i would direct you to >>>/ic/ but they'll eat you up.
i like it, i think it's pretty solid on color choice, but change up the shading on just under the shirt

also nice hat

>>454580
Bump

>>454580
Why are you bumping this? if you really want advice go to /ic/.
Anyways, your lines are shitty, too rough, lighting on skin and hair look decent so far.
Shadow on her side/stomach makes no sense, though.
Hat is lame and that girl on the background has a stupid face, work on your anatomy, it looks awful even for anime style .

>>454580
your hand and foot anatomy is bad, colors are dull, shadows dont make sense, really unnatural poses. ever see a real person m8?

>>458733

Dude, Do you know how old is this thread?

Op is gone, You fucking idiot.