I drew Quiet
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I'm getting better, but some stuff still feels weird. Any ideas on how and what to improve?
Just her feet, they seem to be in a wierd position unless she is standing on something that can cause feet to go that way
I agree that maybe you should've made the feet just a little bit bigger, because combat boots like that can be hella bulky. Here, a reference image for your troubles.
Also, I think the jawline (specifically the part that is pointing to the outside of the hair,) is a bit "sharp" and "bulky" I think if you decreased the jaw size, it would have turned out somewhat better.
Keep practicing, though!!
the people around me say you should practice gesture drawing, and from the gesture go into the figure drawing.
>>464648
you meant st/ic/ky, right?
>>464534
Now that you mentioned it, her left foot was further out in the reference photo, like she is stepping forward past the other one. That might have fixed the foot angle looking weird.
Yeah, you're right. I also shaped the combat boots really closely around the feet...
>>464644
For the jawline, do you mean the cheek part by the hair on the right or the section below and left of the mouth? I tried moving the mouth position to fix some weirdness but didn't think of adjusting the jaw.
Thanks for the comments!
>>464651
lol i guess
>>464647
am i doing it right?
