[READ THE RULES].
REQUESTS NOT FOLLOWING THE RULES WON'T BE CONSIDERED.
PLEASE RESPECT THIS.
This is the thread where big bouncing titties lead our way.
Hello all, Steven_Even here again. This is the 4th installment of my project,"The Tits Translations", where 4chan-users requests old untranslated works, following "rules"(see below), and then maybe getting it translated by me and edited by some of this boards talented editors. The project so far has been a success and has been appreciated by man, and I've decided to continue doing it.
I apologize for being away for some weeks, I just got a new job and had to focus all my attention on that for a while. But when I got that in order, the boob-urge called me once again, and here we are!
[ RULES. ]:
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Requests not following the rules will be ignored
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1. Link an old Raw Manga. Please use any source but exhentai (preferbly nhentai or g-hentai)since I cannot acces ex. PLEASE check so no other group has already translated it. This is super important.
2. Make sure the girl has big, full, tasty TITS. See the OP pictures collection of titties for a hint about size. If the story is focused on her boobs and so on it's always a plus.
3. A bit of curves and meat in the right places on the girls are always a big plus in my book. Girls with personality and being a prominent part of the story, "taking the lead" is also a plus.
4. Write a short description to why you would like this one to be translated, why you like it, what your favorite part of it is.Pitch it to me, essentially.
5. Post the hottest pic from the work as your post-picture, easier to keep track of the requests that way.
No /d/ stuff, nothing involving kids and no incest, please. I prefer vanilla with some love and emotion, myself. Please avoid mind breaks and rape too. I'm in it for the girls and the boobs.
I'll pick up where I left off, with the manga "Yamitsuki".
Start requesting! :)
Here's some previous shares that was requested and got translated in this thread! To give you guys a hint to what we're after.
http://www.hentairules.net/galleries2/index.php?/category/538
http://www.hentairules.net/galleries5/index.php?/category/25
http://hentairules.net/galleries2/index.php?/category/344
http://www.hentairules.net/galleries2/index.php?/category/540
http://www.hentairules.net/galleries3/index.php?/category/529
I hope all the talented editors from previous versions of the thread is still around! :)
I wilm start posting new pages soon!
A new thread!
Here's the last thing I finished:
http://g.e-hentai.org/g/864368/7fad8076f3/
Sadly, I have to drop my claim on succubus manga. A very big bounty caught my eye, so I'm working on that, as well as some other random scripts I found.
Someone better do it for me, I want to read it!
Always happy to proofread.
>>4096565
Aw, that's too bad, we'll see when I get to it, maybe it's a bit further in the future and you'll have more time then. You did an amazing job with that color one, hope to see morefrom you in the future when you get the time!
I'll go through previous links now and sort some stuff out so you guys can get to know whats upcoming after Yamitsuki.
By the way, was the one with the twins ever done/posted? My last thread dissappeared so fast I never got to see if it was before it was gone.
Page1 of "Yamitsuki". If any of you editors feel the urge to do this one, please say so!
Title: Yamitsuki
Part 1:
Since the girl's name is Mitsuki and he's addicted to her, and "Yamitsuki" is "to be addicted", the whole title might be a pun on the word and her name.
Page 1:
Frame 1-2:
Sfx: bell ringing
Bubble 1: Hibiya-sensei, snap out of it!!
Bubble 2: Ah.. So..sorry, Kaede-san...!
Frame 3:
Sfx: twitch
Bubble 1: When you're at work, you have to live up to your title as a "sensei", in front of all the students...!
How many times have I told you...!
Bubble 2: Ah, excuse me, sensei..!
Frame 4:
Sfx left: swoosh (passing)
Sfx right: dokun..! (Badump, heavy heartbeat)
Sfx earring: bling
Vertical text:
The unexpected behaviour...! Such a tense feeling..!
>>4096573
Thanks!
I'll be following the thread even though I'm not editing.
I haven't got a clue about the twin one, sorry.
Previous threads:
http://fgts.jp/_/search/boards/h.dis/subject/tit/username/Steven_Even/
>>4096586
Nice! Do contribute with requests if you have them, after all your great work I reckon i owe you a translation or two :)
I think maybe RookiEditor was the one editing the twins one, we'll see if he pops up I guess!
Page 2 of "Yamitsuki"
Page 2:
Frame 1:
Bubble 1: ...
Sfx: Boo...! (Stunned silence, kind of)
Frame 2:
Bubble 1: Hey..!
Sfx: Tug!
Frame 3:
Bubble 1: I mean, Youta-kun, now that we're husband and wife....
Bubble 2: It's especially important that we keep up a good apperance...!
Sfx bubble: kyuun..! (Something snapping together)
Frame 4:
Bubble 1: Do you... understand..?
Bubble 2: Yeah, yeah, I got you...
Sfx: Thump, thump, heavy heartbeats
Frame 5:
Sign says: Social (I'm guessing social in this contexts is a class/program you can take) storage room
Sfx: Gachak (door opening)
Frame 6:
Bubble 1: Hey, Mizuki, are you in here...?
Sfx: "Kiin", the sound of a door opening slowly, kind of like "Qriiii"
Welcome back steven. I was wondering what happened to you. Here's a consolidated list of my favorites from the last threads,
http://g.e-hentai.org/g/832766/34b3eb3998/
http://g.e-hentai.org/g/850585/a8aae2a5d0/
http://nhentai.net/g/140730/81/
http://nhentai.net/g/140730/85/
http://nhentai.net/g/140730/233/
http://nhentai.net/g/143691/07/
http://nhentai.net/g/126799/243/
http://nhentai.net/g/127120/321/
http://nhentai.net/g/140311/81/
http://nhentai.net/g/124908/13/ again may need help with transparents.
http://nhentai.net/g/124908/107/
http://nhentai.net/g/124908/151/
http://nhentai.net/g/16942/208/ anything in this tank really. I love takatsu.
http://g.e-hentai.org/g/818976/814e9969b3/
http://g.e-hentai.org/g/609324/23880e8053/ (I would probably need help with some of the transparent bubbles)
and these two are new from me.
http://g.e-hentai.org/s/7f2c89809c/862620-166
http://g.e-hentai.org/s/8e8fe90c96/838344-6
On the twins I had a couple issues I needed your opinion on let me find the links.
>>4096699
Great, will look through those as fast as I can! Sorry for the absence, got a New job that's een taking up most of my attention since last time, but now that all that is in order, I have time for some tits and translations again :) should've said so but man, I've been crazy busy!
>>4096702
No worries man. I figured something happened. was just hoping you didn't disappear for as long as you did the last time lol.
Notes from twins
096 panel 4 missing the moan bubbles. Can't make out the
left one bubble
99 page 7 panel 3 missing 2 bubbles around his head.
guessing aha hah?
101 page 9 Frame 4: missing bubbles. I can't make those out
at all. Isn't last bubble kiaaaaきあ~ like she's excited
surprised? Just yay or even kyaa would work too.
106 page 15 you missed her little フフ... laugh
108 page 16 missing frame 5 ク...リエつ guessing the moans
are Ahn han Ahn? I know アa and ハha but I don't know the
bottom one unless it's シ which doesn't make sense.
109 page 17 missing transparent bubble left of her head.
guessing a moan but can't make out the top one and again
don't know if it's shi. you have it listed as "I'mhh..!!" on page
13
>>4096716
Yeah, man, last time was some bad personal shit man, not hoping to go down that road again anytime soon :P
I'll look through those and return with a reply soon!
>>4096716
The spacing in the message messed up a bit it seems, hard to understand with all the shifts in the text, could your write that out clean one more time maybe? do you think you could also link to the pages in question? Would make it a lot easier for me to keep track of :)
>>4096740
Yeah sorry my phone hates me.
99 page 7 panel 3 missing 2 bubbles around his head.
guessing aha hah?
>>4096716
Frame 4: missing bubbles. I can't make those out at all. Isn't last bubble kiaaaaきあ~ like she's excited /surprised? Just yay or even kyaa would work too. You have it as ah indeed for some reason.
>>4096740
for 106 I just added the fufu. 108 last panel text around her stomach I think 5 ク...リエつ and the moans I can't make out. Ahn han Ahn? I know アa and ハha but I don't know the
bottom one unless it's シ which doesn't make sense.
>>4096768
Ignore the "5" there sorry.
For the last page the missing transparent bubble here. guessing a moan but can't make out the top one and again don't know if the bottom one is shi. (Please ignore the bottom transparent bubble not being redrawn. it's on the same layer the top one is.)
>>4096751
Great, I'll go through and answer them each here. The first one, those are indeed Ah, and haa~ moans, basically.
Sorry I also needed the ones around his hands here. Looks like I get あa but not the next particle and I get ちchi but no idea on the next one. sorry again to be such a pain.
>>4096758
Those in frame 4 is two sets of "nhh", basically moans or "sound that comes out when saying somethig. With your mouth closed".
The last bubble is a little special, I can understand it might seem weird but it's actually correct, I'll explain!
She says "Maa~ <3", which is a female expression used based on context, usually to "confirm" something someone lse said with mild surprise. Or as the dictionary puts it:
(Interjection) (Female term or language) oh!; oh dear!; oh, my!; wow!; goodness gracious!; good heavens!
well...; I think...; it would seem...; you might say...; Hmmm, I guess so...;
So as you can see... Very hard to get a precise translation but, something like , Ah indeed with the heart I think conveys it! :)
>>4096768
She says Ri...Rie~! (My bad on missing that one, will be more careful).Which is the name of her twin, and the "tsu", and also in the last moan-bubble, is just the japanese way of writing something you say that"continues", i understand it might sound off if you haven't studied the language but yeah, they write it like that xD
So the moans ate basically ah, Ah, and Aaa~ in the last frame :)
>>4096772
Yeah, again that's a small katakana "tsu", meaning what she says is "drawn" out, She's starting to say "I...!), which is the start of the word "Iku", which means "to go", but is used in sex as "I'm cumming", thus her "I...!" From "Iku" should be translated to "I'm..!", and leaving "cumming to next bubble : )
I understand if this is a bit confusing :P
>>4096786
Yeah, he says "ah..!" In the first one, again with a small "tsu" to convey it being draghed out. In the next one he says "choo", which most likelt is the beginning of "Chotto", which means "wait!", so like, "Wai...!".
Fuck damn, I love this manga so much, reading it again, remind me of how great it is. Easy top 3 in all the threads.
Has this guy done any other raw works?
Page 3 of "Yamitsuki"!
( http://g.e-hentai.org/g/791861/9b08764f0f/ )
Page 3:
Frame 1:
Bubble 1: Ah, sensei~!
Sfx: gata (chair rattling from rising from it)
Bubble 2: How are you today?
Frame 2:
Bubble 1: Well, never mind that, but why did you "signal" me just now, Mitsuki...
Bubble 2: and so blatantly... In front of Kaede-san too...!
Frame 3:
Bubble 1: Ah, sorry... It's the earrings that you gave me sensei... So when I saw you...
Bubble 2: I just touched them by instinct...
Sfx: suuu..~
Frame 4:
Bubble 1: Well, no matter, this has to stop..!
Sfx: Gitsu! the sound of sitting down
Bubble 2: I've been too careless around this, ...This... Relationship has...
Frame 5: This relationship....?
Sfx: Suu...(a swaying motion, kind of like "swish")
>>4096804
Kinda strange that you rule out Incest and Shota / Loli in the OP when you like this one so much which is basically Incest as well. Another one from previous threads was even Shota Incest / Inseki :/
>>4096801
There actually isn't a bubble for the cumming. Sorry about the tsu thing. I really didn't know. Now that I do though I'll never have to ask again atleast lol. Shiomaneki is actually a rather prolific artist. A ton of his stuff is still untranslated. Very little has been actually. I can give you some recommendations after I finish uploading wwife. http://nhentai.net/search/?q=shiomaneki
>>4097190
Here's more info about it:
https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Sokuon
>>4097193
Thanks. that's actually really helpful.
>>4097190
To confirm, this is correct, right? I had thought both of those giant out of text lines were generic splurt sounds as I can't make them out. Judging by her starting a sentence though is one of them I'm cumming? right one looks like イ but the handwriting kills me recognizing anything else.
>>4096804
I don't know if it's your English or your Japanese that's lacking, but the tsu is a glottal stop, which is the complete opposite of a dragged out sound.
Had some fun today changing this:
http://g.e-hentai.org/g/850018/71227366da/
to this:
http://g.e-hentai.org/g/870519/8beb643a46/
Some of my favorite other stories from him http://g.e-hentai.org/g/838344/1bf636eb30/ the entire tank isn't translated, but my favorites are 6 and 130 also a couple other gem sI;d love to see translated that I stumbled upon while looking. http://nhentai.net/g/112362/101/ and I may have requested this one before. http://nhentai.net/g/146759/7/ yumeno tanuki does great sluts being sluts. especially like the first one.
>>4097199
Yeah, I'd say so. It's a bit weird if a "cumming" isn't following which is usually the case, but I'm sure her "I...!" Is the start of an "Iku", so it should be correct. As with all things japanese, you can't be 100% sure unless your a native I guess, but considering the context I'd put my money on that!
>>4097201
Yeah, it's my english, I have a hard time explaining sometimes in foreign language, but this is ehat I mean yes. You cut something and then, sometimes, continue it, but not always. I realise too now that dragging was a bad choice of words, thanks for helping out with a better explanation.
>>4096938
Yeah, I sometimes make exceptions to this if I like it, it's just that I want to *avoid* those genres if possible, since they can be a bit too extreme sometimes. The ones I've taken has been ok in my view, but there's definitely been requests that I didn't want to do.
All a matter of personal taste, basically.
>>4097252
Some nice suggestions there, and you had a nice round up of earlier ones too, I'll look through them all today and post a list of my favorites as of now, and we'll see which ones we'll take going forward!
Just gotta finisg Yamitsuki first, which is really, really good but pretty textheavy.
Is anyone willing to edit that one by the way?
>>4097305
Incest is one of the most Vanilla fetishes most of the time, actually. There's some really fucked up stuff like this, but that's a rare exception:
http://exhentai.org/g/837487/c7eab1017f/
Same for Loli and Shota, in most cases.
>>4097314
Oops, just realized it's a sadpanda link. Have this one:
http://nhentai.net/g/140091/
>>4097314
Then I'd rather not check it out :P
That's the thing though, the scale is so broad, I'd rather just avoid it entirely not to stack the thread with request I cannot so. Sometimes, if it's a great one like the twins one, I'll make exceptions to the "rule".
Here's page 4, anyways.
Page 4:
Frame 1:
Bubble 1: What kind of relationship do you mean...?
Sfx big: Gishi, *creeak*
Sfx bubble: Dokun, heavy heartbeat
Bubble 2: Ah, well... That's...!
Frame 2:
Bubble 1: Ah.. Mitsuki's scent...!
Sfx bubble: Dokun, heavy heartbeat
Frame 3-4:
Bubble 1: The kind where...you're allowed to .. Touch me wherever you please...?
Sfx white: Gyuu, poke, press
Sfx bubbles: Dokun, heavy heartbeat
Frame 5:
Sf bubble black: Splurt, splurt
Sfxbig: Tapu, something hitting down
Sfb big left: Dokun, heavy heartbeat
Bubble 1: Ah, I can't avoid it, I end up in that memory again...!
>>4097327
Shiruka Bakaudon is basically r/TheRedPill but even more extreme. She's around the same level as Hana Hook, but without the Shotas.
And that story is not really comparable to most other Incest Hentai.
That Yamitsuki story was requested by me, by the way. Thanks for picking it.
>>4097329
Thanks yourself for sharing it! I just hope some editor will pick it up too, the drawings are great and the story is good and intense too. And the main girl... So damn hot in every way!
Here's a quick idea of what stories I think I'd like to do coming up after Yamitsuki. The fact that I've chosen some and not others doesn't mean others got "cut" or anything, it just means I've chisen my current top candidates based on my taste, and other might get picked in the future when some or all of these are done!
New request that knocks it out of the park might also always jump the queue :)
1. http://nhentai.net/g/112362/101/
Story about two girls and two boys orgy
2. http://nhentai.net/g/126799/243/
Busty country girl fucking in park
3. http://nhentai.net/g/124908/107/
Glasses girl getting it, wet from rain
4. http://g.e-hentai.org/g/609324/23880e8053/
Big sis type having sex with brothers friend
And then something from this one:
http://g.e-hentai.org/g/838344/1bf636eb30/
Really liked some of those, but I'll have to look through it all to get an idea of the stories and what I'd like to do.
Page 5!
Page 5:
Frame 1-2:
Bubble 1: resisting...it must be straining for a newly wed....aren't you exhausted...?
Sfx bubble: puchi, "snap" sound of something unbuttoning
Sfx bubble: dokun, heavy heartbeat
Bubble 2: Even if it is just quick for now... It's fine...!
Big sfx: Dokun, dokun, heavy heartbeats
Bubble 3: Mitsuki's body....!
Bubble 4: ..the feeling of pressing against and embracing it...!
Frame 3:
Bubble1: Please, Sensei... Let's just enjoy ourselves for a bit right here... and now...
Sfx bubble right: dokunheavy heartbeat
Sfx bubble left: sususu, rustling of closing in
Sfx top: Gyuu, softly pressing closer
Frame 4-5:
Sfx mouth: Haa..~
Bubble 1: Um... I....!
Sfx left: "grab"
Page 6!
Page 6:
Frame 1-2:
Big sfx:Kiin, kon (ding, dong, bell ringing)
Bubble 1: Ah, I have a class starting now, I have to go..!
Bubble 2: ah...!
Sfx: gara, slide door opening "k-chak"
Frame 3:
Bubble 1: Sen..sei...
Sfx: kyuu, sliding back
Frame 4:
Sfx: Ta, sound of walking/running fast
Text 1: What am i doing..! I'm..! I...!
Text 2: I can't keep repeating this again and again like I've done until now...!
Frame 5-6:
Bubble 1: Ah, I just hate this bald spot..!
I can't cover it..gaah!
Bubble 2: Ahh.. Ye..yeah.
>>4097597
I started a dump page for those of you new to the Tit Translations Project, head over there for some previously translated busty good stuff while we create more content in this one!
>>4097681
Page 7!
Page 7:
Frame 1:
Bubble 1: Hey, Kaede-san... How about today we...!
Bubble 2: Whaat? No, you know I can't!
Besides, we agreed on the "sex day" to be during the weekend! Don't you remember??
Sfx: kyuun, Huug~ embracing
Frame 2-3:
Bubble 1: Besides, I have to go up really early tomorrow so, I have to sleep now!
Bubble 2: Ah, yeah... I guess...
Sfx: "basa", sound of rustling textiles
Frame 4:
Textbox: Really... what am I doing...?
Frame 5:
Bubble 1: Our happiness... Or Mitsuki's ...future...
Small bubbles 1: No way i'd..!
Small bubble 2: Aahaha..!
Bubble 2: If I think too much about it I just worry more, I need to focus...!
Frame 6:
Bubble 1: I'm sure that Mitsuki herself only regards this as something temporary for now, and whe...
Sfx: Mi, "glance"
Sorry I got busy. here's a link to wwife. http://g.e-hentai.org/g/870766/2380d704ac/
>>4097406
love the picks steven. I'll do all of those. Yamitsuki doesn't seem to be one of my favorite works but if no one else does I'll do it. I'd prefer if someone else did though.
>>4097917
No problem, great finally being able to read it! One of my favorites no doubt.
Sounds like a fair trade! Yamitsuki has some parts not to my liking either but, the body on Mitsuki, man, I just had to do it. Good to know someone'll do it at least, and I promise to grab one of yours up next!
>>4097953
Page 8!
Page 8:
Frame 1:
Big sfx: Dokun! Heavy heartbeat
Bubble 1: ...But I think that's his best work to date, don't you agree?
Bubble 2: Ah well, it's a bit too long perhaps...
Frame 2-3:
Sfx: dokun, dokun, heavy heartbeats
Frame 4:
Bubble 1: Hey, by the way, do you want to go with me to the library today...?
Bubble 2: Ah, .. actually I...
Bubble: Mitsuki!
Frame 5:
Sfx: Zaa! Swooshing in front of something
Bubble 1: I need to discuss some things with you before the commite-meeting later, is now a good time?
Frame 6:
Bubble 1: Sen...sei..?
Page 9!
Page 9:
Frame 1-3:
Bubble 1: Mitsuki!!
Big sfx: Dan! "smack!" Pressing against something hard and fast
Bubble 2: You're really trying to mock me now, arent you?!
Frame 4:
Bubble 1: Sensei... What's weong...? I don't, I was just...
Sfx: Tosa, sound of shrinking down, fabrics folding
Frame 5-6:
Sfx: giri, biting and gristling teeth
Bubble 1: You're always... Doing it...!
Sfx: Jii! Unzipping ziplock, "ziitch" sound.
Frame 4, bubble 1 is supposed to be "what's wrong", of course. My bad, will be more careful in the future.
Sup! Dropping by at Steven_Even's suggestion. Hoping to see this translated.
http://nhentai.net/g/122016/
The Japanese raw is here:
http://nhentai.net/g/112362/
Page 159
http://nhentai.net/g/112362/159/
There are also plenty of big tits in that whole volume, maybe you'll find something you like!
>>4098507
Putting it on my list! Another pne from that volume was already on the list. Indeed, a lot of well endowne ladies in there, is there any work in particular you'd like to see translated?
>>4098513
Not much comes to mind, other than Makito's work in there. Honestly, anything by him, or some other favorites of mine like Sasamori Tomoe, Tomotsuka Haruomi, or Sena Youtarou.
>>4098522
Alright! If you have any raws of those orher artists mentioned, i'd gladly take a look, always open to finding new artists!
>>4098537
I'll put the translations on hold for a day or two, have to fix some stuff but will return during the week and continue the work!
Thanks for doing this Steven!
Here's a request: http://nhentai.net/g/148487/
cute maid girls
big juicy tits
group sex
meaty angles
Ch.1 is 100% vanilla, and while ch.2 has a rape scene, it's worth translating because of the jealousy plot, which leads to the happy end with 6 girls anyway (pic related).
Later chapters not yet released, will request when they come out.
http://g.e-hentai.org/g/828637/ff6cc3a536/ Seinen Scans translated the first two chapters, but they don't seem to have plans to continuing.
Kizashi has really hot scenes and an interesting MC enjoying the path into the dark side (nettori)
>>4099750
Oh,where are my manners... Thank you for keeping up with this project! Much appreciated!
For your consideration:
http://nhentai.net/g/144562/
I love stupid reasons for large groups of people to drop everything and fuck like rabbits. Also girls who are eager to fuck.
Don't do the whole tank, obviously. Requesting Ch.1 (page 9 - 32) or Ch. 3 (page 57 - 80). Ch.3 has a bit of NTR, but looks like it has a happy ending (?).
Pic from the 4 color pages. I think she's the same chick as in Ch. 1. Some of the stories seem to be connected. Thanks in advance.
I apologize as I've got no way of obtaining any raws... however, not being able to obtain new translations of TEARDROP is unbelievable. last release was Weekly Island. there is already a second and third one. as well as other stories.
I really wish there was a way to access the raws, should there be a way I'd provide them myself but I've already reached the end of my google fu. I only managed to see some teaser stuff in 2ch but nothing else.
I hope my limited information is of help.
I see some new shares, nice! I'll look through all these as soon as I return to translating, probably tomorrow. Sadly, with a new job my translating-time is slightly less than it was before but, I still aim for a 1-3 pages per day when I have the time. Will look through these and post new pages tomorrow!
Page 10!
Page 10:
Frame 1-4:
Bubble 1:
I'm sure it's all just a big joke to you...!
Sfx white: "bichi", flopp, smack
Sfx black: "buru", shake, shiver
Bubble 2: You're just ... Manipulating me, testing my patience...! You...!
Sfx middle: "gui", Grab, yank!
Sfx: "soo"..reaching down, nodding down
Bubble 3: Chuu, *kiss*
Sfx hair: Ga! "Grab!"
Frame 5:
Bubble 1: How about this?!
Sfx: "subu!" Shove!
Bubble 2: Nhhnngu..!
Frame 6:
Bubble 1: How does it feel now, just you try and resist!!
Big sfx: "Jubu, gabo!"Thump, thomp
Sfx small head: "bita", hesitation, stuck
Bubble 2: illegible, just keep the lines and change the smal tsu:s in the bubble to "hn" and "gh" maybe, and it'll do
I hope not to be ignored
http://g.e-hentai.org/g/844089/15cd2e714e/
I really love Nodoka and her tits are something important even in the anime ... the end can be considered happy
http://g.e-hentai.org/g/858738/1f02f1ed31/
think anyone translate this ... I like his approach to tits of Togo and very vanilla
>>4100599
Page 11!
Page 11
Frame 1-3:
Sfx: zuchu, "schlip, schlu", slippery
Bubble 1: Gnnh..! I'm... Cummingh..!
Small sfx face: "gii", bite
Big srx top: Gubu! Thick, slippery pressing against, "gob", "glob"-ish.
Bubble 2: Nhhhnm?!
Sfx under face: Byuuku, splort, splurt (shooting out)
Frame 4-6:
Sfx: Gyuu, "grab", pressing against
Big sfx: doku, tobu, "gush", slipper pouring out
Sfx bubble legs: kyuun, tighlty pressing together,
Bubble 1: *gokun*, swallow, "gulp"
Bubble 2: Resist...?
Bubble 3: Why would I ever do that..?
Sfx hands: torruu, drip, drip
Sfx top: muaa, breathing out
Nice shares, as I've mentioned before though, doujins of existing IP:s are always lower on the list for me since it's harder to translate when you're not familiar with the shows or the contexts, characters etc. That last one seemed very easy to translate though, so I'm not ruling anything out.
>>4100958
Page 12!
Page 12
Frame 1:
Sfx big: dosa, "thump"
Bubble 1: How... How come you... For someone like me...!
Frame 2:
Sfx 1: soo, "sliide", nudging closer
Bubble 1:"someone like me" and such, please stop it...
Bubble 2: The one who told me to stop thinking like that, it was you sensei, don't you remember?
Sfx body: dokun, heavy heartbeat
Frame 3-4:
Sfx: zaaaa..., pouring rainfall
Bubble 1: When i didn't become the honor student, i was so depressed...I felt so suffocated, I was crying....
Bubble 2: Your openess in that moment, it made me feel ok again.
Frame 5:
Bubble 1: Since then, I've been very open with my own feelings....
Bubble 2: Well, allow me to be honest aswell...
Sfx: dokun, heavy heartbeats
And page 13!
Page 13:
Frame 1:
Sfx top right: biku, biku , *shudder*, *flinch*
Bubble 1: But you know, that Kaede-san and I...
Sfx breasts: mnyuu~ *grope* soft, pressing
Textbox: That's why... I really can't...!
Sfx bottom: kutchu, *stroke, rub*
Frame 2-3:
Sfx: gutchu, slippery rubbing
Bubble 1: Mitsuki...!
Sfx: slop, slip
Bubble 2: You're already this...!
Frame 4:
Bubble 1: I don't want you to feel unhappy Sensei...!
Sfx nipples: biku, "jolt, flinch"
Bubble 2: It's never been my intention to get back at you.... or anything like that.
Sfx: zoku, zoku, zoku "shudder, shiver"
Frame 5:
Textbox: I can't do this... I know this...!
Bubble: Mitsuki...!
Page 14
Frame 1:
Bubble 1: I let you use my body in any way you wanted...!
Big sfx: Guuii, "grab, push"
Black sfx bubbles: biku, biku, "twitch"
Bubble 2: If you've had enough, and if you want to dump me, even that would be ok but...
Frame 2:
Bubble 1: That's...!
Sfx: nidji..."rustle, scramble"
Frame 3:
Bubble 1: But if so, then at least for now..
Bubble 2: For just this moment, please, let's do it together... Let me put it in...!
Frame 4:
Sfx: kuchuu, nichuu "schlip, sclulp", wet rubbing
Frame 5:
Sfx: dokun, dokun, "thump" heavy heartbeat
Bubble 1: I... I...!
Frame 6:
Sfx: guu, sliding down, getting sad,
Bubble 1: But, If you really think I'm just a big bother....!
Frame 7:
Bubble 1: Mitsuki!!
Sfx: ba! Sudden movement, jolt back"swosh"
Textbox: If this is really all you wish for...!
I'm almost done with the first chapter, you still in on editing Rookie? I know Sorcerer is busy atm, but I haven't seen J around lately, did we lose him?
Anyways, when chapter 1 of Yamitsuki is done, I'm gonna translate a one-shot from the queue before starting chapter 2. Just so you all know! Damn, Mitsuki in this one could have the best tits yet i. The thread, but it's so hard to decide..! :P
>>4101674
Page 15:
Frame 1:
Bubble 1: Hey, who's up here..?!
Bubble 2: It's forbidden to be on the school roof, you know that!
Sfx bubble: kon, kon "dong", hitting metal door
Big sfx: Bikun! "Twitch, shudder"
Frame 2-3:
Bubble 1: Kaede-san...?!
Sfx: Ga! "Grab"
Sfx: Zuu! "Slide, push"
Frame 4-6:
Sfx bottom right: biku, biku, biku "shudder, twitch"
Sfx ass: zuu, buzu, "slide, slop, slip"
Sfx mouth scream: biku, twitch
Bubble 1: Aahh!!
Bubble 2: Nhh..! (Illegible lines)
Sfx: gui, grab, yank
>>4101678
Page 16!
Page 16:
Frame 1:
Bubble 1: Is no one there...?
Bubble 2: Geez...! Where IS Youta-kun anyway, where did he go...!
Sfx: bikun, "twitch"
Sfx white: puru, "shiver, shake"
Frame 2:
Sfx: kan, kan, kan, "sound of high-heel,footsteps" dok, dok, dok-ish.
Sfx mouth: Nuchaa, "Breathing out, letting out",
Frame 3:
Sfx: bikun, twitch
Bubble 1: Ah... It sure went ALL the way inside..!
Bubble 2: Mitsuki, you came from just that first thrust, didn't you...?
Frame 4:
Bubble 1: Ahh.. I'mh... so happy...!
Sfx: dokun, dokun , heavy heartbeats
Frame 5:
Sfx: ga, "grab!"
Textbox: I can't restrain myself anymore...!!
Bubble 1: Mitsuki..!!
Not enough MILFs
http://nhentai.net/g/145121/
Id kill for a translation of this .
>>4101751
Page 17!
Page 17:
Frame 1:
Bubble 1-3: Ahh..! Ahn! Ah!<3
Big sfx:Suchuu, "slide, wet"
Sfx bubble: Kon! "Press, bang, smack"
Whit sfx under left boob: purun, "jiggle"
Bubble 3: Sen..sei..!!
Frame 2-3:
Textbox: Mitsuki's body.....
Small bubble top left: Nh...!
Sfx: zu,zu, zu wet sliding up down, "scli, schlu"
Sfx ass: pan, pan, pan! "Pound, pound"
Frame 4-5:
Textbox: I can't let it... go...!
Bubble 1: Please...! Use me...!
Bubble 2: Use my body any way you want...!
Sfx: suchu, gucho, "schulp, schlip"
Sfx breast: chuu "kiss"
Sfx left: Gyuu"soft pressing, jiggle"
Sfx leftmost over breast: reru, reru "twiling lick"
>>4102010
Page 18!
Page 18:
Frame 1-2:
Sfx: ga, "grab"
Sfx big: suchuu, hard pressing down, "Shod, shove"
Bubble 1: (Illegible moan sounds)
Sfx top left: biku, "shudder"
Frame 3:
Bubble 1: Haah..!
Sfx ass: Pan, pan, "pound, pound"
Big grey sfx: panchu, juabu, "pound, pound", heavy hitting down
White sfx bottom: Gnyuu, soft pressing, jiggle
Frame 4:
Sensei..! Senseeei!!
Bubble 2: Ah..!
Sfx: reru, reru, "lick, lick"
Sfx under: chupa, chupa "drool"
Bubble 2: You made me cum... so much..!<3
Frame 5-6
Bubble 1: Ah... I'm comingh...!
Sfx black over pussy: Zumu, "sclop", wet final stopping thrust
Soon done with chapter 1, I'll take this one next,
http://nhentai.net/g/112362/101/
Seemed pretty easy, and then maybe another before hitting chapter 2! List keeps growing too I see, that's great.
this one from nanakagi satoshi the girl seems to put a trap for the mc
>>4102126
Looks great, do you have a link to the raw manga too?
>>4102011
Page 19!
Page 19
Frame 1:
Bubble 1:
Sfxwhite left: byuu, byuuu "shoot"
Sfx big white: Dobu, heavy splashing, shooting, "splort, schplort"
Sfx black under tits: Gobu, gobu, "splort, splort"
Bubble 1: Ahh..!<3 (rest illegible moans)
Bubble 2: Ahhn..!<3
Frame 2:
Bubble 1-2: Haah~!
Sfx: biku, shudder, shiver, twitch
Frame 3:
Sfx: surui, wet floppy dripping
Sfx black: bicha, splat, splutter
Frame 4:
Bubble 1: I've made you do something you might regret again...maybe hurt your feelings even...!
Sfx: Gyuu, "hug"
Frame 5:
Bubble 1: You're doing it because you're so kind... sensei...!
Sfx: Haa, haaa
Textbox: No, that's not the reason...!
>>4102174
And finally, page 20! That's chapter 1 down! Since no other has volunteered to edit this one, will you do it Rookie Editor? Would be very nice of you!
In return, I'll start translating right away on the manga you requested earlier :)
This one is up next!
http://nhentai.net/g/112362/101/
Page 20:
Frame 1-3:
Textbox: It's only because I just can't restrain myself when I'm with you...!
Bubble 1-2: Nhhu..! Nhaaa!
Sfx: shuko, shiko, "rub, stroke"
Sfx: gucha, nucha , wet rubbing "slip, slisch"
Sfx mobile: Wvwv, "buzz", vibration
Mobile display: Kaede-san
Small bubble bottom left: Ahh..!
Smal sfx: "slip, slish"
Frame 4:
Bubble 1: Geez! Where have you been? What've you been up to?!
We said we'd go home together today...!
Bubble 2: Ah, sorry, sorry.
Frame 5:
Sfx: kiin, door sliding open creak sound
Textbox: I'm so deeply into it now...! That was a close call...!
Frame 6-7:
Sfx: zuruu, sliding down
Bubble 1: I need to pull out while I still can...
Sfx: toroo, drooling slow, liquid
Yamitsuki, Chapter 1 End, To be continued
Hey OP I requested that Starfox NTR by Sindoll last time I saw one of these threads and then after it was agreed the request was ridiculous I requested that Succubus Fist comic.
Not really requesting it anymore just bumping the thread to thank you and people who edit for all the hard work. It is appreciated!
Glad to see you're back, Steven!
Just dropping by to see the progress on all the doujins, also just wondering if anyone's translated my submissions yet. It was the two Love Live ones, the one that was in colour was in your top 10 priorities, so I assumed it would've been done fairly quickly.
>>4103524
Yeah, it's still one the list but I can't translate as fast anymore with work and, since no editor volunteered for it, it out it om lower prio for now.
I have however started on my next one now. Any progress on Kiasa one Rookie? :)
>>4103832
A lot with work lately, but I'm going to aim for a 1-2 page done per "active" day when I get back. Not as speedy as before unfortunately but, still, will get stuff translated!
BumpIng it so we won't lose it.
I just like the contrast between the attitude of the girl
http://nhentai.net/g/149091/353/
Probably the last great work of Ando before he started doing more D orientated stuff. Perfect fit for this thread. Would love to see it translated.
https://mega.nz/#F!YpRRlShC
http://nhentai.net/g/120264/187/
>>4107043
Seconding this.
>>4097917
Any progress on Yamitsuki? I understand if it's not your first prio since you said you'd do it only if no one else would, it seems like no one will so, I'd really appreciate if you'd do it. I'm about half-way through one of your requests now anyway, sill start posting pages soon.
I will look through the new requests when I get the time too, I promise!
Here we go, page 1 translatd of "peeking at the wedding ring", a nice little orgy story about two busty former classmates and some reunion sex.
(http://nhentai.net/g/112362/101/)
Page 1:
Frame 1-3:
Big chapter text bottom of frame:
The class reunion's secret intention...!
Banner: Class 3 Reunion
Bubble 1: Come on Hideaki~! Hurry~!
Small sfx: Gaya, gaya "chatter"
Bubble 2: Aaalright, alright..! Everyone! I hope you will all look back at this time fondly in the future and...!
Bubble 3: One, two...!
Big Sfx frame 3: Clap!
Frame 4:
Sfx small: gui, gui, "bounce, bounce"
Small sfx line: You drunk...!
Bubble 1:
Hey~! Hey~! Takahiro-san, let's go to your home and and have a big sex orgy~!
Bubble 2: That wouldn't be possible, my wife is there and, besides, Amimi, aren't you a lonely mother of one...?
Small sfx bubble: Hiku, "Hic"
Bubble 3:
That was really fun, but geez, my head is spinnning, I should've been a bit more careful...
Bubble 4: Mari, you've got kids, you have to be more responsible...
Frame 5:
Bubble 1: Well, if we're to sleep this off before we go again, we got to stay at someone's house... Who's got the best place for that...?
Bubble 2: Who has the best place, huh..?
Frame 6:
Bubble 1: Ah, Ahh...!
Sfx: Glaaare!
Dropping a request here, I have no idea wtf is going on, but it looks hot as fuck...
http://nhentai.net/g/138252/
>>4109959
derp, here: http://nhentai.net/g/138252/269/
>>4109959
I'd prefer the first story of that one desu.
>>4111115
Yeah, Doumou is a pretty good Vanilla author. Pretty much the only one who retconned a bad NTR ending with a happy one, afaik.
>>4108911
He got hit with some RL shit and is currently too busy/tired to edit.
>>4111220
Aw man, that sucks to hear, I hope he'll be back eventually. I'm currently extremely busy with work too (got a new job some weeks back), which takes a lot of my focus but I hope to be able to continue this anyway. I can atleast fix the scripts, and then post them when someone can edit them.
Don't know if this is good enough for you, but nobody has translated Udon-ya's Furohile Jou, even though the first one was already translated. It's pretty funny and vanilla, but text heavy.
http://nhentai.net/g/145768/
Page 2! Sorry for the slow pace, I have too much to do at work right now, I hardly have any freetime. It will change later this month though.
Page 2:
Frame 1:
Sfx: Tan, "clank"
Bubble 1: That's right, Yeah I guess that's true huh...!
Frame 2:
Bubble 1: The only one who's single here is me...!
Textbox: Hideaki's home (A one room apartment)
Frame 3:
Sfx: Fuhe, "Glance"
Bubble 1: A bachelor... Huh?
Frame 4:
Sfx mari: supi, supi " gentle breaths"
Sfx Amimi: ngho, "heavier breaths"
Textrow 1: They've both married already and they've both got kids too...
Textrow 2: That mean's they've both had someone cum inside them huh..
Textrow 3: Man... What am I thinking..??
Frame 5-6:
Sfx: fura, "rise"
I hope someone can still be willing to edit this one, and the previous one from this thread, eventually!
Page 3! This was a long one.. A lot of hard to read-segments.
Page 3:
Frame 1:
Bubble 1: Hey~ Hey~ Take a look at my two kids Hideaki, aren't they suuuper cute~?
Bubble 2: It sure was a pain pushing these two cuties out, but....
Bubble 3: ..when I look at my daughter's face, I totally consider getting one more...!
Sfx dick: Gyuu, "rub"
Sfx face: mura, mura "getting aroused" (really hard to translate a sound for that!)
Black text over head(this is really hard to read!): I've kind of had a big crush on both of them since junior high...!
Bubble 4: Hey, look at my son too~ come on, lookie, lookie~ <3
Bubble 5: Mari keep saying she wants three kids but, I think it's only her sexual desire speaking~!
Blacktext by head: He's also super cute, suuuper cute~!
Frame 2:
Bubble 1: What?! You're the one who always got called a total slut when we were in school, sleeping around with all the guys!
Sfx: zunsuko, "stare"
Blacktext over head right: Damn it! How can you both have such erotic faces while showing me pictures of your damn kids!!
Black text over head left: What type of game are you trying to play with me?!
Sfx dick: shiko, shiko "fap, fap"
Bubble 2:Hey! That was a long time ago, I was so young...!
Bubble 3: These days, the only one who has a chance of getting something from me is my dar-ling..!
Frame 3:
Sfx bubble: gii, "creak"
Small bubbles 1-6: Uhh! Ah..! Oh! You...! Ahhn! This...! This...! Ouh!
Frame 4:
Bubble 1: Ah..!
Sfx: zeku, "tense"
Bubble 2: Sorry, It was open so I just went in.. I thought...!
Page 4!
Page 4:
Frame 1:
Bubble 1: Boo~!
Bubble 2: Waaah!
Frame 2:
Bubble 1: Hehe~
Bubble 2:Is this for real...?
Bubble 3: Ah, um, it's not what you...
Sfx: Kaaa, "blush"
Frame 3:
Bubble 1: Do you want me to continue for you...?
Bubble 2: Wh... Whaaat?!
Bubble 3: Hurry up and decide, unless you get this going you can't switch with me...!
Sfx bubble: piku! "Tense!"
Frame 4:
Bubble 1: I'm a...
Bubble 2: ... really bad drunk you see...!
Textrow 1: Eh?? Ah, well that's...!
Frame 5:
Textrow 1: I should ask her to stop but, I just can't...!
Bubble 1: It's already this wet and sticky... And pulsing lively too...!
Bubble 2: I wonder, what were you fantasizing about to get this aroused...?
Bubble 3: Ah, well, that's ...!
Sfx dick: fap, fap, fap
Sfxbreast: jiggle
Textrow 2: I can't believe it, I'm getting a handjob from my now married, old classmate... I could die right now...it's so good!
Frame 6:
Sfx top: doki, doki "heartbeats, thump"
Bubble 1: Hey~ It feels like it's harder now compard to before..~?
Bubble 2: Um, well yeah getting a handjob from a real woman is...!
Black text over bubble 2: Ah, that's true~!
Bubble 3: Well, I tell you what, you tell me what you like to fantasize about, and I'll do that for you~! My treat~!<3
Sfx right hand: fap, fap, fap
Sex bubble bottom: mon, mon "stiffening"
IN NEED OF EDITORS
Hey people! The Tits Translations Project won't be able to get translations out unless someone can help me edit the scripts into the mangas~!
We've had a great line of contributors up until now but, lately it's been a bit slow. This thread already has a finished script lying around and a new one coming.
So please, if you feel tou have the time/skill to edit, help us out!
The Tits Translations Project is a team effort for everyone's gain! More Tits to the people :)
>>4117062
Do you mean typesetters?
>>4117345
I mean someone who can take the script and via an image editing software put the english text in the correct bubbles : )
I'll edit for Yamitsuki. I'm working on the first page now.
>>4117062
On a typical project how much time is spent image editing vs. translating?
I wondering why VN translations are so rare, especially now that it seems relatively easy to upload translations line by line with programs like Visual Novel Reader.
http://g.e-hentai.org/s/da256fe85b/588801-175
Can you translate the last chapter Tada Koishikute, Aitakute... by Shunjou Shusuke? It's the story about a guy who visits his childhood friend, who's grown and become well endowed. He also bangs his boss who's a milf. It's been like 3 years since the every chapter, but the last was translated.
>>4118327
>I wondering why VN translations are so rare
That's because they have thousands of lines for smaller games and ten thousands of lines for longer titles. Let's say you need one minute for each line, that's still over 200 hours for anything with 10k+ lines.
That's not really comparable with the amount of text in H-Manga, especially because many VNs have a higher level of Japanese.
The problem with VNs isn't putting the text back into the game, it's the massive amount of text.
I haven't been paying attention in to fanlation threads, so I'll just post my edits back here.
I'm stopping at just these two for tonight. I hope it's fine that I take some liberties with the script.
Sure, my main concern is just getting the translation out there, my english has been known to be a bit off now and then so, I'm always open to changes. Thanks for the willing to edit, as I said earlier, this whole project is a team effort I hope everyone appreciates. As long as someone can edit, I'll translate :)
Getting some new pages out soon on the "Peeking at wedding ring" one.
>>4118327
I'm not sure, but I spend quite a lot of time translating, since I'm not a native, nor claim to know the language perfectly, I usually have to stop and look up some especially hard kanji or a rare word or phrasing now and the , it adds a lot of time, so does translating sfx, which can be a real bother.
But the editors I've worked with spends a LOT of time to, getting the raws clean and working with the right fonts and so on. I respect their great work a lot!
>>4118400
I think it would be better if you just uploaded it to ehentai after you're done. Getting an account and uploading there is really easy.
>>4118345
>The problem with VNs isn't putting the text back into the game, it's the massive amount of text.
For a lot of the VN's it's a huge problem. They are often coded pretty damn awfully so VN translators have to literally become coders to fix their shit, too long text (aka JP->English) often completely breaks the text display and has to be fixed line by line.
Reading Aroduc's blog posts on VN translations really shows how much extra work he often has to do make things actually work.
Page 5!
Page 5:
Frame 1:
Bubble 1: Here we go..! Uh.. Ahh.! You're so fast...!
Bubble 2: Ooh! The way your breasts are pressing down and squeezing on my dick... It feels almost like.... The real thing...!
Bubble 3: What do you mean, "real thing"? A pussy? Do you mean a pussy??
Sfx along arm: zu, zu "thrust, thrust"
Sfx face: Haa~ haa~ "heavy breathing"
Sfx dick: nchuu, nchuu "wet, sloppy in-and-out sound"
Frame 2-5:
Bubble 1: Ahh..!
Sfx topframe:nupo, nupo "slosh, slosh"
Bubble 2: Uuhn..!
Sfx bubble: munyu, "grope"
Sfx bortom left frame 2: chupu, "slop"
Bubble 3: Ah, no~!<3
Sfx: subuu, "slooush"
Frame 6:
Bubble 1: Ahahahah~<3
I see, you like to do this kind of thing too, Hideaki~! You're a sneaky one, who said you could just pull up my shirt and put your dick in between my tits, huh?<3
Small text edge of bubble: Over and over again too...!
Bubble 2: Only my darling has ever convinced me to do THIS for him, preciously...!
Sfxbreast: Mnyuu~ "grope"
Small bubbles 1-3: Nhh..! Nhh..! Ahh.!
Sfxbubble breasts: purin, "jiggle"
Sfxtop left: nyupa, nyupa "slosh, slosh"
Sfxsmall hand: pero, "shove/drag"
Sfxdick: nyuko, nyuoko "slush, slish"
Textrow 1 left: I can't believe I get to hear remarks like these from my old classmate...!
.
Really loving the girls in this one!
Page 6!
Page 6:
Frame 1:
Bubble 1: Hey, wait a sec, just let me...~<3
Sfx right: Nugi, "undress, reveal"
Sfx left: Tapun! "Heavy dropping"
Sfx bubble: kuchun, "soft pressing"
Sfx bortom right: bikun! "Tensing"
Frame 2:
Bubble 1: Ahh...! This is almost too hot...!
Bubble 2: ehehe~
Bubble 3: My nipples are so much bigger and erect that when I was younger, it's a bit embarassing....
But that's the price you pay when you've had two babies, right?
Small sfx bubbles bottom: Ah..! Nhh!
Big sf bottom: pan! "Wham"
Frame 3:
Bubble 1:Ah, and about my tits Hideaki, you kept staring at them a lot throughout the class reunion event...! You old perv~! <3
Small text bottom left of bubble 1: A girl can tell when you stare at her tits, you know...!
Small bubbles attached to bubble 2:
Ahh..! Nnh!
Bubble 2: Ah.. I'm sorry, I can't deny it, I just kept staring at them...! They're so big, I wanted to touch them... I kept looking at time with and erotic eye...!
Sfxtits: chuku, chuku, "shove, tug, chug"
Sfx top left: nyuu, nyuu "boing, boing"
Bubble 3: No worries, I think most women is glad to notice people looking at them in that way~! <3
Bubble 4: Ah... that's so thick...!
>>4118345
>>4118432
>>4118483
Thanks for the replies and insights. I'll try getting on gimp and seeing where my image editing skills are at.
>>4118483
Aroduc's translates Gameplay VNs though, which are a way bigger pain in the ass than "normal" VNs.
>>4118622
It's cool, your edits has been super to date though, would be nice if you'd be willing to do one more or two in the future, but don't worry, no need to rush! I translate slower now due to work, but I try to get a page or two out every other day at least. I really like this little project and hope it can live on to some extent for quite some time!
I have at least 3-4 from the list i feel really deserves a translation, and then we'll see, depending on demand! :)
>>4118741
Hey Steven, last time you disappeared without saying anything so I thought that you stopped. I have several more that I want to do but I want to prioritize this right now. I think many people will love this too. Do you prefer to do wani or non wani?
The ones in the thread now aren't of any interest to me. My pace will be dependent on you so if you translate fast, I'll do an even quicker job.
http://hitomi.la/reader/806565.html#15
>>4118808
That one looks good! I'll look it through mater today, and if it catches my interest I might take it after the current one. About the "dissappearing", Yeah, I know, I've done that twice now, it's so hard keeping up when the thread falls behind and then dissappears and you suddenly got something else in life craving immediate attention.
Hopefully I won't have to do that again but I'll always have my active and non-avtive days/weeks so to speak...:/
I'll try to check in here more often and give you guys an head's up at least if it happens!
As for wani or not, since I just provide translations it's no differnece to me, translating ain't illegal yet, heh.
But to all you posting galleries and editing and stuff, I can understand it might be a bother. Looked through your latest share, seems great! Not that much text either, which is always a plus in my book!
I'll do that after my current one, ok?
If you have others, by all means link, even if can't do them all, it's always nice to see some suggestions :)
And you've been known to have great taste in the past!
>>4118824
Thanks! I'll link some more later when you start the translation. Gotta gather them.
Page 7! Finally, we're getting somewhere with this!
Page 7:
Frame 1:
Sfxright:pero, pero " lick, lick"
Sfx left: piku! "Tense, stiff!"
Bubble 1: Ah...! Getting this from the breasts I've dreamed about...! It's too much, I can't...! I can feel my cum pressing on...!
Bubble 2: Huh, whaat?? My darling can usually hold out for a bit longer than this...!
Sfx around face: jubo, jubo "shlo, shlo"
Sfx mouth: kupo, kupo "sucking insertion",
Sfx left breast: mnyuu, "grope"
Sfx hideaki's torso: zun, zun "thrusting"
Frame 3:
Bubble 1: Ahh.. Fast, so faaast..!
Bubble 2(only partly visible): So much faster than before...!
Sfx top: nhh..! Nhh..!
Sfx bottom mouth: chupo, chupo "gulps"
Frame 4:
Small bubbles: ahh..! Aahhn..!
Sfx: bikun, "tense, tense"
Frame 5:
Big sfx: Splooort!
Bubble 1: Nbhhhaaa..!
Big sfx left: splosh, splaart
Sfx small tits: goshi, goshi "rub, rub"
As a token of appreciation of our past cooperations, I started translating "Lilith" a bit too! I think I can manage 2, this one had less text than the other so It'll be fine I think, I'll separate them in the thread by having the titlw before every page #!
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LILITH
Page 1:
Frame 1:
Bubble 1: Huh? Right now...? Well, I'm studying...
Frame 2:
Bubble 1: Well, it's a supplementary exam, you know...
Bubble 2: The vase?
Bubble 2: Yeah, it arrived just the other day...
Frame 3 (big right):
Bubble 1: If something else has changed..?
Small text next to her mouth: Aan~ (a sound tou do when "opening wide" to eat)
Bubble 2: No, not really...No..
Bif black text row + Title: Lilith
The staple main dish is a m-a-n<3
Frame 4:
Bubble 1: yeah, that's what I mean, nothing's...!
Bubble 2: You're so persistent...!
Bubble 3: I'll hang up now, pops.
Sfx mouth: gabu, "chomp"
Frame 5:
Bubble 1: yeah, yeah I'll see you soon, bye..
Bubble 2: .....
I Didn't translate all sfx since I seem to recall you being fine without them, if not, please tell me/ask. Sfx is important in their own way but rhey're such a pain to translate when you want to keep it speedy...!
I realise while translating this and also looking at other various popular artists that, the curvier girls, those who have some shape to them and some meat in the right places, seem to have become increasingly more common in hentai, just over he last few years.
A very welcome trend in my book! Really feels like it's a "thing" more now than it was like, 10 years ago.
LILITH
Page 2:
Frame 1:
Textrow 1: My nagging and demanding father...!
Textrow 2: He sent me this weird thing....
Frame 2:
Bubble 1:Hey~ Are you finished now...?
Textrow 1: And because of that, every day I...
Bubble 2: Hm..?
Frame 3:
Texteow 1: Well, it's not like I ... Hate it or anything...
Bubble 1: If so, shall we continue...?
Bubble 2: Hurry, hurry..! Let's ... Do it~!
Bubble 3: I still feel I need more~!
Textrow 2: It's just that, it's never ending...
Frame 4:
Textrow 1: Today, and every day just like today, she's...
Bubble 1: Ah, no, actually...
Bubble 2: From now on I'd like if we'd...
Textrow 2: Regardless of what I say she's all over me...
Frame 5:
Bubble 1: Hey, you...
Bubble 2: Listen a bit to me now, I'd...
This one is a quick one, I always appreciate when there's less text and more action. Stoey/setting is of course nice too but, it can be so over the top sometimes, when we all know what we avtually came for anyway.
LILITH
Page 3:
Frame 1:
Bubble 1: Yes...?<3
Frame 2:
Bubble 1: It's ok to touch them if you want to~
Frame 3:
Bubble 1: Yes..<3
Bubble 2: Grope them any way you feel like~ <3
Frame 4:
Bubble 1: Huuurryyyy~~.!
Bubble 2: Don't stress me..!
LILITH
Page 4:
Frame 1:
Textrow 1: In the end, again, we're here...
Bubble 1: Go ahead~ <3
Textrow 2: To her, this is all the "food" she ever needs, which is convenient, but...
Frame 2:
Textrow 1: Having sex with her...
Bubble 1-2: Nhh..! Nhhmm..!
Textrow 2: It's just routine now, never something you'd remember...
LILITH
Page 5:
Frame 1:
Textrow 1: Geez....
Bubble 1: Nhh..~
Bubble 2: Ahhn..~
Bubble 3: Nhhn..~
Frame 2:
Bubble 1: Uuhn..~!
Bubble 2: Ah..!
Bubble 3: Cum...!
Bubble 4: Ah! Ah!! <3
Frame 3:
Bubble 1: Ahh..! Please cumm~..!!
Bubble 2: Ahhh~~!!
Frame 4:
Bubble 1: Nn..
Bubble 2: Ahh..! So much~!<3
Bubble 3: You came so much inside...!
LILITH
Page 6:
Frame 1:
Bubble 1: H..hey...
Bubble 2-3: Nhh~ <3 Nnh~ <3
Bubble 4: I need a quick break...
Frame 2: Sorry~ <3
Frame 3:
Bubble 1: Now <3
Bubble 2: Next, we'll do it from behind..~!
Frame 4:
Bubble 1: Now, come and...<3
Bubble 2: Please.. Violate me some more~ <3
LILITH
Page 7:
Frame 1: No text
Frame 2: No text
Frame 3:
Textrow 1: Ahh..!
Textrow 2: It feels TOO good to be true...!
Bubble 1: Ahh~!
Bubble 2: Ahh~!
Bubble 3: Ahh~! You're going too fast~!
Bubble 4: Nnhhn~!
Frame 4:
textrow 1: But, at this rate.. My body...
Sdx bubbles, ahh! Haa!
Small text middle: Ah, I'm about to cum..!
Bubble 1: Ah!<3 ah!<3
Textrow 2: Won't handle it...!
>>4119465
I'm nearly done with the cleaning, ready to typeset! Keep up the pace.
I have some suggestions:
Minato Fumi:
http://hitomi.la/reader/795720.html#190
Mikami Cannon:
http://exhentai.org/s/6affc9d9d6/827669-24
Also have a look at this tank and tell me which story appeal to you. I plan to do them all if possible. I have several that I'm working on.
>>4119540
Could you link me the same work through any other site beside exhentai? I can't access that from the device I'm using for translations.
LILITH
Page 8:
Frame 1:
Bubble 1: Wh..what? A ban on sex..??
Bubble 2: But... That'll kill me~!
Frame 2:
Bubble 1: At this rate, I'll lose my good scores... they're getting worse and..
Bubble 2: ..before I was always ahead...
Bubble 3: Sc..score..?
Frame 3:
Bubble 1: Also, I've noticed that you've...
Bubble 2: ... put on a couple of pounds lately, you're getting a bit fat...!
Frame 4:
Bubble 1: Hm... You think..?
LILITH
Page 9:
Frame 1:
Bubble 1: But, arent you a guy who like curvy girls...?
Bubble 2: Right..?<3
Frame 2:
Bubble 1: Ouch..!
Small comment bortom left: So meean..!
Frame 3:
Bubble 1: Well, one last time then...!<3
Small comment face: Let's do it...~
Bubble 2: No!
Frame 4:
Bubble 1: B.. Buut!!
Bubble 2: From today forward, you'll be on a sex-diet!
LILITH
Page 10:
Frame 1:
Textbox 1: The next day...
Bubble 1: Are you studying now?
Bubble 2: Keep at it~!
Bubble 3: Ye...yeah..
Frame 2:
Textbox 1: 10 minutes later...
Bubble 1: Hey..~
Bubble 2: What about... Just kissing...?
Small text comment: Would you do that..?
Bubble 3: Nope!
Frame 3:
Textbox 1: 30 minutes later
Bubble 1: Hey... Let's have sex..!
Bubble 2: Seeex~!
Bubble 3: Aw, gee...!
Bubble 4: I tell you what, if you can manage one week, I'll let you do whavever you like with me after that, would that be ok?
>>4119878
Sure, here's the link:
http://g.e-hentai.org/s/6affc9d9d6/827669-24
next time you can just remove the "ex" and add "g.e-" instead.
Can you review this one for me.
Page 1: Frame 3. Bubble 1. "If something else has changed?". I don't understand what he mean here.
More suggestion to consider:
ED - Senpai! 2
http://hitomi.la/reader/690947.html#287
it is a sequel to this one:
http://hitomi.la/galleries/685561.html
>>4120128
Yeah, it's a little weird since he speaks on the phone and thus tou can't hear what his fathers is asking, but he's saying "Kawatta koto?", meaning " Changed things?", which seems to imply his father asking if anything is new compared to his (presumed) last call ti his son.
Maybe something like "If anything's happened" or "Any other news" or something would work better?
I'll look into those! Thanks :)
LILITH
Page 11:
Frame 1-2:
Bubble 1: P..promise..?
Bubble 2: Ye...
Bubble 3: Yeah...
Frame 3:
Textbox 1: 1 Week Later
Bubble 1: I wonder if I'll score well on the supplementary test...
Bubble 2: No way of knowing now, but I hope it payed of....
Frame 4-5:
Textrow 1: She really restrained herself well this past week...
Textrow 2: I guess I'll have to fulfill her wishes now...
Bubble 1: Hi, I'm ho....
LILITH
Page 12:
Sfx are pretty important here so, I'll translate them on this page just to be safe:
Frame 1:
Textrow 1: me.....!
(Continuation of previous page cut "home" word)
Sfx: Kiiisss~
Frame 2-4:
Bubble 2: Nhh..!
Sfz: Doroo, "drooling, liquid sound"
Bubble 3: Nnhh..~
Sfx: Gokun! "Swallowing, gulp"
Bubble 4: Hey, wa...wait.
Bubble 5: Ahaa~
Bubble 6: What did you...?
Sfx: haa~ haa~
>>4120559
You don't really need those sfxs aside from the sudden kiss or hand grab. They tend to distract from the reading experience. I'm up to the page you're doing now. All the moan bubbles have been done.
To speed things up for you and for me I suggest that you abbreviate some labels:
-bubble 1, bubble 2 --> b1, b2
-textbox 1 --> box 1
-textrow 1 ---> float 1
http://g.e-hentai.org/g/784639/8f355110b0/
A very heartwarming Vanilla story that spans several chapters. This one is still untranslated.
Maybe not the hottest sex scenes, but worth it for the heart boner.
>>4120566
Sure! I'll switch to that way, it'll save some time indeed. I agree that the Sfx sometimes can be more a bother than something that helps, the majority of them are definitely not needed anyway, but the japanese seem to love them.
LILITH
Page 13:
Frame 1:
B1: What...
B2: ..did you make me drink just now...?
B3: Ehehe~ <3
Frame 2:
B1: It's a medicine that will make sure your dick becomes big and hard longer ...!
Frame 3:
B1: Remember, you promised...!
B2: Yeah, I guess you're right...
B3: Are there any known side-effects to this medicine?
B4: Side... Effects...?
B5: ......
Frame 3:
B1: Geez...
B2: I hope you won't make me regret this...
Float 1-2: Hey, hey~
B3: <3
Frame 4:
B1: Let's get in bed...!<3
LILITH
Page 14:
Frame 1:
Float 1: And, just like she said...
B1: Ah~ <3
B2: Hey.. Wai...!
B3: Anh~ <3
B4: Ah..!
Frame 2:
B1: Ahh~ <3
B2: Hm..? Are you about to cum again..?
Float 1: Gee, I don't know how many times I've cum now....
B3: Nhh..!<3
B4: Ah, I can't...!
B5: Ah~<3
Frame 3:
B1: I'm about to cum, yeah...So that's why
B2: Nhh..!<3
B3: Aah~~<3
B3: ... I need a break ...!
B4: Aahn~!
Float 1: It's true... My erection won't let go...!
Frame 4:
B1: Ehehe, don't worry~!<3
B2: I'll make you feel good again...!<3
B3: Gh..! (A cut "tsu" is rather the ended continuation of an earlier statement, most likely a grunt here though)
I can't believe you! I remember asking you to translate that Meme50 one with the bunny girl a bunch of months ago, and boy did you deliver.
Anyway, when and if you have the time,can you have a go at this one? It's a Sasamori Tomoe one that hasn't been translated yet. It's also verys hot (Around 7 pages)
http://g.e-hentai.org/g/789141/ffec6de3fc/
Also, while I don't really enjoy NTR, my one weakness is Rocket Monkey because his girls are fucking smoking hot.
Most of his works are translated, but there is one that hasn't been: Her True Self Part 2
http://g.e-hentai.org/s/84db6eb9b4/634019-47
Starts in page 47 of that Tank, and goes all the way to page 72.
>>4121921
You hardly need translations for Rocket Monkey since he always does exactly the same dumb story anyway.
can someone translate the last 10 seconds of this hentai for me please? particularly what ever it is she tells the human as the oger fucks her which makes him collapse in disbelief. need i explain why such a statement should be translated? http://magpost.com/video/a710f2115fbe8c62ed89f36cb83f4817.html?fid=Hentai
>>4122153
I'll see if I can when I get my hands on some headphones.
>>4121921
Thanks! That bunny girl, is actually the "mascot" for the project now, as tou can see on the title picture! :D
I'll look into your links later when I'm done with my current projects, but what I choose these days are mostly based on what my editors are ok with editing, so we'll see what happens. That said, nice to hear we still have old contributors lurking around and I hope you'll enjoy what's happened in the thread since your last visit and also what'll will happen going forward!
LILITH
Page 15:
Frame 1:
B1: Hey~ Don't hold back~!
B2: Ah~! <3
B2: Uaah...!
B3: Ah|! <3
B4: Please, cum..!!
Frame 2:
B1: Aahh...!
B2: Ah~!<3
B3: I'm ... cumming...!
B4: Ah~! <3
Frame 3:
B1: Aa...aahhnn...nnhh~~ <3<3
B2: Aahh..! Haahn..~!
LILITH
Page 16:
Frame 1:
B1: Um...
B2: Would you let me take a break now..?
B3: N~o..! <3 Remember, you promised~!
Frame 2:
B1: This is all because of that damn medicine...!
B2: But maybe...!
Frame 3:
B1: Ok, next, I want to do you from behind...
B2: !
B3: <3
Frame 4:
B1: Now, I'll make you feel even better than before!
B2: Ok~ <3
LILITH
Page 17:
Frame 1:
B1: This time, we'll try using this...!
B2: Huh..?
B3: Using what..?
Frame 2:
B1: Well...!
B2: Eh?
B3: Ah, wait..!
Frame 3:
B1: H..hey~!
B2: Not that...!
Frame 4:
B1: A..h..!
B2: Ah, it went inside...!
B3: N..noo~!
B4: No, you can't...~!
Would really love it if someone took a shot at pic related.
http://g.e-hentai.org/g/846311/345320b82a/
Apparently, the story's about how the elf chick trades her ruined outfit for one her party found in the dungeon but (surprise!) it's cursed and she needs to have sex with someone in order to get it off again.
>>4122261
Mammaries of unusual size are definitely involved.
Also, just tossing this in - I'm decent with image manipulation software, so if you're kind enough to provide me with a translation, I'll work some typesetting magic afterwards. Might take a bit since uni's keeping me on my toes at the moment, but I'll get it done eventually.
>>4122274
That one looks both great and funny, but i has a LOT of text, I might pick it up further up (big RPG-fan so it speaks to me) but, it would be quite and endevour to translate it al, it would take a lot of time...
>>4122406
Yeah, wouldn't blame you if you decided against doing it.
If it's anything, my offer of doing the typesetting stands, though. I know it's not that much, but I guess it's better than nothing.
>>4122153
That one was already subtitled years ago. It's called "Inda no Himekishi Jeanne".
>>4122427
There is an English uncensored translation already, you know. You just have to spend a little bit of money on it.
https://2d-market.com/Comic/82-Marcille-Meshi?utm_source=ehgal&utm_medium=banner&utm_campaign=related
It was right there on the gallery you linked itself.
Not sure if you're still taking suggestions or not, but there's this one called "Kainyuu Miko Uzume."
http://g.e-hentai.org/g/845587/c41183da7a/
A few people have taken stabs at translating it, but it's not a co-ordinated group, and the only translated chapters are 1, 3, 7 and 8.
LILITH
Page 18:
Frame 1:
B1: N..no~!
B2: Nhh..!
B3: This is just...
B4: We'll take it slow...
Frame 2:
B1: Noo~ <3
B2: I'm going to try and teach you some manners from here on out...!
B3: Nhh..~
B4: Ye.. Yee..
B5: ..ss..! <3 (The word "Un", broken into two bubbles)
Frame 3:
B1: Ahhn~!
B2: Good, it seems you...
B3: ..get about as much pleasure from this too at least..!
B4: Ahh~!
B5: Aahnn~~!
>>4108911
Sorry for vanishing. as >>4111220
said I got slammed.Suddenly finding myself $6,000 in debt and needing a second job... If there is some kind of cosmic deity I think I pissed it off . I should be getting more time soon, likely near the end of this week. but will likely be busy around the holidays. I should have 1-2 weeks of free time finally. Barring anything other horrible happening I suppose...
About Yami. I'll still do it if it's needed. I can't say how long it would take though. No offense to
>>4118396
but it definitely shows it's your first(I hope) attempt. If you want to do it for practice I don't mind though just please follow
>>4118622
Can someone help with this one?
http://g.e-hentai.org/g/133992/d95fbd237d/
I have a thread here with all the images posted
>>4125045
Also a point about this is I have looked high and low and cannot find it in English.
I remember find and English version years ago but it think it vanished.
If anyone can help that would be appreciated.
>>4107043
Another bump for this
LILITH
Page 19:
Frame 1:
B1: Ah..haa~!<3
B2: Ye...yes..!
Small transparent bubbles mouth: Haa~!
B3: In my ass..! I love it...!
B4: Ah~!<3
B5: You see, this is why I had to make you restrain yourself for a while...
Frame 2:
B1: And look, tour clitoris is more erected than ever...!
B2: Nnh~!
B3: Aahhii~~!<3
Frame 3:
B1: Maybe it's time I pull it out...
B2: Ahh.!! Noo~~!
Frame 4:
B1: Well, do you promise to listen to me when I tell you thing from here on out..?
B2: Aahh~!
B3: Yes..! I'll listen..!
B4: No matter what I will behave..! Nhh! Ah..!
>>4124678
That's too bad to hear man, I hope it qorks out for you in the end, I've been in similiar situations, it's rough!
As for Yamitsuki, I would really like to have it edited eventually since it's a full translations so we can share it with the fans in rhe thread. Thw other guy seems gone so, if you have the time, I would appreciate if you'd do it, and also the other work I'm currently doing (will pick up again and finish after Lilith) when it's done.
Let's keep it coming people :)
>>4125047
I'm sorry to say, while I do LOVE me some Tifa, that font is much too hard to read :(
If you have anything other with her though, I'd always consider it.
Have you looked at the E-hentai link to see if it is clearer to read there?
>>4125987
Yeah, but it's the same, it's not the resolution that's the problem, it's the fact that it's handwritten and distorted that's the issue :/
>>4097327
How does this look? "heavy heartbeat" is kinda hard to express in english. and I guessed on tapu. Dunno what the top left sfx is.
>>4126582
Also not quite sure on why the filesize is getting so much larger. original is 1.5mb and I'm saving for web. odd.
>>4126583
The originals are jpeg's, of course turning them into png's will bloat the file size.
>>4126582
Yeah, i just write those out to suggest to the editor to find an appropiate word for the translated sfx(thump, or barhump for "heavy heartbeat" works fine). The top one by her mouth is a small breath :)
Nice editing! As previous poster said, if original was jpeg and you save in png it'll make it bigger, stick to hi-res jpeg maybe.
>>4126724
I hope to see that you complete the story so that I could release it by Sunday or Monday. Focus on the dialog more because I have already done all the moan typesettings myself.
At the moment do you have plan for the stories you translated that don't get editors? The thread seems to be lacking commitment as far as editing go.
>>4097597
Bald spot huh? I see why he's cheating lol. Is the kyuu just sliding back? maybe longing or something? Sorry this is taking so long. as mentioned my freetime is very little.
>>4126817
Maybe it would help to post in a sadpanda thread to search for help?
I'm pretty sure there are several translators and / or editors lurking there who could help editing.
>>4126881
No, don't post there. It's common knowledge that Daiz and Fakku lurk those threads on the daily. Steven is mostly doing Wani work and I don't want them interfering with the project. If they know what story will be worked on and released, they will track it down and purge it much faster. I will work on any of Steven translation as long as the story is within my interest. Some people think that they can recommend a story to Steven and hope that it get picked up by an editor. Unfortunately it doesn't always work out that way.
>>4126888
Then maybe use the E-Hentai forums? Isn't there a subforum dedicated to finding editors or translators?
>>4126892
Hardly anyone uses that as far as I know. Feel free to do it though. Ideally for me, only stories committed by an editor should be translated. Otherwise it is just wasteful. I had hope that Steven would do all of my request but that would be very selfish of me. On the upside however, people will be getting things to read faster because I am committed to all the stories that I request.
>>4126898
>Ideally for me, only stories committed by an editor should be translated.
With that approach, this wouldn't be much more than a circlejerk you could do in a private forum.
The reason it's on here is preciselys o that people can share gems that are not translated yet, not only if they are editors themselves.
>>4126901
*precisely so
>>4100528
Missing the big sfx when he's facefucking her. Hoping those sfx that ([robably only I care about lol) are coming along decently. I never noticed before how many this one had. Kisaia sure loves them. I'm starting to too feel like I'm speaking chaika speak. If anything else needs fixing let me know. currently in my lttile window of relax time and rather medicated heh.
On another note is exporting them like this fine? I've always been horrible at figuring quality. If this works I'll export all of them like it, if not open to suggestions though I'm only 10/44... ugh.
>>4126892
Yes but the ehentai forums are also suffering from a lack of editors currently. There's several translators with completed scripts but no editors and Imari just dumped dozens of scripts there as well.
>>4127169
I'm just one man, but I'm working on it. trying to figure out what some anon said about using the batang font to get hearts. It isn't working. Hey sorc did you ever finish your wild words mod?
>>4100958
I seem to be missing some things here . If it's something I'm screwing up on sorry. lack of sleep recently. but this is as far as I've gotten. And I am now going to crash. will work on it more when I can.
>>4126817
Yeah, super busy end of the week for me but I'll finish it this weekend, promise! As for the stories, at the moment only "Yamitsuki" and (currently on hold but will finish) "Peeking at the wedding ring" are translated and not edited, Yamitsuki is being worked on by a kind anon in the thread at the moment(doing splendid work I'll take the chance to add! :)) and "Peeking at the wedding ring" was gonna be edited by RookieEditor as soon as it is finished, I seem to remember, the suggestion was even his I think!
I don't think I have any other translations that hasn't been edited... So even though the thread has a bit of a slow down of late I hope we can continue with it, it's our own little koint project to get some of our lost favorites translated and shared after all :)
When these two are done (Lilith and Peeking), I'm thinking of doing a Inoue Makito story out of two from a previous thread, since i really love that artist, would you be interested in editing that?
Aside from that, I'll go through the shares again and see what catches my interest and then post links to see if anyone is up for editing any of it. Fair? :)
I really want this to go on, I think we've built something here and I hope it can last! :)
>>4126856
Usually it's used for a soft touching or sliding of soft larts, like bodies pressing against each other or fanrics folding on someone when hugging or moving slow towards something. But as with all things japanese it's hard to make sense of it in all cases :)
>>4126898
Stories requested by editors, as long as they fit what I'm into (and if you're already in this thread that isn't too hard haha), usually get priority from me actually, as a way of saying thanks or helping eachother out. I really do want this to be a project where "everyone" can feel that their work can be picked, and that they can help out if they feel they have the skill to do it :)
I will definitely pick more of your shares eventually, since you've been doing great editing work, but of course, not all you post will be to my taste, as some things I pick might not be to yours, and so on. But my hope is that we all will get somethinf out of it as the translations continues :D
Well, less talk, more translating from me! Here's page 20.
LILITH
Page 20:
Frame 1:
B1: If you can do that, then we could do it every day again....
B2: Really..?!
B3: Yeah, actually, restraining myself for 1 whole week was hard for me too...!
B4: Hehehe~ <3
Frame 2:
B1: I love you...
Frame 3:
B1: Hey, I'm about to cum now...!
B2: Aah~!<3
B3: Ah, please cum.. Cumh..!<3
B4: Ahhii~<3
B5: I'm cumming too..!
LILITH
Page 21:
Frame 1:
B1: I'm cumminghh..!<3
B2: Aaahh!!~<3
Rest of bubbles: Ah-screams and moans.
Frame 2:
B1: Haa~! I don't feel tired at all...let's do it one more time in the bath...!
B2: <3
Frame 3:
Sfx: Ding-dong~!
B1: hm?
>>4127379
Actually rookie is doing yami. I just totally forgot to put my name back on. Peeking was my suggestion yes. I do still intend to edit it, just the whole RL situation as mentioned previously blows. It will get done though.. What did I do wrong on this page by the way? >>4127285
One of us seems to have missed a bubble, or I screwed up with bubble placement. Also are the sfx in the right place? placement was kind of vague there.
>>4127696
Ah ok, sorry for mixing that up, and thanks for the edit! Hopefully I'll be able to translate part 2 of Yamitsuki eventually too :)
As for the bubble, it's one of those sfxabubbles, that says "Pyuuu!", a shooting/splurting sound when he comes. Hope that helps!
So tired of sfx desu, they're often just a big pain and they tale SO mich extra time to do... In the futue I Think I'll just translate them when they're actually important....
I'll return to "peeking" after Lilith, great that you can manage some editing even though RL stuff had hit you, I know how it feels man, and I hope this here project and what it produces eases the pain somewhat :)
Finally, last page if Lilith, sorry for taking so long! Next up, I'll finish "Peeking at the wedding ring"!
LILITH
Page 22:
(Like previous similiar pages these bubbles are a little hard to make 100% sense of since I can't hear the other side of the conversation, but I'll try!)
Frame 1:
B1: Hey, Dad...
B2: Could you please stop sending me weird packages to my house...?
B3: Romance? What do you mean..? No, I'm doing fine....I got that stuff sorted ....
Frame 2:
B1: Yes, I understand...
If anything else happens, I'll let you know...
Frame 3:
Sfx: Slam
Frame 4:
Float 1: Now....
Float 2: What should I do about this...?
Float 3: Go ahead please~ <3
>>4127783
It's missing panel 1 top right big middle panel bubble by her breast. Pic for reference. Guessing the top right is just her being interrupted? maybe a kuh? The right breast bubble being the generic splurt?
>>4127379
I'm done with Napata now, going to release tomorrow so look forward to it. You can probably do this Inoue Makito:
http://nhentai.net/g/135091/114/
But perhaps you should look at other requests too because I see a lot of them.
>>4128251
Great to hear, I look forward to reading it in english :)
Yeah, I was thinking of that one! Will probably do it. There are indeed a lot of requests now, some will never happen since they didn't fit my taste or the rules etc, but some definitely will, when "Peeking" and this Inoue one is done, I'll post a list of the ones I'm most interested in and we'll take it from there! :)
Will you Edit the Inoue one J?
>>4128095
Yes, exactly, top right is a smal tsu, a cut of sound, usually ending a previous bubble, in this case some type of "khn" och "Hgn" or something probably works. The one by her right breast is indeed a generic splurt sfx!
So nice finally seeing this edited! I'm not that big a fan of Kiasas stories usually but, he can draw girls with tits, thats for sure!
I'll also do Yamitsuki pt2 eventually, of course!
>>4128330
wait, I meant for Inoue Makito story.
>>4128331
Meant what? That you'll do it? :) That'd be great, I'd love tl translate more of his work, he's definitely one of the most talented artists in the business, if not THE most talented, and the fact that not all of his work get translated the second they hit the internet surprises me.
![[212] (COMIC Kairakuten BEAST 2014-08)[Japanese].zip-216.jpg](https://i.imgur.com/ZxhN7Uo.jpg "[212] (COMIC Kairakuten BEAST 2014-08)[Japanese].zip-216.jpg")
>>4128321
please do some 212 works please
>>4128435
That looks interesting, if you want me to take a closer look at things and maybe translating, please provide links to the works :)
>>4128420
I wouldn't use this superlative when you don't really know every artist out there.
Personally, I like Zero no Mono's more realistic style. His ratio of Japanese to translated books is extremely low, having around a dozen tankoubons and only Wasurena and a few oneshots translated.
http://g.e-hentai.org/g/5803/bbc999a689/
http://g.e-hentai.org/g/684807/60c23ed79b/
http://g.e-hentai.org/g/456334/6002c0ef20/
Asahina Hikage is relatively new, but has a very cute art style and is equally good at drawing beautiful men and women:
http://nhentai.net/g/135547/
>>4128514
I changed some of your lines to read better and or to match with literal translation. Tell me if you want to change anything. They'll all be available on my blog.
Here's Lilith:
http://g.e-hentai.org/g/882686/05b3041a25/
>>4108816
>http://nhentai.net/g/120264/187/
On the cards or no?
>>4101751
Is the I'mh typo or slurring? It's the only slurred word I saw so wanted to be sure.
>>4128514
here's the 212 works
http://www30.zippyshare.com/v/AgRiE7cv/file.html
>>4129225
Since I translate from an iPad isually, I have to get online galleries to be able to work with it, sorry for the inconvinience...
>>4129309
Was meant to say "indeed a slur" there, but man, these touchscreen keyboards...!
>>4129348
Thanks again for your great work! :)
I've got a busy couple of days ahead of me but I'll try to get some more pages out in the coming days anyway! Nice to be back on track with some releases!
>>4128936
I kind of like it but, it's all up to what the thread's trusy editors wants to do, first hand.
https://hitomi.la/reader/845211.html#1-
>>4129311
212 work 1
https://hitomi.la/reader/733075.html#211
212 work 2
https://hitomi.la/reader/764155.html#7
thank god those magazines are still up
>>4096565
>http://g.e-hentai.org/g/883159/1bfdf6b769/
is this one reposted? The current one is broken.
The adventures of Mari-chan and Amimi-chan continues after a pause with Lilith!
PEEKING AT THE WEDDING RING
Page 8:
Frame 1:
Bubble 1: Aaah~!! I came so hard~!
Sfx face: Haa~ haa~
Sfx dick: piku, piku "twitch"
Bubble 2: The amount of cum is much more than my darling usually shoots though...!
Sfx hand: kucha, kucha "scratch, scratch"
Frame 2:
Bubble 1: Ah, I saw you, I saw you ~ <3
Bubble 2: Mari-chan~ I didn't realise your will to get a third was was a actually THIS strong...!
Sfx bubble amimis hands: rub, rub
Frame 3:
Bubble 1: Ahh..! This isn't...! I was just...! I was doing it alone and...!
Bubble 2: Yeah, that's right...!
Sfx head: futa, futa, "wave, wave"
Bubble 3: H..huh?
Bubble 4: This is just a one time thing, a freebie..!
Bubble 5: Reeeally?
Frame 4:
Sfx: Suu! "Shove, slide, pull"
Frame 5:
Sex head: doki, doki, heavy heartbeats
Bubble 1: Finally, If you wanted to "mix with me" that bad, you should've stopped thinking about it and asked long ago~!
(These next two are almost impossible to make out but I think I got them, that said, they could be wrong, but at least I tried!)
Bubble 2: It's up again...!
Bubble 3: Will he be able to handle Amimi longer than me...?
Sfx bubble breast: punii, "squish"
Sfx dick: fap, fap, fap
Bubble 4: Well Hideaki, this second round, it's time for.... (Will continue on page 9)
(COMIC1) [Shichiyou Souryuujun (Soushin Souma)] Oreteki 16 Rensha (Kanon) to
English
http://g.e-hentai.org/g/706314/1ae2f74658/
1. Not a lot of doujins starring Akiko other than the To Akiko series get translated. And franly, I love it because of Akiko.
>>4109255
Good god. I didn't pay attention to how much text is out of bubbles in peeking. This one is likely going to take quite awhile to edit.
I started page 2 when I made my last post, so over an hour to do this an it's still not perfect.
Steven_even I just wanted to say thanks for all that you and the translation community do! You guys are great! Keep up the good work!
>>4109959
From what I can tell
Wife cheated on husband behind his back and shamelessly demands divorce.
Husband isn't a beta wimp so he turned her lawyer into her sex slave who drugged the wife for proper training.
It seems the husband was acting the nice guy for her to please her but it seems she didn't like the nice guy so the husband discarded it and showed the true alpha he always was.
>>4130395
Whoa! So it's revenge NTR! That suff is always 10/10 for me. I vote for this.
>>4130420
*stuff
>>4130357
Thank you, that warms the heart, I get a lot of shit for this too so, it's always nice to hear its appreciated :)
>>4130348
Yeah, I can relate, all that sfx and the handwritten small bubbles in that manga is killing me, takes so much time, but we fight on! It's always so thrilling to read the whole thing afterwards, that thrill never gets old!
>>4096554
Thank you. You are making people happy.
>>4096554
Can't suggest works by Tomohiro Kai enough, but in particular this one called "Heart Works". Delicate and seductive expressions on girl with a very erotic body.
From COMIC Kairakuten BEAST 2015-10 (pgs 073-090).
Torrent can be found here:
http://sukebei.nyaa.se/?page=view&tid=1843398
Hope you consider it.
>>4130957
>http://nhentai.net/g/112362/159/
Also, gallery for this is here:
http://nhentai.net/g/147135/
>>4098507
I definitely second the suggestion for translating this chapter in particular, called Gekka Bijin.
>>4130959
Yeah, I intend to do both the Inoue Makito works that's been posted in this thread, they're just too good to pass by.
>>4130957
This looks great, some other ones in that collection caught my eye aswell...! I'll definitely check it out.
>>4130620
Thanks, that was sort of the point with the whole project. It still surprises me how much shit I get here and there for not picking/picking certain words, or for missing 2% of a translation while nailing 98%, but that's the internet I guess. Thanks for the support anyways :)
As long as there are Tits To Translate, I won't let the haters get to me.
>>4129839
Having looked through both, they really hit all the good marks with me, I'd like to do both, do any editors here feel they'd like to edit if I did?
He really draws amazing tits this artist.
>>4129348
Someone else translated the second part of Yamitsuki already, probably because the first part was uploaded and he wanted to provide one for part two as fast as possible:
http://g.e-hentai.org/g/883788/bf9c8466a8/
The translation and editing is kinda iffy, though. Will you still do your own version of Yamitsuki Part 2 regardless, Steven?
>>4130973
Keep it up! :)
I was wondering, I want to commission someone to translate some Sasaki maru stories, but does anyone know if anyone is working on those already? I don't want to pay if its already going to be done by someone else.
>>4131267
Yeah, I noticed. As far as I can tell, the translation is accurate enough, but the font-use and the grammar could improve somewhat here and there. Since my schedule is so full, and the editors are so busy too, I have to say I'll probably avlid translating this one since it's already been translated by someone else now, which gets the rest of the story across, as it were. However, were there to be a part 3 in the future, I'd probably do it :)
But right now I've got mt hands full with all the other awesome request people have been filling up the thread with :)
>>4102126
Bump for this
>>4131605
Hey, I'm the guy who's gotten two Sasaki Maru stories translated in the past. I know I don't have any of his works on the pipeline currently and the other recently translated chapter was commissioned by Ozma but that looked like a one time thing for him.
So feel free to commission more Sasaki Maru, I for one would love to see it. Do ask if you need tips on where to get the cheapest commission prices and remember to use the full size physical scans (http://g.e-hentai.org/g/854294/95101b15c0/ this was done on digital scans because the physical scans were not much larger and had abysmal quality, recent magazine scans are much better).
>>4131729
I found someone who does a page for $1.8, so thats decent i guess, But if you know some guys, feel free to share them.
>>4131807
Brolen is the cheapest translator, he does 0.65$ per page for translation only so if you or one of your friends can edit that's by far the cheapest. If Brolen's editor is around (not a guarantee) the price is 1.30$ per page. He's also stupidly fast, he's delivered script for a full tankobon in 4 days in the past.
https://brolen9104.wordpress.com/ (site is ancient but the commission info and contact info are valid)
Desudesu works for around 1.50$ per page and upwards and is pretty good. He tends to have a large backlog though so you may need to wait a long time. http://desudesu.fakku.net/
Forbidden translations is decent at 1.50$ per page. He does a lot of the translations for Doujin-Moe.
http://forbidden-translations.com/
Maipantsu does translation only for around 1$ per page. http://forums.e-hentai.org/index.php?showuser=654109
Of course there's many others also out there but I honestly mostly use Brolen these days, he's simply cheapest and fastest while also providing good translations.
http://g.e-hentai.org/g/788487/d689e71555/
At $0 a page, I'd say I'm still cheapest in the business though ;)
But maybe I should start taking comissions too... Would be nice, then again, I do like to keep it free, and not as stressy as it can be when you get payed for something. Free keeps the expectations on a lower level :)
Speaking lf translations, here's the next page!
PEEKING AT THE WEDDING RING
Switching to shorter descriptions for bubbles etc, will save time. I'll finish Sfx:s for this one but after this I probably won't do sfx again, unless they're really important, just not worth it.
Page 9:
Frame 1:
Sfx bubble breast: Mmyuu, "squiiish"
B1: ...Amimi to have tas...! (Cut off sentence will continue next frame)
Sfx dick: nui, nui, "fondle, fondle"
Float 1: Doing it in front of others... It's kind of a turn on...!
Frame 2:
B1: ..tee..?! (Continued from frame 1, B1)
Sfxdick right: dokin, "throb"
Sfx dick left: gucho, "slosh"
Sfx legs: guin!, "pull!"
Frame 3:
B1: Hey, what's the matter Amimi..? Do you dislike having sex with me, or what??
Small float 1: Ah, no , but if it's you... You have a wife and..!
B2: Hey..! What are you doing, just shoving it into my pussy just like that...!<3
Sfx breast: Muni! "Grope, grab"
Sfxright hand: gugui, "grab"
B3: Takaahirroo..!!!
Sfx legs: Tan, tan, "pound, pound"
Frame 4:
B1: Ah.. You're not ok with it...?
B2: Did you look forward ro doing it raw with hideaki's dick instead...?
Sfx: biku, biku "shudder, twitch"
Frame 5:
B1-3: Ah, so bighh~! Ahn~! Thick~!
B4: This sex, it's better than when you're with your darling, right?
Sfxbreast: zun, zun "wobble, wobble"
Editors! I'm thinking of soing the two Inoue Makito works next, since they're soooo damn good! Who would be willing to edit them! :)
I also think I wanna do this one fast inbetween, the tits om the girl here is just too damn amazing to pass up:
https://hitomi.la/reader/733075.html#211
Would anyone edit this one if I did it? :)
PEEKING AT THE WEDDING RING
Page 10:
Frame 1:
B1: Sex with your darling offers no surprises these days, right? It's all just standard procedure by now, right?
White sfx:Pan, pan "pound, pound"
Black sfx: zupa, zupa "slosh, slosh"
Float amimi head: That's right~!<3
B2: I can tell by the way your pussy suck me in and how wet you get from getting fucked by your friend's dick instead!
Sfx mari arms: buru, buru "shudder"
Sfx mari hand: gugu, "clench"
Sfx mari head: kaaa! "Shocked"
B3: Hey..! Mari..! What's wrong ..?!
Sfx hideaki top: bikun! "Twitch"
Sfx hideaki toilet: dan! "Clang!"
Frame 2:
Text amimi head: Ah~! Ah! Hn! Nh! hah~!
Sfx legs: Pan, "pound"
B1: Well, it's not what's "wrong" and what's right...It's about what Takahiro just told Amimi...!
Sfx legs: suru, "slide"
B2: Ah, then.. You mean...?
Frame 3:
Sfxtop right: bikun! "Twitch"
B1: Please, feel free to use mine in the same way~!<3
Float mari face: Haa~ Haa~
Sfx dick: baki, baki "snap!"
>>4096554
you guys should become internals at oppaitime, it's a great hentai and JAV tracker
>>4132319
What's that? Please, tell me more :)
>>4132482
It's a private community where we all exchange neat hentai, doujins, JAVs and games. It's a pretty chill community, so if you join at #oppaitime-invites on the "irc.oppaiti.me" server you can tell spaghetti or azathoth that bottle refered you and that you know how to do translations and stuff. It's got loads of content already with some good exclusives (soft-subbed hentai, non watermarked JAVs, uncensored doujins, etc.).
Did Miyabi Tsuzuru retire?
Alright! I'll try checking that out when I'm on a computer, mostly I translate via my iPad, when I commute, so we'll see.
Anyways, more pages!
PEEKING AT THE WEDDING RING
Page 11:
Frame 1:
Sfx: kuchu, kuchu, "slish, slish"
B1: Aaah~~!
B2-2: N..! Nnhh...!
Frame 2:
B1: Ahh...! Ah.. When I was pressing my dick between your tits earlier I know I said it felt just like... a pussy... But..., it's not even close...!
B2: haa..! Haa! Haa~!
Sfx: guchu, guchu " slosh, slish"
Sfx x-ray: Zumumu., "slow wet sliding"
Sfx bubble womb: go! "Hit, stop"
B3: Nh..! You're so hard..!
B4: Of.. Of course... Inside this pussy, my darling has ... (Continues next frame)
Small sfx bubbles around B4: Nhh..! Nh..~!
Frame 3:
B1: ... Cum.. Many times, and I've given birth to two children with it...!
Sfx around breasts: purun, "jiggle, boing"
Sfx legs: nuppo, nuppo, "slosh, slush"
Float 1: Aah.. Man..!
Float 2: How van she something like that now, and in such a lewd way..?! Is she for real?!
Sfx hideaki face: nh..! Nh..!
Frame 4:
B1: Hey, now...
Sfx: biku, biku "twitch"
Frame 5:
B1: Did your dick just shrink a little...?
B2: That's just... The stuff you say...
Sfx back: gugu, "grab"
Sfx down: sun, sun, "slish, slish"
DRUNK LOVE by 212
I'm gonna do this one too, hope someone is willing to edit it for the good of everyone, it's easy text and short so, that's why it jumps the line a bit, it's just too good not to do..!
https://hitomi.la/reader/733075.html#211
Frame 1:
B1: Ding dong~!
Frame 2:
B1: Huh? Who could that be, this late...?
Frame 3:
B1: Ding, dong, ding dong, ding dooong!!!!
B2: Damn it, stop that! (Literally "shut up, but it's more like "stop" in the context)
Title text between frame 1-3 and 4:
(This one was hard to make sense of but I think it's something like:)
The drunk drunkard's drunkism<3
(But I have no idea how that makes any relevant sense, japanese domestic humor probably)
Frame 4: Yes, yes, damn it I'm coming...! I'll open...!
Frame 5:
B1: H..hey..! What took ya so long... To open..?!
B2: It's your big-sis Meguri's grand return, damn it...!
(Although, as it turns out, she's his cousin)
>>4117051
>Well, I tell you what, you tell me what you like to fantasize about, and I'll do that for you~!
Are you sure on this line? from what I'm getting 5数えるまでに 何か好 きな事言つたら ソしてあげ るよ
ほいせ-の
would be something like 5 count tell me your source come on now? Again my japanese is terrible but the 5 in the text struck me as odd since you didn't mention 5 anything. so I looked it up. Also the line
>Hurry up and decide, unless you get this going you can't switch with me...!
Was a little odd. switched it some. does this work?
>>4133073
Yeah, the five thing confised me aswell, wasn't sure if she's saying something like 5 times or 5 seconds or something, but I DO know that everything following the 5-part means, literally:
Anything you like, that thing, tell me and that I will give you, now then...!
Basically, But that's pretty stale way of saying it, so I translated it into something more in her style. I actually left out the 5-part since it seemed irrelevant to the other part which seems to hold the relevant part (her offering do do things for him). It's unfortunate but, yeah sometimes even I can't get parts of bubbles translated inte something that makes sense :)
The switch-bit is also a bit weird, I just assumed that she meant that, unless he's done, she won't be able to switch with him and get to use the toilet, which I'm guessing she wanted to use since she entered it :)
Again, I can't be 100% sure here either since I'm not Good enough at japanese to know every way of saying hings that these people keep coming up with..! I mean, damn, some of the dialogues in these mangas... It's almost like deciphering a code of jokes, puns and slurs sometimes :P
Hope that helps!
>>4133079
>wasn't sure if she's saying something like 5 times or 5 seconds or something
Maybe something along the lines of "Tell me within the next 5 seconds" or "Tell me until I count to 5"?
I don't speak Japanese, but that makes the most sense in this context to me.
>>4133087
Yeah, I guessed it was somehing like that too...seems likely, man, if there's something I'm bad at it's these damn japanese counters for... Everything...! They're the worst.
http://g.e-hentai.org/g/818897/7301f3bfc3/
I don't really want this translated as much as I want just a rough summary of what the fuck is going on
>>4133079
Maybe "Well, I tell you what. you have 5 seconds to tell me what you like to fantasize about, and I'll do that for you~! "? I'd hate to leave off part of what she's saying even though it really isn't important I guess.
>>4133143
Sure, That'll do. In the story as such it's such a minor detail I'm sure it'll work out. You almost always have to wrestle a bubble or two your way when you translate something, japanese is just so... Weird, you know? :P
>>4096554
Hello, I'm kinda new to this sort of thread but, I am a huge smell fetish fan and... I don't know if this counts or if there is another translation thread somewhere else but, here's the image.
>>4133400
Forgot the link, http://lofi.e-hentai.org/s/ecf6d63ce5/810380-27
