Criticize it, /ic/.
>>2276834
>>2276847
Yes
>flat facial features
>mouth too high
>colors are too watery
Look at some facial proportions before stylizing.
>>2276852
I don't stylize intentionally.
>>2276874
Then add more values and focus on learning how to construct realistically. Study some portraits and try to construct them instead of drawing what you think you see.
What are you trying to get out of this critique?
Always, ALWAYS ask yourself before making any piece. What is the point I'm trying to get across. I don't mean that in some faggot philosophical, modern art way, I want to know what you are trying to get out of this.
Better understanding of facial anatomy? Expressions? Do you want to make better animu? Light & Color?
Whatchu want nigga
>>2276879
Thanks Anon, I'll get to it.
>>2276884
I don't know Anon, I just want to know what people think of this style, then tell me what I can do differently or better. Shading and color are very difficult for me right now. Please tell me what I can do to improve those.
>>2276834
Is it just me, or is something about the arm really messed up?
I really like the colors.
>>2276834
>>2276847
>>2276903
Anon, don't even think about "style" at this point.
You need to get a working grip on the fundamentals before you can tackle stylizing, and from the looks of the OP pic, you haven't started.
The eyes are too spread apart, and are not leveled at all.
The nose and the mouth look nothing like the model's.
Her hand looks kind of like a deformed foot, and the fingers have absolutely no length variety.
The model is clearly hunched over in your ref pic. Your pic has your character in a similar pose, but fails to convey that she takes up any 3 dimensional space; everything just looks flat.
You made her arm severely short.
Also, stop with the nasty ass chicken scratch; draw more confidently and defined.
Seriously anon, stop what ever it is you're doing, and go pick up an art book from the art book thread.
Loomis, Vilppu, anything really.
One day you'll be able to draw qt grills, but today is not that day.
