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This is my latest project.

This one's called "Crooked"
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"Bodybuilders"
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"Adam's Apple"
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"Fencing"
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>>2289874
"Bloody Stool"
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>>2289875
"Bitter Fruit"
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>>2289876
"Fishing"
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"Plastic"
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"Acid"
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>>2289880
that one above this one's called "Camel"

this one's called "Cured"
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"Bad Luck"
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"Racecar"
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"Doghouse"
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"Let the Right One In"
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"Bone to Pick ( Skeleton Key)"
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"Black Jesus"

that's all of them. Hope you guys like some of them
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>>2289893
best desu senpai baka
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thanks I couldn't read the filenames

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>>2289891
I really really like these ideas can I share them with my banana?
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>>2289991
idk if that means your going to masturbate to them but sure, share away. glad you liked them

>>2289893
suck my dick
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You have these simple ideas, and instead of complicating them, you just throw them at us. They are self explanatory and clear, social critique and satire. I appreciate stuff like that. It takes balls and dedication. I still think you are unpolished. The way you paint doesn't correspond with your straight forward messages. I would like to see more confidence. And I think you should take your messages one step further, really blast an explosion in the audiences face. Be vulgar and cynical. If that's what you wanna do.
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This entire thread could have been consolidated into the sketchbook/traditional thread.

As for my opinion most of it is lazy shit. But some of them are okay I guess. Do more studies and focus less on trying to make a "point" until you actually know how to use those paints.
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jesus christ op these are such played out generic ideas how do you have a sense of satisfaction when youre finished. Like people who get tattoos of something they found on google images, ew.
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>>2290046
>it's bad

wow fuck you anon

>its good

haha thanks have a nice day god bless :)))

fuck you op you suck dont come here to get your dick sucked over your shitty paintings.
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Seen your work before. I always like seeing painters post on /ic/.

I think these are the stronger works:
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>>2289876

I see most interesting quality of paint in those.
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>>2290093
they're original ideas based on existing concepts. there's a huge amount of satisfaction associated with doing original work. I like writing original concepts I don't like just painting space marines.

Even if these seem simple it takes a lot of effort to write 17 original concepts. Some are more complicated than others. I'd say the one's you pointed out are some of the simpler ones but were no less satisfying to make.

Also I'd argue that constellation one is pretty complicated. A constellation of a salt shaker spilled over that has the stars as the salt, and it meaning bad luck so a meteor is about to hit the planet. That's way more complicated than say the fencing one.
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>>2290105
i agree. some of them are pretty similar but this is my level of painting right now. I was more ready to paint these now than I was at the start of the year when I wrote most of these. I wasn't gonna give it another year I wanted to move onto writing some new stuff

>>2290096
suck my dick
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>>2290117
the problem is that youre trying to be deep when youre not a deep person, anon. It shows in your paintings. They feel very manufactured, like they would be on a line of T shirts and sold in a Hot Topic with some shitty band name
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>>2290120
no thanks i'd suck out all your shitty skills and they'd probably ruin my paintings for weeks :(
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>>2290122
and remind me again what is deep about a doghouse with a guard dog? or a race car that's the same backwards and forwards? or a bloody stool?

just enjoy the paintings. theres nothing wrong with getting the joke. These aren't some grand statement. They are just meant to be amusing and maybe look pretty. These are practice for bigger projects in the future and more complicated stuff that is actually "deep". For now though it's just a bloody stool because I find poop jokes funny.

i do wish more artists made stuff like this though. some people are so scared of getting ideas stolen they never write anything
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>>2289869
hahaha. is that fat ass your mom? fuck off OP and stop trying to be creative. it's not for everyone i guess lmao.
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cheesy, corny etc
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>>2290140
the master has spoken! thank you for gracing me with your creative presence. Just reading that post has put me back on the straight and narrow. Now where's my tablet I gotta draw some space marines

>>2290141
some of them i'd say are pretty cheesy yeah
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>>2290143
no no, not some- ALL of them are cheesy. i can't appreciate the terrible punchlines
>"Racecar"
>a racecar with two fronts? whats up with that?
>wait for it.. because its a palindrome! (<<-punchline) get it?? ayy lmao
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>>2289880
not your original idea / 10
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>>2290155
Everyone keeps saying that about that one. Can u point me towards where that ones been done before or are u just guessing. Cause I'd never seen it
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ITT: OP defends his work from any negativity and stunts his own growth
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>>2290171
i think ill be fine but thanks for the concern.

the things that really get me are the "unoriginal" comments. These are a lot of things but unoriginal isn't one of them.
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>>2290174
maybe if you have the visual library of a 13 year old who just learned about deviantart
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>>2289893

> look guys I'm original
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>>2290246
alright. we clearly have different definitions of original. for me it's when you're the first to do something. you're the original.

post what you guys consider original concepts
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>>2289869
theser are so basic, uninspired and boring. maybe you can paint and draw a little, but that is not worth anything if your ideas are horrible. maybe your mom or your class like them, but they don't know any better...
btw, you can really see the quality of your oaintings dropping and rising by how close you sticked to the original / the reference. the camel and the stool are pretty nice, but that's because they were replicated. maybe continue doing that and get better. then think about your ideas again.
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>>2290314
the stool and water bottle i painted from life. the hanging people, the skeleton key one, and the fishing one are done from imagination. and i disagree i think some of these are complicated concepts, and complicated paintings. most of them are simple and meant to be understood quickly but that's not a negative. A simple idea is infinitely better and more difficult than no idea at all, and it gives context to understand the joke structure for more complicated ones, especially more complicated ones I do in the future. I need to be able to write simple jokes in order to make more complicated ones.

>>2290056
this guy gets it. And yeah jokes about sex and death are usually the most impactful, so hopefully for my next one I come up with some more adult images. I dipped into that a bit with this one with two pieces about racism, and a few about death, but I'd like to have a whole collection of more mature pieces.

I live with my parents and they don't necessarily like seeing me making stuff that's vulgar or personal but I feel like I'm moving more and more in that direction.
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>>2290171
90% of people on this board can't draw anyways, so that's a 90% chance any critique here is worthless.
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Don't listen to these fags
I liked this ones
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And this one made me chuckle
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>>2289869
semi-decent pop art yet in need of better execution

>>2289886
actually funny

>>2289876
aggressively ignorant gang commentary

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t-shirt designs
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>>2291790

Thundercat is my neighbor.
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>>2291813
tell him i like his work
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>>2291790
>a dog has a pet dog! did I mention they're both DOGS?
>funny
choose one
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>>2291981
im sure its because one is black and the other is white, i dont need to explain the rest
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Many of them are like those lame dad jokes put into images.
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>>2291813
oh really?
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oneliners
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>>2291981
"BEWARE OF DOG" is the funny part
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