Can you guys fix what's wrong with my story before I fuck it up in future
http://kaibiguous98.deviantart.com/
Honestly. I usually take the time to read these things and make real comments on them, but there's no chance I'm going to deviantart. Frankly, kill yourself.
Jesus fucking christ
I love berserk
>>7727442
>deviantart.com
You're beyond help.
got distracted by this
>>7727485
Any other websites I can use then?
>>7727499
Any other websites besides DA I can use?
>>7727442
>outside its pitch dark
>its
dropped