There's a poet who keeps performing in my area who thinks he's real good and he wrote a poem vs the haters
https://m.youtube.com/watch?v=1T40rL0Fifs&feature=youtu.be
>>7361436
OP, stop trying to shill your own trash.
>>7361436
No, this is trash.
>>7361436
People who fucking write prose with a few rhymes and puns then call it poetry should be beat the fuck up.
Take advantage of the medium ffs
>>7361458
Why would I post a not good poem
>all those cliched metaphors
FUCK
>>7361436
>>the pauses
>>the fake emotion
>>the condescending smirk
I made it one minute
>>7361436
>"dont look down at the paper"
>mfw he looks down at the paper
He couldve had the poem on his screen and he would not have to awkwardly shift his eyes every few seconds.
is that a Tim Tebow poster on his wall?
This is remarkably terrible. poor guy. This is the type of bad where you can tell even decades of dedicated work and he would never improve over mediocre.
>>7361493
>trying to speak about the true nature poetry in the form of a cliche poem
https://m.youtube.com/watch?v=_ewGFxkwo3o
>at an open mic where you're allowed to perform three poems he performs two two minute pieces and one ten minute piece
https://m.youtube.com/watch?v=ymAyr-4XBv8
Don't worry though he edited it into a 14 minute piece
https://m.youtube.com/watch?v=6itGbo98TlM
He hasn't put his >>friendzoned again poem up yet. It's based on the three little pigs
>>7361436
I hope that's his natural hair colour and he didn't dye it.
>>7361544
It is. He's so dreamy and then he opens his mouth
Also he's published more books than you
>>7361550
That actually makes me happy, now i know i can get published.
>>7361556if you've got the gold coins poet
>>7361562
No, actually published, i mean.
>>7361436
I made it to "content" and then I had to stop. Fuck you, OP.
Fuck you, I watched some more.
This is so bad. Fuck.
>>7363612
Just a reminder that you're better than you believe
