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Post em now.

Rules:
-Commenting is OK but do not expect much from an hour's work.
-Posting WIP's, studies, "doodles", and random sketches are highly encouraged.
-The art must be fresh. Like you just drew it in the past hour.
-Go fast
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Getting there... slowly.

Oh please sir, tell me more about the land of Gud. Is it true that Bouguereau girls sharpen your pencils with their feet and groves of graphite trees bear only the ripest Loomis heads?
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Mouse/ms paint at work.
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>>2343199
Damn it, I was just about to make one. I guess that Go Fast line is going to be a permanent addition.
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>>2343234
Were you the OP of the past ones?

The last one was far on the last pages.

I really like the thread idea, however I disagree with the stance of not commenting by default, that's why I made the small edit
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>>2343242
I was only the OP of the one with the Sonic drawings and I added "Go fast" to the op text. The past few OPs haven't gotten rid of it though so I was going to make a new thread to get a chance to take it out before it could keep getting copied over but I keep missing the chance.
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>>2343199
is that firez or no?
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For the tower girl thread. Technically took longer than an hour and more like an hour and a half but I was also eating.
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>>2343274
I would lean towards no because that looks like it was done on some kind of mobile device and Firez is pretty outspoken about how poor he is. Also he doesn't usually start out painterly, he seems to start everything with this really hesitant looking lineart.
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Just trying to get the hairstyle right before I move onto the actual drawing.

>>2343199
I recognize that style
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This took me a good 40 minutes.
Tell me what you think, just started taking drawing seriously, I'd really appreciate some feedback.
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Just a heads up. The daily drawing challenge is now open. So if you would like to join in.

Here the links
>>2338138 (Cross-thread)

Main site
http://www.lavaflake.com/draw

Good luck have fun.
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>>2343333
you're drawing symbols, stop
use reference and draw exactly what you see
go to the beginner thread for more advice
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>>2343333
and maybe using pencil so you can have light weight stroke
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>>2343333
Really try to conceptualize the form in your head. Don't draw the object as a 2D shape. Describe it as if you were discovering something in 3D.
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>>2343333
Read pic related. Also, read the sticky.

If you're trying to take drawing seriously. You should practice drawing shapes. Spheres/ellipses, cubes, pyramids, and cylinders.

Right now you don't really know how things look in 3d space. Your drawing is very flat. Drawing the simple 3D shapes I mentioned will help train your brain.
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>>2343337
>>2343344
>>2343350
>>2343352
Thanks guys, I've read the sticky already but fuck it I'll read it again, it's really hard to get rid of the symbol thing. Anyways I really appreciate the feedback and advice that I can actually use and the fact that you're not being assholes
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It's messy but I'm pretty happy with this.
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practicing from poses...
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no idea how to even begin shading this
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>>2343199
ill finish it sometime.
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>>2343366
create linework anon. it's going to save you a million headaches. even if the lineart is rough
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>>2343357
this is a cool ideal..stealing~
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>>2343393
Decide on the light source(s) and colors. Also her left hand is a right hand.
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>>2343394
blog?
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>>2343256
Let's leave it, I would say is a general good advice for sketches and learning to let go.

>>2343289
If you develop it further cross check with reference particularly for the lower part. I kind of like her expression so far.

>>2343274
>>2343292
You got me, I have already posted several sketches and doodles from my Note 4, using my work's collective plan it was cheap to get.

>>2343325
Love your retro anime style.

>>2343366
You should reconsider the way you do eyes they usually look very plain, don't forget that they are spheres wrapped by skin.

Pero sigue así y trata de no desanimarte.
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>>2343399
Originalcharacterdonotsteal
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>>2343289
>>2343430
Thanks! I probably should have used a ref. I definitely need to work on my lower bodies and will use a ref next time.
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>>2343430

Gracias Firez sempai, no sabia que hablabas español :)
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Just did this then.
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just random concept from future "project"
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Butts
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>>2343726
riven ? post it on /lolgen/
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>>2343396

I was using a reference by the way. It felt like painting with oils you know, a big spot then defining the details.

About your coment on the linework. Is this better? (pic related)
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What do you think?
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>>2343394
>paz
from metal gear?
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Scanning this once I finish painting it.
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>>2343798
dope af man
>>2343881
looks nice i want to see the finished version
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>>2343325
yours looks like the old daft punk anime videos..interstellar! that's the name. oh and the one with a space pirate dude.
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>>2343881
Looks pretty great, my nigga.

blog?
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>>2343352
fucking kek. beginners shouldnt be making retarded tuts.
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I started drawing on my phone recently, im not so good without references.
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>>2343199
Done with the rest of the hour.

>>2343570
Si, de hecho ya te había escrito en español hace un tiempo en el hilo de estilización pero de seguro no alcanzastes a leer mi mensaje :)
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Please rate.
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>>2344208
el gato no es bueno
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>>2343901
>>2343987
Thanks, folks. Got you covered.
lokki-lokki on tumblr, if you think you're interested.
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>>2344276
nice man, definately gonna check your shit out
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>>2343769

wasted too much time on this...
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hot off the press
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>>2344327
post your reference
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dis,
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>>2343199
WIP. My attempt at an orc girl.

Please critique.
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>>2344350
>black dicks
>yay
>white dicks
>booo
This looks realy nice anon.
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>>2344350
Render the hand
Also lol @ those eyebrows.
But seriously, I really like it
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>>2344350
cuck.
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>>2344350
BIG
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r8 my monkey dwight
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Drew this just now.

>>2344208
Looks cute. I like it.

>>2344474
Head seems a bit squished, no shape to it? The Torso is too long. Those are the major parts that I notice anyway. You can make her look beautiful, Anon. I believe.
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>>2344524
Thanks anon <33
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>>2344505
I r8 8/8 m8
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>>2344524
I really like the way you draw muscles, do you have a site where you post your work?
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>>2344529
Thanks. Here ya go. http://ketteiii.tumblr.com/
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>>2344529
>>2344533
wait i thought that was a meme
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Eh
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>>2344534
It is but I was actually asking for his website, also why I didn't just say "blog?"
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sorry its bad, my anatomy is terrible
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Eye eye captain
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Just got a tablet the other day...shit is alot harder to use than i thought it would be. This took about an hour
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>>2344474
Nothing about this drawing makes it look like an orc.
Just rename the file to "humangirlwip."
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>>2344896
What app are you using to draw?
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Challenging myself with perspective
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>>2344896
one eye between eyes at most times/sticky
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Trying to paint.

criticism please. I'm just making up the process as I go because I'm fucking clueless
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Venom fav just need a good background, suggestions?
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>>2345184
Nice work dude, I love it.
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>>2344887
pretty sure it wasn't your intention, but that looks like a chicken wearing a knight's helmet.

which I find pretty fucking sick dude.
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>>2345189
thanks man, just realized my mouse/brush outline is visible top left since I just screenshot it :\
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>>2343199
wipwipwip. thoughts?
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>>2345206
love it man.

you might like Steven Sugar's work (http://stevensugar.tumblr.com/)

he has a few pieces on a similar subject.

Thumbs up.
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>>2345184
People tend to just jump into "painting" as if it's different from drawing, but a good painting needs a good under drawing. Your paintings will come out easier and be better if you start with something solid and real instead of trying to just go at it.

Use ref too, I'm not really sure what the dark sploches are describing but I think you could do it better looking at real canyons and rocks and things.
>>2345206
The left foot (his right) isn't in perspective compared to the other one. The sword and shield are also drawn flat on. The chainmail done with a brush looks pretty lazy too.

Push yourself to draw these things in perspective and you'll elevate your drawings. The guy looks pretty cool you're just tripping up in places.
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wip. its asterix
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>>2345215
good stuff dude, thanks. I'll definitely look up some refs for next time
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>>2345128
i would have to stop and jack off 3 or 4 times if i were to try and draw that
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>>2345209
thanks man i'll check it out
>>2345215
thanks for the critique (and i am lazy lol)
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>>2343393
Good construction.

>>2344406

good rendering
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did this on my lunchbreak.
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>>2344208
Looks really cute but her nose is definetly misaligned
>>2345439
thanks bro, i was practising that.


Also i need some help here I sketched a face yesterday and wanted to paint it but no matter how much i try to fix it still looks wrong at least for me, i think im wasting my time trying to fix.
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Keys to drawing project 2a, copy a master drawing.
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>>2345456
Love it.
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>>2345471
lol, thanks bro.
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beginner experimenting. No rules.
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>>2345456
I like the rendering but something about her face kind of reminds me of a zora.
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>>2344220
Tampoco creo que sean malos.

>>2344524
Thanks!

I like the look of the binary tool for sketches, I should try it again.

>>2345187
I think it looks fine without a bg, however 2 things bother me: the inside of the mouth (not shaded) and the body (too small)

>>2345456
Thanks I changed it when I uploaded to my blog. I like your rendering but I think you should try to fix her ear, it should be a bitfurther behind.
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>>2343199
Wip
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Please forgive me Ms. Arakawa..
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i was mostly trying to get the features out, not so much proper shading or anything. how do I draw downward facing faces, up was enough of a challenge ;_;
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>>2343289
those colours are so pretty...
>>2344632
>>2345869
blog plzz
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Im probably never gonna finish this.
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just got a tablet and downloaded krita, im lost send help
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Here's this thing I did.

>>2345826
Yea, Binary is tons of fun.

>>2345834
I love this.

>>2345894
A friendship forged by muscle.
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Just something stupid to make myself feel like I still do stuff
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>>2345826
Thanks for the ear tip
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>>2346065
That's nice what is he from?
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>>2344896
Here is another i did with pencil. Tried to redo a Budd Root pic. Looked it over a couple times and then tried to draw from memory. Fixed proportions on the waist and legs a bit in SAI.
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>>2346443
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>>2346443
>>2346480
blog?
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OuO
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>>2346422
interesting
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>>2346503
blog?
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>>2346503
The third one is the cutest.
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>>2346337
He's just a random character I came up with.
>>2346503
2cute4me
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Jezus, drawing from imagination is hard as fuck.
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>>2346216
nice!
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>>2346097
Lol nice what do you use to draw
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>tfw Square will never make a sequel
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>>2346611
Paint Tool Sai
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>>2343798
Nice carrot warframe
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Nick Wilde from Zootopia disney movie.

he's paws/hands are "interesting" to draw.
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First time SERIOUSLY using a tablet. Second attempt at just fucking around with it tho
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>>2346651
Do You draw with a mouse or something else?
I've always used pencil and paper
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Put the wrong year in title.
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>>2346901
Like the way you use your brush! I don't really know how to phrase it better.
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More arakawa
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Drew this while at work(just got off).

I am trying to draw dreads for a poster i am working on. Not too detailed because i will be stenciling it. Trying to make it look toony though.

Advice?
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Im not going to be able to finish this,
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>>2343354
have you read drawing on the right side of the brain? its the best way to kick symbol drawing imo
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Just a quick self portrait I did about a half an hour ago. Any critiques?
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I was feeling really flustered yesterday, but I think I internalized some basic proportions. I don't have time today but tomorrow I'll watch vilppu's pelvis video and do studies. I want to draw sexy butts.
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>>2345450
Looks like the chick that played rey in the new star wars.I like it.
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>>2347000
idk man looks like sausages to me
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>>2347161
That was what I was saying in my head.

I saw a guy today with dreads that were twisted, maybe if I redraw the dreads with twists, it'll help out defining it as actual hair in the poster I made.

So glad I decided to paint the background first. Thanks.
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>>2347012
Looks like Walter Jr.
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>>2345456
I think one eye is bigger than the other.
imo.
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Still need to draw fucking hands and feets..
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>>2347012
i'm sorry that your skin is melting off it must be difficult
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Forgot to post it within an hour of doing it but it probably took me about an hour's worth of time earlier today.
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Need some criticism please.
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>>2346875
Just my good ol shitty wacom tablet
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>>2347217
That's not how deltoids work.
Also do your construction.
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just dicking around
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>>2343394
the way you do faces is superb, man
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>>2343394
Pls don't censor
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I have so much I need to study, so many things are off. It was a fun exercise trying to see how much I know off the top of my head. Back to the drawing board so to speak.
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>>2347643
Woah, this is really cute anon, got a site?
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>>2347376
are you using reference?
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>>2347673
Thanks buddo, nilefar.tumblr.com
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Hey guys im trying to made glen of twd what do you think?
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>>2347892
blog?
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>>2347938 >>2347938
instagram.com/matt_ilustracionesstagram.com/matt_ilustraciones
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doodleshit post is a go.
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work is crushing my soul
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drawing a girl sorta..
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I dunno. I mostly doodle despite wanting to git gud because I can't be bothered putting the focus and attention into a 'full' piece..
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Pleb drawing of my tauren character.
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Just a daily doodle.
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>>2348134
that a boner?
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>>2348134
why do you draw so much of the same stuff
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GG Bushlin
Bite it
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Studying loomis again. This time Im going to finish it.
Any feedback?
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>>2348313
I'm an uncreative faggot.
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>>2347161
Tried drawing sample dreads again at work today for the poster I am working on. I don't even...
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just a cat guy. was watching future boy conan and felt inspired.
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>>2345484
you got something, keep it up. Go out of your comfort zone, explore! learn how to draw before you learn about perspective and proportions.

>I just gave myself exactly the crit I wanted cause why the fuck not
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>>2347264
Did you paint it in photoshop?
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>>2348395
Come on, anon, you've got talent.
Get out of MS Paint and draw more detail! It's rare for someone to draw exaggerated muscles, I thought that trend died after the 2000s but your stuff is very promising.
I think Monster Hunter type armor is right up your alley.
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>>2343393
Think about the form and direction of light. Also maybe try practicing simple rendering when sketching. I dont know how to really describe it but I noticed that Ian McCaig does this. If you look at his sketches from shadowline on Google images then maybe you'll get what I'm saying.
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>>2348453

Manga Studio Ex5.
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An hour and a half, or maybe 2 hours.
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I'm having problems with her pose, making her feel like she's actually in leaning on the floor.
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not an hour but its what ive been doing for 3 er so hours not sure
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Something looks off with her and I can't tell if it's an anatomy issue or just dumb hair
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>>2348814
Whoa shit, sorry for hueg
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>>2348809
neat! but a little too small!
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>>2348808
maybe something like this?
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>>2348820
Oh shit, that's great, thanks, anon!
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>>2348814
its mostly the eyes forms being translated incorrectly

they be slippin' like my homie ron when he be on crack slippin' ta ta ta trippin'

>>2348815
5000x1135
WOT
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>>2348822
shet meant >>2348819
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Sticking with pencil tool for now, because I don't really know how to use soft brushes (or brushes in general). It kinda blurred the shit out of everything I tried.
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Wip of some job
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.
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Hey guys im trying to made glen of twd. What do you think? Some advice?
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>>2349208
do those lines around the lip and nose exist at all?
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>>2349213
No :s
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>>2349208
looks flat af senpai
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>>2343234
i'm going to make it my life mission to keep 'go fast' in the rules
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>>2349204
Very nice
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>>2349204
We meet again, Estimado firez.

You have little problems with the placement of your waifu's eyes and nose, you know, I'm not a fucking pro or expert but that is my opinion.
Good Luck!
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>>2348417
Just got off work, been doodling dreads for most of the shift and It still feels off.

I am making these as refrerence for a much larger poster that I am making.
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>>2349649
lol you again , but those look much better than what you had before
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>>2349348
>>2349350
Thank you guys.

Fixed it. I hope...
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Ignoring the shiet hand, how are the values and clothing wrinkles?
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>>2347007
her nips look like milk duds
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>>2349667
Thanks, I'll stick with this style of shading for now. Thanks.
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First drawing I've ever posted on 4chan. Hope you enjoy
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>>2349678
firez, in almost every drawing you do, i have noticed that you blend or almost do your lines and semi tones on the same layer and they get mixed together. is this intentional? because its giving everything you draw a ghost like quality. im not for or against it. its just something i have noticed.
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>>2349710
underage
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>>2349737
22. Been coming here since I was 17, sadly.
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>>2349772
>Been coming here since I was 17

Looks like you've learned nothing
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Daily doodle again.

>>2348461
I usually draw on paper. Lately I've just been using a different media to draw stuff because it's just more fun personally . Thank you for the advice though! I appreciate that you admire my art.

>>2349678
Cute as fuck Anon.
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>>2349678
Draw a skull over her face. It's very off. You aren't learning from past mistakes.
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>drawing is too small
>increase size
>pixelated as fuck
>vectors come out jaggy
>only solution is to trace it after resize
>high resolution lines are different and can't trace it propely
christ fuck I hate this digital shit so much
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Just some shit I banged out in the stockroom at work. Figuring out some characters for a personal project.
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>>2349793
Man I fuckin hate mobile. Why does it always do this. What sin did humanity commit for this to go down.
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>>2349252
Anon why
It's not supposed to be there
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>>2349627
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>>2349711
Yes, I just can't help using tone even when I try to do just line work, it's like I can't grasp form without putting down some tone. I'm trying to change that.

>>2349787
Thanks :)

>>2349788
Now that I've left it for a while I noticed I made her head a bit too big, maybe it also needs to be more boxy, the structure of her hair isn't quite matching particularly on the top and I need to make her ear smaller...Maybe there are other things.

Could you please tell me why it looks so off to you? I fear that what I posted above isn't what you meant.
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self portrait
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Another daily doodle.

>>2349926
No problem man, would love to see your blog if you have one.
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>>2349678
learn construction you lazy sow
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>>2349926
Decided to make a last try at least in the context of this thread
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>>2349926
Stage left eye socket doesn't align with the rest. Head is overly large/round, yes. If you defined the skull it would be easier to critique.
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>>2350032
firez. I dont know how you construct your faces, or how that hand connects to anything. But i think its amazing that you keep drawing the nose wrong so often.

Just draw a line through the middle of the lip and it should be clear whats wrong.
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>>2343199

What App is that OP?
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>>2347680
y-you're only 17...Why does it have to be like this?
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>>2350041
why are you critting firez when your work is beginner tier?
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>>2350032
I had a go at making some things align (ignored the hand haha because I feel like the whole arm is too awkward)
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>>2350094
His drawings still have more solid construction. And he's not wrong about the nose being misaligned. Fact of the matter is, the majority of people who come to /ic/ are beginner or intermediate, so if anyone here isn't willing to accept crit from people of that level, they're in the wrong place.
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>>2350094
>implying firez isn't a beginner
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copied this from some pic i had on my pc
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>>2350092
How much you draw and learn from it matters more than age, anon.
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>>2350094
its nice to see you like a shiny render

You dont actually need to be better than someone to critique them. You can have better grasp than other people without having a better grasp of everything,

>>2350096
fucking hate fat people so much.
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>>2350185

what does rendering mean w.r.t. drawings?
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>>2350193
i know google is a daunting tool to use sometimes but fear not i gotchu fàm
https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Render
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>>2343199
How didya robots become so talented at drawing?
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>>2350194
i love this post
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>>2350195
>be born good
>never practice
>be good

Just fucking practice you shit poster

>>2350194
I love how you like saying f a m enough to put all that effort into getting it past the filter
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>>2350185
Still looks stiff as a board.
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>>2350203
And is it just me or doesn't it look a lot like that one that got made into a u mad? reaction?
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>>2350203
you want me to fix the flow with a free transform sai tool?
>>2350208
i dont see it T B H
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>>2350218
I'm not really faulting you. I'm more implying that even with those changes, the pose itself is too stiff to bother with critiquing. Firez really shouldn't waste his time on it.
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>>2350230
You must not know firez. He tends to like going back and forth until hes satisfied .

I just assume everyone is against me recently my bad. The worst part is you probably can fix the flow with free transform, I just didnt think about it


I̶ ̶w̶o̶n̶d̶e̶r̶ ̶w̶h̶y̶ ̶i̶m̶ ̶s̶o̶ ̶d̶e̶f̶e̶n̶s̶i̶v̶e̶ ̶l̶a̶t̶e̶l̶y̶
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>>2350235
For the record I wasn't exactly talking about your edit either, I just meant this pic looks a lot like one of his other pics, without the hand.
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Worked on this for the past hour. Still working on getting believable shadow as well as better contrast
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>>2350252
Put in a few good hard-edged cast shadows and this will look great.
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>>2350266
Will do. Thanks for the advice
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>>2344350
C U C K
U
C
K
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Can someone draw me
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>>2350275
if you pay yes, if not, its against the rules and youre reported.
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>>2350278
Boo
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>>2350279
I mean, well draw you if you have a good camera, have a fun face and take pictures that are helpful to us. Make a thread where you post at least 1.8kx 1.2k pictures of you at every angle and youll get drawn by at least 10 people. If not, Ill draw you 10 times.
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>>2350281
(Don't do it)
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>>2350281
I don't really have many photos of me, I just wanted to see how others kinda see me in an illustration
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>>2346422
cont.
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>>2350029
>>2350035
Thanks, I don´t do the skull but I draw some kind of Bridgman proto-head, the issue is (maybe) that I change too much things after that to the point of losing the initial organization.

>>2350041
I will try to revise it in further iterations, Thanks.

>>2350089
Sketchbook Pro for Android

>>2350094
I haven't seen NB's works but it doesn't matter I just wish people here were a bit more specific it's obvious that if any of us made a mistake it's because we were unable to see it,

That happens to me a lot, However, I'm quick at seeing issues in the works of others.
>>2350096
>>2350185
Thanks.
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>>2344208
Ear looks fucked to me.
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