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Hey lads, do you think this sort of style would work for a comic?
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Hey lads, do you think this sort of style would work for a comic?
How can I further improve my lines? (I plan to add some easy colours later)
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>>2590095

Very cute anon, reminds me a bit of some of Bones' stuff for some reason. Looks pretty solid to me, I like your lines too.
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>>2590104
forgot to add, work on your fucking hands please.
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>>2590107
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>>2590107
Right on the target. I tend to brush them with a "they're stylistic" mindset, but I really need to put some extra effort on the matter. Thanks anon.

Got any suggestions when it comes to colours? I'm thinking of a not overly saturated pastel palette.
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>>2590095
Your lines are very solid. What you need to improve is perspective on those characters, especially if you are going to make a comic. Your symbols come across quite okay because your line confidence is good, but perspective-wise you're not there yet. Also learn to draw hands.
And yes, I think this style is perfect for a comic.
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I love Kino's journey op. Go for it
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>>2590902
Gotcha, I'll focus on both hands and attempt to work on my character perspective. Thanks for the feedback anon, t'was useful!

>>2590934
>Kino's Journey
Damn nigga that looks like a good animu. Adding to the watchlist.
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