This is mainly an illustration board. The best I could do for this type of shit is refer you to /gd/ but they'd just laugh you out.

>>2564476
it's shit, next.

I like it. And I would like it better done up in acrylic paint. As it is,the concept works: do a few more studies,make the psychdelia more winding and elaborate,and juxtapose those bright trippy colors with a bland dark muted landscape and a plain satellite dish. Then do a Big Work based on the lessons learned in the studies,maybe not in colored pencil,but let the medium suit the colors.

Look up Peter Max. Watch Yellow Submarine.
And Explore Unafraid.