Can some one give me criticism for my story please? I wanna give this Post-Apocalyptic kid's story a go.
But I wanna know if my writing is shit.
It's shit, don't bother senpai desu
>>8070120
there's already a critique thread you faggot.
>>8070133
Lol, how do I post this shit? Sorry I'm used to posting images, but how does one post like a word document?
>>8070138
>>8070138