Critique my monsterpiece!
just post it in the porn thread
Id fap to it but the face is pretty dull.
>>2339891
If you're actually going for a monster, for all intents and purposes this is literally a trap with an alien mouth and thats it. It needs more.
>>2339891
To be honest, I dislike its design. It looks far too humanoid. Maybe recreate its design to be more... "alien," figuratively speaking.
>>2339891
that's a boy right?
>>2339891
It's just heavily edited and coloured one of Uno makoto cocks. The rest is deviantart "templates" thingies.
Fuck you.
>>2339891
It's okay but what if instead of that mouth coming out of the mouth, a dick comes out of there
