It's happening guys
>>37343256
The kindergarten-tier grammar makes it immediately apparent as fake.
Fugggg bro. Title your project pic related
>>37343278
i assumed it was too but after reading it i don't think it is
also this mair underwood is clearly interested in zyzz (google it)
>>37343278
Send an email to that guy and ask to be interviewed about your favorite gay drug using bodybuilder
>>37343278
How do you recognize bad grammar?
All my teachers and some autists on /lit/ have told me I have a talent for writing, but I see nothing wrong with the paragraph in OP's picture.
fellow UQ fag, how you doin?
I dont understand op's pic someone enlighten me pls. Will a zyzz documentary be created?
>>37343380
There's nothing wrong with it. He's just cynical.
>>37343380
>Many individuals idolise Zyzz who serves as a role model for their body work behaviors.
>>Many individuals idolize Zyzz, who serves as a role model for their body work behaviors.
>>37343500
>>37343380
>Occasionally participants in these discussions may wish to continue the conversation in a private forum in which case they will be asked to indicate their consent via the consent form
>>Occasionally, participants in these discussions may wish to continue the conversation in a private forum, in which case they will be asked to indicate their consent via the consent form
How the actual fuck did you get into university. Are you fucking brain-dead?
>>37343529
>dropping unnecessary punctuation
>bad
Its a stylistic choice.
>>37343529
You've clearly never written an academic paper cuck.
>>37343500
>z
LMFAO. Post discarded, you fucking subhuman.
>paragraphs not justified
>>37343581
Not him, but I agree about the commas. It reads like a run-on sentence without them.
>>37344153
>You've clearly never written an academic paper, cuck.
>>37345409
It's still a run-on sentence with the commas. A better usage would be: "Occasionally, participants in these discussions may wish to continue the conversation in a private forum. In such a case, they will be asked to indicate their consent via the consent form."
