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Hey, /lit/, never posted here before. Rate my poem.

"The fatale was visible to a gentleman's eye,
But the mistress was keen to subdue with lie.
With old age you grew, your assets tangible
She took off with the gold, a new age radical."
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>>7723705
There's a thread for this but pretty okay desu
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>>7723708

Thanks pham, didn't know there was a thread, my apologies.
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>>7723705
I don't like the word tangible, but iz pretty gud desu senpai xd
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