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>>2311006
>what tool do you use for the perspective? Want to begin doing this kind of stuff but I'm not sure how to manage the perspective.
I use this.
https://forums.epicgames.com/threads/931126-Carapace
Also, reposting...
>>2310913
I think you should show the bottom of the head a little. idk as it stands it looks like her head isn't properly connected to the neck.
>>2311216
The buildings need variation.
Not him but thanks for sharing that too.
>>2311216
Agreed with >>2311220.
Notice in your refs how you see either the underside of the head or the head from straight on, even though the model is looking down.
The head as you have it makes sense if that head is closer to our eye level. With the back upright, the neck on its own would have to bend substantially to get that head angle. Tried to show that with my shitty redline.
Try loading up a 3D program, and use boxes as a stand in for the pelvis, ribcage and head. Place the camera so that the perspective on the torso loosely matches your drawing. Now rotate the head box to match your drawing. Look at this model from other camera angles, and see if that neck movement looks possible. You can also correct the head position using multiple angles to guide you, then go back to your first camera angle and observe if you'd see the top or bottom of that head box.
Then there's always the faster solution of setting up a camera low to the ground angled up, put it on a timer and strike the pose yourself. Notice if you see the top or underside of your head.
>>2311232
>>2311220
Thanks for this, I'll try to show more of the top/back of the head as opposed to the front. I don't really have a 3D Program handy around I could use to see the forms in simple shapes, but I do have that 3d doll thing from quite some time back. I'll try to refer to that.
>>2311225
I usually work those out in the rough rendering phase, but thanks.
I'm trying to learn how to render, by painting over a linework made by somebody else.
I don't know why, but my way of rendering looks bad.
What am I doing wrong?
What should I study? Color theory? Placing in cast shadows in a correct perspective? Go back to rendering basic geo forms? Anatomy?
>>2311259
that is ....uncanny valley creepy x100%
As nice as Carapace is i've found http://preservedcucumbers.tumblr.com/post/20357307964 to be far quicker.
>>2311261
Yeah, I know - it doesn't look cute at all...
I know I overlooked some details (I could spend more time detailing vagina, eyes, shirt)), but it seemed that I was polishing a turd, so I stopped.
>>2311259
>>2311261
Maybe I should simplify the face more...
Sorry for spamming.
Any advice/suggestions?
>>2311259
maybe leave colored lineart on top and start overpainting. Constantly switch the overpaint layer on and off and check if if you managed to retain the original lines feeling. Idk man this is how I do it.
Did I do good this time /ic/?
>>2311232
>tfw no cute chibi Ramiel-chans doing cute geometry things
>>2311297
flip it upside down and go cry in a corncer
>>2311304
I live my life crying in corners dude.
>>2311297
I don't know dick about shit but that face looks like a shovel attached to a vague representation of a neck, check out the canopy of the jaw (mandibular cervical connection?) and skull structure shit
>>2311316
at least you know your place
Can someone please redline/paintover the figures here? It's based on a gothic fight manual so the anatomy/values I'm working with aren't the best defined. Just need to know where my shadows and highlights are going wrong so I can edit that.
>>2311322
No bully
>>2311281
neet despite you being a complete faggot sellout
d e s u
Holiday spirit
>>2311322
You Nerd
>>2311468
eh recently binge watched the series and thought it was pretty good. Dunno how this is different to Fanart to any other Disney thingy?
[spoiler]Okay about 20% motivation are potential tumblr followers but I genuinely like the series so it's fine r-right?At least I don't do fetish porn yet[/spoiler]
>>2311468
neat. Gotta do some christmas-themed stuff myself.
>>2311259
From what I've observed, 3d rendering on facial features, especially eyes, doesn't really match well with certain stylized artwork (excluding comic book style and semi-realistic style)
>>2311195
was practicing figure drawing but then remembered that usopp is life.
crits,redlines anything is appreciated
Starting to have more fun drawing mecha these days.
>>2311555
I wish my hand was that steady. It's looking great as always man.
ears.
uhh, the hand thing is just from an idea mulling around in my head.
>>2311555
you are either that guy from Deviantart which i doubt.
or posted his drawing to look cool which means you are retard
>>2311195
>alternative stylization thread
Every damn time.
WHY NOT TO CALL IT A GOODAMN WEEB/ANIME GIRLS THREAD?
OP fucking kill yourself and your family already.
>>2311581
Anon pls this artist has been around here for ages.
>>2311583
Yes many people post anime shit but there's also room for tumblr/not realism of any kind
>>2311591
the only newfag i'm spotting right now is you.
>>2311589
Blog?
>>2311583
It's funny because these threads weren't called Alternative Stylization until the same very people like yourself complained about the anime.
>>2311589
that's pretty awsome, I think I know who you're with those brushes
are you the one complaining about animu? lol
that form control is awsome, it's not wrong but it gets too repetitive and all over the place
you should put your waifu at the bottom taking a bath
>>2311589
Holy fuck, those are some fine reflections.
>complaining about anime in a thread that was literally called the anime thread until autists like you wanted to change it to alternative stylization general
You morons are either never happy, or too new to be consistent.
>>2311610
The keyword is "morons"
How do I make right's tail look less stiff?
I'm having trouble caring anymore.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=c1DJsJWFMRM
>>2311589
get back to drawing mike
>>2311589
pls delete
>>2311903
>First time I've been accused of not being me, that's new.
>anonimous board
>surprised that people "dont see his nickname"
>>2311962
stop picking a fight with his cock and post work unless you want to gargle his cum like a bitch?
>>2311962
are you mentally challenged?
>>2311980
are you?
>>2312003
art not words, stranger.
>>2312003
>Wanna fight :)
please kill yourself. i'm saying that the guy has been posting here for quite a while. ..unless you're saying that it's been an impostor from the very beginning.
i really wish newfags would stop pretending like they're hot shit around here.
>>2311661
wtf is this fucking shit video?
>>2312046
Paint the same type of picture but have the characters pose differently. Only then will I accept that you aren't just posting others work to shitpost.
>>2312046
>wrong about everything
>embarrassing himself
>m-muh buttlicking and circlejerking
doing some stills from my favourite films to warm up
>>2312046
i doubt real Mr. Jack has time to shitpost on chinese cartoon forums.
>>2312052
the sucker punch one is nice
>>2312046
Yea I'm gonna need a high res image of just the right figure's construction layer to verify that that is your work.
>>2312166
>>2312171
Nice meme. :) Very new. ;)
>>2311331
are they standing still for a picture?
>>2312046
>filename
>>2311331
where are you ref-ing this from? that mask guy's stance looks kinda weird anon
>>2311216
Honestly one of these days you'll have to explain yourself. What is so special about oversized animu's in a city environment? I'm not judging. I'm just curious. What is so appealing about them?
PS.disregard what follows if you have no intention or interest in growing as an artist.
Also if you wanna be able to do it really well i would suggest not focusing so much to finish new pieces all the time. draw 1 and do studies for a month then do another. I promise that you'll be doing great ones allot faster. and by studies I mean not doing pieces. spend 1 day drawing arms 1 drawing legs look into muscles etc. bones. Just felt like I had to give some tips since you seem to struggle allot, seen you here for years now budd.
>>2312379
I hear you. I have done plenty of studies that I don't generally post, but it feels like I have alot more trouble actually applying what I've learnt as opposed to not knowing things. Part of it is probably because of work, too, I guess; I feel compelled to draw shit I like when I'm at home. I draw pretty much everything but kawaii strong anime girls when I'm at work, but I should really stop using that as an excuse to draw cute animes.
But yeah, even if it dosen't seem like it, I want to git gud for the sake of my job too.
>>2312371
thanks, maybe another night
i must sleep
>>2312384
頑張って!:)
>>2312388
wanted to see if i can get a little critique on this wip before work.
>>2312785
Her left hand needs more work, the rest is fine.
>>2312785
right hand doesn't follow arm contour either / doesn't connect.
>>2312785
the way the boob squishes betrays not only the form of the pot, but the boob itself along with the ribcage
why do i only draw when i'm tired an feel like piss
>>2312785
i'll be back to redline you after baffroom
>>2313329
thanks. ive got a tumblr for drawings
paradoxjelli.tumblr.com
>>2312785
-in general softened things up, put a bit more meat (goo??) on her to more easily imply softness through things squeezing/pressing into other things
-got rid of some superfluous lines
-softened her chin, moved eyes around a bit
- fixed arms, i assumed she was flicking her "hair" back with her hand so went with that for the correction
she probably needs to be rotated a bit, might look like she's falling backwards to some, tho you could argue she's slightly bending her left knee while her right foot is possibly propped up on something but it doesn't matter if the drawing is "technically" correct, it has to "look" correct
so i guess
-study arm/leg anatomy
-remember boobs have volume
-also remember that while hard and angular things look very cool, what is generally considered "sexy" are things that appear soft, squeezable, yet tight/smooth, possibly even bulging (even big muscular dudes need to look somewhat soft, remember that muscle can squeeze just like fat, not as much, but it's noticable), so study up on how to show that more effectively
-think in threedeeeeeeeee
>>2312052
stop painting using repetive strokes with opacity.
>>2313559
not the anon you replied to, but I do the same in my drawings
what's the better method?
Just a few questions, wondering if anyone can shed some light on the subject. When I see other people's work being stylize, I notice a few things, but could never understand why (especially with animu)
Most of the time, when heads are drawn, the cranium is usually drawn with a semi-perfect circle almost at any angle and with a jaw line. What confuses me here is with the jaw line, why are the cheeks usually somewhat puffy with the female models, and what purpose does that serve?
I've also notice at times, since the heads tend to be bigger or "more circle", the eyes are usually spread more apart away from the nose to fit the skull. Why create this space? Or better yet, why create that gap there to begin with?
Not looking for a "help me, please!" or anything. Just curious as to why these approaches are taken when stylize.
>>2313639
main theory is https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Neoteny#Attractive_women.27s_faces
>>2313557
also i updated this because i forgot the boyshorts and also some proper leg chub (dis?)placement
nobody's perfect
>>2313659
oh, and i forgot to erase the line, hahahaha
>>2313712
glad i could help nwn
>>2313659
>https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Neoteny#Attractive_women.27s_faces
Whoa, very, very interesting answer.
Thanks for that.
>>2313606
opacity for broad values, flow for blending and repetitive clean strokes.
>>2313746
is flow= brush density in MS ?
should be studying for my last final buuuut.
>>2313659
Applied your critique/ redline the best I could and tried to fix some proportion issues. Stylized proportions are usually 6 Heads high, yeah?
>>2312052
I never watch movies at all, I need to watch more, I forget how many good composition ideas they have
>>2311216
her head is huge
Help please with this painting. It's stylized in the way I chose.
I don't know how to improve it. I've been told this painting isn't very good. How can I improve it within the style that I chose?
Title is "The Dance of Two Tigresses"
>>2313801
Yes.
>>2313883
the head on the right is totally broken. like she's twisting it backward a la the Exorcist. remove the head and paint it at the right angle.
crit before i move on to coloring and details?
she's supposed to be holding a planet.
>>2313883
i'm gonna respond seriously because maybe there is a chance you are actually chunbum posting this here and not just some shitposter
the head is fine honestly, it's distinctly placed in a confident manner, so it feels like it's intentionally placed as such to unnerve the viewer.
that arm on the left figure tho... the curve gives a nice flow, but it's too-short length amateurishly betrays any harmony it brings, undermining whatever confidence is found elsewhere in the piece
>>2313914
Oh you are right! It's too short, I see I see. Thank you very much! You are the best! I will soon bring an updated version with the corrected arm length.
>>2313914
Fixed, looks much better now. Thank you for the advice!
>>2313937
>looks much better now
Not really, IMO. I guess sort of the style of the piece is to be disproportionate but it still looks badly drawn. then again I think most modern art is badly drawn and shitty so, yeah.
>>2313939
Are you the same person who gave me the advice to fix the arm?
>>2313833
im not him but god damn do you just not understand the form of the vase? Also while im art it fuck your ears.
>>2313948
no I am another person. I just think that the arm stlil looks as similarly disproportionate as the first one, except now it's too long, or perhaps too skinny.
I dunno, 'disproportionate and wacky' is a style that I've seen used to get good-looking results and I just don't think you've mastered that style
I remember a while back there was an image posted here showing the age of a female animu girl and their height from each age. Would anyone know what page I'm talking about? It was from a Japanese book (or so I think it was).
>>2311259
look at your ref. different ranges in value, sat and hue. And there is a lot of detail and anatomy hints in that rendering. You need a lot more anatomy understanding to make the rendering in your ref than you need to make the line drawing you are using.
>>2313954
Here is revised version. Arm doesn't look as long anymore.
>>2313937
apologies for crude mspaint lines, i tried to make a few small corrections to the shoulder area along with some lines around her neck to help define it more
>>2313833
her left arm is unfortunately still very goofy, along with her boob pressed against the vase (especially the way the boob window implies the form of the squished boob is way too flat). i'd try to wireframe the surface to try and show you how it moves but im' very tired and need to sleeeep ;-;
head heights in the style you're going for are usually indicative of implied actual character height. average head size on a full grown human is usually within 8-10 inches tall, regardless of height. split the difference at 9 inches and you can do the math from there
7 heads tall = ~5'3
8 heads tall = ~6'
9 heads tall = ~6'9
i'd put zodee at 8-8.5, maybe even 9 heads, depending on how crazy you wanna get, seeing as how she's normally presented as rather tall.
>>2314012
Okay, I didn't understand everything, but I changed little bit on the shoulder and the neck. I hope this will please everyone.
>>2313982
>>2314012
>>2314033
That doesn't look healthy.
i think im finished
>>2314012
Well fuck. I'm in turd polishing mode then.
I'll start over from scratch.
Think this is about done with this, feel it's an improvement to the last mecha thing I did, need to keep doing more.
>>2314164
Looks good. Try to study movement of conventional humanoid robots in real life, such as ASIMO. Their legs bend even in resting state, like this
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which is easiest balancing state on zero moment point.
Your robot's stance is typical from anime like gundam, but I think it would fall over in real life.
>>2314164
I love your work and one of the main thing i like about your coloring is that...dont know how to say "Grain/Noise" effect. It makes flat glossy colors less flat and glossy which is great.
How you doing that? Is it some automatic filter in Photoshop or you using texture with overlay?
>>2314173
I see what you're saying, though I was wanting to a draw more interesting pose this time around, the last one I drew was a more simple at rest stance and I didn't want to simply repeat that. You're probably right that it would fall over, I'll have to work on that.
>>2314175
Thank you.
>>2314176
I don't do anything fancy, I apply the watercolour 'filter' on SAI to try and break up the flats a bit, which does the bulk of it, and have a few brushes with high noise/grain when I want to bump it up more.
>>2313966
Anyone?
>>2314197
Ah you use SAI.. okay thanks.
Working on a detective comic in a world with sentient food. I'm having a hard time with a couple of things:
How do I make the figures look dynamic if they're box or egg shaped (the main character is literally a hard boiled egg)?
would I better off going with a full body figure of vegetables with human faces or the top part of the food with a human body (like pic related)?
>>2314220
literally aqua teen hunger force. do something better with your time.
something looks off (her hip/leg area) but not really sure what it is. any help would be appreciated
>>2314273
her waist is too small. Her hips is too wide. Her legs should overlap each other where they touch.
>>2314285
>an /ic critique
>>2314273
I think it looks good, but your most glaring issue is trying to figure out the legs before grounding the character. I'm not sure if her thighs are flat against what she's sitting on or not. Much like how the hands ground the arms, try and include the feet (or have an idea of what they're doing and where they are) to ground the legs
>>2311605
>you should put your waifu at the bottom taking a bath
my sides kek
>>2314301
>ic critique
Tbh legs really should overlap a little if anything to create some depth. Everything else he said is a matter of taste.
I was looking for inspiration in a draw thread on /a/ and I tried this. I don't think it's going very well.
What do? I already tried to redraw the faces a few times but it just never looks remotely decent.
I think I need help
>>2314509
Because you lack fundamental drawing skills. Refrain from attempting to be a KR**Prinz in the future and pick up your beginner thread license at the front desk. Good news! You won't be lonely there.
Not too sure about the way her mouth and her hair. Anything else that I should pay attention to?
>>2314780
this man has no neck
>>2311589
Nice.
>>2314164
Do you have a blog/tumblr?
>started sticky and other resources 3+ years ago and continuing
>still too shit to do commissions
I just want to do something that makes me happy and get cash for it
>>2314869
>sticky
There's your problem. That thing was designed to delibrately keep you shit tier. You failed for the biggest practical joke on /ic/, for 3 years.
>>2314529
>>2314509
Hmmm, I guess it looks that way. My fundamentals aren't great, but they aren't THAT bad usually.
I also tried constructing the pose, but this way I can't seem to fit everything I want into the picture.
>>2314869
I know that feel, lad. Everything is going to get better.
>>2314884
>My fundamentals aren't great, but they aren't THAT bad usually.
Your fundamentals are as good as you can draw them.
>>2312052
what movie tho
>>2314780
please post in the beignner thread for the next 5 months
>>2314892
Hmmm, okay. That doesn't really help me though.
I guess I'll try to draw/construct the pose a few more times in the near future and see if I can get one that looks reasonable despite having humongous breasts.
Posting here before adding more detail.
I can't get the eyes to look right on her head, so I did multiple. The last variation has her eyes slightly farther apart from the middle variation. Which do you think looks better out of all three?
>>2315050
The face is so disconnected from the body it almost looks like those novelty cartoon cutouts in which people pose for silly photos.
>>2315050
How is she smiling while getting hit with explosives? If you scaled this to a normal person those tiny explosions would hurt like hell and leave some bad burns and possibly put a hole in you.
Also there's some weird colour temperature stuff going on here.
>>2315050
the sketch looked more promising
>>2315080
It's fresh and cute. But I wish you didn't have to rely on heavily on thick eyelashes to depict her feminine qualities. If her face was vertically shorter the eyes wouldn't need to have such thick eyelashes. Otherwise a good work
>>2315084
>tfw its a guy
referenced from ruan
>>2315050
Two advices:
1, always remember to check if the perspective for the character and surroundings is the same
2, stop coming in these threads because they're full of shit.
Same for the other people posting here that give a fuck about their dtawings
>>2314866
Yeah, thdark.tumblr.com/tagged/art
>>2315080
foreshorten her right eye.
>>2315093
Its hard. My other art friends who would actually crit my stuff are all normalfags yhat i cant really show this kind of stuff to...
>>2315109
Wait, you draw normal stuff too?
>>2315132
cute
>>2315114
Plenty at work and when studying and shit
I just want to get better and draw more good looking fit qt giant girls.
>>2315155
i can understand symbol drawing about the eyes, but everything els was constructed.
>>2312127
>both are sucker punch
>must mean both are nice
what's up guys? totally new here, never drew until a few minutes ago, thought i check you quys out.
late's
Why do most animu girls look crossed eyed?
>>2315195
:^)
>>2315132
This is really good, do you have a tumblr
>>2315089
fucking kek m8
>>2315195
I missed you
Combined some mech refs. I still haven't found a good digital work flow.
>>2314869
i started doing the resources from the sticky that I liked for 6-7 months. then i ditched it and learned how to learn on my own. I get frequent comiss.
>>2315195
you arent goofing anyone.
Been a while since i posted in one of these
>>2315441
dont know what youre talking about, sir. Ive never been here before.
>>2313559
I paint with 100% opacity. I'm practicing with different brushes to emulate texture and improve brush economy, so far I haven't made much progress. Although I'm learning how to control lots of darks and neutrals since these movies are heavily filtered.
>>2314895
see >>2312127
>>2315600
Where is pineapple man?
>>2311589
This is wierd, it's like it's a cliff with GIANT knights riding on the top of it.
>>2315977
yeah, stop painting with opacity. you obviously have no idea what youre doing.
>>2316089
Critique for days yo.
>>2315928
Cc a shit. Cs6 is better anyways
>>2316001
He's out of town, sorry
>>2316273
like that matters, fucking noob. i use cs2
>>2316483
legit curious if you aren't shitposting, post ur werk senpai
>>2316496
sure, but im not posting old work. ill paint up something new.
>>2316509
>>2316496
>>2316587
make it wider.
>>2313909
Make it more interesting is really all I can say. It's super boring, which is probably why no one has replied to you. There really isn't any narrative aside from you stating that "She's holding a planet. Which I couldn't even tell just by looking at the picture. Also the pose seems stiff, and over all anatomy needs work. Most notably the hands and head/ face/ neck area.
anyone else gettign errors on tumblr ? i cant browse it.
>>2314869
>Do shit you want to do
> Finish
>See problem
>Study on how to fix problem
>Draw problem area until it's easy to draw from ref then from imagination + from multiple angles, different lighting, different pose etc. Until you are comfortable with it.
>Try to simplify problem, then go into detail
>Apply what you learned in next piece.
>Repeat
Also don't get attached to anything and dont take anything as gospel, because there is not one "right" way to do things.
Congrats, you got gud
/thread
/board
>>2316872
Oh and never be lazy to brush up on fundies while doing things you like.
But don't get lost in it, because you'll burn out.
Spice it up!
>>2314884
>I also tried constructing the pose, but this way I can't seem to fit everything I want into the picture.
Work bigger then?
>>2315158
>I just want to get better and draw more good looking fit qt giant girls.
>good looking fit qt
We just found the problem Rin-chan.
If you draw "fit" giant girls what you basically do is draw the body of a 30yo. bodybuilder with lots of bronze cream on with the head of an adolescent girl.
Now what i know about bodybuilding is that those bodies that you like to draw for those girls are far from fit and healthy. At that state those people are extremely tired, hungry and anything but strong. Those muscles are mostly just for show.
If you want to girls/women with at least attractive bodies (muscular and cute usually don't go well together but there are numerous excepions - at least at stylized characters) then the thing you need to focus on is that the subjects you draw, are FEMALE. Try to find the balance between strong muscles and female curves if you want them to look attractive.
The best example would be to look at photos/reference of girls/women who are doing some kind of athletic sport or martial arts. Those muscles are more functional and more aesthetically pleasing.
>actually vent to /h/ to get you stylized reference:
http://i.4cdn.org/h/1449528844797.jpg
http://i.4cdn.org/h/1444603372813.jpg
I tried to be as objective as i could and i want to point out that i'm not nearly as good as you are, but it's your choice to take the advice or not.
Halp
I guess i'm going that area between groin and hip wrong and i have no idea how to fix.
>>2315020
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>>2317006
Firez pls go
>>2317021
was jokey, but not sarcastic, i agree with the posts i quoted
>>2311923
that nigga looks dope
>>2316974
>Try to find the balance between strong muscles and female curves if you want them to look attractive.
This might be it... thanks anon.
Also thanks for the ref, the chie one is kind of weird but the other two are great.
>>2316999
things i'm noticing;
-her clavicle is too prominent, make it less of a bump
-breasts are connected to the upper arms, like the pecs, you've made them look like a separate entity stuck on the front of her chest.
-give her more of volume down by her crotch, it's too flat.
So how's this turning out?
![1Uq5H2k[1].png](https://i.imgur.com/rO1MZuI.png "1Uq5H2k[1].png")
>>2317147
Like this, apparently.
Anyone have that picture of the white girl getting sucked into a black hole with a yellow background? really need the artists name
>>2317370
this one? if so their name is 8939 and you can find them on deviantart
>>2317259
kek
>>2317388
>their
Man, I really hate PC pronouns, someone on a FB did the same thing to me and got annoyed when I told him/her (see?) that I was not an artist group.
>>2317573
Is their really pc? I say it all the time when referring to people and i'm the least politically correct person. It's just convenient ffs
>>2317573
?????
Their is a pronoun you use when you dont specifically know the persons gender. Eg. "I don't know who drew this, but their lines look nice"
Its super common, fedorabeard
>>2317573
ESL go home
>>2317576
It's fucking stupid him/her his/her is much more proper.
>>2317583
No, it looks really stupid. It's much easier to write "their" than "his/her"
People have always used that word, it's not some feminist thing
>>2315195
underrated
>>2317584
I have yet to see this use for their. My issue is not about the PC thing but in this case "their" is simply misleading.
>>2317601
it isn't you fucking autist, it is used commonly in literature, and is easy to use when the gender is unknown.
>>2317601
>I have yet to see this use for their
https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Singular_they#Older_usage_by_respected_authors
>>2315080
eyes are waaaay too close together. one eye width apart anon, even on animu.
>>2317601
don't talk about a language you don't know. If english is your mother tongue, you should be ashamed of yourself. Never heard of their, complains about it. Never heard of someone exposing their stupidity in such a way.
>>2317388
yea that's it. The artist I was looking for is really similar to that I guess. They have youtube videos of their paintings up with their own music on them. I remember one of them being of some monster girls in school uniforms and a big guy in the center.
>>2316587
neato
Gotta study more anime artists before attempting anime next time .
>>2317874
i referenced your look and it really helped clean up mine
Fuck. I hope this is better than my previous attempt.
thoughts on this?
>>2318186
could use more gesture.
>>2318069
what's with that face? i hope this is not that undershit game
>>2318197
ur mad is showing :^)
>>2318196
Looks too stiff?
>>2318231
if you would redo the hands. the stiffens is there. make them flowy make dem womanly make them like waterfall make her hold dem daggers elegantly.
>>2318196
I second this. Maybe try to find a reference pose, not to copy from but just to get a feel for how the body balances with one leg up, and then exaggerate that a bit before building upon it.
Trying to digital ink, just a lot of wasted time.
Too lazy to finish turtle.fish.paint study
>>2318400
turtle.fish.paint is a two person circle where (i believe) turtle does the writing, rough page layouts as well as inks, while fish does the pencils.
try looking up each's individual works and studying from there
>>2318069
hey, duder, me again, lookin a lot better than last time, still a few small things to address, but i'll "spoon feed" as the kids say in a bit, after i get back from thing, you're like right at that level i feel best equipt to help, seeing as i'm just a bit more "skilled" than you (i hope that doesn't sound arrogant, hahaha, i just mean that all the mistakes you're making are things i've only recently overcome in the past year or so)
so Im planing to come back to the /ic/ school, can you see what are some of my weak points at this moment so I can focus my studies?
>>2318518
and some other sketches
>>2317898
Glad it helped (and was decent looking enough to ref).
>>2318480
Huh, I never realized turtle.fish.paint was a duo. Looked at Fish's blog for reference today for pic related, but I have no idea what Turtle's own work looks like.
>>2318480
Nah, you don't come across as arrogant. I appreciate any help I can get.
I've been struggling with stylization
>people as bad as rinfag have an artist job
what's your excuse, senpai?
>>2318743
i don't want to work.
>>2318743
I don't practice properly, senpai.
Doing a SZZ and Bayo fanart, just have the main body outline down, thoughts?
>>2318994
How can one not see how wrong this looks?
>>2318994
Just like one of my japanese yaoi mangas
>>2315089
everything this dude does looks exactly the fucking same
