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Hey /ic/, just finished my first bust. What do you think?
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Hey /ic/, just finished my first bust. What do you think?
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more vilppu
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>>2463843
Glenn Vilppu? I'm not sure what you mean.
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>>2463840
if this is actually your photo you could at least post a bigger picture.
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>>2463858
Ok, I have a few more. I didn't expect to have to prove it's my piece bit I ser where you're coming from. This is me actually starting the sculpture btw.
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>>2463858
This one is from a few days ago, before I added the shirt collar.
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>>2463858
I don't have a picture of the finished piece. I used one taken by a family member which she tool with her shitty phone which explains the size of the original image. So, now what so you think about the sculpture?
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>>2463877
I think it's fairly well made for a first bust. the ears seem too tall though, and the shirt+collar don't seem to be working, it looks really poorly executed and detracts from the overall sculpture imo. I don't sculpt so there's not much I wanna say, and it's hard to discern any details in the finished version you posted in the OP.
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>>2463893
Thanks, it's a bust of my grandfather who passed away a few years ago. This is actually for his grave. The ears may seem large but he had rather large ears. As far as the shirt collar, I completely agree. I added that in a rush during a few days which I spent at my grandmother's house, out of town.
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>>2463871
I can't really find a flaw in it.

I think there's one, but I can't perceive it.
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Looks really good OP, wish there were more genuine threads like this instead of the usual Ruan Jia or Murata dick sucking
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>>2463840
The difference in quality between the facial features and the shirt & collar is mind boggling. It looks like you let your 8 years old niece sculpt them.
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>>2463840
Nice face- though I wonder what you are trying to convey with that expression.
The shoulders look unnaturally narrow.
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Really cool. I like it.
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>>2463978
>>2463871
For me, the ears are a tad too long, but is also a common feature in old people. So it's not really 'wrong', but it's the only thing I can see.
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>>2464515
Thanks anon, I worked really hard on it...on the facial features, at least.
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>>2464538
Completely agree, I worked on the shirt/collar in a hurry. I was going to leave the next day and had to leave it "finished" before coming back home. I didn't give it the time and effort that I did for the facial features.
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>>2463978
Probably the unusually large ears.
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Here's another angle which really shows the full size of the ears.
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>>2464956
And one more from above.
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>>2464853
Yeah, I might have overdone the ears a bit but in all the pictures I found of him, his ears were quite large.
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