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Post your nsfw, critique work and so on.
Furry is allowed, however do not over indulge on the subject of furries or their culture. Unnecessarily reporting these anons are strongly discouraged. This thread is dedicated to helping anons improve their erotic drawings and paintings.
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>>2270073
i wonder if this one will stay since you pretty much are calling us degenerates..so what if i'm incredibly horny for my Malaysian cartoons?
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to the faggots in the prev thread i sincerely and politely ask you all to stop trolling great artists such as BBC, Smurf, Firez and Kyle otherwise they will not post their art here.
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>>2270084
Do not use that word here, it triggers visitors from /pol/.
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>>2270087
>great artists
>didnt mention me
sadpepe.webm
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>>2270094
but you suck, mikufag
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>>2270087
firez needs to stop drawing stupid eyes and bbc needs to draw better dicks smruf and kyle are okay..
>>2270094
you dont see me crying, get over yourself.
>>2270098
i like mikufag and lefty i wish i was as good as them.
>thread derailed in 3..2..1..
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>Stay on topic.
>Please stay on topic.
kek
crits?
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>>2270100
nigga bbc is kim jung gi tier get over yourself
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>>2270104
her hand is..broken? like, the thumbs are backwards. heh, nice hips to be honest family.
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>>2270107

You're gonna lose your tongue in his asshole.
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You all need to stop saying that X (porn) artist is THE BEST. They might be good but everyone needs to improve, if they didn't, they wouldn't even consider posting on a 4chan art critique board. Fucking stop this shit already.
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>>2270100
>>2270087
>>2270113
>>2270116
LETS GOO!!!
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>>2270113
go suck kyles dick more sissy fag
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>>2270121

Kyle has just as many problems as BBC. Lick harder
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>porn thread
>no fur
post fur
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>>2270122
having recovered from an addiction to illegal images this shit always fucks me up
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>>2270122
From an artistic standpoint, I appreciated those lemons a lot more than the figure.
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>>2270122

>This work was deleted.

how much stuff is missing from the pixiv?
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>Datura's pic was deleted
>/ic/
>furries are allowed
>gay shit allowed
>fat shit allowed
WHAT A FUCK?
HAPPENING?
NEWFAG MOD FROM /A??
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>>2270073
best op image

got commissioned for some pin ups of a Salarian oc, looking for some crits
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>>2270073

Crit my WIP senpai.
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>>2270142
global rule 3
no loli outside of /b/
got a ban for posting furry in the last thread
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>>2270147
Bullshit
https://warosu.org/ic/thread/S2096521
Newfag mod is happening.
>/ic/ will become next /a/
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>>2270155
this is bullshit
you can get banned for discussing hentai in /h/
create a thread about the sauce of a page and youll get banned
fucking stupid shit
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>>2270155
>>2270147
Meanwhile you can post pictures of actual naked children from Bammess's anatomy book and it'd be perfectly in line with the rules, since non sexualized child nudity is legal.
Yet fictional drawings are banned because reasons.
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>>2270173
Because loli isa sexualized image of a child for the sake of sexual pleasure and Bammess' anatomy book children are artistic nudity for the sake of high art.
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>>2270177
Ban all assault lolies
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>>2270177
I've masturbated to Bammess's anatomy book though.
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>>2270073
No friends edition
No loli edition
No artistic freedom edition
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post porn you fuckin keks
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>>2270184
You can masturbate to anything, but it wasn't created with that intention in mind.
If you put art with nude children in your fap folder, it does count as CP.
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>>2270184
what book are you talking about?
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>>2270177
Bullshit
https://warosu.org/ic/?task=search&ghost=&search_text=white+datura
Lolis are allowed. I hope mod recognize his error without hiro assistance
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>>2270073
Legendary OP.
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>>2270107
>nigga bbc is kim jung gi tier
Nice false flag.
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how hard it is to get commissions if you are no one?
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>>2270228
>how hard it is to get commissions if you are no one?

That depends are how willing you are to pander to a certain demographic. If you drew pic related you're already on the right track. Nerds obsess over Nintendo characters. Specially the princesses.
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>>2270228
easy, if you sell your soul and draw diaperfur and stuff like that
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>>2266101
Well sexy is subjective, but your image looks really stiff, everything looks perfectly vertical, it looks like she only moved her arm while keeping everything else straight, only the braids breaks this trend.
When you make one part of the body move, make sure the rest of it moves as well to accommodate its new position.
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>>2270145

pls crit, senpai.
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>>2270252
this desu
just draw furshit and they will come
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painted a couple weeks ago
r8 pls
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>>2270344
brush up on the fundamentals, man it looks like garbage.

Poses are stiff and unnatural.
Major case of sameface, with unnatural expressions.
woman's head is oddly shaped and right boob is fucked up desu lad.
With how the woman is positioned her legs are much too short, doesnt even give the impression shes sitting or even that she has the girl on her knee. consider fixing
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>>2270344
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>>2270344
Thanks I'm going to jail now.
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>>2270355
Its only my style
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>>2270087
>great artists such as BBC
pls
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>>2270364
>moving to painting before you even mastered anatomy
desu
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>>2270344
girl is very flat
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>>2270087
>Smurf
>great artist
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>>2270087
>no loliguy
Who is Teal successor?
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>>2270394
Either she has a skin disease or she is a baked potato.
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crits?
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>>2270397
i-its called warm light y-you fag, m-muh style
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>>2270401
Oh, man. That's a flexible dick.
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>>2270397
He's not so good at rendering. Maybe because he use SAI shit
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>>2270405
yeah the dude who wanted this done wanted a really long dick on his character
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>>2270406
hes not so good at rendering because he hasnt practiced enough.
SAI is a legit good program ive seen great pieces of artwork done in it. Its not the program.
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>>2270408
>yeah the dude who wanted this done wanted a really long dick on his character

What does a dick being long have anything to do with it bending like it's rubber? The point is dicks don't bend that way. You fucked up with the guys pelvis. Why didn't you use reference? There are loads of images for that sex position. When in doubt, use reference and study it. There is no way what you have right there looked "right" to you.
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>>2270421
Can you share some? I never seen good paintings in SAI. Except maybe fearsas https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=eXFjrI0p3yw
But not fan of his technique
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>>2270436
youre right its definitely not right which is why im lookin for a crit yo!

thanks for the feedback im gonna use a reference next time i figured i had enough know-how to wing it

as for the dick though he said he wanted it long and like a horses. im not saying its right cause i think it looks like ass cheeks too so how would i go about making it better? do i just change the girls position and straighten the dick out or what
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>>2270441
This was done in sai.
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>>2270442
>i figured i had enough know-how to wing it
>how would i go about making it better?

By looking at reference and studying it. If you knew it looked wrong then you clearly knew you didn't have the know how to wing it. You just didn't bother to double check with reference. There are multiple other things wrong with your image btw (the overall image is flat as fuck). Issues that could be solved if you actually bothered to just use reference and study your reference. Look into building a reference folder.
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>>2270155
I've also gotten banned for posting furry. I think it was three days, it was fucking awful.
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>>2270189
>but it wasn't created with that intention in mind.

proofs?
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>>2270476
gotcha chief ill start making sure to utilize references better
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>>2270261
Youre the best. Thanks, man.
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>>2270344
>none of these niggas knowing about Balthus
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>>2270145
>>2270145
>>2270145


I need a critique on this.
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>>2270145
practice arms and hands more.
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>>2270556

Other than that, no issues?
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>>2270073

Bump.
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>>2270188
never knew flowey porn was a thing
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Porn thread, who's work do you study for lewds?
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>>2270726
Loomis.
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>>2270145
Her neck is thin, and head is too high as well. Hand is tiny and the other is hiding. Boobs don't seem to be following the form of the ribcage at all, their forms should be draped over it, not hanging in space like the one on our right feels like it is.

Also I love hips too but you have to have curves in moderation. Shoulders are out, in for the ribcage a bit, in for the waist considerably, out for the hips however much you want, and then in a bit for the legs too. The side on our right is ok, but the leg on our left looks a little dislocated.

Basically use reference, and focus on proportions as much as you have on forms. Plus draw a few pages of hands, observation and imagination. Keep at it anon.
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>>2270726
Sasha Grey
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>>2270142
>>2270147
>>2270155

i could see them using the often slack enforcement of the global rules as an excuse to ban people who foster an aggressively caustic attitude on the board. i believe mods are able to see every post made by a specific IP?

but this is all purely conjecture based on personal anecdotal experience. i've posted furry before on multiple occasions (my work as well as redlines of other's) and never had it deleted? but i also try to keep my shitposting relatively tame and to a minimum. wouldn't post anything i'd be ashamed of my moms seeing, but then again, that depends on your mother.

>>2270228
you probably have one fetish or another that you've yet to realize has some big dedicated following. i think you still need a bit more work tho. you seem to understand most parts of the anatomy to an extent (save the hands) but you don't know how to properly connect them in a sexually attractive manner.
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>>2270726
I like Susan Wayland if I'm gonna be lookin' at a photo reference.

Otherwise, it's usually Uno Makoto or Nemunemu, but there's a lot more artists than those two.
I just pick artists that I think accomplish something that I wanna do particularly well.
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>>2270523
>this guy doesn't understand jokes
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reposting since old thread died

1/2
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2/2
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>>2270811
cant tell whats going on with that top, is that a nipple showing?
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>>2270833
Yeah. Now that you mentioned it, it really defies physics. Will fix the overall stiffness of her breasts if I'm ever going to color/shade it. Thanks.
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>>2270812
Literally nutted, do you have a sketch dump?
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>>2270933
I'm also interested in this. Also how does your line process work? Straight inks over roughs or do you refine your sketch lines?
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>>2270144
Looks about right. I'd fuck it.
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>>2270811
>>2270812
THE BEST
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>>2270933
bbc-chan.tumblr.com
>>2270937
inks over somewhat refined roughs
you can check my time lapse videos if you want to get a better picture of my process.
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>>2270726
@oltlo on twatter
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>>2271063
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>>2271063
the shapes and style are pretty cool, but the roughness and amateurish feel of the line work is a total turn off for me.
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>>2271141
>amateurish feel of the line work

Amateurish? How? The lines aren't shaky. They are pretty confident for a sketch.
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>>2271063

Not bad. Now post more
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>>2270726
I have a list, but Cirima (pic related) is one of them.
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>>2271157
to me these lines aren't confident at all. probably because of the flat and even line-weight.
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>>2270726
I prefer not to use other artist's works as reference material, to avoid copying their style. I'd rather develop something personal than being a(n unintentional) rip-off.
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>>2271219
anon did said study, not reference tho.
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>>2271212
turn pen pressure off and go drawing, it's a neat experience

>>2271219
get a lot of different artists you really like and rip different things from different ones
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>>2271224
>turn pen pressure off and go drawing, it's a neat experience
Nah, I prefer to have as much control on line weight as possible.
I don't like ms paint oekakis.

>get a lot of different artists you really like and rip different things from different ones
I don't like to cheat and I want to be big someday.
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>>2271212
>he's never drawn with pressure sensitivity off

>>2271219
Even Vilppu condones studying the work of other artists. You have to study multiple artists though. Not just one.
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>>2271228
Hm, maybe "cheat" isn't the right word. Let's say I don't like to cut corners or something. I realize a lot, if not, all of my work is influenced by art I've seen in the past and stayed with me through time, but to use other artists work to study and develop my own art is something I don't like to do.
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>>2271231
>he's never drawn with pressure sensitivity off
Please, stop assuming.

>Even Vilppu condones studying the work of other artists.
I came a long way without doing it and I am not going to start now. It's a personal choice, though. It's not like I despise people who are doing this.
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>>2271237
>Please, stop assuming.
You were the one trying to claim his lines were amateurish, which was a bullshit observation and assumption in the first place.
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>>2271256
> which was a bullshit observation and assumption in the first place

not an assumption but youre right on the first part
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>>2271256
I said that to me they look amateurish. How is this an assumption?
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>>2271232
Studying the work of other artists isn't cutting corners. It's learning through observation and replication. That's art in general. There is no harm in studying works that already influence you. It only helps you further understand them and what you like about them better.
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>>2271278
Not sure if that's what you are doing, but I feel like you are explaining obvious stuff to me. I know how studying other artist's work works and what it's needed for. I want to develop my own style and don't want to be too influenced by others. I have thousands of hours of drawing behind me and feel I need to do stuff on my own if I want to further develop as an artist. Yeah, simple as that.
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how many of you are getting crits from autists that draws like a drooling retard?
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>>2271285
>I want to develop my own style and don't want to be too influenced by others.

You're already influenced by others. Having a better understanding of those influences and why what they do works and appeals to you isn't going to hinder or diminish the style you want for yourself.
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>>2271303
Have you ever thought about the idea of being influenced from real life?
Amazing, I know.
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>>2271301
some drawfaggot from /pol/ drew pic related and told me to work on my proportions
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>>2271318
Stop shitposting malaysia Anon.
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>>2271318
if someone who draws like that thinks you have proportional errors then you might have proportional errors
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welp
thats pretty much 90% of /ic/
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>>2271315
>Have you ever thought about the idea of being influenced from real life?

Real life is the foundation. It's the baseline default, from there you exaggerate. Enter stylization. Life influences art. Art influences art. This isn't a difficult concept.
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>>2271318
this is why i fucking hate /ic/
you niggers who shits on good artists draws exactly like pic related and absolutely have no fucking idea what you're talking about
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>>2271331
It's called projecting.
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>>2271318
>browsing /pol/

There's your problem.
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>>2271330
If you practiced what you preach, as in actually mastered the foundation before attempting to copy other people's style, you'd realize that the people you're copying from are barely a step above symbol drawing and there's actually nothing you can learn from them.
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>>2271335
they have id's
its easier to find the delusional shitheads when you post in a drawthread

dont forget to be a dick tho, its a gigantic hugbox
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>>2271346
You don't have to be a dick. Just spout Loomis and you've done your job.
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>>2271340
>you'd realize that the people you're copying from are barely a step above symbol drawing
>symbol drawing

Nice buzzword and projection faggot. A solid understanding of the foundations is what expands your visual library and allows you to visualize stylized symbols to make a convincing and compelling image. Studying reality and stylization in tandem isn't an issue.
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>>2271331

Still mad about BBC getting critiqued huh
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>>2271352
i actually become a dick on purpose
ive realized /pol/ is a joke of a board that nobody take seriously and full of the mentally ill so i took the chance of rattling the autists there and piss them off when i got the chance.

my art skill increased tremendously when i realized the level of butthurt i caused is at astronomical levels. the fireant sniffing shit scribblers there literally stopped drawing altogether when they see my art is praised as one of the best and they cant do jack shit about it.

lel
this is perfect for some quick gitting gud i tell ya what.
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>>2271366
>Nice buzzword and projection faggot. A solid understanding of the foundations is what expands your visual library and allows you to visualize stylized symbols to make a convincing and compelling image
True
>Studying reality and stylization in tandem isn't an issue.
Not really, since if you actually do master the fundamentals, you simply outgrow fetish artists and won't have a reason to copy them.

The fact that you look up to fetish artists reveals that you're an amateur. The fact that you copy them reveals that you'll always be one.
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>>2271367
yo
crits and insults are different. stfu dickface you draw like this stupid faggot>>2271318
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>>2271374
post your work.
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>>2271375
>I don't have a point
>Time to project since I have nothing else.

Are you done here? Shut up and draw.
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>>2271385
>I don't have a point
>Time to project since I have nothing else.
Are you done here? Shut up and draw.
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so since the porn thread is not a good place to get crits on your porn, where is?
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First time lewd artist posting, really want to get more into the genre but I feel like somethings off. Would greatly greatly appreciate any critique or redlining so I can work on where I'm lacking and improve.

Thank you very much!
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>>2271395
LOOMIS.
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>>2271395
woah nigga you need like loomis and vilppu and shit like dat cos that be nasty
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>>2271390
>kindergarten rebuttals

You have to be 18+ to use this board.
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>banned for posting my furshit after its been okay to do so for like three years

fkuck you mods
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>>2271377

All that projection
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>>2271416
>tfw you report all furshit and pedoshit regardless of thread.
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>>2271416
I really liked your drawing fwiw, sorry it got taken down anon
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>>2271422
I bet you don't even like drawing.
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>>2271419
>didnt post work to prove im wrong
>no u instead
wow so mature. did your grandma gave you office supplies for your birthday i need to borrwo some cellophane tape
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>>2270087
>>2270087
you forgot Shadman
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>>2271416
Tweet him https://twitter.com/hiroyuki_ni
We have newfag mod.
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>>2271441
>dat pic
Jesus Christ
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>>2270104
Legs are stumps.

>>2270144
Do you even do initial construction? Because it shows that you don't, theres no sense of form anywhere.

>>2270145
Chicken scratch/10

>>2270228
Heads too small.

>>2270401
Everything about this oozes deviantart, not just the cringeworthy watermark. The extreme angle is too much for you which shows in the lack of perspective and foreshortening, also nobody's dick bends like that.

>>2270905
Harder edged brush, this hurts to look at.

>>2271395
The sticky. And before you whine how I wasn't deliberate enough in my "critique" just actually read through it this time.
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>>2271613
I like this even though it's not technically impressive in the draftsmanship.
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>>2271441
Well I am moving to infinity chan, fuck this shit.
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>>2271622
you won't be missed
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>>2271622
I'm okay with deleting furshit, just don't delete loli and we're cool.
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>>2271625
This is an anonymous image board. You never knew me so thanks for stating the obvious.

>Update

Fuck /ic/ on infinity chan is inactive as all fuck.
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>>2271629
You're back? Oh did I forget to say you're here forever. Silly me, one just does not leave this place to never return.
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>>2271513
I put hard edges where i thought possible, where am i missing hard edges?
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How do I get better at this?
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>>2271648

Read the sticky.
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is it still loli if you dont draw the face?
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I started making this last night on /v/ but the thread died before I could post it. So might as well post it here, I figure.
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>>2271663
So many hacks in this thread who need to read the sticky.
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>>2271648
Don't attempt porn until you reach a higher competency level. You should be drawing primitives (cubes, spheres, cones) in different perspectives right now. Consult the beginner thread.
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>>2271663
>binary brush

Lame. Dialogue is pretty cringe too. Should have just posted it on /i/.
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>>2271663
I, for one, like it.

>>2271723
I'm surprised how bad artists can be at writing. It's like. Nigga, have you ever like, heard a nigga talk like that, nigga? Shit.
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>>2271725
They watch and read porn and actually think that crap is good writing. Nip porn is just as bad. Women reciting entire paragraphs while taking dick. It's retarded. They've clearly never heard "show, don't tell".
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get these /i/ nsfw thread shit outta my /ic/
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>>2270726
>...and then she farts!
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>>2270905
10/10 would frame and tell everybody who's saying it's offensive that it's art and they should shut their non-educated ass up.

Nah but I really like it.
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>>2271513
other than the watermark what else about the picture oozes deviantart? i dont understand
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>>2271847
>i dont understand

He already explained. If you don't understand even after what he pointed out, you're a lost cause.
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>>2271853
>The extreme angle is too much for you which shows in the lack of perspective and foreshortening, also nobody's dick bends like that.

i get that part and understand it but i dont understand what makes that deviantart
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>>2271902
What you drew isn't even tasteful. It just shows you're sexually frustrated. Don't worry, 98% of the people who posted art in this thread fall into the same boat you are in--tasteless hacks who draw full on vanilla nudity that's bland to look at. People like you draw with your frustration and not pictures.
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>>2271915
fair enough how do i make it better then?
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>>2271915
Oh btw....I said 98%, I liked
>>2271613
>>2271063
>>2270406
and that's it...and that's just me being nice
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>>2271916
By scrapping it.
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>>2271925
gotcha, can do

what should i keep in mind for next time? what should i study? just stick to figure drawing? anatomy studies? loomis?
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>>2271915
>tasteless hacks
This isn't really a word to describe a beginner
hacks are people who are already famous and well known, but continue to stick to the same routine over and over and never try anything new or to improve
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I... I have no excuse.

I need to fix the first panel actually, he changes the rifle from left to right inbetween, but it looks weird. So far its a sketch.

Also, part 5 of the cock tutorial will be veins, its coming along fine, Expect it in this weekend
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>>2271957
>last panel
He's seen some shit.
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>>2271957
>/k/ stumbles into /d/.jpeg
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>>2271957
lmfao Cabin in the Woods anyone?
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>>2271919
why should he or anyone else care about your opinion?
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>>2272099
We're allowed to have opinions.
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>>2271626
No you aren't.
Fuck off and don't come back.
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>>2272194
????
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>>2271957
ankro is dat u?
why do u suck
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>>2272190
Sure, but if nobody cares about them your posting is pointless. That's all I meant to say.
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>>2272224
Does it look like I give a fuck? That's all I meant to say to your face.
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>>2272229
And here goes another pointless post in a thread for art critique. Keep wasting your time.
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>>2272233

Am I arguing with the same guy back to back in each thread for the past 6 months now? Why do you like me so much? Do you want to be my friend that badly?
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>>2272197
nvm, wrong thread.
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>>2272235
Keep this meaningless madness going. Great job buddy.
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>>2272235
If you run into an asshole in the morning, you ran into an asshole. If you run into assholes all day, you're the asshole.
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>>2272251

I don't 'run into' assholes all day because I'm not homosexual like you.
>>2272247
It'll stop if you stop replying to me with your useless posts.
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>>2270812
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>>2272254
>It'll stop if you stop replying to me with your useless posts.
The difference between me and you is that I know these posts are meaningless. Keep it up senpai.
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>>2272258
That's right bitch, I'm your senpai.
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>>2272266
>doesn't understand when his posts are meaningless
>doesn't understand sarcasm
all my sides
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>>2271638
Everywhere
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>>2272343
Omg ! Isn't it an Ikea vìlkglűt behind her on her left ? I love those curtains, too bad they stopped the production...
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>>2272459
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>>2272459
>>2272464
XDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDD
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>>2272343
so no where, glad you made up your mind about my edges. I knew they were fine.
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>>2272468
based on what you've shown, your art is nowhere near being fine lel.
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>>2272468
On the off chance you're not just a third party troll, do you honestly think you can provoke some more critique out of him by acting passive aggressive?
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Is BBC-chan going to reopen commissions at any point in the near future?
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>>2270369
>>2270355
Are you serious?
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>>2272530
Why would you want anything from that 3rd rate Dimitri clone?
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>>2272547
I know I've seen Dimitri's work before, but you have a tumblr link or something? Maybe you spelt his name wrong. I can't find his stuff again.
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>>2272036
DAMNIT I just got it.
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My latest piece, I am very unsatisfied with it
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>>2273035
Well I can see why
her asshole is awkwardly pudging out of her buttcheeks and she has no taint.
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>>2272474
based on what youve shown youre just a retarded troll.
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>>2273086
Aside from the genitalia is there anything else
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>>2270144
>>2271513
updated with more forms
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>>2273355
Nice shapes. A profile view of the face for the girl in the middle would read better. Right now it feels like her head is rotated too far.
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>>2273355
site please
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>>2273355
neck doesn't turn like that
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>>2273383
wut
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Hows the line art looking?
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>>2273509
blog?
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>>2273512
http://froockles.tumblr.com/
Slow atm due to my 100 different projects
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>>2272547
Am I a clone if I don't know who this Dimitri is?
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>>2272530
Contact me privately and I'll let you know.
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>>2270073
Can't wait for the day this thread gets pushed to >>>/aco/
But who am I kidding.... it's never gonna happen.
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>>2271416
DOOMED DESU
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>>2273509
Why people always make the dick in the pubic area?
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>>2271228
>I don't like ms paint oekakis.

that's like the only program i draw in
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Didn't use any reference, although I probably should have. I'm not so happy with many parts of this drawing.
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>>2273558
What the fuck is this belly.

Loomis etc
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>>2273543
can't wait the day idiots like you will learn to use the hide function or grow enough brain matter to be able not to be offended by such trivial stuff.
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>>2273558
you are pretty much shit tier and you will never be good unless you learn the fundamentals.
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Cover page. It was a difficult pose for foreshortening. is her ass too small?
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>>2270087
Protip: Some of us weren't actually trolling.
Some artists just can't recognize critique, even when its served in front of them on a plate with a garnish of compliments.
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>>2273611
> even when its served in front of them on a plate with a garnish of compliments.

that was really fuckin gay, anon
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are beast men considered furry?
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>>2273605
She has no ass.
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>>2273634
Nice exageration and stylization. One of your best pieces if you look at the overall image.
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>>2273645
>reaching
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>>2273650
that ass is glued to that fucking floor
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>>2273654
I don't see a problem with the positioning of the ass on the ground. The issue is it's size imo.
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>>2273605

The guy's torso is stiff as hell and his feet seems to disappear into his ass. In that pose you would see his feet.
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>>2273634
I'd make the smaller toes less fat. It looks like she has two big toes on her left foot.
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got really lazy with the arms and legs
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>>2273371
Wrap those lines completely around the forms rather than connecting contours with them. Better yet, draw a full ellipse around it. Your way creates sharp corners. Also you're still scratching away contours rather than actually constructing the figure.
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>>2273634
Blog pls?
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>>2273656

It looks like her hips aren't tall enough, as if she was born with a deformity. Some nice foreshortening going on there though.
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>>2273605

Just for the sake of reference, how long does an image like that take you to ink? I think I'm way too slow. I assume you're not using any stablizer either?
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>>2271395
Focus a LOT on basic anatomy before getting into light effects on your lines or textures in the hair. You're working on the decorative finishing touches, but your very foundation is soggy cardboard instead of solid brick, so to speak. The sticky is a good place to start
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>>2273605
that lady looks like a turtle w that neck and to reach like that she would have to have crazy long arms
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>>2273726
I thought those horse cocks were her arms at first
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>>2273634
Is this Kyle? Looks really good.
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>>2273707
>>2273757
>>2273793
Noted. Thanks guys.

>>2273759
Cca. 3 hrs. 1,5 hrs for the pencils and 1,5 hrs for the inks.
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>>2273547
Better?
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>>2273634
kyle ive been looking at yer pics and was wondering about our method. do you sketch then put some values and then lineart it ?
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