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Old Thread: >>2499457

Immortalize your work at:
http://tower-girls.booru.org/

Rolling tool:
https://www.random.org/

Book Mobile: https://mega.nz/#F!es1BSKQR!spODyd0iaQmMelGA2GscFw

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=yRYFKcMa_Ek
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I'm-a call this done: >>2523216
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And we're rolling.
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rolleen
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>>2523842
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>>2523842
rollan' mon'
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>>2523842
roll
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quickie
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>>2524292
Rollo Goodlove
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Time to roll.
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>>2524304
Done with the rough, now I'll sketch her digitally.
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>>2524240
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pump a rump
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okay
now i'm supposed to look at my post's number? how does this work
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Let's do it
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tROLLING
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>>2524772
At the end of your post number you got two relevant numbers, in your case here 72. This means you have to draw the princess with number 72 from OP's picture. In case you roll again after you've drawn it and it's a double (ex. 11,22 ... ) you draw one of your choice from the world map or from dubs dungeon. Any special condition about how you're allowed to draw from the adventurer guild, trips and the community roster is explained in OP's picture
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rollando be cool
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Beginner who knows nothing about anatomy ROLL!
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rolling

>>2524789
post pls
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ROLLO
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Come on papa needs a new pair of shoes!
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>>2525278
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the world is a
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>>2524084

>skeleton mask
>naked
>huge tits
>magically glowy hands
>princess

man you are fuckin terrible at drawing characters.
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>>2524215
>>2523858
>>2523849
>>2523848
>>2523846
>>2523843

This is what not being able to draw looks like, everybody. You kept the stylized shapes of the original chibbi given to you on your roll, do not do this. You are just copying what you see instead of creating your own character within a fixed primitive.
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>>2525508
What are you talking about?
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>>2524458
At least try and pretend you know how to draw a straight line :\
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Rollerino
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>>2525545
What do you mean?
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am i going in the right direction
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rolling in the 90s
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>>2525697
You're not obligated to follow the little design but yeah that's pretty much the gist of it. Though if you mean "holistically" as an artist I guess that depends on what your previous work looked like I suppose.
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rollll
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>>2525714
Well I wanted to know about color and anatomy and overall design.
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>>2525728
forgot pic
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rollan'
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bang
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>>2525730
Looks good to me fampai.
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>>2523842
rolly polly
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>>2525744
fun
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>>2525779
Looks nice mate
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>>2525782
thacks
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>>2524292
Cute af, legs look disproportionately small though fampai.

>>2524458
Character turnarounds are great practice, strive for accuracy though, the head gets bigger, the shoulders taller, the legs wider etc. Everything's got to match up! Nice try though.

>>2524611
That's a lot of detail.

The scales are flattening at times, always consider them as a flat-though three dimensional-shape and place your lines accordingly, imagining how they'd wrap around the solidity of the forms. Generally I think you accomplished this, I think in some spots you just didn't give a fug.

>>2525353
Very 'art deco'.

>>2525697
>>2525730
Looks nice

>>2525779
Fantastic, fampai. You really 'indicate' well, there's a lot of implied detail without a ton of brush strokes.
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roru
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>>2525756
Couldn't find a good position for the tail.
Realized I should study wings.
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>>2526382
Fucking amazing style especially the eyes.
Shading is also really good.
The Hands could use some work, tho.
Keep it up man.
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I don't even know what I'm doing
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>>2526389
Hey thanks man
I'm definitely gonna dedicate more time to studying hands.
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criticiquing is welcome

Also, rolling
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>>2526431
>different anon
I liked her previous expression better.
There's something about the sweater that looks kinda weird. Like, where her left breast is.
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>>2526433
Her previous expression didnt show her teeth so i felt like that needed to be changed so that it got the message that she was a vampire.
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>get assassin princess
>hyped
>look at design

how the fuck does that all work?
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>>2525508
>He's trying to be arrogant
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rollin'
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>>2526549
You can probably make stuff up to suit you if it's too confusing.

She appears to be wearing fishnets and had a hood.
A hood that apparently has a hole so she can have her ponytail pop out.
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>>2526560
and how does that hood work? how does it stay attached? to her body clothes? How do her body clothes fit on her?
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>>2526639
Rollin again
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>>2526562
>>2526560

Well I took it into my own hands and changed the outfit completely. I kept the crown as a badge on the sleeve so it can keep the spirit of the thread. This is the rough.
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king k rool
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>>2526147

>>2524611
yeah i couldnt get the contour line setup quite right and then when i was inking some bs happend because of it . poor setup. thats why in some places its alright then in some places it goes off
need too work harder :/
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kight princess
you can kill me if you want
i can't paint
and i'll never be able to
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rolling
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>>2526951
This is really cute, anon.
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rollo the viking
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>>2526950
Just keep doing it anon. Have a kiss :*
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>>2526950
There's no painter who has drawn magnificent pieces with saying "I'll never be able to". Now get that paint bucket and roll again. Fingers ain't learning other ways.

Now to the picture itself. In my opinion it looks ok. neck and arms just swaying there are the things falling into the eye. If you now add the rest of the boots makes it seem she elegantly bowing towards you (which you planned to do I guess. Looking at the background sketch.) it will look better. Adding a cape which she holds with her right hand and slides on her left make her arms have function.
As a whole you can use your current picture to further work on.
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>>2526844
The WIP. Gonne work on the hand area and then render. Any critqes before i continue? Does she have visible asian features?
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>>2523842
rol
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>>2527541
>counter-terrorists win

Looking good so far fambo
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>>2527541
I don't think asian when i look at her. looking for it, the closest i could say is one of those asian girl's who's gotten surgery to look western. i think it's the eye
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>>2527541
hispanic to me.
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Rellin
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>>2527602
>>2527616
Yeah, it's the eye i tried to fix too. When I looked at images the eyes were close to the nose ridge. Asians have a more flat face. Tried to replicate that but failed. Good to know though that I wasn't on point.


Also, any ideas on how to make the color on the armor look better?
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>>2523842
ooorlll
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>>2527776
dang, new roll
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>>2527783
okay then
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rallo
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>>2527783
>>2527798
The cuteness is real; good job fambalaya
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>>2527911
thanks dood!
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>>2523842
j-just one more
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>>2528126
eeehh
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>>2528126
>>2528144
You gotta feed this addiction to roll 'till you're satisfied, Vono!
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>>2526147

>>2525353

Thanks man, was trying something new.
Dope contribution to thread feedback is rare here, thoughtful feedback even more so.
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.alright, let''s go
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memf
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>>2525503
Gotta suck to get good, mang.
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In am no longer too inhibited to draw girls, rolling!
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>>2527783
coloured it in
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ching chong
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Rrrrroooowrrrring
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>>2529141
>1 post off of best Princess
Fuck this shit
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>>2523842
Rollan
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raul
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>>2523842
>http://tower-girls.booru.org/
OP you should start posting stuffs from this thread on there tho

i'll help you collecting the pics from archives but just me alone won't do
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>>2527798
quick colouring job for shits and giggles
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>>2528144
this one too
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rrrrollan
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>>2523842
Roll
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>>2523842
Rolling
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>>2529063
>>2529596
>>2529597
yay!
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>>2523842
roolin
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>>2525779
Blog?
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rollllllll
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>>2530886
lol refuse to draw pigtits lol lol
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Overall an improvement on how i've drawn people and handled using references but I don't feel like finishing it.
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>>2529300
snek bewbs!
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>>2523842
rolling again!
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>>2523842
Rolling my cum into little balls
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>>2531498
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>>2523842
rol
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It feels like I fucked up everything.
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rollan
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>>2523842
roll
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rollerino
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>>2531582
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>>2523842
just a free style sketch
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>>2531794
well that's a coincidence
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Rollin'
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>>2531802
HOW COULD I HAVE FORGOTTEN THE FRECKLES?!
all good now
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>>2531802
Why would you put the colous you used next to the icon in dots like that?, I can already see them, they're on the fucking picture.
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>>2531805
Tried to speed paint, but failed. Oh well was still fun.
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>>2531969
eh, i 'unno
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>>2530947
That's discrimination!

All the same, well done.

>>2531451
Good work, one thing I didn't catch earlier is that it looks like her arms are a bit short. Always remember that the wrists are generally parallel with the base of the pelvis, the gooch. If her arms were brought to her sides it looks like her hands would end there. I think her forearms are fine, I think the "humerus" portion of the arm is just slightly shorter than it ought to be.

>>2531466
Delightful!

>>2531548
Her face appears to be slightly askew from the structure of her head, also always consider how forms relate to one another in space, including ones you wouldn't otherwise see. When it comes to the tail and how it wraps around the gray character, it looks like the portion that's constricting that character is spatially unrelated to the rest of the tail.

>>2531560
Fucking up everything is the only sure path to fucking up less. I don't see too many flaws with general proportions, the spearhead doesn't seem to follow the same angle of the shaft.

Don't stop fucking up!

>>2531626
Mind the "tangents" between the hands and the wings (granted, these tangents wouldn't be as pronounced if you drew the hands to be more...handy)

>>2531654
Solid gesture despite the mostly static poses.

>>2531969
Making an on-screen palette of "pure" base colors as a tool isn't a bad idea, he probably just neglected to delete it.
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>>2523842

roll
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>>2532384
love this
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Rolling again, I wont puss this time.
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Will try some shading in the morning
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>>2532783
>>2532384
>>2531940
>>2531802
>>2531794
>>2531626

Anons who don't get it.

>>2526431
>>2526382
>>2525779
>>2525353
>>2523858

Anons who are starting to get it.
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>>2532869
how about this anon >>2531654
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>>2532880

He is too new at drawing and is also doing the same as the anons who don't get it.
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>>2532869
what are they not getting
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>>2533247

If you can't see the difference, what's the point?
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>>2523842
let's roll
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>>2533247
I think he means just plain copying vs putting thought/effort into it. All the "not getting it" have the exact same facial expressions and uninteresting poses and seem afraid to add their own unique details. Not that the "starting to get it" are perfect in that regard, but a little better.
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>>2533286


you got it. here's a gold star, kinda.
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Rolling for lamia princess
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>>2533593
Very pretty desu fampai; I feel like, with the subtle angle of her head, her exposed ear should be very slightly higher. Looks great overall.
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I tried.
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>>2533612
Thank you, I shall do that.
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with this snek, i rollll
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>>2523842
rolling stones
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>>2534614
That is awesome. In the leftmost pose I feel like her legs get too forshortened too quickly but that could just be me.
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>>2534654
Nah, I see what you mean. Definitely need to work on my foreshortening lol thanks btw
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>>2526382
neat, hands are fucked, more palm, more segments for fingers.

>>2530947
this is amazing, got a blog? Surprised nobody has realized how good you are.
>>2534614
clouzel is that you?
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>>2523846
we reposting anon?
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>>2535195
How can one man pretend to know so much yet have such shit taste
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Rollento
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>>2527541
Learn to draw firearms.
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>>2535195

you cant even draw a face, why are you giving other people advice you leech?
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>>2536168
Didn't want this to go any further than a rough sketch cuz I didn't like how it was coming out. However, I'll roll again for either tonight or tomorrow afternoon.
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rolled with random.org...
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git 34
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>>2536266

Had the option of drawing dragon tiddies, so why not? Reference probably would've helped me out here with the wonky anatomy. Anyways, I'm rolling for tomorrow.
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>>2536734
quite like this one. maybe add some highlights to give her skin a wet or slimy look to make it a little more interesting.
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>>2536942
Like this?

also roll...
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>>2523842
rolling stone magazine
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>>2536919
That's some good shit nigga
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>>2534269
i tried
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>>2537365
Probably one of my favs. it's cute as hell.
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>>2523842
rolin
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>>2537657
Postin for now so I have motivation to finish
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>>2533266
Wip.
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>>2526951
finally got around to doing this
>>2527135
and thank you anon
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>>2537177
I'm going to finish this later...
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I better don't get Kobold princess for a third time in a row...
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>>2523842
roll
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>>2537804

the face is ok, but the rest is a poor design. i get that the chibi looks like that but you can do so much more with that character briefing. you covered up the entire body instead of adding information to your character. didn't even try to draw the hands. 1/10, stop rendering and read character design books/blogs.
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>>2537804
Overall very nice sketch with just enough detail to give it a sense of life and movement, adding those redundant pattern details looks like it must have been a chore; I can almost see you losing patience as you work your way down her outfit.

>>2537878
Pretty funny. I feel like the torso is a bit too stout compared to the legs (should be more room for her armor's "obliques", perhaps); did you post this one a couple threads back?
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>>2537970
This post reads like really bad advice.
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>>2538010

how so?
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>>2538013
Well, it reads like you think ever sketch needs to be some kind of anatomy study or show off a character's entire body, like there's something innately wrong with concealing/baggy clothing and copying the clothing style of the original sprite. It might not help improve as much as drawing them fully uncovered, but there's also not anything wrong with drawing them with the covering cloak.
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>>2538016

you're an idiot.
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Rool
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>>2538031

Made mine but it is not what I want from myself.
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>>2538024
Not doing a lot to justify yourself as a good critic there.
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>>2537970
i'd actually like to expose myself to more character design elements. any blogs or titles you can refer me to would be great
>>2537991
thanks anon, really it was more trying to get it done quickly before i had to go to work. I would've payed more attention to those patterns had that not been the case
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>>2538337
>I would've payed more attention to those patterns had that not been the case

In this instance there'd be no need, it's just a sketch after all and I don't think the inconsistencies here and there really detract from it in a substantial way. If Craig Mullins can leave those repulsive splotches of hard round brush in his finished paintings I think you can take some liberties with your sketches (at least in the areas that aren't the focal point). Good job, keep practicing!
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Done

>>2537991
For the torso/ legs proportion i was trying to get the original character design feel. No, I have rolled and done this just for this thread (maybe someone drawed something similar?)
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>>2538337

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=8QcOZej9n7Q

http://characterdesignnotes.blogspot.com/

i could link you blogs all day but you'd be better off finding them out for yourself. it's the same idea as how you'd put together an environment piece. you need to use elements of what relates to your character in order for your viewer to understand what they're looking at.

http://characterdesignnotes.blogspot.com/2011/04/proper-use-of-reference-and-anatomy-in.html

what makes your drawing a nomad princess? her crown and a cloak covering up her body? she's suppose to be royalty but how is your image conveying that she's not an assassin or monk? what part of her cloak and hood read as nomad princess? all you are doing is copying the chibi art and rendering her proportions out towards reality. that's what the noobs aren't understanding here, they're just copying what they see instead of building on what they already know.
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>>2537777
I'll admit I kinda rushed it but I'm pretty happy with the results
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>>2539262
Also sorry for size I uploaded it straight from my tablet
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>>2523842
rollin
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>>2539262

she looks like generic, not very good anon.
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>>2539588
Why does it matter if she looks generic? How does it make it not good? I didn't want to follow the chibi's design. And if you Google Amazonian the clothes all look pretty generic imo leather or fur top/bottoms. Does it really make a difference at all if I wanted to keep the design simple? Yeah I could have added a crown or more accessories but fuck it is don't think Amazonian women should be held down by the accessories they wear while they hunt or fight. Perhaps it's just perspective
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>>2539881
oh boy
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>>2523842
Rolling
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>>2539881
Not Anon, but, if we're being honest, absolute efficiency would be naked wearing sandals. Maybe a chest wrap to keep the tits from flopping around, but a skirt is just a waste. She'd also likely tie her hair back to keep it out of her face. Plus, she has a spear, so how the hell did she take off that head? I'd add a knife if I were you. But, all in all, her being "efficient" isn't a very good excuse, and one made even worse by saying "the rest of them look the same, why can't mine?." That's exactly what generic is, baka. If I were drawing her, I'd probably giver her more clothes, like leather pants so that if she falls, rocks won't rip her to shreds.

Also, that spear is way too thick, at most it'll have a 1.5 inch diameter, whereas that looks like a 3 inch one.
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>>2539923
Not to say it isn't good, just overdone.
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>>2539881

well at least now i know you are dumb and bad at art.
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>>2539923
Nah I definitely get that she does look generic and I'll admit to it too I just don't like one liner crits, so I appreciate your input. I was thinking about adding a thigh band with a knife attached but my laziness conquered the design which is why it doesn't look well thought out and generic. it probably would have been a better idea to draw leather pants rather than go pantless but I wanted some focus to be on her powerful ass quads. yeah idk thank you for your input though

Also yeah the spear does look thick/heavy. I really liked the look of the item being thick but in practicality she probably wouldn't be able to chuck it well.
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>>2539964

Why is she fat? What the fuck were you thinking with the leg placement? Go look up Frazetta's women.
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>>2539262
hi anon, just a friendly reminder to invert your canvas often, it'll help a lot when looking for symmetrical flaws. i did a trace to show what you could've done with the eyes to make the face look right, but you could also do more with the jaw to make the the face look centered rather than tilted. I believe this would involve raising and making her right eye bigger, however. my trace isn't perfect but i just wanted to give you an idea of what to look out for next time, keep going anon
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>>2540198
thanks for the tip! Sometimes I forget that, that button existed I did notice that the eyes were slightly off but I got frustrated fixing it. I appreciate the trace though! Might not fix it now but I'll remember for future reference :)
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>>2540213
>>2540198
nvm I'm just gonna fix it now. I can't unsee the fix and it's too annoying to put off
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>>2523842
rollin rollin rollin
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>>2525508

Show us your art, friendo. Lets see what good art looks like.
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roll for justice
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>>2540742
This, to be honest family
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>>2534154
swiit
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>>2534154
cute
>:3c
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>>2540742

are you one of the people on that list? you responded to a week old post.
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>>2541032
I don't see what that has to do with anything. I'm not him but I make indignant comebacks to old posts on other people's behalf all the time. It's not like the post goes away during that time-nor its user, often.
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>>2535891
>>2536255
lol jealous
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I'm going to do things
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>>2542522
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>>2542665
round 2
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>>2542665
Eh. It is what it is...
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>>2523842
Roll
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>>2523842
Rolling.
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>>2542665
>>2542975
Interesting takes on the characters. With the candle girl I feel like her facial features might be a bit off kilter from how the underlying construction suggests they would be; hard angle to get right though, I could be wrong.
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>>2523842
Rolling quints
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Rollin'
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>>2523842
rollrollroll
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rolll
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>>2523842
rollin'
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>>2523842
Oh man, I haven't done one of these in a long time. Bunch of stuff changed. Rolling.
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mid-roll
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>>2523842
RR//OOLLLLLLLLLLLL
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>>2542975
nother
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>>2537365
Thats cute as hell.
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>>2543363
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>>2544582
not much of a moth i guess
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>>2523842
wol
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>>2548267
Loving the style, man. Blog?
Also roll
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Didn't quite manage to capture the princess part.
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>>2548849
It's actually a boy regardless, so. Nice drawing anyway.
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>>2548849
This is really nice, looks like mignola
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>>2548849
Great job and style
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roll'ing
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>>2532384
This is the best so far
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>>2548267

Round 2. Leaving wip to motivate me to finish it.

>>2548816

Thanks anon, don't have one yet.
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>>2546881
>that hidden knife

Looks pretty good fampaiachi. Watch your tangents, huge one where the top of her left foot and bottom of her right meet.
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my attemot at Tauros Princess...
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>>2523842
Roll
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>>2550333

thiicccc
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>>2523842

rolling
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>>2523842
roll
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riff raff roll
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Lots of great talent here

Roll for when I have the time
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