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Why the fuck are the mods deleting porn threads?

Post your nsfw, critique work and so on.
Furry is allowed, however do not over indulge on the subject of furries or their culture. Unnecessarily reporting these anons are strongly discouraged. This thread is dedicated to helping anons improve their erotic drawings and paintings.
Do not start flame wars.
Do not reply to funposters.
Stay on topic.
Please stay on topic.
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Questions about references for drawing porn will be answered
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Mods have been running rampant here lately
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>>2420489
this is the first time i see mods deleting generals
whats up their assess?
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guys just need some tips and help is this vagoo looking right ?

first time seeing nuke that big
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Holy shit yeah that threads been there forever.
What the fuck is wrong with the mods.
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>>2420547
I only come to ic for the orb critiques because it's my job. Idk why they are deleting it but I'm going to keep posting them every time they get deleted.
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Furry porn is not permitted outside of /b/ (or /trash/).

https://www.4chan.org/rules#global3

"You will not post any of the following outside of /b/: .... anthropomorphic ("furry") or grotesque ("guro") images, or loli/shota pornography."
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>>2420603
FINALLY

FURFAGS BTFO
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>>2420603
Sometimes the line between furry shit and proper art seems thin to me
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>>2420603
Please ban Malaysia sperg from this board forever.
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>>2420603
Is this a new rule or just one that usually isn't enforced that much?
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>>2420603
So Gabe won't post here ever again? Ok
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>>2420603
I don't understand. Why guro? It's the fetish of kings
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>>2420603
k dude
we'll remove the rules on furry next time

New rule:
Post your nsfw, critique work and so on.
Furry IS NOT ALLOWED. Global rule 3
Do not start flame wars.
Do not reply to funposters.
Stay on topic.
Please stay on topic.
Reminder that if you do not want to view this thread, please hide it by pressing the minus button or by right-clicking the thumbnail on the catalog and selecting "hide this thread."
Questions about references for drawing porn will be answered

Happy? Btw the op pic is completely vanilla, its an adult squidgirl having vaginal sex with an adult male, nothing wrong with it.
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>>2420626
>Why guro?
and it's such a rubber rule since it's based on taste since it is defined by an individual by what they find grotesque. Examples could be disability (amputee) or rape fantasies but in no way excluded to the more obvious things.
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Are we really going to use this thread or should we make another one? I don't care about the quality of op but this guy is a royal asshole and I don't want to support his bs. If anyone else wants I can make another one using a picture from the last thread or draw something new or even make a blank sign that just says porn thread. In the interest of fairness i would pick someone besides BBC since he's had a lot of op picks. But I'm only going to do it if there's consensus. I don't want either thread to be full of arguing about which one to use. Use this thread, yea or nay?
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>>2420682
Yea, because I really don't give a flying crap either way.
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>>2420682
almost nobody in /ic/ knows this guy except for you.
fuck off with your personal vendetta against him and stay out from this board.
you dont even post your works here.
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>>2420682
are you the faggot that spammed the shit out of the previous thread?
post your work if you're so deeply concerned of the quality of this board and its threads.
I doubt you're even a regular and came here solely because you have something personal against the artist in the OP thus explaining your sperging whenever you see his art.
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>>2420710
>>2420718
You're really transparent you know.
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>>2420603
Someone screencap this.
Someone else post your work.
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>>2420603
i wish this rule could be revised or at least have /ic/ added to the list. But then we'd just get flooded with furshit threads. Lose some, save many i guess.
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>>2420734
But furry and loli were allowed in the porn thread before and there wasn't a huge amount of those. Right? I mean I understand banning furry but even in the porn thread?
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>>2420748

Especially in the porn thread.
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>>2420728
im not the boogieman that youre so scared of
in the last porn thread i saw the op pic being posted and not a single word came out from it and when its used as the op pic in this thread suddenly you sperged the fuck out and ruined the threads.
who the fuck are you, do you even draw? what are you doing here in /ic/ and what is your relation with this guy? he scammed you in Gaia or something?
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>>2420728
>>2420682
this is the one non drawing autistic faggot that spammed the prev porn thread and fucked up porn threads forever.
ive seen people bitch about op pics but not as hard as this dumbass to the point mods intervene
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gee it sure is porn in here
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>>2420603
Hey mod.

If we can't have furry, then we shouldn't be allowed to have foot fetishism or futa, either.
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>>2420773
just fucking follow the rules
autistic gaiafaggots ruined /ic/. theyve won.
just post vanilla shit from now. sorry gabe.
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>>2420795
>>2420773
>>2420766
>>2420759
See this is exactly why I suggested to make a new thread. Have fun with an entire thread of this asshole samefagging and shitposting. I'll be skipping out until the next one.
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>>2420815
you havent post your work yet. at least post something so we know youre a regular here and you take the guy who drew the op pic seriously.

Otherwise youre a fucking no talent /b/tard that got lost in /ic/ and is responsible for 90% of the shitpost.
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Where did my Futa Vivian go?
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I think that the porn thread should be permanently moved to /trash/.

>Better traffic, more populated. Will receive critiques faster and attract a wider audience.
>Allowed to post any porn that isn't loli and shota, so furry and other shit is okay.

Yay or nay?
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>>2420829
Probably lost in hell that was the other porn threads that was spammed by shitposting.
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>>2420835
We come to /ic/ for a reason going anywhere else would be turned into a hug box and circle jerk by normies and plebs
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>>2420815
kindly fuck off and die
youve contributed nothing but killing our precious generals even further.
/ic/ is for artwork and critique, not personal vendettas and autism
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>>2420835
Nay because fucking deal with the rules.
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>>2420840
>our precious generals
who even talks like this
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>>2420752
Meh I find it retarded personally. Shouldn't all kinds of porn be welcome? It's not even particularly disgusting stuff (talking about furry and loli). Anyway apparently these are the rules now so whatever
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do i got the nipple right?
drawing from imagination
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>>2420603
Mikufag

BTFO
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Help me out here with those rules.

Example image: Basic resource that belong on any drawing forum dedicated to studying the field.

Is it pornographic to some? And if yes would it then be considered guro?
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>>2420887
>drawing from imagination.
You should draw from knowing proper anatomy first before thinking with your dick.
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>>2420895
ill punch your face faggot wheres my redline
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>>2420890
She needsto be flatchested in orderto hurt someone's fee fee's
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>>2420898
A redline for that would require more effort than you put into that crap yourself. Fucking leave now and learn your fundamentals.
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>>2420903
you fuck off dumbshit. i dont see you posting your work in this thread i bet you cant even fucking draw.
still wondering why fucking cancer like you didnt got banned yet
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>>2420922
>I bet you can't/don't even draw
Why does every buttblasted faggot use this as their go-to retort?
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>>2420922
Because newfags like you are still here drawing cancer.
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>>2420931
buttblasted faggotry gets buttblasted replies
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>>2420932
kill yourself friendo. we dont need any more shitheads that think they can draw worth a damn by reading from textbooks.
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>>2420815
so you got bullied online and showed everyone youre a literal child by pulling a temper tantrum by spamming stupid shit in one of our main generals?
Grow up or kill yourself
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>>2420887
this is really good, don't listen to the other anons. they're just bitter because they suck. do you have a blog by any chance?
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Pss, hey, kids
https://twitter.com/love_kirby_/status/703933681472184321
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>>2421020
Thanks, and yeah the bitter faggots do suck ass.
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>>2421030
Jizz on a wall tutorial?
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>>2420545
This looks good to me but I'm no expert on anatomy.
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>>2420603
YES PRAISE YOU. Put a smile on my face.
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>>2420603
You can't be serious.
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>>2420603
ooh ooh can you ban illastrat while youre at it? If you permaban illastrat ill literally not complain if you ban me.
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>>2420837
Right, but /ic/ is slowly turning into /r9k/ with art kids.

Besides, what do we have to lose? People on /trash/ seem to be as brutally honest as we are, and it's not like the porn threads will lose quality. Besides a handful of people, most /ic/ denizens are high schoolers making qt animu grills and generic fantasy schlock.

Since /aco/ has a ban on furry, and they're an off-shoot of /co/ which is hugboxy with their own drawfags, it wouldn't work there. /trash/ would be a good choice.

Gonna post a thread there in the next day or two, see how it works out.

>>2420841
Boo hoo. Go back to 2006.
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Bash away fellow anons.
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>>2420890
Guro would prolly be dismemberment, guts spilling out ect. That is something you'd find in a textbook
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>>2421145
line weight would help a lot to show depth
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>>2421137
Link us to that thread i might as well go there it was either hotwheels or /b/ but /b/ moves too fast and unreliable
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>>2420603
hey what's up FRICKER i bet you touch dinks
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I find the stuff pretty gross and shitty in general but the furry/pony rules are both deprecated, aren't they? They were created in response to very specific problems that have long since been solved. Nobody posts furry or pony stuff outside of their boards to "troll" anymore. I don't see why either wouldn't be allowed on this one so long as it was posted in the proper context of this board.

I've been a regular browser on this board for well over a year and I'm surprised how I've literally only seen this being treated as a problem once before. Is this board basically devoid of mods except when one of them wanders in here to power trip for five seconds and then goes off and does something else for 10 months?
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>>2421030
how ?
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>>2421350
This is a photoshop style file. Import it in photoshop and then you can apply it to a layer. It gives interesting results, but it's quite limited of course.
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Some sketches

1/2
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2/2
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>>2420603
Please ban the following characters:
Firez
Brian
Illastrat
Nose cunt
Malaysia
Actually, just ban everyone who assumes a name that's not Anonymous
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>>2421410
>>2421412

what software do you ink with mate
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>>2421431
Manga Studio. These were inked with the indian ink rough dry brush.
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>>2421415
so ruffled.

I bet youre worse than all of us.
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>>2421441
Take and kill yourself.
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>>2421441
It's not the first time I see you do this. I think you assume way too much, that other anons are worse than you.
Is it possible to see any of your work?
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>>2421461
I'm only like 50th percentile on i/c amongst those who post, but have literally never asked someone to post their work and have them be within 6 months of my skill.(75%)
The people who hate on Fi-Rez are the best at being hopelessly mediocre if you ever take the time out of your day to notice that.

The people trolling are by far and large the bottom 20% of ic

But sure, I'll bite, as i always do.
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>>2421461
>>2421470
dis gunna be good
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>>2421470
Thanks. Yeah, I can agree you are better than 80-90% of people who post in the porn thread.
Keep it up art-wise, but I'd suggest you to be less douchy and maybe a bit more open minded.
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>>2420603
HAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHAHHHAHAHHAHAHA
GET REKT FURSHITS
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>>2421509
>being this triggered by furry shit
kek
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>>2421234
This
Also please someone post porn the shitposting has gone on for long enough
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>>2421410
>>2421412
blog?
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>>2421540
Not him but
http://bbc-chan.tumblr.com/
here you go newfriend
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>>2421545
>>2421412
>>2421410
oh there was a signature... im sorry im blind
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>>2420603
You are a fucking retard.
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>>2421415
malaysia literally dont exist in /ic/. i never saw his trip or know what he's like. stop shilling your boogieman
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>>2420603
How's your first day on 4chan going?
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>>2421718
>mod
Just fuck off degenerate
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>>2420545
Are you going to be including her head in this?
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I need a honest opinion. What should I improve?
Already know that a penis looks weird, but what else?
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>>2420620
It's been around for a long time, it just isn't really enforced. But apparently this mod is bothered by furry porn. It's not like this is a fur dump thread, I don't see the problem in just posting it for critique, it's pretty much humans with tails and different heads.
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>>2421794
youre style symbol drawing your bodies/ drawing heavily from reference and fucking up.

Do construction.
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>>2420603
someone screencap this and use it for the op pic in the next porn thread with these rules
>>2420636
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>>2421794
>>2421801
My other artwork
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>>2421807
Deleted a piece of post by mistake.
I'm actually drawning from a reference photo of wooden manequins I made.
About that blonde guy:
some anon told me already that shading looks horribly flat and so I tried to improve it on that one >>2421794
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>>2421794
Push your values more, right now they're pretty weak sauce. Also the shading on the towel/sheet makes no sense. Why are the shadows on all the peaks?
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>>2421807
Your shadows make no sense. Where the hell is the light source?
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>>2421810
I'm awfully bad at clothes/materials shading
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>>2421812
Do more vale studies then. Your lack of understanding and ability of shading is an extremely serious detriment.
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>>2421815
>>2421811
>>2421801
Thank you for advices. Have a nice day guys
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>>2421795
I don't think so i haven't seen the other images get deleted that where against the rules. I can't shake the feeling that this mod in particular followed me from /pol/ because that is where i first got banned for the same drawing despite the fact that other anons spam this sort of material when arguing about anime related threads its obvious the mod is new here as we've never had issues in the past on /ic/
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>>2421807
Closing one eye to not draw it. A cheap tactic to make shit artists less shit looking.
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>>2421817
I wept for you, mikufag..
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>>2421845
I'm not insulting you so why are you insulting me without really a reason. I've never stated that I'm a pro artist.
btw, never close you eyes because it's a cheap tactic dont look.
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>>2421891
>I'm not insulting you so why are you insulting me without really a reason.

It's 4chan, dude. It comes with the site, just live with it on how things work here.
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>>2421817
no one followed you here
i reported that drawing where ever i saw it because it's loli, asshole
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>>2421904
You're mean.
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>>2421904
Here's the reference I used to help draw it, I don't if I should feel flattered because I've never actually tried to draw lolies on purpose and the only thing I can relate to that body type would be the lack of J cup sized breasts.
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>>2421869
>mfw only watched MLP because producer or some shit did the original PPG
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>>2421917
That's a pretty common reason if you're not autist and already like cartoons.
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>>2421930
shikatanai and all that jazz i guess
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>>2421937
whatever man, it's not like i'm the one banning people
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Would like some advice on how I should handle the foot, since I'm not a veteran at feet in anyway.
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>>2421917
>>2421941
I don't know what was posted but here's my message to the mods.
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>>2421962
Is his pants made of rubber? Too thin and stretchy, it's called tenting for a reason
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>>2421964
I was kinda going for loose fitting pants, but I can always change it I guess.
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>>2421971
loose fitting pants were the last thing i would imagined it being
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>>2421979
I can't believe I am getting the same treatment like Teal did I'm getting there baby!
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>>2421984
I think the people who are bad at drawing are the ones who dislike lolis the most.
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>>2421984
how big is your anime reaction face folder?
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>>2421979
post your work sperg boy
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>>2422041
what does that even have to do with anything? He didnt call anything bad or claim to be better. He didnt freely insult. Might as well ask (you) to post your work.
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>>2422046
>He didnt freely insult
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>>2420931
cause it might be true...
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>>2420887
You would do better if you'd scan your pencildrawings or get hands on a drawing tablet - or are you just funposting? Watch out, holy inquisition is on its way...
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>>2422112
>might be true...

Only to your own self after you get told off for being a shit artist.
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>>2422131
i didnt follow the conversation but theres a very easy way to prove them wrong. IS WHAT I WOULD HAVE SAID if I didn't read this >>2420898
Holy shit lol made my day
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>>2421971
If they're loose-fitting it would be much less snug against the penis. As the other anon said, it's a tent. It should start farther toward the thighs and form a wider triangle, and not conform to the shape of the penis. The pants look like very stretchy spandex right now.
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>>2422144
I see what you mean, you do make a good point. I guess I'll have to do something about it to keep it interesting when I fix the problems you and the other anon mentioned. Thanks for the feedback.
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Tried a more painterly approach and tried to draw some values once for a change.
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>>2422199
If I had to nitpick, I feel like there was more effort put into the girl's figure and line detail than the background itself, I also don't partially think that "fish bowl lens" effect going on there looks that great but that's just me. As usual the females anatomy structure is the highest quality of your artworks.
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>>2422222
>I feel like there was more effort put into the girl's figure and line detail than the background itself

Not him but why wouldn't there be? smdh family man
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>>2422225
I don't follow, are you suggesting that I meant there shouldn't be a background there? Cause I wasn't, I meant I think if you're going to have something in the background, at least make it look somewhat as interesting as the foreground figures as well, otherwise it just seem like you shouldn't even bother adding one in the first place. That is though, just for him to decide if it's fine as is or not.
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>>2422222
This was a quick character sketch, so I didn't really pay much attention to the background's details and focused only on the contrast of it's values against the foreground character. Anyway, I agree with you, the BG is utter crap (and so are the more sketchy parts of the character), but it was never meant to be anything more than that.
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Help me fix her anatomy /ic/.

I want to draw a dude behind her but I can't seem to find any reference, specifically to how his hips would buckle and knees would fold if he were way taller.
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>>2420545
looks like that snake princess from one piece doing her usual pose
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>>2422565
I'm nowhere near real good at my anatomy skills right now, but I'm tired atm and did a redline of this anyways. Maybe BBC-Chan can get around to it later on and do a much better job at this.

Also, I took the pose as if it was trying to be like this so, yeah. You should play with it, make her have some flow if you get what I was going with.
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>>2422615
Oh. and I forgot to mention I did kinda fucked up her right arm there, my bad. I may do another redline in a kinda different way for the pose, something to add to a more playful approach. And I don't have anything for the male idea, going to have to add to that yourself first.
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>>2422615
Thank you man, awesome work. Not sure if the booty (?) should be showing since she's getting fucked from behind.

Otherwise many thanks, you made my day.
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>>2422565
pretty face tho
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>>2422701
meant to say, panel from webcomic I'm working on.
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>>2422565
The problem here is not anatomy, even though you are not showing any knowledge of it either.
The main problem is the very uninteresting pose, the lack of any perspective, and the unappealing gesture.
It looks like you used a reference, but you just tried to copy the pose by looking at the contour of the refs body. The only thing that saves the artwork here is the face, where you managed to nail the position of the symbols in space.
If you want to learn proper anatomy in perspective I suggest you to go a step back and so some studies involving simple geometrical shapes. Human bodies can be broke down into them, so that's a good training for anatomy as well.
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>>2422701
You should stop using halftones for digital work. This panel looks quite good, but the halftone pretty much ruins it. The patter is way too strong and unintentionally pulls the viewer's attention away form the point of interest which is basically all the rest.
Also, try to make your gesture more confident by using less of those repeating almost chicken scratchy lines. They are inaccurate and messy and make the inking look like it's still a sketch.
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>>2422722
I don't know, I find it hand to fill white space in panels where there's not a lot of room to establish scenery. How would you solve that, respectfully disagree about the hatching though.
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>>2422731
not the guy you're replying to, but personally I don't have a problem with halftones. however I find yours to be a bit visually disruptive, like a striped shirt on tv. Maybe something softer/subtle?
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What free programs are good for modeling? Designdoll is good but there are no faces and hair
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>>2422731
The tone you used here is much less aggressive (probably because it has been resized) and it already looks better. Now ditch it in favor of a normal flat 50% gray color and it will look even less aggressive and much better than now.
Imo of course. Do as you see fit if you disagree.
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>>2422233

actually if you detail the background too much, it takes attention away from where the eyes should go
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>>2422761
if you can't draw face and hair on top of 3d model it means you aren't ready to use them
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Any weird mistakes you can see on female?
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>>2422895
This is pretty much shit, but the most retarded are probably the girl's mouth and the thing that is supposed to be the guy's hand.
Seriously anon. Learn to draw at least as a 10 year old before you decide to do porn.
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>>2422902
alright
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>>2422713
I agree with all of it but in the short term what can I do for this image specifically?
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>>2422628
No problem, although looking at the ref again I should have made her right foot bigger/ her left foot smaller to point out the depth I was trying to show off, much like the point I was making as >>2422713 said about the gesture and perspective.

>>2422773
You make a good point, I agree it shouldn't be too much and distract the viewer from the foreground. Although me personally would make it just a bit more cleaner if I was doing it, just how my professionalism is about small details, heh.

>>2422902
You're vastly underestermating what an "10 year old's " art skill would be, that sketch completely shits on what I could do at that age, fucking serious. Honestly >>2422895, as I do agree with the mouth and how her left thing looks rather big compared to her right one given that perspective looks a tad off and such, I'd just practice that pose you are trying to go with here by starting over again and fix the errors mentioned above. I personally think her hips are appealing to me but just need to fine tune it more.
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>>2422925
Same guy as before and above post, but I think something like image here is a better gesture (excuse the different angle though) for what you're trying to go with would work for the girl and for that man fucking her part to make more sense for it as well. Mainly her feet should be more like image ref for more appeal, imo.
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>>2422199
her bicep looks square-ish
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>>2422938
Another one for the top half gesture.
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can someone repost the futa vivian
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>>2422931
>You're vastly underestermating what an "10 year old's " art skill would be, that sketch completely shits on what I could do at that age, fucking serious. Honestly >>2422895, as I do agree with the mouth and how her left thing looks rather big compared to her right one given that perspective looks a tad off and such, I'd just practice that pose you are trying to go with here by starting over again and fix the errors mentioned above. I personally think her hips are appealing to me but just need to fine tune it more.
What exactly makes you think I give a flying fuck about what you think of my critique. If your standards are so low, please feel free to express them, just don't expect everyone else, especially not people that know more than you (obviously this seems to be the case here) will agree with you.
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>>2422939
The fact that I drew her right palm as a mess of sketchy lines doesn't bother you, but you notice the slightly squarish bicep?
I mean, you are right, but it's not like I don't know what an anatomically correct bicep looks like. I think you might be unaware of what stylization and line dynamicity are.
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>>2422981
That wasn't a critique, that was someone bitter shitting on someone else without giving any suggestions like the friendly person at >>2422931 does. /ic/ is not a place for edgy assholes like you. You don't know how to critique, yet you present yourself as a superior artist. Maybe this is bait, but your kind actually exists.
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>>2422761
tfw portable version dosent work and cant save.
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>>2422981
I was speaking from personal prefrence, really. Didn't really think you'd care about my responce anyways, and it really weasn't meant to be nothing more than just perjecting myself as an example towards his skill, seeing I know shitter things than that pic above. So what that said, if this is true;
>What exactly makes you think I give a flying fuck about what you think of my critique.
Than disregard my statement and have a good day.
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>>2422925
What are you trying to achieve? Learn how to draw or just make this picture work with the help of other people? What's the point?
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>>2422999
Actually I am ashamed to admit it, but the latter.
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>>2422990
The only difference between me and that other anon is that I am harsh and don't give you a hugbox. Seriously, your skills are really low. Helping you fix this pic won't help you become a better artist. What that other anon is doing is only spoonfedding. Stop being lazy and do what I told you. You need some basic fundamental knowledge, and you won't receive it by drawing shitty porn. Now go cry me a river.
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>>2423003
Then I suggest you go to a board that accepts porn requests and try your luck there. You can try here too, but I doubt you'll be lucky.
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gibe critique please
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>>2423011
Where's the rest of her legs? The girl on the left
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>>2423009
Hmm which boards would you suggest? I'm new to this.
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>>2423005
I'm neither the artist nor the critic. You can be harsh and give constructive criticism instead of just saying that it's bad. Harsh and constructive criticism are not too separate things, they can be combined just fine. What you did was only harsh, and nothing constructive.

>Helping you fix this pic won't help you become a better artist
That's true, but it might be a mistake the artists makes every time. It could be good to point that out so the artist can focus a bit more on that area when practicing.

>You need some basic fundamental knowledge, and you won't receive it by drawing shitty porn.
Art is fun and I hope you're not someone that only practices. It's also about trying to make finished pieces to see where you're art. The subject matter can be pornographic, nothing wrong with that.

Why are you so bitter, anon. It only makes you look like an asshole and I'm sure you're an okay guy if I knew you.
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>>2423024
Only constructive criticism, no insults. Therefore calling somebody a 'baby-loving pedo autist' is against the rules
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>>2423034
Bewarb
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>>2423011
>>2423017
Other anon but I think her right leg should be improved to have her calf toward close towards us than how it is, looks like her leg goes back and is broken. Her left leg is just being obscured by the front woman.
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>>2423036
>toward close
Geh, I meant "come closer"
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>>2422222
Nice quints
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>>2422976
someone please?
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>>2423071
I sadly can't help here but I must ask, if you're the artist that did that drawing (assuming here), why don't you have it saved on your computer or something?
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Posting here for any future advice.
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>>2420603
>mods descent to explain the Malaysian autist raging about deleted post the most basic rules of 4chan
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>>2423141
did you got raped into incoherence because i cant understand a single thing you just said
gotta take that cactus out from your ass and your mom's ass before you post, lil sperg.
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>>2420603
Now ban futa and ntr shit.
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>>2423243
>ban everything I don't like!
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>>2420603
fail
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>>2422976
>>2423071
What futa vivian are you talking about?
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>>2423287
Kyle posted an unfinished futa Vivian in one of the deleted threads. I would have saved it if I had known
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>>2423294
Oh I didn't see it. Sorry anon.
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>>2422976
>nothing in the archive
SOMEONE PLS REPOST
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>>2423309
You know he's been coming around pretty often lately, he'll probably repost it himself if you just hold on a while.
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>>2423294
i got it
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>>2423129
so you didn't listen to anyone's advice regarding his pants? Why are you even here if you aren't going to listen to valid critiques?
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>>2423393
time to fap
thanks
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>>2423399
I decided I'd apply that knowledge to future projects related for it since this picture wouldn't have worked out the way I intended since I wanted it known that "his dick is pushing through his underwear or so", hence the decision to make his shorts more define and have the "tenting" effect make more sense through the briefs coming out of the pants. I know it's probably not too realistic, but for this, that's not what I wanted. I do appreciate the advice though, despite my decision.
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>>2423431
thanks for the response, good luck.
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Any remarks at this stage?
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>>2423592
yunno this isn't half bad. The biggest issue here is the fact her feet are weird tentacles, it's kind of uncanny
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>>2423592
good job on the quadruple appendage hide
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>>2423592
Come on Firez quit hiding those hands
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>>2423631
kek I was just about to ask if that was firez too
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>>2423631
>>2423797
I suppose my shit is really that recognizable.

>>2423612
>>2423615
Thanks, I honestly didn't hide them on purpose I felt that putting the hands in that position made sense for the posture. As for the legs, I wanted to do something different I didn't expect that it came off as jarring.
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Ended up finishing pretty fast, thanks for the feedback.
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>>2423918
the brush and sketching color was a dead giveaway.
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Messing with things.
Reposted because I wanted to add a small detail.
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>>2424216
The bulge from the penis head is far too big inside her mouth.

The top line for it looks more like the outline of her check up against her eye socket.

The bottom line is way too close to the jaw line, she would literally have to have no teeth and have a jaw bone as thin as chop sticks for that to work.

I quite like the hair. May I suggest connecting that dangling piece of hair near the ear so that it looks like a loop of hair hanging down from near the side of the eye?
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>>2423918
>>I felt that putting the hands in that position made sense for the posture

Please go into detail about this, and explain why you think it makes sense.

With the lean her back would be on, combined with things going on around the lower body and to the sides of her body, I most definitely think at least one hand would be rested somewhere, if not both.

Common man, be more creative than that. Make her resting one hand, while grasping something with the other, or something along those lines.

It just leaves the viewer with much less interesting things to look at. I have literally no idea what her hands are doing, or whether or not she even has hands at all.

I can't make any sense out of it personally, as I'm only seeing it as a very uncreative, bland pose.
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>>2423393
Coloring on the face is a bit weird. Looks like she's stoned / in pain / been crying.
Probably just needs some lighter colors, and some different hues for the shading around the eyes.
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>>2424242
The lines on her cheek weren't really supposed to look like the outline of the dick but I see now they do. That top line was supposed to be her cheek pressing against the eye socket but now that you point all that out, it shouldn't be there because her mouth and cheeks should be stretching downward. Connecting the hair is a good idea, I meant to do more detailing in that area anyway but I forgot. Thanks anon, I might mess with this more and if not I'll just make sure to watch out for that kind of definition detail in other drawings.
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>>2424269
Fixed the thumbnail with some paint bucket. It looked silly.
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>>2423972
>those shapes
it looks like you are in there
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I will never finish this
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>>2424273
...is that good?
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>>2424310
i won't give u critiques until you set up ur blog and share it with us faggot. i remember you from the other thread. pls gibe.
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>>2424310
This is some quality shit. And I agree with you on not finishing these. They are good, but the poses are like something for concepts instead of appealing porn images with a story background. This might be good stuff for character sheets, but not for action porn shots.
If you want to be really appealing push the povs and perspective much much more.

>>2424318
Go be a horny brainless idiot somewhere else. /aco/ is the place you seek.
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face is wonk as fonk, i'll do more when i think of something better looking
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>>2424310
What software do you use and where did you learn to render skin like this?
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>>2424347
Are you the artist that draws that dick girl kangaroo?
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>>2424329
thanks, this is actually really helpful. I couldn't quite put my finger on why my pictures never seemed very porn-like, but now that you mention it the perspective is definitely the culprit. I need to start messing with where the "camera" would be located, and fiddling with the horizon line more

>>2424318
sorry I'm on it

>>2424352
I use cloudalpaca because krita has issues on my computer. I probably got my rendering from modeseven or doxy/onta (I know) back when I used to like that sort of stuff
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>>2424347
I simply love your body stylization. Very cartoony, but still hot. Keep it up that way. Your art is very appealing.
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>>2424358
no but now you've got me curious, can you link me to their work?

>>2424363
danke~

>>2424361
how do you get those nice soft, smooth gradiations of color, do you just use a giant soft round and then cut away the excess? i've been looking for a quick simple way to add a slight amount of variation/depth to my flats/cel-shaded colors, y'know? add just a bit more form to my work.
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>>2424347
Damn I really love the body style here.
>>2424361
I also really love this. Very cute.

Do you guys have blogs I can follow?
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>>2424371
I just figured it out myself. I used to just use a really big airbrush at around 20% opacity and erase the excess like you mentioned, but theres a blur tool you can use to soften hard edges as well
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>>2424371
https://static1.e621.net/data/0f/97/0f97295e131de8e56f3ed33e3cb79cda.jpg
https://static1.e621.net/data/05/ed/05edbcc20faa649c2874f872edb8987c.jpg

Since its furry and I can't post images...
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>>2424392
Haha, oh god, like this is not the same as posting a fucking image.
All my keks and rip anon.
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I want to start drawing furry, vore, gore, TF, watersports, shota/loli, micro, and muscly snake men just because normal porn is getting stale for me.

I just want to be a degenerate, no hard feelings.
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>>2424404
>the only way I could cum is if I get hit by a bus
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>>2424404
good for you.
I guess you can add attentionwhoring to your kinks too.
now please gtfo.
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>>2424408
>implying anyone can jerk off to their own art.
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>>2424207
Hence why I consider stupid the point of some jerks who get triggered while looking at my trip, particularly at this point

>>2424247
I don't think it would need a deep explanation, basically she is balancing in a tentacle that is behind her so she is gripping it firmly behind her back.

Anyway don't get me wrong I appreciate your counter point particularly on putting more interesting points to see, that's why I made this revision, unfortunately it changes the composition.

Also I will have to insist with the weird leg-tentacles, I think covering them could make them more appealing and if not I will find a way to make them so.

I hope I don't get into trouble for posting this in my blog, so far I have a considerable amount of nudes but nothing suggestive
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>>2424773
Firez mijo
That body is so fucked up.
CONSTRUCT the body,
keep perspective in mind, where is the horizon line? Are we looking up or down?
Also hairy armpits
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wot to fix
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>>2420603
Not even mad, the porn threads have always been the worst. Still, I don't understand what made you decide that now was a good time to enforce it. Maybe these threads will improve?
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>>2424808
The guy looks like a mannequin
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>>2424404
Consider suicide
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>>2424808

Decent proportions and perspective, might want to look up reference for the foreshortened knee. The top and outside part of the knee/thigh is quite flat in that position ( if the thigh is a cylinder the knee is a box) so ease up with the lines indicating a plane break because it makes her appear to knee pads.
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>>2424808
blog plz
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>>2424875
alright thanks.
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>>2424373
Shut the fuck up whore. No one cares about your art, without your boyfriend you're nothing
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>>2424894
fuck you shes perfect.
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Haven't ever really gone beyond a sketch phase before, opinions?
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>>2424914
looks like you refed doxy
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>>2424896
Oh look a fanboy. Fuck off, she's mediocre at best and does does no real commissions other than lazy commissions and sketches.

No one knew about her before she dated Brekk.
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>>2424918
I didn't ref him, but he is the person i'm studying from. I'm really just trying to build a foundation so that I can then do my own thing
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>>2424914
>>2424921
If there's one thing I can say for sure, fix his/her right arm, it doesn't look like it's connected to the body at all, honestly.
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>>2424896
>anyone
>perfect
Good one.
>Keppok the racist artist with legit autism
>perfect
HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA
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>>2424894
I don't know who she is but her art seems good. Better than a lot of porn I've seen in these threads.
What's with the hate?
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>>2424931
Aight, thanks dad
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>>2424935
Not him but honestly she's mediocre. No real style of her own, same face, same body in all her images. She never gets her own commissions unless Brekkist gives her work.
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>>2424808
Make him look at her bewbs, and make her look at the ceiling in pleasure.
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>>2424931
Other than that, anything else? I understand the specifics I need to develop in terms of anatomy - am I on the right track? To accomplish something along the lines of what doxy, and the others like him have.
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>>2424950
will make him do that. the girl prob not.
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one well placed karate chop is all it takes to kill her.
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