I really want critiques and I want you all to be honest. Tell me how good it is. Tell me how bad it is. I dont fucking care. Just help me. Leave me comments and shit. Critique my ass as hard as you can
I'm really proud of this. Its a Walking Dead cross over with Inuyasha. I worked hard.
https://www.fanfiction.net/s/11909828/1/Oats-in-the-Water
>>8069512
>Its a Walking Dead cross over with Inuyasha
>>8069512
>https://www.fanfiction.net/s/11909828/1/Oats-in-the-Water
>I'm really proud of this
HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAGAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA
Don't mind the other faggots OP, it's actually a pretty decent fanfiction.
>>8069512
>him reach out his calloused hand to roughly and yank her against him.
I think you meant to roughly yank her against him. You should really do some grammar proof reading before you just submit things online all willy nilly, friendo. Its actually not a bad read but the cringe is real because I know you just stole two universes and blended them together. If I didn't have this autism bias established I would say its pretty dank.
>>8069512
Good job OP.
I'm proud of you.
Keep it up!
not bad desu
I literally jacked off to the erotic portion, so at the very least your fan fic provided me pleasure.
I really really liked inuyasha. It was the first show I watched that didn't operate under star wars logic and it left an impression on me
>>8073290
Explain Star Wars logic to me. Maybe we can save this thread with actual discussion.
>>8073318
It's when every single social interaction is part of an epic battle between good and evil and a chance to level up your powers. eg Naruto
>>8069512
Ardent to relieve the agonizing coil that wound itself into a deep unseen part of his pelvis.
Liked this are you male or female. Interesting description is why I ask
