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Here is a thing to study lil niggers.
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>>2375747
isnt this what mikufag drew a couple of years ago
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>>2375749
Don't worry, I'm working on mine jamjam.
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>>2375747
Rushed this.
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>>2375786
apply yourself.
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>>2375786
arm is too big
boobs too small

C-
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>>2375786
kinda shit, but could fap to

7/10
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>>2375854
>>2375860
thx guise.

>>2375794
I will, don't worry bby.
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I heard never to trust this place for critique, but please give me worthwhile critique because I really need to see what the fuck im not understanding.
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>>2376074
The eyes are too big. Also, the image is sideways.
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She still has her skin on... Why does she still have her skin on?
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>>2376153
Go away Mr. Skellington.
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>>2376124
whoops
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>>2376224
The legs are not proportional to the body
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>>2375747
I didn't copy the pose exactly. I'll post the ref in a bit.
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>>2376412
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>>2375747
Blegh, my scanner is shit and my pencil is too light.
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>>2376412
i like dat face
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>>2376436
Thanks, boy.
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>>2376224
Symbol drawing faces
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what are feet
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>>2376525
dont hurt me, dont hurt me, no more
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>>2376525
lol you draw the feet like i do , fuck feet
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>>2376417
>scanner
don't you have a phone? take a picture, email it to yourself, post it. scanning takes for fuvking ever
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>>2375747
Bump.
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>>2376606
well done
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>>2376606
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Here's another reference
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p. difficult poses. Lost patience at the bottom one.
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>>2378228
>rip zyzz
fuckin kek'd
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>>2378170
bump
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>>2380676
noice
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>>2380676

one of the few people on this board with taste. good job.
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uugh
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>>2380731
I don't think you're using that word correctly
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I'll throw my hat in the ring.
I still symbol draw faces so I focused on the body
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These studies really defy my traditional way of breaking up the body into parts. Anybody got tips?
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>>2380741
are you the mspaint guy who draws all the creepy pictures?
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>>2382005
never mind he already posted in here
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>>2380793
Why didnt you measure, Ollie, you only had to measure.

Why are the proportions so off, Ollioe, they dont look like that in the photograph.

Ollie, why did you symbol-draw the hand, why, Ollie?

Why didnt you read the sticky, Ollie?!
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>>2380676
is that you Catbib?
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>>2375747
Is there a set for this girl?
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>>2382133
http://www.quickposes.com/library/view/10
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>>2382172
Thank you, what a goddess.

How do you view the full resolution images? Do you need to sign up? It says press F to toggle resolution but that doesn't do anything.
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>>2375747
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>>2375747
Hey where did you get the high res images for this set?
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>>2382248
That's originally from mjranum's stock photos on deviantart.
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Sure some of you can guess where this is from.
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>>2382299
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>>2375747
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Photoshop
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>>2378041
Rip david
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>>2376074
In the OP she's laying down and drew her standing up so idk wtf you're doing kid
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>>2384459
Kek
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>>2383797
Looks awesome.
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>>2382133
Second day of owning pencils what do I need to work on
>what are hands
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>>2376414
I need to practise values
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>>2384989
pretty good man and made me realize i need to work on my values
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>>2384989
>>2385026
Yeah seems to me like values are everything. Even if you don't have details, if you have good values then the viewers brain will fill in the rest.
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>>2384989
paint with a rough brush , i dare you
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>>2376573
>fuck feet
my thoughts exactly
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>>2375747
I'm not very good at this
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>>2385229
Head is 1/4 of her body
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>>2385229

lol when you drew that didn't you see that the sizes are all wrong? If you couldn't see that you might have a serious problem.
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>>2385152
Too much oil.
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>>2385250
She has cute feet sorry if I butchered
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Time Limits and Feet are killer.
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>>2385229
Dk mode on
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>>2385229
drew intentionally wrong. kek.
pretty obvious you're actually better
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20 min quicky with the lasso, fist time attemtin a drawin with the lass its quite nice ,also its memory study i looked up1 min and done it , sorry for the aproximacy. dont shout at me ragin fukers
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About 30 mins. i know my lines are shit...still getting used to tablet.
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>>2385140
tried it, failed hard
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>>2385709
I'm the guy who asked u to paint like that . I like it , it has potential. I like more rough sketches and paintings . I think the problem is that you didn't get used to the brush. Can you draw me objects with this brush ? any kind of objects ? Just studies but with the same brush
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Welp. I'm extremely drunk beginner but I tried
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>>2385709
I actually love this. Nice work
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Extremely drunk beginner but I tried
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>>2380676

Very nice. Can you break down your process? I can never really get my things to have this blocked in, chunky look when doing digital.
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>>2385709
what are you using to do these drawings? Tablet and software wise?
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>>2385721
Thank you, I can hardly say that I ever used any rough brush in my life, so you are right I am not used to it at all.

I did a still life, but I am a bit tired now, so I couldn't render it at all. Do you have any insight? Thank you in advance for all your help.

>>2385732
Thank you
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>>2385751
Unify your shapes.
I'd advice any beginning artist to avoid custom/textured brushes because they add variation to your brush strokes and just makes it harder for someone starting out to keep their shapes unified and solid
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>>2380720
>>2380731
thank you
>>2382041
i'm not, but I feel flattered

>>2385740
I had to consider a lot of stuff when doing each stroke (with practice it becomes intuitive and faster). In this case I focused more into overall values (squinting helps for this) and edges, which I exagerated and/or synthesized to convey volume.

it's way more complex than that of course (painting is a constant chain of problem solving), but I think the important aspects you should have in mind to get this result are: a sense of form (values and edges) and being aware of the tools you are using (the outcome of each brushstroke in this case).

I used sai and a square brush only, because I like the blending settings, although getting cleanly sharp edges is a hassle.

Those exercises that involve brush economy (paint this in x strokes or less) may help you imo desu senpai
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>>2382133
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r8 please
I was drawing a woman, but suddenly, when I finished the face, I realised I was drawing a hot Gollum. I rushed it and know it looks like shit (mainly the face and couch). Although I am a very beginner and still studying the sticky, any tips are appreciated.
>tried to focus more on proportions and negative space, less details
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>>2375747
How am I doing in the construction process?
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>>2375747

Second day using tablet
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>>2375747
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I'm trying to learn form, how am I doing?

Also I have decent line confidence on paper but find myself chicken scratching on my tablet and I don't know why.
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>>2385250
I think this is my friend
like
90% sure
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>>2378228
top fucking kek at >Rip zyzz
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>>2382133
Id do terrible things to her
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>>2384925
Line weighting? try to be lighter and more 'fluid' if you know what I mean. Yours are very hard and scratchy
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>>2385229
I respect your attempt!
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>>2382133
I did her pic a long time ago, here was my attempt, wanted to finisj hbut never bothered
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got to try out some new brushes
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>>2375747
my attemp at that reference
also harsh critics are very welcome!
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>>2391857
do more bloc construction for the feet and hands it will help you
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>>2375747
Bumping.

Feel free to add more references.
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>>2375747
b-bump?
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>>2376370
oh jesus those little baby legs
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>>2380676

blog?
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Did this with a wolff's carbon on smooth newsprint.
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>>2375747
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>>2380793
LOOMIS

>>2376525
Something you need to work on more

>>2378228
Noice

>>2380676
Noice

>>2382133
Shes fine

>>2382216
No... Just no. Go to the Sticky and rethink your life

>>2383797
Shading is nice but it would be a lot niver if the basic drawing didn't look as cruddy

>>2384001
Somethings off, it's not the face that looks good

>>2384989
WEW

>>2390160
Midriff and breasts look almost real if i stand back and squint nice work!

>>2391857
Think more block-y for your shading I can tell you were kinda lost that's why it looks wishy washy

>>2402021
Practice more gestures, take more time constructing your basic outline. Measure and all that good stuff. also that face is creepy as shit

>>2402426
Noice and the feet have more detail thats like opposite of most d/ic/ks I'd like to see you're shading skills
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my lazy attempt
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>>2376074
Bottom half looks too small, weird shadowing on her right hip makes it look like she is broken instead of just twisted.
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>>2375747
1 hour. I skipped leg day.
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I'm not very good yet.
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>>2380676
digital painting over original/10. fuck you all for falling for it.
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>>2375747
One day I won't have to try
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>>2403174
face is waaaaay off
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I'm lazy
Really lazy
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>>2402758
nose bro? or c++?
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>>2403776
I really like it.
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>>2404072
Wat
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>>2403174
50 minutes on the face and 10 minutes on the rest?
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>>2404057
Hips aretoo big fetish sama :^}
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>>2404142
i didn't notice that because i was too focus on goddamn hip anyway thanks
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>>2385250
sauce on this qt?
I REALY NEED IT
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>>2406925

Some very nice rendering but the skin looks dead, personally i'd love a little more pop to your skintones, don't be afraid to add some saturation here and there
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>>2406925
I can fap to this
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>>2376414
Half assed some parts, also I kinda wanted to mix in simple abstract shapes, but failed to find a balance, it was fun to experiment.
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>>2409051

This is true
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>>2406925
>>2406925
This is a huge issue in most studies posted here.

I can't fathom why people don't simultaneously work on the background along with the figure - even if just a little bit. The background plays a critical role in defining a figure. It shows too.

To work directly on a white canvas is dead give-away of being a naive amateur.

>>2409054
Sorry for the weird post - there was a weird sentence that didn't make sense.
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>>2375747
It's been years since I've drawn anything. Trying to get back into it though.

Also, I spent way too long on this.
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>>2409041
very good
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>>2409059
i don't usually do this, but why don't you post your work so that all the 'naive amateurs' can learn from it?

i mean, you're right about working on the background, but you sound like a giant, pompous dick. calling someone a 'naive amateur' doesn't exactly shatter any illusions for most of the people here, like you clearly thought it would.
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>>2409541
>post your work

No need - >>2409041 is a great example of why how a background helps implie space and life to the figure.

>you sound like a giant, pompous dick

How giant? 8=====D? 8=============D?
Bigger?
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>>2409694
so you either don't draw, or you're terrible yourself. got it, thanks.
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>>2409822

>this movie sucks
>"oh yeah? post your own movie!!!!!"
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>>2375747
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>>2409870
goddamn that head
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>>2403587
This looks like something you'd find on Salad Finger's wall
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>>2409870
everything but the head is spot on, like you gave her a beard
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>>2375747
Welp this is pretty terrible. I really need to do more studies.
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>>2409847
post your work.
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>>2410585
You are putting solid lines where there are no contours and stamping out symbolic eyes and lips where there are just regions of shadow.
The pose of the model is the most important part, if you want to draw a face use a different portrait
You have the tools for shading, just use those to define areas of light and dark instead of cartoonish lines.
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>>2387728
Keep in mind that the face is a three dimensional. You can think of it as a plane.
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>>2410393
Observe more.
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Complete newbie here.
I think it went better than expected.

Critique much appreciated.
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>>2410953
I tried to smudge it and clean it up a little.
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>>2407036
HAHA
HOLY SHIT
That's my friend, actually. She used to camwhore on /soc/ in the feet threads I think.
Her feet are fucking TOP tier
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literally none of these are studies save for the digi-painted ones with the obfuscated face. You fuckers are drawing shitty caricatures not studies. Try again, pic related.
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>>2415088
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>>2415088
I don't think there's really any 100% correct way to do a study, so long as the artist is learning what they want to learn from it.
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>>2409541
lmfao, you don't need to be good at drawing to tell that something is off or looks bad, or even lifeless lmao.
Do critics of video games have to have made a video game to determine that it's a bad video game?
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>>2415486
My sides
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>>2375747
Crit me please.
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>>2415486
Could someone please explain to me what the fuck is going on here
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>>2417938
loomis/10
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