Post em now.
Rules:
-Commenting is OK but do not expect much from an hour's work.
-Posting WIP's, studies, "doodles", and random sketches is highly encouraged.
-The art must be fresh. Like you just drew it in the past hour.
-Go fast
>>2361211
>>2361211
> Go fast
>>2361270
Verily.
>>2361432
It looked à bit too plain, also this drawing "tool" is extremely rudimentary,
>>2361563
Would u an squid girl Firez?
So this is who makes all those squid sister lobby art. I'm just going to make mine say /ic/.
>>2361211
My redraw of someone girl....but with boobs
WIP, something seems wrong but I'll go back and fix it eventually
>>2361571
You won't? Callie is best girl tier.
>>2361582
I saw plenty of scribbles in the plaza, miiverse community has even more, It's a shame you can't repost between these two places though.
>>2361683
Nice forms
>>2361830
I know /ic/ loves to shout "draw from imagination" but the thing is that you have to start somewhere, I would suggest doing some quick studies of that same pose and then try doing your own.
>>2361571
>>2362080
Plebs. Ika is best squid.
played around with the shapes like anon said in style thread
but this is the only variant I was able to think of that was appealing
anyway off to studying
CC welcome
>>2362099
just noticed this was way too big. here's a resized version
I tried to draw Miles Davis.
I made a terrible mistake.
A dude
yowza
>>2362633
im not trying to shitpost , do you have a tumblr? i like your work.
>>2362819
ironic shitposting is still shitposting.
First ever real 'worth anything' attempt using my phone,
I like low lighting
I was trying then I realize it was too much for me to fix her
>>2362823
>ic now believes wanting to see more of an artists blog is now shitposting
Seriously, do you have a tumblr?
Can't decide if ears up or down
>>2362853
With that expression i'd say up. Or one up and one down.
>>2362853
Im not quite sure, but i think that the position of the butt is wrong.
Like, You have this strong gesture that follows the spine but then the butt just kinda says "fuck you im doing im own thing" and then the rest of the bottom half seems disconnected from the upper body
TL;DR The lower body seems disconnected from the upper body, and the upper body seems like more of an after thought.
working in this but dont know, i feel something wrong.
inb4: you are drawing furryshit, thats the wrong thing.
trying to do some fanart while studying some foreshortening and angles, would be nice if I get some redlines because I feel somethings wrong
Tried a different posistion for the legs
Can't say I'm happy with it though
>>2362911
she is looking at nothing
>>2362834
wtf is this
>>2361211
hey firez have you considered the last artist standing challenge?
>>2363064
>>2361683
reminds me of Oney
wip, about to do the line art but any constructive crits would be helpful and appreciated.
lips are a weakpoint for md which is why theyre the focus of this along with hair and skin coloring hence why im focusing on those three here
Done from imagination, hopefully my phone doesn't flip this. Any critique?
>>2363051
explain pls
>>2362991
These proportions look really weird on the character. If you're worried about being a furry or something maybe you shouldn't draw porn of cartoon rabbits.
Did this as a request on a /co/ board, critique?
This was my first time doing female anatomy.
>>2363467
bunny girl is looking right over the other girls head. tilt eyes down.
>>2363064
Yeah but I noticed it too late, also having yet another site to upload would be a bit troublesome for me :/
Paris and Helen composition sketch for a contest, old guy is calchass.
>>2363671
Kek, I want to see this finished at any cost.
>>2363483
It's not that I'm worried about it, I'm just not a furry so I have no idea what the fetish is about.
Should I draw her exactly like she's in the movie, with simplified shapes and all?
.
>>2363671
make squidward more light blue
>>2363726
Ninja or Berserk?
Just did this in about 30 mins, any tips or advice would be appreciated
H-here I go.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=uiqoY9nlejE
do we care about transitional phases, or just the actions of passing without consequence?
>>2363991
how about learn to draw.
Finally finished the background. First time I free-handed spray paint. I will stencil out the foreground image this week, mostly over the weekend.
>>2361211
how is firez still so bad after all of these years
>>2361211
here's one of my girlfriend
>be gentle please i'm just a boy
>>2363900
30 mins is way too much for this fham, practice drawing shapes, recognizing shapes, negative spaces to break down and translate a photo faster.
Got bored of doing Loomis all day. Really liked the feel/art of Bubuki Buranki and did a "study" from a screenshot.
>>2364200
Forgot to attach. Whoops.
Been quite rusty lately so just got a new sketchbook, really nice to use graphite and charcoal again, enjoyed doing this one even if its not as good as I would like.
>>2364081
>here's one of my girlfriend
>girlfriend
>girl
Son... I have some bad news for you.
>>2364081
>be gentle please I'm just a boy
That's probably what your "girl" friend says when your fucking her up the ass right?
>>2364333
he looks like a boy, where is your sexism, go back to tumblr.
>>2364081
That's a guy
>>2364081
lines are too thick, remember that in real life most of them don't even exist, like the ones in the lips
How can I show you something when all I drawn was fucking warm up lines circles, arcs and ellipses.
just inking this now, finished Dropsy today and it inspired me i think
>>2364333
if you're not going to contribute and just shitpost I suggest you post it on tumblr nobody gives a fuck(or should five a fuck) about anything as trivial as sexism.
>>2361211
Allah Akbar
Working on this as practice to familiarize myself with painting in Photoshop.
>>2361211
>>2365651
Sexy
>>2365736
st least make the background gray or we cant read the hair. those hands are huge btw.
>>2365371
another
lil self portrait
>>2365807
Have you tried dynamic poses/angles?
>>2365821
I'm in the process, coming out of a very long hiatus. ( 2 years ) without using a single tool
just did this thing
>>2365839
That's fucking spooky anon.
>>2365839
I'll end up checking back tomorrow, my architecture and backgrounding in general need helping out so tell me whats wrong.
last thing for the day
I'll post this if anyone gives two shits to: patreon.com/therealbenjikins
fun sketch. feedback appreciated.
>>2365921
did you even really try on this?
>>2365931
lol nah you can pretty much see that I stopped giving two shits halfway through.
I just wanted to get the basic shit down and after I get some criticism I'll go over the blue with black correcting as I go.
quality is low itt. get gut anons.
>>2366100
Post something
>>2366100
make it better then
I made some rey fanart for a weekly challenge.
I need help, it doesnt convince me.
Any pointers? about painting?
>>2366482
I think it needs more contrast, I would also simplify the nose
>>2366484
its white n gold, anon
>>2366484
pretty sure it's to correct mistakes after the preliminary sketch anon is doing.
Good idea in digital.
Hello friends. I'm trying new methods for coloring skin-- which involves more color use and so far I'm REALLY liking the results. Anyway, please let me know what I'm doing incorrectly for this thing so far.
Her neck bugs me but I'm not certain why.
>>2366590
Is she wearing stockings? Her legs look kinda metallic bruh
>>2365930
Looks nice anon
>>2366632
That was the intent but the fact that it isn't reading that way means I still fucked up. Maybe more flesh tones will help
Thanks, senpai
>>2365930
Cute, but you need some overlaps, Is it a huge creature? Does it just happen to be closer to the viewer?
I'm still learning
>>2361211
Only got around 85% of the book to go!
>>2366590
This is good. Do you have a place where I can see more of your work?
Could somebody help me understand what's going on with the leg muscles? I can see other contours in the photo, but I couldn't quite figure out how they form.
Drew both of them when I was in my classes, just got back from one of them so it counts. David Bowie was from last week, Freddie was today.
Im stuck :<
>>2366701
I have a tumblr where I post my art but I'm not confident enough in my abilities to actively share it just yet.
>>2361211
Part of Danny DeVito's face.
>>2361211
Just some doodles. No references. Killing time. Just working on some fundamentals but lazily
>>2367576
Keep going, bro. You're doing alright so far. Just make sure you set a proper lightsource further down the road. Right now the lighting looks vague as shit with the lighting on the beads coming from below while the highlights on her chin and lips would suggest the light is coming from above.
>>2367639
Thanks! :)
yeah im trying to figure out a palette that i like and a light source. Still very rough tho. Complex pieces confuse the shit outta me
A work in progress. Trying to practice getting gud with digital art since I recently got this wacom tablet. Proportions are really off right now and I don't feel like fixing them today so I'm probably gonna call it a night.
Im a actually drawing this right now.
Concept for a character for some story i want to do, they're a doll possibly gonna be semi organic and semi artificial.
sketching some faces, dont have any goods idea of what 2 draw today, I cant really understand myself, some times I do really good faces and sometimes they just look so wrong, my dream is making them right everytime
just finished this page working and on a new page now.
>>2367801
blog?
>>2363487
The knees are bending weird (especially for the direction the feet are facing)
The waste and hips are weird. Hips are too wide and far down when comparing to the span of the shoulders.
Her right hand is missing a wrist and the left arm is a noodle
Finally hammered down the front design of this character. Now I need to do a turnaround.
>>2367830
Sry im a complet ghost when it comes to sharing my artwork, I only share it here
>>2367603
I understand that feeling but judging from your work there's no reason to. Oh well. Keep on keeping on, I'll be lurking for more.
First doodles of my new quest to learn how to draw + very first Loomis face there in the distance.
In other words, crap.
>>2361211
>>>2367960
critic
>>2367966
critic please
trying to shit out a still life before the sun rises, working on picking color and values
Sketched some ships while having my coffee.
>>2367950
Digging the designs, also the witch hat should be lower, it looks like it's floating. Guess you wanted to show her face tho.
>>2367966
Pretty decent body proportions here and there, those faces though..they look too elongated. I suggest trying to draw the whole figure, I found it more helpful than just doing areas you might feel you have problems with.
>>2365921
I want to see this finished honestly.
Tried to do a more sketchy render compared to usual and I can't say I'm happy with the result, will need to work more on that to put better looking sketches.
Help pls
>>2368747
I think his skull is a bit fucked up
>>2368751
Which part? Can you be a bit more specific, please?
>>2368747
Cool Piccolo
I'm experimenting with brushes, does anyone know what those dark bands are? they show up in the same places no matter where I start drawing. Are they due to the texture of the brush?
>>2368993
is he crosseyed irl?
>tfw no bara mouse to play arcade games with
![[2016-1-27] Recycled Lunch.png](https://i.imgur.com/JvXeVpE.png "[2016-1-27] Recycled Lunch.png")
Trying out different shading and line styles.
>>2367821
Top right could be interesting.
>>2369266
You could tug each other's joysticks for hours
I always forget to post in these threads, so I'm finally doing it now
>>2369457
>being into dangan ronpa in 2016
Here's a sketch I did a few days ago and I blocked in the colors,
>>2369501
Here's the final version which I did over the past few hours. Wasn't originally going to try to a do a watercolor look but I wanted to give it a shot.
>>2369500
I drew it for a friend, I've actually never dangan'd a single ronpa
>>2369502
Looks really nice anon, certainly looks like traditional media although moreso like watercolor markers to me. How did you manage that look?
>>2369512
I did it in Paint Tool SAI, though you could do it in Photoshop. The two main things are the brush and layers. I use some brush pack I downloaded from DeviantArt that had a watercolor brush, but a basic brush with the Spread shape would work fine. Use that to make sure the edges are random, which gives it the bleed effect you see in watercolors.
For layers, make every color its own layer and don't overlap. Not only does this give you the nice little white bits between colors, it will make sure each color has its own 'edge'. Try to get an overall even tone in your colors, but you want some darker spots and lighter spots so don't worry about making it smooth. If you want to be really good you could try to do a little shading in it but I didn't bother.
In SAI, I used the Fringe effect on every color layer (width: 5, opacity:~40%), in Photoshop it's Filter>Sharpen>Unsharp Mask. This gives the dark edges to all of the colors. If they overlap, you'll miss out on some of these edges.
I then just used a pretty simple dark black-ish brush for the lines, trying to define edges that I didn't do with the color. In the end, I brought it in to Photoshop and overlayed a noise layer (which was to give it a slight texture) and did an overall sharpen filter. That's about it. It was my first time doing it and I did a lot of messing around so I would say to do the same. Just experiment.
>>2369519
Nice, thanks dude. I'll have to try this out sometime.
First time constructing a body in 2-point perspective. Very hard to do gesture atm with this and my lack of knowledge in anatomy is also kinda hindering my constructional method.
self portrait
>>2367944
Turnaround complete.
>>2370554
nice to see you completely ignored what i said.
>>2370566
We could all learn a thing or two from him.
>>2369574
for your first 2 point drawing of a body its alright , obvi could use lot of work on anatomy and he also looks like a giant but at least u got the persective okay.
>>2370572
if everyone would tripfag, there would be less fights, but if no one would trip fag, there would also be less fights.
This is the knowledge i choose to pass on, in the catch-22 format.
did this without reference whats wrong with it
i know the arms are long
>>2367801
Me again
This time painting some shit
>>2370591
fuck forgot
>>2370579
I'm not sure if that's exactly a catch 22. In any case this is what I drew most recently.
>>2361211
I did this stuff today, gonna do more right now.
>>2370595
needs 90 more
>>2370600
keep fighthing the good fight
>>2370593
still want your fucking blog btw
>>2370603
you arent above vertical and horizontal guidelines/plumblines for orrientation of features.
>>2370609
http://lienum.tumblr.com/
Made one for your pleasure
I'll post there just to save art and stuff, hope you like.
>>2370609
Oh yeah, I know all too well, my faces have actually gotten worse since my drawing has slowed down now that school has started up again, I used to do really good faces really quickly.
Anywho, I've decided to do gesture driving for the rest of my sketchbook, since motion hasn't been very good with me EVER.
I just realized that I said my drawings slowed down, yet I still draw maybe 3 pages per day.
>>2370566
Who are you again, and WHY should I listen to you?
>>2367960
don't fucking take pictures like this if you really want a critic, nobody can see it.
just watchin the godfather
>>2370706
this is cool
Annnnd going to bed. @-@
took a tad longer than an hour but it have musta been around that timeframe
>>2362633
Is he wearing two eyepatches?
>>2362392
awesome :)
>>2369574
Quite impressive m80, but the shoulders look tiny
s/w practicing whoooooo
Forthefeels.jpeg
>>2371098
my...girlfriend calls me muffin t-too...
i doodled this in church
>>2364081
You drew a dude
>>2370821
because what i said was correct and you're probably at 20% of my level?
Shes late for human history class
>>2371338
Is being unbearable your job or something? Do you get checks?
>>2371396
Undertale? Looks good.
Wouldn't mind some critique. What should I try next?
> wip
just to relax after reading hampton
>>2371509
not chicken scratching
>>2371509
>What should I try next?
proportions
feedback please
>>2371605
It's cool you did this all in pen. But honestly your forms are all over the place. The rockface is very confusing as to how the rocks are shaped as well as where the light is hitting it. Don't be afraid to go back over it to distinguish the darker areas, and maybe do some extra lines to help define what parts of the rock are shaped like. You only have three values right now, add about two more to make it more dynamic
>>2371636
thanks for the feedback. i was drawing this as the shadow was changing over the rock, so it got a little screwed up for me to do accurately. what would you suggest for other values to make it more dynamic? maybe pure black?
and yea agreed on the rocks. it was too complicated for me. maybe i should have simplified it to make it look better.
>>2371400
Not even that anon, but good luck getting any better with that attitude. He actually made some good points.
>>2371658
I don't mind advice, but I resent the implication that I'm obligated to take it, and if I don't take it, it's an insult to the person who gave it.
Also
>you're probably at 20% of my level?
yeah I'm not interested in stroking his ego.
>>2371682
Just ignore the ego shit and focus on taking the advice instead of jumping to the defensive. You need improvement whether you want to hear that or not. Everyone does including that anon
>>2371705
I didn't jump to the defensive. I ignored him, and he resented that I wasn't giving him the attention he wanted.
Also I always run my work past other artists to get their opinion, but it doesn't mean I always do what they say. To expect that is absurd.
But if I say I did raise her mouth, and didn't like the way it looked, that just makes me look defensive and "muh style" so whatever, I can't win.
Anyway, Nose Bro proved he's blind with that "cringe" thread he started. Anything he says after that is highly suspect.
>>2371605
Composition sucks. Feels empty. But you already know that
>>2371652
Well Id suggest throwing down some deep backs in the areas that are truly dark. The cave can be darker, so it has more contrast to the well lit rocks on top. For right now I'd put in an imaginary light source depending on what works best for your piece so its a little easier to find out your forms and where the shadows will fall. Plus a little crosshatching in some areas could help it pop out.
>>2371990
Resize, rotate and learn to draw hands.
first digital art, didn't use reference, don't know how to feel about it ¯\_(ツ)_/¯
Learning to draw clothes, any tips would be appreciated
>>2372051
Bad is the answer. It's shit. Now do another one.
>>2372053
yes boss
but can you tell me what's wrong with it?
>>2372051
Ears are shit, I'm assuming they're not finished. Fix them and make her hair come from a line on her head, not in weird waves like that. Widow's peak is okay but those waves look wrong. The rendering isn't total shit; good job limiting use of soft brushes.
>>2372052
Thumbnail looks good
You should be more subtle with your values, don't stab the paper with your pencil, think more about shapes and shades than lines
>>2372010
Dope, will do
>>2372064
thanks for the tip. i try not to stab my paper but sometimes i get in a zone and just press done pretty hard. Slowly getting out of that habit tho.
>>2372010
How's this?
Small chunk of a large drawing.
>>2371990
>>2372028
>>2371396
>>2371180
needs 90 more
>>2371742
i guess ill take the time out of my day to move your features around and show you why youre wrong.
>>2372110
Watch out for hand to arm transition.
Working on a sketch but cant decide on which of these two poses to go with, any advice? also are there any obvious anatomy errors i have missed?
>>2372115
This is pretty narcissistic, are you Kr0n? Oh no wait, he has appreciation for other people's art. Did you know there's such a thing as character design? You changing the proportions of the face here didn't do anything except make the character look generic. The other one had hints of an ethnicity other than white, and her tall head would look good on a tall skinny body, whereas yours would go on a child's body. You didn't objectively improve anything you just made it a different character that appeals to you. There are things that could make OP's a more solid drawing, but I could redraw the girl using the original design and proportions while fixing that stuff without making it look like an entirely different person. If that's all you have to offer, you really have no place getting mad they ignored you.
>>2372212
couple things: post your work
Standard model is better to learn
Yes i objectively made it better because her eyes are a literal gore
hes not making choices, hes being bad and accidentally emulating ethnic people. might as well tell em off for not fixing the symbol drawn jewelry, removing the accidental downward tilt and not fixing the shitty mouth, eyebrow,hair, anatomy.
>>2372203
Personally I would go with the first one. Has more stability. Also try to bring some dynamic to her right arm. It looks a bit stiff.
Random sketch and kind of perpective study.
>>2372218
I'll take "What is Narcissistic personality disorder?" for $600
>>2372224
lack of a response as a response, even if i was a pure unadulterated narcissist that wouldnt de-validate anything.
>>2372218
He might be stumbling onto a different look than he intended but you can't prove that. I'm not saying his drawing is without flaws but it's not wrong just because it doesn't look like a little white girl. Even if he means for her to look white, she's clearly not meant to look like a child. I don't see how you can honestly believe you actually corrected anything here, it's a completely subjective surface change that adds nothing. That other post was someone else marveling at your ego.
>>2372228
>lift her mouth, reduce eye size, add eyelids
are you saying any of these 3 mods were wrong?
I think its great that you chose a picture which more closely resembles mines than his to prove a point.
>>2372231
I'm saying the mods were pointless because it wasn't "wrong" in the first place and modding them didn't make it any more right it just made it look like a different person. If you wanted to do an actual correction, you could have pointed out some of the ways they could have added form to the face or told them the eyes are misaligned. But the proportions weren't necessarily wrong, they just didn't look like the face you thought they should look like. The model you posted here also looks nothing at all like your supposed correction. It's also not a valid critique to tell someone they can't go for a stylized look with their character and give them big eyes if they want to. Yes there is a way to do big eyes and make them look right. Pulling it back towards a "standard" realistic face and shaving about 10 years off of them isn't a correction it's just you superimposing your preference on someone to feed your already vastly overblown ego.
>>2372227
Im not the guy who first called you a narcissist, I just chimed in with the pic in agreement. It true that being a pure unadulterated narcissist wouldn't de-validate anything, and there are indeed flaws with the poster's artwork. However, from the way you about stating these, it is clear that you not only consider yourself above him (not a problem if you actually are) but that you also have contempt for those you see not as skilled as you. This mix of anger and disgust at those that don't measure up to your standards, especially in trivial matters, is classic to the narcissist. As is self justification when it is you that is not measuring up.
Did you have a mismatched parent child relationship? Were your parents either emotionally neglectful and critical, forcing you to develop this behavior as a defense? or alternatively were the excessively pampering ans sheltering of you, turning you into a spoiled little shit?
>>2372238
the photo was to mention the slight distortion in your picture.
ill have to give up arguing with you, because we have reached a point at which undoing a false claims takes vastly more time than actually saying said false claim. youre giving the guy an overwhelming benefit of the doubt and im not.The supposed youth you brought up his just due to me saving strokes/times. But whatever, his style is unique so ill make sure to bother him every post since itll be easy to spot.
>>2372242
neither, but im glad we have some makeshift psychologist to take care of me when i go ballistic.
im only being mean because of the response. he gave me when i told him he didnt care for others opinions. If that is the case, no point in posting really.
>>2372246
I'm not giving him any credit because we can't know for sure what he envisioned the character to look like and how much of what he drew was intentional or a mistake. I've said repeatedly there is much that could have been done to improve it as a drawing, and even as a design. What you did was neither. You didn't even align the eyes for fuck's sake, the one correction you could have made if you were going to bother. If you're going to try to help people, that's one thing. If you're going to be a baby and whine at people when they decide to think for themselves, then you be prepared to get called out if you were spewing bs.
>>2372251
the eyes arent even mis aligned, theyre miss-shaped if anything and i didnt redraw the features.
>>2372257
So what, you didn't help. And even if you did make an improvement and they don't listen to you, so what? It's advice, not an order. You made one passing comment about them ignoring you, fine. Maybe they just missed your post before and they're glad you pointed it out. You spend ten minutes arguing with them for not listening to you and lauding your "superior skill", you're being an asshole. You never pull this on FiRez and he's the king of ignoring people's advice and drawing bug eyed bitches with weird proportions. If you can let it go when he doesn't take your advice you can be a big boy about it when someone else does the same.
>>2372262
what the fuck do you mean, i help firez, he tries and 99% of the time its at least a bit better, i help this guy, he says WHO ARE YOU TO GIVE ME HELP AND WHY SHOULD I LISTEN RAAAAAAAAA
thats the reason im willing to invest time in arguing.
>>2372266
Arguing with someone who doesn't want your advice isn't an investment. And don't try to start some spiel about how you just want to help when you say something like you're probably at 20% of my level. If you want to help, try a couple of times. If they make it clear they don't agree with your advice after that let it go. Otherwise you're not giving advice, you're not interested in their growth or helping them, you're just trying to make your dig look big. Now go draw more hands, I have work to do.
I guees it's the second time i try something with scenery
>>2372238
"muh style": the post
Oh my god, what have I done? I am so sorry for derailing this thread, everyone. I'll try twice as hard to ignore Nose Bro next time.
>But whatever, his style is unique so ill make sure to bother him every post since itll be easy to spot.
You know Nosey, a self-aware person would realize it's THIS kind of behavior that garners a negative reaction from people.
Work in progress.
>>2372305
It should be no secret this persona is a polarizing figure.
>>2372343
I swear to god I'm going to hit my iPhone with a hammer
>>2372306
Are you the same guy who did rock formations in other thread? I really dig your pen work.
>>2372345
Not me I'm afraid. I haven't posted very much in /ic/. Just dipping my toes in the water again.
Work in progress-ish...still want to continue the background and maybe add some tones.
I just started drawing again. Making my own characters is my favourite.
>>2362702
back to tumblr
>>2363671
please e-mail me the finished result please please
>>2372306
>>2372345
Glad you like it though.
>>2372343
crit please?
>>2372920
I feel like the flying girls body is doing way too much. Simple down her pose or switch the perspective so the more simpler poser character is facing the front
>>2372903
needs 90 more
