my graphics design final piece
what do you think?
hey thats pretty good!
why'd you make the G so unevenly placed
>>268816
this. work on the FIG HT. and bump the green vibrance a bit but not the yellow background. also since it's a zombie a little of paper texture or water damage could make it look better.
>>268812
it's shit
thanks
Make him more decayed. Some light pink brain matter protruding from his dented head would be a nice compliment to his eyes.
What's going on with his pinky? Doesn't match the perspective of the rest of the hand. Take this over to /ic/ for their input on this part.
Clean up your lines and shadows. Right now it all looks muddy and blurry.
Kerning.
I WANT YOU
TOJOIN THE FIG HT
Not sure what the little atom bomb logo is doing in the top left, but it looks completely out of place.
>>268812
You're on your final design piece and you can't letter? Much less Kern?
C'mon OP.
>>268812
Yeah, where is the design in this piece? Because I don't see any.
>>268812
Are you in grade school?
