Hello /ic/ so recently my friend and I decided we would do a little Christmas art trade. He asked me to draw his charecter "Willow" who's apparently some sort of a god-like entity created by scientists. Now this premise sounds somewhat reasonable and reminds me a bit of Akira. Though what pissed me off is the design and how disgusting it is. All I need is some ideas to make the design appealing to look at.
Here's a closeup of his face or whatever it's supposed to be.
>>2324354
Fucking cringe
That drawing reminds me of Tsutomu Nihei's Abara or probably BLAME!
>>2324369
Listen Anon I already know it's garbage you don't need to remind me. Really all I need is some helpful advice to make this not cringe.
>>2324372
See now this is stuff is sexy as hell. I should show my friend this and maybe he'll take a hint. Thanks Anon.
>>2324387
or you can read through Tsutomu Nihei's former assistant Q Hayashida's work Dorohedoro. It's a sketchy as Nihei's but I prefer Hayashida's style. Her lines are crisper
>>2324396
Thanks a lot Anon I can really see both designs fitting together. With Willow being an experiment gone bad and these creepy robot hybrid things.
>>2324400
if you guys are into that creepy shit, using pen is better.
Tsutomu Nihei has another series out very similar to BLAME, if you're interested, called BIOMEGA that doesn't make you "read" half the first book before dialog starts...