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2016-06-27 22:01:14 Post No. 8214037
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2016-06-27 22:01:14
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Here is my attempt at writing poetry to add into my GFs birthday card that is for the 1st July. I don't claim to be good or even educated in the matter beyond GCSE English in the subject, but neither is she.
What do you make of the following:
When I search the depths of my heart,
for non but me to see,
what was discover deep within,
is my love for you with me.
The heart within my chest,
is bound by lock and key,
yet this is no cause for lament,
Nor worry or torment.
For it is a promise of consent,
eminating a candesant aura,
which can only be my love for you,
my beautiful and beloved,
Laura.
Thoughts? Criticisms? Amendments? Advice?
