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Shikishiro Konomi / Netoraserare ch 23
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I think we should get spoilers for chapter 23 of Netoraserare within the next day.

If anyone has any pictures or spoiler of the chapter to share the idea is to find this hentai fans
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Is haruka dead?
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>>4163981
Nope, just aftersex tireness, she is fine in the next page.
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>>4163963
Clean-up is a bitch.

I'll probably won't fix most of the imperfections in the paper.

Translation rough draft is complete and sent off for review.

No real ETA but chapter 23 IS coming along.
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>>4163963
Sempai would have never allowed this.
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>>4163963
We already know everything that happens in the chapter for weeks.
Shu doesn't get excited by being cucked anymore after a timeskip of 9 months or so (which pretty much confirms Haruka to be infertile) and they ask Shu's father to fuck Haruka next after showing him a porn video of her with random men. He agress after a silly blackmail about him sniffing Haruka's panties.

Shikishiro dropped the ball hard.
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>>4164018
He was part of the problem, he was no different.
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>>4164021
*agrees
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>>4163981
>>4163985
She's fine.

>>4164021
Let's see how things spiral out of control afterwards.
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>>4164021
She's on the pill.
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Dutch Rabbit you are a God jajja xd thank you for giving us another page and remove rumors luck translating
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>>4164054
>>want to have a baby
>>doing all kind of shit hubby wants for it
>> on a pill

what kind of stupid logic is that anon?
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>>4164061
husband isn't cumming inside her anymore, she's on the pill.
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well this hentai fans know this forum is for to compile information and then the full chapter thanks to translate this hentai my face
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>>4164064
You're really stupid, you know that? They had unprotected sex for over two years before chapter 1 even started and for months after it began. She's as barren as a desert. Shu was tested fertile in chapter 2.
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>>4164061
Watch there be some weird coincidence that Shuu's father isn't his real father.

>>4163997
Seems like guys are coming on her and not in her. Could explain why she's not preggers. Sure, there's still a chance doing it raw and not cumming inside but it can very well be that she's infertile. Shuu's been to the doctor... Haruka still hasn't been shown to have had. Bet if she went that'll break her heart to find out that she is indeed infertile.

>>4164060
I'm just a random stranger who wanted to bring this to English. No worries.
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It is true because in the chapter 2 the doctor said that I had no problems that was perhaps his depressed wife or something but we see that they take out later
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Using Shu's father to impregnate her is the perfect plan.
Not even DNA test is gonna find out.
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>>4164070
A little bit off-topic, but I wonder if paternity tests work if the two parents are blood-related? Or would that return some kind of error?
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>>4164074
Within margin of error. Indiscernible.
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>>4164075
No, I didn't mean if the two possible fathers are blood-related. I meant if father and mother of the child are related.
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that series will have surprises
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>>4164070
It's flawed when the to be mother is barren/infertile.
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>>4164068
wait shus father is not is real father from were did that came from, im i missing something?
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>>4164144
It's just fanfiction / would be another dumb plot twist with him being a cuck as well.
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that is diabolical jajajaaj. News is that already finished the draft of the translation according to an update of the Forum
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>>4164840
What forum?
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>>4164996
he talk about Rabbits Blog
http://rabbitscans.blogspot.de/?zx=be13bb96deb88f8e
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come out of the new ch? :/ anyone the raw version?
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and try to look at Japanese sites but nothing.
someone who has found or wait for them to finish translate
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>>4163963
So Rabbit just quit doing Ayamachi, Hajimemashite?
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>>4166029
No, he didn't. He just needs more time (probably because Seinen is slow).
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>>4166034

slow is an understatement.
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>>4166034
Not even a matter of slowness. Seinen Scans keeps doing other stuff that no one is interested in instead.
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>>4166034
>>4166085
>>4166859
How about you people move your asses for once and help out? Fucking leechers.
Not really surprised since that,'s all 99.99 percent of "fans" in here do. The "I can't help because I'm stupid" is getting old. Translators have lives and it is out of their naivety or kindness they translate anything for ungrateful leecher like you.
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>>4166859
He said he would bring out chapters 4 to 6 of Kizashi soon, which I'm very interested in.
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>>4166877
Help out how? Do you realize how many help offers he ignored back when he was doing Netoraserare? Also, you do know that "fans" can help and show appreciation through donations, right? You don't have to be a translator to be able to help. Stop assuming things like a total idiot.
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>>4166877

We know the Dutch and Sands are busy however Seinen is unreliable as he lies too much about his progress. I still remember all those I'm uploading netoraserare in 2hr guys post he did. Seinen is the translator that cried wolf too many times for most of us to believe him.
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>>4166877
Seinen pls
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>>4167029
I'm not seinen but I'm another translator. It pissed me of people are bullying someone because of an idiotic reason.
>>4166976
As if anyone donates. If you want to fast releases, you have to earn it by working for it.
>>4166989
Unreliable just because he works for free and not being a greedy pig who profit from other people's creation. The same goes for Rabbit and Sands, you cannot blame them if this and this got delayed, etc.
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>>4167029
FUCK OFF AND ROT AWAY
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>>4167035
At least Rabbit stays in touch with his fans. Seinen wouldn't let you know if something got delayed even if it took him years following a post that said he'll release something in one hour. Not trying to bully him or anything. I appreciate how he brought us actual interesting stuff before dropping them and leaving it to another translator instead.
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>>4167048
> Rabbit stays in touch to his fans?
Translators have fans now? Quality should be the matching stick. Both of them are on decent like most of the translator's out there. Why can't anyone inject creativity into their translations? I'm sick of these lifeless translations and they are boring to read...

Since Shikishiro likes to make stupid expressions, twisting the words meant to be serious into funny lines would really help make this series interesting. As long as it the added dialogue doesn't go too far out of context, it will be fine.
For example:
> I have longed for her
I always to fuck her (or simply) NTR her away from you.
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>>4167114
Forgot "wanted"
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>>4167118
>>4167114
netorarefags >>>/out/
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>>4167114
I don't think twisting words meant to be serious into funny lines would work good here. I mean, there's nothing funny in Netoraserare, so why force it to be one? It would just be awkward. Other NTR series are more fitting to change a serious context into funny one.
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>>4167127
The faces, their expressions. You could make a lot of funny memes from the manga. It's a masterpiece when it comes to faces expressing emotions.
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>>4166859
problem with seinen scans is the constant news update talking about nothing. Say x manga will be out in a few hrs, then a few days, then silence. He's done this multiple times now
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>>4167114
thanks for the new chapter sheet almost there for the chapter.
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Moving on someone has read the hentai Oideyo! Kei Mizuryu Land which is an amusement park xxx has 3 chapters and I think will come out the other
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>>4167114
>I always to fuck her (or simply) NTR her away from you.
GTFO. That's not what Gotou's character is.

If you want funny NTR, read stuff by espanya. Or mutilate other works with rewrites, if you want to twist their meanings.
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>>4167035
Ni idiot, nobody cares about Seinen being slow, the problem people have is that he has no schedule so when he says he is going to make X work on Y date he then simply forgets and starts with Z work.

And then there is the respect other translation group have which is why XCX Translation never touched Kizashi years ago, since it was already taken by Seinen.
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>>4167529
XCX Translation is dead and it's axing is because off Wani. Idiots.
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Dear Rabbit, can you at least post the raw?
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>>4167504
That's exactly what Gotou's character is. He is a person who will rape Haruka if he want. Funny thing is that translations are rewrites themselves.
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>>4167566
>He is a person who will rape Haruka if he want.
Yeah, you're totally right. That's why he was so confused and worried about Shu and Haruka after they were done.
Keep your head canon out of here.
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>>4167563
>years ago
Time to learn how to read anon
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Duch will publish the chapter after the mikocon, it has always been the case
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>>4167727
No it hasn't. Mikocon just recently released chapter 23, which he did weeks ago.
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>>4167750
I know, what I say is always public after the public mikocon
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>>4167727
I do not wait.

Sorry for the delay. The translation rough draft has been sent to Sands. He will need to make time for it when he can. This is all so that we all can release a HQ version to you guys to read and enjoy.

I could populate the pages with how the translation is now however I just want to avoid a lot of rework.

I have feeling I mistranslated stuff here and there because I did this one rather quick, the actual time it took for me excluding transcribing.

Again, sorry for any delays but it really helps when I have an experienced translator donating his time and helping me out.
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>>4167857
FUCK YOU HURRY UP GOD DAMN IT
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>>4167857
You're still not confident of your translating skills? Come on, you can't keep relying on someone forever.
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>>4167945
you rather have another fuck up then?
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>>4167945
Actually, that's why QC exist on scanlation.
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>his face when his wife is the cumdumpster of the town
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>>4168085
Maybe he finally realized how retarded all of this was in the first place. If he was so uncomfortable with having sex with Haruka he should have asked if he could gather experiences elsewhere instead of making her into a town bycicle, imo.

On another note: Hito no Tsuma Chapter 9 was released and shit hit the fan. That series got much better than Netoraserare.
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>>4168130
>On another note: Hito no Tsuma Chapter 9 was released and shit hit the fan. That series got much better than Netoraserare.
link plz cant find it
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>>4168154
No public links yet. Look at its gallery on exhentai, there's a DMM preview where you can also buy it for 300 yen.
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>>4168085
>Everybody huuuuuurts
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>>4168085
>all around me are familiar faces
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>>4168085
>when you try your best but you don't succeed
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>>4168085
>Whoooo caaan saaay where the rooaad goooes
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>>4168154
holy shit the husband knows now in that series. shit just exploded. last page is the husband looking at his wife with contempt and her staring at him with an indifferent look.
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>>4168204
well,no sympathy for the wife at all not only that shes trying to kill the baby with flower seeds. Didn't the guy she is now sleeping with rape her and he's implied to be infertile +he hates kids.

Divorce imminent,right?
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>>4168130
>>4168204

I guess it's going to end soon, newest chapter shows the rapist choking her and if she still doesn't get the hint and goes back to him I'll flip my shit for retarded writing.
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>>4168237

Apparently he confesses something to her before he rapes her. But the husband heard it and saw them having sex as the rapist wife kind of told what was going on and then took him to the shop. The wife had an indifferent look when seeing the husband and the husband was livid. That marriage is done.
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>>4168256
Chapter 10 is the last one. It's kind of funny that the chubby husband is very likely the father of both babies, though. The rapist definitely needs to be fucked in the ass in prison at the end.

He said that he raped all of the former employees and that none of them got pregnant before whore MC.
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If Seinen didn't drop Hito no Tsuma, that'd be really great. I'd really donate if he picked it up again. Has anyone else picked it up afterwards?
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>>4168204
>>4168256
>her staring at him with an indifferent look.
What? I can't upload it myself but her face wasn't indifferent.

It was a face of a person who lost the will and gave up on whatever comes at her. After she was raped, yes, this time she felt raped like when it was the first time, she had a face of dispair and self derision, likely because all she believed in was just lies.

>>4168231
Her character is unexpectedly complex.

She really loves her husband, and the reason she wanted to not have a child was because it would it her marriage.
So that's why she told the rapist about it but he literally told her to fuck off.

So the part that made her think this whole time that both she and rapist were similar about being accomplices of cheating and sharing this poison of betrayal somehow would made them understand each other.

However, it was just one sided, for him he was just a free fuck and a tool to release his stress, there never was a single bit of love from him which she realized when he stared at her as if he was looking undesirable trash.


About him being infertile, yeah, it's likely because Kana, the wife, realized the child might be from her husband's and not from the rapist which was why she was totally lost.

>>4168237
Nope, it was one chapter left to end and the wife Kana had her eyes totally open by both herself and the rapist.

>>4168273
Even when the fat guy is cucked, he remains alpha as fuck.

I only pity Saori as she might become a lone mother if Koutaro, the husband forgives his wife Kana.
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>>4168276
MintVoid was interested but said Hito no Tsuma was already taken by Seinen :S
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>>4168283
No...fucking...way. That's like saying something got taken by a skeleton. Now it'll never get translated. All he ever does is that Kiazashi thing or other random stuff no one cares about.
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>>4168283
As a commission. Anyone would do it for the money. Are you going to pay for it?
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>>4168283
From his blog:

>Tuesday, January 12, 2016
>Next update for this week
>So I think I will finish Chapter 2 of "Love Master Peach" then chapter 3 of "Hito no Tsuma" for this week release. Let's see how things progress but for sure one of them will be released this week.

Neither was uploaded.

>Monday, January 18, 2016
>Update!
>Okay so I decided that this week I will release the last 3 chapters of Kizashi. I have chapters 4 & 5 translated already. Right now I'm working on cleaning the pages and hopefully I can get that done by today. I'll make a video of me cleaning some pages of kizashi because some of these chapters have a lot of cleaning and redrawing that needs to be done.

>Tuesday, January 19, 2016
>Twitch!
>Okay So I just found out that my graphic card (Nvidia Gforce 770x) Supports twitch broadcast streaming! It's in 480p From my understanding and i don;t know how to use all it's features but in time i will. Right now i'm going to start a twitch stream of me cleaning the last pages of chapter 4 Kiazashi and The first few pages of chapter 5. Once I can get my microphone to work then i can give more details on how i go about things.

No videos on that Twitch channel yet. Afaik, Twitch doesn't even allow any adult content or anything non-gaming related.
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>>4168284
>Random stuff nobody cares about
Are you stupid? Mintvoid only do commissions. Also people are actually read Seinen's releases. This translator bashing, as if the other translator is any good especially after failing to preserve the actual humour in Photorare.
>>4168283
Stop spreading bullshit.
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>>4168292
Netoraserare has humor? It never had any when Seinen did it, so you're clearly the stupid one here.
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>>4168292
>This translator bashing, as if the other translator is any good especially after failing to preserve the actual humour in Photorare.

Do you see the irony in your post? He actually accomplished a decent translation for something that was seemingly stuck in editing hell. Also I don't see what is supposed to be so funny about that cuck fest. NTR that tries to make the cucking funny somehow fails miserably most of the time.
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>>4168291
People (or probably Seinen himself) think we're bashing the translator when we're only giving legitimate complaints in regards to slowness and endless amounts of lies.
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>>4168295
He said Photorare, not Netoraserare.
http://exhentai.org/g/880242/1b70498393/
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>>4168302
Fair enough, but don't expect any humor in Netoraserare. It's obviously not that kind of NTR.
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>>4168295
Not talking about Netoraserare
but the problem with this series is that the choice of words is so bad in the earlier chapters that it affected the actual translation.
>>4168299
Constructive criticism is bad?
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>>4168305
There isn't really that much humour in Photorare either, at least not in the main story (unless you count a retarded story as being funny). The only NTR I found somehow funny are these:

http://exhentai.org/g/497460/4587f7c6b6/
http://exhentai.org/g/140877/0d1397fc58/
http://exhentai.org/g/434853/5557f7c2ad/
http://exhentai.org/g/660909/ac88744265/
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>>4168306
I'm talking about Netoraserare in here. Not to mention the complete lack of punctuation. One sentence is Japanese doesn't equal to one sentence when translated. Sometimes, you need to break it apart to deliver the actual meaning.
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>>4168306
>but the problem with this series is that the choice of words is so bad in the earlier chapters that it affected the actual translation.


I already suggested Dutch Rabbit once to retranslate the first two chapters because of that. The conversation with the parents is a total mess that confuses who is the parent of who and what they're actually talking about.
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>>4168309
It's not significant, but the translation could have been better.
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>>4168302
>Photorare
>Humor
It was stupid, trying to be serious and then the author dropped the ball at the last chapter where all is "look actually I wasn't serious xD"
And took the retardation and drama of the previous chapter as if it never mattered.

>>4168285
He pretty much would do it for free if you are nice enough.

I along with some friends PMd him to do Garden and he fucking did.
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>>4168279
>Her character is unexpectedly complex.

She not complex at all, she dumb as hell and makes stupid decisions.
-keeps going back to her rapist like she has Stockholm syndrome
-tries to deceive husband in to no condom sex so she can make it look like he knocked her up.
-Tries to kill baby with flower seeds when no condom sex fails.
-Again knowing shes in the wrong,continues to sleep with rapist.

Hopefully she loses everything if/when the husband puts 2n2 together.
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>>4168431

Husband found out this chapter. Rapists wife spill the beans and took him to the shop and let him see for himself since he got mad that saori(rapist's wife) tried to put the moves on him again. Wife walks out of the shop to see a livid husband and she realizes she's done as the rapist rekt'd her completely this chapter as well. She goes full dead eyes apparently.
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>>4168431
>-tries to deceive husband in to no condom sex so she can make it look like he knocked her up.
>-Tries to kill baby with flower seeds when no condom sex fails.
The thing is, it's very very likely that her husband knocked her up since the rape guy who will end up in prison in the last chapter is most likely infertile.
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>>4168469
What are Saori's thoughts about the whole matter (i.e. her husband and Kana's affair, her pregnancy with Kana's husband, all of them individually, etc.)? I guess she's aware of her husbands affair with the other employees since long ago.
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>>4168600

Dunno only going off the summaries we got but she definitely knew what was happening with her husband and the other girls. She kind of flings herself on the husband so I'm guessing she's not 100% together at the moment.
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>>4168431
It is, isn't original or unique buy is complex, her actions and her thoughts aren't just the "I got dicked and yours is better than my husband + ahegao and whatnot"

She wasn't blackmailed nor she was magically brain washed.
She chose what happened by herself, she can't be white washed like netorarrfags do because she, unlike many heroines, had a choice.
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>>4168600
Ni, she just figured out what happened by guessing but I'm sure she didn't expect rape all the way, maybe molesting or harassment.

>>4168476
She had in mind deceiving her husband but she couldn't do it, aka her husband started doing her but she due to her pregnancy started puking so when he came she said we made a baby! But obviously it was just to satisfy the husband who wanted a child, that's why she immediately went to eat those flower seeds/fruits, because she planned a miscarriage and then get pregnant of her husband, that's why she told Saori to kept silent about her pregnancy.

Also in new chapter Saori was touching her belly, she wants that child.

I wonder if she will tell his rapist husband these:

Oh so you not just raped the former employees but also my best friend and had an affair while I was working?
Well, fuck you, I got myself pregnant if my friend's husband because unlike you his penis actually can do its job"

I wish rapist got impirisoned but if this happens I want him to break and commit suicide.
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>>4168731
>She had in mind deceiving her husband but she couldn't do it, aka her husband started doing her but she due to her pregnancy started puking so when he came she said we made a baby! But obviously it was just to satisfy the husband who wanted a child, that's why she immediately went to eat those flower seeds/fruits, because she planned a miscarriage and then get pregnant of her husband, that's why she told Saori to kept silent about her pregnancy.
She was already pregnant by him before the timeskip at that point.

It's funny that half of the posts ITT are actually off-topic, because it's more interesting than that Shu's parents cucking.
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Ok so I didn't really understand hito no tsuma a lot. But what I've got from you all post

>main wife loves husband but gets raped by side husband

> main wife then continues to fuck him but ends up pregnant and wanted to kill it since her plan to act like it was the husband didn't go well?

> main wife husbands cheats on her with her best friend who husband is the rapist. And gets her pregnant.

>main wife decides to keep the child and purses the rapist just to be BTFO. And at that very moment a jealous BF brings main wife husband in the shop to catch her.

Tell me if I had anything wrong but to me it sounds like they all are pretty bad people If I do say so myself
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>>4168927
Of course she was already pregnant that why she tried to miscarry
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I missed someone explain to me what they are all talking who is Saori
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>>4168965
She's a character out of another NTR called hito no tsuma
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>>4168931
The only really bad people are Whore MC and rapist flower shop guy. The husband of whore MC and girlfriend of rapist consoled each other one night because their partners are trash, got drunk and somehow ended up in bed together, which they regretted afterwards. Saori got pregnant after that one event, just like whore MC got pregnant after having unprotected sex with her husband once. He impregnated both of them in one go while rapist fucked everything that got near to him. Most of the former employees fled, only whore MC stayed and kept having sex with him, justifying it with retarded flower language.
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>>4169016
I missed mentioning that none of the women he raped got pregnant because he's infertile and he hates kids and probably humanity in general.
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But did the rapist wife knew what was happening when she found out that Kana was pregnant or did she found out when in chapter 8 she told the husband that she was pregnant? Or was it in this new chapter when the husband finds is wife with the rapist and Saori puts 1 plus 1 together?
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>>4169031
I'm wondering about that as well. Reading from the summaries, Saori sounded way too calm and collected to be able to show Kana's husband the affair. I expected her to flip out like Kana's husband.
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>>4169031
>>4169045
If the summaries are to go by, she just discovered it in the new yet to be uploaded chapter.
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>>4168130
Are only chapters 1-2 translated for the time being?
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>>4169368
Yeah. I don't think that will change anytime soon.
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>>4169371
That sucks because this definitely looks miles better than vol 3 of netoraserare.
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>>4168130
Why is it so hard to find quality NTR that isn't some generic fat old fuck screwing some teenage girl? I'm having trouble finding anything that's up to par with the quality of these following links.

http://exhentai.org/g/875017/e5b677722f/
https://hitomi.la/galleries/838270.html
http://exhentai.org/g/545462/5483650e4c/

These 3 along with Jin and the senpai arc of netoraserare are the only good top tier NTR i've manage to find. Maybe i'm not looking hard enough, I did only recently get into the genre afterall.
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>>4169390
All of those are very generic, even though the art is good. The Senpai arc of Netoraserare was stretched far too long as well.

Try anything by Hakaba or Hori Hiroaki such as Public Toilet or Daydream. Or read Midori no Rupe: Garden. Way better than the crap you find in most other places.
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>>4169429
>The Senpai arc of Netoraserare was stretched far too long as well.
Maybe, but whatever I still fapped.
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>>4169390
have you read Sanbun kyoden works?
nothing like him when it comes to NTR
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>>4169496

his stories are all copies of each other pretty much. its boring.
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>>4169496
His peak is Sayuki no Sato, it went downhill after this. The only good thing about his work now is his art, it really give you this erotic feeling but that's all.
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>>4169557
that's true but he is still different than everyone else which are copies of each other themselves so yeah
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>>4168085
>Hello darkness, my old friend
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>>4169457
It was only good the first time.

>>4169564
Like the other ankn, at some point her stopped trying.

Since then all of his stories are the women fucking with randiim dudes while justifying on monologues from the women that sex is more worth than anything the accomplished I'm life.
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>>4169429
>The Senpai arc of Netoraserare was stretched far too
I disagree. The car scene may have been unnecessary (we never even see Shu get the picture) but everything else was a demonstration of just how often Senpai was fucking Haruka. It was fine and should've concluded there.

>mfw we went from that to blackmailing Shu's father
Volume 3 completely killed any pacing this story had. Hito no Tsuma is doing it a whole lot better.
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>>4169610
It was stretched because they wanted to milk the series.
Only the time they had sex the first time was detailed and hot.
Afterwards was simple and repetitive being being worth only for Shu's faces.

Hito no Tsuma is a short series of just one tankoubon and the sex isn't predominant, there are chapters that only have 4 pages of sex for example.
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>>4169623
I hate the censorship by the way, and the sad part is that Hito no Tsuma tank is going to have it too.
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where can i read hito no tsuma chapter 9 ?
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>>4169623
>Hito no Tsuma is a short series of just one tankoubon and the sex isn't predominant, there are chapters that only have 4 pages of sex for example.
The sex in Netoraserare isn't predominant either, with some chapters that don't have any at all.
Anyway, volume 1 was still the best. It felt like the cuckolding at least had some purpose there, but now pretty much everything happening is pointless. I bet the next thing will be Haruka's family being involved before this ends.
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>>4169623
It only feels stretched because it ended up going nowhere, whereas a conclusion to the series would've made everything feel more natural.

I still can't stand how we went from Haruka being almost stolen away to randomly having Shu's dad involved. Every chapter now is different from the last with no clear indication as to where the plot is headed.
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>>4169390
>top tier quality

Well anon you must not read a lot of NTR. That's just your average of the mill NTR where girls falls for better dick.

Go read Wednesday after school and then the sequel Friday extra curriculum activities or some like that. Now that's a top tier NTR
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>>4169670
>bait
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>>4169672
>bait

It's only bait if I was lying anon.
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>>4169670
>That's just your average of the mill NTR
Then why am I finding so much fat old guy NTR? I'm not fat, bald, nor old so I can't relate at all. Nobody wants to see unattractive people fucking.
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Art only matters in NTR. How a plot is executed is more important that the plot itself.
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>>4169678
Anyone can write a top tier vanilla plot in 10 minutes. As for NTR, depending on the context, it's very difficult to create a scenario that ends in one chapter.
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>>4169680
>Anyone can write a top tier vanilla plot in 10 minutes.

That's wrong. Most Vanilla is pretty boring as well. It's not facepalm-inducing like NTR is, but there aren't many artists who really include great humour or storytelling like Zero no Mono or Akino Sora. Just look at the Fakku subscription chapters. Many of them are snore-inducing.
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>>4169788
There a lot more than that but not all of them are translated.

Netorare actually is so badly written because it literally tries to put everything the author can in one chapter.
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>>4169854
I know that there's lots of great Vanilla, but I just wanted to say that it's not as easy to find as he said. The percentage of well written Vanilla is certainly higher than in the NTR department, though. That's a genre more suited for VNs since they have a lot more run time and can portray the thoughts of the characters better. You can also relate to the MCs more since it's mostly written in First- Person perspective and they're faceless and voiceless.
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Hey,

Been busy for the last two days but the translation is being finalized right now. I'll start the typesetting tonight. Hope to have it ready to go Sunday.

Laters.
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>>4169972
ty and waiting
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>>4169972
Dutch
I read a lots of post saying Hito no Tsuma is a good read, are you interested on doing it?
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Yay it's sunday, shouldd I fap now or wait for rabbit to release NTR. Ahhh , I believe in the rabbitt.
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>>4170544
The chapter is unfappable anyway with maybe one page of sex.
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>>4170581

I thought they watched a video of haruka getting boned?
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>>4170581
fuck that man the whole series is like that
why call it a hentai then
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>>4170606
Yeah, and you see what happens there in one or maybe two pages.
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>>4170614
It's not really a hentai, it's an "h-manga". Otherwise it would've been a single chapter.
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>>4170654
erm h-manga which stand's for what exactly
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>>4170678
Don't mind him, he's that fucking idiot who thinks people read this for story.
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>>4170687
Well I read it for the story (and fapping of course), sooo yeah, you're wrong there. Besides, what are you and others doing in this thread if literally all you do is hating? That's so lame.
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>>4170697
see i care about my hentai having some sort of story sure but not the point of forgetting it's a hentai in the first place
if i want a good story with one page of sex there is a TON of normal manga to do that for me
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>>4170687
Around half the people in an earlier poll said they read this for the story.
I really wonder what you're doing here if you don't care about it. Pretty much every other Doujin or H-Manga is better suited for fapping than Netoraserare.
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>>4170706
You do realize that only a few out of so many chapters are like that, right? You're talking as if every chapter only had one page of sex. Sure I want the sex bit, but a few chapters that focuses solely on story development doesn't hurt, as it builds up to something bigger and shows that the story is being focused on.
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>>4170710
Because the art is nice (for the most part) and it caters to a specific fetish? Why do you "read" porn? For the intellectual stimulation?
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>>4170687
Of course people read this for the story. Are you mad?
You're thinking
>Reading it for the story = we like the story = we think it's great

People DO read this for the story, but because they wanna see what other bullshit is gonna occur.
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Whelp looks like no release today, oh well guess we will have to wait some more.
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>>4170954
We already knows what happens, you should be anticipating the spoilers which come out in a few days.
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Didn't get to start until around 4pm.

I'm here with K-Slice and I have 8 more pages to typeset. Adjusting the type as I go is talking up a little time.

Gonna take a break but as soon as the typesetting is done, it'll be proofed then ready for dissemination.

We want to get to get this out tonight so please sit tight.

Laters.
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>>4170960
The Manga is on hiatus this month. Did you forget? Next chapter will be at the end of february. He's always taking a break after 2 chapters or so.
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>>4170969
Where did he say there's going to be a hiatus? First i've seen the thread mention anything about it. Is it on his blog?
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>>4170970
>Is it on his blog?
Yes.
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>>4170961
>father

Shu is the absolute madman.
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>>4171015

Yup can't wait to see the crazy shit shu about to say in this chapter. I wonder how Haruka is hold up in this chapter as well.
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>>4171022
Because she is far crazier than Shu.
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>>4170606
Only worth fapping if it's a Sempai video
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>>4171124
It's not. It's some random dudes. Get over it already
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I know it's late.

It's done and will be U/L'ed momentarily.
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It's up.

Enjoy.

http://rabbitscans.blogspot.de/2016/01/netoraserare-chapter-23-out-of-control.html
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It's here:
http://g.e-hentai.org/g/897869/03d13a46d3/
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I'm off to bed.

Night.
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The faces run in the family.
It's hilarious.
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He's the supercuck.
I'm not sure, but I think Haruka asked first.
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That's probably the happiest face ever seen by Haruka.
I think her family will be involved next.
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>>4171187

thank you for your hard work

night!
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Quite hypocritical of Shu to lash out on his father considering the situation he's in.
This chapter was great comedy.
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So chapter 24 will be the first sex scene between Shu and Haruka since 10 chapters ago. Eh, it's something.
Not as good as volume 1, but it's not gone completely down the shitter.
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>>4171204
Pretty sure it will end up with Shu's father and Haruka having sex still. He won't be able to resist the temptation.
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Thanks as always, Dutch. Now I'm even more excited for next chapter. Hope for a good and quick release again!
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It's just me but I think Shu's father has some kind of fetish too? I mean he agreed but to touch only? Makes me think that he and his wife have this kind of arrangement with haruka's parents
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>shu's father does as he says and talks/touches as "needed"
>all part of his master plan to encourage shu to man up and throw off his ntr fetish
>shu comes to revelation, calls off the cucking
>Haruka's been too mindbroken/slutified and refuses
>divorce hilarity ensues
>shu's dad talks about a coworker that shu mentioned that seemed nice
>it begins
>Kawai and Shu pair up, immediate pregnancy with strong, honorable son
>the Tachibana dynasty is secured

Will Shu's father attain absolute based status? The destroyer of ntr and the guardian of "missionary position for the sole purpose of procreation".
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Haruka's pussy was supposed to be molded perfectly for Sempai, but I guess it's Shuu's brain instead the one who can't unplug his big cock.
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>>4171320
>but I guess it's Shuu's brain instead the one who can't unplug his big cock
Looks like you and Shuu are made for each other.
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>>4171204
bet 10 bucks he can't put it in

>>4171320
he might wanna put "big cock >22cm" requirement for the dating website
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>>4171320
>>4171325
Ok...

Is he gonna beg takakara to return? or will he pay him money? which one
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>>4171314
>>Haruka's been too mindbroken/slutified and refuses
That's the only thing BS here. She obviously just follows Shu's wishes.
Kawai having any significance won't happen, sadly.
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>>4171320
I wonder what would Haruka do if he confessed that?
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>>4171333

Okay I'll admit that was a bit far, but I honestly don't think Shu and Haruka can bounce back from everything that's happened. If Shu does come to reason I can also imagine Haruka being too mentally broken. Not necessarily in a slutified way but she can't deal with Shu suddenly coming to terms and acting like nothing happened after he asked her to do all of these things she didn't want at all in the first place.
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>>4171339
Kick him in the balls
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>>4171314

Haruka and Shu won't separate. I feel as though the main conflict in this as far as Haruka being stolen was Takakura and that's long gone. Absolutely no way he's coming back after Haruka admitted the truth about their affair.

This chapter seems to have taken a very light/comedic tone which is rather unusual, so I have this feeling that it's winding down to an ending where Shu is going to stop this. I don't know if they have a new writer on board or something but this needs to end pretty soon in my opinion. Could even have ended when Takakura closed the door on them because everything since has been like an extended aftermath.
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>>4171343
Shuu needs Takakura far more than Haruka ever did tho, that's being the only constant on his life for the whole run of chapters.
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>>4171340

Chapter 20. Haruka is fine with the idea of not seeing other men. If something snaps in Shu and he doesn't want that anymore then she will stop.
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>>4171345
She knows, that's why she wants his father now.
The shock should cure his addiction for good since we are close to reaching the ending.
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I knew Mikocon was waiting on rabbit. Now they decide to put namaiki up.
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>>4171377
That's a waste, why would anyone spend their access on the mag after today?

Way to shit over the uploader guy.
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>>4171377
Probably because you autists keep leaking that shit. Way to fuck over anyone who actually wants to read the thing.
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Shuu and Takakura should have just been bros in high school then all of this could've been avoided.
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>>4171398
Shuu is a petty jealous fuck, anon.
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>>4171181
took you long enough

fucking shitskin as slow as the mikochinks
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Netoraserare is officially the worst work Konomi ever done. He doesn't know what to do anymore. Everything is forced, it's like he's got a gun that's gonna go off if he doesn't keep up the bullshit. Namaiki is really the graveyard of artists, greedy assholes. He wasted a brilliant concept, he should end it and fuck off Namaiki. He's treated like that director of Fantastic Four 2015, being forced to continue a series that's suppose to be over a long time ago. Haruka is one of the most underused females in hentai. The sex scenes twice as long. There shouldn't be development every chapter and there should have been at least 10 more sex focused chapters. Since when did such became a fucking filler?

Also fuck everyone in here. You cunts don't even know what the fuck do you want. As long as a new chapter comes out, you read it no matter how stupid the content is. I have to ask, do you even know what you want?
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>>4171444
Oh for the love of god, just go somewhere else and read your damn generic shitty one-shot NTRs that you seem to like so much.
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>>4171444

I've not been complaining, and am quite happy with how this manga is progressing. My question to you is if you hate it so much then why are you here?
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>>4171452
>>4171456
Yes I prefer those since I only care for the art. Single NTR chapters are not generic but are so compressed to the point they will have to rely on panel flashbacks or words. People are actually satisfied about this? If you don't know how to fap, get out of here. The story of a hentai is not important, but how it is executed is. I'm still waiting for a single chapter I can actually fap to. Haruka Is sexy. The guys in here are delusional idiots who are blind to see how fuck up the story is.

Wait a minute, single panel flashbacks and words... Doesn't that exist in Netoraserare? So the series has become a generic manga. Why the fuck the chapters so rushed? You don't need to be blind to see that. Not to mention the underwear scene is a pure retcon.
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>>4171480
The sex scenes in those generic NTR are at least better than the current arc in Netoraserare.

What can you do with 23 pages? The sex scene next chapter will be rushed again. Speaking of retcons, anyone notice the retconned this chapter? When a preview doesn't even exist in the chapter before it, you know the editors didn't like it and force another filler chapter.
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>>4171488
Or ask Konomi to redo the chapter or they will punish him again. I wouldn't be surprised if Konomi redo the series as a webnovel or a irregular manga in his blog.
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>>4171480
THIS
you speak the harsh truth anon
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>>4171480

But my question was, if you hate Netoraserare, why are you here?
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>>4171480
>>4171506
Oh geez. Find something else better to do if you hate it so much. It's sad how people can waste so much time just hating on something that many evidently likes.
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>>4171509
Haruka being cutesy is the best part of the chapter. I noticed some minor mistakes this chapter, like how Haruka's breasts.
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>>4171480

You might actually want to check what retcon really means. I understand the development is beyond what you'd expect but just because you don't like how it's written, don't call it a retcon. Konomi isn't rewriting the past of any of these characters, just informing us of what happened. Just call the spade a spade and refer to it as bad writing.

Lots of manga that contain hentai/ecchi content and are not purely for masturbation. Sex and crime was mentioned here, there's this, blue snow blue scene, musa, even ayamachi hajimemashite had a few unfappable chapters.
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>>4171520
>Haruka being cutesy
That side-mouth.
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>>4171181

Job well done mate, <3
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>>4171320
Yeah, seriously. Haruka was the one getting fucked and it's Shu that can't forget about his dick.

Senpai seems to be getting brought up consistently in volume 3 despite not being around, I really hope he's not re-introduced again.
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Tomorrow we should get the spoilers/summary for ch 24?
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>>4171634

Haitus week, next month is chapter.
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>They stop the ntr, but she still keeps meeting with men.
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>They stop the ntr, but she still keeps meeting with men.
Indeed.
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>>4171632
>inb4 Shu begs him to come and fuck his wife again
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>>4171718
>inb4 Shu pays him half his salary to come and fuck his wife again.
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>>4171806
Nah. Next he will ask Haruka's father.
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>>4171480
>Yes I prefer those since I only care for the art. Single NTR chapters are not generic but are so compressed to the point they will have to rely on panel flashbacks or words.
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>>4171320

holy shit senpai is ripped

>tfw you are a 9.5/10 greek god but still can't continue to cuck your kohai's husband

>tfw feelsBadMan
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>>4172125
>senpai was only a cuck device to Haruka and Shuu's antics

Truly a bad day for senpai.
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>>4171718
It probably will end up like that since he doesn't seem to care about anyone fucking his wife anymore unless it's senpai. What a cuck.
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It doesn't take a blind person to see how bad the series has become. Haruka has become a very one sided character.
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>>4172125
>can't continue to cuck your kohai's husband
Actually he absolutely can. haruka leaving shuu is a different thing.

>>4172131
>Shuu can't stop thinking about sempai big cock inside haruka
When is the last time shuu had a good day
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>>4172336
So why are you still here if you don't like it? How were you able to follow all 23 chapters? Are you a sadist or just salty that Senpai got brushed away?
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that blackmail was still the weakest thing ive read in hentai.
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The blackmail was pretty weak indeed.
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The development is very interesting nonetheless. Ya'll just mad that Senpai is not around anymore.
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>>4171543
I came to this thread to post this picture.
WTF!
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>>4172524
>>4172524
>>4172532

Not really if you understand the culture of japan
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>>4172551
Yeah, you could be right there.
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>>4172524
>>4172532
Normally the guy/rapist blackmails the female
Now its the female and her husband blackmailing the the guy
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>>4171187
thank you great rabbit
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sex scene is gonna progress to his dad jerking off and haruka starting to blow him. his dick is probably bigger than shu's ofcourse
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>>4173091
Shu will probably hold him down while telling Haruko to sit on his dick
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>>4173098
That will be pretty funny to see. I like how the manga has started taking the comedic route.
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Any preview of 24 yet?
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>>4173587
Come back in a month.
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Shuu can be quite assertive and "manly" if he's not the one initiating the cuckoldry.

The case with Senpai was borderline though because he didn't firmly forbid haruka from meeting him. That's why it gave him the highest ecstasy. He was torn between Haruka fulfilling his fetish and her betrayal, not knowig which one was true.
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What happened to this chapter
before these were good hentai
someone explain it to me chapter briefly because my English is very bad
and thanks for using my forum I think it worked for what was done thanks
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>>4174014
Shu and Haruka blackmail Shu's dad to have sex with Haruka
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I'm out.

Sorry. Don't even know why I'm typing this, I care that little. Lost interest a number of chapters back and was kindof hoping it'd pick up. Saw 23 on a random web search and holy shit, this manga has went down the shitter.

Thank you so much to the translators for doing such a good job, you guys are great, but this series just isn't for me anymore.

It's kinda gay now.

Peace out folks.
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>>4174178
Nice blogpost
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>>4174002
hes a piece of shit
period
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>>4174002
I like dad's face, amix of embarassmente and oh shit moment.
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>>4174178
Ok. See you next month.
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>>4174241
>>4174437
> when the autism is so strong that you're so loyal to a hentai brand even if the hentai isn't hentai anymore.
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>>4174554
>making a big deal out of comic porn
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I am awake at 3:33 a.m got lectures in 4 hours... But I will clarify I picked up netoserare on chap 12 and tried reading from start but I would black out every 5 chapters by chapter 20 I was admitted to the hospital in hopes of cutting out this cancer memory of a NTR out of my brain.
But overall you guys are fun and I love your threads lolllllll
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So not only is there no chapter this month, the next few chapters are guaranteed to be shit because of how ridiculous this chapter with Shu's father is. This means that we're waiting 3 months just to see where the story goes.

Where did it all go wrong
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>>4175943
Not finishing on Sempai arc is when all went wrong.
Volume 3 should have been a different named after-story
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>>4176105
You have a serious obsession.
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>>4176182
>trying to deny it
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