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>I want to write my own story but I'm new to writing.
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>>27347947
>pic
Take home and care for, become dad
>”What about them?”
>The pair your gaze was directed towards looked normal on the surface.
>Though the mare was walking, how should you put it… “oddly”
>”Bet you they screwed before heading out, it would explain her walk of shame.”
>Sitting on the patio of your humble home you rocked back and forth on your rocking chair.
>Your companion, a foul-mouthed little pony by the name of Starlight Glimmer kept you company as you watched the people and ponies passing by.
>Not willingly as she so often put it, she was your brother’s slave.
>Incognito the asshole, he got lucky and won some ridiculous amount of money and decided that he was going to fuck a girl in every country on the planet.
>And he made you a very nice offer, a paycheck and his home, all in exchange for watching over his slave pony till he got back, if he got back.
>Last you heard he was wanted on three counts exposing himself in a public stadium in Paraguay.
>But you were happy for him, he was living his dream. His sick, twisted, and demented dream.
>And you were making out like a bandit from his generous compensation.
>Hell with the amount of money he threw into your bank account you’d be able to afford a pony yourself and never have to work another day in your life.
>”Hey fuckwad, what about those two?”
>You were definitely going to get one who wasn’t such a bitch.
>”Yup I can tell, she took it in the pooper.”
>Jesus what did your brother teach this girl?
“Maybe she’s just not feeling well.”
>”Oh I’m sure getting your ass filled up would make anyone feel a little off.”
>>27348017
The /out/ bear has come to visit. I feel blessed
>>27348187
>Taking a big gulp water you just shook your head at her bluntness.
“Sometimes I wonder who’s a bigger weirdo you or my brother?”
>”Ha! It’s not my fault you humans are such hornballs. You’d stick your dick in anything if it even smiled in your general direction.”
>That’s not true, you had several friends who swore by the horsepussy but not you, no sir.
>Catching the movement out of the corner of your eye you saw Starlight get out of her seat and saunter over to yours.
>Before you could do anything she was sitting in your lap straddling you.
>”See even right now, I can tell.”
>Her hips began rocking back and forth, combined with her weight pressing down was making things happen for ole’ Anon Jr.
>”If I said we could go inside and you could fuck me you’d do it.”
>Her front hooves wrapped around your neck and as she moved closer.
>Licking your ear she let out a needy moan.
>”I’d do things for you that no human woman ever could.”
>If brain work good he say you in street and people see, but brain not work now.
>”Buuuut..” with a flash of light Starlight was back in her seat “I don’t fuck humans, so too bad.”
>You don’t know whether to be relieved or disappointed.
“I hate you so much right now.”
>”Oh I’m sure, by the way you should cover.”
>Looking at where she was pointing with her hoof you saw the tent that you were pitching.
>Yup fucking hatred for this horse.
>>27348433
>”I want to go shopping.”
“What? Why now?”
>”I don’t know, because I want to. Do we need a reason?”
“Well, yes.”
>”I want some lingerie.”
“You’re a horse, what fucking reason do you need lingerie for anyway?”
>This pony was going to drive you insane one of these days.
>Just think of the money Anon, one day your brother will be back and she’ll be gone.
>Then you could be happy again.
>”Because I want some, now get off your ass and lets go.”
“I don’t think you thought this through very well Starlight. You’re a pony, you never wear clothes anyway so why in god’s name would you need lingerie?”
>”I think I would look good in some panties. With a flank like mine I know it for a fact. Besides I’ve seen you eyeing my butt.”
>She did have a nice butt, not that you’d ever tell her.
>”So grab that card master gave you and lets fucking go!”
>Points for nice butt nullified by a completely shit personality, why the fuck did your brother ever get her.
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Trying something new, hope you all like it.
>>27347947
Taser to the base of the neck followed by dragging a pony in a box back into my car.
More tasers and dragging for anybody who saw.
In the end, I don't know.
Fixed hanging lamp while she is in traction?
Use her as a home veterinary service?
Maybe have her assist in an exotic animal butchery practice.
Oh and the rest of the people get dumped in an area with no cell reception for 20 miles.
I'm sure they'll have the worst of it all.
>>27348583
Not the kind of place I thought you'd go with Starlight, but I like it!I still kinda want to do the whole Starlight gets un-broken, immediately tries to manipulate White Knight Anon, but I know some other writefag would do it better than I could.
>>27348686
I wanted to try something different, a story about a pony who's already unbroken and doesn't hate the whole "slave" thing but isn't exactly happy with it either.
Besides, it leaves room for her to sexually frustrate Anon with no abandon. Just look at her smirk, you know she would.
>>27348583
Great, now every time she shows up in an episode, I'll be hearing an entirely different voice in my head.I can live with this.
>>27347947
Annihilate all the humanity so that no one can hurt you and can take care of her forever
>>27348583
>Before your brother left he gave you a shiny credit card.
>”This is for any expenses that Starlight needs, just use it for whatever. But no hookers, not unless it’s her birthday.”
>Deep down you knew he meant well.
>But sure as shit he was probably going to give you a call about this particular charge.
“Thirteen hundred dollars worth of panties, I hope you’re proud of yourself.”
>”Oh I am! Especially those black lacy ones. They made my ass looked amazing.”
>Yes, yes they did.
“My brother probably isn’t going to be happy about this.”
>”Master won’t care, he likes seeing me happy. That white thong made me happy, so he’ll be happy.”
>There’s no logic to this mare.
>Sometimes she’ll act like a normal pony, then in an instant she’ll become a tease.
>Oh well, no use in worrying about it now.
>Laying in bed you pondered the events of the day.
>Starlight being a bitch, making inappropriate comments about ponies she didn’t even know.
>Dry humping you, panty shopping.
>Could have been worse.
>Your bedroom door opening brought you out of your musings.
>”Move over.”
>Starlight trotted in paying you no mind.
“I still don’t understand why you continue sleeping in here. You have your own room with a king bed in it.”
>”I do have my own room, but I want to sleep in here. So shut up and move over.”
>When she jumped in bed and snuggled up to you there was a moment of silence.
>”Goodnight Anon.”
“Goodnight Starlight.”
>Listening to her steady breathing you felt yourself slip off into dreamland.
>>27349043
Okay then here's the pastebin just in case: http://pastebin.com/X05NyF7q
Who is this lavender semen demon?
>>27349125
TwilightTwinkle
>>27348583
Her teasing and bullying anon could be fun for a while.but i would like it more if it lead to a relationship
>>27347947
>pic
1. Sell to highest bidder.
2. Go to camp of refugees/war-prisoner ponys
They just want to get rid of them
3. Buy a bunch of pones
4. Goto 1.
>>27349164
>this is what happens when you don't update the page often.
bump
>>27349043
>”Can you believe this garbage?”
>Sitting on the couch with Starlight you watched the show with a neutral expression.
>A lanky guy and a pink mare were both being interviewed on some sort of day time talk show.
>”When I found her I knew she was more than a slave, she was my soulmate.”
>Starlights response was to make a gagging noise.
>The show was about humans who didn’t “own” ponies, rather it was about humans to chose to have relationships with them.
>”She’s faking it, look she’s kissing him with her eyes open!”
>You fail to understand this train of thought.
“That’s important?”
>”Of course it’s important. If somepony’s in love that’s not how they kiss.”
“Speaking from experience?”
>”Pfff anypony with half a brain would know that. That slut’s just trying to get out of being a slave, and what better way than to fuck some ugly human.”
“Whatever you say.”
>”Of course you’d say that, why if some mare just told you ‘I love you, not because I have to but because I want to’, you’d eat it up.”
>Honestly you don’t know how you would respond to that.
>You never had a relationship so who knows how you’d respond to anyone professing their love to you.
>A pair of blue eyes blocked the television show you were both watching.
>Starlight was now in your lap, staring deeply into your eyes.
>”Sometimes I wonder if you even notice how I look at you or how I feel.”
>>27349798
>Closing her eyes she pressed her lips against yours.
>At first you were surprised, but gradually relaxed.
>Feeling her tongue press against your lips you opened your mouth and allowed her entry.
>Strawberries, she tasted like strawberries.
>This was a losing battle, your tongues fought trying to win a battle you really didn’t care about winning.
>Why was she doing this?
>Did she care about you?
>You don’t know how long you two were just locked together but the eventual need oxygen parted you both.
>Both out of breath she opened her eyes and smiled.
>”See, told you so.”
>Sticking her tongue out at you she hopped of your lap and went back to her spot on the couch.
>”All a mare has to do is tease some human with the V and they’ll do anything.”
>Inside you felt conflicted, so what she just did was only to prove a point?
“Starlight don’t ever do that again.”
>You don’t even know why you’re upset about it.
>”Awww was that your first kiss? I stole pwoor wittle Nonny’s first smooch.”
“Fuck off Starlight.”
>Standing up you grabbed the house keys off the table by the door before exiting.
>You put up with a lot of her shit, but this was crossing a line.
>The problem being, you don’t even know what line it was.
>>27349807
More subrogation ponies when?
When?
>>27349798
The pink mare is Pinkie Pie or another pony?
You story is good
>>27349807
>>The problem being, you don’t even know what line it was.
I think to Starlight even knows what she wants
Not if the ponies are enslaved among them but known to Spike is practically a slave
>>27347947
>Sundae
Silly F, ponies dont get sundaes, they get oats.
>>27351706
>not subjecting unruly ponies to vicious brain freezes via sundaes
Go ahead and call me an edgelord, but I know how to keep my ponies in line better than you, sir!
>>27351927
>subjecting unruly ponies to vicious brain freezes via sundaes
You are truly a monster Anon.
ONE IS A BY THE BOOK POLICE OFFICER
THE OTHER IS A HORSE
TOGETHER, THEY FIGHT CRIME
COMING SUMMER OF 1990: MOUNTED PATROL
I spilt milk on my keyboard, posting from phone, no update.
Sorry
Blame twilight
>>27348433
>>27348583
ok this is great, hoping anon reigns her in by the end.
>>27349807
come on just a little beating, shes gotta know hes not a total pushover.
>>27351974
NEIGH INTENSIFIES
we need writefags here >>27337872
>>27353005
No you don't. You just want more because your OP was shitty.
>>27353005
Fuck off, stop trying to mooch off us, we have enough shit as is.
>>27348433
>not bending her over right then and there
saged
reported for illegal content
police report filed
called the cops
called the coastguard
most beta Anon I've read about in a good week
0/10 induced vomitnot that there's anything wrong with enjoying a good tease
my boner just had an idea
Anon buys mare for work and whipping
that is mares fetish
when he comes home he catches her wearing his cloth
sometimes he wakes up and sees mare staring at his hands, sometimes liking them
he sprays water at her when she acts naughty
someday Anon buys other mare
2. mare doesnt like humand
1. mare is disgusted by inferior fetishes
1. mare picks on second mare for hating humans n stuff
mare is for riding after all
>mare is for riding
>mare is for whipping
Are these our very own ebin maymays? Man, Slave Pone general is really starting to come into its own.
>>27349807
>Going to the park always relaxed you when you were younger and your brother was causing havoc at home.
>So laying there on the grass, enjoying the sun, you tried getting your mind off of a certain pink coated pony.
>She got under your skin with that kiss, so what if that was your first kiss? It wasn’t any of her damn business.
>Maybe you were looking forward to having wizard powers when you turn thirty, and she just placed those plans in jeopardy.
>But you do have to admit, she was a good kisser.
>You felt your phone start vibrating in your pocket, you had a pretty good guess at who was calling.
>Did you really want to deal with more of his bullshit?
>Looking at the screen a picture of your brother handcuffed being led away by a police officer was pasted front and center.
>Resigning yourself you tapped the “answer” icon.
“Hey Idiot, how’s it going?”
>”Anon it’s good to hear your voice, how’s my favorite gay brother doing?”
“I’m fine, how’s the whole being raped in every prison thing going for you?”
>”Oh it’s great! I’ve seen more dicks than Cher and Madonna combined.”
“So besides this, what do you want, I’m kind of in the middle of an existential crisis here.”
>”My bank called, something about an odd charge, why are you buying a shit ton of panties? Don’t tell me Grandma Mouse was right about you smoking pole?”
>Your grandma could make an old sailor cry with how she talked.
>>27354688
>”So I’m going to guess Starlight did it, listen bro, if she starts getting out of line and pulling shit that ain’t right just…..what….do”
“Incognito you still there?”
>”Fu…ing….rec… Anon there we go fuck, I’ll make it quick. Just fuck her and she’ll calm down. She might be having her seasonal thing and a good dicking is the only way…”
>You ended the call right there.
>You were many things, but a horsefucker was not one of them.
>Your mind betrayed as memories of the kiss came back.
>Okay so maybe you were 75% sure you weren’t a horsefucker.
>Your phone made a noise indicating you received a text message.
>”Don’t be scared of the marevag Anon, just remember its more scared of you than you are of it.”
>Its times like these where you questioned yourself on who you hated more, Starlight or your brother.
>Standing up and dusting yourself off you headed home.
>It was a long shot but you were going to have a chat with your brother’s slave.
>Maybe she’d listen to reason about how her actions were inappropriate.
>Opening the front door you heard two voices coming from the living room.
>”I still don’t understand?”
>”Twilight I told you a thousand times, if you don’t make yourself look good your master won’t give you the ‘D’ no matter what you do.”
>Against your better judgment you walked towards the living room.
>Starlight had her previous days shopping strewn about and was helping another mare pick out a pair.
>”Here try these, they’ll go well with your coat.”
>Okay, you’d talk with her later, a nap sounded like a better option right now.
>>27354739
I like where this is going.
>>27354930
Reminder: fucking another man's poneslave is rape unless he gives you permission.
>>27353200
>>not bending her over right then and there
not gonna lie i kind a agree, sometimes sassy mares need some forceful dick.
>>27354739
>Just fuck her and she’ll calm down.
good, this pleases me. it better be rough.
Is mare for pestering? I believe mare is for pestering.
>>27354739
>Your hips slammed against hers you pistoned in and out.
>Starlights mouth was open, her tongue lolling out while moans of please reverberated out her throat.
>”Rut me Anon, fill me up, I need it!”
>Her pussy clamped down hard on you as she finished that sentence.
>Good god was she tight, at this rate you wouldn’t last another minute.
“Ease up a little Starlight.”
>”I don’t care! Breed me Anon, make me a mother!”
>Her clit winked providing a more stimulation as you kept fucking her senseless.
>The room reeked of sweat and sex, the covers held a pretty similar combination as Starlights essence literally was everywhere.
>”Don’t stop keep fucking me!”
>This mare has caused you nothing but headaches for the past few months, now it was time to simply hatefuck her bitchy attitude out.
>Reaching down you grabbed one of her teats and began playing with the nipple.
>Holy fuck, her pussy clamped down even harder than before.
>Any tighter and you were sure she was going to break it off.
>”I’m COMMMMIIIINNNG!!!!!!”
>”Are you coming or not dingus?”
>Opening your eyes you stared into the pair floating above you.
>”We have grocery shopping to do so get the fuck up and let’s go!”
>Lifting the covers you checked that your underwear was still on, it was.
>It was only a dream.
>A dream where you and Starlight fucked like there was no tomorrow.
>Somehow this was your brother’s crazy notions fault, you were sure.
>>27353005
Fuck off m8 :^)
>>27357386
can we at least spank her?
>>27357804
Spanking isn't ruled out, but Starlight must do something really naughty for Anon to do that as a punishment.
>>27358231
aw yeah now you got my attention.
>>27358231
bringing another pony to his house without permission seems pretty bad already. the lesson would sink in more if twilight was there to see what happens to naughty slaves.
>>27354739
This is too good
And the stories?
>>27359296
soon
>>27357386
Look, my bedroom methods in both fantasy and IRL tend to take the gentle route. Keep that in mind as I suggest wemake this mare beg.
Rape
>>27359560
im on board
>>27359560
Ignore her, but start going pantsless when at home. Or take the Ling route and buy her a dildo. Tell her she will have to take care of herself. Too bad the dildo is so small, she can't get off with it. Either way, she will end up begging before long.
>>27360447
Not aggressive enough. I was thinking something more along the lines ofpinning her to the floor and sweet talking her until she openly admits what she wants.
Can pull the whole caressing creep deal throughout as well. Mmm
>>27362471
And, of all these, Glim Glam was the most tyrannical and oppressive.
>>27362574
uh... id say the guy that literally has everyone in chains is a bit more tyrannical and oppressive.
>>27362574
Only because Celestia isn't pictured.
>>27362586
You don't see too far past your pupils, it seems.
>>27362589
And this guy has the right idea. Long term stagnation trumps short term extremes.
>>27362471
Anyone else notice that the line of crystal pony slaves goes mare-stallion-mare-stallion? Wonder if he ever let them/made them engage in a pone orgy train for his amusement.
>>27352059
IT LIVES
though now i need to figure out a way to clean up the keys themselves because its a bit sticky and crunchy
>>27357386
Is it bad I actually find Trollight Glimmer more interesting than canon glimmer on the show?
>>27363006
you can take the electronics out of the keyboard, pop off all the caps and throw it in the dishwasher.
>>27363032
thats what i was thinking about doing
Kek. Happy mother's day, /SPG/.
>>27363071
Dude, you are like a week too late for 'murrican mother's day.the one that matters.
>>27363127
On Uruguay it is.I don't care when. The thought matters more.
I'm surprised no one has made a story using mature mares as protagonists, well, this mini history of Diamond Tiara mom, but not with Mayor Mare, Twiligth Velvet, Mr. Cherrilee among others mares
Hi. Just a page 7 bump passing through.
>>27363191
We did actually have a short mini-story with Spoiled Rich as the main character, but it was brief and not very well remembered.
more glimmer when
>>27364454Next weeks episode.Probably. I avoid spoilers.
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>ITS SO BIG
>Such a big, juicy…meaty..
>You shake the haze from your head, eyes wide, staring downward
>Then take a deep breath and lean in, taking a deep breath
>Smells delicious
>Anon smacks your horn
>DAMN
>the waiter gives you a kind smile
>Onlookers did not
>A soft green glow is in your eyes, which you see reflected on Anons knife
>Oh
>You sit back in the eat and Anon starts cutting the steak into small bite sized bits
>The timer hasn’t started and the small instruction leaflet explains he can do pretty much anything but eat it, but as soon as he takes a bite, it starts
>Its taking a painfully look time
>Yourself and Chang practically drools
>Damn humans and their obsession with meat turning your into carnivores
>>27364485
>Cadence and Sunburst seem disgusted but intrigued, Sunburst seeming to be gauging Anons stomach, doing some mental calculations, and figuring up something
>You suspect he doesn’t think Anon can do it
>You hope he doesn’t, the steak is medium rare and looks delicious
>And he didn’t even get you any
>With a loud, angered, sigh you lean back in your chair to watch
>Look look at whats on his place
>Shrimp Cocktail, Baked Potato, Salad, with Roll, Butter, and of course the 72 oz. Steak
>Anon looks at the clock
>Stabs his meat
>And begin!
>>27364495
>You watch with suspicion, which soon changes to surprise
>he’s downing it with ease
>Your eyes go wide, Sunburst stares as well, you feel as if his mental calculations are falling apart before him
>Comical really
>Chang cheers for him happily and Cadence seems to be ignoring it
>Probably all that delicious meat
>Anon took bite after bite, followed by a gulp of beer, then repeated
>At least 12 oz of steak
>You can’t even eat THAT much, but soon he was racking up more and more
>Half way through, Changs eyes are wide
>Poor girls drooling
>Sunburst grabs a pen from Anons pocket, and a napkin, he writes some stuff down in equestrian
>Then passes it to you
>You shrug
“I have no idea what any of this means”
>You poke at the numbers curiously
>Anon takes another bite
>“It means that Anons a fatass”
>Anon chokes back a laugh
>You don’t
>Cadence even giggles some
>Anon drops his fork, over dramatically grabbing the table
>Several eyes are wide
>He lets out a long, hard burp
>Gagging in the process
>He stares down at the steak
>Less than 1 ounce left
>Just a bite to him
>I couldn’t hold back my both amusement and cheering
“LETS GO ANON YOU CAN DO IT”
>>“DON’T BE A PUSSY” Chrysalis followed
>“WOO” Chang and Sunburst called in unison
>Cadence gave a little clop, cringing as she sees some of the red juices on the plate
>You and chang grab each other with a grin
>Sometimes you DO like your sister
>Sometimes
>He smiles at you then picks up the last chunk
>15 minutes left
>How..
>Oh right the other stuff
>Anon looks at the rest of the meal with a burp
>He takes the shrimp, with the cocktail sauce, roll, and butter, and stuffs it in the baked potato, taking it into his hand he eats it
>Like a disgusting burrito of starch and crustatian
>He just uses his juice covered fork to scoop the salad all together into his mouth, not even putting anything on it
>The salad looked cheap and not that great
>>27364497
>Technically, he was done, but for some reason, Anon came up with a new idea, something to emphasis he can do more
>The absolute madman
>He grabs the plate and sucks the fat and juices off it
>You gag some as he drinks the grease
>Then finishes his half of the beer
>He grins at everyone watching
>The beer and grease, it becomes obvious, was not required by any means
>He turns to the waiter
>“I’m not done”
>A questioning, but also slightly annoyed look crosses his face
“I want the biggest glass you got full of more of this Ale, and the apple pie”
>You feel something in your stomach cry for the same
>While you brain tries to comprehend that your averagely built friend, barely 175 pounds, just finished that whole thing off and wants more
>Plus a boot of beer
>Well, the boot is understandable, it IS a nice little plastic boot
>He finishes his last two items much slower, and orders their smaller 16 oz steak meal for you and chang
>Nice of him
>You all pile back into the RV after Anon pays, getting his money back from the challenge, only to hand some back to cashier for the meals
>Anon drives to the very back of the parking lot, out of the sight of any people, and goes back to his bed, flopping down, and needing a rest
>You and chang sit at the table to eat
>well, you do, Chang sits on your bed
“HEY NO EATING ON MY BED”
>You yell, but she keeps eating
>You sigh and shake your head
>Sunburst eats in silence in front of you, a smile on his face
>He passes you the note he wrote out with the numbers
>it has scribbles in it
>“I lost count” He laughs
>You smile at him
“So whats next Anon?”
>You look over to the poor man laying on the bed, his stomach gurgling
>He pushed himself too much just for show
>“Albuquerque”
“Huh?”
>“We’re passing through there next. I need to make a left turn there”
>You didn’t understand, nor question it
>>27364511
>>27364497
>>27364495
>>27364485
Behold, A decent green attempt!
>The five stages of grief.
>Denial.
"No! You won't take her away from me!"
>Anger.
"YOU STUPID IDIOTS, STOP DOING THIS!"
>Bargaining.
"Pleeeeeeease let her go, can you?"
>Depression.
"...*sob* *sob*..."
>...Acceptance.
"...I will be your slave, if that's what you want..."
>His smug grin on his face clearly presents the impending doom you're going to meet.
>But now it doesn't matter.
>Your life, Your deepest love...
>Twily...
>...is finally going to be free.
>But only if you accepted your fate.
>You already did, though
>The millions of feelings rushing through your back...
>...Fear, Loathe, Guilt, Despair...
>...Submission.
>You're no longer free.
>In exchange of your daughter's freedom.
>Twily's freedom.
>The rivers of tears...
>...Tears of acceptance and suff-
>"Okay, Enough pow-wow for now. There comes my part of the deal."
>He aims his claw towards your sacrifice.
>Twily...
>Still untouched.
>No bruises, nor whipmarks...
"Ha... Ha..."
>It's a miracle.
>Thank Celestia she's alright. Really.
"Thank you. Thank you."
>"Ahem. 'Thank you' who?"
>His playful smile already gives you the answer...
>But there's another feeling that resonates inside you...
>...Hesitance.
"Ha... Huh..."
>Looking away ashamingly with a remorseful smile, you let out what he was desperately waiting for you to say...
"...Thank you, Master."
>"Okay, It is time to go, shall we?"
>You open your mouth to say 'Yes', but he gives you no time to do it.
>So you close your mouth as he cracks open the shackles and chains around you, keeping you in place.
>The clangs, hinges and squeals they make ensure your partial freedom.
>But he still doesn't trust you that much yet.
>He didn't take out the horn ring, the one preventing you to use your magic.
>But still.
>Twily's going to be free, and you can't be more excited about it.
>And he... Anon... is going to let you see her running into freedom.
>An awesome status that lets you do what you want.
>>27364621
>But it was taken from you, and given to your daughter... Twily.
>Not only the chains can hinge.
>Staircases can too.
>And doors.
>You were going to get out of that stinky, dusty place.
>'Basement', he would call it sometimes.
>'Torture Chamber' for you.
>But now you're breaking free of that place.
>And right to another door.
>The same door you entered right before going to the torture chamber.
>Where he'd whip you.
>Smack your rump with his riding crop.
>And worst of all... Rut you like there was no tomorrow.
>You still have fresh memories of every lash and whip he marked onto you.
>Hey... She's leaving.
>Twily is leaving you behind.
>To meet and greet a new world.
>She unfolds her still untouched wings, and prepares to take off.
>The whoosh she made to fly away from you, is something you'll never forget.
>Ever.
>"Now it's time to do something. I'm out of ideas. Heh... Do you have any?"
>You've spent days without eating something.
>You lost the track of time long ago...
>...Did you?
>An internal gargle inside you makes its way to your brain, reminding you of your state of hunger.
"I'm starving, Can we get something to eat?"
>He places a claw under his... lower muzzle? And looks upwards like if he was thinking.
>"Yeah, I'm kind of starving right now. I'll call."
>>27364628
K. Feedback & Criticism Inc. Is welcome. And gonna lurk around to see what happens on the /mlp/ world.
>>27364511
I feel like the pacing has accelerated a LOT
>>27364649
truth be told i'm running low on ideas, pushing myself to get to the future parts i already planned.
But for the most part the only ideas people have offers have been things that i can't really do till later on, or are just not usable
Basically they're in the west and there isn't a lot to do along the pathway
Bumpaholics!
>>27347947
>Pic question
I'd laugh because i finally lost it. I can see ponies in real life.
>>“The hell is that thing?”
>“My pony”
>>“It got cancer or something?”
Hey lads, this thread looks stable again. Drama fade away finally?
If so I may return soon then.
>>27364986
Welcome to Bumpaholics Anonymous. The first step is to acknowledge you have a bumping problem. Of which i do not. Clearly.
Bumping with all my might.
Recently drew this. Relates to the thread.
Also, just fucking merge already, it's not like either one of you is active enough to sustain yourself alone.
tfw not enough time to colour it : <
>posting about merging in SiM
>Then in SPG
To leve it's the second door to the right at the hallway.
>>27366378
actually one is active enogh
Pls dont start this shit again
awesome art
Im jealous
>>27365916
Drama horizon seems clear for now, yes.
>>27366378
>it's not like either one of you is active enough to sustain yourself alone.
???
>>27364628
>>27364621
Cant delete this and repost in the right thread.This one being SiM
>>27366378
magnificent, senpai =))
slavery bump
>>27348042
[Relentless snuggles intensify]
>>27365916
neat
>>27364511
Fireking yes.
Good to see thing picking up, actually. Ling shenanigans are fun and all, but the truth is it's good to get back to actual story as well. Nothing wrong with a mix of the two.
>>27366711
From what I've read of your green, this fits perfectly in here.
slave if for riding is canon
bump
S4 E22 Slavery is canonpage8 bump
>>27364497
>“I have no idea what any of this means”
Foul creature!
DO NOT UNDESTIMATE HUMANS!!!!!!!
so many things to do
need to focus
>>27370284
Sombrero looks hungry.
Would feed and rub belly afterwards
>>27370490
Yes. Stallion needs to put some weight on to be suitable for riding.
>>27349180
>>sell biological self automated life support system of earth.
Legit if this shit actually happened I would buy as much Pegasi I could, train them to be loyal, and then rent out services to get rain water in key locations for agriculture. I would lightning blitz this shit as fast as I could while remaining in total control of my corps stock so that I'm sitting on a pone empire. I would keep the ponies loyal by promising a life free of rape and the ability to retain a semblance of community due to the very large numbers of them belonging to me. Once I had enough cash and control I would bend their use for humanitarian efforts to curb climate change and improve the habitability of the planet using their based magics.
>>27370596
Huh.
I would train mine to shit on my enemies' cars.
Seems kind of petty now.
>>27364511
shouldn't anon simply be dead at this point? I understand competition eatings are a thing but thats a 5lb steak, + everything else.
>>27370681
>implying Anon isn't just another fatass neckbeard.
>>27370681
Nope, though he's going ot have the biggest bowel movement this RV has ever seen
This chick here >>27369536 ate 3 of them in under an hour, plus all the sides.
>>27370593
Indeed, a thin stallion is a weak stallion.
>>27370593
>>27371952
Still waiting for a nice slave pone riding story.
Mr Thread. Here comes your salvation with a discussion.
Is mare for sexual? You talk about riding, whipping but not rape? Weird isn't it?
>>27372812
All things considered I dont have any sexual attraction to horses but I do like Dominance and submission with horsies. particularly in the way you would normally dominate horses.
Mare is for sexual simply because most people love anon and sticking their dick in stuff.
>>27372812
Mare is not for sexual.
Mare is for hard work.Sexual is just a perk.
>>27372812
mare is for sexual,
stallion for riding and
whipping is for both
>>27373236
how does one sexual a whip, let alone ride it?
>>27373273
>not knowing how to sexual a whip
>not knowing how to ride a whip
C'mon Anon. Get serious!
>>27373881
>using a whip
>not using a flail
How do you expect me to take this seriously?
>>27373918
>using flail
>not using dick black
>>27373236
>whipping is for both genres
Fix'd
ALSO: I would sexual a whip but never for riding
>>27357386
need more of this. also spitfire when.
>>27373236
Mare is not for sexual
Mare is for driving
>>27373236
Why can't mare be for riding, Anon?
Mare wants to help you save money on gas.
>>27375734
I want to ride the two largest maresat the same time
I honestly like to see more pony slaves being used for a profession, like is cadence was bought by a marriage counselor, or luna a therapist, things like that where their owners use them to enhance their professional lives.
>>27376564
We don't have many of these past the obvious Rarity, Pinkie, and Fluttershy.
>>27376700
Bon Bon and Twist as confectioners.
Flower sisters as florists.
Crafty Crate as a mover.
Derpy as a deliverymare.
Apples and Carrot Top as farmers.
Maud as a geologist.
Most ponies have actual jobs they could be doing instead of being sex slaves or brute labor.
Some have even been featured in stories doing the jobs they love.
>>27377015
Even dash could do work for the national weather services, she may not understand why dropping these doodads into tornadoes and hurricanes is important, but that's not her job anyway.
>>27377099
No. She works at the come and go.
>tfw no mare to whip
>tfw no stallion to ride
>>27377564
>tfw no mare to help at shitty retail job
>tfw no pony to share a beer with
I live n shit
anyway i decided to do a bit of a time skip. Update tonight
>>27378776
[insert appropriate word here]
>>27378776
good to hear. im surprised we dont have more changling stories. a slave thats dependent on her master loving her to live sounds like an easy prompt.
>>27378870
to be honest I just love the chrysalis angle. with bugmom watching in and being like a covert commander khan sending ling and anon to rescue changelings.
>>27375734
That rider needs to loosen that strap when they aren't on celestia. it's gonna constrict her.
what happened to that chrysalis and her stuffed pikachu story?
last time I saw it she awakes after a full day of sleep by anon
dont tell me its dead too
>>27379413
I won't, then.
>>27379413
Wait, what Chrysalis with stuffed Pikachu story? Anyone have a pastebin?
Remember to pick an appropriately sized pony for riding, Anons.
>>27380989
Should I feel bad that this gave me an erection?
>>27381204
>silver spoon
>erection
seems perfectly normal to me
>>27381204
No, but you should feel bad because you will never ride Silver Spoon
>>27380322
Coming Out of Your Cocoon (Chrysalis): pastebin.com/0X18Gr3R
Anon being a whiteknight treats queen Chrysalis like a pet more than a slave
no new updates from last time I checked
>yell at the top of my lungs to any people around
"WHO THE FUCK DID THIS WAS IT YOU OR YOU I FUCKING CANT
>i grab flutter shy softly and pick her up with care and start to walk away as i reassure her that she will be safe
>i get to my house get some soup and tea for flutter shy after lying her on the couch
>i give her the soup and tea and ask her who did this to her
>while looking in the cabinets and stuff looking for a first aid kit
>if she replies and dose not know then i tell her to get some rest and call me if she need something
>but if she knows who did it to her then i would ask her if she knows the cell number or the address or license plate or any way of finding them
>if she knows nothing do nothing
>if she knows any of them ill find the person and i will kill them slowly and for a long time then put the body in a fire put the ashes in a box piss in the box then put the ashes in my garden for some reason.
End i know i need help.
>You are Anon
>Your head is not happy with you
>Nor is the majority of your body
>You drank too much last night
>You have to piss
>But you don't want to turn on a light
>Engage auto-pilot
>You walk straight into a wall
"FUCK!"
>The bathroom's door should be here!
>Wait
>You're not in your old apartment
>You're going to have to get some light to get there
>You approach the switch
>3
>2
>1
>Flick
>The pain is real
>After a few moments your eyes adjust and you manage to keep them open for a bit
>You're in the living room
>You must have fallen asleep on the couch
>Figures
>You go to the bathroom
>After the sweet release of all that fluid from your bladder, you decide that a hangover breakfast is in order
>Moonie will probably need some too
>She seemed pretty hammered in the last few memories you have of the night
>As you begin to prepare your hangover foods you hear someone coming down the stairs
>Cheerilee has arrived looking cheery and well rested
>"Good morning Anon."
>Jesus christ, she's so damn happy
>"How was your night?"
>She's getting a bit too close to your legs for you to be ok with right now
"Don't do this to me."
>"What?"
"I'm hung over. This whole happy cheery morning person thing you've got going,"
>You gesture to all of her
"It's not going to work for me for at least a couple more hours."
>She gives you a look of genuine concern
>"But, Anon."
"What?"
>"I'm not a morning person. I'm a morning pony."
"Out of the kitchen."
>She just laughs and goes into the living room
>Hold up, did she fucking wink over her shoulder at you?
>Fuck it, you're not dealing with this right now
>You wonder if this is how Moondancer feels all the time
>Speak of the nerd horse, and she shall appear
>Moondancer has emerged from her with a look of misery
"I know that feel, friend horse."
>She just grumbles at you and walks over to the counter
"I've got some hangover food almost done."
>"Thanks."
>She walks off
>You plate up the food and set them at the table
"Food's up."
>>27382600
Fuck I forgot to trip
>Cheerilee practically skips in and takes a seat right next to you
>Moondancer trudges in a few moments later and shoots you an annoyed look
>You ignore it
>If she has a problem she can use her words like a big girl
>"Thank you so much for helping me out, that was the best sleep I've had in MONTHS and..."
>You ignore her and eat your food
>It seems like Moondancer is doing the same
>Good on you Moondancer
>>27382600
>>You are Anon
>>Your head is not happy with you
>>Nor is the majority of your body
>>You drank too much last night
>>You have to piss
>"Here, Skittles," you whistle, "come on, girl!"
>>27382619
>After breakfast you shower and take a few more minutes to recover from your hangover before you put your suit and tie on and head back downstairs
>You find Cheerilee sitting on the couch, apparently waiting for something
>She looks up at you
>"What now?"
"I'm going to need way more context for that question before I can even think about the answer to that."
>"About my relocation. What's the next step?"
"Probably some stupid bullshit that Moondancer will end up handling."
>"It's not stupid and you're going to be helping me."
>You and Cheerilee both jump at Moondancer's sudden appearence
>She looks like she's recovered enough to be a bossy grump again
>Wait a minute
"Something just occurred to me."
>Moonie rolls her eyes and Cheerilee just tilts her head
>"Oh boy here we go."
"I own you..."
>Moondancer glares at you... harshly
"And if I own you, that means you don't get to give me orders..."
>She glares harder
"I get to give YOU orders!"
>Glaring intensifies
"Moondancer, fetch me an ice cream sandwich!"
>Is she actually glaring so hard that she's shaking?
>Cool.
>"Anon, I need you to answer this truthfully: Are you retarded?"
"I have my moments."
>"I'm just going to go on with what I was saying now: The next step is to get you over to Red Victor's tabletop games. It's not terribly far from here, but it's in the city, so we'll have to be careful."
>Cheerilee looks a bit nervous
>"When do we leave?"
>"Today, Vic's got his orders coming in today and he's sending out all the online sales after that. You'll be smuggled out that way."
"I'm not leaving without my goddamn ice cream sandwich."
>"Anon, you're being ridiculous."
"What's ridiculous, Moondancer, is how few ice cream sandwiches are in my hands right now."
>"You are acting like a child!"
"And I will continue to do so until my demands are met!"
>"FINE! I'll get you your fucking ice cream sandwich!"
>She storms out of the living room and into the kitchen
"Thanks Moonie, you're the coolest horse!"
>>27382695
>Her response comes in the form of high speed frozen confections
"Goddamn it! My suit!"
>>27382698
>You are Moonancer
>You are currently in the car with your idiotic owner after his stupid ice cream tantrum
>It's like he's all of the worst parts of Incog, with none of the redeeming qualities
>He spent 15 minutes spazzing out about his suit that he wears every day
>Or does he own one for every day?
>It doesn't matter, he's still an idiot
>Now he's actively pouting as he drives you and Cheerilee over to the next stop on her road to freedom
>By actively pouting, you mean it
>He seems to be putting effort into the pout
>Sweet Celestia, what is wrong with him?
"Are you just going to pout like that all day?"
>"Oh, I'm sorry I'm not a cold, emotionless ruiner of things like a certain PONY I know who had definitely lost the title of coolest horse to Cheerilee!"
>Cheerilee pokes her head forward from the front seat.
>"Oh, Anon, you're so swee-"
>"Shut up Cheerilee, the grown ups are talking!"
>"Aww."
"Anon, what the actual hell is wrong with you?"
>"Nothing, Moondancer, I'm fine!"
"You're clearly not fi-woah!"
>You suddenly shift as the car suddenly changes direction and enters the parking lot near Red Vic's Tabletop Games
>At least you get to say hi to Victor
>With any luck he'll know how to get Anon to calm the fuck down
>Anon unbuckles and starts to get out of the car
>You turn back to Cheerilee, and notice that she's still staring at Anon
"Are you coming?"
>"What, yeah, yeah, I'm coming"
>With that, the three of you head into the shop
>This can only go well
>>27382702
Woo! We're actually making progress into the plot of the story! Things might actually start happening fairly soon. Sorry about the wait, there is an actual plot coming soon, I just can't rush it out.
>>27382716
Cheerilee wants the Anon D, doesn't she?
>>27373236
Straight Anon here, and I'm pretty surecuddlingone's stallion would be a delightful experience.
>>27382765
After a nice, hard, sweaty ride, right Anon?
>>27382749
I have no idea what you're talking about. I'm not currently typing another update right now that may or may not answer your question. Shut up.
>>27382784
It's a shame Anon didn't wake up to find Cheerilee's muzzle wrapped firmly around his cock.
>>27382777
>You will never ride a stallion.
>You will never push him to his limits
>You will never feel his exhausted, sweaty body between your legs as the two of you return back home at a calm, relaxed pace after hours of hard riding.
>You will never hear his heavy panting from giving his all to please you.
>You will never pat the base of his neck in recognition of his efforts.
>You will never tell him he did a good job and that he's a good pony.
>You will never snuggle up to his warm body during the cold night hours as the two of you have a well-deserved rest.Also, dem trips
>>27382905
>>You will never ride a stallion.
Actually, I have ridden stallions.
>>27382765
>>27382777
>>27382905
>>27382920
Have you guys read somewritefag's "Captain Anon" story? It has some pretty good Shining/Anon riding scenes with them bonding over the experience.
>>27383034
DON'T FUCKING TALK ABOUT THAT STORY YOU FUCKING CUNTor did he continue it?
>>27383047
It was never finished, sadly. I really liked the Anon/Shining dynamic in it though. Mainly because Shining is my horsebando, I guess.
>>27383072
just let the history of it die, anon. that loss was painful.
>>27383076
At least the writefag is alive and not dead-dead as so many thought. Maybe he'll come back to us some day and continue the story.
>>27382784
Waiting patiently for hard core CheerAnon smut with dick in hand.
>>27383086
I'll spam his ass the next time i see him. maybe bribe him with a pizza
>>27382890
>>27383096
You never know what the future holds in it's warm horse mouth.
>>27383135
is it piss?
>>27347947
>4chan - FAQ
Rape
>>27382905
>stallion collapses into a heap next to his fellow slave pone with a frustrated sigh
>"Rough day?"
>"Yeah, Master just wouldn't get off my back all damn day."
>"Really? What was he nagging you about?"
>"No, you don't understand, he literally rode on my back all day long."
>"Oh. Ouch, man."
>>27383097
You know him outside of 4chan, Anon?
>>27383322
Nah, I'm not so fortunate. Was talking about on the chans.
>>27382695
>"And if I own you, that means you don't get to give me orders..."
>"Moondancer, fetch me an ice cream sandwich!"
My sides
This is comedy 100% gold!!!
>>27382716
Good work C:OPFAG, really enjoy this "Dinamic Duo" of Anon and Moony, hope for futures updates
>>27383370
Working on updates right now. Will be up at some point. Finals week is now for me, but fuck that.
>>27382600
>I'm a morning pony
God damn it teacher horse.
i'm still hoping for adequate justification for brutal killing of best blue horse ever.
>>27342261
>Be on your back.
>Been that way for a while, but doc got you onto an exam table.
>Bit more comfortable. Just a bit.
>Right now, he’s standin’ over you.
>That alone is enough to make you mighty uncomfortable an’ brings back some unpleasant memories, but he’s also probin’ your gut with his hands. Guy’s doin’ his best to be gentle, but it still hurts.
>Not enough for you to squeal or nothin’, but enough he notices.
>”Sorry, I’ll try to be –“
“Doin’ fine, doc. I’ll handle the pain an’ you focus on gettin’ me fixe up. Deal?”
>Just saying that much leaves you out of breath.
>The doc looks you over – an’ don’t seem to happy about it – but he nods after a bit.
>“Deal.”
“Good.”
>”I’ve got some questions, though,” he sighs. “Like how did this happen?”
“Ain’t important.”
>You don’t blame the mare none.
>”Lauren, don’t do this.”
>She was just reactin’. You shoulda known better.
“Like I said –“
>”Looks like a pony kicked you, Lauren. This can be serious.”
>You shake your head.
“I’m sure you’ll fix me up fine.”
>”That’s not what I meant.”
“I know, but that’s all I got to say on the matter.”
>Doc sighs and pulls off his gloves.
>”I’m not joking around, Lauren. If a pony attacked you –“
“Weren’t nothin’ to worry ‘bout. Just a bit of horseplay.”
>You laugh at your own lil’ pun, but the doc frowns.
>He throws his gloves at the trash can an’ sits down on his stool, puttin’ his head ‘bout even with yours.
>>27383402
I think if I were in Anon's position I would seriously abuse my position. You wanna make it to the next stop on underground pone railroad? You gotta make me cum first. No exceptions. Moonhorse can get as mad as she wants, who's she gonna get to drive the car if I don't cooperate?
>>27383526
>”Lauren, I’m not joking. I know it was a pony. I know they kicked you with all their strength. I know that if they hadn’t been taking their suppressants, you would be dead right now.”
“But –“
>But she ain’t takin’ her pills.
>If she weren’t holdin’ back, then…
>Be patient.
>”Wait, so what does *that* do?”
>You don’t know how that woman made it all the way here without strangling that colt.
>”Mica,” his sister whines, “she already told us.”
>”Yeah, but I forgot and –“
“But you’re not the one that needs to know, are you?”
>”No, Miss Nurse Redheart,” he sighs, shuffling back to the corner.
“Nurse Redheart is sufficient.”
>”Yes, Nurse Redheart.”
“Now, Hematite –“
>You gesture for the filly to come closer.
“I want you to bandage this up, just like I did with the other injury. Think you can do that?”
>”The one on her shoulder?”
“No, this one.”
>You point towards the shallow scrape on Derpy’s foreleg.
>”But what about the one on her shoulder?”
“We should leave that one open. It’s not near the ground, so it shouldn’t get dirty. If we don’t bandage it, the wound will scab up and heal faster.”
>”Oh,” the filly grunts, looking unconvinced. You don’t blame her; it’s counter-intuitive and you have the medical experience she lacks.
“Believe me, it’s better that way.”
>”Won’t it bleed?”
“No, look at it. It’s already stopped bleeding.”
>”Oh.”
“We still need to clean it, the same way we did with the others, but that’s all.”
>>27383529
You're a terrible person.
>>27383557
I dunno, I think sucking my dick or riding me cowpony style is a small price to pay for freedom from lifelong servitude.
>>27383553
>”Um, okay,” the filly responds nervously. “I guess I’ll give this a shot then. Miss Derpy, you really don’t mind if –“
>”Of course not.”
>The pegasus smiles wide, one of her near-perpetual idiot grins.
>The little filly begins to wrap the wound with gauze, but stops when you shake your head.
>”I’m doing something wrong?”
“You forgot to put on the antibiotic ointment.”
>”The… oh!”
>She grabs the tube from the tray with her mouth and squirts a dab onto the scrape.
>”That’s cold,” Derpy giggles, squeezing her eyes shut.end for tonightForgot to tag the POV. Whoops. First section is Lauren, second is Redheart. If you've gotten to here, you've probably already figured that out on your own.
>>27383489
She was already dead inside.
Short update tonight for a long update tomorrow
Continued from >>27364511
>You are sitting in the front seat
>You are on your way out of Texas, heading for.. Wherever it is Anon demands to go
>Albuquerque you believe was the name
>Of course it only takes a few hours to get there and you see Anon practically bouncing in his seat
>You look at him confused
>He shoots you a huge, gitty grin
>“I’ve been wanting to do this ever since I was 5”
>Wat
“Wat”
>“I need a Carrot we’re getting close”
“Uh, I think we have some in the cooler for me”
>He grins as you pull him out a fairly small Carrot for him
>About the size of a Churchill cigar
“Sooooo WHY do you need a Carrot”
>“You’ll see”
>The two of you drive in complete silence for nearly 20 minutes before Anon heads up I-25
>>27383928
>You look at the map
“We’re leaving whats..”
>Anon holds back a snicker
>He veers right
>You sit in silence watching the map, then back to the road for several minutes
>You check the map confused
“Anon you were suppose to turn le-”
>He pulls over taking the map from you
>And puts the carrot in his mouth, green facing out
>“WELLL LING, EHHHH LOOKS LIKE I SHOULDA MADE THAT LEFT TURN BACK AT ALBAQUERQUE”
>You stare at him
“You didn’t”
>He gives you the biggest grin
>You groan and firmly plant your foot to your face
“Chrystalis damn you”
>“EHHH WHATS UP DOC, YOU FEELIN UPSET?”
“Uuuugh”
>>“I don’t understand”
“All the better my Queen”
>Anon finished off half the carrot and gives the rest to you as a peace offering
>You’ve never seen anyone make such a terrible joke but been so excited for it in your life
>Except maybe Chang
>But that’s only if she’s drunk
>Some things just need to be forgotten
>You shake your head and lean into the window as Anon drives
>You see the windows in the back pop open then hear a faint scream
>Someone forgot to tighten down anything that could fly away in the wind
>Makes you chuckle to yourself
>Only…
>You peek at the clock
>5 hours left
>>27383938
Glorious 10/10 would road trip with Anon again.
Just a quick status update.
Trainer is still being worked on but life hit me with some heavy road blocks the last week or two and it really hurt my momentum. Since then it's been hard getting it back strangely, and I'm terrible about getting distracted, but it's still something I adamantly want to finish. I may or may not poke at ideas that people keep talking about here to get my muse back.
>>27383591
Yes, more DiaD! Doc needs to mind his own.
>>27383553
the doctor says
>well you were pregnant
lauren thinks
>phew doglegged a bullet there.
and tries to act sad
>>27384572
>dodged to doglegged
thanks spell check
The revolution begins.
>>27385243
That transparency is really fucking annoying.
Daily reminder that mare is for whipping and stallion is for riding.
catbird bump cuz i'm not ready to give up hope
>>27384053
Take your time, but please don't drop it all together. Trainer Anon is my favorite green at the moment.
>>27384572
Who would the father even be? It's not Anon and hopefully not her father.Maybe she wasn't joking about being strapped to a breeding stand and fucked by a stallion.That would mean there's hope for Applebloom.
>>27383529
I do not think you understand this Anon, he is aware of the importance of the operation of Monny and how well you can do, his carefree attitude is a way to ease the stress suffered by the pony whenever helps a pony, what otherwise even help her, just impassive would remain until the police discovered it and then he would blame Moondancer under the excuse that she use her magic to manipulate him
>>27386100
I would still use it as an opportunity to get some free pony pussy or blowjobs.
>>27383591
Good green TTGAN, short, but is someone.
>>27386111
>I would still use it as an opportunity to get some free pony pussy or blowjobs.
Anon continues to help Moondancer to release captives ponies and let them refuge in his home before being sent to a safe place.
Most of the ponies are mares.
Anon creates a harem of mares that will do anything to regain their freedom.
WHATEVER
Everything goes according to plan.
>>27383938
>Pic related
To .. help you in your creative process and literary inspiration
>>27383489
Have you ever seen or read One Flew Over the Cuckoo's Nest? If not, go watch that movie and then you'll see what my justification is.
Is johncolt kill? I want cute flutter green
Skittles when?
>>27385257
You can't tell me what to do, mare likes being for riding
>>27386208
I DO have a plan for Ling to become a nurse in the near future. It may piss off a lot of people the reason she does it, but it is important for her to establish what her spot in the changeling hive is now that shes stuck on earth. (or rather doesnt want to leave)
>>27386936
I prefer them to be just a touch smaller than this, so celestia and luna are big but not retarded big
>>27387246
>stuck on earth
Goddammit, does Ling get stuck on another dildo?
>>27387297
She gets stuck on a stone golem.
>>27387246
Well for you Fireking, i knew to Ling could not leave the seductive charms of Earth and the human society.
>>27387297
see image
>>27385695
Never give up!
ejem!...
page 9
nope
>>27347947
Stupid question, but relevant to what I am writing now: How do we think the races in Equestria would do burials? Is it just the typical bury-in-hole thing?
> Do unicorns stonify their dead for eternal preservation?
> Do griffons do viking-style pyres or sky burial?
> What about Pegasi?
> Earth ponies planting groves on top of their graveyards, so the dead can always return to the cycle of life?
> Would changelings repurpose their dead into new hive structures?
Fun fact: a saddle horn up the butt when your horse/pone starts bucking will fucking ruin your day very quickly.
>>27388802
>Be dead changeling
>Fought to the death for victory.
>Killed countless enemies for the Queen.
>Fought harder than all others.
>Expect a decent burial.
>Get molded into toilet at the hive's new latrine.
>>27388802
Changeling would rather repurpose molten chitin.
They burn their corpses.
Nobody saw them alive, nobody will see their dead body. Hidden even in death.
>>27388994
That sounds like it would do a lot of damage, Anon.
>>27388802
>Stupid question, but relevant to what I am writing now: How do we think the races in Equestria would do burials? Is it just the typical bury-in-hole thing?
This is one of the taboo topics of what I think will never be given an official version.
If we rely on the Nigthmare Nigth we must assume that the ponies generally perform a funeral process similar to ours, bury their dead in tombs, in the case of pegasus in the clouds for the Griffons the process should be similar though not improbable bury the dead with all their possessions as they did the Scythians, in the case of Changelings should be something more sinister and yet functional, the dead are used as food and raw materials to build their hives
>>27384053
Is Moon Dust the kind of mare to have two eyeshines like normal, three like an innocent little filly, or dead eyes with one or no shine?
>>27389505Four
>>27387297
>>27387355
>>27387371
Either she gets stuck or doesn't want to leave
WHichever it is, dildos will be involved
>>27389505
Uh, normal eyeshine, I suppose.
>>27389573
. . . . why not both?
>>27389573
Surprisingly, Equestria has a shortage of high-quality horse dildos.They've got some nice duck ones, but that doesn't make up for it.
>>27388802
based on my twilight can't be this changeling fimfics, Unicorns pyre, earth ponies bury their dead. I forget what pegusi do. but unicorns being magic based feel connection to fire the way other ponies feel connection to earth or air, hence the pyre based ceremony.
In changeling fics the memories but not mind where stored in the hive mind library. I dont know what they do with the body. I think given their fey like nature though, something like a barrow room in the hive that functions like the burial places of the old faith would be apt. they where made to be visited often coked up out of your mind to visit your ancestors, and had a brutal but beautiful simplicity to them, which would match the changelings ways.
>>27389044
muh sides
>You served the high well captain
>You shall be the queens new toilet
>Code name: SKittles
>>27389586
>Why not both
Because spoilers
>>27389083
THERES LAYERS OF CHITIN AND CHANGELINGS
JUST SMALLER CHANGELINGS STACKED ON TOP OF LARGER ONES
ITS LING ALL THE WAY DOWN
>You come home from a long and tiring day at the office only to see this...
>Your mint-green slave is lying in your bed
>her right frontleg disappaers between her thights into a pair of your boxers she is wearing
>her snout is burried deep into your pillow, as if she would need it to breathe
"Yep, thats a whipping."Demonponeslave when
>>27390157
THAT'S NOT MINT-GREEN
This section took a few rewrites. Picking up from the pastebin:
> Despite her strong starting position, Giselle banks back hard once you begin to climb after her.
> The night is a clear one, unfortunately leaving little in the way of clouds to rest on.
> Instead you allow your wings to settle into a slower, steady beat between periods of gliding - seeking out the rising thermals from the day's residual warmth, small as it may have been.
> Giselle does the same, and soon the two of you are drifting side by side.
> "Feels strange, doing this again..."
"What, flying free over familiar land?"
> "No - flying free next to a pony."
> Rolling lazily, she flips just beneath you and rises up again on your other side.
> "Can't begin to tell you how good it feels to be able to just fly, and not have to worry about who might attack who..."
"Don't have to tell me. Sometimes I think there was a third sickness that came after the other two - insanity."
> Giselle barks a short, sharp laugh and nods.
> "I miss when we were just athletes, Spitfire. Flying for the prize, the crowds, the pride..."
> Her eye is on you, so instead of answer you simply nod.
> "Always figured it would end some day - somegriffon would catch my eye, and then I'd be down with a bunch of bloody kits crawling all over me before I knew it..."
> You snort and shake your head.
"I think I'd go mad if I got dragged out of the sky without warning like that."
> "What, you never thought about having a child?"
> That your cheeks' coloring cannot be seen in the moon's pale glow is something you are thankful for.
"I... thought about it. But I had my team to look after too - how's the joke go, married to your job? I was married to the Wonderbolts, at least until I got too old for my own records."
> You'd done more than thought about it, of course.
> More than once your thoughts had lingered on how pleasant it would be to retire, settle down with him, let your wings rest while seeing your own foals grow...
>>27390488
> But looming over all of that was the knowledge that there was only so long before you'd have to let go of the captain's badge anyhow.
> Wouldn't have been too many years more anyhow, if not for all of this.
> Sighing gently, you shake your head.
"Can't say I've thought of it recently. First with everything falling apart, and then after I was captured... having foals only to see them passed off into slavery wasn't something I could stomach.
> "Maybe... I guess because I didn't have as raw a deal in the first place, I never stopped thinking about it."
> Rolling hard, Giselle turns about to face east towards the rising moon - towards the griffon lands.
> "Never gave up thinking about the future. About life after slavery."
> There's a moment of silence, as the two of you drift together.
"...you're thinking about leaving, huh?"
> "I could put those feelings aside for a long time because I always knew it could be worse, but now that I'm here."
"Why not go, then?"
> Giselle sighs, rolling into a sharp dive.
> She easily outpaces you - griffons were always better in a dive - but snaps her wings out bare feet above the treetops, bleeding speed to allow herself to come to a halt on a branch.
> Moments later you touch down in another one nearby, folding your wings as well.
> "Because... as strong as that pull is, I'm not under any illusions about how rough it's going to be. We've lead rough lives - kin looks after kin."
> You nod understandingly.
"It's not the work you're afraid of."
> Clicking her beak in wordless agreement, Giselle goes on:
> "I don't want to leave my kin forever... but the part of me that wants that fantasy-future also sometimes says that I shouldn't give up what I have for something like that, even so."
>>27390499
> The image of Fire Streak, caught in his perfect little trap of a world performing for nothing comes to mind, and you shake your head.
"I still would. Never got ahead by risking nothing, Giselle - on the racetrack or in life."
> Her head, mottled by moonlight filtering in through branches still bare from winter and glinting off her golden eyes, snaps around to look at you again.
> "It's not the risk I'm afraid of. It's - what if we've turned to fighting each other as well? What if I get caught in it, becoming part of the problem myself?
> Giselle's claws tighten on the branch until you hear the wood cracking beneath them.
> "I'm afraid I'll get back home to find there's nothing worth rebuilding, that I'd just turn into a bitter old hen fighting because that's all I've known for too long."
> Reaching up to her neck, she carefully removes the band of fabric that served as a collar around her neck and stares at it.
> "Less scared of this thing on me than of being a slave to what's inside of me."
"Like I was?"
> "Heh. But at the same time... home."
> The word is spoken with such a degree of reverence, such a desire, that you're honestly surprised.
> This was a side of Giselle you certainly hadn't seen before.
"I won't stop you. Celestia knows, I get how you feel. I'll miss having someone around who I can really talk too, though."
> Even now, the words feel strange coming off your lips.
> "Aww, come on. You can always talk to Anonymous, in between kisses."
> Laughing as she ducks the sweep of your wing aiming for her head, Giselle leaps from her branch to another out of easy wing-range.
> "But I know what you mean too."
"So, you are going to be going, then?"
> "I..."
"At least - at least ride with us back to the mainland or something. Then you can fly yourself up over the land bridge back to the griffon lands, or find a place on a ship."
>>27390513
> "Avoid flying back home over all that water alone. Yeah, that makes sense. If we'd run in to any of my kin out here, I'd go with them. But..."
"...not a sign, and all we know of for certain is a city full of hostile pointy-heads."
> "Exactly."
"Well, I'll be glad to have you along for that much longer. Besides, we haven't had a proper race yet, for old times' sake."
> "I know. Probably not a good idea to be doing it here, either."
> That, unfortunately, you can't disagree with.
"Probably shouldn't even have been flying that high for that long in the first place"
> "Yeah. True enough."
> Standing carefully-balanced on the branch, you spread your wings.
> Returning to the dead little village is a painful return to reality, coasting through the empty streets back towards the dock.
> But soon forgotten as you go crawl into the aircraft and back to your bed, wishing a murmured goodnight to Giselle and glancing to the snoring Anonymous.
> It's the first chance to really rest you've had in nights - others either being interrupted by work, chill, or griffon intruders - and you're out in an instant even before you have a chance to properly preen.
--------
> "Spitfire. Wake up - Spitfire!"
> You're rolling out of bed in an instant, shaken awake by both the urgent tone and the hand roughly shaking your wing.
"I'm up, I'm up!"
> "Get up to the cockpit and check our electrical system. If it's weak, give us a shot with the APU. Get us ready for takeoff ASAP."
> Blinking owlishly, several things come into focus for your waking mind.
> One, it's barely past dawn despite your desire to rest up.
> Two, Anonymous' tone is not just worried but practically frantic.
> Three, while he is not yet dressed his gun is clutched in his other hand.
> That's enough to dump a load of adrenaline into your system, coat standing on end as you shake off the last vestiges of sleep.
"Understood. You want me to untie us from the dock as well?"
>>27390524
> "No - stay inside! In fact, keep your head down in general, I don't know who they are."
> Scrambling forward, you slip into the cockpit where a half-awake Giselle is also stirring.
> "Spitfie? Whaizzit?"
"I don't know. Someone outsie."
> Snapping familiar switches on and peering at the resulting dials, you call back:
"We're good, Anonymous! Amps and volts are both high!"
> There's no immediate response, so instead you dig out the binoculars kept in the cockpit and drag the case out between your teeth.
> Carefully balancing them between your hooves, you raise the eyepieces to the window and scan the treeline - nearly dropping them in surprise when the first movement is spotted.
"Those are griffons!"
> "What?!"
> Beside you, Giselle suddenly bursts into a flurry of motion as she scrambles awake as well - grabbing the second pair of binoculars stowed by her seat and bringing them up to her eyes.
"There. Uh, just below that white house on the left. They're looking out from the second floor, see?"
> "I - yeah, I see."
> Anonymous bursts back into the cabin, still only dressed in his sleepwear and quie frantic-looking.
> "...can't believe I didn't think to set a watch. Hydraulics are good, but if they don't let us take off we're in trouble."
> "Those are griffons alright."
> Giselle's voice cuts Anonymous off; he backs up almost instinctively as she struggles out of her seat.
> He nods, glancing over to her.
> "You said you could talk them down if we crossed paths. Time to prove it."
> "Don't worry!"
> She's practically galloping - if Griffons could gallop, anyhow - down to one of the rear hatches, exuberance radiating from her.
> Anonymous had follows her out of the cockpit with you close on his heels as well, long gun still in his hands.
> "You better be certain about this, Giselle."
> "I am. I'll be fine."
> "Giselle."
> At the last moment, he reaches out and grabs her tail.
> "Be. Careful."
>>27390537
> The griffoness' head snaps around, but her expression softens when she sees the look on his face.
> "...I will. Honestly."
> Anonymous nods, releasing his grip and letting her unlatch the door.
> As she climbs through, he looks down and murmurs to you:
> "Think she can really do it?"
"I don't know. Griffons have a sort of constant social hierarchy thing going on - if she can establish that she is superior to them, or at least operating on behalf of a superior, she's fine."
> "And if she can't?"
"Then we hope she can offer them something to give us passage."
> Outside Giselle is announcing herself, having climbed up on top of the cabin and calling out her name and home.
> Your eyes drift down to the gun still clutched protectively.
"How experienced are you with that thing??"
> "I can usre it, sure..."
"Not sounding certain there."
> "...I don't know, alright?! I bought it for dealing with fucking animals, Spitfire. Not... you know, thinking things."
> A sigh rushes out of you as you nod.
> You were so used to thinking of him as your superior that sometimes you forgot he headn't fought before.
"Well, if everythig goes tails-up here, we may have to trade it out for safe passage."
> "That's six kinds of illegal and expensive to boot."
"Your life or your gun. You choose, bucko."
> Taking a careful look out one window, you see that several of the griffons have emerged to cautiously approach, one calling out a counter-challenge to Giselle's announcement.
> They're armored, but not heavily nor well and few carry actual weapons.
> Not actual soldiers, then - at least not duty.
> Abruptly the plane shifts as Giselle leaps from it, gliding down to greet the griffoness who'd challenged her.
> Meeting beak-to-beak with her, they pause - eyes closed - for a moment before resuming talking inaudibly.
> They've taken to the air again and are circling the plane slowly, Giselle obviously discussing how she'd gotten here.
> But...
"Anonymous?"
> "Yeah?"
>>27390546
"Go up front and start getting the engines up."
> "Huh?"
"I'm not liking this. Something's wrong - those two..."
> You motion to Giselle and the griffoness she flies beside.
"Those two are fine, but the others are still circling. I've seen this before - be ready to take us off."
> He turns for the cockpit without another word, and you return to sneaking a careful look out one of the windows.
>>27390563
why is everything always fucked?
can't we have nice times again?
I miss the nice times.
>>27391150
>nice times
>ever
>>27391582
Yeah, pastel ponies are a serious subject matter worth of only the bleakest plots and most hopeless settings.
>>27391150
>>27391150
Have you perhaps forgotten what thread we are in?
>>27391582
>>27391814
>>27391858
>>27392472
Silly people. We have to have hope before it can be taken away.
OK, two undeleted threads in a row
can we assume that slaveponies threads are safe now?
do we need to keep the title 'Subjugation' from now on?
>>27386389
I understand. Still hurts though.
