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what do I do wrong ?
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Dze7txqRFoY
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1. foreground stuff is in silhouette but the shit on the left is completely bright even in shadow

2. perspective is ass

3. bright colored light in the sky is colored really well but doesnt show up on the left outcrop.

it wouldnt be bad if you just deleted the entire left outcrop.
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All the visual arrows lead to literally nothing except light yellows lol. I want that sign to burn in hell.
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you are totally right about that crop lol, thank man
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