Critique this please
And would it be necessary to completely redo it?
>>256408
the text is too casual for the lining of the background, either loosen the background design or tighten the text
>>256408
Try something more like this. Not this, but in this line.
>>256528
this guy gets it, maybe double line typo
>>256408
Like "completely redoing it" is going to take you any longer than the first three minutes you put into it?
It looks like shit, op, what do you expect me to say? Get a sheet of paper and a pencil. Make a HUNDRED variations on it. Then you may have something to develop.
Don't be lazy.
The colors need work, the layout is static, the type is dogshit... TRY HARDER.
>>256528
Thanks for the help man! I made another design and I would like to hear what you think about this one.
>>256551
I know it's shit, I'll admit I was really lazy about it. The design isn't supposed to be amazing, because its just the profile picture for my SoundCloud. I started working on a newer one (above) and I just scrapped that boring shit.
>>256552
>>256554
this is the toyest shit ive every seen. what the fuck are you thinking?
>take the sound that you do for soundcloud
>make that style of logo
>put real effort into it (none of this stock pussy shit you've got)
>??????
>not profit but at least youre not a faggot
>>256528 is the closest thing to decent and you didnt even think of it
fuck you anon.
>>256408
it looks like you are trying to do tycho but dont know what makes that art good (pic related)
1. lern to color
2. lern to text
3. lern to idea
HELVETICA WINI WIN
looks very nice, would maybe change font/ fontcolor
