Old thread is here:
>>4072134
https://fgts.jp/h/thread/4072134/
I posted a bunch of pages I translated there and intend to continue with the rest of chapter 8 in this thread. Be warned that I'm heavily relying on machine translations and Japanese online dictionaries, so there's naturally mistakes and I'm occasionally missing details. So please don't start a shit storm if there's something wrong. Anyone who can read Japanese is free to correct my mistakes.
Once I'm done with chapter 8, I may do a few more pages from the remaining chapters I personally deem interesting, but their amount is pretty small (maybe 5 or so).
Here's two files with the OCRd Kanji and text from the previously translated pages. I don't have a script file for the translated text.
Maybe someone could copy my translated text from the previous thread in a pastebin and correct the spelling mistakes and the pages where I mistook who is currently speaking for certain bubbles while he's at it.
>https://drive.google.com/file/d/0BwTwLZfCLSaYdEFIc3d3WFp4aTA/view?usp=sharing
>https://drive.google.com/file/d/0BwTwLZfCLSaYUHhMVzNNMEtmOEU/view?usp=sharing
I'll post the first page of chapter 8 today (could also be the last page of chapter 7), and starting tomorrow 2 - 5 pages per day until I'm done.
>>4083875
No Archive anymore, so just 3 days for anyone to save those translations or they gone forever.
>>4083894
Why? Fgts still works fine.
Page 197:
(Hiro's thoughts after he saw Yayoi fucking Hebitsuka in chapter 7)
>In retrospect, this was certainly the turning point.
>What I saw was the confirmation for this "uncomfortable feeling" I had.
>Knowing it was scary.
>However, I was still unaware of her true feelings.
>I closed my eyes and didn't talk about it. I wanted to "have faith" in her.
>I believed in her.
>I didn't want to see it.
>And...
The next page has very little text, so I'll post it shortly.
>>4083927
>When the sun set on that day, my scenery changed completely...
>"Please..."
>"Let me close the door..."
but the chapter 7 hasn't been done.
did i missed or you saving it for last?
>>4083927
share the ocr bruh
does anyone know where I can download the earlier chapters? or the fakku ones?
>>4083933
Not he's just doing chapter 8. He had no plans wasting time on other chapters. He already gave us the ending anyway. That's what the people wanted.
>>4083936
Speak for yourself, we always wanted chapter 5 to 8.
5 being optional because OVA, but not the others.
>>4083933
No, I will only translate chapter 8. I wanted to personally know how this ended. I'm not interested in more sex scenes of Yayoi fucking the bastard.
I shared the OCR for the pages so far in the OP. It's a hassle to update the files all the time, so you will get the rest of chapter 8 once I'm done.
Well, I'll give you the OCR for these two pages now, as an exception.
Page 198:
その夜を境に
僕の風景は 一 変した…
お願い...
襖
は閉めさせて...
Page 197:
思い返せば
確かに
おかしな点は
いくつもぁった
けれど僕は
その「違和感」を
確かめよぅと
しなかつた
知るのが怖い
そんな自分の
本心にすら
無自覚のまま
「信じる」という
言葉を盾に
その事にフタを
しさしまった
信じていた
見たくなかった
そして-
>>4083937
Be thankful you get anything instead of making more demands. It's all the same shit in the other chapters.
>"This sex feels so good."
>"You're mine now. Ehehhe"
>I want to protect Hiro. That's why I'm doing this!
>I'm so sorry for being a whore. I love you, Hiro.
>>4083931
only two lines and i know this is not the same yayoi; she utterly tamed already.
we should assume she had a change of heart somewhere on chp.7 or this is her since chap.6 end?
>>4083941
She's constantly on drugs and at the end of chapter 6 she said the cliched "I want your sperm! Come inside me!" bla bla
>>4083939
- read 6, she said her "protection" was useless to begin with.
- she's acting like she belongs to him tbh
- semen > drugs > protecting hiro
- "love you" is on 8, not before
>>4083947
So you can read Moon runes? Then please correct the mistakes I made previously. You can see the pages in the archive.
She said at the end of chapter 6 that fucking him was a stupid way to protect Hiro (which is true). I still don't understand why she never went to the police or called the old gang to beat the shit out of Hebitsuka.
>>4083949
Her last line was "from now on i cant think anymore"
>>4083982
That's pretty close to "I stopped thinking."
I wrote if I was unsure about certain phrases on most pages, so I would be grateful if someone cleared them up.
>>4083455
>not ntr
>no blackmail, drugs or mind control
>harem series about shotacon cakes
You can't be serious.
>>4083937
Anon translator is working so hard and you people aren't doing anything. People like you only demand, not help. I'm a translator myself and I don't see any point on helping a ungrateful community much less work on a generic manga. If a translator asked for help, people just ignore him. It's a motivation killer.
Someone could have OCR other chapters, edit the translated texts on the pages, etc but I don't think anyone here will do that. Then, the work of this anon will be forgotten...
And after 6 months people will start asking again about the ending.
>>4084014
It's the same for the MTSP and Nude Beach thread. People demand and don't do anything.
>>4084015
People should look at The Tit Translation Project thread. It has produced 10 translations because the people in there helps.
Just a reminder, translations can be improved.
>>4084014
Some of the troll comments from NTR fags in the other thread really pissed me off, tbh.
Part of me is doing this out of personal interest, the other part because I want to finish things I already started.
I'm not even asking for much except for people correcting the mistakes I made and save the script on another site.
>>4084015
95% of people cant help on nothing at all even if they wanted anyways
>>4084021
I don't think it would be that hard to copy paste most of the text I produced, correct the few spelling mistakes and cases where I said that I mixed up who was talking (so e.g. "I" instead of "you") and save them in a .txt or pastebin.
Extrapolating made-up crap about sales and market profitability of netorare was totally uncalled for.
That kind of nonsense always gonna end wrong (because we don't know shit) and triggering fags.
>>4084022
cant even change the 'i' for 'you' if they cant read moons, so yes 95% if not higher
>>4084025
I said that I made this mistake and where shortly after two pages, though. Editing posts is sadly impossible here.
I'll post a few more pages in a while.
In the mean time, have some perfectly sung German. I can vow for that as a native speaker.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=rzJ0dcj3W-8
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ivd8I-lHi1A
>>4083931
Page 199:
>"What did you say?"
>"You still want to hide? That's completely unnecessary."
>"But... this"
>"What if Hiro sees this?!"
>"We're completely visible when someone passes here..."
>"Don't worry about that."
>"He left the house anyway."
>"He did this a lot in this past week."
>"To be honest, I wouldn't care at all if we were seen."
>"Ah... I... no..."
>"If you like, we could have sex right in front of him when he's here."
>"No. Stop it... He absolutely musn't see this!"
>"You idiot. I made a joke."
>"Were you scared?"
(Not sure here:
いちいち
ビビってんじゃ
ね一ょポケ)
>"Hey, your crotch is getting more lively!"
>"Your pussy was tightening up when I said this!"
(or something along those lines:
ォラ
も っ と股開け!!
マんコにプチ込んで
やっからょォ)
That page had a lot of text.
Apparently Yayoi didn't notice that Hiro was watching her in chapter 7 and said "Hiro" at the last page of that chapter because she was feeling guilty, not because she saw him.
She's really stupid if she thinks that he still didn't catch on.
>>4084368
She saw him looking but forgot later on.
Who would not after 10 orgasms in a row? She probably saw the dead guy too.
>>4084433
Dead guy?
>>4084368
Page 200:
>I exited the stage and was degraded to a mere spectator.
>"Hey. You're dripping wet, right? You bitch."
>"It's... good."
>"I... feel so goood."
>"Your pussy is practically overflowing because of my dick."
>"Do you feel so good whenever I'm thrusting in and out of you?"
>"It's... very good."
>"My pussy feels amazing when you're scratching my walls with your dick."
>"Ahh..."
>"I'm cumming. I'm cumming!"
>I understood the situation even without an explanation from Yayoi-san.
The dialogue during the sex scenes is the same like in pretty much every other H-Manga or doujin. Feels tedious to translate.
>>4084450
do it
>>4084450
Page 201:
>This utter stranger was acting like he owned the place even though he didn't even have permission to stay here from the landlord.
>"Now you can have control over your body."
>"Where do you want it next? You can decide where I ejaculate now."
>"My... ass."
>"My asshole..."
>"A... Anal sex..."
>"I want in the usual spot... With anal sex..."
>>4084455
I don't understand.
>>4084466
Page 202:
>Yayoi-san's body was indulging in sex whether it was day or night without ever closing the curtains.
>They also did in the corridor...
>The entrance...
>The kitchen...
>And even the living room.
>They did it everywhere in the house.
>This bestial smell was left all over the place...
>"Ngghh..."
>"Ahh... I'm about to cum..."
(Could be something else, but doesn't really matter anyway
キ キマ つたア
イ イイ卜コ キマ つた)
Yayoi looks almost as ugly as Hebitsuka in this chapter.
>>4084487
wut? gotta be kidding anon.
She looks hotter than ever in her life.
>>4084487
>move all around house leg-locked
>grinding so hard her teeth are about to break
damn...
>>4084492
You just have bad taste. That's all.
Are you by chance the same guy that said the women in the After School story are more retarded than Yayoi?
>>4084494
Whoever said that has good taste.
>>4084494
yaoi looks unsatisfied and the kid is damn pitiful.
no wonder they got blacked.
And the cigar too...
There is one scene of Yayoi smoking with hiro and tanned dude each.
Have you worked those parts, anon-san?
>>4084487
Page 203:
>"Ahh... I'm cumming."
>"I'm cumming. I'm cumming."
>"Again... I'm cumming again."
>While I couldn't do anything...
>The only thing I could do was watch.
>I bated my breath and concealed my footsteps.
>I erased the signs that I was a pathetic onlooker...
>"Well then. We'll go outside for a little..."
>"Yeah..."
>"Take care."
Hiro looks almost as drugged and pathetic as Yayoi here. Should have just listened to his parents and left that bitch alone who apparently still thinks she can fool him.
That's the last page for today.
>>4084499
So it was either yourself or you're a blatant NTR fag as well. Good to know who I do this for.
>>4084507
>boku no yayoi-san thread
>calls out ntrfags
lel
>>4084505
Musical notes normally indicate when someone is arrogant and talks like a retard. Or they are used when someone teases another character. Most of the time it's the former, though.
>>4084506
If you read the first chapters, Yayoi says there that she sometimes smokes after sex to relax and didn't do that in over 5 years.
>>4084508
Yeah, so what? NTR is one of the worst fetishes out there imo and the behavior of NTR fags doesn't help its reputation at all.
I thought translating chapter 8 would help me understand how this could lead to a "happy" ending, but it's just horrible writing.
>>4084505
hiro is inferior to yayoi and she knows it; same way yayoi is hebitsuka's woman.
the music sign tells you who calls the shots and who's the bitch in the relationship.
>>4084511
But we knew that since the beginning, right? It was just an ass-pull.
Oh well it fits too. The dude wasn't planning on live there forever, just have vengeance on yayoi and her husband using hiro as proxy.
Some ntr dudes are smarter. He could have resurrected the gang with him on top instead of dying gunned down.
>help me understand how this could lead to a "happy" ending
the guy left
thats your reason
>>4084516
The gang hated him and beat the shit out of him and that wouldn't change just because he drugged and broke Yayoi.
I wonder how he could even survive these 5 years without landingi n prison or turning up dead.
>>4084507
Page 204 has very little text so I decided to translate it today still.
>This house...
>I couldn't call it my home anymore. I didn't belong there after what I did...
>"This place... is really nice today..."
>>4084521
Hanekawa?
>>4084524
What?
bottom panel
Why cant I find parks like that in my city.
And what's with Yayoi robe?
she's pregnant thats what happens.
her hips and breasts look more puffy than usual
There's around 25 pages left. I think I'll do 5 each tomorrow and the day after that and then continue on Sunday.
Did anyone start to save the translated text in a file?
>>4084527
>And what's with Yayoi robe?
she's wearing a jacket, with nothing else on besides her fishnets
>>4084501
You know that this was his first time and he got significantly better later, right?
She even wet herself in chapter 2.
Hiro could satisfy her, it's just that Hebitsuka broke his will to do so and Yayoi made no effort to change that either, instead going along with his stupid idea to cuck himself at the end.
>>4084633
all of them improve and all of them aren't good enough
>>4084651
I'm certain Hiro would not be worse than the random guy at the end he called over and who was just lying there.
>>4083875
I remember this one.
It was the first time I read NTR withotu knowing the meaning of that tag.
After the first or second chapter the story when to shit and they never translated the rest. I found the plot so fucking stupid I was unable to believe what I was reading.
[spoiler]now I can't stop reading ntr[/spoiler]
>>4084817
NTR plots are almost always stupid as fuck. My suspension of disbelief prevents me from taking them seriously most of the time.
>>4084850
Yes. Most of the time the plot is bad. But the art is almost always the best.
I can barely count with one hand, NTR plots that are good, and I mean the creator put effort in the script.
>>4084853
Yeah, that's the dilemma. The authors make up their incompetent storytelling with the art. Some are bad at both, though (e.g. Sanbun Kyoden).
There's a few NTR with good story telling in these two threads:
>>4055172
>>4060845
Takenoko Seijin is one of the few Mangaka that is talented in both departments and Takatsu made a tankobon where all of the people who get NTRed deserve it for a change.
>>4084860
>Mashiraga Aki
I'm interested in his works. Musa was good and is already translated. Matsuri looks good, someone should translate it. I didn't like ending of Fork in the Road.
>>4084868
I didn't actually mean to refer to that artist specifically, just the thread in general, but he's better than most.
>>4084817
welcome aboard
>>4084521
Page 205:
>"Oh yeah."
>"They say that a large crowd gathers here even when it's raining."
>"Others only come to spectate."
>"All of the people here come to do nasty and dirty things."
>"Supply and deman is balanced tightly thanks to that."
>"Now take off your jacket."
>"I know that you've been waiting for this."
>"You know, I'm something like a celebrity here."
(he could also refer to Yayoi as a celebrity, I'm not sure. Wouldn't make sense when it's her first time there, though
ココじゃ今や
お前もちょ つとした
有名人だからな)
Yeah, if it didn't happen already, that's where logic was thrown out the window. Japan is pretty much the last country in the world where such parks could exist.
>>4084959
Page 206:
>"Hey... the drugs."
>"Give me the drugs."
>"This thing... I can't take it when I'm sober."
>"Is that so? ...Geez."
>"You're still a selfish princess."
>"Here..."
>"You know how to take it."
So Yayoi is pretty much on drugs 24 / 7 and a total wreck.
Can't stoop much lower than gulping down drugs from a dick that looks like it has STDs in public.
>>4084964
She won't do it, right?
>>4084966
Man, just look at the raws or wait a bit and you would see that she's even lower scum than Hebitsuka at this point. She even asked for it herself.
>>4084964
God damn it, Yayoi might be the most beautiful woman Tsukino has ever drawn, specially now.
>>4084964
Page 207:
>"You're gulping it down excitingly as if you were drinking beer."
>"Did you like it that much? The taste of my piss, that is."
>"I got used to it, more or less..."
>"I think I drank more than a litre by it now..."
>"Come here."
>"It's time to start the show / It's show time."
Yayoi is literally drinking his piss. I'm disgusted.
>>4084983
Are you trolling or is your taste really that horrible? Her looks are vomit- inducing.
Here's the raw for anyone interested, by the way:
http://nhentai.net/g/128037/
>>4084991
No trolling.
It's because of the impregnation.
Full-fledged women are the best.
>>4084996
So you have objectively bad taste.
You can't even see her being pregnant because of the time frame. At the end of chapter 5 she said that it's her third time betraying Hiro and coming home late, in chapter 7 Hebitsuka said that he had sex with her for over a month and here in chapter 8 they said that Hiro often went outside this past week (after he first caught them). So she's around 2 months pregnant, 3 at max. You barely see anything at that stage of pregnancy.
That makes the end even more face palm worthy with her saying that it was too late for abortion. Tsukino Jyogi fucked up the logic and story telling big time here.
Page 208 gives me a slight problem. Do the thought bubbles at the bottom right come before or after the ones on the middle left?
>>4085001
こんな場所で
他人に毘られ
ながらセックス
するなんて
でも
あの子に見られる
ココの方が
暗がりの中でも
4人・・・?いえ
5人は見てるわね
ようになんか
なりたくも
今日は
特に
視線が
熱い
>>4085001
don'k know mate.
whichever that makes more sense?
>>4085005
So it's first the panel n the bottom right, then the ones on the left? Okay.
Your OCR is missing quite a few lines, btw.
>>4085001
Pregnancy can be felt after just 2 weeks when the nipples and tits harden up, same time Yayoi's vagina begins to engorge with blood.
It's a entire different level. Step up.
>>4085001
Page 208:
>In such a place...
>I'm having sex while other people can see me.
>However, compared to being seen by Hiro...
>It's still better to do it here instead. Much better...!
>Even in the dark, I felt their stares.
>Is it four people? No, I think five people are watching us.
>I don't want people to see me in this state.
>I can feel their stares piercing me right now.
It could also be that the line that she doesn't want to be seen actually comes before her feeling the stares in the dark, but it doesn't make much difference, I think.
>>4085013
Step up with what? My point still stands that the story is stupid and it's a total ass pull that Yayoi didn't abort with the excuse that it's too late.
And don't tell me you seriously think that her vagina looks messed up because of her pregnancy, not because of pearl dick and the drugs.
>>4085021
Page 209:
>I... can feel it!
>My womb... feels so strange... because of the... drugs...
"Hey Hey"
>"You're pretty lively today."
>"Did you awaken to pleasure even though you're so shamefully exposed?"
>"Let's see..."
>"I wonder how you will react now..."
>"I have spotted someone you might know. Let's show him your true colours."
(I think:
お前に絡み っ い てる
視線の正体つて
ヤッにょ)
>"Hey! You can't hide forever!
>"Stop playing hide and seek already!"
So in the end she fell in love with pearl dick right?
Or atleast with his penis?
Is this available somewhere for purchase?
>>4085059
Page 210:
>"I can see where your right hand is."
>"Don't even try to deny what you were doing right now?!"
>"Ya...Yayoi...san"
I wonder if Hiro is drugged as well with his fucked up expression.
>>4085072
In DMM
>>4085063
No, she said that she loves Hiro later on, but got addicted to sex and basically became a whore.
>>4085072
On Amazon.jp, for example.
Why would you waste money for this when there are so many better H-Manga such as pretty much everything else from the author?
I will continue translating tomorrow.
However, I can't OCR the text in the upper right bubble on the next page because it's handwritten. I could try to manually copy it, but I don't think that would turn out well.
I'd appreciate it if someone else posted the text from that bubble in this thread.
>>4085024
is hentai, just fucking relax and enjoy the ride
>>4085063
Yes Yayoi fell for him as she surrendered her womb and accepted to carry his children.
>>4085063
There is a reason why she didn't abort anon.
>>4085111
The reason is retarded Hentai logic and that Tsukino Jyogi is a hack.
She outright said after the time skip that it was too late for surgery even though her belly didn't even really show in chapter 8.
Stop coming up with other bullshit.
>>4085114
She can't abort because that's Hebitsuka's baby and she cant reject him.
Retarded over the top trash like this is the reason why i prefer my h untranslated.
>>4085119
good, now gtfo
>>4085119
Whats wrong? cant handle the NTR?
>>4085119
Grow up, you are not 12 anymore to self insert anymore.
>>4085119
Finally a non NTR fag that agrees this is utterly retarded.
>>4085134
What kind of Netorare you like?
>>4083875
its not certain the baby belong to pearl-dick. It is possible to belong to the main male character. He has cum in her many times. Just how reliable could a female tell when their menstrual cycle is?
Ask your mother (no pun)
>>4085143
The ones that are more realistic.
The only one I'm really invested in is Netoraserare.
Takenoko Seijin is also good. Itou Eight isn't bad either. NTR by Takatsu doesn't have any dramatic suffering. And I like some subtle reverse NTR.
http://exhentai.org/g/791861/9b08764f0f/
http://exhentai.org/g/828660/1289e92ed8/
http://exhentai.org/g/814075/b349608117/
http://exhentai.org/g/832265/338219b359/
>>4085146
That was already discussed in the previous thread. With the provided time frame she either got immediately pregnant after she first had sex with Hebitsuka or Hiro's sperm impregnated her that was still in her womb. She said that her dangerous day would come soon in chapter 2.
Also, the daughter is totally into Hamburgers, just like Hiro. Could have inherited that from him.
>>4085155
>literally picks the most non-sense one
>>4085161
What? Netoraserare? Still miles better than this crap. And you shouldn't judge before it's actually over. Shikishiro can still pull the story around.
>>4085155
>The ones that are more realistic.
You fail to realize that not every doujin/manga has to be realistic.
The kind of ntr that boku no yayoi-san are the usual mindbreak ntr types. They are always have a simple plot that deliver a "bad end" where the love interest is taking away from the MC.
Everyone have something they don't like or ignore in NTR. For me if the plot has an appdevice or hypnosis, I just skip that because I don't like that kind of plot.
You just don't like the mindbreak type NTR
>>4085171
Yeah, because mindbreak and rape victims getting to love sex is extremely far fetched. That's almost every NTR out there, though and it's done to death.
Shame that you skip something good as this:
http://exhentai.org/g/836767/26324b283a/
Unlike most other NTR, this story is self- ware of its ridiculousness and adds humor to it.
>>4085182
that is barely ntr since the point of view is from the kid stealing away, not the other way around. is Netori.
>>4085187
I know that. Chapter 3 is from the POV of another brat that gets his mom stolen, though.
My point is: Boku no Yayoi tries to be a serious story, but fails miserably because logical flaws are abundant. Takatsu / King's App knows the story is retarded and just runs with it.
Most NTR tries to be serious, but fails because it's always the same unrealistic tropes. That's why I'm tired of them.
I either want something that falls out of the norm and is closer to reality or something that is aware of the tropes and plays with them in a humoristic way.
>>4085191
We get it, you are a pussy.
>>4085196
No, I just have some standards. Way to be disrespectful towards other opinions.
>>4085203
>Expecting anything else from teenager & neckbeard paradise
P U S S I E S
U
S
S
I
E
S
>>4085203
>No, I just have some standards.
You need bad art to appreciate the good one. This is literally a rule of life, it apply to everything
>>4085086
So no one can OCR that bubble or read it and write it down here? That's a shame.
>>4085452
I can't read moonrunes, I can't help you, sorry m8
>>4085086
Page 211:
>"He was watching us for quite some time. It was only a matter of time before he would be caught."
(That's the first bubble. I copied most of it manually save for one Kanji I wasn't sure of. I think I got the gist of it)
>"Now you're in deep shit, little fellow..."
>"I know that you were spying on us all the time."
(or something like that:
お前の行動なんざ
こちとら全部
お見通しだっつの)
>"Yayoi-"
>"Your brother-in-law must have a lot of guts to follow us this far."
>"So I was right that you two have already done it with each other?!"
>"Nevertheless, this guy is nothing more than a mosquito to me."
>"I wouldn't have thought we would meet at this remote place."
>"Well, little pervert."
>"Today, you can worship Yayoi to your heart's content."
>"You look as if you were a lost puppy."
>"You're desperately clinging to your cock as if your life depends on it."
>"I will treat you to a feast now!"
It's nauseating how much shit Hebitsuka is talking. Guys like him would be long dead or rotting in prison at this point if he weren't in a Hentai.
>>4085671
Why is he doing that to yayoi anyway? Revenge for something?
>>4085691
Yayoi is a fine woman.
Not reason enough?
>>4085691
Because he's a stupid fuck that can't get over the fact that he was kicked out of the gang of Hiro's brother for being an asshole.
I can't help it, but page 211 and what he's saying there is pretty ironic.
>>4084513
If Hiro's inferior, why does Hebitsuka have to rely on drugging Yayoi and putting beads in his dick before he can please her? Hiro didn't need any of that shit, and he was a total virgin before all this.
Time is gold.
And he doesn't want to please Yayoi anon, he wants to break her.
>>4085671
Page 212:
>"Hey..."
>"Listen closely, brother-in-law"
>"To this filthy sound her womb is making in the back of her pussy!"
>"No... stop it..."
>"Don't listen... to this strange sound..."
>"So now you're ashamed, eh."
>"This guy watched us many times already."
>"You just weren't aware of it, Yayoi-"
>"In fact, he did it daily..."
>>4085701
Could you please stop shitposting and repating the same stuff over and over? You're just wasting the post count. I want to get this done before reaching the limit.
>>4085708
So he knew? Good to know logic in this hentai is grounded.
What doesn't make sense is how Yayoi right breast is slightly deformed compared with the other, or just me noticed that?
>>4085708
>clit and nipple piercing
Oh wow, since when did she had those?
Shes literally a disgusting whore now. I love it
>>4085711
Since the moment she pledged to become his woman, which the fuckheads above love to forget was entirely of her own volition and before any kind of drug.
And yes, we love it.
>>4085716
>hentai logic at its finest
not that i hate it tho
>>4085716
>Since the moment she pledged to become his woman
Which chapter was that
>spoonfeed
>>>/out/
>>4085708
It's not brother in law in a sense of family.
But I'm a "hey, bro, can you see this?" Kind of thing.
>>4085708
Page 213:
>"Is... that so..."
>"Hey. Look here!"
>"That's some fashionable accesory."
>"That was a gift from me."
>"But she rather complained about it instead of being pleased."
>"She said something along the lines of not being able to show her naked body to her boyfriend anymore after putting it on."
>"After that, I pierced her clitoris."
>"She was screaming in pain when I did that."
>"That's when her mind broke and she swore to me in tears / while she cried..."
>"That she would never..."
>"...Have sex with her boyfriend again!"
What a load of crap this is.
>>4084964
How the hell was she able to had a normal kid despite consuming drugs during months of pregnancy?
That shit fucks up the fetus.
Is Tsukino actually retarded to think fetus are inmune to drugs?
>>4085731
I'm fairly sure that he said "brother-in-law", not bro. He was actually talking to Yayoi and telling her that her brother-in-law could listen to the sounds, but that sounds a bit unnatural in English.
>>4085716
She didn't pledge to become his woman, idiot. She told him to cum inside and that she wants his sperm, that's it. Stop shitposting.
>>4085735
>Is Tsukino actually retarded to think fetus are inmune to drugs?
The entire last chapter is retarded and abundant with flaws. Yet people still defend this turd and say it's popular.
>>4085734
Tsukino Jyogi can draw excellent eyes...shame is drawing elsewhere are mediocore. It's pretty meh to me. It feels everything is halfass...
Hebitsuka should have been more arrogant and bullying, being direct to the wimpy kid to his insults.
>>4085738
if you don't like this manga, why are you still here anon?
You are not going to change anyone point of view while being irascible.
>>4085734
>What a load of crap this is.
Whats wrong?
>>4085735
They were aphrodisiac.
>>4085746
He has standards.
>>4085754
>reading NTR
>having standards
Not possible
No bully
>>4085203
>>4085734
Page 214:
>"No... I was just... pretending..."
>"I didn't... really... mean it..."
>"Huh?! I thought you did."
>"I'll have to spur you on more."
"And I thought that you committed to me. In fact you're a cheeky little princess and tricked me."
>"I thought that I conquered you, but you're just cold- hearted and pretended."
(Not sure:
最初のうちこそ
勇美しかったが
あとは何とも
あつけなかつたぜ )
>"Anyhow. This woman..."
>"She complained about her brother-in-law."
>"Do you want to decribe how? Yayoi..."
>"What did you say about the guy when we first had sex?"
>"Such a... thing"
>"... I don't want to say it..."
>"Be honest now!"
>"Or do you want me to use force?"
>>4085755
It is possible. I'm not a NTR reader per se. I liked Tsukino Jyogi's other works, though.
Besides, I finish things I started.
My main fetishes are elsewhere.
>>4085810
A little correction:
>She complained about her brother-in-law.
I think I misinterpreted that. Actually it's more something like:
>"The reason she's having sex with me has to do with her brother-in-law"
>"Tell him how, Yayoi."
Sorry.
>>4085810
this is too much fun
>"Or do you want me to use force?"
>next panel pokes her pussy
what's he trying to convey?
>>4085810
Page 215:
>"To protect you... I thought I could protect you this way..."
>"I wanted you to be safe..."
>"Hiro... I just wanted to protect you..."
>"This woman isn't very clever."
>"She believed this bullshit and now her pussy is all worn out and deteriorated because of that."
>"No matter her reasons, her body still turned out this way."
>"Here. Just look at the state of her vagina."
>"Nooo!"
>"Not now!"
>"It's leaking out! All of it!"
>"It's coming out... right in front of... Hiro!"
At least the author seems to be aware that the story is retarded.
>>4085928
Hiro is the author self-insert.
That's it for today. I'll continue on Sunday, probably. There's around 15 pages left.
Have some Sekko Boys in the mean time:
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=LFTG6Lq1l9k
Oh, and please keep the post count relatively low. I don't want to start another thread or be done when this thread is already on page 10.
chop chop
>>4085929
Care to elaborate?
I'm really hoping someone type sets this when its done. I doubt jewcob will pick this up anyway since its intense ntr.
>>4086778
Nobody will make that effort because this is not a real translation.
We are just trying to satisfy our curiosity.
>>4084983
>"beauty is nothing without a sense of loss"
>>4085820
Finishing something just because you started, especially something as petty as a bad hentai, is a terrible reason to continue. If you recognize something is bad, you should leave it alone.
>>4086787
dude shut up already
>>4086787
You will think otherwise when you leave your basement and get a real work
>>4086787
Eh, you're probably right. Still, even though it doesn't seem that way, I somewhat enjoy doing this. Not because of the content of the pages, but rather because it gives me the chance to learn a bit more Japanese. I definitely picked up more Kana than I could read before and some Kanji as well.
Also, I learned what つ (Tsu) means That sign indicates consonant gemination and Japanese apparently like to use it at the end of sentences as well to emphasize them.
Overall, the story is extremely stupid and doesn't win any awards whatsoever, yet I'm somewhat amused by it. The longer I'm doing this, the less I can take it seriously. I even got some chuckles out of a few pages.
>>4086966
What do you mean? The first 4 chapters were fan translated and Fakku didn't do anything with it afterwards aside from purging it from other sites.
The first 4 chapters in English are here:
http://nhentai.net/g/111330/
Another note: The drugs Yayoi took apparently have to be dissolved and she always did that by drinking the piss of the bastard. I wonder where Tsukino Jyogi got that bullshit from.
>>4085753
Still drugs, those shit had secondary effects that's why the gang kicked him out.
>>4085810
Man he is one ugly fucker
>>4086973
>Japan
>Drugs
>>4085928
Aren't you doing the missing pages?
>>4087786
Tomorrow, he said
>>4087786
I don't have access to the necessary programs until Sunday.
Glad that some people still care, apparently.
>>4087839
Nice work We are waiting bro.
Once last pages are done you can come back to chapter 5 and the missing stuff.
Half the work is done already. Thanks.
>>4088190
I won't do the entire rest. Way too much hassle for what it's worth.
I may just do a few pages I personally think are interesting. Something in the range of 5 to 10 pages, not much more.
>>4088190
Uhhhh that sounds bad.
First drugs use, cigarette scene, first half of ch7 basically
But why not all if so much its done already? It's only gonna drive fans crazy with speculation. Finish it please even 2 pages/day is good.
>>4088206
I intend to translate the few pages in chapter 7 where Yayoi took drugs, the ones with thought bubbles that were focused on her piercings and a few of previous chapters with Hiro's thoughts. Basically pages that seem important. 30+ pages of the same shit talking by Hebitsuka and Yayoi screaming about her orgasms isn't worth it.
>>4088206
Speculation!? People already know the fucking ending.
>>4088234
So what? we knew the end since november. It's been more than 14+ months since chapter 5 was published.
We want to know everything about it if possible. Now more than ever nobody is gonna pay for 30-40 more random pages here and there.
If we don't get it now, its probably never gonna get done. And for real Never.
you forgot even if someone wants to pay nobody is gonna accept because of jews
>>4088323
What books Fakku releases has almost nothing to do with them having translations or not. They just spit out whichever makes the most money for them.
Most of their releases were already fully or partially translated, but the people on their site still buy it. This partial translation doesn't affect the probability of the title being released in English at all.
Why do you so desperately want all of it translated? The majority of the pages are typical Hentai talk like everywhere else that doesn't add much to the mediocre story.
>>4088459
Are you nuts? Anons have waited this for over a year of course he (we) are gonna want fully know what happens not "summaries" or "probably this" bullcrap again.
>>4088463
No, I'm not nuts. I just don't want to waste even more time on this. Why should I want to translate 50 pages of Hebitsuka talking shit? You know the gist of the story by now, most of the talking during the sex scenes doesn't add to it. Just read the dialogue from previously translated chapters. It's pretty much the same like in every other H-Manga.
>>4088465
That's a disappointment
Didn't this h-manga end like a year ago? Was it just never translated?
>>4088500
Indeed, and it never will be since translator-san is gonna do last chapter and forget 5-6-7 & the extras.
today is the day
>>4085928
Page 216 took me pretty long because I had to copy half of the text manually (the OCR program fails when the background isn't completely white or black):
>"I'm cumming..."
>"Aaahhhhh..."
>Yayoi-san!
>She was climaxing...
>She shrieked like a spider.
(I think there's better idioms, but that's the literal translation)
>Drool was dripping from her mouth...
>So much squirting...
>I never saw something like that, not even in AV-
>Th... This is... such an intense orgasm from Yayoi
>Yayoi-san...has fallen...
>Yayoi-san... and her pussy (or just Yayoi's pussy?) has fallen completely!
>>4088797
>(or just Yayoi's pussy?)
This is obviously a note by me, not part of the actual text.
>>4088797
Page 217:
>"I'm... going crazy."
>"I feel like..."
>"I'll lose my mind from this."
>"As I thought... There's no doubt about it."
>"You guys are an interesting couple"
(actually you are very interesting brother and sister-in-law)
>"Or rather... You fit perfectly for each other."
>"This woman is the same as you."
>"To get this excited in this abnormal situation..."
>"Brother-in-law... Listen."
>"Look at the miserable state of the one you love."
>Yayoi is...
>...just like me?!
>"There's nowhere to run, Yayoi."
(or "escaping is useless, Yayoi")
>"You have to confess if you want to further go mad."
and this shit has a vanilla ending after all this?
fucking lol, japan.
>>4088860
She's evolving
Damn she's a fine beautiful woman.
Hebitsuka is an idiot for not coming back to pound her big round belly until passing out.
>>4088872
You're saying the same things over and over again.
what the actual fuck?
>>4088847
>"Sex... He forced me to have sex with him."
>"He said that... if I didn't, a terrible fate... would await you, Hiro..."
>"We did it... so many times..."
>"That's... how I... eventually turned out this way..."
>"Even my womb... and my ass... so many times... he fucked them over and over again..."
>"This... this man..."
>"His... penis covered with warts... really..."
>"It was impossible for me to go against it..."
>"My vagina..."
>"Was captivated by it..."
>"It is incomparable to yours, Hiro..."
>"It's totally different..."
>"Even for an adult... It's awesome..."
(or "even compared to other adults...")
Really so much stupid H-Logic.
His cock is truly a widow killer as he said at the start
lel, this hentai is so bad and so good
>>4088963
What a pervert.
This is Christian board.
>>4088963
I reported you.
I translated page 219 in the other thread, but I realized that I made some mistakes because of incorrectly OCRing it. It will come shortly.
>>4088936
Page 219:
>"So, Yayoi..."
>"What happened eventually?"
>"S... Sex... Because of this cheating sex..."
>"I thought it would... just be... sex..."
>"But because I had this much sex with someone other than Hiro, I...!"
>"No!"
>"I can't say it!"
>"Please stop it."
>"Anything but that. Don't make me say it!"
>"Shut up! I won't let it end here!"
>"Scream what happened, Yayoi!"
>"Aahh..."
>"I got pregnanttt."
>"I conceived your childdd!"
Apparently Yayoi really is retarded. Her not aborting for some stupid aspull like "it was too late" when you can't even see her belly and it's less than 3 months is so stupid.
And don't come up with that "she wanted his child", NTR fags.
I'll continue tomorrow. Just one thing:
The first thought bubble on the next page (220) says:
>"Hiro... I love you..."
And it's "愛してる" (aishiteru) which is much stronger than "大好き" (daisuki), so she really means it from the bottom of her heart.
>>4088969
Honestly you can stop now. Boku no Yayoi is already translated and uncensored by Fakku. They have many Wani mangas that are ready to be released but is being hold back on purpose. Apparently their subscription is like a Kickstarter stretch goals and only after a specific number of subscribers is reached, a group of mangas will be released.
>>4089003
Where did you get this information from?
I'll do the last 10 pages regardless. I'll just hold off with the few pages from the remaining ones in that case.
>>4089006
conceive = getting pregnant, not giving birth.
>>4089005
I "explored" the website. I saw covers of NTR2, Boku no Yayoi, Michael Keikaku and another Distance cover during my search. While this seems to be bullshit, I did saw uncensored pages of NTR2 and Michael Keikaku. I'm not sure about Boku no Yayoi though.
Also, Jewcob is apparently very willing to release any Wani manga so long as there is demand on it. He is reluctant that Rape/NTR theme Mangas may be risky, he is OK as long as people want it (Like Hanafuda). Maybe people should create an thread for Boku no Yayoi and start campaigning in the Fakku threads. Most people here think publishers are demons. Many manga like Takemiya's Evergreen was released from individual suggestions.
>>4088993
Fuck it, I can still do that little text today.
Page 220:
>Hiro... I love you...
>Hiro... You are the only one I love!
>"Because of... all that I have done..."
>"there... is now a baby..."
>"... in my belly."
>"Because I had so much sex..."
>"Now... I have... the baby of this man... in my womb."
>"I'm sorry... Hiro..."
>"I'm a bad woman..."
>"I'm really sorry"
Apparently not sorry or clever enough to use birth control or abortion...
>>4089046
>im sorry
>i love you
>but i will still fuck this guy in front of you
>>4089050
IT is popular mr fagget
>>4089095
Not as popular as his other stories if you go from the reviews. Seriously, the story is a mess.
Very nice of you to insult me when you wouldn't even get the meaning of these pages if I didn't waste my time on this.
And others are so ungrateful they call me out for not translating chapters 5 to 7 as well, when ch. 5 is already mostly in the OVA and the other two barely have story relevance.
>>4089298
Hentai 'reviews' are pretty stupid.
Repeating 100 more times this book is bad or well received means jackshit
>>4089398
You can still compare them to Tsukino's other books, and in that regard it's doing worse.
Good reviews and selling numbers are positively correlated, and it's the same way the other way around.
>>4089400
Because you can show even remotely accurate sale numbers, right?
>>4089402
No, but 2.5 stars on average (half of them being 1 star) and being his lowest rated book aside from his maid story that got loads of 1-star reviews because of bad censorship, don't speak for high poularity. Same thing on DMM: 2 stars for the OVA.
>>4089414
Uhu 10 reviews over a sample of ~4000.
Sounds trustworthy.
>caring for amazon jp ratings
A whole new level of retard
>>4089424
Same nonsense. Talk in personal terms because you know nothing dude.
>Arguing and getting mad over some low tier manga
Seems like most people outside of 4chan dont like this, why is it liked here though?
>>4089430
Naah nterorare is just worth talking more than avg
>>4089432
Probably because it attract lots of NTR fags compared to other sites.
>>4089442
This is a thread for the translation of chaper 8, not a NTR thread in general.
And 4chan and by extension sadpanda having more NTR fags than average is pretty much true from my experience. A comment I made on one of the Netoraregatari doujins on sadpanda about the story being stupid and that Araragi is acting completely OOC got downvoted to death there, but pretty much the same comment got loads of upvotes on Pururin.
>>4089446
No, I won't do that. I'm just good at using different dictionaries and make out the meaning of garbled sentences that machine translations spit out.
Not as good as a real translation since I'm missing details, but sufficient to get the meaning.
4chan and panda netorare stronk
>Netoraregatari
Damn I hope we can get sequel for c89.
One of the few stories that delivers both art and story wise.
>>4089456
See? That's exactly what I mean. That doujin series is completely retarded, but people on here still praise it.
>>4089466
It's really good tbh.
>>4089466
OP try to OCR this if you got bored with that Yaoi shit
http://exhentai.org/g/692525/7987e4becc/
>>4089470
You go OCR that and share the scripts with OP
>>4089472
give me a good ocr soft and i will do it.
>>4089470
I won't. I'm not really a fan of NTR in general and I need around 15 - 30 minutes for OCR per page, unless there's very little text. I won't invest over 30 hours in this.
I'll start with the next pages soon. I think I should be done tomorrow or Wednesday.
>>4089476
Capture2Text
I.R.I.S Readiris
>>4089472
I don't want to translate it either way. You can do it for yourself if you have the script. 2 or 3 different translation tools and a dictionary is enough to get the meaning.
And I think Mashiraga Aki deserves better either way. He's one of the few NTR authors that doesn't write facepalm- worty stories.
>>4089486
Readiris (and ABBYY) are bad and take a long time. I would say KanjiTomo, Capture2text and e.Typist.
>>4089046
Page 221:
The speech bubbles are
>"Aahh"
>"Aahhh"
a bunch of times in the upper panel and
>"Haahh"
in the other panels.
It's a bit weird that they are written once in Hiragana and in Katakana for the entire rest.
The thought bubbles:
>I... I love you...!
>I love you, Yayoi-san...
>Even now...
>I still love you, Yayoi-san!
So they both think the same thing, but neither say it out loud.
bad timing
>>4089529
Page 222:
>"Gahaha..."
Don't know what this is: >イイザマだぜ
(Probably some onomatopoeia that he's laughing)
>"Even while the sister-in-law you love so much confessed to you in tears, you were still able to cum so much."
>"All right, Hiromichi..."
(Is that his full name?)
>"I'll give you something special today."
>"In consideration of your spirit, I'll lend you her asshole."
>"Do you want to fuck it...?"
I wonder why at no point they even thought to beat the shit out of him. Even if he's stronger, it's 2 vs 1. And Yayoi could have called the old gang members a long time ago already.
Well, there's no logic to be found here anyway.
>>4089602
Page 223:
A bunch of
>"Hah..."
on this page.
>>4089606
Page 224:
>"Haa"
>"Yayoi-san's asshole..."
>"It was obviously well-trained."
>"It accepted me without any resistance whatsoever..."
>>4089610
Oops, everything except the "Haa" is only thought, so scrap the quotation marks for the sentences.
>>4089602
this is great
>>4089610
Page 225:
>"Oohhh"
>"Your pussy became more lively when your beloved brother-in-law penetrated your asshole."
>"Your womb is desperately aching for my cock juice. I will give you as much as you want."
>"Right, Yayoi?"
>"You're sucking me in, right?"
(I'm not sure on this line. Would appreciate someone helping out with this:
吸 い つく相手
間違えてんぞ?)
>"I... I can't help it?!"
>"I just got used to it"
(or addicted)
>"Of course my womb is reacting to it when there's a cock right in front of it?!"
>"Of course I factored this in already. I just like the way you behave"
>"Your reaction is as good as I expected."
>"It's really a beautiful view."
>"It's this spectacle I wanted to see."
He's truly shit talking 24/7.
The page gave me problems because sometimes this was written:
>じ
but what's actually correct would be this:
>し
It's probably supposed to indicate that Yayoi stutters, that's why she pronounces the words stronger.
That's it for today.
I'll probably be done tomorrow. I'll check if I made OCR mistakes with the pages in the previous thread and try to correct them afterwards.
I'll post the rest of the chapter again regardless.
>>4089645
You are the man anon.
>>4089646
Seriously, thanks anon. Some of us just like NTR because we enjoy seeing the girl fall from grace into corruption. Most NTR stories are truly shit and unbelievable anyways but man do they have the best scenes out there which make great fap material to see a girl's expression in sheer ecstasy.
Enjoyed this thoroughly, thanks based OP.
>>4088993
May she doesn't believe in abortions.
>>4089786
Wrong. It's explicitly stated in the epilogue that "it was too late for surgery / abortion and the only thing she could still do was giving birth", which is a load of crap.
Also, her womb is completely empty in these internal shots aside from Hebitsuka's semen.
I could forgive the latter, but the first is just horribly bad writing.
>>4089880
Or she's a genius and know her child is Hiro's
>>4089893
Who she's talking about is very ambiguous. If the translation is accurate, she could be referring to Hebitsuka or Hiro. If this is the Jyogi's saving grace (dual meaning of sentences) well it's not that bad. He told us who's the true father of the child and we never realize it
>>4089897
I'm very sure she talks about Hebitsuka having impregnated here on these two pages, not Hiro. She wouldn't say something like that she's sorry and that she got pregnant because she had this much sex with him otherwise.
>>4089897
Stop being in denial about it, anon.
