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Please tell me why this is shit also sorry for century gothic
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Please tell me why this is shit
also sorry for century gothic below, its temporary solution
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>>261785
You could work on the bulb a bit. In the thumbnail it's passably recognizable, but it doesn't hold up well at larger sizes, because it doesn't do a good job of implying a screw-in base. The "production" part looks kind of odd just centered like that. I'd try setting it at a larger size and make an attempt to integrate it with the Just light, or I would set it slightly smaller and alight it flush left after where the descender in the g would be.
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>>261789
I'll try that, thanks.
production was insisted by customer so I had no idea where to put it so it would fit
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I think the bulb would be nice on top of the 'i' instead of it being incorporated into a 'g', since it currently looks more like "Just Lioht" to me. You could also try putting the bulb to a bit of a slant, but I don't know if that would work as well.
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>>261802
Maybe if he angled the crests and connected the first one to the circle?
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>>261802

Yeah I thought it looked more like a O at first too, thought something like this would make it more g like...but you know...done properly and not just scribbled on in yellow
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not op
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Op here. Any suggestions on font? I dont really like what i did here with letters:(
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>>261897
It looks like a "?", maybe.
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>>261785
>>261888

Here ya go OP.
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>>261785
JUST
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Honestly to fix the lightbulb I think you just need to angle the screw part slightly to make it appear more like a screw rather than some kind push in thing.
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