Someone wanna critique this poem I wrote? Also general poetry critique thread.
Lyric go -- Lyric be
Blesséd and with me
Lyric stay -- Lyric show,
How things come to be.
If lyric show -- and lyric know
What had befallen thee,
Then lyric stay -- and lyric play
So all may come to see.
Lyric stay--lyric show..shit happens...then lyric stay again? I don't get it.