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This is an experiment thread.

Submit your drawings, receive feedback or critique others! Share your knowledge and remember to thank those who've critiqued or red-lined your drawings. Most importantly, be cute.

Where to start?
>Hitokaku Index
http://www.asahi-net.or.jp/~zm5s-nkmr/
>0033
http://www.pixiv.net/member_illust.php?id=59317
>How To Draw anime books
https://yande.re/forum/show/10527
Tutorials (Japanese)
http://iradukai.com/
>Pose practice
http://www.eggazyoutatsu.net/eng/atarichan.html
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just use the alt art thread, holy shit.
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This is a good thread , alt art is tainted with western influences
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Okay ill bite.
crit/redline/thoughts would be nice
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>>2273080
needs more chromatic aberration to be honest family
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>>2272758
Sorry, I've been drawing for a week only
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>>2272751
so much this. why the fuck does this deserve its on thread.
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>>2273146
>why the fuck does this deserve its on thread.
Weebs get triggered whenever someone says they don't like anime. So they want to place to circle jerk. They should just go back to /a/ honestly.
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I'm running low on inspiration.
I want to draw big and epick shit i just am not good enough for, and i can't make myself draw something simple or boring that i probably could finish with my skill.
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>>2273273
You can draw a battle ship very plainly and a rose quite elaborately. There's not really such a thing as skill = what you're allowed to draw, just how you draw it.

My advice: draw epic shit shittily until you git gud at drawing it
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>>2273146
>why the fuck does this deserve its on thread
You act like /ic/ is a place full of quality threads to begin with.
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>>2273080
inkredible
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>>2273079
those leg drawing reminds me of the vomit loli hentai manga.
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>>2273298
dont feed that flamming faggot
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>>2273308
You gotta be squidding me
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>>2273308
Who do you ink you're dealing with here?
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>>2273289
This looks like it was drawn by 3 different people.
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I never drew an asshole in my life before, what did I do wrong?
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>>2273079
Is this why artists change their style for their sfw art? because i know your ero drawings i can't look at your art without getting a boner, still good though.
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>>2273253
>gets triggered and throws a huge shitfit in the alt thread demanding a namechange
>now this
kek
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This thread should be should be posted on /a/, not on /ic/.
Fuck off.
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>>2273079
Not much except for maybe her right arm is a little out of perspective.
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>>2274062
No.
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the problem with /ic/ nowadays is that its full of flaming retards never posting work, acting like they know better.
please take into consideration people's feelings, try living by the golden rule. Serious people will stop posting here, because under the guise of "good critique" you just harass the person verbally, making points on his life and taste rather than the drawing itself.
by doing this you keep kicking the community in the nuts and it will keep getting worse and worse, resulting in a place teeming with anxious people hating art and their life, "taking revenge on anonymous for hurting them".

I understand you are anonymous and cool and totally ebin, been bullied all your life, but at least try to be friendly to each other or just stay put. instead of mindlessly typing "read sticky faggot" or "your work is shit" without stating any reasons, just don't say anything. ignorance is worth more if you dont like his work. they should get that they should apply themselves by that. Also if you don't flame others and stay put you give place for actual critique from a half-lurker anon who just seldom gives words of gold.
Honesty is nice, but what /ic/ doing is the 180 degree turn from circlejerking to just being jerks.

I really think that hiding behind your anonymity to badmouth people without knowing them is just unjust and childish, no matter how much shit you have gone through the day. The very person you are saying to that he is a faggot could even be a good friend material, were you to meet in life.

by telling the people who initiate with new ideas that they should just die you discourage any other people doing just that, making any changes impossible.

I think making an anime girls general is a good idea, since alternative art style thread is teeming with them, and people are always complaining that it's the only thing they see. Starting a general for things that no one draws is a stupid idea, but appearantly, we are on 4chan and people want to draw anime girls
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>>2273308
Shut up phaggot
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>>2274134
Please go back to your hugbox.
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>>2273957
The drawing looks a bit flat, took my eyes a while to register what was going on desu
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WEEEABOOOOWEEEEEABOOO!

ATTENTION!

THIS IS A CANCER THREAD!
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>>2273982
thanks for the support, im glad my drawings could make you happy.

>>2274072
Would you mind showing me how it should look? I would appreciate it.
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>>2272726
>https://yande.re/forum/show/10527
hey, thanks for the link. downloading some books as I type
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>>2274157
will you ever git gud after reading those because what youve made so is far pretty pathetic for 7 years and carpal tunnel
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>>2274166
Malaysia Anon I know its you stop bullying.
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>>2274166
Hello Malaysia. Not trying to make you feel bad but fucking stop trying to destroy /i/ with your edgy teenage drunk internet friend. You're fucking destroying history do you realise that faggot? Typical muslim, you are
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>>2274166
Silly anon, I can't read the books...they're in moon!!!
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>>2274170
>>2274179
lolwut
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>>2273146
Because this
>>2273304
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this is an anime boy
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>>2274443

this is an anime boy
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>>2274170
>>2274179
/pol/ /ic/ /qa/

I can't fucking escape Malaysia. Even if it's not Malaysia it's always someone accusing someone of being Malaysia. I just want him to disappear, fuck.
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>>2274446
I bet he has his wet dreams of Cabin boy.
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>>2274445
She's cute!
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>>2273957
>...and then she farts!
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>>2273289
>good gesture
>shitty shaky structure
>ok outline
Give it some value and you're fine. Never do the 2nd one again.
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>>2274483
>pls react to my post
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>>2273141
First critique then is to never make excuses. You can watch people like Firez make excuses for things on here, they use it as a justification to ignore critique and feedback, and so they improve at a much slower rate than they could.

If you ever find yourself posting a piece with something like
>I ran out of time
>I was busy doing X important thing too
>I've not been drawing long
>I'm colourblind

etc, etc, then take a break, realize that any problems with the piece were caused by your own hand, and then try again. Keep at it anon, and try use the draw thread or if it's anime/stylized then use the alt art one.
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crit/redline/etc
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>>2273957
> never saw a woman naked

FTFY
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>>2274483
>>2274700
>woW thx for le funny memes
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>>2274700
This is the internet, idiot. Whether someone is Virginmaster 6000 or not, he/she has seen more naked women than all his ancestors combined.
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>>2274446
>>2274450
i know its you mikufag
stop trying to samefag your way introducing your new friends here
all of them are pure shit
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>>2274664

Makes me want a happymeal now.
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>>2274664
The perspective seems off. I think it's easier if you put the loli in the box. Very cute otherwise!
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>>2274618
Nah, I just think farts are awesome.
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>>2275021
wow, you can't draw legs for shit, i can tell you draw ponies you degenerate piece of shit.
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>>2275446
>i can tell you draw ponies
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>>2275021
Person you're replying to here, I really appreciate this, it helps me understand exactly where I went wrong. Perspective is my weakest skill at the moment, this proves I need to focus more on improving it. Thanks.
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>>2275021
how do you even tell where to put these perspective lines?
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>>2275505
It's basic perspective tied to the environment. The happymeal box has its own vanishing points.
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>>2274664
>Eating a cheeseburger without the wrapper on
What a fucking idiot
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>>2275521
Donut bully
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>>2275519
>>2275021
You seem to know what you're talking about.
Could you recommend a decent video series on perspective?
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>>2273289
honestly i like the structure drawing more than the line art. the line art feels like it lost alot of the fluency the structure had and became very jagged straight lines. the picture is good, just the lining makes it a bit less appealing
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>>2273080
>3 years and still polishing shit
dont quit your day job
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i leave /ic/ for two months and this is what happens
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>>2275765
better remain away then fukboi it's artwork and weebs now
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>>2275778
well you all seem like gentlemen, why not call the thread something like pixiv general instead
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A kancolle I drew
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Take a xanax.
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>>2275705
Marshall Vandruff perspective.It's an oldie but goldie. It's $1 per video on his website, $12 total and he recently made an exercise video to go along with it.
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>>2275519
how do you know where to put the lines when the horizon is out of frame, and the vanishing points are out of frame?
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>>2272726
>made an alt art thread
>complains it is filled with anime girls
>made an anime girl thread
>complains that you should join the alt art thread instead
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>>2276601
guess it
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>>2276601
You run a line out of the canvas until the lines converge.
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>>2275785
I'd absolutely love it if the calibre of artist on /ic/ was anything close to the pixiv rankings. Weebery aside, they're pretty fucking talented.
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Welp, time for me to learn moonrunes
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>>2276776
to be fair, some of them are already
they just don't post as often
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>>2275786
ayayayaya is 2hu
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>>2274664
>>2273079
you draw cute lolies anon
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>>2274139
>>>/tumblr/
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>>2272751
>>2273146
>>2273308
>>2274062
>>2274139
>>2274145


You're cancer. Fuck off and die.
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>>2277547
how many years have you been on 4chan?
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>>2277570
dunno. i come and go.
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>>2273079
where can I find your lewd drawings, my dick is diamonds already
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this looks like a nice thread

I think I'll drop by
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>>2277700
NOW THIS IS ANIME TRACING
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Anon requested something like "A girl in gas mask and with a crosbow"

So here this.
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>>2277700

My dude, you need practice on those bodies. It looks like you keep attaching heads on melting bodies.
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>>2277700
all that sameface
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>>2277547
thanks!
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>>2277820
Not that anon, but what do you mean?
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>>2277966
Not that anon but his construction is horrible (especially at the torsos). The proportions dont match the head at all.
Also his lines are scratchy and lacks confidence, maybe that contributes to looking 'melty'.
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>>2277700
Hands could use some lovin' anon
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>>2278018
>that continuous line control
You obviously can draw. It's hard to fake being a beginner.
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>>2277966
he >>2277988 sums up what I mean
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>>2278037
I think you got it down pat. Btw this isn't a porn thread.
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>>2278037
>taped on pubes
kek
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>>2278037
what a nice duwang
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>>2277700
im pretty sure i know where the top right one is from anon
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I want to moe even harder
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hmmm..
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>>2273273
This picture makes me think: how do colors of a object in outer space change as they go into the distance? Things on earth turn more grey/blue because of the atmosphere, but what if there's no atmosphere? Does it just get darker?
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>>2279181
how did you mess up on the breasts that badly, lefty-kun?
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I need someone to tell me where my mistakes are, does it look as weird as I think it does?
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>>2280091
Hair's nice, but fundies.

Drew some skeleton for you anyway.
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>>2280131
Thank you so much!!!! Ive been redrawing it over and over. :D This helps!
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>>2280048
err..i thought they looked ok
what went wrong?!
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>>2280186
Not him but maybe it's the pecs that are not pulling up the breasts think about the pull as you raise your arm and how it affects the form.
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>>2280187
shocking truth
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>>2279181
>>2280187
Pretty much this, they definitely shouldn't be symmetrical when one arm is raised like that.
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>>2280150
yw anon, keep drawing <3
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>>2280131
>fundies

fuck, got a good giggle out of that
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revive
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>>2283146
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