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Check my shit out (trying to write and boared). I have 3-4 ideas
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2016-02-24 11:04:48 Post No. 7737135
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Check my shit out (trying to write and boared). I have 3-4 ideas for 3-4 books and this is one of them so i need a feedback.

Here we go:

Hi. My name is Tom Marhsal. I'm 26 years old guy, recently divorced and tryig to start my new company\life\situation(underline what you like). Oh, i almost forgot, i'm a whore. Yea, kind of a cheap whore, with a great variety of services. Not exactly that kind of a hooker you can meet on a street but very close.
I work as a bank manager and for my new clients i can give the best BalanceJob they ever had. For our old customers i even have fresh ANALytics if you like and other SPECIALS. So, i guess my life seems not that good but wait, i get paid. And they pay a lot so i have money, a bit of power and ofcourse, whores.
But when you are a whore, whores are not an object anymore. So, today i try to find some new definitions of my life, to set new goals and resolutions. Oh, i'm such a dumbass! I forgot, today is 31 of December!
And i'm sitting here, watching a bad show with titties(they are good) and some fucks pretending they want to prank people on the busstop. And it makes me seek. I remember an episode from southpark where Stan started to listen music and it happened to be fart sounds. And then people started to fart with their mouthes .
Now i'm wondering how i could drive myself into this shit, when all my entourage is shit, women a sleep with are shit, my friends are dog shit and i'm all over the shit???
I guess it all starten 1 year ago, when i got my bachelor degree...
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Anonymous 2016-02-24 11:39:27 Post No.7737194
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Anonymous 2016-02-24 11:39:27 Post No.7737194 [Report]
>>7737135
Please never write again.
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Anonymous 2016-02-24 12:34:48 Post No.7737262
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Anonymous 2016-02-24 12:34:48 Post No.7737262 [Report]
>>7737135

It's shit.

Don't give up, though. I'm sure you can eventually make a meemsterpiece if you devote yourself to the craft with true discipline. Practice erry day.
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Check my shit out (t 2016-02-24 14:24:27 Post No.7737455
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Check my shit out (t 2016-02-24 14:24:27 Post No.7737455 [Report]
is it really that bad?
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Anonymous 2016-02-24 14:26:25 Post No.7737459
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Anonymous 2016-02-24 14:26:25 Post No.7737459 [Report]
It sucks. You have no sense of style or subtlety. It's literally a suburban teenager sperging out.
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Anonymous 2016-02-24 14:27:41 Post No.7737462
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Anonymous 2016-02-24 14:27:41 Post No.7737462 [Report]
>>7737455

This is definitely stolen. There's no way you wrote that yourself.
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Anonymous 2016-02-24 14:29:56 Post No.7737466
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Anonymous 2016-02-24 14:29:56 Post No.7737466 [Report]
>>7737135
Sorry but this reads like YA garbage. If I didn't know better then I'd think this was written by John Green.
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Anonymous 2016-02-24 14:31:40 Post No.7737470
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Anonymous 2016-02-24 14:31:40 Post No.7737470 [Report]
>>7737135
Try being an actual prostitute for at least a month and write a book about it. It will be awesome because young women today are fascinated with alternative lifestyles. As long as you don't include stealing wallets and smoking crack, of course.

A realistic book about prostitution would sell. Just be descriptive in sex scenes with strangers.
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Anonymous 2016-02-24 14:36:54 Post No.7737480
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Anonymous 2016-02-24 14:36:54 Post No.7737480 [Report]
Better:

Succesful white independant strong young woman decides to have sex with strangers for money and live like a prostitute to "avenge" herself after her husband got fat.

She belongs in a high society and earns around 10k a night with high status troublesome men. By the end she is in doubt if she should live like a prostitute or come back to her husband and be subjugated to her social role.

It is a valiant book about modern sexuality and you shouldn't judge it.
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Anonymous 2016-02-24 14:37:12 Post No.7737481
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Anonymous 2016-02-24 14:37:12 Post No.7737481 [Report]
>>7737135

I chuckled; is this bait?

>"I guess it all started X year(s) ago..."

Nobody actually writes like this, it's so cliché.
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Anonymous 2016-02-24 14:41:10 Post No.7737488
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Anonymous 2016-02-24 14:41:10 Post No.7737488 [Report]
>>7737135
Wgat the fuck?
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