Let’s get hypothetical.
You’re a writer who’s been going at it for a bit now. You really enjoy what you do and put your blood, sweat, and tears into each story. One day, you decide to post it in a random thread to get some feedback.
Just one problem: no takers.
You wonder if you should even bother writing; you decide to quit and move on to something else.
If that story applies to you, then hold your horses. If all you wanted was feedback, to improve your writing skills a bit, or maybe just see how others do it, then you’ve come to the right place....
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>>25782183
Tips and links:
Things you should know about before writing clop:
Vhatug’s tips for anatomically correct clop and squash soup:
http://pastebin.com/g4VpEg4f
http://www.literotica.com/s/erotic-synonyms (Because using dick, balls, and pussy just isn’t enough to get the reader off. Remember, the reader cums first.)
Had to. Puns are awesome.
Things you should know about writing:
Clever’s Tips on How to Write Short Stories: http://pastebin.com/GGBkxi7e
How to into writing: http://pastebin.com/V1ujiyJt
Writing...
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>>25782183
>filename
Damn...
Am I allowed to post anything that isn't pony related to be judged? I just need to have my writing style in general critiqued.I can fuck off if need be
>"Come spar with me bro."
/mulp/ sure is homolust today.
YOU ARE FIGHTING SHINING ARMOR (LV. 14 UNICORN), LEADER OF THE ROYAL GUARD.
Before you stands a tall unicorn with blue hair and white fur. Even though you two are fighting, you can tell he's not serious. He beckons you to make the first move.
>Attack
>Spells
>Actions
>Items
>Status
>Run
>>25904080
>Status
followed by
>Actions
It's that draw prompt time of the year!
>Draw ponies, or any other creature, simply having a wonderful christmas time.
http://mlpgenrichmentcenter.tumblr.com/post/135676439843/
Ponies have winter games, but do they have Winter Games? With official judging and the most talented ponies trying for the gold? It might be somewhat of a hassle to train in the off seasons, but if there's something Equestrians love, it's the big spectacle of a competition! If they do, though, they probably wait for the new year - after the big...
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Season 5 episode links
http://pastebin.com/4teHjCbz
DO THE PROMPT
I miss the old Sunset Shimmer.
She was fun, and ambitious, she didn't let anything stand in her way.
She wanted that crown and by god did she fucking take it. She was edgy, and dominant and cool.
She was everything that was great in a villain, until they hackneyed her up at the end.
Then she got her "redemption" and then pretty much became Fluttershy 2.0 and since then acts almost NOTHING LIKE HER OLD SELF.
I miss the ol Shimmy, the one who bullies kids and takes their fucking lunch money, the one who won the crown by bullying...
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>>25837587
>There she comes walking down the halls, the kids scattering, most just staring in awe with Snip and Snails at her side.
>Others drop their books and jump into their lockers like a bomb just went off in the hall and they're jumping into a nearby trench for safety.
>She walks up to you.
>"Wheres my money dweeb?"
"Uh, excuse me?"
>"You...
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>>25838122
>You walk over looking at their phones.
>Its you jacking off to a picture of Fluttershy in the bathroom stall.
>"Such a candid shot of that time Fluttershy wasn't wearing panties, I wonder what your parents, and what the school would think of such a pervert."
"B-but how-"
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>>25838134
>You go to class.
>You sit down in the back.
>Stupid Sunset Shimmer.
>Stealing all your money like that..
>Now you won't have any money for lunch!
>And you'd been saving that money for a few weeks too!
>What a bitch..
>Forcing you into compliance like that..
>You know what, you know exactly what you'll do, you'll go to the Principal and..
>And, totally get found out that you were jerking off to Fluttershy.
>You could try getting their phones, but, they probably have it on backup disks and USB drives..
>You're boned..
>You're so totally boned and it's only the first day of school..
>You're sitting alone in the lunchroom.
>Sunset Shimmer surrounded by Snips, Snails, Cherry Berry, Flash Sentry..
>You have nothing to eat of course because Sunset stole all of your money.
>All you can do is watch as Sunset enjoys the spoils of your defeat..
>What a bitch..
>Look at her all smug over there..
>Enjoying herself like that..
>Shes probably laughing AT you right now..
>You didn't know it was possible to feel this pathetic..
>You get up..
>You walk by them toward the exit.
>Suddenly you feel yourself trip and fall to the ground.
>"Hey, you should watch where you're going loser!"
>"He's all tripped up!"
>The entire table is laughing at you.
>You get up shambling away..
>This is the worst..
>be me
>bored in car with normie aunt
>tells aunt I watch MLP and I am a fan
>"it speaks about friendship and adventure like powerpuff girls"
>she doesn't give a fuck
>tell her the ans fantasize about having sex with a horse
>suddenly listens to me
>widens her eyes
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>>25904789
>That so meta shitpost thats so meta that its actually shitposting even though it was in the first place
good work op! Its like you're actually a real live autist!
>>25904789
>I don't even watch this show.
Please leave. You don't have to and nobody here can force you, but it's for the best if you leave and never come back here.
>>25904805
>implying I did not accidentaly told my aunt I'm a horsefucker
Fag it totally happened. I'm desperate.
Welcome to Equestrian Dungeon, the long-awaited sequel to /mlp/ Tower. As in the last rendition of the game, the goal will be to get to the end of the segment or floor. Along the way, you will be able to keep items you find (and mischeviously bring along) in the Inventory, as well as work with a set number of players, dubbed "AnonPones," in the thread. AnonPones are created when a player joins the game. There are multiple interactive objects, such as switches, levers, giant metal springs, and the occasional undead or mechanical monstrosity that's out to kill your...
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>>25901194
Hi, OP here.
I aware to celestia, it's going to happen in this thread.
>>25901221
>off by one
Also *Swear
>So what is this thread about?
Pretty much this thread is about anon owning a pony as a slave. He can do whatever he wishes, be it nice and not abusing or the complete opposite.
If you're going to be writing some green, please name yourself. It will be easier to keep track of your story.
Pastebin: http://pastebin.com/u/SlavePonyAuction
Complete stories: http://pastebin.com/82rCVh4j
WIP stories: http://pastebin.com/mfmaWQDc
HIATUS stories (inactive for 2+ weeks): http://pastebin.com/QgTRi8d0
Full story list: http://pastebin.com/cqLCYveb
...
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>>25881533
Merry Christmas
>>25881533
The IRC is #Slavepone at irc.rizon.net:^|
>>25881557
>LEL OFFICAL STEAM GROUP MAYMAY
Fuck off
I bet there's some fucking women on here....
>>25881274
That's just an old pony's tale
>>25881274
That's not true at all.R-Right?
>>25881274
That's stupid. Women on a internet image board? Let alone an internet image board devoted to a mans show? You funny nigger.
Pastebins:
http://pastebin.com/u/EarfulofNapalm
http://pastebin.com/u/Fizzles_Anon
http://pastebin.com/u/HeliAnon
http://pastebin.com/u/Maintenance-Bro
http://pastebin.com/u/AirArk
http://pastebin.com/u/Unfortunate_Rookie
http://pastebin.com/u/Plonefag
http://pastebin.com/u/DerpyDubs
http://pastebin.com/u/BobRay
http://pastebin.com/u/Nagibator_99
http://pastebin.com/u/Typhoon2142
http://pastebin.com/u/AspirantWritesThings
http://pastebin.com/u/MintCondition453
http://pastebin.com/u/PantsMan
http://pastebin.com/u/PlanePonyStories
Plane...
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>>25729543
huh, beat me to it.first for Blitz then.
nice trips
third for prototype plones
Any picture from your Pony folder. Look how original I am.
So /mlp/ do you want to start a mlp song thread? One of you start and the rest of us will continue
>EqG not allowed Of obvious reasons
>>25905357
You mean posting youtube links to mlp songs?
>>25905373
No as in starting a song by one of its lyrics
Like these animals don't listen then continue it
>>25905357
Hey, hey, everybody....
Pinkie pie appears beside you. What do?
>>25905259
Scream
>>25905259
Die.
>>25905259
Hug her after freaking out.
......
>>25905065
Dreamworks presents
Shimmer
>>25905065
...?
...<3!
>>25905065
Trypophobia pony thread is a go!
>>25903863
>a go
Yeah, right into the fucking trash, faggot.
>>25903863
what the fuck is that thing in her eye
>>25903863
What are some of the most viewed MLP videos on youtube /mlp/?
Highest I could find is "sad my little pony" with 34,931,283 views. https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=rvcogfvx94Q
>>25903176
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=cgRkOlLSfgc
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=_xE5QHq4yrY
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=rjmsThcOGTQ
top link: least viewed
bottom link: most viewed
>>25903176
This.
https://youtube.com/watch?v=rjmsThcOGTQ
>>25903176
That's the highest you could find?
Bitch please
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=rjmsThcOGTQ