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>blood elf
>not fel green elf

WAT
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>>2503041
Seriously. Ruins the whole picture for me.
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>>2503019
Who's the artist? that suction cup pussy is amazing.
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>>2503076
>being this new

How adorable.
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>>2503081
>being this new to not recognize Kyle's shilling tactics.

How adorable.
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>>2503041
She's a death knight.
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>>2503019
ok i know kyles the best porn drawer in here you dont necessarily have to post his works as the porn thread op whenever hes posts his shit.
there should be a rule or something, no bbc no kyle as the op pic of porn threads.
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/ic/
shit artist
>lmao look at this faggot trying to draw
mediocre artist
>pretty good, here's harsh criticism so you can see that I am obviously better
good artist
>lmao look at this faggot trying to shill/pander

stay mediocre, /ic/
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>>2503108
>perky, smiling, perfectly intact death knight
We /Silvermoan/ now?
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>>2503019
good work as always
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>>2503086
die already, you cancerous jelly scumbag.
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I'm disgusted by genitals
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>>2503456
(you)
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What's wrong with the OP?
I think it's looks great, defo able to make some cash on the porn scene.
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>>2503524
there are some problems with the op speaking of anatomy and perspective. but yeah, it's appealing and it's above average of course. it's just the /ic/ jellyfags that try to identify flaws at all costs, and because they are shit at pointing out technical errors, they try to make the artist look bad with bullshit like accusing him of shilling, or the race of the character being named incorrectly. retarded shit. standard /ic/
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Anything sticks out?
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>>2503559
kek
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>>2503559
BAMMES
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Who is OP artist?
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>>2503559
Inconsistent line construction, improper anatomy and unclear perspective (her legs are set lower than her arms?), feet are a bit off (mainly perceptive direction) dick is unappealing (you'd make something like that look good in porn), hair construction looks flat and uninteresting, pillow/bed is terribly constructed, and the whole work just looks unattractive.
I'd suggest basic studies again and start over after you've grasp better anatomy and line construction.
>>2503549
OPs anotomy among other things are flewed in some ways indeed, but regardless t's one of the main people countlessly shilled as God's work on /ic/ and as you said, triggers jellyfags and just derails the thread into oblivion. Unless some anon does this to prove a point of how high shit anon's drawings has to be before making it or something, it's just done to cause unnecessary feedback and drama, since Kyle and the likes of BBC chan has no business posting they work here for critique with their art skills.
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>>2503559
yeah, a dick
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>>2503586
ok, thnx
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>>2503594
alright, thanks
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>>2503559
nope, seems good to me
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Feels post

>I always feel bad when I end up a drawing and I used references. Either another drawings or pictures.
>They look nice at the end, but I know I cheated. Even when not using references I know I cheated in a way or another.

Is really that bad using references? Is like pacting with the devil? There are some really nice poses in doujins and mangas and Im always tempted in adapting them.
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>>2503612
Yes and you should keep feeling bad. At least draw something from life and put your own idealized version of whatever it is you're trying to depict.
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>>2503612
>using reference is cheating

The only artists that don't cheat are the ones born 100% blind. As soon as you open your eyes you are going to be referencing something.

Just fuck off already, reference is not cheating. You need reference. You don't need to, and shouldn't, trace. That is literally all. Stop being a shitter, stop listening to shitters on /ic/ if that's where you got it from, and just use reference.
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>>2503643
He's talking about copying off a manga or whatever which means he is not problem solving on "breaking the rules" correctly instead he is being a copy cat and basically cheating to get all the right answers without going through the most important part that is how to get to the right answer.
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>>2503643
I dont trace, I just look for pictures I like, still images from films and similar stuff.
Most of the people dont care about these things but as you say, asking for this here at /ic/ it makes you feel like a demon.

Then you see other artists like Ilya who use references (and actually was bullied about doing so) and they dont really give a fuck about that.
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>>2503612
If you want money trace everything.
Use as many tools as possible.
Pander to whatever fetish and ignore medium grade anatomical errors.
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>>2503559
Yes
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>>2503612
>>2503660
Anon, as >>2503643 said using a reference for studying what is wrong with your drawing is HOW you use references, and not use them to trace the pose itself. If you've seen a pose you like, make that pose up from your head and do it all from scratch, THEN use a reference to see what you fucked up with and LEARN from what you did wrong to keep from doing it again. Using a reference isn't bad, it's only when you rely on a photo 100% as your drawing, as it's nothing more than tracing something with "your image/character" in place of it.
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>>2503612
I don't even draw so take what I say with a grain of salt, but it's pretty common in doujins that the artist copies "standard" poses and it kills my boner every time. At least draw it from a different perspective you lazy fuck, why should I even read this if I've already seen everything before? It's come to the point where I prefer less than perfect anatomy to copied shit.

Sure, reference stuff all you want, but take your references from an another medium and/or make sure it actually fits in the story/picture you're drawing.
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>>2503612
references for learning are a cool thing. but the problem arises when you can't draw something without reference. you want to invent something and the refs you have aren't good enough. what are you going to do then?
learn to draw with references to the point where you won't need them anymore. that's the right way.
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When I use a reference, I make a rough sketch/skeleton, just a stick body. Then I apply my style and forget about the original image. Is this method a good way for learning?
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>>2503723
I'd advise a approach like >>2503716; if the pose in question doesn't make sense, as in, what's the story you're trying to say here with this pose, than that's not going to work if all you want is "that pose". Refs shouldn't be anymore that to "correct" what isn't right about the drawing itself, >>2503714, and should only be done in moderation to improve what you make look right instead of hard copying.
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>>2503716
>different perspective

That's why this set is so hot. Alot of poses are from perspectives you don't see everyday.

http://g.e-hentai.org/g/926563/5956a4f5c1/
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>>2503811
I downloaded that set the other day, I already thought of using mannequins as references, nice one.
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>>2503716
genuine question

why are you on an art and critique board if you don't draw?
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>>2503820
to bitch and moan probably
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I have a commission from a dude who wants me to draw a nsfw picture of a well known fem youtuber.
Would you do it? I dont really know.
Imagine for a moment it becomes viral, I dont want to get in any trouble, thats why I always try to keep my drawings legal.
Is there any real danger in drawing these kind of things?
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>>2503829
niggas got killed for drawing muhammad

besides that i don't think anyone's gonna take big notice of yet another weird nsfw picture of some female youtuber, unless you go like all the way with scat and guro and shit
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>>2503833
Its just some blowjobs and nothing special. I know there were celebrities who demanded anons in the past for posting fakes of them.
Just wanting to be sure.
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>>2503843
well just don't post it anywhere that you own and just give it to the commissioner.
Also ask yourself if it's not too far outside of your comfort zone.

and yes there are people that go on legit hunts to bring people to justice for these kinds of images, but mostly not.
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>>2503843
oh also don't draw underage youtubers doing anything filthy.
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redline-artist here.
how does this redline look?
everything that is red is edited.
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those post are funny cuz everyone complains about shit and nobody post porn anymore.
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>>2503904
post some porn then faggot
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>>2503909
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Old request I did
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>>2503854
you have a bad grasp of palm to finger ratios and it fluctuates in both direction. Your hand dont have escalation ramps, nor do your feet. stomach area is neat.
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>>2503986
you mean like the lenght of fingers and the palm or the shape of the hands overall?
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>>2504015
Who has tips for drawing sexy stuff
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>>2503956
Quick question, is that an OC of that artist in question, or an OC he did of someone else's?
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>>2503956
Jesus Christ how generic
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>>2503854
this is pretty much very bad in all possible aspects of anatomy and perspective. tl;dr, your redline needs a redline.
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>>2504277
go ahead
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>>2504277
>>2504296
as in, i would appreciate it if you pointed me to some things i can improve on.
I don't know a whole lot of people i can ask for feedback and critique from. But most of the times i have been here it's mostly just quick comments like that.
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Had the Starfire pic a thread or two ago...still working on it, but in the meantime been working on a couple new pics and this one is going well i think. It's supposed to be Pharah and Zarya from Overwatch. I can see Zaryas feet are a bit wonky and i am having trouble drawing a foot from behind. I reworked Pharahs tits a few times and i guess i'm generally happy with them for now. Still gotta work on the hands but i use regular copy paper and drawing small scale is difficult till i move it to tablet.
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>>2504307
Anatomy and perspective like the anon said? You kinda just attached these poorly proportioned over simplified limbs to a torso, and gave no thought to the space behind contours, how they sit in space, or their shape & size in relation to the viewer because, i guess, that's how you think foreshortening works.

go study origins and insertions of muscles , fat pads, ears, hands, proportions and probably feet. Pay attention to the shapes bones vs muscles and fat make, and the space in your canvas.

Honestly, you're just not feeling it.
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>>2504367
damn dude, not even the op pic has all those nailed down
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>>2503854
for me the picture is already nice as it is. I would bookmark your tumblr/website asap.
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>>2504389
please don't compare this shitty attempt at redlining with the op pic.
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>>2504296
>>2504307
I give useful comments only to people I think will benefit from them. I don't think you are/he is one of those people. sry.
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>>2504540
You sound like an abusive fuck IRL, to be honest.
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>>2504577
no no, I am the one that's being honest here. you, on the other hand, sound simply butthurt.
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>>2504581
These porn/nsfw threads have around +300 replies and no more than 10 drawings only because this cancer.
Even /b/ and paheal has more friendlier replies.
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>>2504367
i see, i'll study up.

>>2504540
proper little princess aren't we. I bet you also believe drawing is more talent than hard work
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>>2504586
keep the butthurt flying high.
porn doesn't need beginner tier scrubs like the likes of that redline scrub, that infest it at the moment.

>>2504642
talent is just intelligence. the more intelligent you are, the faster you learn. and that applies to art too.
hard work is essential to any discipline if you want to master it.
and that's part of what my posts are about. you people just don't realize you can't just skip fundamental training and go straight to porn. well drawn porn is fucking hard. and if you are a beginner trying to "make it", skipping stages will do you more harm than good.
I am harsh because people don't understand it otherwise.

I give in depth advice only to people I find smart enough to understand this concept. people that aren't beginners, but at least intermediate level artists. people that have the right to post their art in this thread. beginners should just gtfo to the beginners thread. and you can cry about me being a jerk as much as you want. this won't change the fact that what I am saying is true.
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>>2504666
>>666

Are you afraid of someone appearing out of the blue without spending years of loomis and getting to the top while earning tons of cash?
Are you the butthurt because you couldnt make it? Even spending half of your life trying to get better, knowing the basics and all the theory but not being able to apply it and have success?

Do you really think talking shit about rookies and trying to get them away from drawing porn would make less competition in the current scene?

You know what? You remember me to those /3/ oldfags who are constantly raging about noobs making money with 3D and using pirated software without knowing "the basics" like lowpoly or uv mapping but... Boom! somehow they start having 10k followers out of nothing and those oldfags are still trying to get the answer.
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>>2504586
Itz because of that, sir.
Got these shitty crits in the past too. I guess it's some disappointed person who enjoys driving anons nuts because in such a personal matter like porn/erotics we might take it too personal/serious.
Expectations are too high and then comes the crit (maybe the only one) who's only purpose is to provoke by taking it down.
Maybe it's a poor wannabe who'd wish to be able to do as you can, but can't stand it and needs to shit on every one elses work to feel better again.

But now some (constructive) crit;

I like the redline females hand - looks as if she's clamping it pointing out that she's either just about to come or already coming.
Her other hand is a bit too long/big in terms of perspectiv not to speak of the black female's fingering hand, that's way too short.

I also'd say her foot is too short but that's my taste maybe and not objective. Just as her breasts, which I'd prefer a bit more perky or swollen while the legs could be bigger. But that's my personal....
I also would like to know wether she tries to push that fingering hand away or pull it closer.
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>>2504666
But beginners don't need such patronizing bullshit you keep pouring into this threat since? Pants down, show how "good" you have become by posting comments like this or get the ....
I guess you're the one that's admitted not ot draw? And even If you were Édika, who do you think needs your shitty advie!
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>>2504693
it's not even advice, it's just simply the fact that this nigga obviously either has gripes with the drawing at hand, or he has like a seething hatred for all artists on /ic/ so he just posts shit like this to stop them from drawing ever again. "just give up you obviously don't have w h a t i t t a k e s" just the biggest fucking ego ruining these threads.
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>>2504685
Hey, watch out what you're saying! I'm an oldfag and jet I tried to give you some constructive feedback. It might be; no fool like an old fool - but not all are like this.

And some more concerning your pic; the poses could be more exaggerated to point out your intention unmistakable - just like the one in:>>2504586.
And one last thing, the drappery can be used to emphazise the poses furthermore. Now drappery is realy tuff but it can serve more a purpose than just floating around the bodies(as I tried to point out in my pink-line).
I also corrected her foot to a more appealing pose...
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>>2504685
I'm not afraid of competition kek. there's enough people to cater to, no matter how many beginners are trying to make it. I am genuinely saying all I'm saying in these threads for the good of these beginners, not for my own sake or because I want to vent. skipping the learning process because you want to git gud as soon as possible is the most common and stupid mistake a lot of beginners keep doing.
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>>2504693
it's not patronizing bulshit. it's the fucking harsh reality of things.
>>2504706
let me guess. a beginner? a buthurt beginner? keep drawing porn and being a dumb idiot, beginner.
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>>2504732
what a sad cunt you are
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>>2504735
yeah, let the rage and butthurt make you blind. keep crying. also keep drawing porn because that's the best way to git gud fast. all my keks.

also GTFO to the beginners thread already.
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>>2504706
Stop these excuses - showreal or die!!!
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>>2504737
Why can't a beginner post porn? My line-confidence is way beyond that. I feel like a pro when I see your contributions to this thread; none!!!
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>>2504744
dear lord, you again. your art is an abomination most of the time. but what makes me cring more is how you can't take criticism.

btwm I don't consider you a beginner. I just think you have really bad taste and can't draw appealing porn. but hey, probably there's dickbrains who would fap to that, so don't mind my opinion. yes, that's an opinion, not an objective critique.
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>>2504751
>I don't consider you a beginner
scratch that.
I took a better look at this and the anatomy is so fucking bad that I'm putting you back in the beginner tier. sry.
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>>2503854
This is the best thing in this thread but the anatomy is too realistic to be considered appealing to these neckbeards.

It's in no way a masterpiece, but not bad either and it's got the best anatomy.
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>>2504744
this is fucking grotesque
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>>2504744
That is horribad.
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>>2504538
Please, just kill yourself.
No one cares about your shitty critiques.
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>>2504744
her neck is broken bruh
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>>2504771
Every
Single
Bone
Is Broken.
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>>2504744
nigger... can you PLEASE. Do some studying before you post here. Some of the newbie stuff is pretty bad... but this.... this is offensively shitty somehow
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>>2504744
>>2504765
>>2504766
>>2504771
>>2504802
>>2504775
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>>2504762
the anatomy is most of all broken. it's really not the excess of realism that ruins this. please get some glasses kek.
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>>2504767
I'm right behind you in line to kill myself. go ahead, I'm doing it right after you, beginner shitlord.
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>>2504825
way more appealing than the original, kek
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>>2504805
Why making such an effort and posting your shit in what'd it take again this time, 5 POSTs if you could have done it in just one - or -AAAHHHH now I understand - you want me to think it's five different anons disliking my shit....

Like I told you already pants down and show some work of your own. Otherwise you can stick your unqualified yak right were it belongs.

The way you keep dissing everybody elses work you must be the hell of an arshis? It must be painfull though having that itch; to reveal to us what a pro you are - but you can't. Wan't me to feel pitty for such a little ... keep hoping, keep shitting - it must make some kinda sense to you
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>>2504825
i feel a new meme coming along.
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>>2504848
>this level of delusion.
>the length of that reply.
you best be trolling.
dear god please be trolling.
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>>2504825
Every once in a while, /ic/ does something right.

This is why I still come here.
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>>2504825
>filename
can have my sides back please.
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>>2504868
I told you guys, that me being a jerk would prove useful, kek.

>>2504848
keep the delusion strong, bruh
all my fucking keks
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>>2504015
more a length ratio issue, but you dont have the subtleties either like the hands escalation ramp or an understanding of where the knuckles land
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>>2504825
So this piece of art took you all afternoon - shit - you were really the artrice I feared you were. But on top you forgot the cherry, honey. The little drop of moist that makes you happy...

Now this is the shittziest pice of quark in this thread. The anatomy is way too paranoid and your lineork so unconcious it might become a nightmare if you spend too much time doodling with it.

Here, I am generous enough today to show you how it's done properly, fozzy!
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>>2504879
i'll study some hands and feet things, so much drama going on here though.
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>>2503019
Does anybody know where Kyle posts his art?
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>>2504888
No!
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>>2504888
Protip to OP; if you want to shill your art post the link to said page, aka, go to fucking HentaiFoundry you fucking autist anonfags.
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this thread

xD
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>>2504880
I am the one that put you back into beginner tier, and I am not the one that drew that masterpiece which sums up all the qualities of your art, kek.
your anatomy is atrocious to look at, your line confidence (kekkus maximus) is shit, your colors are garbage and you don't know what composition means.
tl;dr you are one of the shittiest artists this thread has ever seen. but that's not the funniest part. oh dear lord, no. the funniest part is that you think you are good. my sides are melting, bruh.

please, keep posting. preferably more of your awesome line confidence, kek.
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>>2504892
protip to noobs like you. kyle doesn't shill his art. there's a jellyfag (your kind of posters), that tries to create drama about kyle, because they're uber jelly of his success and skill.
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>>2504918
Quit fucking talking, I don't fucking care about Kyle. I'm tired of shit anons spamming this damn thread with "blog?" comments. Post fucking porn and critiques only.
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>>2504953
how about you post porn yourself or GTFO, shitlord?
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>>2504964
You fucking first, bitch. I've already have in past threads of this, and that's besides the point of what I just said; >>2504953
> Quit fucking talking
Fucking read.
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bang bang
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crit pls????
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>>2504976
tumblr/10

It's not really porn. Your anatomy is phoned in. The I'm-such-an-arteest rainbow vomit background is distracting.
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>>2504914
You put me were? I'm still in here, kecks. Are you going to post some shit now to prove you're sooo guud or are just going to keep shitposting.
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>>2503912
position of the dick seems a bit high
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>>2504989
Actually I don't even have a tumblr nor am I influenced by it but whatever.
And you know, your critique really isn't helping at all. Yeah, the background is distracting in your opinion but what could've been done better?
What is specifically wrong about the anatomy?
Do people actually try to give critiques?
Why does /ic/ exist if no one is ACTUALLY there to help but rather bitch about shit and Kyle and insult others? So done with this shitty excuse of a board
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>>2504989
I mean I appreciate you taking your time to write this but if you're already doing that why not try to give me something to improve off of?
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>>2505052
if you read the thread so far there is a sad faggot endlessly regurgitating shit like this to every image posted.
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>>2504976
Anon, follow my advice : dont post your art on /ic/. If you want to post it on 4ch, even /e/ or other boards are nicer than here. For weaker minds its just a hit in the balls.

As for your drawing, I like it, it will fit nicely on /e/ as I said earlier. Nice proportions and colors, I really like the gold touches, it must look really good in a real picture instead of a scanned one.
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>>2504976
>>2505044
Despite what anon said about it being not porn (nudity by some isn't porn, I included) but when it comes to anatomy, it's passable, but the tits placement could be placed a bit over the arms to show proper depth and although the pose is rather simple, it again passes. Sometimes making "360 no scope pro dynamic perspective" isn't needed for everything you do, so it's fine for this. The color is fine, as I can tell you wanted something vivid. Don't listen to that other anon about that, no one wants to see "Cod of Doodie" color tones.
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>>2505044
I'll agree that the other guy's post was useless, and I don't see any tumblr influences.
That being said, you need to work on your attitude. No matter how inane the criticism you receive is, you don't want to reply like an indignant, entitled idiot. It just makes you look bad.
Either ignore the trolls, or try to remain neutral. If you start acting pissy, people will start judging your art by your attitude, rather than the quality of your work.

As far as criticism is concerned, your art is kind of at a stylistic crossroad where it's hard to critique, because there aren't that many glaring flaws. The breasts and upper torso need some work, but otherwise it's passable.
The primary flaws are more closely related to the pose, the theme and the composition. It's just not very interesting to look at, because the character isn't projecting anything, and the style is kind of generic. She's just kinda there.

An imporant thing to consider when you're starting on a drawing, is what you want to express and what situation the character is in. Make your character show some kind of emotion. Give her something to do. Make the pose more expressive and dynamic. Show some personality. I'd also suggest playing around with perspective, angles, foreshortening and overlapping, because it makes the picture come alive. I'd also suggest not having the character look at the viewer, but focus on something else. If she's going to look at the viewer, she needs to convey some kind of emotion, because then her emotional response to the viewer becomes the theme of the picture.

Drawing a character dead on without any overarching theme or expression of emotion is usually something artists only do when they're making a character sheet.
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>>2505120
I can give you a reach around if you'd like
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Does anyone know what this is from?
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>>2505265
Asanagi
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>>2505120
What immediately strikes me is that she's leaning forwards like she's about to fall, there's no equilibrium.
Check your proportions; her arms look way too skinny.

>>2505265
fatalpulse i think
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>>2505278
thanks
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>>2504973
>besides the point of what I just said
oh, like you did here?
>>2504892
if jellyfagging is all you are good for then GTFO, shitlord. GTFO piece of jelly shit.
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>>2505011
no I'm not going to post anything. I don't have to prove nothing to the likes of you. you are nothing to me. you are a mere ant I can step on whenever I want. read the other comments and realize already that you are utter shit.
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>>2505044
the anatomy isn't that bad. your main issue is you lack proper perspective knowledge. you basically don't know how to make body parts interact with each other.
if you want to get better fast, do perspective training instead of trying to color turds.
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>>2505053
stop being butthurt and insted git gud, autismo.
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>>2503041
>>2503071
>>2503108
high elf you cucks
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>>2503854
stop leaking assets
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>>2505326
i gotta ask when in doubt
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>>2504976
Clavicle and cleavage may need a revision. The belly button is eh
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>>2504880
wtf are you doing? someone took maybe 50 seconds top to make a meme from your shitty art.
and you try to make it better? no just stop you pathetic excuse for a human.

original has more spark btw
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>>2504880
the cringe is real.
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>>2504880
>not getting the joke.
hes autistic too guys. confirmed.
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>>2505265
Asanagi's doujin about those amazon twins from Danmachi

Jezebel something
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Another monster girl.
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>>2504666
/tips fedora
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Opinions so far?
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>>2505466
Lets try that again...
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>>2505056
Thank you very much! I think I'll follow your advice.
And yes, the gold ink I used really is shiny and vibrant, love it.

>>2505058
I'm working on more interesting poses etc, w/ this piece I wasn't paying too much attention to it. Also since it's in an A5 sketchbook of mine. I didn't even notice that with the tits but now I can't unsee it. Will fix asap

>>2505130
Thank you a lot for the in-depth critique. I agree that I shouldn't have reacted that way. I was just sooo annoyed because it basically happens every time I post on /ic/.
You're totally right with the posing, theme etc being generic That's really something I have to work on. I guess I'm often times scared to butcher things so I stay in my comfort zone which is never good.
But another struggle that has been very massive for me is that I don't seem to be able to project what I learn about art in classes onto my own art. Also, the contrast between Fine Arts (which is basically taught everywhere by default) and commercial or comic-like art (which is what I do) is often times very confusing to me.
I'll definitely try to use your tips. Thanks again, Anon

>>2505307
I agree on the anatomy part but my perspective skills aren't as bad. I've gone to several art classes, the fundamental things I kinda am capable of doing. But yeah, anatomy's still a problem.
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>>2503912
What do we have here.
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>>2505265
http://exhentai.org/g/846884/776e92f32d/
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>>2505473
>I agree on the anatomy part but my perspective skills aren't as bad. I've gone to several art classes, the fundamental things I kinda am capable of doing. But yeah, anatomy's still a problem.
no, you can't. trust me. you can't. for you perspective and line weight are bigger problems than anatomy.
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>>2505574
pls be real
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>>2505563
Line weight? What are you talking about? You are aware that line weight is a stylistic device and completely depends on what tool you use? Line weight for sure can be used to accentuate perspective and still it isn't the main issue.
Also it is funny that you think that my perspective skills are so fundamentlally lacking when 1) you have only seen ONE artwork of mine (and no,, you cannot judge an artist by lookin at ONE artwork), 2) you are not my art teacher who has taught me perspective and 3) you haven't seen my perspective practice sketches.
I'm all for critique and I'm not my saying my perspective is 100% perfect but I do now all of the dry theory. Just because I didn't apply everything I learned on THIS sketchbook artwork does not mean I totally don't know the concept of perspective.
Also, what EXACTLY do I not know? And what is in your opinion wrong with my perspective skills, hm? It's always better to be precise than just make vague statements
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>>2505579
you really have a shitty attitude dude.
I'm not going to do a redline to show you what I mean about the perspective being fucked up, so you'll either have to believe what I and other anons said earlier, or keep being a butthurt primadonna that can't tell what their weaknesses are. your choice.
trust me, you'll never going to get better with such a narrow minded attitude.
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>>2505580
Sorry if I come off like a primadonna but I don't get why people think that saying "you're bad at this" "but why?" "you're just bad at this" is giving a critique
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>>2505580
Also could you maybe email me? [email protected] I would like to settle this in a friendly manner, I don't want to come off in a bad way. Also, femanon but not feeling like posting tits
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>>2505585
I told you what I think the problem is in my first response. your artwork lacks depth because you lack proper perspective training/practice/knowledge (whatever you want to call it). I meant to judge your artwork alone and all I said was aimed at this artwork. sorry if I judged you as an artist based only on this pic. but to be hones I still think all that I said.

to show you properly what is wrong with this pic perspective wise, I would have to do a redline adjusting the lineweight and construction. the part that is most fucked up (as other anons noticed is the torso, but the entire figure is very bad when it comes to perspective, not just that. the elements overlap very poorly and they are without a main perspective in almost every part of the artwork. how do I notice that? I can't tell where the horizon line is.
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>>2505604
Okay, I get it now. Sorry for sounding childish or unreasonable. Is there no way to contact any of you except from /ic/? Still not too fond of this board
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>>2504254
That's what anon asked for
Didn't like my other ideas oh well
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>>2504047
Idk must be an OC from somewhere
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>>2505604
Another anon here, although I wasn't getting where you were getting this whole "perspective problem" from until I relooked that drawing again and I can see what you're refering to. The horizon line isn't the problem, persay, it's the lack of body direction that makes the whole thing look rather "flat", looks like the character is being "screwed" towards the right. This is usually the problem with using the "traditional frontal pose" beginners/intermediate artists struggle with, but that lack of good body direction and even a bit better shadow placement would overall make that picture better in general.
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Is this ok as pinups go?
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redlines welcome
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>>2505958

Reminds me of late swedish artist Hans Arnold. Those swirls and muted greens
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>>2505978
>redlines
>lines
Work on your lines.
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>>2506001

Eh, that's not chicken scratching though. You are allowed to draw more than one line when sketching, unless you're some kind of Kim Jung Gi level virtuoso that nails everything on the first try.
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I sketched a single porn image and never really though of going back. I guess I should give it a try again.
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>>2506271
Where to post lewd Non-porn little girls
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>>2506296
every local police department has a forum for that.
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>>2504744
>>2504709
>>2504586
>>2504312
>>2503559
>>2504974
>>2504976
>>2505120
>>2505468
>>2505446
>>2506271
The fuck is this garbage? get this shit outta here, these threads aren't for talentless hacks with dreaming big, If you don't have Kyle's level of skill you don't belong here
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>>2506346
You're right, sorry family, gotta level up my photocopy skills
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>>2506330
non-porn loli isn't against the rule so um thanks I guess
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>>2506346
what would be the point of this thread then?
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>>2506346
GTFO cancer
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>>2506375
lewd little girls? really, you fucking pedo piece of shit? really?
get some help, degenerate.
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>>2506400
> get some help
>degenerate
the way you are saying this
hilarious
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>>2506346
This is honestly shit though.
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>>2506400
little girls are cute, rabbits are cute
little girls are furry /trash/
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>>2506296
if its stylized, then post it in the Stylization thread
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>>2505978
well your lines are hairy as shit but overall i like your volume.
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i decided to sorta scrap and restart this...
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>>2504744
Usually people over react and over analyze on this board, but this, this is truly shit.
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>>2506407
nah. it's just called being normal.

>>2506521
this is probably the most stupid comparison I've ever heard kek.
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Replaced the faces.
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Oshino Shinobu is an immortal vampire
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>>2507779
Can you give her more form? She's nothing but skin and bones unless that's your thing but she would look more healthier if you give her those feminine fat pads at the right places, study that.
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>>2507785
thanks, i get what you mean but the skinny look is something i'm aiming for.
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So lads, if I would add male characters to this pick, who would you choose?
http://www.strawpoll.me/10108600
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Lil quick dood from a few days ago, drying to get back into drawing
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>>2507779
who still looks like a child. please go kill yourself.
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>>2508007
how about you rather try adding some good art to it?
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>>2508354
Stay mad old roastie.
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>>2508354
(you)
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>>2508047
blog? Hopefully a SFW blog.
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>>2508493
whats the matter with nsfw? are you a puritan or are you ashamed of the human body and its needings?
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>>2508500

this
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>>2504744
Even if I'm new and can't draw very well yet, I can at least take solace in the fact that I'm not enough of a shit for brains to ever consider showing the world a travesty like this and expect anything other than insults.
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>>2508493
rokujuukyuu69.tumblr.com its largely sfw you're in luck
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>>2504581

>>2504577

I wasn't the same anon that had been replying to you before. I'm just some rando that decided to step in.

I'm going to say it again. You sound like an abusive fuck, you sound like you need help. Sometimes, honesty, when used like that, is just a stupid excuse people use to justify being a shitty person to others.
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did a request to warm up between commissions
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>>2508590
people are actually paying you for this shit?
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>>2508608
sure, why not
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>>2508608
Ohhh I like this a lot, blog?
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>>2508590
very nice work anon
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>>2508635
( b'3')b
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>>2508641
It's sucks, you have shit taste in porn artists.
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>>2508613
http://kairunoburogu.tumblr.com/
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>>2508641
Kill yourself.
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>>2508608
next time try to draw without using a so obvious reference.
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>>2508608
This is really good, do you have a Tumblr I can follow?
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>>2504880
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>>2508752


;-; anon... im going to be very straightforward... read the sticky
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>>2508752
bait
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>>2508752 what are you doing?!hah
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Drawing loli is illegal in the US, right?
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>>2509039
Not in gommiefornia its not.
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>>2509039
If at all, it's state dependent.
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>>2509039
I think it's supposed to be legal as long as it's nothing obscene, so shit like rape, gore, bestiality and abuse.
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>>2509055
whats the point in going half retard?
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>>2508906
Oops, sorry about that

thedartkid.tumblr.com
thedartkid.deviantart.com
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>>2509653
you really really suck kek
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>>2509724
Yea, I'll admit that one was shit. I did it in a few hours and that was only so I could have something to post this 4/20 XD
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>>2509840
A few hours? Jesus, man.
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>>2509868
I think it was about 2, yea
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>>2509840
>>2509882
underage pls go
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>>2506956
Heya, I know it's been a while already, but are you still down to commission that animated lineart?
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>>2510329
I'm still up for it , but the day after tomorrow I have to start studying for a final which will probably keep me busy until Monday.
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>>2510368
Oh, the material ain't gonna be ready for a bit anyway. Next week shall do?
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>>2509724
post work?
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>>2510396
Sure.
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I did this commission yesterday, any critiques?
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>>2510404
She reminds me of Gertrude from Runaways.
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Is guro a popular enough fetish that I should get into it specifically? How do I find a fetish that is small enough for me to be able to penetrate it's market, but large enough for there to be demand?

I searched for the guro tag on e621 on found ZERO images.
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>>2510404
it's a difficult pose but it looks good. Her face balance is off, i'd revise it.
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>>2510430
anon, stop looking for a "market". Please consider drawing what you like.
sageeee desu
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>>2510398
please nosefag, kill yourself, you shitposting idiot.
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>>2510404
yeah. I'd like the contact of your client, so I can critique his eyesight.
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>>2510441

noooo i want money.
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>>2510430
You can look at what "beaver" did, check the gurochan archives.

He drew comics involving guro, really appealed to a niche audience willing to pay a lot of money for quality commissions

He eventually quit because he said it wasn't profitable enough.

Keep in mind that this guy was probably the most notable and popular artist in the scene.


I'd say, draw guro, make another handle, and draw normal smut. You can dip into the money pool of each, but don't corner yourself into one genre.
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just started working my first job (i'm 24) and it was so shitty that i've got to work really hard on making my porn good
which is ironic because i have less free time to improve... i should have got gud while i was neet
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>>2511358
whats your job?
>>2510454
post work?
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>>2511361
>whats your job?
minimum wage burger flipper

i don't really like leaving my house
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>>2503854
you're faces are shit senpai
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>>2505120
you really need to work on your anatomy, anon, girls don't have peepees
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>>2511361
nosefag, I'm so much better than you, that you'd probably kill yourself for real, so it's really better if I don't post it kek.
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>>2511589
if that's the only thing about their anatomy that you manage to find wrong, then you must really really fucking suck.
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>>2511712
If you missed the joke, you're just barely smart enough to be on this board.

Congratulations!
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>>2511945
nah, I didn't miss anything. the joke is dumb and unfunny. I just wanted to spill some shit on the anon that had the nerve to make that post.
now gtfo.
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>>2504744
FUCKING LOOMIs
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workin on a mother's day piece, any feedback?
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>>2512743

Nope, perfect, your mom can stick it straight onto the fridge.
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>>2512743
I fucking love your style.
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>>2512743
Maybe it's just me but the face and body doesn't look like they are in the same style at all, the waist is the only thing that really matches. The hands seem pretty gigantic compared to the head.
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>>2512838
please, please, please, don't listen to this anon. there's absolutely nothing wrong with your style. nothing.
don't let other people's narrow minded opinions cloud your own judgement. style-wise you are really original and even thought you break anatomy a lot, it's still appealing as fuck. that's all that matters.
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