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Post your nsfw drawings/sketches here
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>>2576710
post more
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>>2576714
http://www.hentai-foundry.com/user/Owler/profile
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>>2576717
I will give you money if you teach me and criticize my drawings
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>>2576710

I don't draw nsfw because my mom is also into art and she is always asking to look at my sketchbook :(
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>>2576733
>say no
>have a separate sketchbook for it
>move the fuck out of your parents house
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>>2576727
Lol why not but that'as not me hahaha
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>>2576737
wtf lad
so make this thread on /h/ or /aco/
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>>2576710
>pubes like eyebrows
GENIUS
WHY DIDN'T I HEAR ABOUT THIS BEFORE
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>>2576815
MODS
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working on this but will probably drop it
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k
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>>2577224
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>>2576710
Is this considered lewd
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>>2577245
>no feminine penis
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>>2577502
Blog?
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>>2577508
http://akielart.tumblr.com
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>>2576710
theres already 2 shill yourself threads
theres also a different board for this
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>>2577507
Not everyone is a closet faggot, Anon.
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>>2577549
>feminine penises
>gay
shiggy diggy
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>>2577549
>faggot
>current year
>using faggot as an insult
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>>2577560
>>>/r9k/
>>2577575
>tumblr
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>>2576815
that abductor is too big tho
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>>2577512
>No porn
That was disappointing, judging by this >>2577502 you could almost be white datura level if you give it your best.
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New at this NSFW shit. Would appreciate some pointers. I might also hang out in a draw thread later if anyone is interested?
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something else to consider. Actual crit please!
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>>2577645
I know I fucked the perspective in this one a lot. She's missing like, the middle of her torso
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>>2576710
Meow
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>>2577632
Fug, yeah I was reluctant to put any NSFW stuff online with my name attached. Maybe I should make a blog for that alone.
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>>2577648
If you know that why dont you fix it?
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>>2577687
I didn't notice until it was finished. It was one of those "it's uploaded and it's 3am" type realisations.
It's too much of a pain to go back now, I'd rather take the crit and bare it in mind for next time.
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working on korra with a peen
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>>2577705
>Korra squating up and down riding a dick
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>>2577726
>riding
anon
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>>2576710
what? did the porn thread finally die or something? what happened?
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>>2577802
Whats the difference?
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>>2577642
Quite well done. Blog?
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>>2577726
gtfo with your requests, dickbrain.
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>>2577642
if you draw semirealistic anatomy, then keep it consistent with the hands as well. that is if you are able to do so.
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>>2577598
>>2576822
What was the picture?
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>>2577705
Nice. Got a blog?
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>>2577819
its lusty-bumble.tumblr.com or love-bumble on HF
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>>2578479
BAE
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>>2577575
filthy sodomite
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>>2577650
Get rid of the dick, it doesn't fit.
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I draw so much but I'm not getting better. I just want to draw hot porn, so critique this thing I drew so I can get better hopefully
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>>2578841
i see the style you're going for, not my personal kink but the dick heads should look less like bowler hats and have more of a lip, i mean you cab draw em however you like but this is what i do, also the body you can start with this template an work around it, it works pretty damn well for bodys, im still learning myself but im getting there, practice daily on genitals, tits are the easier ones and so much fun
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>>2578841
if you want to get better stop drawing just hot porn (which in your case is everything else but hot), go a step back and learn perspective construction and anatomy.
this is the only way you'll one day be able to draw hot porn. sorry anon, skills and good art aren't easy to obtain.
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>>2578841
Draw one thing at a time, and dont just piece it all together, if you want to draw hot porn, you need to start by drawing 20lbs of pussy and ass until you can make it look hot.
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>>2578886
Are you using a mouse to draw? stick to traditional or get a pen and tablet.
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>>2578883
worst possible advice kek.
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>>2578864
>piss tube
>jizz tube
men have just one for both, women are the ones with 2 ''tubes''. one for pissing, the other one for fucking
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>>2578890
it was just my guide on thickness desu
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>>2578889
If he cant even draw good looking dick and poon then why wouldn't he start with practicing how to do that, you can literally learn how to draw a good looking cock in a couple hours.
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>>2578896
>you can literally learn how to draw a good looking cock in a couple hours.
haha, yeah sure. you can learn perspective in a couple hours, right.
his problem aren't unappealing cocks, his problem is that he doesn't know what drawing is.
please, stop being a dickbrain and start thinking with your upper head.
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>>2578892
yeah sure. you simply failed like an idiot. just stop posting instead of trying to repair the irreparable, dumbass.
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>>2578918
nice input
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>>2578841
Ok so, I think your legs and your shota dick actually look fine. I would say you need to practice where bones are in the body. The hip on the right is far too high, and the way the foot is attached is making it look flat.
Download an anatomy book and draw from there without any complicated posing. You need to study up on form and volume.

Also a tip for drawing dicks. Don't join the head to the shaft with a line that is solid. Doxy does a good dick tutorial on trapfuta that'll give you some nice ideas.
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>>2578864
>>2578883
>>2578896
>>2578942
ic is a fucking joke. You people are a fucking joke.
I guess that happens when beginners try to teach other beginners how to draw.

Guys, you really should learn your place. Stop trying to be teachers when it's obvious you have no idea how to give proper advice.
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>>2578965
>You have to be a master in order to give feedback
I want this meme to end
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>>2578968
you have to be at least good enough to understand what kind of advice somebody needs. none of the advice I quoted do that.

and yeah, you have to have a critical artistic eye to be able to spot mistakes and lack of knowledge.

if you see this >>2578841 and the only thing you think should be addressed are the dicks, then I have bad news for you, my dear scrubbster.
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>>2576734
>be an artist
>move out of your parents house
kek
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Done a year ago from a /b/ thread
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>>2578982
Gud trace anon
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>>2577575
Would you prefer cuck?
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>>2578971
No actually you are right, that advice was dogshit
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>>2578984
Not traced
i'd like an actual review of the things i fucked up please
I'm here to improve, not to impress fags with fake crap
Else I'd be on /b/ or /trash/
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>>2578942
Wow, this Doxy girl looks like a very skilled artist...
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>>2578997
The guy uses 3D models as a base, how the fuck do you fuck it up this bad is beyond my understanding.
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test
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>>2578915
Kekfag, kill yourself please. Drawing cock =/ perspective fucking faggot. Perspective is a concept, a dick is a dick. Most shots in porn (irl porn btw) only focus on the most interesting angles to make $$$, and that's all you need for said body parts to look good in porn. Perspective is a whole 'nother level of skill and focus for art sake, WHICH would take more time than 1 day just to "master".
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Also, ITT: Report posts that contain buzzwords as "kek, -ster, and "I know how to art but won't show my work because I'll get doxxed"".

Thanks and have a good day.
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>>2579058
drawing anything correctly requires understanding of perspective unless you are stylizing beyond that. but since he's trying to draw semi realistically, perspective knowledge is a must in his case. please stop making a fool of yourself and just gtfo.
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>>2579062
stop being so butthurt. is your ass still aching because you can't take criticism? grow a pair instead of being such a sissy.
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>>2579051
this is very appealing, especially the right sketch. but it's hard to really judge your skill based on this alone.
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>>2578982
over referenced is the first thing that comes to mind. that's why that other anon said it was traced. work on your gesture and try to stylize more. this way you'll avoid the over-referenced look and in the process you'll develop your own style.
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>>2579088
>>2579093
Reply in one post, kekfag. At least be a little less autistic.
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>>2579107
this is how much
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>>2579107
I care
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>>2578997
Either he's gotten lazy as fuck or he doesn't care anymore.
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>>2578997
I didn't say "hey draw like doxy!" I said he has a good dick tutorial, which he does. You can take helpful things from doxy without becoming a carbon copy. (Coughr4cough)
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commissioner wants God Eater futa shibari
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Seems unfinished to me, how do I improve?
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Does anyone have any advice on a simple background I could use to bring this thing together?
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>>2579383
Actually found a solution I'm happy with.
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>>2579099
Noted, i'll try my best
Thanks !
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>>2578405
I see what you're trying to do, but the way that dick moves makes no sense... is the guy jumping violently up and down? Look at some porn where that particular motion is done and you'll see where you went wrong. Also, the genitals are poorly/incorrectly drawn, which is a bit of a boner kill. I like the angle and the girls face, tho. It has potential.
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>>2579320
Careful with her torso. She's so narrow she has no room for her organs.
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>>2579405
Thanks! Yeah, I have really been neglecting my studies on private parts. I won't be fixing this piece up because I consider myself done with it, but I'll do some studies before I move onto my next piece.
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>>2579434
try to rely less on tracing other people's art as well.
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>>2578372
your linework is very poor but your construction is decent, assuming you're working from memory. got a blog or something?
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Will this get me banned on tumblr? and if so what's a better alternative?
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>>2579579
>Banned from tumblr for posting porn
Kek, even disturbing fetish porn is probably one of the least disturbing things people post on tumblr
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>>2579582
Well that's what I think too, but posting shota still worries me for some reason
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>>2579174
Exaggerations is the route of insanity, once you draw "good" for too long, you have to go out to make your stuff "more appealing". This doesn't always work, nor should be something you'd fall into. But as for many porn artists, this tends to happen a lot I noticed.
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>>2579591
they only hate lolis
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>>2577224
Blog?
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>>2579579
Hentai foundry is good for this kinda stuff, but you'll be fine on tumblr. I draw bestiality and they still haven't banned me.
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>>2579407
torso looks fine dood
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>>2576759
Top kek, anon

>First time in /ic/ what do y'all think?
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>>2579684
Hmm, alright, thanks man. Mind if you post your blog so I can see the stuff you get away with?
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>>2579003
>how the fuck do you fuck it up this bad
That shit is clearly intentional. Stop being a dunce. You're in a porn art thread, accurate anatomy has never been what sells porn.
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To the anon who drew this:
ARE YOU STILL HERE?

I'm the one who wanted to commission you for some animation. Sry I didn't get back to you in decent time, but I'm ready nao.
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First time drawing a trap and a dick. Kinda impressed, kinda mad that I could draw a decent looking feminine penis without using a reference, suggestions on what to improve? I'm working on the feet right now so if anyone has any critique, tips or suggestions, I'd appreciate them!
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>>2579366
Practice colour theory a bit more maybe? Assuming you're using a reference, it doesn't really look like you've got a good grasp of using colour or blending neatly atm. Your anatomy is a bit off as well, I can tell from how you've drawn the hands and fingers that you don't have a solid understanding of 3D form yet. The face almost looks traced but I'm giving you the benefit of the doubt here.
In short, practice shading on simple 3D objects before attempting a full figure. And maybe draw different hands a couple hundred times.
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>>2580194
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crit pls
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>>2579579
I doubt you are that big of a name to attract enough haters. Don't worry.
>>2579591
adult link and doesn't qualify as shota.

>>2579704
nah, it doesn't. his anatomy is your typical anime/manga symbol driven crap. huge heads, hands and feet way too small, waists and torsos too thin to hold organs and so on. inb4 style. yes yes, sure. but you see anon, there's good stylization and then you also have this kind of stylization, like copycat anon here does. he just mimics other mangakas he likes but he doesn't have a clue why things look like they do. and so he ends up with crap that lacks the fundamentals true manga masters really understand and apply to their drawings.

>>2579891
>filename
you can't draw the rest either, for that matter.
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>>2580324
learn some fundamentals of drawing, a.k.a. read the sticky and gtfo to the beginners thread.
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>>2580327
Any critique or suggestions to improve then senpai?
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>>2580324
Anatomy doesn't need to be realistic, but it needs to be there. Also, experiment more with shading.
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Drew one more
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>>2580194
>>2580324
STOP! stop what you are doing and learn how to draw. You know damn well that looks like shit.
read the sticky, follow the sticky


>>2579320
So do you...
That's a commission? I would want my money back. What did you do, copy the head? because other than that its fucked up from the neck down. Figure studies dude, figure studies. Good anime artists have SOME understanding of how human being should look. Do some fucking studies m8

>>2578841
At least you know its bad.
JUST drawing isn't going to get you anywhere. You need to study buddy. I Barely see any understanding of the basics going on in this picture dude. If you spend even a fraction of the all time you claim to use drawing turds, to do some studies, you'd be a better than most of the people in this thread.

>>2577645
The perspective isn't the only thing that's fucked anon. I know you know it's bad. Do some studies, learn a bit about human anatomy, fucking STOP the way you are doing that line art as it is quite shit.

>>2579891
It's not just the feet familia
The more I look at this the more obvious your lack of understanding of the basics shows. You need to stop copying legoman heads and do some figure studies.


>>2579366
That's a Study right? actually it doesn't matter...Yes it is unfinished. In fact you need to start over.
Honestly I would say you need to learn how to finish a drawing before rendering.

Pay attention to your proportions, how light hits the figure, how the form changes from light to shadow. Measure your ref.

Please Don't use lines for each individual hair, those eyebrows and eye lashes are fucking my shit up.

Since you are a beginner don't fucking use the airbrush until you are just about finished with the pic.


>>2580372
Another fuck up from the neck down.
don't waste your time polishing turds. You are hiding every part you don't understand and the parts you think you do; YOU DO NOT. Figure fucking studies sonny, get on that shit.
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>>2580363
I already told you in previous threads but you don't seem to listen to critique. You need to improve your gesture, understanding of perspective (internalization of it) and how elements in a 3d environment interact with eachother.
But I'm sure you won't address all this in a studying manner and you'll instead keep doing what you are doing trying to eventually get better at it.
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>>2580410
this guy gets it.
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>>2579579
This is great. Are you taking commissions?
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>>2579891
Biceps, abs, thighs. Fat doesn't grow like that either.
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>>2580456
acquire taste plox
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fuck me up
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first pr0n drawing i ever spent a lot of time on so it's probably a polished turd. lewd isn't usually my thing so i'd like to know what i could do to make it better.
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wow i really dont understand how interest in futanari has suddenly sky rocketed.

almost every fkn porn artist draws futa now. Even if the image isn't futa, it comes with a mandatory futa version of it. Hell, I've seen artist draw futa first, leaving the vagina version to be the 'edit'.
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>>2580658
>suddenly
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>>2580660

Yeah, suddenly. Obviously it wasn't unknown even years ago, but now its like every fucking artist is into it, or even just draws it to satisfy those who are interested in it.

if you ask me, it's come about from years of use of fictional pornography on the internet, resulting in many porn users who are seeking something new, or strangely erotic....
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>>2580532
are you that guy who drew the big demon boyfriend? i want your blog
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>>2580434
I've only posted this in the beginner thread as well, were you the same anon that replied there? If so I'm working on your suggestions and really appreciate the feedback, but you otherwise seem annoyed by something I have (or haven't?) Done
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>>2580410
Fucked up feet trap artist here, thanks for the feedback! It's been a while since I've done figure studies and just started working on heads, so I'll do those for a couple days as well as what >>2580434
This anon suggested and try it again next week, wish me luck
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>>2580668
yeah, that's me
www.vaporwave-king.tumblr.com
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>>2578841
is that fucking narancia
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>>2580327
C'mon man it's clearly young link, step it up

>>2580456
Sorry but no, not right now. I already have one guy and that's enough to keep me busy.
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>>2580763
haha wow. keep drawing and keep being you, ok?
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>>2578994
Then go to /b/ or /trash/
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>>2580658
Don't get uppity with me about ny dickuus oniichan or I'll call your parents on you desu
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>>2580969
then either learn how to draw young looking characters, or even better go die in a fire, fucking degenerate.
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What do you think so far? I'm sorry if it's not very good.
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>>2580663
This is basically the answer. Among other reasons.
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crit pls
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>>2581263
Doesn't really have much going for it. It's literally just a naked girl standing there doing nothing erotic in particular. One can hardly call it porn, just NSFW.

The proportions are off, but I can tell that you've clearly tried with individual body parts. Breasts have a lot of detail, your hands look okay, and your feet, while manly, have some structure to them.
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>>2579407
Ah right, thanks. I'll fix it once i get home
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>>2581324

I referenced my feet in a mirror so that's probably why, I couldn't really tell they looked manly though. I'll have to look up some girl feet and try to figure out where the difference is. I'm not really a foot guy, I just didn't want them to look bad.

You think the legs are too short? They're longer than the torso, so they're already a bit longer than normal. I think.

I know it's a little plain, but it just said NSFW thread, so I assumed this was the place to post it. I know it's not very dynamic, I've been thinking about it since I started the drawing. I tried to add a bit of flow to it through the right arm and left leg, but it's still kind of stiff. I'll definitely try to do something with more of an action next time.
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>>2578409
http://dross-art.tumblr.com/
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>>2579891
i'm not saying you did, but it looks like you took the pose from my sketch in another thread and also the part where mine is gonna be a trap.
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>>2579891
>>2581385
it's not that you can't draw the same thing and same pose as someone else, but it's rude. There is too much borrowed from mine for this to be a coincidence
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>>2581392
>I-it can't be a coincidence
Sure anon, sure. Your pose and concept were so exceptional that on the internet where a person could copy or trace any pose they wanted, they chose yours because it was just that good.

Stop starting shit, get over yourself, and shut the fuck up.
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>>2581385
shut the fuck up. nobody cares enough about your shitty traps and the fucked up left leg to steal from you.
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>>2581401
I didnt say my pose was good (I changed it to something different after that). I have reason to believe your that same person for how bizarrely hostile you are.

Also, It doesn't matter if the idea or concept are good, it matters a bit to me that they copied it without saying anything. I literally made that pose up, I haven't used any references yet
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>>2581392
>>2581401
what do you reckon the chances are this is a samefag?
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>>2581416


>>2581401
>>2581406

oops, I meant these two
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>>2581418
we're not sucking your dick so we must be the same person or even the same artist as the guy above, is that it? how autistic can you be?

you're so goddamn sensitive you won't make it in you think everyone and their dog is stealing from you. your pose isn't original at all.

I have a better idea. Why dont you just not post anything online at all, because you're so scared that someone's going to steal from you? nobody want to see your shitty art anyway.
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>>2581433
eh, I just thought it was weird that two people said "shut the fuck up" in two post very soon after each other.

I'm not as upset as you seem to think I am. you must think I'm here screaming or crying like a 12 year old.
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>>2581031
thank you :) i appreciate that
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>>2581263
>one foot in one foot out
This is my favourite modern meme.
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>>2581433
>>2581385
Both of you just fuck off. We don't give a flying shit if you fuckboi rip each other off, both of your works are flawed and aren't anything special as a piece of artwork. Many faggots have done better, stop bitching over your shit pictures being similar and fucking get better at drawing to compete with better artists out there.
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>>2581600

To be fair, this is the first time I've done it. I didn't really think about it beyond not wanting to draw her standing straight like a board.
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>>2577549
u sound like u need a good shag
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>>2581392
>>2581385
y i k e s, I'm the first trap artist, you're right the poses do look similar but I didn't see your thread anon. Just got it from trying to draw off the top of my head based on other traps and then found a pinup reference later. >>2581401
This guy was right in that the pose itself isn't terribly unique either, sorry you feel that way tho

Apologies guys, I didn't expect this thread to get derailed because of my shitty drawing, just wanted honest feedback, which I got. I won't post again in case I accidentally set off another shitstorm, but happy drawing guys
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>>2581647
face looks silly tho
hard to pinpoint why
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>>2579174
Exaggeration is to porn as sketching is to drawing. They do it because it's fun to do and it helps to try to skew the anatomy as much as you can while it still resembles what it's meant to somewhat
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>>2581652
something about the eyes maybe.
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>>2581647
You draw the nostrils-up makes it look like their head is tilted backwards, but you draw the lower jaw and the neck as if it is facing directly forward, it looks like she is wearing a mask or there is something wrong with her jaw, because mouths do not work like that unless you are a snake

Also, I have nothing against women with defined cheekbones, but that is just ridiculous, no one cheekbones look like that, no matter how much of their blood is 1/16th Cherokee
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>>2581647
The eye on the right is drooping slightly. Really well drawn otherwise though.
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>>2581651
no worries, I jumped the gun a bit. It's not unreasonable that we both saw the same trap picture and did a pose based off it. I've done that with another trap picture and didn't realize it until after.
your drawing isn't shitty, sorry for the drama.
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>>2581672
hmm, yeah, i messed up with the lower jaw. i used reference(see pic related) but didn't properly think through how a wide open mouth would affect the jaw and neck.

>>2581677
now that i look at it again the eye does look a bit droopy.

appreciate the critique fellas.
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>>2581704
yeah it is easy to shift the placement of the lower jaw from head-on
the mouth will fuck you up, trick you into thinking it moves much, but the jaw and chin don't move too much, is best to imagine a flat plank on your subject face to help

good luck with the fix, i really like the art on your tumblr, good bodies
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and an unfinished piece, any feedback is welcome.
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>>2581874
her eyes don't make any sense and they are also fucking awful looking
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>>2581874
dat right leg...
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Dear lord... I mixed up this thread with the cringe thread...

I'm never disappointed with how much /ic/ disappoints
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>>2581349
stop talking about dynamics and details, when it's obvious you lack fundamental knowledge such as perspective, anatomy and gesture.
stick to the beginners thread until you get better and stop trying to make porn.
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>>2581647
either overly referenced or traced. in both cases, stop doing that. you end up with a copy of a photo instead of something interesting that has your personal note to it.
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>>2576734
If she's an artist she will understand .. It's art! Then u ask her to pose nude 4u
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>>2581289
Did you use the feels guy's face as a reference?
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Having trouble with her right hand.
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>>2582158
>Having trouble.
there, ftfy.
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>>2582158
Haha what the fuck
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>>2576710
why does it look so bad guys?
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>>2582283
because you have no idea what fundamentals are and all you are doing is copying stuff you saw instead of understanding what you saw and how to draw it properly.
tl;dr you are a beginner and you should gtfo to the corresponding thread.
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I sort of feel like /ic/s obsession with classical anatomy makes it not the best place on advice for porn. When you look at the art styles that tend to be the most popular they tend to be heavily stylised.
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>>2581096
update.
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>>2582329
another idiot that doesn't know why fundamentals are called fundamentals.
all good artist stylize THAT GOOD because their knowledge of stylization is supported by their understanding of fundamentals.
yeah, you can copy and mimic styles, but if your fundamentals aren't in place the picture in most cases will look like crap (basically almost every single pic in this thread is like that).
Seriously anon, if you are a beginner stop trying to sound smart. You just end up sounding like an idiot.
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>>2582333
fix the proportions of the face. the eyes are too far apart. the mouth and nose are placed too far to her right.
the perspective of the hands could be revised as well and her right forearm is way too thin.
Otherwise it's a really neat pic anon. Keep it up.
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>>2582341
you are being the idiot here anon
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why do shitty artists always insist on drawing porn?
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>>2582351
Because they know no one will care about their art unless it satisfied some carnal need.

Keeps them from working as a barista their entire career.
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>>2582341
You see plenty of complaints that are actually about stylisation though.
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>>2582351
Because when people are horny they have less blood flowing to their brains, making them less discerning. I.e., it's easy.
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>>2582361
>>2582355
>>2582351
why so salty anons?
we will all make it remember? ^~^
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>>2582158
fingers too long, palm too short
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>>2581813
that made me realize, green lantern can fuck as many asses as he wants and whatever sizes he wants
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>>2582346
Thank you! Edited the face and forearm, might take a look at the hands as well after a short break!
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Where the furshit at?
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>>2582376
(You) first
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>>2582364
I'm not salty, I draw porn myself, I believe it is a smart choice, good luck making it in SFW.

Plus, less clothes, less details to work on~
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>>2582310
It was from imagination anon
But that critique isn't really helpful tbhf
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>>2582349
prove me wrong, scrubby.
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>>2582400
it doesn't matter if it was from imagination. it still applies to your art. you see something in your mind and instead of constructing the pose (which you'd do if you had some knowledge about perspective and figure drawing) you just draw something that you think is okay. but since you aren't skilled enough, you can't tell what's exactly wrong. you only know it looks crappier than work from people that actually know how to draw.
as I said earlier. you lack fundamental knowledge about drawing.
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>>2582283
Black lines,stiff pose,dumb expression,Shading makes no sense ,stupid crop,if would be better if she had legs.
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>>2582013

I know a fair amount about all of those things, I just don't do very much figure invention, so it's a bit rocky right now. I hadn't intended to make porn, like I said in the other reply, the thread just said NSFW and had a picture of a naked chick in the OP so I posted it here.

I hope you got a good rush out of your comment, but you didn't really get anywhere with it.
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>>2582341
Question, have you gotten any faggot here to actually follow your advice? I still see the same shit after all the shit you've given them with no results.
Maybe you need to be a better teacher.
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>>2582535
>no results.
A. People don't learn how to draw in one day, especially people who have never tried to draw well in their life.
B. Most beginners post expecting everyone congratulate them for their shitty drawing and never come back once they see they won't be getting any of that. Case in point >>2582479
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>>2582561

Who says I was expecting congratulations? I apologized for it not being great when I posted it, I never expected anything but criticism. Constructive criticism mind you, not "you're awful and don't know anything go to the beginner thread". That's not even criticism, that's just you jerking your ego off.

You have mental problems man, I just posted a picture to see what advice people would give, this isn't some weird dick measuring competition.
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some quick concepts for a sm convention flyers.
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>>2582634
Reminds me of Death Grip's Money Store
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>>2582636
>Death Grip's Money Store
true, it's a nice cover.
didn't know about them, my draws are older than the album, but this kind of masks are not rare on the sm community. here's another sketch
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>>2577502
Really like how you did your trees man
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>>2579579
Why does it have to be a dick
it'd be hotter if it was a vaginal tentacle or someshit like that so its like a fleshlight
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>>2582535
>>2582568

He's trying to help you dude. Fundamentals are not a meme, yes you are trying to stylized but you cannot stylize shit if you don't know what the real thing looks like.

>not "you're awful and don't know anything go to the beginner thread"

this what he say right?

>because you have no idea what fundamentals are and all you are doing is copying stuff you saw instead of understanding what you saw and how to draw it properly. tl;dr you are a beginner and you should gtfo to the corresponding thread.

and is true. Your photo you post show you don't know how anatomy works. No, you don't need to be Rembrandt to draw porn but you do need to know how anatomy works so you know which pieces go where in relation to everything else. That is what is wrong with your drawing, the proportions are messed up, that is not even getting in to the fact that the shading doesn't make sense. I think he could have easily said "proportions are fucked" then you go and tweak proportions, but that only help for this 1 picture. Try putting your hand where she has her hand and you would probably agree with him.

>I just posted a picture to see what advice people would give, this isn't some weird dick measuring competition

I not see anybody here stroking their ego. I see a person try to help you by telling you to go to the beginner thread and fix your anatomy and you take it as an insult because "it's stylized". If anybody is stroking their ego here it's you because you think your drawings are clearly above critique like "fix your anatomy".
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>>2582479
If you actually knew your fundamentals then figure invention would not be a problem.

Stop being a fucking baby and study
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>>2582535
That's because those anons are too lazy to put in the work to get better.

They aren't going to make it and neither are you
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>>2583146
knowing and executing are two different things fuckboi. You can know something but still be working on properly executing it for yourself. That part takes time and practice. Now shut up and draw you cunt.
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>>2583146

How am I being a baby? You're the only person freaking out here man. I filled two pages of my sketchbook with Bridgman studies this morning and I spent the evening laying in a cast drawing. What did you do? Shit post all day? Get a life, champ.
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Mouse porn I did awhile back. The hips are horribly misaligned.
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>>2583303
looks like mewtwo
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>>2583218
>>2583227
stop being fucking babies and study you lazy twats.
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>>2583354
>has nothing to add
>posts anyway
The only one who needs to be studying is you, anon.
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>>2583363
You too
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>>2583370
You first
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>>2582479
well, then if you are so knowledgeable about the stuff I said, then you lack execution. in both cases, what I said still applies to your case. until you manage to reach a satisfying level or knowledge (or execution in your case - but I call the fact that you know your stuff total bullshit) stop trying to draw porn and hurting yourself. go a step back and do gesture and studies with simpler stuff until you are good enough for porn.
tl;dr gtfo to the beginners thread.

>I hope you got a good rush out of your comment, but you didn't really get anywhere with it.
I'm sure my comments aren't hitting the spot, yeah. you are way too delusional and proud to admit I am right, so you'll keep lying to yourself about you knowing your stuff and you'll just keep drawing crap until you'll either get better in a longer period of time than you would if you'd actually listened to me, or stop drawing because you'll see that this is too hard for you.
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>>2582535
I'm sure I scared away some people. I hope they went to study to actually get good, but if I scared them away from drawing altogether it's probably for the best. you need a really strong backbone to actually get good with art.
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>>2583429
>you need a really strong backbone to actually get good with art.

With the amount of desperate thirsty virgins and autistic fandoms on the internet, mediocre artists are held with high regard. All you need to do is draw fan-art and/or porn. Preferably both at the same time.
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>>2581873
No tear-a-new-butthole which means it is decent.
Her left tit is a problem. Tits that big are soft and would push against the arm. Not appear in front of it like that.
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>>2581813
The size of her hand doesn't match the butt.
You should see the sole of her right boot. Shins look like they are a different length.
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>>2581263
You seem to have studied parts of the body well but they don't function as a whole. Your arms are too tiny and too short for example, hands end in the middle of the thigh. If I were you I would try to go for 2-3 minute sketches to unlearn anatomical detail and really get the proportion of the human body in your head.
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>>2579407
>she
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>>2583517

I never got around to doing quick sketch, but I guess I'll take another crack at it. The slow anatomy studies I've been doing have been great for training my eye, but yeah, they're not really helping as much with figure invention right now as you'd think they would.Thanks.
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>>2583504
>getting good at art
>drawing shit
pick one anon
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>>2578841
Back to /jojo/ buddy
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>>2582465
but i do construct anon, it just so happens that the drawing doesnt have any crazy perspective going on
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>>2583413
You second
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>>2583735
Is it a trap?
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Here's a character I just made today
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>>2576733
If she has literally any knowledge of art she will expect nudity eventually. Or she will think you are a faggot who is scared of women. Whichever.
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>>2576710
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I call it box-cock.
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>>2583832
It looks like Ruirui from Gatchaman Crowds, my guess is yes
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>>2580184
gimme your art blog boy
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just started this like 10 minutes ago, and want to get a god critique before I continue
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>>2583885
why
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>>2584264
Your construction and lines are poor. And the right title looks deformed.
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>>2584264
read a figure drawing book m8|
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>>2578971
For once I agree with a stranger on /ic/
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>>2583853
wow you made that
you're so super talented and original anon
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>>2583885
Get your horribad mheymhey joke pics off the internet.
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