Nudist beach ni shūgakuryokō de!!
by Shiwasu no Okina
Translation thread 4
Previous thread, almost full: >>3788946
Archive: http://fgts.jp/h/thread/3788946
Links to first 2 threads there too.
Chapters 1 and 2 English
http://exhentai.org/g/731139/df929b1479/
https://www.sendspace.com/file/nn4v7c
Chapter 3 Japanese
http://exhentai.org/s/186ff9524d/741008-45
https://www.sendspace.com/file/dmkwe1
Chapter 3 Chinese
http://exhentai.org/g/734938/2c292f94e7/
https://www.sendspace.com/file/qjcarc
So... we have the latest raw for chapter 3, and a rough script based on the Chinese version starting at >>3796398. Now we're waiting for Translator anon's script based on the raw.
>>3810096
The important thing is to get chapter 3 translated. But just noting some issues I have (again):
- Chapter 1 is a lower resolution and thus lower quality scan than chapter 2. Can't be helped. Wish we get a better scan in the future, so the complete release of this story can have consistent pages.
- Similarly, the raw scans of chapter 3 are not as good as the scans of chapter 2. Maybe wait for a better one before finalizing the pages?
- The raws of chapter 1 and to a lesser extent chapter 2 are lighter than the English version. The Chinese scans are also lighter. But this doesn't show in Firefox for some reason. Only other programs. I'm just concerned about the real or intended colors.
- There are still some artifacts/specks/scanlines left, I'm trying to clean those up more but I can't fix everything.
- Another guy said the translation of at least one page needs work. Don't know who to believe, him or our Translator. Anyway, it's just one page so far that -might- have sentences too far from the original.
>>3810096
this sendspace is a little fishy, got some alerts for malwares
>>3810366
Works fine for me, maybe you're downloading their accelerator. Use Adblock or something to avoid it.
Nerd more!
>.exe
Yeah fuck you. NO ONE DOWNLOAD THIS SHIT
>>3811739
Pretty sure you're doing it wrong.
But in case you can't download from sadpanda, there are mirror links in the last thread:
http://www.mediafire.com/download/88luipcuzb4un6q
https://mega.co.nz/#!9NtB2aZB!By8kWLW0q2PcF-uWBF3tbTuqE29cAbWmRNels6xGVlE
Might as well post the old chapters here while nothing is happening.
>>3811865
Hurry it up.
End of English ones so far, hope there will be more. Credits page posted by OP.
>>3811888
Any idea when the next chapter will be translated?
>>3811891
Until the translator shows up again, all we have is this temporary translation >>3796398 based on the Chinese scan, which he also did.
Can't wait for teacher's part
I hope...
>>3812214
Glasses guy is gonna get all the pussy, don't worry
Isn't the issue out? How long until raws?
>>3812251
Fucking boring.
where will this first be uploaded?
I tried to look for raws everywhere, but only found this site:
http://mangatown-zip-torrent.doorblog.jp/archives/40416220.html
The download was sketchy as hell. Something about converting what I found in the rar. I recall that stuff being a virus in an earlier one of these threads. Should I delete and move on?
>>3813236
The latest Aun issue is already on sadpanda.(though it will probably be scanned better by another group)
It's in the OP.
If the raw is posted here, will this pick back up? If the anon team isn't simply busy right now, is it an issue of access?
Anyway here we go. Rawest raw, no color corrections or cleaning yet
You'll notice that the Chinese version >>3796398 has more clear blacks (though some nipples look too dark as a result IMO) and is cleaner
And there's a script based on the Chinese version already but it won't be as accurate. Despite the quality, this should be enough to get the real script, I hope.
>>3813251
Poor Akiho, this is a harem story
I think this raw generally shows a little more of the art on the pages than the Chinese one,
Plot bomb
>>3813243
That's last month. We are on chapter 4 now (two Otaku girls)
>>3813255
Oh, right.
>>3813257
Sex training
I think it's implied she's not a virgin
Are you a bad enough dude to redraw their bodies?
>>3813263
I love her expressions
Such a caring friend, breaking in your crush before you fuck
plot bomb again
I wish the first penetration scene wasn't rushed unlike this, though it was for comedy.
>>3813277
That condom supply weren't in the earlier chapters. Sensei thinks of everything
>>3813278
*wasn't
And done.
>>3813288
Thanks.
We should be seeing chapter 4 soon, right? It dropped at the end of last month?
How come we don't have digital rips of Comic Aun with this story, just scans? There would be no worrying about colors and cleaning.
>>3813594
Probably because of DRM on digital versions. It's easier just to buy a paper copy, tear it apart, and scan it than it is trying to crack a digital copy.
Also, isn't all digital hentai required to be mosaiced?
Ok, if anyone is out there, is the guy with the glasses the only person who gets laid? because that would be shit.
>>3813821
I mean, a whole beach filled with men and women, and one guy is getting laid. That is just fucking garbage.
Never thought i would have hype for a doujin series. But this is just too good and caters too much to my vanilla-ish fantasies.
>>3813830
the girls are still good and nothing says there won't be an orgy at the end. At the very least, I think they'll start having sex in front of others at some point. They also need to explain why the other males are not getting erections.
Where are the raws?
>>3813827
it's not a doujin.
Somehow it doesn't even feel like Naotatsu's the main character here...
If it's just the glasses guy getting laid, this would be so disappointing
While I too would like more of the guys to get laid, isn't the whole point of nudist beaches (in this story anyway) "pls don't sexualize nudity"?
If getting erections in public are against the rules, the same goes for all lewd activities in public. If they're not in the tent all they're allowed to do is check each other out and act casual.
(Though of course this is fiction so it only matters if they get caught, and they could swim out further for some underwater action)
>>3813823
If you need more than one dick, your self-insert's, to fap, you might have problems.
The work is fucking boring but not because of that, the scenes are short, inconsistent and fucking condom.
>>3814208
>inconsistent
what
>>3814222
Look at all sexual action in the three chapters, that's what I'd expect from a single one. This is one of the stories I read once, then I have to squeeze all the little sex there is into one other folder to fap, it's very weak and the build-up goes in places. Doesn't help that best (slim tall) girl gets a too short in-between condom sex scene, only to later go all out on the loli. I like loli but not when you deliver me that hot bitch before.
I've gotta give it to SnO though, to milk that little content into nearly half a tankoubon is remarkable.
Every time I see this thread bumped, I hope it is to announce the scans are online, but no...
>>3814574
Chapter 3 raw is posted right in this thread, at least
New chapters will come in time, I'm more concerned about the translation, hope the group isn't kill
>>3814234
I'd have preferred the previous two girls to have more page time too but the story is just heavy on setup.
The whole first chapter and much of the second and third is setup and blue balls.
>>3814667
you sure? idk those humongous tits remember me to the Otaku girls
http://exhentai.org/s/ffeac84b3b/744992-39
Chapter 4 raw
>>3814684
Huh, the Chinese aren't first for once. Looks like it's by the same people who scanned chapter 3, same resolution and all.
So the people who scanned chapter 2 in the best quality so far are 2 chapters behind now. I mean the group who did this: http://exhentai.org/s/7eeea27f4e/725425-52
I actually went to their forum and asked them if they plan to scan the June issue of Aun with chapter 1, but they don't. Ah well.
The previous thread hasn't 404'd yet but it's close. Instead of posting the Chinese version and its secondhand panel by panel translation here again, check them out here: http://fgts.jp/h/thread/3788946/#q3796397
(There's also nsfw.archive.moe but the older threads we made don't have all images saved there.)
Chapter 4 raw.
Just one page for Sensei again. Best woman.
And that's chapter 4 raw.
Thanks man
Been working on this.
Tried to redraw the part of her breast cropped by the margin in >>3811833
Also tried to clean up some uneven scanlines/specks/artifacts.
Thoughts?
>>3814816
Next chapter is definitely in tent. I'm guessing he fucks the other otaku girl, then the two girls with boyfriends. I actually thought those two would be the only one he doesn't, guess that means he is getting all of them (least likely would be the two volleyball girls). Also I have random theory that the teacher will not get fucked by him, but instead do a huge gangbang with the rest of the class. Don't know why I think that.
Also another preview, proving that it is the two girls the other guy thought it was.
The author's blog has a link to a free digital version of the first chapter.
It's low resolution and mostly unremarkable except for the ridiculous double-censoring. They put mosaics on top of the already-censored parts, producing in some cases, dicks that look like zebras.
Is this series monthly?
Bottom of the last page of the 4th chapter says, that the next chapter is gonna get released this month.
Maybe, probably, hopefully they'll release the rest of the chapters monthly as well!
>>3815390
Shiwasu no Okina is one of the most productive hentai artist I've ever seen. Unless there is specific reason, you can pretty much assured that there is a chapter of Shiwasu's manga in Comic Aun.
What is the japanese term for nudism? I mean like hentai, ecchi, doujin etc. in this manner. I saw it on /s/ once... Can't remember. :<
>>3815575
I've seen "zenra" being used in image galleries, not sure if that's what you were looking for.
>>3815575
I think it Zenra
Yo. The scan group who did chapter 2 did the Aun issue with chapter 3. They haven't put it on sadpanda yet but it can be downloaded from:
http://rapidgator DOT net/file/b7a5a6369058369519aeec8d4505a812
Compare this page with >>3813246, the scan already on sadpanda. For consistency we should use these scans. Though the colors are different, so I hope this one is more accurate.
I hope the other team members are fine and show up soon. The last thread 404ed.
>>3816519
You can see the edges are kind of skewed.
Instead of cropping the page and losing some detail not in the other raw and the Chinese scan, I tried to adjust the art around the extra space.
Just an experiment like >>3814802 (which is too light, I'll have to fix that). I'm also still trying to clean chapter 1 more.
>>3813262
>neck biting
dear lord, this is my ultimate fetish
I'm most interested in that girl who is silently pining over dicks. I hope she just stats diddling right in front of everybody.
>the same guy again
This shit really kills my boner. If all the rest of the boys get on an orgy with the teacher this manga will be really low on my list even though it has an amazing art.
Yeah, I'm reading this for the boys, not the girls.
>>3816636
The point is it is too much cliché, even for a hentai. I really don't thisstuff of a guy cumming 10 times in an hour.
>>3816639
>don't like
Fix'd.
>>3816636
If it's not just masturbation, then sex involves at least two people doing something or a variety of things.
If you care about anything other than OH MY GOD A PICTURE OF A VAGINA, then it is not unreasonable to want more male characters involved, because they're a big part of what is going on.
>>3816659
>waah someone post an opinion I don't agree with
Is Translator-kun kill?
its fucking 2014 already, why cant japan change this fucking stupid censorship law already. Artists already abusing it to the limits.
just why.....
>>3817219
because you touch yourself at night
>>3814865
This is worse NTR than Tachibana.
>>3817219
I don't like the white-outs but but least it's not the huge black bars Comic Aun had in between the new installments of this.
>>3816540
>>3816519
Tried fixing this again, this time I cropped the black spaces at the bottom, but slightly moved the art -up- to minimize the loss.
If you compare >>3816519 (scanned by Team.Comic ONE) to >>3813246, the latter cropped out some art at the bottom (pubes and navel), the other keeps more of the art but is more skewed. This is true for all the pages. So I tried to keep more of the art. Is this over the line?
Saved in greyscale with GIMP, the pure raw is RGB.
Better version of that preview.
Posting the bigger raws for chapter 3. Not grayscale yet. If I do more tweaking like >>3818073, they will be.
First page is >>3816519
That's the bigger raw.
Less than 100 posts until autosage again, and still no real new scripts. Please show up, editor, translator, typesetter anons...
Besides trying to fix the pages we have, I'm thinking of making a temporary English version using the translation from the Chinese by Translator-anon. *Something* to liven up things during this downtime. To save space here I might post that and the raw page edits I do in an imgur album if we're allowed to link that site here.
Because it's not the "official group release", I'm not redrawing stuff (job for typesetter anon), it would use the smaller Chinese scans, the fonts would be different and the script would be a little liberal. It shouldn't go on sadpanda either.
These threads did produce a French to English version of chapters 1 and 2 before Translator-anon came along (which other sites have posted instead of the revised one).
Here's the Chinese to English panel by panel translation, copied from the previous thread:
http://pastebin.com/xv1D965v
>dat neck biting fetish
Why no translation?
Sample
>>3818504
Like I said, here's a Chinese-to English version of chapter 3 based on the earlier posts by Translator-anon, using the Chinese pages. But it's not finished yet and to show it's a "beta version" I didn't replace the sound effects. Cross-check it with the pastebin if you like.
http://imgur.com/a/T18wu
Please show up again, guys, so we can start for real...
>>3819935
Good enough for me and my boner. You and other anons are doing god's work.
So much potential for a mass orgy and we end up with a "guy get's all the girls" scenario...
geez
>>3820804
The artist lacks imagination.
>>3820966
>Shiwasu no Okina
oh no you didn't nigga
>>3819935
All the pages for that "beta version" are up at the link now. Should I post it here anyway?
Imgur seems neat. I also uploaded chapters 1 and 2 in English to the same account. Plus all the raws, all the preview pictures in these threads so far, the works. Will add new stuff as I find them.
See http://zvqk.imgur.com/ for everything, it's organized.
All the stuff is there, we just need the people to work on it, so please come back guys... ;_;
>>3820966
You should actually trying reading all of his material before you state your opinion about it when you're saying it to people that actually have.
You only make yourself look like a dumbass.
>>3812251
jeez, I love it. So much teasing ans suspension.
11/10
>>3821154
But it's true what he wrote. Stop making yourself look like a dumbass?
I really like the art style. Any recommendations?
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I can´t help it but feel bad about the rest of the boys, how the fuck they don´t get hard??
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>>3821362
Beta dicks they are too intimidated by the alpha dick.
>>3820804
Yeah. The having everyone go to a nude beach plot seems like a huge waste if it's just Glasses-kun nailing each girl in the tent, one after the other. Why even have all the other guys around?
Gotta admire his stamina and virility though, I guess.
>>3821499
Hentai protagonists always have horsecocks that don't hurt any vagina and can cum 5 litres of cum two dozen times a day.
After the buildup from the first two chapters, it really feels like Okina intended for this to be another orgy series, then decided at the very last minute that he didn't want to exhaust himself again.
