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2016-02-20 13:58:14 Post No. 7720364
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CRITIQUE THREAD
Anonymous
2016-02-20 13:58:14
Post No. 7720364
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Post your stuff. Try to critique at least one other person if you post. Don't be an asshole.
Here's a bit of something I'm working on:
In the parking lot there was only one light on and it looked ready to go out at any moment, as if the burden of keeping away the dark was too much for it to do alone. It flickered on and off casting flashes like intermittent lightning. Not that there was anything worth seeing—just construction and dirt where pavement had been ripped off like an old scab for even more construction. It was always like that when I went to punch in. I sometimes longed to be back at my apartment during those moments but gently reminded myself that there was nothing there. If I wasn’t going to do anything I might as well be paid for my time and if my time didn’t matter I might as well work the night shift for the extra two dollars an hour. There were less people on the night shift of course, which I liked. It was almost nice even. Until the rashes started showing up.
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1UyTGRJ1Lei7PepdWvPD7v_f_oF4mhyWsTPVtS5iLa_c/edit