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Fap Hero is like Guitar Hero. But instead, you jack off to the beat.
New updates from everyone when?
Don't leave us in the dark this long.
>>4222494
Round 4 is done. 4 Rounds are complete so far.
Aside from SAX are there any fapheros with plot?
yay new thread.
Will be streaming later today.
Hell yeah new thread.
Bastati how come your pornhub is RIP now? Were they being dickholes about copyrighted music?
>>4222585
Around what time?
>>4222648
sry m8. I gon finished the live stream...
Maybe i should make a proper schedule so people know when to watch...
In the meantime you can check my tumblr as i upload all stream recordings after i'm done.
>>4222664
Damnit, definitely make a schedule!
But okay, I'll check your tumblr! :)
>>4222646
Probably. Fuck them ahaha I'm going to upload Pendulum on the site anyway when time comes.
>>4222764
Right on man, looking forward to it
>>4222531
None. SAX is a gem.
>>4222531
Wait dans work it's probably the same thing
any more like katz' 3D fap hero?
also, what's the difference between this and HMV?
>>4223622
SAX's Animex is 3D. Difference between this and HMV is the beat/stroke bar.
>>4223622
Having a Host is the true difference !!!!
There is a story and you are the hero (fap-hero)... Too much creator forget about that...look sax works and wait for dansdoesthing and psycho final version
Y'all niggas forgot the discord link.
https://discord.gg/0mvQAgcHhotklaIc
>>4223622
How about trying a Fap Hero before you ask?
>>4223755
It was in the pastebin...
>>4223622
First you fap to the beat, second they are much longer, third bonus if host, fourth beatmapping a sound and making a beatbar is no joke.
This is not a freaking 2min HMV, this is what all HMV creators should be doing. A fucking 30-50min Fap Hero. Anyone can make a fucking HMV or whatever, requires no skill.
We are talking about couple software/programs there are to be needed:
* Sony Vegas / Adobe Premiere
* Adobe After Effects
* Ableton Live / FL Studio / Hammerhead
Kdenlive
Can someone quickly check what's the song that plays on the Succubus round of Gu's FH 1? I want to listen to it, but can't remember the name and I'm on my phone.
>>4224003
Never really liked Gu's FH 1, but here's a list of all the songs used in it. I'm sure you can find which one you're thinking about here.
Rx - Stage 2
David Bulla - Highlife
Beati Mortui - Winter
Humate - Love Stimulation
Hardwell - Spaceman
Fastest Techno Trance Ever! - MONSTER TORNADO
Suono - Fick Mich Jetzt Und Fick Mich Hard
just a heads up.. i plan to start live streaming at 22:00 hours danish time.. thats about 1 hr and 45 minutes from now.. :P
stream channel:
> https://picarto.tv/PsychoSplash
will be starting work on two new rounds for another coop.. release time is unknown right now :P or i just don't want to tell you :D
>>4224077
How about the host version?
>>4224054
Thanks anon
>>4224085
+1 finish what you started!
>>4223885
Is there a way we can grab a pirated copy of After Effects safely? I don't want to bust cash on editing animu pr0n.
>>4224281
>what is any torrent site ever
Can someone recommend a few good vids?
fap heroes are way more intense at double speed.
>>4224562
I have that face while reading the story in SAX's work
Any updates from dan?
>>4224588
He said on the last thread that "maybe" this March.
rip
so... after almost no deliberation on my part, and a lot of understandable complaining on yours... I have now hired the help of someone to write the story for the maid / host of my editors cut.
this should hopefully speed up the process of completing the host version.
>>4225134
I always thought writing the story was the fun part, and editing it was the tough part.
>>4225162
yeah.. normally i would agree with you.. i have just been stuck on the storry for so long now... kinda startet putting it off and doing other projects to try and revitalize my brain...
did not help so here we are :P
>>4225134
Did you try asking SAX?
will be streaming all day today...
>https://picarto.tv/PsychoSplash
This community is slowly dying :(
>>4226094
There's a lot more people interested in FH now than there was a while ago, that's for sure. I think it's growing, but we need some more activity in the discord server and in these threads chatting about the different FH and spreading the word
>>4226094
People will come around when theres new content
>>4226143
this
>>4226143
You would think with more and more people coming to see the glory of FH there would be more content coming out, not less.
>>4226094
progress is just so slow and only a very few creators that busy doing real life stuff/playing games or streaming
SAX on a break. im only excited to dan's work now no one else
for now it looks like there are 3 new works on the radar. Bastati's new content looks like it's gonna be great, PS' host version will come eventually, dan's is really exciting
>>4226350
Did SAX say he was taking a break? Any update on his plans?
>>4226742
Yes.
How about some discussion in these FH threads.
Here are my top five FH. Rate, judge, and post your favorites.
>Seductive Grimoire - SAX
>Era - Bastati
>Original FH - OP is a faggot
>Valentine's Special - Bastati and PsychoSplash
>PS Fap Hero - PsychoSplash
Hi guys, I'm making a new faphero, but is in testing phase. Called My world, has 6 rounds, with lolis, threesome and final boss but still have to improve it and im not the best editing. Yes, will have Beatbar np. I will end up in 1 month approximately
If you want to see how it goes check my patreon:
https://www.patreon.com/Reverd?ty=h
Faphero Preview (SuperBeta):
http://www.mediafire.com/download/oqz2fuxnyaud6cc/preview+last.mp4
>>4226750
>acceptable
>top taste
>Feels too old for me these days
>great content, annoying visual effects, too short
>good taste
Overall, 7/10 taste, would fap to same stuff.
>>4226953
Not digging the round 3 soundtrack, though that's probably a matter of taste.
Not sure what to think of all those pixelated-dick close-ups. Feels like a few too many of those.
Also not the biggest fan of the second-to-last hentai, animation feels too choppy and the art doesn't look good enough to make up for that, at least in my eyes (which, again, is probably a matter of taste).
All in all it looks pretty solid already.
>>4226953
Is there a host?
>>4226750
The following is my personal opinion:
I still go back to the reward round of OP's Fap Hero for a quick fap every now and then. Has one of my favorite rounds in any FH. Definitely started showing it's age now though. The teasing host thing is still unmatched by anything out today. (Sax comes close but it's just not quite the same) Really looking forward to Dan's, hopefully his new host can dethrone OP's.
whats the name of the first song in this video?
http://www.pornhub.com/view_video.php?viewkey=ph56ba6b497ef5a
>>4226750
Top 5
Seductive Grimoire
Gu's FH 1&2 (would be perfect if he actually continued the host version)
OP's FH
Hentai High School (it's not super good in the editing part but the host is awesome)
School of Sin
Others Fap Heroes are more like long HMV's with beat bar. If that's what you want try playing Succubust and CreamyLife. Anything by Kaka is amazing.
>>4227160
check the credits
>>4227219
who does Hentai High School? and why have I not heard of this until just now. I'm fucking living under a rock or something
Top 5, no particular order
Valentine's
Era
Final Faptasy
PS' no host
School of Sin
>>4227254
Sexymix1011
http://www.xvideos.com/video12220961/sexymix1011_hentai_highschool
>>4227219
Such a big fan of Succubust. And Kaka in general. There's some goofy shit in his work but the rest is just outstanding
>>4227009
>>4227015
Hello again, dont worry for de visual effects, pixelated-dick close-ups and cuts on the scenes. Its just a preview to know how to make it well. what animations do you prefer for this faphero?
I have only 10% done, beatbar and structure. So I want to know what you like most and what to change
Can change Rounds: 1,2,5 (thinking 3)
TY for all
Hey, guys!
Sorry for not updating as much as I did a half year ago.
Anyway, update on Pendulum.
Every time I try to work on Pendulum I accidently cum (because testing) and stop working. I don't know if that's a good thing or a bad thing.
You guys also requested non-vanilla content as well. So here is a image. Pandra The Animation (Tentacles)
Round 4. Yeah, I know that I promised to finish Round 4 last weekend but ehm. You know what happened...
And. There is also something coming up 1st, April. The community is not dying! Wait and see. Prepare lube and onahole.
>>4222422
Finally beat the original on my 5th try. My dick was diamonds
>>4227400
are you adding a host?
>>4227430
>Tentacles.
Fuck. Please keep it to a minimum. Not happy with a wasted round.
>>4227488
A whole round.
I will make 3 versions.
Vanillafgts (You)
No-Story/host
Original
I like faphero but I hate big tits, is there any faphero which features only or mostly flat chested girls?
I don't really like lolis either
I wonder what it would take to have chapter or track selection like with DVDs in the past, instead of seeing a lot of different version releases.
Having rounds tagged for exclusion would be what I was thinking. Person A, a vanillafag, could choose rounds 1-2-4-5, skipping loli, tentacles, futa or whatever. Person B might be fine with everything. Host/hostless works too.
Something like this might allow creators to focus on their own kinks more without negatively impacting the vanilla people, who are going to naturally be the largest segment of the FH population.
Implementation, however, I don't have a clue.
>>4227507
Like a loli hero?
That's Fucked up and you should be ashamed of yourself.
Someone get on that immediately
>>4227507
there's the "imouto version" of the original faphero, but that's probably it
>>4227483
Sure! But I really dont know who can I put.
By the time i need sources about what animations you want to replace the other rounds(1,2,5) I really want your opinion. TY
>>4227513
Reread his post.
>>4227513
No, like a pettanko hero
Is there a single Fap hero that comes close to the first one?
It had good editing to match the beats, it knew how to play with you (slow fuck and then FAPFAPFAP quick beats), good audio editing by incluiding the girls moaning.
Does anything come even close to the original?
>>4227602
SAX
>>4227520
Just surprise us. I also would like a host if you're interested.
Fap hero collection torrent: https://sukebei.nyaa.se/?page=view&tid=1943693
>>4227488
Shut the fuck up
Dan-sama please
>>4227430
>April 1st
in FH Perfection what's the name of the hentai at 7:30?
>>4227430
>You guys also requested non-vanilla content as well. So here is a image. Pandra The Animation (Tentacles)
Who the fuck is responsible for this? This is /h/ my niggas, take that tentacle shit to /d/.
I made it 6 minutes into the first one. I have shamed my penis, even as it has shamed me. T_T
>>4227430
I, for one, welcome our new tentacle overlords.
Keep up the good work, looking forward to the next available preview.
>>4227884
Go suck a dick.
>>4227971
I'm allowed to voice my opinion. This is /h/, and vanilla is more or less the default. While some people might not consider vanilla particularly exciting, it's not going to turn people away.
Bizarre fetishes, however, probably are.
>>4227490
Take it as a compliment. After some mediocre attempts, you struck gold with Era, becoming the only creator to equal or surpass the original FH. Your previews seem to indicate you've managed to improve further, and considering the production time of these things, even one wasted round is one wasted round too much. I wouldn't care if it was any other FH creator, because over half their rounds are skippable anyway.
You can please some people all of the time, you can please all people some of the time, but you can't please all people all of the time.
>>4228230
Holy shit, the sense of entitlement here. You do understand that the FH creators are hosting this thread on /h/ simply because that is where it originated.
I'm sure a number of them have kinks that aren't limited to pure vanilla, so if you really push, I'm certain you could see this general moving to /d/.
Unless you happen to be filling people's Patreons with dirty e-sports money, fuck you. Suggesting preference is fine, such as "I prefer vanilla." I'm sure most would see that and understand the point, and look at the general trends. On the other hand "Tentacles/loli/futa, etc. fucking blow, and you should feel bad for making rounds with it," is simply going to give incentive for those who make FH to stay in the hugbox that is the Discord
Maybe you haven't noticed that the posts from actual creators in this thread has already slowed to a near crawl. There was a point in time when people were actually grateful just to see a new FH, back when you know, there wasn't any.
Fucking kids today don't know how good they have it.
>>4228475
Agreed. Someone should make a fap hero with nothing but tentacles/loli/futa just to smite this guy.
>>4228230
>Bizarre fetishes
If you've been watching hentai for a decent amount of time and you still can't deal with tentacles, futa or rape, I don't know what to tell you.
Watersports, scat and gore are another thing.
>>4228475
>Holy shit you're fucking entitled. Back in my day we had to walk FIFTEEN MILES UPHILL IN THE SNOW BOTH WAYS to fetch a pail of fresh HMVs made in windows movie maker on an amiga powered by gerbil wheels! What are you thinking, having and sharing a negative opinion that I do not share personally. Here let me share my own negative opinion which is okay to share because.
Welcome to fucking 4chan amigo, negative criticism and an anonymous posting system go hand in hand and I for one fucking love it. You're suggesting he tone it down so the creators leave the discord hugbox, but then these threads would be no different.
Discord was a mistake. Patreon was a mistake. They both brought in a whole lot of fucking apathy to a lot of communities and the only way to deal with apathy is zeal. Suck it up or go to reddit.
>>4228475
It's absolutely bizarre how sensitive some of you cunts are, and what insane mental gymanstics you go through over one post that complains over tentacles.
I'm sure the creators have more of a backbone than you, and probably aren't going to have a mental breakdown over someone disagreeing with their choices on 4chan. They'll have thousands of people sucking their dick regardless of what they make, due to the high demand for this shit.
>>4228602
You can say what you want, but tentacles are a bizarre fetish. I don't find it disgusting like scat, but it's just something that ruins any scene it's in. I feel the same about futa. Just not interested.
I find it particularly grating in an FH, because they tend to have a certain level of self-insertion. That's part of the original theme. And guess what, I don't have tentacles.
>>4227488
>>4228230
>>4227884
>>4227971
Let me just be the first creator to point out that this guy has a right to an opinion and telling him to "Shut the fuck up" seems rather infantile.
His Reply "Go suck a dick." mad me chuckle a bit...
Next to address the whole anon vs non anon shit with 4chan vs Discord...
The probable main reason why creators sometimes dislike 4chan is rather simple. 4chan can be toxic at times.
What i'm talking about here is not the people handing out critics left and right.
I learned a long time ago to understand the difference between constructive and destructive criticism.
No... What i'm talking about is the fucking speculation, the name calling, the ingratitude and the general dickery.
A lot of you guys like to come to conclusions on your own on a lot of shit and it can be fucking infuriating.
the anon system of 4chan with little to no consequences is one of the things that make 4chan awesome.
But it is at the same time one of the things that make 4chan the toxic waste dump some see it to be.
Now...
I'm just gonna go out there and defend my m8 CuddleBear.
You guys say stuff like "He's doing nothing for the community" and "He just wants the attention".
Well if you watched any fap hero from the past few months, he has most likely had a finger in creating it.
He is not just managing a Discord server.
He supply's us creators with high quality raw's
He is hosting a backup server with unlimited space se we don't lose our data again like what happened for Bastati.
He is hosting a share-drive so it's easier for us creators to collaborate.
he has in general made mine and many other creators lives easier.
Oh yeah.. He is a nice guy :P
hmm...
Guess i just committed figurative suicide on 4chan didn't I :D
>>4222422
fuck you japs
>>4228621
>Welcome to fucking 4chan amigo, negative criticism and an anonymous posting system go hand in hand and I for one fucking love it.
The whole negative criticism tripe has never been the predominant characteristic of any board outside of /b/ or the olden day news boards, a la modern /pol/. Yes, it was always around, but teenage edginess for its own sake was usually limited to those areas.
>You're suggesting he tone it down so the creators leave the discord hugbox, but then these threads would be no different.
I'm not saying that criticism or discussion isn't warranted. However, there is a gap between criticism and being a complete ingrate. People produce a product free-of-charge. You completely shit on a product. Those people fuck off, and you no longer have input in the product being made. This is simply how the world works, regardless of how much you wail about it. Okay, so let's say that in all your edge you successfully ostracize the creators. Well you were "proven" right and they leave. Job well done?
>Discord was a mistake.
I don't disagree here.
>Patreon was a mistake.
People who make things are entitled to charge for those things.
>They both brought in a whole lot of fucking apathy to a lot of communities and the only way to deal with apathy is zeal. Suck it up or go to reddit.
The sound of children whining is irritating. This is especially true when someone pontificates about board culture based on a palsied understanding of it.
stfu japs
While you nerds were arguing here I just fapped to The Seductive Grimoire.
Broke out my fleshlight for the final round. Shit was cash.
>>4228790
That's the spirit m8
>>4228751
>The whole negative criticism tripe has never been the predominant characteristic of any board outside of /b/
Oh wow, you must be new here, because that's been a staple since day one. It might not have been as common on /h/ like on other boards, but that's primarily because it's a slow board, and we're rarely discussing anything controversial and divisive.
Anyway, your subservient, naive, brown-nosing way of arguing implies that you really are new here. You'll probably want to grow a spine if you're going to be staying.
>>4227984
Is it Sir Derriere III's CH Perfection?
Then, Kanojo x Kanojo x Kanojo: Sanshimai to no Dokidoki Kyōdō Seikatsu ep2
>>4228807
You're being needlessly hostile. Do you think it's your job to shitpost at everyone who isn't sufficiently misanthropic?
>>4228818
No, I'm being hostile towards some asshole who's moralizing and writing a wall of text because someone said he didn't like tentacles.
>>4228807
>Oh wow, you must be new here, because that's been a staple since day one.
I've likely been here far longer than yourself, experiencing the culture, having been in college when Facebook was new. 4chan is old hat, like Something Awful and usenets before it. Not that you would believe me, but it matters little except to show vacuity in your argument.
>It might not have been as common on /h/ like on other boards, but that's primarily because it's a slow board, and we're rarely discussing anything controversial and divisive.
So then you would be agreeing when I said, "The whole negative criticism tripe has never been the predominant characteristic..." on boards such as this, yes? I mean if you were trying to prove my point, well done.
>Anyway, your subservient, naive, brown-nosing way of arguing implies that you really are new here.
I've always found it a funny observation that naivety is most strongly expressed by those who think themselves the opposite. I did not forward any sort of desire to kowtow toward the creators, but simply recognize that there is an inequity of effort here which makes a distinction between an edgy argument on /b/ and FH.
Really, if anything, the appeal should be to consequences. Good FH is the goal, and to achieve those aims then quality input and criticism is necessary. However, having a litany of edgy kids wailing each time someone makes something that doesn't genuflect their tastes or individual kinks is antithetical to that aim.
This shouldn't even be controversial, as there is a massive and objectively quantitative difference in the available input with the creators since this general first started and now. By all means, go on being "right" so long as that is more important than the outcome.
>You'll probably want to grow a spine if you're going to be staying.
Yes, yes. Whatever you say, child.
>>4228790
>The only intelligent person in this thread
>>4228828
You sure write a lot of words just to let everyone know you're a bitch.
Also, post some content with your whiny screeds or you're worse than nothing.
>>4228519
I mean I did? Wake up already, it's 2016 haha!
Also 4chan being 4chan brewing discussions out of nothing. For real guys, you're here to fap, so what's the fuckin issue here? Just do that and screw, you could try and create your own stuff if you're really this inclined.
I mean come on, we're busy enough as it is with projects, and Psycho is making time to reply to your hate-filled comments, something is not okay here and that's not the fish in my pants.
>>4228828
>I've likely been here far longer than yourself
You've been here since late 2003? I was a mod on an anime forum between 2001-2007. When 4chan launched, it immediately became a hit in the anime community, and it was no different on our forum, so I've more or less been here since day one.
>So then you would be agreeing when I said,
What exactly am I agreeing to? You said:
>The whole negative criticism tripe has never been the predominant characteristic of any board outside of /b/
>any board outside of /b/
The idea here is that you're on 4chan. People are anonymous, and as a result, people are direct. It's part of the board culture, regardless of the board you're on. If you can't deal with that, I genuinely don't understand why on earth you're here. If you had left it alone, none of this shitposting would have happened.
>I did not forward any sort of desire to kowtow toward the creators
You show a complete lack of understanding of 4chan board culture, and use arguments that I've mostly seen used by young girls (He's doing it for free! You can't criticize him! Suck his dick!)
>Whatever you say, child.
>child
I guess that seals it. Ending a sentence with child or kid is just an infantile attempt at sounding mature. It's particularly hilarious when you mention that you were in college when Facebook became popular.
>>4228740
The fucking guy almost banned a nigger because he didn't want to use the video organization shit he was shilling for.
No matter what he does in the background, he remains an attentionwhoreing monkey actively trying to drive FHs away from their origin on /h/ and that's fucking terrible.
>>4228943
:D
Because you know for a fact that I originated on 4chan?
Funny fact.. I started out on FJ and moved on to milovana.
>>4228870
>The idea here is that you're on 4chan. People are anonymous, and as a result, people are direct. It's part of the board culture, regardless of the board you're on.
The fact that people are direct is generally true, however, this applies over a wide spectrum, and always has been based primarily on the board. If you thought a lot of boards were generally vitriolic you would be very wrong.
>If you can't deal with that, I genuinely don't understand why on earth you're here. If you had left it alone, none of this shitposting would have happened.
Why? I'm bored. And this was fairly entertaining.
>You show a complete lack of understanding of 4chan board culture, and use arguments that I've mostly seen used by young girls (He's doing it for free! You can't criticize him! Suck his dick!)
I do feel like arguing this point, but let's give you this one. Sure. Why not?
>I guess that seals it. Ending a sentence with child or kid is just an infantile attempt at sounding mature. It's particularly hilarious when you mention that you were in college when Facebook became popular.
No, that was not an attempt to sound mature. That was an insult. I guess I'll need to be explicit next time since you seem unable to parse something rather simple. You are retarded. Better?
>>4228955
I never said you originated from 4chan, I said FHs did and, as far as I know, you didn't create the original FapHero.
I just have one thing to say regarding the negativity towards the discord server and the whole criticism topic.
In my humble opinion the nature of the server (which a lot of 4chan users seem to dislike) was in a way inevitable when you (partly) lose anonimity. That said, discord is undeniably a great for people like me who do not check forums and 4chan boards on a daily basis. But the fact that by overcomplicating the server it sort of turned it into it's own clique, probably doesn't help new people who are just interested in this hobby(?. I guess.)
I guess what I'm trying to say here is that as it stands now it's a lot more like a friendly neighborhood cafeteria than anything else. (Not to say that that's a bad thing but perhaps unnecessary.)
And as for criticism, I think it is a crucial part of any creative work but as others before me have put it, there is a difference between constructive criticism and blatant outcry at anything different than someone's comfort zone.
Okay so long post over but I do also want to mention that I did create a private server of my own for the sole purpose of recieving direct feedback and criticism regarding my fap hero. It is limited to 25 invites as of now (hopefully it works) but I want to emphasize that this is a simple IRC styled, single channel chatroom for me to share rounds and previews and get immediate responses. No roles, no nothing. So if you wish to help me test stuff or voice your opinion directly then I do encourage you to join! :) (Again, this is no special treatment daycare or whatever; join only if you wish to help me! [https://discord.gg/0uq5LLd6BiNncxDS])
Thanks!
and why should we really care if it came from here or there? it doesnt really matter DESU.
the community needs a place to grow, not for hate.
>>4228963
So he's driving away the videos themselves.
How the fuck is he managing that?
How can you even come up with a stupid thing like one person being responsible for a ton of creators fleeing /h/ ?
are you saying that we creators have no minds of our own?
>>4228970
Link is just sending me to the discord main page, mate.
And I doubt the thing is full already.
>>4228230
Just to voice in my opinion, this is /h/, and yet (imagine this!) it doesn't entitle you to disregard every other creators' attempts on a whim just because you feel like it.
We create Fap Heroes because we like it, enjoy it, and want you guys to enjoy it. If you don't like a particular product, that's fine, everyone has his preferences. But the way you said what you did, you sound like an ungrateful fuck.
To you, that's just a product. Something to rub one out to and forget afterwards. To us, it's weeks of research, editing and cleaning. And - get this - Fap Heroes are a niche topic, belonging to a public taboo topic which is porn/sexuality. You can't just go outside, scream out 'Hey guys, look what I did', sell it to some company to release and earn fat cash. It's more of a hobby, a hobby that takes time and effort, and a hobby that we don't even have to share with you guys if we don't want it. So try and appreciate our effort if nothing else.
And if you're inclined a tentacle round is a wasted round, I do encourage you to try your own, and not name it a waste of time.
>>4228475
I - and my FH - originated somewhere else, and you're right, I only posted it here because this is where it originated. If my content is not welcome here because 'hurr durr get out to /d/ fgt' I just won't share it here, no fucks given.
>>4228740
>toxic
It seems reddit or your discord hugbox would be better suited for you. I appreciate what you do and I really like your work, but if you believe "take your tentacleshit to /d/" isn't a legitimate complaint, you have some really thin skin. This is /h/, people here like vanilla. If they didn't, they'd be browsing /d/ instead. I am grateful for every FH that is released, because I dabbled in video editing myself, and know you guys put weeks of work into these badboys, but that doesn't put you above the board rules.
I'm not telling any creator what to put into their FHs, that is up to them. What I am telling you to do is taking /d/ content to /d/.
>>4228979
It's only one moron spewing shit because "muh vanilla /h/!", ignore it. If a 5-10 minute segment of a 30+ minute video is too much for him to handle then it's his own fault.
FapHero is FapHero, no matte the content. As long as no tentacle scenes are explicitly posted as images to the video in high numbers, no board rule was broken. Look at the HMV thread, people post /d/-tier HMVs over there all the time, sometimes even with preview snapshots, and nobody gives a flying fuck about it either.
so we should have a fap hero tread for each little thing then? because it sounds like that is what you want...
waste of time and effort IMO.
>>4228989
sry... my ramble was not ment to be against complaints about where to put stuff like tentacles..
Maybe i'm not the best person to be starting this discussion as the only thread i have ever been in is this one :P
I know shit about the rest of 4chan
>>4228970
Dan, Pirate Haven when? ;_;
>>4228991
Friend, you should learn how to reply properly.
>>4228956
>Why? I'm bored. And this was fairly entertaining.
Not even that guy, but you sound like the average angsty highschooler, buddy. You sure you're old enough to be here?
>>4228602
This
What a fucking faggot.
>>4228989
You also deserve to go to reddit if you're normalfag enough to hate tentacles
>If they didn't, they'd be browsing /d/ instead.
Plain wrong.
>>4228989
>If they didn't, they'd be browsing /d/ instead
I like vanilla, rape, tentacles and monster girls, yet I rarely ever browse /d/. You'Re just being a complete retard.
As >>4228990 also pointed out, him talking about /d/ stuff and posting links to it isn't breaking any forum rules in the slightest when it's still on-topic, that topic being FapHeroes. You can't tell people on /a/ talking about some of the music in song-based shows like Euphonium or HaruChika to fuck off to /mu/ either, that'd just be retarded and pointless.
:D
see.. this thread is not as dead as you all thought it was.
you'r welcome ;)
>>4229019
I'd rather have a half-dead, slow thread with the occasional retarded spew than a shitstorm and unnecessary community drama.
>>4229019
And now for a twist. PS is in actuality...half the posters in this thread.
>>4229021
He'd be a pretty good actor, if that's the case.
i saw 42 replies so i come in here thinking theres a new FH out but it's just this bullshit
you should all be ashamed
>>4229156
this is the fastest this thread probably ever gonna go
>>4229156
Yeah I thought something new had been released and I got excited. Then I saw the shitposting.
I just wanna say as a humble anon that I'm really excited for everyone's new stuff, and no tentacle round is going to ruin that fuck the drama. I, for one, appreciate everything that each and every one of you do you're all beautiful people
no but seriously fuck tentacles brb gonna fap to pirate haven r2 preview again
See my previous comment:
>>4226094
Just because you don't like something doesn't mean you get to spite it out of existence. Everyone has their own kinks. Let the tentacle guys have their tentacles, the futa guys have their futas, so on and so forth. If you don't like something, just don't fap to it. Simple as that. Personally, I welcome a little variety in Fap Heroes, as most everything now is just some variation of clips and music that's already been done, maybe just in a slightly different order. That's not to say any of it is bad, Psycho, Bastati, Sax, etc., all these guys have real quality work that you can tell they put a lot of effort and time into. Basically what I'm trying to say is, if someone wants to branch out and experiment a little, who's to say they aren't allowed to try something new? There can be no progress is there is never change. So Psycho, Bastati, Nanashi, Sax (if you're out there), Dan, and all the other creators out there, make the Fap Hero YOU would want to fap to. Odds are most everyone else will want to as well :)
Peace out and Fap happy everyone!
>>4229517
Well said
>>4229517
(I'm always out there :3)
>make the Fap Hero YOU would want to fap to
To me, that's definitely the most important advice about creation.
As a creator, you have to keep in mind you won't please everyone and asking the community about what you have to put into your FH is already a mistake, in my opinion.
Your goal must be to do something that you like, if people like your work that's definitely a bonus but it shouldn't be your main purpose.
Most importantly if you make this for free.
>>4229567
He IS alive!
Seriously though, I just want people to be able to enjoy both making and fapping to the creations that people like yourself put so much effort and time into, with no monetary motivation, just a shared passion for this wondrous phenomenon. I would try to make my own but I'm god-awful at editing and I don't the spare time either. That's why I don't complain. I just appreciate the fact that someone else has given such a marvelous gift for me to release my carnal desires upon :)
>>4228839
Haha I love you.
I actually quite enjoyed that (shorter) fap hero. I prefer FH to be somewhere around/within 30 minutes. Fapping for an hour is really tiring, especially when you're using toys.
>>4228979
>But the way you said what you did, you sound like an ungrateful fuck.
And you sound like an overly sensitive cunt.
I'm an artist. I've been drawing for the better part of a decade, and have done free requests (including hentai) for hundreds of people over the years. Even made a living off of art for a while, before deciding I'd rather have a traditional career and just draw for fun.
If you do something creative that gives you a large following, most people will suck your dick, and a handful of people will call you an asshole. That's just life. If I took personal offense every time someone criticized or attacked me, I would never get anything done. If you want to know what that looks like, take a look at Anita, the internet's #1 professional victim.
The fact that you can't deal with this, and actually feel entitled just because you create jerkoff material, says more about you than it does about me, especially considering we're on 4chan.
And really, it was one comment, yet it's spiralled into this shit show. That's what entitlement leads to.
>>4228990
There's more than one person. I made the original comment, but I never said anything about /d/. That was someone else.
My complaint was specifially directed at Bastati, because he's the only one whose FHs I look forward to, and it was an expression of frustration that he's including tentacles. I didn't say he wasn't allowed to do it, or that he should go to /d/.
>>4229645
I have some serious doubts believing your 'life story' here for the sole reason how different your 'story' is from how you react to things. Criticism is all good, fine and dandy, proven it's a constructive criticism. Yours is clearly the unneeded, uncalled for, baseless criticism that leads to nothing. Say, if you really are an artist, how do you react when somebody bashes something you've been working at for days on end, solely because he doesn't like the CONTENT? If you don't like the content, you just leave it the fuck alone, nobody asked you to comment on it if you're a vanilla fag and dislike those things just because. You are a single person that nobody cares about, and Bastati was requested some /d/ content by a few people at least. So he does what most artists do, and aims for the broader audience.
I'm well aware of what being creative brings me, and I'm alright with all sorts of negative opinions on my content, but I won't tolerate being an asshat just because you disagree with the rest. If you're such an original persona that your opinion is so important it needs to see the light of day, good for you, but nobody you're aiming this opinion at will take you seriously. And yet, Bastati being the kind soul he is, he actually catered to your selfish needs and will triple the amount of work required to make three versions of a fap hero. He shouldn't have, and if I were in his shoes, I'd just stick a middle finger in your general direction and continue working on whatever I feel like making. If it's /d/ content, too bad, people will just skip it if they don't like it. Haters gonna hate.
Hey, is there a way to contribute money for you guys but in a way that on the credit card does not come "FH LOVER XXX" ?
And please keep doing this.
>>4227261
I really liked that FP too, as I said previously the production value is not high, but I think it does some things very well that others are not doing and for myself are essential:
- Hard or soft strokes
- more communciation from host
>>4229670
Now you're just making me feel like an ass.
While I appreciate the effort, you probably shouldn't let a few loud assholes such as myself dictate what you do. The drama you see in your average 4chan thread doesn't actually reflect the audience, so there's no need to feel pressured into any major changes.
If I'd known my comment would turn this thread into a shitfest, I would probably have been more tactful.
For a general that isn't that old, this really degenerated quickly.
When did it go from "Holy shit, other people actually know what Fap Hero is," to this shit?
>>4229678
I for one blame capitalism.
>>4229677
>>4229653 (I deleted my message. I will correct myself in this one. Sorry I'm good at making people feel shit ahah, you cool man).
Don't worry. I'll make a replace round. So no round is wasted.
I'll make 3 (4 now) editions as I told you guys. However, some updates because most like vanilla. Because of this maybe the deadline will be moved a bit. Because I'll continue working on the other rounds and then at last return to round 4 and edit some scenes.
* Original (Vanilla. Edited Round 4 without tentacles).
* Alternative (/d/ actually It's just the original round 4. To be exact, there is only gonna be one round with /d/ content).
* No Host/No Story/ (Some people feel it's kinda gay).
* No Beatbar (Yeah, someone actually requested this ahaha).
>>4229675
>how do you react when somebody bashes something you've been working at for days on end, solely because he doesn't like the CONTENT?
I ignore it. I usually get a lot of compliments, and a small contigent of people who attack me, my art or the content of my art. As I said, it's just the nature of having an online audience.
>So he does what most artists do, and aims for the broader audience.
It's actually a narrower audience. Most tentaclefags also like vanilla, so they're not really missing out when it's not included. However, when you include tentacles, you push away some vanillafags. Again, he can do whatever he wants. I'm just astonished at the reactions my comment has garnered. People seem to have a very thin skin around here.
>>4229682
> No Host/No Story/ (Some people feel it's kinda gay).
I'm personally torn on the host. If it's well done and subtle, it can add to the experience, such as in the original Fap Hero.
However, if the writing is off, if it's too intrusive or you suddenly have cheesy porn lines pop up in the middle of a scene, it's a boner killer.
If you include a host, don't go overboard with the story, and make sure to properly establish the character, so you don't feel it's the guy who made the FH clumsily asking you if you're about to cum. I feel the original FH is the only one that successfully implemented a host. Of course, it was pretty disappointing that she wasn't the star of the last round, when that was what the entire FH had been building up to.
>>Animex 1.0-SAX 3,44 GB
>3,44 Gb
welp, how come they are so big? Lenght? Poorly encoded? If there is no other choice I guess I will have to steal someone's wifi.
How do I git gud?
>>4229775
Learn to control your breathing and relax your PC muscle.
>>4224281
kickass torrents is great, download it on some VM and select the first few results (Tho your computer has to be 64-bit :I).
>>4229777
What exactly is my "PC muscle"
>>4229847
Isn't it the one you use to strengthen your dick up and down. I can lift my dick by it self, is that the PC muscle? I'm confused by this topic as well
>>4229847
It's the politically correct muscle. It's a back muscle that develops in people who are born without a spine, to help keep them upright.
can anyone tell me which fap hero it was that started with 'Sexy Bitch' My david guetta
>>4229917
Cock Hero - Paradise
>>4229517
>If you don't like something, just don't fap to it. Simple as that.
>FHs literally forbid you to stop fapping
GJ m8.
>>4229675
Don't want to interfere with your fuccboi fight, but you sound like a huge bitch. Boohoo some guy doesn't like dickgirls and called your FH shit. Ignore and move on.
>>4229682
I've been complaining about /d/ stuff but you really didn't have to go to those lengths my man. Still, appreciate it my nigga.
>>4230321
You know damn well he meant that specific FH, don't try and over generalize to further your shit argument.
To address the thread in general, it is totally fine if you don't like something. I'm not into tentacles myself. But going around and saying shit like "wasted round" like it's an objective fact is ridiculous, and it certainly isn't constructive.
People make things, either enjoy them or don't. That is the end of what you are entitled to.
Why not just move the next thread to /d/? It would eliminate the bullshit over "Hurr, I hate any kink that doesn't involve missionary position for the sole purpose of procreation."
It seems like it would give creators more room to experiment, while providing a new group of individuals the ability to provide input and learn about FH.
>>4230365
I don`t wanna go to /d/ '-'
>>4230348
Must be hard typing with all those dicks in your mouth.
I think the easiest thing to agree on(maybe), is FHs shouldn't mix rounds, if a FH is mostly vanilla content, it should be all vanilla content, or if its loli content, it should all be loli content, or if its futa, it should all be futa, that way people who don't like certain content aren't put off by a single round, they can just skip the FH altogether.
This is why it is fine for someone to say it's a "wasted round", because they get to that round and either have to stop, or skip past it.
I have no problem with tentacles, so if someone wanted to make a tentacle themed FH, bring it on.
But I feel mixing is a bad idea.
woooot? people dont like different things all at once?
mixing things is what makes these good dammit!
i'm curious about what plot twist would lead to tentacling in a FH with a scenario...
>>4230365
That's stupid, last time I went to /d/ a couple years ago was a full fledged dick fiesta, to the point they made most /d/ stuff move over to /b/ and I doubt anything has changed. Although, now that you mention it, I wouldn't mind a futa hero.
>>4230365
Because this thread does not belong to /d/.
/d/ is basically the more specified, kinkier version of /h/ and more of a daughter board than anything. A huge majority of content in these threads is absolutely /h/ territory and nothing else. The few things that do cross over to /d/ are still not breaking a single board rule and do not warrant the thread to be moved.
As was mentioned before, HMV threads have always had HMVs containing tentacle and monster scenes and they've been around for years with no intereference by the mods and little to no bitching by the people there.
How come these threads degenerated from being the 2"ess retarded hugbox version of /hmv/" to this cancerous clusterfuck in a matter of, well, days?
>>4230393
Variety is the spice of life man, half the time vanilla shit feels like more or less the same thing with varying qualities of animation and it gets tiresome
i don't think everything or even most things should be mixed, but i don't think it would hurt every now and then.
>>4230531
Not saying variety isn't a good thing, it is just if you're getting into a FH, then round 3 comes around and it is for a kink you just aren't into, it is a big turn off and can ruin the whole experience.
Obviously this will always be the way even with just one type of content, but it will at least minimize it, and this way you can have ones dedicated to kinks people like.
Obviously everyone has their own set of tastes, and you could mix the content to suit someones tastes, but it wouldn't suit everyone elses tastes, to me thats a problem.
Of course, I am just one person, so you can take it with a grain of salt and just ignore me, just throwing out my opinion in case someone takes note
>all this arguing
They do it for free, guys.
Just go back to fapping.
>>4228989
>If they didn't, they'd be browsing /d/ instead.
/d/ doesn't make HMVs. Also Classic fetishes like tentacles and dick girls never get posted there. Now it's all diaper porn and anthropomorphic jets.
>>4230365
Enjoy your dead thread then.
why the hell should be move?
if we really broke the rules then the mods can say something about it.
moving it will just harm it more than anything.
and you know, if this thing keeps up then the creators dont even want to be on here for all we know.
nothing, nothing stops them from taking this tread somewhere else.
so stop complaining and just enjoy the show.
>with family for Easter
>music playing in the background
>recognize a song from one of the Fap Heroes
T-thanks guys
>>4230365
That's stupid, Fap Hero is at home on /h/. If people have a problem with things that aren't utterly and totally vanilla, then let them complain. It's not our duty to fuck off to /d/. If they can't deal with tentacles they should just stop visiting these threads. It's that simple.
cuddlebear in the "creators" group without doing shit except annoy people lmao
>>4230539
You are entitled to your opinion, it's just that for me your opinion is wrong. I dislike the idea of an all futa or all loli or all whatever FH. I want to see things come from different places, not just the same thing over and over.
Even if I don't like it, that's fine. Everything shouldn't be for everybody. Really if you're ok with an X only FH even if you don't like X, then consider any FH with just one round of it an "X Fap Hero" and realize it's just one that isn't for you.
People who like whatever kink are almost certain to like vanilla as well, so why shouldn't they be able to have both in a FH?
Is there a preview of round 3 of Pendulum?
>all these people arguing
>I'm just sitting here dick in hand enjoying some Fap Hero
Don't mind me
Does Gu ever show up in these threads or on Discord?
>>4231056
He used to, years ago when he created them.
>>4229686
Well if hes making an extra version without a host, that would mean its just a raw FH. That opens up the opportunity for anyone to come in and edit in a new host if they dont like the original host.
april first ayy :D
I'm going to release my first Fap Hero tomorrow
![Studiofow HMV Final [WITH BEATBAR].webm](https://i.imgur.com/ZJMgD2Y.jpg "Studiofow HMV Final [WITH BEATBAR].webm")
>>4222422
My favorite Fap Hero is - http://www.pornhub.com/view_video.php?viewkey=ph56564d7b8d013
Are there any more uncensored Studio Fow fap heros in the works?
preferably with the female voices left intact during parts of the songs
>>4231009
I got previews of everything. PM me on Discord and send it to you.
If Discord is not an option then there is always my contact e-mail.
[email protected]
>>4231310
Good idea. I will render the rounds splitted too. So people can make collabs if they want.
>>4231477
I second this man, that Fow contest did some things to my dick. Don't know of any other HMVs from that, that got turned into FHs though.
Just finished uploading something special :P
> http://www.pornhub.com/view_video.php?viewkey=ph56fde50b35f77
New fap hero colab by me and others.
>>4232229
Think Bastati already mentioned it :P
might take some time for pornhub to convert it.
>>4232229
Fuck
>>4232229
90 seconds into the warm up round and I already came. Dammit.
>>4232229
HAHAHA THE FUCKING STAR OF DAVID
>>4232259
jewjewmagick
>>4232229
came during the setup, im a big michiru fan
>>4232229
whoa
did I go back in time?
is it the spirit of April's past that's bringing me back to experience this one more time?
I like it.
>>4232229
I actually really like the idea with this host.
>>4232229
video got taken down :(
>>4232229
Fun but disapointing...
Hope that there was something else on few days
>>4232229
You know the rules, and so do I
>>4232229
>>4232363
Pornhubs being pretty anal about copyright.
Worse than YouTube
>>4232426
It's still up?
>>4232440
APRIL FOOLS
>>4232446
m e m e s
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>>4231477
>Studio Fow fap heros
is there a download or torrent or mega for this?
i cant go into pornhub
still no dans
:(
Stay tuned for the real release of "A Fools Hero"
>>4232675
I'm waiting
>>4232713
uploading as we speak
> http://www.pornhub.com/view_video.php?viewkey=ph56fef2beac065
not an Aprils fools joke
this is something spearheaded by Nanashi with Bastati CuddleBear Fryz3 and me on the team.
6 rounds and a host. enjoy.
>>4232722
I know you were good guis after all
>>4232722
How long does it take to convert
>>4232753
it just finished :D
>>4232722
It's up!
>>4232722
Any chance you'll upload this on mega or something? Horrendous quality on PH.
>>4232765
your wish is my command.. uploading now :D
>>4232722
amazing. thanks
>>4232766
I'm sitting here with my dick in my hand brah, don't leave me hanging ;_;
>>4232782
give it some time.. my upload speed is not the best in the world.
Here is the mega link... enjoy.
> https://mega.nz/#!EsUjhKjb!zxdG1vmt6nKGkftZDLyir11Gt1sRG5veWBBGS0GNcN0
>>4232794
Many thanks broseph! I shall dedicate this fap to you.
>>4232794
Outstanding job, you guys really outdid yourselves. Really liked the audio and video choices, both were top notch and of high quality. The unobtrusive and slim beat bar was also nice, as it didn't distract from the action. That said, I'm kinda disappointed there was no real cum round/spot/whatever. It just kinda fizzled out and I still sat there stroking my dick. All in all pretty great.
PEPSI MAN
There's a lot of POV ONLY hentai that can be use as a host material. Come on guys!
>>4232722
Very nice, I have to echo others and say that the ending was a bit of a let down though. Could perhaps have used one more host dialogue and a reward round.
>>4230323
Faggots gonna fag. Which is why I hate this place with a passion :^)
>>4232827
The last round can kinda count as a cum round, no?
>>4233003
I spent a week extracting and converting the images and sounds from the game so they're usible. Don't be a faggot, everybody loves Michiru.
POV-styled material can be found in SAX's works, so check them out if you haven't.
I saw a couple of webm's with footage from Paidol Z paizuri scenes along with the song Keep On Rockin from FOOL, do any of you happen to know which Fap Hero video they are from? Because they really look like they belong to something like that. I'm kind of new to these, so my searches for track lists and Fap Hero vids ended up fruitless. Even the Pastebin had only one with listed hentai and songs used.
>>4233049
No, not really.
>>4232722
Thanks howard!
You're way better at this than any of those other stupid namefags, glad they all went away.
its not like all names was changed on aprils fools..
>>4233239
>>4233241
joke
your head
>>4233049
>Don't be a faggot
Woah calm down there I just suggested something
Are all creators here like this?
>>4233049
>The last round can kinda count as a cum round, no?
Helpful Criticism:
I think one of the reasons that people found the ending to be an issue is because it breaks with how stories are generally told. In storytelling and composition there is generally a flow to writing: Introduction, Body (Main Story), Climax, and Resolution.
The April Fools effort was fine with the introduction, as there is nothing wrong with a very minimalist plot. However, the final round came abruptly without fanfare or a sense of progression. Taken on its own, would the final round indicate to the reader that it was the end round? Could it have been used interchangeably with another round? These are good questions for analyzing writing and plot.
The original Fap Hero probably still has the best flow of writing, in which the host begins by laying out the game, while over the rounds goes from amusement to anger over not being able to get her desired outcome. There is a natural progression in attitude. This culminates in an enraged host interrupting an ongoing round only to segue into a very obvious final round, then defeat, and a reward.
Sax's Grimoire, School of Sin, Animex, as well as Final Faptasy each contain all of the standard elements in storytelling. Animex effectively has a "boss" round as a semi-climax before the resolution, whereas Grimoire and SoS resolve then finish with a climax as the ending. While having "boss" rounds isn't subtle storytelling for flagging endings and climaxes, there is not a great deal of room for nuance in FH.
Now, the technical aspects of Fap Hero have improved immensely since the first modern FH, Era. In that regard, April Fools is fantastic, and probably near the apex of FH.
I feel like simply following the basic elements would allow for nearly any FH with a host to be well received. That said, April Fool's was overall a very good FH.
Just speaking personally I like it when the ending round stands out and is very clearly the ending with harder and more intense beats, and when the very last beat of the entire FH is where you're supposed to cum. Instead of just another round that could be swapped around into any order, and when there is just a final "cum round" where you're allowed to just do it whenever.
And even just a very simple story (I don't expect Shakespearean writing or anything) can make the whole thing way more fun, interesting and memorable then if you're just watching a few strung together hentai clips with music in the background.
I hate how most new FH uses chilled and boring music. I like OPFaggot's and Gu's FH best because they not only edit fluently, but also use heavy, hard industrial/hardcore. like rxr stage 2 is probably my favorite stage of any FH.
If people continue to use shitty sleepy music I'll be forced to make one myself for my private collection.
Also I'm not completely serious if it wasn't obvious. All new FH are greatly appreciated.
A Fools Hero was also very nice, my fav after original and gu.
Also, speed isn't anything. Try to keep it reasonable so animations don't look like a clusterfuck of fast forwarding through anime-commercials on vhs tapes.
Know when to skip a beat in the editing to keep the animation look interesting.
Careful with the aberrations i can see them become cancer very quickly.
>>4233583
Come right ahead, I'll be waiting. Or, for this regard, how about making a list of helpful music titles for us to use? There's millions of music tracks on the internet, and finding this perfect few isn't always the easiest task in the world.
>>4233359
I get this, I know. Then there also comes a factor we've been rather pressured for time, as the last bits have been worked on till the last second; we've had a climax round planned, but there was simply no more room to make it, as everyone involved (excluding myself, sadly, as I had an arm surgery at the time) was busy enough with what they set out to do.
>>4233303
It's been a rough week and my arm hurts like tits, so excuse my rude approach, I saw this as a potentially pointlessly criticising comment which it clearly isn't.
my only complaint with fools hero is some of the beats are too complex to follow without just staring at the beat bar, particularly in round 4
well guys.. there is no accounting for taste :D
But i do see a lot of good constructive criticism. Like the story of fools hero not being structured properly and missing the climax.
and the beats being poorly made in round 4...
loads of good stuff...
some news though...
Us who made fools hero liked working in a group, and as such have decided to continue working in a group. We have a name and you will know this name soon enough.
We will take your critics to heart and try to implement some of it...
And thanks for the positive response on A Fools Hero :D
>>4233881
Looking forward to your future endeavors
Shit man that was really awesome, especially the first few rounds.
I think it could have been longer easily though. A lot of the footage wasn't used long enough to trigger a good reaction, basically it's a bit too fast, so I managed to beat the FH on the first try despite thinking it's outstanding.
I can almost say it's TOO good
>>4233881 (For more observations)
>>4233779
>Then there also comes a factor we've been rather pressured for time, as the last bits have been worked on till the last second.
I imagined that this might be the case. Assuming that you have a rough storyboard set out at the beginning of work, then it might be a good idea to bookend things. Having the introduction and climax/resolution completed early on will allow for the completion of the narrative no matter the size of the body, nor will the overall story be as negatively affected by an unexpected lack of time. Losing a round somewhere in the middle isn't nearly as dramatic as having no climax/resolution.
Many writers of books already have the outcome in mind from the get go, and with the shallower plots in hentai stories (not that it is a bad thing, simply a reflection of the medium), it should not be too difficult to tie in body rounds even when a conclusion is already written out.
The April Fool's Fap Hero struck me as something that would be a bit trickier to write because it calls for an active voice. Most FH are structured in a way that passivity is the norm. Hero X, you must face challenge 1, 2, 3, 4 and survive.
The introduction set up April Fool's, however, has a duel as the main challenge to overcome. This is pretty ambitious. "Whoever comes first wins," calls for intra-round dialogue, teasing, etc. to keep the narrative moving, along with the inter-round story. The duel angle is a good and exciting angle, but it expands the focus to not only the protagonist, but also the antagonist as well. Are you winning the duel? Is she losing her composure? Was there extra meaning when her voice squeaked while taunting/teasing? The selection of a tsundere antagonist was actually well matched for this set-up.
Again, it was a good job overall. My comments come only as having TA'd some freshman writing classes, so forgive my autism toward narrative etc., as I know this is just for fun.
>tfw #how_to_make_a_fap_hero will never be finished
>April 3rd 2016
