Please explain to a plebeian what's wrong with this writing
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=QmKhGqWcJGY
Purple Prose
SUNSET
>>7973187
it's not tho
it's fairly spartan in terms of descriptors (nothing esoteric about them), it's just low brow
>my name is darkstar and I am of the night
>>7972610
when you write 5000 pages, you're gonna have a few stinkers
Literally nothing. It's perfect.
>>7972610
Excesive of cliffhangers and "mystery box" bullshit.
He's good at them, I'll give him credit for that, but for fuck's sake at least Rowling learned to evolve when the readers figured out her writing style, at this point everyone pretty much agrees thatJon Snow is actually half Targaryen and is gonna be reborn from the flamesand he's freaking out because that was supossed to be a huge reveal and now he has nothing.
