>>254161
Are these supposed to be BUGS? Door hangers? WTF are they? They look creepy, like blood veins.

>>254163
Good concept, lackluster execution. The line above your copy makes the boat feel like it's floating. Your copy style does not match the art style of your sail boat vector. Your ail boat is smooth and efficient, your copy is traditional and pen master like. It's two competing elements and it's sloppy looking.

>>254164
I'm not sure of the context for this, nut if it's for 60's 70's sci-fi you nailed it. But style aside the way you are conveying the pertinent data is fucked and wrong. I see this and I do not instantly understand who, what, where, when why - it's literally a maze of words.

>>254165
This one is just terrible, I don't even want to tear you down for it, just move on.

thankyou

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Work in progress for an assignment.

And it's bad. I know it's bad. But I'm too bad at graphic design to pinpoint why it's bad, and I need for it to be good.

Help please.

>>254696
>why it's bad
the whole thing is unbalanced, google rules of composition
>we read from top left tobottom right, the oder of things makes no sense
>the weight of the "" is distracting
>all caps
>shitty font
>default kerning
basically, everything's wrong and above all, uninteresting.
sorry anon

>>254183
>This one is just terrible,
can you explain why you think that, or do you just have shit taste?
>>254165
because I think its really good.
it looks like something I'd pick up on a whim and want to drink if I saw it in a store.

>>254721
God damn it... Back to formula, I guess.

>>254785
agree