>>269974 I feel the same way about the logo not making any sense
>>268329 Here is the explanation as to what it actually is, which makes me even more mad, who the fuck is meant to understand that? First of all, you have to have known what their old logo was, then had to realise what the fuck they were trying to do with it. Like, fuck, man.
>>269485 watch https://vimeo.com/16833435 don't use a red block as background (make it everything white and text black) the picture is awfully placed (there's an option on indesign to make the text wrap around a picture.)
This looks fantastic, besides the choice of font as others have said, especially so on the spine.
If you don't mind my asking, how exactly did you get that beautiful paint/sketch aesthetic, besides the obvious stuff like Warp? Was it all done by hand, or was there some kind of layering/filtering going on?
Hey /gd/ help me name my Web Design Company for my course final project. Some information: My name is Danny/Daniel, the project was to create your own company, framework, business plan, mock site etc. Doesn't have to be phonetic with my name but it wouldn't hurt. I suck at naming things and maybe you guys can come up with something catchy. Inb4 DanielDesign.
>>270544 Even though they're cigarettes and such they still try to have attractive sleek packaging sort of mimicking the old decorated cigar boxes in a way. Your design isn't very appealing and the thick black lines especially so.
You may just want to restart from scratch and go with something a bit more appealing and less generic.
Also that colour isn't very nice on a cigarette package and I'd almost think I'm buying seeds for a new Apple tree or whatever.
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