aiming right at you
>*BR-R-RT*
>The alien's beaky head snaps to the side and the body goes limp
>Blitz's got them flanked
>The rest of the Jackals try to address him, but the helljumper noted each of their positions beforehand
>He starts to pick them off one by one
>Emboldened, the marines down below begin to shoot at the distracted Brutes
>Their armor gets chipped away as they run for cover, and the one commanding the Grunts goes down from concentrated fire
>You simply hang back and take pot shots at the remaining fodder, who are now freaking out from the loss of their leader
>>27669701
Getting spicy
>>27669701
>With the Brutes now suppressed and the Jackals eliminated, you watch as Blitz and the marines charge forward, priming grenades and readying shotguns
>That's when the a pair of golden-plated Hunters come clanking down an adjacent street
>One of the marines notice and yell out, "Aw shit, Hunters!"
>The marines now have their attention divided
>All of the grenades meant for the Brutes are now lobbed at the Hunters
>The ensuing explosions stop the armored Hunters for a moment, but now they ready the heavy plasma cannons on their arms
>It's the marines' turn to panic and scatter as the aliens fire
>Two huge streams of green and blue plasma fly through the air
>One unlucky marine gets clipped in the shoulder
>He screams as his arm is torn off violently, the hot plasma melting through his armor
>The remaining marines are forced to leave him and assault the Brute's position: the wreckage of a truck pushed up against the balcony on the other side of the conduit
>Luckily Blitz was busy with that
>A second grenade tossed over the truck forces the Brutes to dive out of cover
>Still advancing, Blitz tosses his third at the aliens now trying to get back up
>The explosion rips them up, killing one outright and tearing off the armor of the rest
>It's then the marines being chased by the Hunters show up
>The still-reeling aliens only get a couple of inaccurate shots off before being taken out by tri-bursts and buckshot
>Blitz turns to the marines, maybe to thank them, but then he sees the pair of walking tanks
>You hear him complain over comms,
>"Hunters? Dammit, no! I don't have time for this!"
>Said Hunters start to charge up their plasma cannons
>A quick burst from your AR plinking on their armor interrupts them
>They turn to you, up on the balcony, and even from this distance you feel a need to move
>You don't need to, since Blitz and the marines open fire
>"Go for the orange spots in the back!" yells one of the marines, "That's their exposed flesh!"
>>27669898
>Unfortunately, the Hunters turn back to them and charge
>The assembled soldiers scatter again, this time in an attempt to surround the pair
>Except for Blitz
>You see him run off past the Hunters and toward another set of big doors
>You waste a moment deciding on if you should stay and help the marines
>...nah it looks like they can handle it
"Hey, Blitz! Wait for me!"
>One of the Hunters go down as you get down from the balcony and run across the conduit
>Yeah, the marines have it in the bag
>As long as they don't let the last, now-enraged Hunter get close enough to smash any of them
>Thankfully for you, the trooper is again forced to stop at the doors
>He tells you in an annoyed voice as he reloads his battle rifle,
>"First off: it's not Blitz. It's either Gunnery Sergeant Dash or, if I'm feeling generous, Gunny. Got it?"
>Caught off guard, you simply nod
>"And second off:"
>The doors slide open to reveal a clear street
>"Nice job."
>That makes you stand there for a second, dumbfounded, before following the ODST down the street
---
I would like to finish the "mission," but it's almost 3 in the morning over here and I'd like to get up at a decent time. Keep it Clean.
>>27669983
Good shit m8, i like the change of pace from the dramatic nature of JeffMango's work. But i still can't wait to see how it ends with dash.
>>27667857
Slump
Can't wait for more reverse-trap flutters
>reverse trap/tomboy thread
>main fic so far is a halo fanfic with some mlp names.
>pic relatedThat said >>27662509 makes me want to write something silly and Jojo inspired, so shame on me for calling out weird crossovers.
>>27670969
>>main fic so far is a halo fanfic with some mlp names.
Nigger this is 85% JeffMango Reverse-Trap Flutters/Reverse-Trap RD circlejerk thread. The remaining 15% consists of other authors and posts
Working a ten-hour shift today, so updates will be super sparse, if I can get any written at all, until around 9 CDT
>>27665102
>Her right hand trails along the surface of the frame, figures shaking as they trace the contours of her body in the photo
>"Ever since I was a little girl... this is all I've ever wanted..."
"And you got it."
>You give Dash's hand a reassuring squeeze, but she just shakes her head
>"Once. And now it's gone."
>Feebly, she shifts her legs slightly under the covers
>"You heard them. I can't run. Probably won't even be able to walk."
"Dash."
>You grab ahold of the photo, and hold it up for her
"Look at this again."
>"What's the point? It might as well be someone else. That Rainbow is dead. I'm all that's left."
"Dash, I dropped you fifty feet. Onto solid concrete. That kind of drop has killed people. It probably should have killed you."
>"So? I'm just stubborn."
"I don't think stubbornness is all that kept you from bleeding out down there. You held out for longer than anyone could have."
>"Doesn't matter."
"It does."
>You push the picture against her chest
"The Rainbow in this photo is still in there, somewhere. This Rainbow wouldn't have let go, and you haven't either. You've still got her."
>"That's just sentimental crap. My legs are shot, dude. I won't run again."
"Says who?"
>"The doctors!"
"And doctors can never be wrong? You're just going to let them tell you how the rest of your life will go?"
>"Of course!"
>She pulls her left hand out of your grasp, turning away
>"Just fuck off, okay? Nothing's gonna change."
>She doesn't get rid of the photo, however
>She just keeps it clutched to her chest, hugging it like you'd hug a stuffed animal
*fingers shaking, in the first line
>>27671412
"You know, nobody believed in that Dash either."
>"Hmph."
"Everyone hated her. They were real assholes to her. Even her own teammate. He treated her like shit. And what did she do?"
>"Dude, fuck off."
"What did that Dash do, even when everyone was trying to kick her around."
>"I won. Big whoop. My legs still worked."
"So if you could get your legs working again, you'd try?"
>"Doesn't matter. I can't. Don't you get it, you idiot? I can't. I'm gonna be stuck like this. And nothing's gonna change that."
>She sinks deeper into the cot, pulling the covers up to hide herself
>The room falls silent
>Dash cradles the photograph like a baby animal, sulking
"I'm gonna get some lunch, okay? I'll be right back."
>"Whatever."
>You return twenty minutes, with some food still left in the cardboard container you bought
"Hey. You want anything? This fried chicken is actually pretty good."
>She shrugs
>"Doesn't matter. What's the point in me eating."
"You gotta keep up your strength."
>"Why?"
>You toss a pamphlet onto her lap
>She glances at it, trying to act disinterested, but you see a spark behind her eyes
>On the cover, it shows a man going from a wheelchair, to crutches, and eventually to an exaggerated sprint
>"Rehab? You serious?"
>She feigns nonchalance, but you can hear just the slightest sliver of hope in her voice
"Yeah. I looked online while I was at lunch. Apparently the program here is pretty good."
>>27671412
>>27671439
he returns
>first you stab us in the heart with her attempted suicide
>then you stab us in the gut by telling us she'll never run
> then you imply she may very well get better?
I don't know whether to be angry or happy but this shit is getting better with every new update
>>27671439
Waifu rehabilitation is my fetish.
>>27664739
>Bone
ayy
I love you Jeff
>>27670969
>not wanting to deliver some succulent jojo
As long as you do original stands you're fine
>>27670969
Yeah, I'm trying to write some Jojo stuff too. I know people generally don't like crossovers, but this is sort of a guilty pleasure for me.
>>27673092
Have you checked the /co//co/ Bizarre Adventure threads? They're really cool
>>27596779
>Waifu_name heard that Anon is gay(which is totally not true, I swear on my mum).
>She dresses like a male and tries to act like a manly man to seduce Anon.
>Meanwhile oblivious Anon doesn't understand what's happening.
Reposting idea because I liked.
>>27672326
That's a weird fetish anon
>>27673492
Anyone else find piercings fuckin' disgusting?
And on that note, most tattoo's as well?
>>27673862
Same.
>>27673210
I found that thing out recently and it seems like it's too far into it's thing to join. Too much stuff to catch up on.
Plus, it's fun coming up with stands on my own...
>>27673862
Each successive one increases the chance of being too crazy to stick dick into by a large margin.
>>27673862
to be honest i actually like tongue piercing but the rest should be used as little as possible
So it turns out I won't be able to post for the weekend. I can still write, so I'll dump everything when I get back. Hopefully more Writefags come about so it doesn't become a bumbfest.
>>27673862
Like all things in life, a moderate amount is boner-inducing. Tastefully done tattoo here, a couple more earrings than normal, etc.
I personally draw the line just past the full-sleeve tats and eyebrow piercings. Anything beyond that isn't "degenerate" per se, but it's like having a thing for long-haired girls and being presented with someone whose hair is growing out past their waistline. It's a bit too much.
Pic related is probably my upper limit.
>>27673862
>he doesn't like tats on girls
>>27665102
>>27674093
I said "most" tattoo's, that ones alright.
>>27674080
I was actually thinking of that one when I made the post. It just looks ugly.
The only thing worse is that half shaved head thing.
>>27674154i think it's hot desu
please ignore the brown rarity
>>27674371
>Brown Rarity
>>27674371
...and the black twilight
>>27674371
They all look pretty disgusting TBQHF
is she a tomboy?
>>27674522
Does she like things most commonly associated with boys, and acts the way most commonly associated with boys?
>>27674515
I'd fuck that Dash and Appul tho.
>>27674536
>dirt bike
>science!
>plays wicked guitar
>badass jacket
>>27674361
tramp stamps for a reason
>>27673492
I need this.
>>27673862
Ye, me too.
>>27674914
>>27673492
>whyarewenotfundingthis.webm
>>27674543
I puked
Y'ALL NIGGAS NEED TO STAY ON YOUR SHIT AND STOP LETTING THIS THREAD HIT PAGE 10
>no flutters update
>>27676701
flutters is kill
>>27676701
Jeff said he's going to start back on fluttershy after hes done with dash because her story is closer to being finished
>>27673092
>>27672661
Oh shit, I finally have a reason to share this.
http://pastebin.com/eFMDdm64
It's an unfinished Jojo/MLP crossover I started a while back, in the /nst/ threads. There's a few lore inconsistencies, like some of the non-Stand User main characters being able to see stands, but I think it's a pretty fun read.
Late night passionate pump-a-bump
So it was a hard decision, but instead of reposting the same story over and over again, I decided to write something original this time.
>It’s hot. So incredibly hot that even laying in the shade as you were, you feel like you’re halfway to melting already.
“God. This sucks.”
>”How do you think I feel? I had to direct the winds that made this heatwave.”
>You cast a lazy glance upwards to Rainbow Dash, who has chosen to lay slumped in the branches above you to get out of the heat.
>You watch as she shifts, trying fruitlessly to find a comfier position only to give up and lay back down where she started.
>”Augh. I’m sweating up a storm up here.”
“And you think I’m not?”
>With your clothing, you were comparatively worse off, if the dark patches under your arms were any indication.
>”I didn’t say that. It’s just...gah!”
>Dash huffs, and tries once again to adjust her position.
>”Do you know how hard it is to scratch your balls when you have hooves? It’s impossible!”
>You absentmindedly nod, your lethargy meaning that you don’t fully process your Dash’s statement for a couple of seconds.
“Wait, your balls?”
>”Yea. I’ve been trying with this branch but I don’t want to go to hard and get a splinter, you know?”
“I...what?”
>Rainbow Dash pokes her head over the edge of the branch and looks down at you.
>”You alright Anon? The heat didn’t fry your brain did it?”
“But...you...you’re a chick. You don’t have balls?”
>”What?”
>This time it’s Dash’s turn to be confused, and with a flap of her wings she takes off from the branch and lands next to you.
>”Are you feeling alright Anon?”
“Am I feeling fine? Are YOU feeling fine?!”
>”I mean apart from the itchy balls thing yea.”
“But you don’t have balls! You’re a chick!”
>”I’m a chick? With the amount of mares that I pull?”
“I thought you were a lesbian!”
>”Pffft please, I get way more tail than a lesbian.”
“But I know you’re a chick! I’ve….you know….seen...it…”
>>27678647
>”What do you mean you’ve seen it?”
“Well it’s not my fault you fly around at eye level!”
>”You’ve been checking me out? Dude what are you fucking gay?”
“No, because you’re not a guy!”
>”Ok you know what, I’m going to leave and let you calm down from whatever heat related craziness you’ve fallen into.”
>Rainbow Dash flaps her wings and takes off, leaving you to stand there and yell at the rapidly diminishing dot in the sky.
>With a frustrated sigh, you slump against the tree only to notice the quiet sound of laughter coming from the nearby bushes.
>Of course, one of Dash’s pranks. A shit one admittedly, but you were at as much fault for falling for it.
>Climbing to your feet, you slink over to the bushes only to find an unfamiliar stallion standing there, breathless with laughter.
“Alright, the jig is up. I know it’s a prank.”
>”A prank, ohhoho.”
>The stallion straightens and points a hoof skywards, towards the retreating Rainbow Dash.
>”This is no prank, this is the power of my stand; ｢DUDE LOOKS LIKE A LADY｣.”
>The stallion’s stand shimmers into existence behind him, a weedy, thin figure that starts pink, but becomes a mottled blue further up its body. It supports itself on its forearms, which resemble long scoops and almost seems to stare at you with beady eyes set into a perfectly spherical head, from which two arrow shaped protrusions jut from either side.
>With no more warning than a stern glare, you manifest your own stand and swing downwards, intending to pummel the stallion into the ground.
“‘ORRA!”
>Only for him to dance backwards, leaving your stand to dig a chunk out of the ground where it collides.
>”Ohhoho, they told me your stand was slow but I was hoping that the stories were exaggerated.”
>You follow the sound of his voice to see him using his stand to support him as he hangs from the underside of a nearby branch.
“What did you do to Dash?”
>>27678652
>”Isn’t it obvious? I turned ‘her’ into a ‘him’.”
>You charge forward, only for his stand to swipe its hand through the branches of the tree, causing the mass of flowers present on it to swell and all but explode with pollen.
>Covering your eyes, you find your charge stopped short as the ground suddenly drops, throwing you off your footing and sending you sprawling.
>”Wow, you really are hopeless aren’t you? Here, let me help you.”
>You wince as it feels like you’re simultaneously punched in the gut and kicked in balls, only for the feeling to disappear a moment later.
>You leap to you feet, expecting another attack any moment only to stumble again, this time from the unexpected weight on your chest.
>”Oh my, you’re a big one aren’t you.”
“OH COME THE FUCK ON!”
>You resist the urge to touch your new lady lumps and trust from their weight that they are infact real.
>”It’s a shame you weren’t unaware of my stand before the change, otherwise you would be fully convinced that you were always that way, just like your friend Rainbow Dash.”
>You lash out with your stand, taking a decent chunk out of a nearby tree and inciting more cackling from the stallion.
>Following the sound of his voice, you pluck a beehive out of the canopy and fling it into the underbrush, silencing the laughs.
>After a few moments, the stallion walks out, wreathed in bees and with his stand cradling the hive like a child.
>”Honestly I’m more than a little disappointed. I really expected more of a fight than this.”
>As he talks the stallion’s stand guides the harmless bees back into the hive and closes its hand over the entrance to contain them.
>”No matter though. I’ll be sure to let everyone know that it was me, Rag Doll, that beat you, Anonymous!”
>Rag Doll’s stand swipes its hand through the beehive, and the buzzing instantly intensifies as it hefts it and throws it at you.
“｢POWERSLAVE｣ !”
>>27678659
>Your stand intercepts the hive, knocking it into the forest and causing Rag Doll to take a surprised step back.
“ORRA!”
>You throw a punch with your stand and Rag Doll blocks it with his own, creating an audible crack as the two stands collide and causing the stallion’s legs to buckle slightly.
>You wind back and throw another punch, this time breaking through his stand’s defences as you drive a fist straight into his chest.
>Blood flies from the surprised Rag Doll’s mouth before the rest of his body catches up with the momentum of the punch and he flies backwards.
>With bleary eyes he looks towards you as you slowly approach his battered form, and for the first time he shows an emotion that isn’t confident smugness or self satisfaction.
>Fear.
>He tries to retreat backwards, only for his spine to meet the trunk of a tree and in desperation he flourished his stand over his own body.
>In the blink of an eye he suddenly becomes a she, who looks up at you with fearful, tear filled eyes.
>”You...you wouldn’t hit a poor defenceless mare would you?”
“I don’t know, I think girls are allowed to hit other girls.”
>Her stand frantically waves its hands, and that feeling in the pit of your stomach briefly returns only to disappear along with the weight on your chest.
“And Rainbow Dash?”
>”Oh she’ll be fine. She flew out of my range ages ago.”
>The fearful mare climbs to her hooves and brushes herself off.
>”I’m real sorry about everything, I was just looking for a cheap laugh and I saw the two of you and-”
“ORRA!”
>Her teeth slam together as you uppercut Rag Doll, causing her to do a complete flip before she crashes into the branches of the tree and hangs there limply.
>Satisfied that she (he? Who knows) is no longer a problem, you turn and walk back the way you came.
>If nothing else Dash should get a laugh out of the whole ordeal.
>>27678647
>>27678652
>>27678659
>>27678664
And as always, here's the pastebin; http://pastebin.com/j3tK0khkIf anyone can figure out the fic I reference throughout the story, I may or may not grant a writing request.
>>27678673
Neat green m8
>>27674522
She's a trap.
>>27678853
Naw, m8 she's Absorgender– A gender that changes to conform to the genders of those around you. As you are around more people, even if some leave, they continue to add to the genders you feel. You remain as the genders that you have taken in until you hit a max of some sort. At that point you become like a blank slate, being only one gender
>>27678673
I didn't expect to read a JoJo green ITT
Niceu
>>27678853
That's my fetish.
>>27678865
wut?
>>27678853
i dont care either way, a hole is a hole
>>27677194
I swear the more of you I read the more I love you
Also nice stands
>>27678673
NICE
What can ｢POWERSLAVE｣ do though?
>>27678865
>>>/tumblr/
>>27678853
/r/ing green
>>27664357
Thatsthejoke.jpeg?
>>27680688
>jpeg
what are you a pleb?
>>27678865
The fuck?
>>27678673
This story might have been the highlight for my day.
>>27678673
>mfw part 4 was playing while I was reading this
Page 9 bump, Jeff
What happened to dashie guys? Did she become a wonderbolt
>>27683460
Ha ha. Nice joke.
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Sorry about the lack of updates. Increased work schedule kind of burned me out. Gonna move the Dash finale to Monday night. In the meantime, I have a few more posts for her story, and then tomorrow will be mostly Flutters.
>>27684677
>In the meantime, I have a few more posts for her story
I am ready for the knife-twisting.
>>27671439
>"Anon..."
>Dash sighs
"What?"
>"Look at this shit."
>She pulls the blanket away from her legs, revealing the stark-white casts and the straps holding them in place on the bed
>"Rehab isn't gonna fix this."
"Says who?"
>"Says me, okay? It's not worth it. Please, just quit it with the false hope."
>She flops back in bed, arms dangling off both sides of the cot
>"Why are you doing this to me?"
"Doing what?"
>"Giving me all this false hope. It hurts, man. Life'll be easier if I just accept that I'm broken. If you keep trying this shit, I might start believing it."
"And?"
>"And then it'll hurt way more when I realize it's not true."
"And what if it is?"
>"It's not."
"You keep saying that. Why?"
>"Because the doctors told me, dumbass!"
>She rolls away from you, huffing
>Still, maybe it's just your imagination, but you feel like you can still hear that glimmer of repressed hope
"They told you, sure. But what, are doctors never wrong? Is Rainbow Dash not the exact person to prove them wrong?"
>"Shut up..."
>You scoot back from Dash a bit, thinking
"You know Doomsday, right?"
>"Uh, yeah? Don't try to spout some comic bullshit at me, dude. It's not gonna--"
"He's literally invincible, isn't he?"
>"I guess, but--"
"And Superman still always wins."
>"Well yeah. But that's because--"
"Because he's surrounded by an entire city of people who believe in him. And because he knows he's doing exactly what he has to."
>>27684878
>"No, you idiot. He wins because he's a character in a cheesy comic book."
"A cheesy comic book that you've read how many issues of?"
>"Th-that doesn't have anything to do with this."
"Why do you read the stories, then?"
>"Because they're cool!"
"And why are they cool?"
>"Because they are! They've got punches, and aliens, and cool shit! Because, sometimes, it's nice to read about someone who can do anything they want, who does everything they can to stop horrible things from happening to people. Because sometimes it's nice to believe that things really will turn out okay. Is that what you wanted to hear?"
>She pulls the covers over her head
>"That's why. I like to think that I could be like that. But I can't. I'm just gonna fuck it up."
"Superman died against Doomsday. I'd say he fucked up pretty hard."
>"He's Superman."
"You're Rainbow Dash."
>"Wh-what's that supposed to mean?"
>You shrug
"I think that's your question to answer."
>"Shut up."
"No. Superman died, and then what happened?"
>"I know what happened."
"Yeah?"
>"He came back."
"Well, there you go."
>"But... I'm not Superman."
"No... no, you're not. But Superman's an alien with god-tier powers, right? You're just a regular girl. But, if you can recover from something like this, and run again... isn't that just as impressive."
>You take the picture of her from the nightstand
"This Dash won a race with perfect legs. What do you think she'd think of a girl who'd had her entire body shattered, and still kept running?"
>For a long time, Dash is silent
>>27685006
I want to believe
>>27685006
>Dash reaches out a trembling hand, and lays it atop the rehab pamphlet
>"She'd be pretty impressed."
"Damn right she would."
>"But... it's a lot of money. What if I fail?"
"Since when has Rainbow Dash ever worried about failing."
>Finally, she looks at you...
>And smiles
>"You know, you've got a point."
>Keeping on hand on the pamphlet, she takes ahold of yours, squeezing your fingers
>"You'd better be here for it, though. I'm not going through this bullshit by myself."
"Every day. Assuming I don't have something better to do."
>You wink
>"We both know you don't, asshole."
>She smiles, relaxing against the pillows
>"I can't believe I'm letting you talk me into this."
"It's definitely not the worst thing I've talked you into."
>"Ha. Got a point there."
>Suddenly, she sits back up
>"Can you tell them I'd like lunch, now?"
"Yeah, sure."
>"Good. Gotta keep up my strength, you know."
Alright. Pausing here. The next Dash updates will be the story finale. More Flutters coming tomorrow, in the mean time.
>>27685006
>>"He's Superman."
>"You're Rainbow Dash."
>>27685160
>"Since when has Rainbow Dash ever worried about failing."
>>Finally, she looks at you...
>>And smiles
>>"You know, you've got a point."
>>Keeping on hand on the pamphlet, she takes ahold of yours, squeezing your fingers
So this is the power of Jeff Manfeels...
Not bad...
>>27685160
god damn I'm tearing up because of how fucking sweet and happy this shit is. It can only go down hill from here right senpai?
>>27685308
I think Jeff missed the part about great responsibilities with said power.
I like reverse trap dash a lot and all but I mean... still waitin' on Anon to get that cute butters buns and watch Dash go cuckquean.
Dash and Fluttershy crossover green when?
>>27685160
AAARGH MUH HEART.
>>27686326
One, that Derpy is freaking me out, and two who said that this dash isn't the same dash frome the fluttershy story.
#headcanon is that the dash story is a prequel to the fluttershy one
>>27685160
these feels are making me all happy inside
>>27685160
I need a Columbine ending.
>>27686999
>>27680178
It punches things hard and doesn't have a defined power until the climactic final chapters.
I wonder if Dash is into anal. You know, because she wants to be like men and those can only fuck each other in boipussies.
>>27687578
Id have to say that she does but for a different reason, i think that she takes it up the ponut because getting pregnant would really mess up her workout schedule
>>27686673
...mother of god
>inb4 Flutter's dad kills Flutters
>>27685160
>mfw somehow everything will get even worse before it gets better
>mfw Wonderbolts took pics of what they were doing
>mfw they anonymously distribute them to the entire school
>mfw Dash winds upON THE SAME FUCKING BRIDGElike Christopher Reeve
>>27688203
Jeff said he wasn't going to get as dark again, relax
>>27689068
>believing that.
You areperhaps notso wrong.
>>27687592
You've never jacked off to bodybuilding pregnant women before have you?
>>27673862
>>27673873
>>27673925
>>27673982
>>27674080
>>27674914
Faggots, all of you.
>Hurt Durr I like tomboys
>Gadurkadur I don't like them when they're manly
What the hell are you even doing here posers? Just sucking you some good old Jeff dick?
>>27689106
Were has this been all of life?
>>27688123
Calm down, he only killed her hymen.
>>27689270
Piercings and tattoos don't exactly mean "manly" per se. It's all subjective shit, so if they don't like it, let them.
>>27689106
>>27689270
So tomboys can only be tomboys with piercings and shit?
Get the fuck outta here with that.
today was the first time i came to this thread.
Where has this been all my life?
>>27689889
We're always been here bby
>>27690042
this is my life now
btw im sketching a flutters now.so inb4 crappy art
>>27690075
What are you using? Wacom master race or another tablet?
>>27690075
I'm hype to see your Flutters, Anon. I can guarantee it will be a better drawing than anything I could do.
>>27690083
wacom ctl-480 and SAI
>>27690075
>>27690105
>>27690236
not so great as of now.its been quite a while since ive drawn anything.
i think some leggins and a big hoody might fit "him" well
>>27690264
Oh my, that's nice
No new updates from Jeff yet?
>>27690264
>Fishbowl eyes
Nope. I'm out.
>>27690264
>Not going full Hot Pants with her face
>>27690264
>>27690264
eyes look a little derpy
but its looking good otherwise m8
>>27690264
I want to grope "his" crotch when he's asleep only to find that he doesn't have a donger at all.
>>27690324
>>27690340
>>27690368
>>27690369
>>27690396
>>27690431
thanks for the feedback.i'll try to work on this whenever i have some time on my hands.will post results here
>>27690324
Not yet, sorry. Been at work all day. Will get something written tonight.
>>27690807
>Everybody get up it's time to slam now
>We got a real jam goin' down
Welcome to the Space Jam
>Here's your chance, do your dance at the Space Jam
>Alright
>Come on and slam, and welcome to the jam
>Come on and slam, if you wanna jam
>Hey you, watcha gon' do
>Hey you, watcha gon' do
>Hey you, watcha gon' do
>Hey you, watcha gon' do
>>27691652
>Party people in the house lets go
>It's your boy "Jayski" a'ight so
>Pass that thing and watch me flex
>Behind my back, you know what's next
>To the jam, all in your face
Wassup, just feel the bass
>Drop it, rock it, down the room
>Shake it, quake it, space kaboom
>Just work that body, work that body
Make sure you don't hurt nobody
>Get wild and lose your mind
>Take this thing into overtime
>Hey DJ, turn it up
>QCD gon' burn it up
Come on y'all get on the floor(walk thr dinosaur)
>So hey, let's go a'ight
>Everybody get up it's time to slam now
>We got a real jam goin' down
>Welcome to the Space Jam
{Here's your chance, do your dance at the Space Jam
>Alright
>Wave your hands in the air if you feel fine
>We're gonna take it into overtime
>Welcome to the Space Jam
>Here's your chance, do your dance at the Space Jam
>Alright
>Come on, it's time to get hyped say "hoop, there it is"
Come on, all the fellas say "hoop, there it is"
>Come on, one time for the ladies, say "hoop, there it is"
>Now, all the fellas, say "hoop, there it is"
>Right
Come on and run, baby run
Come on, come on, do it, run baby run
>Yeah, you wanna hoop, so shoot, baby shoot
>Uh, it's time to hoop, so shoot, baby, shoot, baby
Would Dash ever forgive Shitfire?
>>27692707
>forgiving the rapebolts
I want to see them suffer
I want to see dash ruin their reputation
I want to see dash beat all of their records
>>27692896
>>27692896
>I want to see dash beat all of their records
Dash will recover
Dash will run again
Press R to believe in Rainbow Dash
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>>27692707
The bigger question is: Did the rapebolts ever get punished?
I'm backbringing to you the brutal murder of innocent engineersby Pinkie
>>27669983
>Down in the plaza, in front of the entrance to a subway station, you find another drop pod
>You can't see if anyone's inside, but it's apparent there was a fight due to the half-dozen alien bodies cooking in the sun
>A bunch of Grunts are milling about the plaza, plasma pistols and needlers in-hand but not raised
>One is about to attach what looks like an explosive charge to the pod
>*BR-R-RT*
>Nope
>As you open fire, you get a mixed response from the aliens
>Some panic and run into the station, flailing their grey and calloused arms
>The ones who shoot at the two of you are quickly taken out
>With the plaza clear for now, the Sergeant makes his way down the stairs as you stay back to cover him
>A couple of the Grunts who ran found their balls and ran back out of the station, but a pair of precision shots with your magnum stops them dead
>You're turning out to be a pretty good shot with this thing
>You head for the crater's steps as Blitz takes out his fancy magnum and enters the station from the side
>A few squeaky cries and gurgles later, the Gunny reappears from the front and heads for the pod
>He's already trying to pry open the hatch when you get there, rounding a piece of spiky debris that must've fell from somewhere
>Just as you put your rifle down on the ground to help, Blitz heaves the hatch off
>He only finds an empty seat
>The two of you look to each other in confusion
>A second passes and two particular things happen:
>You hear something rise behind you
>Blitz says, "Aw, shit."
>You realize you are about meet your death and instinctively turn to it
>It's a floating blue ball with tentacles
>>27693502
>That's all you can see when the Sergeant grabs and throws you backwards
>You trip and fall to the ground, rolling, only to stop when Blitz falls on top of you
>Flat on your stomach, you look up to see the pink ball flare out with spiky black armor
>It lets out a shrill, almost electronic screech as you notice the damaged UNSC helmet attached to one of its tentacles
>Blitz, cursing wildly, finally gets his magnum off his thigh and starts shooting
>The thing has shields
>A shotgun blast from the side nearly depletes them
>You all turn to see another ODST appear from behind the drop pod
>He loads another 8 gauge shell with a satisfying *che-chick*
>Recovering from the shot, the thing shrieks again before its armored "head" tentacle gets blown to bits
>The ball drops like a rock onto the ground, and the new helljumper greets the two of you with a small wave
>Blitz waves back before getting back up
>He turns and starts to help you up when you hear a whine
>It's increasing in pitch
"What the-"
>Blitz realizes it's coming from the alien a second before you do
>"Get down!"
>He tackles you and sandwiches you between his armored self and the concrete
>The wind is knocked out of you
>Before you can take a breath to protest, the alien explodes in a pink fireball
>Heat and light washes over the two of you for an instant
>As the air cools and the ear-ringing subside you lay there, crushed under 150-some pounds of composite armor and toned muscle
>Blitz finally gets off of you and takes a knee
>You take the time to get some air into your lungs
>"You okay?"
"Yeah, yeah. Almost had my ribs smashed, but..."
>Blitz shakes his head before pulling you back onto your feet
>>27693511
>While he walks over to collect his rifle, he asks the new trooper
>"What the hell was that?"
>You walk over to your MA5, which was flung a ways when Blitz tossed you
>"You ever seen one before?"
>The trooper stays silent, prompting Blitz to take his helmet off
>"Hey, Pinkie. Did you turn deaf?"
>Pinkie, who has a chest lined with shells and a lot more grenades than usual on his belt, shrugs
>"Ah, I see."
>You look to Blitz-
>Woah
>When you think "Veteran Orbital Drop Shock Trooper" you think grizzled, grey-haired, and aged
>Blitz is clean-shaven and has a goddamn rainbow for hair
>He looks younger than you thought, too
>That youthful face is now showing a hint of annoyance
>"Permission to speak."
>You then hear him whisper, "Smartass."
>You look to Pinkie, who's visor depolarizes
>"No, I don't know what it was,"
>/She/ sounds young too
>Did the protagonist's squad drop in your city?
>"but it was gonna paste your asses good. Just like it did to the Captain."
>You look at where the new alien exploded, and chunks of blasted armor were embedded all over
>Damn, you were all lucky to not get any shrapnel
>Blitz walks over to one piece stuck in a pillar
>"Yeah, maybe."
>You're kinda agreeing with him on that
>No one's really dead until you see the body
>"Have you heard from Rarity? Jack?"
>"Negative." answers Pie
>"The Rookie?"
>The new trooper simply shakes her head
>Still not sure if you should say something, you look back to Blitz
>He has his hand to his chin and his eyes to the ground, stuck in frustrating thoughts
>His eyes (which are pink, or magenta, but definitely artificially-colored) slowly look up to meet yours
>There's an awkward second before the helljumper points to you
>"You said you were helping out a friend?"
>You nod, suddenly put into the spotlight
>"Where is he?"
"Well, he's over at the ONI Alpha Site."
>Pinkie asks, "Didn't the spook mention that before we dropped?"
>Spook?
>>27693520
>Blitz glares at her for a moment before saying, "Yes, she did."
>You turn to Blitz, slightly confused
"Wait, what exactly is your guys' mission? If it isn't a secret."
>Both of the troopers look to you, before shrugging
>Pinkie answers, "It kinda was."
>"But now I think it involves the Alpha Site, so that's where we're heading now."
>Blitz replaces his helmet and readies his BR
>"Alright Officer, it's your lucky day, 'cause we're coming with you."
>You can't help but feel slightly relieved
>As long as they don't drag into too hectic fights, you should be safe heading over to your friend
---
Not as much as I bought I would be able to get, but then again I write slowly even without distractions. Oh well.
I'll continue to focus on Anon and Blitz, so I won't really write any "flashbacks" regarding the rest of the squad, and anything I do write will just be put into a pastebin.
Also, at some point I want to get to the Rookie, but I don't want it to be a solo tour of the city's night life.What do people think of another Anonwho's underagefollowing the Rookie through the city? I'll flesh it out more when I get closer to writing it.
>>27693578
Sounds solid m8
I don't know about the kid being another anon tho, I'd throw in a snowdrop or some other child pone
>>27694743
Southern trees bear strange fruit,
Blood on the leaves and blood at the root,
Black body swinging in the Southern breeze,
Strange fruit hanging from the poplar trees.
Pastoral scene of the gallant South,
The bulging eyes and the twisted mouth,
Scent of magnolia sweet and fresh,
Then the sudden smell of burning flesh!
Here is fruit for the crows to pluck,
For the rain to gather, for the wind to suck,
For the sun to rot, for the tree to drop,
Here is a strange and bitter crop.
>>27690807
Thanks Jeff, I'm gonna try to keep this thread alive
>>27690500
cute flutters is cute
>>27693578
sounds like it'd get confusing
Is it a Dashie update or a Flutter's?
>>27695714
i think the next update will be butters
>>27695714
I'll be posting Flutters updates throughout the day. And then tonight, at 10 PM CDT, I'll post the Dash finale. Hope at least a few of you guys can be there for it, even though I know it's kind of a shitty time.
>>27696216
ill see what i can do.timezones a bitch.
really looking forward to the updates though
>>27696216
Are you still gonna do Dash's dream spinoff?
>>27696462
Yes. Though my track record for actually completing those one-offs is kind of bad. But I'll get to it at some point after the main Dash story finishes.
>>27693086
u-unf...
You know what we need?
Reverse-trap Big Mac
>>27697136
Big Gala?
http://pastebin.com/GGCZjdDX
>You awaken to the sound of very, very heavy breathing coming from above you
>For a few moments, you try your best to ignore it
>Fluttershy and you have somehow managed to entangle yourselves even more, to the point where you're squeezing her against your chest like a child
>Her skinny body radiates just enough to keep the blankets toasty warm, but not so much as to become sweltering
>The breathing increases in volume, and you finally force an eye open
>Dash is perched on your bed, staring at you
"Zzz.. Dash? Wha... gah!"
>You scoot back against the wall, protectively wrapping yourself around Fluttershy
"How long have you been there?"
>You keep your voice to a whisper, but still inject enough anger into your voice for her to get your point
>"Just a couple minutes, dude."
>She crosses a hand over her heart
>"You two are so damn cute together, you have no idea..."
"We... I... we were just cold, okay? It's not like this is a..."
>"No, dude, you don't have to explain it. You're just so perfect for each other, how could you resist?"
"...I hate you sometimes."
>Dash sticks her tongue out at you
>"Just go back to sleep. It's still early."
"Not with you watching. This is so weird."
>Somehow, Fluttershy is still conked out
>Or she's taken a page from Dash's book, and is just pretending to be in order to avoid the awkwardness
>"Come on, man. I won't do anything weird."
"I find that hard to believe."
>"Nah, don't worry. I took care of it after I woke up."
"That's... that's not any better!"
>"Oh, come on. If it were me and Spitfire, are you really saying you'd be completely disinterested?"
"I mean..."
>She winks
>"Just let me enjoy this, okay? It's just so pure..."
>>27697232
You really should tell her about the Fluttervag, Anon.And get revenge on her by the way of dykeshit.
>>27697136
We've had that, just non-humanized. It was in the RGRE thread http://pastebin.com/DCpkuwED
>>27697232
FLUTTERS
>>27697232
Anon should demand Fluttershy-Dashie dykeshit as revenge.
>>27697409
>dash has to teach flutters to be a woman as only another woman can
>>27697232
>Dammit, Dash...
>She's not gonna take it when she realizes Fluttershy's a she, is she?
>For a moment, you consider telling her yourself
>But, well... that's not your secret to spill
>Fluttershy can tell her when she wakes up, you figure
>In the mean time, though, why not mess with Dash a bit?
>You snuggle back into the covers, nuzzling your head atop Fluttershy's
>Dash lets out a tiny squeak
>"S-so cute..."
>You place a tiny "sleep-tight" kiss on Fluttershy's forehead
>The color rises in Dash's face
>She's visibly sweating now
>"Dude... my heart..."
"You know we're holding hands under this blanket, right?"
>Dash gasps, shivering
>"You're doing this on purpose now, aren't you!"
"Yeah."
>"You... dude, you're so gay. Just accept it."
>Dash's face brightens
>"Dude! You two should be the couple today!"
"What?"
>"Yeah! You know, while we're hanging out, or whatever. You two can be the couple! Like, just for pretend, but like... you know. I think it'd make him really happy. And it'd be *so* hot--"
>She catches herself, awkwardly chuckling
>"I mean cute! Cute, you know. Heh..."
>Dash runs a hand through her hair, trying too look innocent
"You want me to pretend to be dating someone else, while you watch?"
>"Y-yeah? I mean... what? It's not *that* weird."
>You raise an eyebrow
>"Oh, come on! It's not that weird! I spend all day, every day, being the awesomest I can for everyone else to enjoy. Maybe sometimes I just wanna be the one watching."
"Whatever you say."
>"So you'll do it!?"
>She grins, wriggling her eyebrows at you
>>27697439
>make out with butters
>tell dash you are gay and in love with him
i dont think she'd have a problem with that.
the fact that butters is actually a girl can be spilled later on
>>27697439
>"You know we're holding hands under this blanket, right?"
>>Dash gasps, shivering
Dash just came
>>27697439
"Will I pretend to be dating a dude while you follow us around like a creepy fangirl?"
>"Well, it sounds kinda bad when you put it like that."
>She rubs her right arm, looking admonished
>"I mean, you don't have to, dude. I'm... I'm sorry if I'm a little pushy with all this. It's just... I don't know, man. It's like watching something out of a manga, except way better. You two are just so perfect together, and it... it makes me happy, I guess."
>You stare at her
>"...and a little aroused."
>You stare harder
>"Okay, okay, a lot aroused. But... I don't know. The two of you are really, really cute together, and honestly it makes me kinda sad that you're not into him."
"Seriously?"
>"Yeah. I mean... he really needs someone."
"That's true..."
>"So, even if it's just for a day... I'd like to see you treat him super special. Because he deserves it."
"And you don't mind?"
>"Of course not, man. I don't need attention *all* the time. Just, you know... most of the time."
>She winks
>"But yeah. Where do you want to go?"
>You glance down at sleeping Fluttershy, and know immediately where you want to take her
"Is there any way you could get us some tickets to the zoo?"
Alright, pausing here with the Flutters updates. Her story will resume tomorrow. See you guys in 6 hours for the Dash finale.
>>27697232
>>"Oh, come on. If it were me and Spitfire, are you really saying you'd be completely disinterested?"
Jeff pls
>>27697578
>the element of loyalty has self-cucking fetish
>>27697686
>when you're so loyal to your friends you betray yourself
>>27697232
>mentioning getting lewd with Spitfire out of nowhere
Dash... have you been planning on putting on a show for Anon? Because I'm 99.998% sure that he'd be totally okay with it.
>>27697439
ANON
YOUR GIRLFRIEND IS A KEK
So how long before
>"OH ANON~!,YOU ARE BIGGER THAN MY DAD!"
>>27697802to soon
>>27697686
>implying she wouldn't join in
>>27697686
*self-keking
>>27697802I'll fuck you up faggot fite me irl 1vs1
>>27698592
>Fight me 1v1™
>Trying
What are you a fucking normy
>>27698725fight me irl fgt
Spoiler alerti lift
>>27697578
>him
Oh Dash.
>>27698798
