http://imgur.com/a/b76Lp
>>2442908
Not so much imo. It's always super mid-centered. Not so interesting I think. Also your pieces are quite repetitive. I don't know what you are trying to do but personally I also really dislike seeing faces in these types of work. Adds an element of non-abstractness that ruins the whole.
I really really like this one though http://i.imgur.com/fQZxFlt.png
Have attached one of my abstract doodles so you get a feel for where I'm coming from (I jus ttry to entertain the eye and play with texture, temperature, angles and value)
Is there even any compositional thought behind this?
Seems to me that you just slapped a lot of shit into the middle.
>>2442908
i was also just about to say its all in the middle.