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Post your nsfw, critique work and so on.
Furry is allowed, however do not over indulge on the subject of furries or their culture. Unnecessarily reporting these anons are strongly discouraged. This thread is dedicated to helping anons improve their erotic drawings and paintings.
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>>2294033
>obligatory post complaining about how OPs picture is, according to my superior and individual taste, not the best drawing from the last thread.
>sentence where I proceeed to call OP a homosexual

There. Now that's out of the way, let's get going
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What got you into drawing porn?

I like butts so I draw butts.
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I dont do porn but I had a good idea if you want a certain fanbase.
Speed-o-sonic x Link
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>>2294033
kudos to the artist. The typography is one of the best i've seen in /ic/. Cant say anything about the poorly selected background though.
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>>2294043
Normal art overwhelms me.
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>>2294038
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>>2294038
>>2294090
metakek
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>>2293961
Manga Studio 5/Clip Studio Paint (same program).
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It literally feels like there's no other place to get feedback on this subject matter. Lots of places there to help if your work is "clean" but at the moment, this is the only porn advice thread that gives legitimate and dare I say it, helpful advice on your work. Even if it's just sparingly.
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>>2294033
Who's the artist? The asshole looks great desu.
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>>2294128
Our lord and saviour, Kyle
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>>2294089
eyes don't just get smaller due to perceptive stop it with the anime logic why are you people adding so many lines to muscles? you're making it look more rough\less sexual and attractive, look at some comic books to learn to draw more female like stomachs if you're so dedicated to "muh style" and her skull is still broken you...butt pirate.
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>>2294128
clearly its kyle desu sempaichi, hurry! if you ask him for his tumbrl now people wont bother you later.
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>>2294137
Style? What style, I don't have a style. If you call that style, then you give me too much credit. The -after- pic is a result of editing to match another person's redlines. So if you know something I clearly don't, then Redlines please and thank you.
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>>2294137
Actually I'll think I'll scrap it and move on, I've gotten what I've needed out of it, and done more work on it than it deserved as is.
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How do draw better ?
Any simple tips for drawing women ?
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>>2294150
1 go to the beginner thread you can post tits in there don't worry.

2 everyday do one hour of figure drawing. http://artists.pixelovely.com/practice-tools/figure-drawing/

3 download these videos of glen vilpu teaching shit. start with the head then go to the body then follow with motion https://mega.nz/#F!2RARFaLA!VTiQb6eRXfV4V6mYQ6FJTA

4 and this is the bitch, every day do at least 3 hours of drawing come back in a year and then look for james gourney. DON'T LOOK UP LOOMIS you need to have basic to intermediate knowledge of art to use loomis he is not beginner friendly. ask around the threads people will more than likely have links to pdfs of the books.
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>>2294150
Keep it simple, use basic shapes for construction. mostly spheres, ovals, and cylinders

Substance Over Style

Keep straight lines to a minimum when drawing women

Draw lightly

Use references for what suits your needs, and use your head to fill in the blanks when refs can't help you. When in doubt, seek a second opinion.

Don't get too attached to your work, you can always do better even when you think it's your best work at that moment. Often just by re-drawing the exact same thing right after the other again and again.

Set a standard of quality for yourself, find an artist that has the qualities that you want to see in your own work. It's why people say study the masters or long-time professionals.

Lastly, don't hate yourself. You're gonna start out with terrible work. People will mock you, people will be indifferent to you, you'll get suck-ups, you'll be lied to, You're gonna question yourself every time you pick up your tools. You'll think you're a fool for trying to get better.

But you're not.

If you're serious about your work, even if it's to draw fetishy smut, Keep drawing no matter what you or anyone else tells you. Think of where you are now, and where you want to be, and keep reminding yourself of where you want to be.
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>>2293943
>move on to other layer in retardshop
>ctl-z on new layer
>it takes you back to previous layer

There is a fix for that http://www.shaddyconceptart.com/download at the bottom of the page "StepBackwardSmart"
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Can someone upload those comics where mikufag got raped? There is this panel where she was drawn choking on 3 dicks, need that for ref.
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>>2294336

>referencing badly drawn shit

Need to get your priorities str8 m8 :^)
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>>2294360
>>2294336
what mikufag comics and where can i find them?
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>>2294336
>comics where mikufag got raped
sauce desu senpai
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>>2294336
>mikufag
>she
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What is your opinion on this guy ?
http://shiinsart.net/shiin/
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Quick sketch i did in 6 hours, critique is welcome.
I have just got into drawing and i'm not good at drawing hands
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>>2294393
> 6 hours

What.
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>>2294395
Is that a lot, or...
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>>2294336
How come i never heard of this?
What's with mikufag worship lately
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>>2294392
Pretty much shit tier.

>mfw successful
all my sides
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>>2294392
>$4,070.01 per month
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>>2294415
gotta find your gross porn niche I guess
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>>2294418
> dominative guy with a big dick and girl with big breasts and ass that keeps repeating how huge it is
> gross porn niche

Eh. This fetish is common as fuck though.
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>>2294336
>>2294363
>>2294375
Sure why not, was pretty easy to refind in archives
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>>2294396
just clicked this thread for the first time. Curiosity got the best of me.

Yes, thats five hours too much. I really think a person couldn't draw that little in 6 hours if that tried.

Are you trolling us?
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>>2294452
yes that one. thanks
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>>2294135
Kyle who? I never post/lurk on the porn threads. I just saw that ass and got in here. I don't know who he is.
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>>2294472
nice try kyle. stop creating drama around you youre fucking irrelevant to /ic/ just like keppok
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>>2294444
>>2294448
>>2294449
>>2294452
why is mikufag a squid?
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>>2294479
>le colon, caret, left facing round bracket meme
your lack of creativity is showing kyle
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>>2294477
Just tell me who the fuck Kyle is.
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>>2294497
You're not fooling anyone, Kyle
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What did I fuck up this time?
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>>2294033
I'd argue against that vein, I think it looks weird as fuck, hope is not just me.
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>>2294538
lighting
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>>2294552
That one I already knew.
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>>2294538
The jizz could be a lot better. I just don't know how to help you fix it.
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>>2294569
I'm not going to fix anything. I could just use some feedback for future reference.
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>>2294161
>every day do at least 3 hours of drawing

Impossible. Im an adult.
I'll gladly be bad at drawing forever...

pic related took me almost 2h
and still look like shit
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does the artist in ops picture have any websites i can visit
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>>2294392

This motherfucker gets 4k for drawing the same shitty work I mean jesus he draws 'fanart' without even capturing any of the character likeness he's the scummiest of the low

And he earns 4 bloody k just kill me now guys
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>>2294392
Good on him. I'm not even mad.
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I'm starting to get lazy/tired quickly again
not good
I guess it's because I've been focusing on something else more than drawing
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>>2294619
Face reminds of a Takatsu character.

I would put the penis and butthole more to the back of his pelvis, they seem too far forward (he lacks a perineum)
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>>2294622
Oops, the penis shouldn't be behind the perineum but you get what I mean.
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>>2294622
>>2294625
ok
also what's a takatsu
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>>2294628
A doujinshi artist

Example pic
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>>2294632
I get the feeling that her pelvis is slightly thin, not sure though.

I would move the shadow on her butt a bit higher, it looks like the light source is very close to her skin and it clashes with the light on her head.
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>>2294632
see >>2294326
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>>2294637
Here's basically what I mean. I would also try to flesh out her vagina a bit better somehow. My lines are just how it struck me, I'm not a good artist though.

Also I would try too look up some way to make her boots look a bit more leathery.
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>>2294538
Left arm should have foreshortening. Image as a whole is very flat.
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>>2294592
She has goatee?
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>>2294456
Well i had refined it many times by re drawing parts multiple times to get the best result.
No i am not trolling anyone.
And i didn't do the 6 hours in one session but rather during 3 days.
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>>2294701
Whose left arm?
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>>2294712
I suggest you find yourself a less time consuming hobby.
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>>2294829
Left girl, her left arm. The one resting on the bed. She doesn't HAVE to rest on it, but the whole thing is very flat not just because of pillow-shading but also lack of any foreshortening.
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>>2294833
I see what you are saying. Thanks.
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>>2294592
>dont polish shit
>if you think its bad, drop it
>take notes on why its bad
>try different methods on improving your next attempt
>look at some refs
>take notes on what makes the refs appealing
>apply it
>apply all of the above
>rinse and repeat

isnt this what /ic/ wants?
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>>2294161
>DON'T LOOK UP LOOMIS
What makes you say this? Every time I've asked as a beginner on this board, everyone tells me to start with Loomis.
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>>2294712
Stop doing that. Just, stop. Instead of spending six hours drawing, erasing, drawing, erasing... spend 6 hours drawing the entire thing over and over. One of them is bound to come out good. Additionally, you will become keenly aware of what you need to improve on. Go improve that.
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>>2294830
I have a lot of free time.
[Emphasis on "a lot"]

>>2294867
I will do this, thank you sincerely.
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>>2294872
And I still suggest you spend it in a better way. It's obvious that either drawing isn't for you or you are doing something terribly wrong.
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>>2294866
Loomis is objectively boring and useless. Vilppu, Hampton, Bridgman, Hogarth, and Scott Eaton are all better. In before parrots try to defend it.
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>>2294161
Thanks anon, been looking for these because campus throttles torrents.

>>2294866
>>2294891
I think Loomis is very hit or miss for people and may be too advanced for beginners.

It has some good stuff if you can get into it, but a lot of people don't realize it's from the 1940s and a rehash of even earlier techniques.

Some people nowadays might explain Loomis even better but they may not be so easily available.
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>>2294452
i want to rape mikufag
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>>2294452
Is this a different comic because i remember some guy made a hentai about mikufag and he got raped in a car.
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>>2294643
Okay great! Thanks for the feedback!
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>>2294538
the pattern of the cloth looks so shitty and for fucks sake, a persons shadow doesnt totally block out whats under it, the perspective doesnt work well
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crit plx
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>>2294150
learn how breasts work
those are the most unnatural looking breasts i have ever seen
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>>2294956
I kinda like the legs, I think that they give erotism to the piece, but the rest of the anatomy is relatively poor : you can improve in this area.
Another possible improvement is the values : there is a lack of contrast, this give a boring feeling.
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>>2294949
It looks like you are mad about something. I think you should calm down.
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>>2295033
>being this reactionary
>knee-jerk automatic "calm down" response

>>>/b/
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>>2294538
You have forgotten some shading. The redheads overlapping body parts creates no cast shadows on the purple and red dildos, you should ad that. Also, I can't figure out what the pink haired girls right arm is doing... is she resting her hand against the blanket? In that case there should be some cast shadow (and possibly foreshortening to imply that) If she's holding it up you should probably ad a lil' visible shade peaking up from the blanket by her shoulder, I dunno...

And as others have said, I can't detect the light source and it has a flattening effect. Just from looking at the red and brown dildo at the top I'm getting confused about it!

Other then that, the girls are hot, the color palette nice and the cum looks really good. I like how it's soaking in to the blanket. But the cum on the figures could benefit from a tiny bit of shading too, just to give it some volume and mass.
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>>2294632
You need to define the light source! Also, her butt looks flat, make it a bit higher/taller, that should help.
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>>2294970
ok, thanks
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>>2294970
Noted. Not sure why this makes you so mad though.
>>2295072
Damn, Now I do want to fix it.
Thanks for the pointers. I agree about everything. I worked on this for so long in the end I got lazy and forgetful. Great comment. Thanks.
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>>2294889
The thing i'm doing wrong is propably that i draw on a phone.
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>>2295114
Another pointer that you should either stop trying to get better at drawing, or stop trying to get valid critique from people that have better things to do than losing their time with you.
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>>2295124
I am definently not sorry for wasting your or anyone elses time.
Thank you and goodbye sir, have a great life.
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Planning on redoing this.

Anyone have opinions to make it better, colors, anatomy, lighting, linework? I was told that she seemed a bit muscular, which I didn't want.


>>2294043
It helps me vent out my sexual frustration in a productive way. Sadly, my artwork is at its best when I'm drawing something sexual.
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>>2295138
Also, yeah, I fucked up on the shadows in the upper right. Any advice on that, too, would be helpful.
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>>2295138
Stop wasting your time on this and start learning your damn fundamentals. This is atrocious to look at.
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>>2295137
You must be some kind of master troll. I can tell by the pixels.
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>>2295138
>Grey shadows
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>>2295141
Dude, chill, lol. It was already finished for months, I know I messed up on it. No need to get so angry.

>>2295172
>Using greentext instead of leaving an actual crit
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>>2294487
Likes miku, avatarfags as squid.
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>>2294396
Im completely new to drawing and I don't know how that drawing could possibly take more than 20 minutes.
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>>2295141
>>2295138
I don't actually think it's that bad! I think what it's really lacking is appeal, which is pretty important. The disconnect between the knowledge of anatomy/posing and the line quality makes me believe they were drawn from reference, but even so they're not too atrocious. I feel the choice to use markers is also greatly hindering the drawings, which again just boils down to appeal.

For now, I'd probably ditch the markers entirely, or otherwise work with a very limited palette.

Your linework also could use some work, it just feels a little heavy handed in most places. Too literal, if that makes sense. You should experiment a bit with how many lines you really need to put down to get your point across. Generally, less lines will make something look more sleek and slender, and is, in my opinion, more appealing. The reason why some people may have found your drawing too muscular is because of the lines you used to define the clavicle, the deltoid, the lats, the abs, etc. This also applies to the face here, which is fairly anatomically accurate but just not very pleasant to look at due to all the lines (eyelids, centreline, etc.). Also consider where it's really necessary to define the fur. I've seen most people stick to bonier parts of the body to show fluff, like the elbows, the knees, the chest, and maybe the shoulders. Which is what you've got going on here! Some inappropriate places might be on the breasts and the underside of the arm. The way you have small tufts going all the way down the leg on the right drawing is also not very appealing to look at. Most people would prefer to see a more blemish-free, "perfect" pair of legs than some with squiggles randomly drawn on.

There's other stuff to work on too, like choosing appeal over realism (ie. for the breasts and butt), but it's not a bad start. If there's one thing, I would say for sure is to ditch the markers for now, they just come off as very amateurish, lol.
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>>2294444
>>2294448
>>2294449
>>2294452
in this comic squid seems to be the kind of guy who keeps screaming "loomis and study anatomy" to people, this is not only sad but ironic considering he barely improves.
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>>2294043
because there wasnt porn of what i wanted to see porn of
so i made it myself
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>>2294538
if there is no man in sight why is there so much cum? they would be dead from dehydration. like...yeah its smut but chill with the cum or at least make it piss, thats hot.
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>>2294866
i just told you..its a little to advance for a true beginner..plus he is kinda boring so why go for reading a book when you can see videos where the application is being made?
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If you faggots could stop bullying mikufag thatll be nice.

he just deleted his pixiv just so you know
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>>2295267
hahahaa
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>>2295267
It was a throw away account no big deal I wanted to see the number of views based on using absurd tags and I also wanted to be a complete dick like Dobson to test his philosophy on "no publicity is bad publicity" even if it is from negative attention but I couldn't be a jerk in front of someone I look up to that managed to find me.
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>>2295281
squid why cant i wake up and be you? why squid? is it because i'm not a /pol/ac?
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>>2295289
http://boards.4chan.org/pol/thread/56630774#top

You start today by monitoring potential happenings
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>>2295290
what do you intent to do when the happening arrives? you like all of /pol/ is powerless against it, give up and enjoy the decline.
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>>2295072
Last thread, someone gave them the exact same critique before they put colors and they ignored it. People told them about the shading and positioning and it looks like those same things are there except now rendered with color. Honestly it looks like they came to show off instead of getting critique.
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>>2294592
never give up you know you have the time.
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How do I do breasts swelling up?
I just can't get the fucking weight/volume fluctuation to transition nicely.

Speaking of weight; how do you prefer to draw chubby gals (and guys)?
>I personal start by just doodling spirals.
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>>2295322
I actually changed a lot of stuff that people mentioned me last time. Please, don't spread lies about me just like that.
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a neko girl giving head
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>>2295509
I like your work as always sir.
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>>2295579
Poor girl needs some BBC to replace that tiny asian boy peepee.
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torso is pretty fucked up upon second look
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>>2295578
It's not a lie though. Literally you ignored most of what people told you last time and people are repeating the same points. And spread lies? nigga it's an anonymous message board. I don't know who you are. It's not like I'm going out of my way to gossip about you when this is only the second time im seeing your work.
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>>2295599
Then sorry for overreacting, I guess.
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>>2295586
um... Seriously wtf?
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>>2294033
I did my best, but Im not trying to polish shit. Hows the line weight?
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>>2295586
Why u do this?....
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>>2295586
cant we start banning furries again or just allow a furry thread?
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ehck
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>>2295775
If we have to ban furries, we also have to ban futa, anime, foot fetish, farting, pissing, shit play, etc. I don't like any of those things, but I never complain about them.
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Hey, can anyone redline me structure/construction for this pose?

I've been trying to redline it for 10 minutes now and I can't make sense of the hips, and placing those is a major weakpoint for me
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>>2295786
her clothing is literally her skin
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>>2295786
the only thing I think looks weird is the left arm and hand
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This might sound retarded but does anyone out there wish they could stop drawing porn for awhile but just can't. I feel sad sometimes because my only motivation seems to be getting better at drawing stuff that I can't even show anybody I know. I enjoy it but I wish I enjoyed other things just as much. /blogpost
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>>2295781
its cute
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>>2295586
For the torso, it's not that ducked up in my mind, just push her right shoulder behind her head and it will correct the angle I think.
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>>2295586
Why does the sucked one have no legs?

>>2295856
>her

Also DB(specially Z) is shit. But I really like your rendering of muscles.
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Does anyone have any experience with the whentai website? I'm kind of interested but the fact that none of the usual suspects seem to be there makes me think this is some sort of Chinese sweat factory.
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>>2295675
The line weight is too homogeneous from front to back. Try to have heavier line on the front. And try as well to tapper it a little at the beginning and end of each curve. Most drawing software can do that automatically for you (if well configured).
Two points for which you did not asked :
1) it is usual to resize the picture to around 1000pix before submitting it.
2) change your line texture, in fact you may want to remove texture while working on your line control
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>>2295785
comparing furries, which is a lesser form of zoophilia to anime, foot fetish and futa ( which im not a fan of), but ya,ban farting, pissing,shit play as well.
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Still working on this nonsense.
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>>2295509
I had better idea and it turned into something like this
>>2295580
Nice to hear that
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>>2296365
And I like it. But your line weight are messed up at the moment I think, aren't they ? I mean, I don't see the logic of your heavy lines ?
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>>2296446
wat
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>>2296446
AEUHEAUHEAUEAU
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>>2294138
That's legit horrifying
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>>2296430
who will the characters be
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Is getting 3200 followers on tumblr in 6 months a good achievement or is it normal?
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>>2296939

Blog pls
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>>2294137
>penis
>her
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>>2296970
>this argument
>this board

Get out.
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where to make money with porndrawings?
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>>2297004
Show your art around -> get noticed -> take commissions/sell your art.

Yep, it's really that simple.
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Still struggling with anatomy and perspective, but at least the shading is getting there... to my eyes at least.
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does this even look right
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>>2297014
He asked WHERE to make money, not HOW.

>>2297004
Hentai Foundry and FurAffinity are a good places to post your work and look for customers.
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>>2297122
well ok whatever
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>>2296939
That's... a pretty good achievement! I've been on Tumblr for twice as long and I only have 1500 followers! What do you mainly draw? (I'll understand if you don't want to share blog here)
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>>2297147
Nah, It's no problem, I think most of the porn thread users know it by now.
bbc-chan.tumblr.com

I'm asking, because I'd like to know if I'm doing it right, or should I try to advertise my stuff better. I am planning on starting a patreon in the near future, but for now I just want to get a following of some sort.
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coloring the fudge china

now if I could just color everything else decently.
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>>2297178
I'm following a bunch of fairly talented artists that get excited when they reach 2000 followers. And they've been there a lot longer. So yeah, 3200 in 6 months, that's pretty fucking good.
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>>2297198
keep at it nigger
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>>2294538
Splooge looks too blurry, like you've painted it with a blurry brush rather than with a hard-edge brush.

Paint it with a hard edge brush, then erase parts afterwards and smooth edges where needed.

It looks more like coconut jelleton than sperm.
Also be more creative with your splat shapes, the current ones look like something from a Splatoon poster.

I linked you Doxxy's tutorial a while back, so perhaps follow that some more.
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>>2295586
can you give me some tips on your rendering? do you put hard edges first then use soft brush ? plz tell as much as u can.
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>>2296432
True enough. Its been sitting for long enough that I'm not certain why either.
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>>2297198
Kep dear please work on vaginas a bit more
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>>2297198
Awesome.
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>>2296939
For a pornfag. That's nothing tbqh.
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>>2297351
How much would it be good then?
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>>2297360
The real question is who cares and why? Those numbers are a trap more than anything.
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Why are clothes so fucking hard to draw holy shit
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>>2297360
I don't think tumblr numbers matter unless they're more than several thousands. Many of these numbers will be reblog-only blogs rather than potential costumers.
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sketcheroo

>>2297198
looking good is that you keppok
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how do I finish comics
I can finish wips but I can't do comics for some reason
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>>2297247
I'm typically rendering in 3-5 hours so I try to have a pretty speedy method. From flat colors it goes
>occlusion shadows
>typical cast shadows
>an overrender layer, usually set on normal for all highlights and bouncelights and stuff. If the character has really complicated colors I'll just use overlay instead. A lot of times I'll use both.

then there will be layers scattered around for specific things, occasionally luminosity layers for specific effects and stuff, layers for sweat and goop. Top it off with a couple big broad overlay layers with slightly tinted whites and then one big final overlay layer of a bunch of different colors for variety and you've got a method that looks okay for the time it takes.

In terms of brushes and brushstrokes its all default shit, brush at 50% and water tool for 90%, airbrush to add colors non destructively.

my way of rendering is honestly stupidly formulaic though. Its great for pumping out commissions and making mad money but I've really been stagnating this year. Once my student loans are paid off I'm going to chill and try to get good haha.
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>>2294393
>Quick sketch
>6 hours
A "quick" sketch is 30 min tops m8.
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>>2297831
>two anuses
For what purpose?
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>>2297849
To be able to shit on people with dumb questions while getting fucked up their ass.
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>>2297850
>simple question triggers furfag
Good show.
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>>2297786
I dig your chubs anon
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>>2297852
>simple quesition
it's not a simple question. it's a pretty dumb one actually. it's like asking how can superman fly, or why can disney's animal characters talk. basically retarded in it's essence.
>furfag
don't start assuming just to look less stupid. your question simply triggered someone with a low tolerance for dumb people.
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>>2297859
>still triggered
Give it a rest furfag. Work on your art.
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>>2297859
>this asspained over someone questioning a donut steel
Kill yourself.
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>>2297849
why didn't you also ask why those pumpkins look like they are alive.
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>>2297863
>still this dumb
>>2297864
>asspained
if that's what you call someone who doesn't like dumb questions, I'm totally cool with that.
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>>2296427
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>>2297955
stop polishing this turd and go draw less complicated stuff.
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Am I the only one who thinks that Shadman is the best bad artist in the world?

Everything he does is absolute garbage-level drawing, but beautifully made garbage.

It's like if someone took poo as their raw material and sculpted the poo into a big cartoon poo, but to do it they used the finest poo-sculpting tools and took the utmost care and years of hard-earned skill in poo-craftsmanship in order to make that poo into the best poo you've ever seen and you look at it and you're like "this is literally just shit, but what attention to detail, I mean it's horrible and it stinks, but... huh".
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>>2298117
He's not even good at that. A true poo sculptor could make David out of poo, and his art doesn't even come close.
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>>2298117
I really don't understand how he could ever get so big. Personally, I find his tastes shit, and it really baffles me how his style could attract so many people.
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>>2297917
>still triggered over a simple question
This is why people hate furfags
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>>2297198
Sensei, would you recommend starting with lots of realistic humans studies to get the anatomy down, or just throwing oneself into stylization and adding logical anatomy as you go along?
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>>2297917
Why are you on your edges today man you need sleep.
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>>2298187
This series of exchanges gave me a chuckle. I mean, in furanon's defense, why give a character four arms? So they can do things a character with two arms can't. It's pretty simple.
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How do I become part of a paysite like Slipshine or whatever?
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>>2298438
This may be the only case in which "git gud" is an appropriate response, but you also need to be popular.
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>>2298440
So basically you just wait for them to reach out to you, there's no applying to join?
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>>2298448
As of right now, no
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>>2298456
Gay. Alright, thanks.
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>>2298438
>check this Slipshine thing where you supposedly need to be good to post
>"contains adult material" screen drawing is awful
>comics inside are a collection of pseudomanga stuff, tumblr nintendo fanartists and other amenities
you fucking what mate. this shit is barely better than hentai foundry, if it still exists
>This may be the case in which you need to be popular
ftfy
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>>2298484
I never said anything about needing to be good, that was the other dude. I just wanted to know how you contact them about it.
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>>2298496
No biggie dude. look, I've found a treasure!
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>>2298496
On the site, there's a contact section that links their email address, but they say they're not accepting unsolicited comics atm. You might check Sinnersgate, which is a similar site, but I don't know about them.
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>>2298500
Uh, ok?
>>2298501
Okay thanks, I guess I'll look at them, but I kind of have a feeling no matter which one I go to it's gonna be the same closed door deal.
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>>2298503
>Uh, ok?
Dude what. you don't know this comic? seriously?
its regarded probably as the most foul webcomic ever appeared on the internet
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>>2298508
Okay but I don't know what you're trying to say. Quality was never a concern, just solicitation. That's it.
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>>2298513
You're an extremely boring person mate.
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>>2298516
Ok.
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>>2296430
>>2296873
Nobody relevant.
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I'm trying to get critiques related to the line weights in this pic.Other critiques are also welcome as well.
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>>2298614
Updated after getting some critiques on overall anatomy.
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>>2298735
Overall anatomy is still shit. It hurts me just looking at that back or, better said, absence of it. Your foreshortening is atrocious.
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Just a doodle
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>>2298764
>namefag
>2048x1536
>shit art
You guys think he's a troll, or just that big of a newfag?
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>>2298772
>troll
>newfag
He just might be a newfag. Unless you really want someone to troll this thread...
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>>2298777
I find trolls pretty useless, so no.
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>>2298777
Newfag here. Sorry guys
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>>2294043
because i like boobs.
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>>2294089
tumblr?
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>>2294393
fix the head and ears, it made me think you're drawing batman having a tail instead of just furry
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>>2294960
it's literally defying gravity
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>>2294150
CrossHatchFag is that you nigger?
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>>2298787
Who in their right mind would want to see more of this guy's art?
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any crits before i upload this on my facebook?
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>>2298808
did not not just ask to see his art?
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>>2298814
her tits are too big
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>>2298777
why does it say "boy"
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>>2298814
I mean, I can try to understand you urge to troll random people and all. But, aren't you even a little bit concerned that what you are doing is just a stupid way of wasting your own time?
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>>2298814
her thighs and body are too small making the girl look like shes underage.
The dick is too big, its impossible for that to fit inside her without causing bodily harm
she doesnt seem to enjoy the intercourse making the scene look like a rape

please fix these
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>>2298840
Are you saying you want more?
Because i can do lots more.

>>2298843
point taken m8
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>>2298845
Nah. I don't want more, since it's shit tier stuff. I am simply saying that either stop trolling and start taking art seriously if you are really interested in becoming "someone", or stop trolling and start pursuing other interests in your life. What you are doing right now is a meaningless waste of your own time.
It's just an advice. In the end you are the one who decides what is more important in life. Trolling or being serious.
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>>2298845
>i can do lots more.
it's quite a shame you will never be able to do better instead of just more. isn't it?
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>>2298814
fucking stupid boner reacting to cp
stop this fucking shit you sick fuck
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>>2298847
>>2298850
>>2298851
>being this butthurt about drawings
Deviantart is over there next to reddit
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>>2298814
more pls
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>>2298854
>butthurt
I don't think this word means what you think it means.
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>>2298855
yes, let's bring this thread's quality even lower.
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>>2298861
Is shitpost art not of higher quality than simple shitpost?
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>>2298861
>implying its not already rock bottom
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>>2298859
people told me when someone wrote a paragraph worth of bitching that person is maximally asspained
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>>2294043
I enjoy the female form and hoped to make money from my hobby.

I have a lot of trouble drawing humans though and would prefer to just draw monsters and magical items for ever.
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>>2298865
yeah, that word definitely means something else.
also, stop believing whatever people tell you.
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>>2298814
pls teach how to draw loli
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>>2298870
you're asspained
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>>2297218
I wanted to make it look like it has been partially absorbed by the rug. I made it less blurry on the bare skin for example. But there I failed because I didn't add enough shadows to it, so the shape of it looks too undefined in a lot of places. I also tend not to use tutorials of any kind because I rather experiment all this stuff by myself. I think I learn better like this.
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Loli's banned here, isn't it?
Now, if someone would happen to get the urge to mess with drawing loli anyway- where could it be posted?
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>>2298877
cripplejew thunderwheels' has /loli/ and it has a drawthread.
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>>2298878
Thanks for the info.
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