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>Fresh off the boat? Get back on the boat and read THIS:
http://www.squidoo.com/how-to-draw-learn
>/ic/s (new) sticky:
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1VfDTpLLVl5bWUGWguswKpPFml533luI8-NBd1EGYHnA/edit
>Hitokaku Index
http://www.asahi-net.or.jp/~zm5s-nkmr/
>0033
http://www.pixiv.net/member_illust.php?id=59317
>List of active livestreams
http://livestreamstatuslist.appspot.com/
>fellowBro's books
http://mediafire.com/?i44dwzkf9j9n8
>Tutorial/Reference Collection
http://pinterest.com/characterdesigh/
>Japanese Tutorials
http://iradukai.com/
>Figures
http://reference.sketchdaily.net/
>Pose Practice
http://www.eggazyoutatsu.net/eng/atarichan.html
Remember the words of our good friend Glen Vilppu: “No rules, just tools.”
I drew a little girl too!
>>2559253
>inb4 "muh grills aint LITTLE!! REEEEEEEEEEEEE"
Did I do this right?
>>2559253
ass
>>2559253
it's a 20yo with a big head
this is a good ref for little girls body
(artist Ashika, had to censor for general rules)
>>2559316
DELETE THIS
>>2559320
sometimes i wonder if he have some little girls in his home, some anatomy is scary accurate
>>2559322
or just child pornagrophey on his raid storage
>>2559322
>accurate
And how would you know?
>>2559324
uh-
eh-
and...
urr
you know
(jokes apart at the pool and there are children there)
>>2559253
cute, blog?
Done.
>>2559316
tfw somebody refered my favorite artist
>>2559253
how tasteful
Zenyatta's ra skin is pretty neat.
>>2559269
dont know why you'd exclude the head/hands. if you're trying for a tanline it wont be such a hard edge. it'll be noticeable but not a pixel perfect line. it looks odd.
>>2559253
need your blog. or where ever you post. your style reminds me of somebody on /b/
>>2559542
>Ra skin
>not Sunyatta
go away
Kinda inspired by >>2557910
Any help with the hand? Or in general?
>>2559316
20 years old is little girl still
>>2559552
who might that be?????????
http://ultrapitchfork.tumblr.com/
>>2559710
20 years old is old hag material m8
gonna do every shit from scot roberson how2, will kill anxiety with lolis ayyy
>>2559642
fingers are too curved, you might want to resize that hand, seems small, not enought increase in proportion
On the topic of perspective and anatomy, can someone explain how this image works? It's my dream to be able to do this with some level of competency but I have no idea where to start.
>>2559758
everything is fine but birds/plane for now
birds are not beilable, they're spread around, same size, pretty big
the plane is facint outside, so it does not interact with the giant, you might want to put it facing towards the girl
this is turning 2 alternative giant lolis thread
>>2559760
I didn't draw the pic, but I was looking for an explanation on how the lines in the background determine what the figure looks like.
>>2559763
the grid only determine the distorsion of the figure. You can place a box and the figure inside, with that you have a reference to place other minor forms
I can't do it anyway, made it harder tho kek
trying
>>2559844
digging that thigh, but I don't think biceps attach in the armpit like that.
>>2559854
aaayy fixin
will start using refs or i'm fucked
>>2559642
interesting brush, makes things look traditional, i assume its a chalk brush yes?
p much finished idk w
>>2559902
glad to see you doing another, doing god's work
also finished i guess, although it was just cleanup and stuff from the rough
I have no idea how to define the background for this one, my brain is frying already. It's not very well defined but it's basically a butler taking two demon kids for a walk in a demon garden. Any suggestions/critique?
hi i'm new here first time posting did a doodle real quick
>>2559914
where is the wet juices leaking from her vagina?
>>2559929
that's going great, the shoulders thing is cool
it's fun, but I'm too rusty to paint, might try with this one
>>2559944
gross
>>2559965
dude wants to post this on dA for his shibari flicks so i dont think that's gonna fly
>>2559914
the hair looks pretty shite but the colors are nice
>>2559902
Who made her shoes?
>>2559978
is that supposed to be another giant woman off in the distance anon?
if so, i would seriously reevaluate her position in this image... the level that she is grounded at makes it look like she is almost the same distance to the viewer as the woman on the left.
>>2560000
pls explain
first time in this thread, trying to work on character creation. any thoughts?
>>2560001
third world kids bein exploited
it was that or cringe stuff
>>2560004
lineart weight, values and colors are not set yet at all, it's early to say that
gonna try to render it like this >>2557397 and pic related
without showing line art at all, but with softer edges, wish me luck
>>2560036
im not talking about the line weight, values or colors. im talking about perspective and where the character is grounded in the image.
imo you should either A, move the tank up to emphasize the horizon line as being really low so that most of the elements on your pic are grounded on almost the same line.
or B, move the giant woman farthest away up to continue the established perspective between the foreground tank and woman.
also, i really like this pic of the three women. probably my fave of yours that ive seen so far.
>>2560036
probably a dumb question but i love the way this is rendered, anyone know how the artist achieved that affect?
>>2559642
anon who did that piece here. I'd say it got rather dull composition but you had the right idea. her hand is too open and the fingers are too curved like other anon said. top right plane is weird with the perspective too.
how will you color it? I suggest put some explosions in the background to give the character a backlight would've look good.
do you have a blog?
>>2560054
Doing A, thx anon
Is there a rule of thumb for adding contrast?
>>2560092
for sure M. lookin better already.
update
maybe I keep working on it.. but I'm not sure it's gonna be worth the time at this point, because I get stuck :/
>>2560272
put grass details in the foreground to indicate distance.
>>2560272
do you still want crit on it?
>>2560295
yes, will correct few things tomorrow
air layer
details
light layers on skin
saturation layers
clouds..
If you have any cc, please go ahead, i'll modify
>>2559572
nice rendering, bad drawing
Ok.>>2560305
>>2559078
My character designs for an /ic/ mascot.
Say hi to K/ic/k
>>2560391
Woops, forgot to resize.
starting to get color in.
>>2560272
make a stronger tilt on the hips, shorten the tight in perspective, sock is above the horizon, position of arm is anatomically not possible.
>>2560078
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=bvWAPCt6a_g
maybe that helps.
>>2560272
>>2560300
i think the shadow is a little weird on the tank. there shouldnt be those slivers of light on the side of the tank facing left. if these planes are flat, then the shadow should be consistent. also, make is so planes that are facing different directions have a different level of shadow.
also, i would recommend that you work on your line quality. im not sure how far you want to take this image, but if you spend more time on it, cleaning up these lines would be prudent.
i think >>2560426
is exaggerating how wonky the perspective on the tank is, but it is a little weird.
having said that, i like the way youve drawn the shapes of the tank and the antennas.
is this for anything in particular, or is it just practice?
>>2560394
Work more on your drawing and less on your handwriting
help?
>>2560534
Push the pose. Make that booty pop and that back arch just a little more. It looks lifelike which is nice, and has some damn good form, but it feels stiff and boring in a plain pose like that. Don't be afraid to take subtle influence from pinups.
>>2560534
It's pretty flat
I know it's cartoony but try to think of it less in symbols and more in a 3D space.
>>2560548
you think the whole thing is flat?
>>2560509
Gotcha. I just have to write a lot for school, so I work on my handwriting constantly.
Do you have any tips on learning? Not just
>hurr durr draw more fagoe
But on regimenting your practice and making learning more linear? I just can't discern wether I'm learning or not. Every once in a while something cl/ic/ks, but generally it feels pretty fucking pointless.
>>2559542
>>ovals instead of circles
hold shift in mspaint while drawing a circle, to keep it the same width/height
better?
>>2559078
I need to draw more from imagination/fun.
did an edit can i be poplar now
>>2560780
super blade runner lighting, might be to shiny, other than that super comfy. 9/10
>>2561104
love it
dem tank eyes lol
>>2561104
there's not a lot of depth to it, girl in the background just looks regular sized
chromatic aberration could be toned down a bit.
>>2561104
why u always adding that filter?
>>2559935
How can i push this further, anons?
>>2561178
The flat colors are nice, but there is clearly supposed to be some depth. Use some saturation depth queues for the background to make the characters pop
>>2559929
Sick! Do you have a tumblr/da/hf? I'm hoping you take commissions. I've been looking for someone who paints like Calm (he doesn't do reqs/coms).
>>2561178
I actually rather like this already. Some of your color-choices are a bit questionable, though.
Having a large amount of different colors usually works best when they aren't too saturated, and while you did a decent job with that in some areas of the picture, the three characters themselves are a bit painful to look at right now.
A lot of your colors are also in the same mid-value range. For example, the rodent-like creature running from the girl almost gets lost despite being a very different color from its surroundings because of the similar values.
I'm not sure if you intend to add shading or if you want to keep it just with color flats, but either way, you might want to change some of the values and color temperatures to create more depth.
It seems like you already did a little bit of that with the closer trees being darker and warmer in color, but I think you could push that aspect further. It's also inconsistent right now - the grass/bushes close to the viewer don't really look any different than the ones further away.
>>2561178
well the perspective is very flat. it looks like you added the background after you've created the characters. they don't seem to be standing in space, they're just alligned next to each other with no depth.
you could change it so they'd be descending stairs.
composition-wise change the position of the girl and squirrel. maybe mirror her, put her in the background and move the two males to the right corner.
>>2560534
I changed the face to give it more flowand a bit closer to a style i want.
>>2561260
http://yilx.deviantart.com/
Not taking comms though, sorry
>tfw never be as good as Gashi-Gashi or whoever the fuck did this piece of shit
JUST
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=6th9p3T6lkU
a sketch
>>2561655
remember you, you got crazy better!
>>2561657
Am I so obvious and recongnizable? Though I was unknown here
Are you Jaycee? I thought no one can recognize me besides him. Still paint like shit, some day gonna find those anime coloring tutorials...
>>2561660
yes you are, youre the faggot who framed me.
>>2561667
When are you gonna stop with the frame story?
I explained you more than once and still think i framed you. Bad lines by the way
>>2561674
someone pull up the fucking picture its the same fucking style
>>2561684
Any real prove besides you empty words Nose Bro?
How do we know you aren´t tryin to divert the attention to me in the first place?
gonna try to paint and maybe add a background to it
>>2561693
bro, i fucking know its syou, if i cna track your style from picture to picture, i can reverse engineer to the firs tone.
please respond
>>2560410
heres an update.
trying a new color/shading style. what do you guys think?
>>2561437
your rendering style is pretty nice anon.
anatomy looks pretty good too.
clean up the colors and do more on it i think
>>2561709
i think this image is generally well done. im not sure exactly whats up with the pose, but if shes just kinda floating then whatever.
the only real issue i have with your pic is the perspective of the barrel of the gun shes holding. the mechanics look extremely good, but the end of the barrel looks like is is supposed to line up in a symmetrical way... but your pic looks like the the barrel is off kilter or somethin.
>>2561839
thank you yea I see what you mean. its janky looking as fuck
and yea the pose is kind of weird, she's really just supposed to be floating there lol. I'm gonna have like a big swirl of snow particles and stuff fly around her.
>>2561791
I like it so far - keep going, I'd like to see how it ends up
>>2559343
Wow, no one saw my Hamakaze
Working on this
Done with this commission
>>2561437
Try and block out the forms and shadows in the line drawing before you start painting so you don't have to guess
Poses from that ref thread
>>2561970
Pretty good
>>2560078
its called ambient occlusion, im pretty sure?
>>2561970
you got a link for that charcoal brush?
my first non loli character
Ignore right hand
i would like to ask some help on how to make ribs show
>>2561890
cute face
try sketching with huge fat lines so you build up some line confidence, drawing like that is really tiring
>>2562230
The giant has some strange proportion issues. Like her femur is super long, her arms look different sizes, her rib cage and pelvis meet oddly etc. Are you using any ref besides the Wyeth painting?
>>2562277
Your art is cute and the effort you put in is cute anon. If you make a blog you'll be less lonely
>>2562099
The ribs shouldn't blend with the abs like they do on a kid because of the TITTIES, especially with curved spine pose. Also what i found really helpful with drawing women is imagining the abdomen and vag as separate from the legs and then have the hips and thighs push outwards rather than being a parallel extension of the body.
Never redlined before (greenlining in this case) so i hope it's of some help to you.
>>2562325
My dream is become a professional anime illustrator in Japan like them www.twitter.com/ugume3732 or www.twitter.com/kanzakihiro.
I made my twitter account and i have my 12 fallowers... This is my first step to reach my dream. Also i made some japanese friends who has the same dream like me, so this is fun. Thank you for your words and sorry for my bad english.
>>2562237
thx, not referencing, only the clasic painting
>>2561952
dont have to guess what?
>>2562277
Wow, dude, with that attitude I'm sure you will make it far.
>>2562378
I was expecting he was more specific, thats all
>>2562403
You don't look a gift horse in the mouth, in a place where people take time out of their lives to give you any kind of feedback you take what you get, people gave you specific advice in the last thread but you didn't take it.
>>2562403
Specific (i.e. harsh) advice is that your fundamentals are weak. It looks like you're taking ~8 hours to draw something that's a 15 minute sketch because you're trying to replicate a crisp anime style. If you do more studies and build up your muscle memory the lines will come naturally.
>>2561714
Then do it! By the way there are lots of artist whose doodles look similar to yours. Even some sketches from malaysia...
You never reply the question. How do we know that isn´t you just trying to get attention?
>>2562529
Be careful about posting doodles and sketches. Nose Bro will think you are trying to frame him or some shit...
>>2560078
>>2562005
you combine ambient occlusion + soft shadows.
think of occlusion as the smaller, sharp/dark shadows under things such as belts, collars, fabric overhanging very close to the skin, etc, where the overall light in the room really struggles to reach.
so rather than the intention of these shadows being "i want to show which direction light is coming from, and how intense it is, making my subject look 3D", it's just "i want to show the viewer that the overall light in this scene is really struggling to get into these spots".
you then combine the occlusion shadows on top of a more accurate set of shadows that resemble a 3D shape, but you purposely make the accurate shadows a soft grey with rather smooth edges, so that the occlusion ones always appear darker and sharper on the eyes.
will finish the background/water tomorrow...
Dunno why it got that deviantart feeling...
>>2562733
Needs more curve in the back and thinner waist.
>>2561851
np anon
>>2561791
>>2561877
thx anon.
heres an update
>>2562733
nigga the other faggot redlined it for you .
>>2562677
bro im past the point where id have to actively look out for attention. Stop fucking sidetracking its the exact same style nigga. i know its you.
>>2562828
well that is almost anorexic
but i got a really clear idea of the values
thanks M senpai!
>>2562362
i love it
>>2562822
It doesnt seem so Nose Bro. I think you are devoloping an obssession with me.
I said prove it, you couldn´t. Stop this silly game. I KNOW you have the wrong guy
>>2562828
niga how you gonna do everything but give her an inverted stomach and not fix the hands?
>>2562876
know what? im gonna take your word for it.
>>2562880
I came here to meet people learn stuff share books etc etc. So far I met some cool people like jaycee, Firez even Lefty is a cool dude.
I am way pass the point of trolling and shit like that.
By the way what drove you here? wanna be a graphic desinger or somethin like that?
Nice to meet you btw
>>2562787
Do you have a blog? I like your style.
>>2562891
2 years 3 months ago i saw this guy who told me i could draw like him if i practiced for a year. I wanted to draw like him. I came here because I like the hostile atmosphere. People calling each other niggers and hating furries is hilarious to me. I don't know of any other community that doesn't sugarcoat. its fun here.
I want Nose Bro to leave, but not for the reason most other people do. I think he spends too much time shitposting here and its going to hold him back as much as it's held me back.
>>2563009
Which guy? Algen?
lol... Wondering how would be a real meeting of ic?
Would they still be calling niggers and hating furries to eachother? Who knows...
>>2563009
Confirmed for not making it unless your taste is as bad as your product
>>2562961
thx anon.
bceman.tumblr.com
>>2562427
You are right, sorry.
>>2562712
tl;dr for occlusion is that it's exactly your lineart; the transition points between forms. Just blended out
tried to channel kawayoo colors
>>2563329
I like it a lot.
Buhlog?
>>2563356
http://godsh0t.tumblr.com/
Yo, Im doing some stuff on Sai
Is there a way I can colour things and then Switch it easy?
Trying to figure out what colour this Shirt should be
>>2563329
really rad and cool desu senpai, but oversized, way too much
I guess the pic title is a praise to kek
am I going alright with the rendering? I'm not friendly with pushing contrasts
trying to render it properly with a painting style, quitting cell shading for a while
does she read well? what should I focus on?
>>2563371
I'd like to see what you will do in 2-3 years.
Keep it up man.
Perspective drawing and me... aren't really friends.
Can someone help me there?
>>2563477
If you don't like perspective, you don't do ultra-ambitious scenes, you either do something pretty flat or you take some time and put your VPs down, it doesn't take some talent, just work.
>>2563530
That's why I did this drawing, so hopefully I can get a better feeling for it. I'm bored of all the flat pictures.
>>2563578
Well, then you start putting your VPs. Here it's even funnier since it's 3 points. Use the line made by the spines of the characters to determine the verticals' convergence.
>>2563477
draw a mesh over the surfaces, and follow the form, you need to place ovas to make it read 3d instead of flat, the important thingg is ot put attention where the oval dismish on the outline, as it always make an asymptote
don't do the stuff so sketchy and construct it, keep the ovals with some criteria, you are going too fast
still gotta finish the bottom part of the painting, it's like doing another painting, damn
>>2563644
controlling the detail level is usually one of the harder parts when drawing giant muscle lolis
her anatomy is a little strange, her butt seems to be placed a bit too low? but that's just me, the overall feel is still really good
not sure if nipples or not...
or draw some kind of light dress on her
>>2563722
Whatever, that's already deviantart tier either way. The anatomy is quite terrible, and the shading isn't any better, the background makes it even worst.
Invert your drawing, that should at least make it more obvious for the face.
>>2563722
>>2563732
And if you have a hard time seeing the problems, just compares with great works.
An example of what I would consider top tier and that keeps the theme/composition of an elf bathing in a river.
The body is greatly done with ton of shading details, combined with lots of of details that still makes her nude. The arms position are more interesting. Same for the head position. And of course the background is properly done.
Yours looks like some kind of muddy swamp, and giving some much space is a terrible idea taking in account the very low amount of work done on the background. Study how to do proper water effects.
Don't go straight for thin lines, combined with bad anatomy and them not being totally clean ruins it. As for your body shading, your not doing it properly at all, those half blurry shadings makes it looks plastic as hell along with badly placed shadows, like the the two big ones up and below the tits. Which be the part that shouldn't have half blurry lines but totally blurry ones, again, compare with what i posted.
All those failed features combined with others that could be fine like the blush just makes it looks deviantart tier.
>>2563722
babu hands
>>2563722
>>2563783
And pay more attention to how you draw Anime faces.
There is a very clear line between good/great ones and others, which always just looks like deviant art trash to be honest. You need to go further than generic faces.
Anime faces are about simplification, but GOOD simplification, and especially because it so simplified the problems will be much more obvious.
In that example >>2563746 , it looks so much better and not generic thanks to it being done properly first, but the important parts like the eyes are done really detailed, which makes the character much more beautiful.
And obviously you quite clearly don't know well how to draw a face, study that too in priority.
>>2563051
Thanks, keep it up.
>>2563806
actually i feel more comfortable on doing loli faces/bodies
Wanted to try to give that elvish ablungated look
But looks like i failed
Made this for as friend who likes to play as hoovy on tf2.
Tfwicantfinishanythinginonesitting.psd
wild boy doodle
>>2564151
yo you gotta blog?
>>2564196
Thanks, my tumblr is firez-tbr.tumblr.com
Going by your lines and colors ....I think we are mutuals already but if not I hope my incosistency doesn't turn you off
>>2564151
Study boobs
>>2557793
decided to go with original pose instead
any help on this would be appreciated. Cant seem to get the face looking right
Lizardman. Kind of just wanted to work on values, but failing hard. Debating whether to continue
So I wanted to try drawing something again. Still having trouble with the torso and stuff. Head and hair is fucked and will attempt to fix it tomorrow.
nb4
>loomis
>beginner thread
>>2564430
im a shit tier beginner so take it with a grain of salt
i cant see any boney landmarks standing out
i cant see any muscles
where is her ribcage?
where is her neck?
left arm is absurdly long
holy shit how do the hands connect?
pls come back to begginers
>>2564434
Well I was trying to copy pic related I found in the draw threads on /a/. Obviously I didn't do it well + the clothing obscuring most of her.
>>2564430
>>2564438
That pose sorta only works because she's leaning against the door frame behind her. In your drawing if she tried to pull the same pose she'd just fall into the water.
>>2564398
What's the point of wanting to work on values and then quitting before you even get to that point? You did a sketch and blocked in colors and some soft form shadows. Now add a directional light source and block in the shadows clearly, so there is a defined distinction between light and dark when you squint your eyes.
>>2564479
Sorry. I just personally wasn't liking the design/pose, It's pretty plain, and I've been awful busy so I considered tossing it. That being said, I should at least do what I said I was going to.
>>2564348
>firez
Why no more trip?
>>2564557
ic won
wonder if i'm just polishing a turd
Trying out some simple cartoon/comic artstyle. I think it worked out pretty well.
>>2564723
Yes.
people already told you you wont draw anything good unless you follow the sticky or a beginner book, even if you don't aim high art you still need to follow the basics
>>2564739
Looks cute nigga
>>2564723
It's not terrible dude
just come back to it later!
>>2564762
Are you samefagging or are you an idiot?
This guy needs to learn to draw and instead he's practicing turd. He needs to go back to /beg/.
He got an advice and ignores it. The best way to stay bad.
>>2564765
no no i really get your advice
It's just i wanted to "complete" this before moving on
and i assure you i keep practicing basics as well
just throw in an illustration from time to time
About beg thread...
Don't really like that place :<
i'm already family with the anons and namefags here and they are nice to me (harsh but nice)
>>2564373
Shitty fucking neo-typemoon.
Pretty good picture though
>>2564780
Have you tried DesignDoll? It's a free program I use when I need help with posing, lighting or perspective.
>>2564790
Woah that seems great!
Thanks!
btw last polishing
and now i can save and throw in the cabin this drawing
>>2564474
Ahh, thanks I see.
Is there like a certain length for the rib cage? Cause every time I try to draw it it just looks weird. I've watched plenty of videos. Legs aren't all that hard.
got some jap anon to redline my work
they destroyed me in 20 minutes lol
Wanted to share here damn they are good
>>2564917
>>2564917
>lol
This board is beyond salvation.
>>2564917
that body is not very good, slightly better than yours but please use other references than this person.
>>2564917
more rounded with a more dynamic view
Wanted to try a different style and use coloured outline rather than black
>>2565084
Beginner thread, sticky, etc.
>>2564917
Why on earth is this a gif? Silly nips.
your friend has autism.
I was drawing right at first, but it felt a little lacking, so I tried to rearrange the composition a bit. However I still have no idea how to pull it off properly, so I'd like to ask...
which one feels better for 'alert alert giant loli approaching'
>>2562002
Thanks - wanted to do more, but no time, maybe tonight
>>2562006
>charcoal brush
It's the default HB pencil in procreate. The tilt and azimuth take some practice to get used to. Basically, better than hard round, but much worse than a real pencil.
>>2561951
fuckin spaghetti fingers bro
>>2564919
Now it just looks like a guy.
I think I might have ADHD.
>>2564723
and this, kids, is what it looks like when you leave /beg/ 6 months too early
>>2564793
At least you know youre polishing a turd, keep studying anon!!
I haven't been drawing anything for real for a while. Please tell if there is anything to fix.
>>2565502
Not lewd enough.
>>2565502
Staring into infinity breh
>>2565514
She probably covered 'Nam.
>>2565518
>log into /ic/
>It Ain't Me starts playing
>>2565571
I miss your traditional stuff
love u tho
what would you even call this art style?
>>2565571
Got a tumblr?
>>2565595
Disappointment and sorrow
>>2559944
why did you trace
>>2565571
Nice taste in imoutos.
I'm finished bothering with this crud. Critique till ye hearts content.
>>2565302
The left one has a bit more going on. and the impact of the running kind of motion adds a bit more. The rights just a bit stiff and the destruction doesn't feel as ongoing.
what do you say about it ?
>>2565718
Anon please you have a single light source. Just go back to your original drawing and follow the light coming from it.
>>2565718
I don't like the design of those armor discs on the tail but otherwise its really cool.
>>2565770
Er, if your speaking of >>2564398 I did but I just wasn't getting it to work very well at all (not that this came out that great either). I dunno if it was the composition or my mind just not wrapping around it but eh. I need to honestly go back and look at some reference/basics for understanding light/form/cast shadow better.
>>2565773
I originally wanted to do a Lizard king/duke instead with a Polish-Lithuanian style armor, but it went heavily awry. I'll probably give it another shot later.
>>2565765
I like it
But her cheek bothers me
>>2565595
Binary?
>>2565791
can you describe the problem with cheek more ?
>>2565794
Well where it starts to cerve in more to the chin, it kinda looks like she just has a dent in her face
Im not sure if thats cheek or chin issue actually
>>2565786
No I'm talking about after you added the giant glowing sword. Just go through it and everything in the same plane as the sword gets a big flat highlight. That's the easiest way to describe forms
>>2559269
The left breast looks like it's higher.
The breasts don't raise when you lift your arm, they stretch. The bottom of the breast should still be in the same spot, unless it's a huge breast that hangs over the skin obviously.
So leave the nipple where it is, the placement of that is good but lower the bottom of the breast, and stretch the fat over that whole distance.
>>2559343
one big is bigger than the other one sleeve is longer than the other the collar thing is crooked
>>2565595
oekaki
>>2565488
Pas mal.
something sketchy
>>2565458
>>2565718
Thanks, went with the first one
i'll tweak values proper later
>>2566056
that seems as right as we're gonna get
>>2561970
From where are those refs?
>>2566223
Do you get hard to your own drawings?
I mean what else is the point of drawing your fetish over and over again, but then again lusting over your own creation is not very likely
>>2561475
gashi gashi is my inspiration too anon.
