Hey /gd/,
This is a tattoo design that I had a tattoo artist do for me a couple of years back. Since it was supposed to be my first one, I kinda sorta pussied out. Now, I want to try again, but the design seems....incomplete to me. I don't really know what it is, but it bugs me. If any of you have any suggestions or are able to so variations on this I would really appreciate the point of view.
>>269386
Looks fine to me if a bit boring. Personally I like more traditional looking pieces. Also I would say this question is more for /ac/.
>>269394
Sorry /ic/.
>>269394
>I like more traditional looking pieces
This OP. It's a traditional design with a traditional vibe but the design itself isn't traditional enough.
>>269386
>do variations on this
>>>/wsr/
>>>/ic/
Also, the text doesn't look right. It's not well distributed in the space, badly aligned and it seems like it says "justuce"
>>269386
It ugly
Looks like a kid tried to draw an edgy knife in math class
>>269386
>Justuce
See another tattoo artist tho, drawing is ok for a teenager drawing, but if you really want to have a drawing on your skin for the rest of your existence, find a better concept.
Also, personnal opinion but make it B&W.
>>269386
>justuce, valor
It's justice and valour, apart from that it's spelt correctly.
You don't want to have any ragrets do you?
>>269938
Valor is fine, the issue is the consistency between British and American spellings. For what it represents, British spelling seems to be the best.